Romance Ek Ajeeb si love story (completed)

[Notebook]

haan to yeh tha mera LAST review iss thread par: My last comment on the threaed
Ab iss update ke bare mein kia kahun......
weisa hi hua jeisa main ne socha tha, matlab main ne kaha tha ke excuse me kehne wala himansh hi hoga....
magar ab udhar reveka kia aag lagaane lagi hai phir se.... ekaat zor ka thapad dena hai ussko...
bhai aap bahot achah likhte ho, aur yeh kahani mujhe shuru se bahot passand hai issi liye padhte aya hoon,
very cute love story and very well written.
aguey padhta hoon bhai

Bahut sath diya aap ne sir aur saraha bhi , mai apka behad abhari hoon ,

 

[Notebook]

Very nice update bhai

Thanks dost

 

[Notebook]

Wow very beautiful update bhai.
Magar sa kuch zara jaldi nahin ho gaya kia?
Fast jaane lage ho ab!
Anyway mujhe badi khushi hui padhkar ke uss dayan Reveka ki chaal asafal hua.
To ab dulhan ka haath maangne ke liye Hmansh k mom dad anathalay jaane lage. Wow cool.
To aguey padhta hoon, very beautiful update bhai.

Mujhe laga fast nahi huyi to bore karegi . Waise jo chhoota hai wo aage aayega abhi ek aur blast bacha hai jo end tak le jayega

 

[Notebook]

Wonderful update magar bhai kuch ziada bhaagne nahin lage ho kahani ko lekar?
Sab kuch bahot jaldi jaldi ho gaya lagta hai .... itna fast kyun jaane lage ab?
Shuru se to bade araam se likhte aa rahe the to ab kia hogaya? Itni raftaar kyun? San dikh raha hai padhne se....
Khair, update mast hai.
Mujhe to bahot khushi hui Reveka ka haal dekh kar. Usska to yehi hona tha balke police mein dena tha usse..... aur usske aur Himansh ke beech kuch eisa rk scene hona chahiye tha jahan Himansh ussko ehsaas dilaata ke ussne kitne dinon tak Himansh ka faeda uthaya usske paison ka istemaal kiya, ghalat faeda wo utha rahi thi Pari nahin, eisa ek scene zaroor hona chahiye tha donon ke beech jahan Reveka khoon ki ensoo roti....
Anyway aap ne jeise bhi likha sab acha hua ye jaankar bahut acha laga.
To an after 5 years kia??

Reveka ne galti to bahut hi sanjeeda ki par kya karein wajah e ishq ka har jagah naak ghusa deta hai .

Pari shayad hi kisi ka bura hone de aur Himansh ke liye filhal pari ko yahan se le jane ke siva doosra koi kaam hi nahi hai .

Fast nahi karte to bht boring hone ka khatra tha sir kyu ki 60 days ka gap bht ho gaya tha

Waise abb age ka guess bhi to kariye

 

[Mbindas]

Waiting for next update

 

[Notebook]

Bhai 5 sal bad kya hua.

Update thodi der me

 

[Notebook]

Superb update
Bohot time baad padha isliye baki ke updates bhi padh liye, aur ek baar firse han story ke andar kho gaye

Aaj bhi kho jayenge kyu ki aaj bhi update aayega waise mujhe likhne me maja aa raha bahut achhe hain mere pyare readers

 

[Notebook]

Lajawab Story hai...bhot dino itni achi story parhi h...

Bahut bahut dhanywad dost

 

[Casinar]

Reveka ne galti to bahut hi sanjeeda ki par kya karein wajah e ishq ka har jagah naak ghusa deta hai .

Pari shayad hi kisi ka bura hone de aur Himansh ke liye filhal pari ko yahan se le jane ke siva doosra koi kaam hi nahi hai .

Fast nahi karte to bht boring hone ka khatra tha sir kyu ki 60 days ka gap bht ho gaya tha

Waise abb age ka guess bhi to kariye

Aguey ka guess mushkil hai. Wo sirf writer jaan sakta hai. Koyi bhi twist ho sakta hai

 

[Riyansh]

Waiting