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Brilliant update with awesome writing skill janu ji
Saath bane rahe...
Agla update taiyaar h
Saath bane rahe...
Agla update taiyaar h
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Update 9
Ab tak....
Jaise he aabha ne apne bhai ka yeh haal dekha to usne ABHI per gusse mein goli chala di jo sidha jake abhi ko lagti ki usse pehle he goli ki disha aur abhi ke aage ek shaks aake khada ho gaya. Goli us aadmi ke haath m pakde hue lohe jaise shield se takra gayi aur wahan tannnnñnn ki aawaz gunj gayi.
'AAAAKKKKKKKK'
'AAAAABBBBBBHHHHAAAAA'
'AAAAABBBBBBHHHHAAAAA ".
Ab aage........
Ji haan doston aap log sahi samjhe gudiya ne jisko call kiya tha, wo aur koi nahi AK tha.
Gudiya ne aaj ke hue hadse ke bare mein usko sari baat batete hue ABHI ki safety ko lekar apni chinta jahir ki.
To AK ne bina waqt gayave wahan per pahuchna sahi samjha.
Waise to AK ko ABHI pe khud se jyada bharosa tha, per wo janta tha ki ABHI kabhi bhi aam aadmiyon ke samne apni taqat ka namuna paish nahi karega.
Bas isi baat ke chalte wo turrant teleport hua aur wahan pahuch gaya. Wo to tabhi aa gaya tha jab ABHI aur BHIMA mein sabdo ka khel chal raha tha.
Lekin wo tab tak maidan mein nahi utra jab tak use koi khatra mehsoos nahi hua.
Jaise he use khatre ka aabhass hua to usne turrant bhagte hue ABHI ke samne jump laga di.
Ab tak ABHI ko aabha nazar nahi aayi thi. Lekin jab goli chalne ki aawaz aayi use to samne ka pata nahi chala lekin AK ko aabha dikh gayi thi.
Itne varso ke uprant jab usne apne samne aabha ko dekha to ek pal ko wo bhi chonk gaya aur aisa he kuch haal aabha ka bhi tha.
Jahan ek taraf har koi uske is parkar samne aa jane se stabhdh the, heraan the. Wahin yeh dono ek dusre ko dekhkar hairaan the.
Sabse pehle aabha ke he muh se lafz nikle...
'AAAAKKKKKKK'
Aur idhar AK ke baad mein
'Aaaabbbbbhhhaaaaà'
Lekin jab ABHI NE AK ke muh se naam suna to wo bina chonke nahi reh saka.
'Aaaabbbbhhhaaaaaa????'
Idhar aabha ka naam lena kisi ko sunayi nahi diya lekin AK ka naam lena BHIMA ko sun gaya.
'Choti malkin bol madar.....'
'Aaaaaaaaaaaaa'
Bhima ne jab AK ke muh se naam suna to usne ABHI ka gussa AK per nikalne ki sochi, aur usko marne ke liye bagta hua aaya, abhi to gusse mein apna aur kuch karta ya bolta usse pehle he uska ek haath kuch der ke liye kaam ka nahi raha.
'Ruk jao AK'
'thakur pehle apne bete aur bhima ko turrant aspataal pocha nahi to uska sabak adhura reh jayega.
Main tumko yahin milunga.'
BHIMA ke ghayal hote he ABHI ne pehle to AK ko ruko aur phir thakur ko uske bete ki haalat se avgat karwate hue nasihat ke saath saath dhamki bhi de dali.
Thakur ab tak to isi baat se bhoklaya hua tha ki kaise ek piddi bhar ke ladke ne uske, uske kya aas pass ke zillon mein bhi mashoor pehalwaan ka yeh haal kar diya aur wo bhi bina koi khass zor lagaye.
Uski tandra to tab bhang hoti h jab abhi baat uske kaano tak pahuchti h.
Wo filhaal abhi ki dil masoos kar maan leta h aur uski taraf daant pissh kar reh jata h. Lekin rakesh ko bhi aspatal jaruri tha le jana.
'Mohan gadi nikal jaldi se.'
'Aur tum, jo koi bhi ho. yeh sab abhi khatam nahi hua h. Jaldi mulakat hogi.'
Thakur lagbhag chikhte hue apne driver ko gadi nikalne ke liye bolta h aur phir ABHI ko bhi thakuro wale andaaz mein apna guroor dhikhata hua rakesh ko lene ke aage bhadhta h.
Thakur ko isliye aage aana pada, quoki abhi abhi uske sare naukaro ne BHIMA ki yeh haalat dekhi thi aur unmein se kisi ke bhi kadam aage nahi bhadh pa rahe the.
'Filhaal meri fikar chodo, agar thodi aur der lagaoge to main to tumhe yahin milunga lekin aspatal walo ka ek mariz kam ho jayega'
'Chalo ab'
ABHI bhi ab wahan se chalne ke mood mein hota h use jo karna tha ek trailor ke taur per, wo kar chuka tha.
Wahan se jate jate bhi ABHI aur AK phir se ek baar aabha ki taraf dekhtein jo ab bhi wahin khadi thi. Lekin ab uski bandook ki naal zamin ki taraf taktaki lagaye thi.
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'Tumhe yahan nahi hona chahiye tha.'
'Mujhe gudiya ne kaha tha aur phir tumhare usool bhi to the.'
ABHI aur AK is samay chalte-2 ek sunsaan jagah aa gaye the.
'Gudiya se nahi miloge?'
'Agli baar, filhaal kisi ko meri zarurat h.'
ABHI ne jab AK ko teleport hote dwkha to use ghar chalne ke liye poocha. Lekin is waqt AK ko wapas apne pyar ke pass bhi jana. Wo bhi abhi ek sadme se he gujar rahi thi.
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'Gudiya, tum aise quon so rahi ho?'
'Uuuufffffffffff'
'Bhaiiiyyyaaaa'
Idhar jab ABHI ghar pahucha to wo baithak m se hote hue apne kamre m ja raha tha. Usne pehle apna toliya leke nahane ka vichar banaya.
Lekin jab usne charpayi per kisi ko sote dekha to use gudiya samjh kar uthane ki sochta h. Wo use apne ghar per aane ka bata dena chahta tha. Isliye usne us soyi hui ladki ke upper se chaddar ko hata diya.
Phir se samne ka nazara dikha to uski aankhen chondhiya gayi.
Ab tak hui ghatna mein usne is ladki ki nang awastha per itna gaur nahi kiya tha.
Lekin itne pass se dekhna...
'Uuuuffffffffff......'
Idhar gudiya ko gate khulne ki aawaz aati h to wo bahar aa jati h. Usne socha sayad bhaiya aa gaye honge aur unko toliya wagaira de dun. Taki wo hath muh dhokar khana kha sake.
Lekin jab wo wahan pahuchi to samne ka nazara dekhkar uski jhaantein sulag uthi aur uake mooh se tez aawaz nikli...
'Bhhaaaiiyyyyaaaaa....'
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Awesome update
Abhi kisko dekh kar chok gaya h Kon h wo
Aur Kon abhi ke samne aaya h
Keep posting
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Aur Kon abhi ke samne aaya h
Keep posting
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Itni achi partikriya ke liye sukriya dost....
Bhai kahani to jarur puri hogi....
Agla update de diya h...
Saath bane rahe....
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Supab bro , 2nd update ke last wala part mast tha , ab dekhte hai abhi and goli ke beech mai kon ah gaya ....
Waiting for next , waise ramesh ya rakesh , hi hi ....
Waiting for next , waise ramesh ya rakesh , hi hi ....
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Lekin jab wo wahan pahuchi to samne ka nazara dekhkar uski jhaantein sulag uthi
Gazab Janu Bhai !!
Fabulous Update Maza aa gaya....
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Fabulous Update Maza aa gaya....
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bhai....Naya update bhi aa chuka h....
Sahi kaha bhai RAMESH, ab keypad mein m aur k just upper niche h, per phir bhi galti hogayi.
Baad m edit kar dunga.
for concern.....Saath bane rahe.....