Naik
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Sorry doston,
Dimag kaam naĥi kar raha tha.
Update aaj raat tak ya kal subah tak.....
Dimag kaam naĥi kar raha tha.
Update aaj raat tak ya kal subah tak.....
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Doston ek simple sa sawal h...
Kya story slow h? Aur isse speed up kar dena chahiye?????
Plssss...
Jarur batayien...
Quoki mujhe lag raha h sayad kuch to h jo abhi meri samjh ke bahar h.
Agar mere alawa itne dimag apni raye denge to ho sakta h sayad kuch kaam dono taraf ke liye aasaan ho jaye....
Aapke jawab ki partiksha rahegi.....
Hayaan
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bhai ab kahani mein Jaan dalni hai to likhne ke liye gahrayi mein utarna hoga...
aur gahrayi mein jane me to waqt lagta hi hai....
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Update 12
Ab tak....
bhy kon kehta h aadmi bagair dawa ke thik nahi reh sakta.
dekh lo bilkul 'fit h janab'. chacha ke jajbe ko salam karne ka dil kar gaya.
hamne bhi zor se kaha "haan chacha. aapto bilkul fit h."
Idhar main gudiya to kahani suna raha tha aur udher mera phone phir se baj utha.........
Ab aage......
Jab maine phone uthaya to haalton ke madhya nazar phone kaat kar jeb mein daal liya.
'Bhaiya wakayi mein bhot ache insaan rahe honge chacha ji.
Waise to unse mera samna nahi hua, lekin aapki baat aunne ke baad main yeh dave se keh sakti hun.'
Gudiya ki baat sunkar mera dhyan phone se hatkar wapas uski taraf hua aur jab maine gudiya ke chehre ko dekha to dil ko thodi tasalli mili.
Maine bhi ek choti si muskaan chehre per late hue kaha ki,
'Acha to ab main niklta hun. Raat tak wapsi hogi ab.'
'Bhaiya main yahan akeli kya karungi, main bhi chalti hun aapke saath.'
'Aap akeli kahan rahegi, aap sayad bhul rahi h. Abhi aap ke uper ek zimedaari h.'
Gidiya ne jab apne abhi ke muh se chalne ki baat sunni to uska bhi nischal man chacha ji ke antim darsano ke liye vayakul ho utha aur usne saath chalne ki baat keh dali thi. Wo bhul he gayi thi us ladki ko.
Lekin jab ABHI ne ghar mein ek anjaan ladki ki haalat ke baare mein yaad dilaya to uae yaad aaya.
'Sorry bhaiya, main bhul gayi thi. Chaliye pgir aap jaldi jaiye, warna wapsi mein der lagegi.'
ABHI uski baat sunkar uth khada hua aur uske maathe ka ek chumban lekar usse vida leta hua kamre ae bahar niklta h.
'Ufffff, na jane kaise kasis h is ladki mein. Aaj kafi dino baad aisa hua hai.'
Wo jab apne kamre se bahar nikla to use bahar baithak mein wohi ladki avchetan avastha mein mili. Wo abhi tak nahi samjh pa raha tha ki uske saath aisa quon ho raha h.
Wo turrarnt apne dimag ko jhatakta hua bahar gadi nikalne nikal jata h.
Jab wo bahar niklta h to use kuch dhayan aata h aur wo bahar se gudiya ko aawaz lagata h.
'Gudiyyyaaa, ari wo gudiyaaaa.'
'Kya baat h bhai? Aap abhi tak yahin ho?'
'Haan sun, main bus se ja raha hun. Tujhe sayad yahan gadi ki jarurat pad sakti h.'
'Nahi bhaiya mujhe kya jarurat pad....???'
'Are apne liye na sahi lekin us ladki ke liye sayad pad jaye.'
Wo gudiya ki baat katta hua bola, fir thoda ruk kar bola.
'Acha sun, agar tere kapde usko fit aaye to thik, warna pass wale sehar se kuch apne liye aur uske liye le aana.'
'Thik h bhaiya, yeh maine socha he nahi tha.
Lekin aap kam se kam sehar tak to bike le jao.'
'Haan yeh thik rahega. Acha main ab chalta apna aur uska dhayan rakhna.'
Uske baad wo apni bike uthata hai aur wahan se pass wale sehar se bus pakadne chal padta h.
Jab wo wahan pahuchta h to bike ko ek jaankaar dukam wale ke pass kadhi krta h aur nikal padta h dusre sehar ki bus lene.
Bus jane ko taiyaar khadi thi. Usko dekhte he uske muh se ek haye nikal jati h.
Note :- doston jinhone bhi bus se safar kiya h unke liye agla update jarur padhne layak rahega.
Agla update raat tak.
Saath bane rahein.
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update janu ji...... bahot achhe likh rahe hai aap..... Great going
dostonNaya update hazir hai....
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Haan sahi farmaya aapne bhai....
Bas kuch galtiyaan ho jati h is beakal dimag se
Update aa gaya...
Saath bane rahe...
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Doston waise to raat wala update taiyaar hai.
Lekin main jald bazi mein wo dena nahi chahta.
Raat tak usmein kuch editting karne ke baad deta hun.
Lekin main jald bazi mein wo dena nahi chahta.
Raat tak usmein kuch editting karne ke baad deta hun.
huum bus ko dekhkar hay kahe nikli janu kya bus itni pyari thi yaal 
wonderfull update aur story slow bilkul bhi nahi hai update bhi time par de rahe ho
wonderfull update aur story slow bilkul bhi nahi hai update bhi time par de rahe ho
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huum bus ko dekhkar hay kahe nikli janu kya bus itni pyari thi yaal
Bus ka safar aaj usmein baith kar karna..
Pata chal jayega
Aur aap bhi sukla ji time per jawab de diya karo
Pehle bata dete to ek din ka gap na lagta.
Saath bane rahein...