Romance Ek Ajeeb si love story (completed)

[Gayatri]

Nice story..revaka achhai ke rah mein chalne ki raaz kya hai. maskman koun hai waiting

 

[Notebook]

e ka update suru hote hi khtm. e na chalwe. ailla... reveka dear achi ban gai.uh nakabpos kon ba. total suspense

Reveka batayegi ki aakhir kyu wo achhi bani btw naqabposh khatarnak hai . Update me suspence dalne ki chahat ne use chhota hi rahne diya

 

[Notebook]

Nice update Bro.....

Thanks dear

 

[Hellohoney]

Mast update bhai revika sudhar gayi ye acha huva gunda sayad vahi hoga jisne pehle revika ki madad ki thi pari ke liye or bhai maya ka kya huva usne pari ko bhot sport kiya tha

 

[Notebook]

nice update but clear nahi ho payya ki kya hua

dear next update me clear ho jayega:,love:

 

[Raaz1886]

Super update

 

[PARADOX]

 

[PARADOX]

aaila ye kaa ho gaya re baba.....Ye nakabposh wala aadmi kon ho sakta hai.....?

 

[KR$NA]

Nice, socha bhi nahi tha aisa aisa hoga chalo ek baat aachi huyi story kuch din aur chalegi
Rahi baat aur naqabposh ki to shayad himansh aur revika ka ek dost tha na monty shayad wo ho wahan pe nahi to koi new character add hoga, nice update

 

[Notebook]

Yeh kia yaar jissko jail mein sadna chahiye tha ussko chaiperson bana diya dhat ye mujhe passand nahin aya...
Baaki sab thik hai.
Matlab ab anathalay cum school Pari chala rahi hai good job.
Magar ab kaun agaya pari ki bache ko uthaane? Kahin iss mein bhi Reveka ka hath to nahin?
Agle update mein pata chalega.
Aguey badho notebook bhai

Really sorry sir ki aap ko update pasand nahi aaya par kya hi saja milegi Reveka ko jalan aur ektarfa pyaar ki . Usko to Pari ne hi maaf kar diya tha . Thanks for ur beautiful cmnt sir