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Bro ek bat samaj no ayi ki ye Jo Poonam he vo vika ke sath moj (chut chatai me )Kar rahi thi or bad me bataya ki ak ki gf he or vo isko vaha chhudane ayatha to kuchh isme saspence he pls ye clear Karo
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ok bhai,
tab tak sayad do update aa jaye
ek kal ka bhi pending h aur ek aaj ka.
dono de dunga tab tak sayad
saath bane rahe...
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dost vaise to bata dene se aur bhi sawal khade ho jayenge,
per phir bhi bhai baat clear h, wo vika ke sammohan mein thi us time.
update taiyaar h agla,
saath bane rahe..
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Update 7
Ab tak.....
Ramesh ka chehra abhi tak itne tapado ki wajah se khoon se lathpath ho chuka tha.
Uske mooh se badi dhimmi aawaz m aur badi muskil se sirf ek he naam ya lafj nikalta h.
Ramesh - BALDEV........
Ab aage.....
jab abhi ne yeh naam suna to pata nahi qyon uska gussa aur bhi bhadh jata h. wo aav dekhta h na taav ramesh ko uthakar phir se zamin per faink deta h.
wo aaj apne upper se controll khota ja raha tha. abki baar usne ramesh ko kuch jyada he jor se fainka tha.
wo fir se uski taraf jata h to use haal filhaal ki ghatna aur gudiya ki baatein yaad aa jati h.
ABHI apne gusse mein controll karne ke liye kya kare yeh samjh he nahi pa raha tha. per phir se thodi si der apni aankhon ko band karta h aur apne sabse pyare insaan ke saath bitaye lamhe yaad karne ki khosish karta h.
per pata nahi q wo aaj puri tarah se saant nahi ho pa raha tha. wo jab kuch saant hota h to ramesh ki taraf dekhta h.
ramesh ka to bhot he bura haal tha, abki baar to bechara chilla bhi nahi paya tha aur behosh ho gaya tha.
fir abhi usko apne khandho per utha kar talaab ki taraf chal deta h.
'chhaapppaaaakkkkkk.'
wahan pahuchte he wo ramesh ko pani m faink deta h. pani mein girte he ramesh ko thoda sa hosh aata h to wo apni adh khuli aankho se apne samne ABHI ko khada pata h.
(wo jahan gira tha wahan lagbhag 2,3 foot pani tha.)
uski adh khuli aankhen dar ke karan puri khul jati h, aur wo uth kar bhagne ki khosish karta h. per apne sarir mein uth rahe aasehniya dard ke karan fir se gir padta h.
Ab yeh sara khel ABHI ki dardasht ke bahar ho jata h. wo rakesh ko lagbhag ghasitte hue talaab mein se bhahr nikalta h aur bina ruke gao ki taraf chal padta h.
jabtak gao m entry hoti, tabtak rakesh firse behosh ho chuka tha.
gao wala 1 - are wo dekho! yeh kon h?
gao wala 2- are bhai dekhne se to chote malik lagte h.
gao wala 3 - are to dekh kya rahe ho? bhago yahan se agar yeh yahan is halaat m h to paka wo hhi aata hoga.
gao wala 4 - wo kon bhai, aur yeh kya ho raha h. wo ladka is gao ke chote malik ko aise le ja raha h aur tum log....
gao wala 1 uski baat bich m kaat kar bolta h - are yaar usko inko aur bhago yahan se agar jaan pyari h to.
gao wala 4 - per ..,..
gao wala 2- - mere bhai per war chhod aur bhag. agar BHIMA bhi aa gaya to hame bhi lapet lega saath mein bina baat ke.
abhi ko chalte chalte kafi time ho gaya tha. wo jaise jaise aage bhadhta ja raha tha uske samne se gao wale hatte ja rahe the.
is samay gao m jo bhi log use dekhte, wo ya to use sahanubhuti ke taur per dekhte ya phir dar ki dristi se.
dheere dheere use hawali ka gate bhi nazar aane laga tha.
waise to haweli itni saandaar aur bhavya tarike ae banayi gayi thi ki wo aas pass ke gao se bhi dikh jati thi.
ABHI ke alawa sirf yeh he imarat gao m bhumanzila thi. usko to aaye yahan sirf kuch he mahine hue the, lekin hawali ki shaan to jamano se thi.
idhar jaise jaise ABHI gao m ja raha tha use ab sirf aur sirf sannate ka shor he sunayi pad raha tha. aaj to mano hawao ne bhi chuppi sadhi hui thi. agar koi aawaz aa rahi thi to wo ramesh ke ghisatne ki aa rahi thi.
ABHI kabhi bhi haweli ki taraf nahi aana chahta tha.
per sayad kisi ne jo jaha h wo bilkul sahi kaha h,
mudayi laakh chahe to kya hota h,
wahi hota h jo kismat m likha hota h.
abhi ka haweli ki taraf aane ka koi matlab nahi tha, kahan wo soch raha tha ki gao m jakar kuch din, kam se kam kuch din to aaram se rahega. per.....
'thhaaayyyeeeennn....'
ABHI apni socho mein gum haweli ki taraf bhadh he raha tha ki uski sixth sense aein moke per kaam karti h. warna agar thodi si bhi der hoti to kuch der baad uska bhi bejan sarir ramesh ki tarah darti per pada hota. jahan ramesh to sayad jinda hota. per ABHI ke bheje ko wo goli nikal chuki hoti.
"jahan ho wahin ruk jao, warna kismat har baar saath nahi deti."
jab ABHI ka dhayan goli chalne per aur apne bhachav ke baad gate ki taraf jata h to wahan ek 6ft lambe chode pehalwaan ko haath m dunali liye khada pata h.
"maine to suna tha ki haweli m dusmano ko bhi atihthi samjha jata h. per yahan to nihathe athithi ka in do kodi ke khilono se swagat kiya ja raha h."
itna kehne ke baad ABHI ke chehre per ek kutil muskaan tair jati h, jo is samay pehalwaan ke liye to katayi taur per bardaas ke bahar thi.
"manna padega tumhe, maine aaj pehli baar koi aisa banda dekha h jisne BHIMA se aankhen milane ki himmakat ki hai."
ji haan doaton yeh hamare bhima pehalwaan he the. per is samay wo apne samne ek yuvak ko aise nidarta aur tevar m dekh thode se aascharya chakit bhi the.
"raaakkeesssshhhh."
dono ki is mithi vartalaap ko viram ek dil ko dehladene wali cheekh se lagta h.
bhima to samjh jata h yeh kon h. per jab ABHI ki nazar us cheekhne wale shaksh per padti h to kuch der ke liye wo bhav sunay ho jata h.
hua yun ki goli ki aawaz sunkar haweli m mojood sare sadasya bahar aa jate h aur jab samne ka nazara dekhtein h to unka dil tadap uthta h.
"yeh kya kiya tumne mere bete ke saath?"
Ek shaksh lagbhag cheekhte hue ABHI se bolta h, phir BHIMA ki taraf dekh kar apne daant pisste hue kehta h, "mujhe abhi aur issi waqt iska sir chahiye."
ABHI jo ab tak us aadmi ki sakal ko dekh kar apne atit mein kho chuka tha, uska dhayan jab us aadmi ke chikhne se tutta h to wo apne gusse ki sima langh jata h.
ABHI aav dekha h na taav, ramesh ko apne ek haath se hawa m utha leta hai, uthata hai kya lagbhag uchalta h aur ek gutne ke bal hokar uska pair apne pair se tod deta h.
"aaaaahhhhhhhh"
"raammeeessshhhh"
"thhaaayyyeeeiiinnnn"
"taaannnnnnnnnn".
to be continued........
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Doston aaj ka update de diya h,
Ab agla update raat tak.....
Kal ki bharpayi bhi to karni h...
Ab agla update raat tak.....
Kal ki bharpayi bhi to karni h...
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Update 8
Ab tak....
ABHI aav dekha h na taav, ramesh ko apne ek haath se hawa m utha leta hai, uthata hai kya lagbhag uchalta h aur ek gutne ke bal hokar uska pair apne pair se tod deta h.
"aaaaahhhhhhhh"
"raammeeessshhhh"
"thhaaayyyeeeiiinnnn"
"taaannnnnnnnnn".
Ab aage........
Idhar jab gudiya ghar pahuchi us ladki ko lekar to pehle uske liye kapde leke aayi. Per fir us ladki ki haalat dekhkar use nahane ki salaah di.
wo ladki ghar to aa gayi thi gudiya ke saath, lekin apbe hosh o hawas ko wahin chhod aayi thi. Usko abhi tak yakin nahi ho raha tha jo uske saath hua. Wo filhaal bilkul sunn si ho gayi thi aur baramde mein bhichi charpayi per sikud kar baithi thi.
Gudiya ne kapde lakar us ladki ke pass rakh diye aur usko nahane ke liye kehne lagi. Lekin jab gudiya ko koi jawab nahi milta to wo use pakad kar hilati h.
'Nahi nahi mujhe chod do. Mujhe jane do.'
Wo ladki jaise ek dum apni soch se bahar aati h.
Gudiya uske is tarah ke vayvahar se ek baar achambhit ho jati h. Wo sochti h ki 'ghar tak to achi bhali aa gayi thi, lekin ab kya hua ise'
Idhar wo ladki jab apne samne gudiya ko dekhti h to uske saath kas ke chipak jati h
"didi-2 mujhe bacha lo, mujhe bacha lo didi. Wo saitaan h didi, wo mera sab kuch loot lega didi. Mujhe bacha lo didi... Mujhe bacha looooo......"
Itna bolkar wo ladki dhahade maar kar rone lagti h.
Jab gudiya uski aisi dasa dekhti h to uske bhi aankh mein pani aa jata h. Wo bhi us ladki ko kas ke gale se laga leti h aur bolti h....
"Sssssshhhhhhhh, bas kar pagli. Ab rona band kar. Koi nahi h yahan. Aur koi nahi aayega. Main hun tumhare saath. Chalo chup ho jao."
Lekin ladki per koi khass farak nahi pad raha tha.
Aakhirkaar gudiya ki mehnat (puchkarne aur sahara dene) aur us ladki ki ghabrahat rang lati h aur wo wahin per baithi baithi he behosh ho jati h.
Gudiya pehle to uske aise behoah hone per paresaan ho jati h. Per baad mein kuch sochkar rasoi se pine ka pani m neend ki dawai milakar aur thoda sa pani jug mein le aati h.
Gudiya use hosh m lati h. Lekin wo ladki hosh m aate he phir se wohi sab harkate suru deti h. Per abki baar gudiya usko kisi tarah se wo pani pila deti h.
Dheere dheere us ladki ki aakhein band hone lagti h aur phir wo so jati h.
Gudiya us ladki ko wahin chodkar ander se ek kambal lakar us ladki ko odha deti h.
Wo sochti h ki 'agar bhaiya yahan hote to......'
Tabhi apne bhai ka dhayan aate he usko ab tension hone lagti h. Jab usko koi illaz nahi milta apni pareshani ka to turrant ek number dail karti h.
Idhar haweli m aage bhadhne se pehle yahan ki kuch jaruri jaankari aapko bata deta hun.
Haweli mein is saway pariwaar ke taur per 5 sadasya rehte the.
1 baldev thakur
2 nirmala thakur
3 jaya thakur
4 ramesh thakur
5 aabha thakur.
Abhi tak aap ek sadasya ko to jaan he chuke honge. Ab baki ki baatein
Baldev thakur - is aadmi ke do roop h ek gao walon ke samne aur ek apne aap mein. Dono ek dusre se behad alag aur uljhe hue h. Khaandani rahees h. Lagbhag gao mein he 300 kile ki zamin ka malik h.
Nirmala thakur - thakurain h to thoda sa ghamand bhi h, lekin samne wale insaan ko dekhkar he apna taur tarika istemaal karti h.
Jaya thakur - yeh baldev ki behan h jo ab vidhwa h aur bilkul apne khandaan se ulat bhi h.
Aabha thakur - ghar ki iklote ladki. Khubsorat hone ke saath saath thodi si satkeli type h. Jab tak saant h to saant h, warna iska gussa to uske baap ka bhi baap h.
Ramesh thakur - ghar ka iklota ladka hone ki wajah se kafi had tak bigda hua h. Paise ki kami na hone ki wajah se haal filhaal m he videsh se padhayi kar ke lota h. Usne kya padhayi ki h, uski jhalak to aap log dekh he chuke h
Doston thakur family ka filhaal kuch khass intro nahi diya h, bas jitna diya h abhi ke liye kafi h. Baki baatein aage pata chalti jayengi...
Ab aate h kahani per
Jab ABHI ne gusse mein rakesh ke pair ko tod diya to wahan per uski behoshi ki halaat hone ke bawjood ek dardnaak chikh gunj gayi.
Jisko dekh kar haweli walon ke muh se uske naam ki chikh nikal gayi.
Jaise he aabha ne apne bhai ka yeh haal dekha to usne ABHI per gusse mein goli chala di jo sidha jake ek abhi ko lagti ki usse pehle he goli ki disha aur abhi ke aage ek shaks aake khada ho gaya. Goli us aadmi ke haath m pakde hue lohe jaise shield se takra gayi aur wahan tannnnñnn ki aawaz gunj gayi.
'AAAAKKKKKKKK'
'AAAAABBBBBBHHHHAAAAA'
'AAAAABBBBBBHHHHAAAAA'
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