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kya aap chahte hai ki me is kahani ko intresting banane ke liye photos our gifs ka tadka lagau??????


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Mai aaj apni ek nayi kahani shuru kar raha hun. is kahani ko me thoda hat kar likhe ki koshish karne wala hun. mana ki maine pichli kahani me kuch galtiya ki hongi our kisi karan wo kahani maine adhuri chhod di..
mai wo kahani bhi puri karunga par is kahani ke pura hone ke baad hi us kahani ke tarah mudna pasand karunga

ye kahani action se bharpur, thrill se khachakhach bharne ki puri koshish karunga, yaha sex bhi he our romanch bhi yaha daravne manjar bhi hai our pyar bhare mosam bhi....

mai sabhi dosto se ummid karta hun ki aap sab mere is dusre kahani par dher sara pyar barsayenge our pura saath denge.
OUR EK SABSE JARURI BAAT KAHANI KA HAR EK UPDATE HAR 2 DIN BAAD ME POST KARUNGA....AGAR KISI KARAN DERI HUYI TO AGLA AANE WALA UPDATE KAFI LAMBA HOGA.......WAISE KAHANI KE UPDATES ME DERI HONE KI KOI GUNJAISH NAHI HAI ....FIR BHI ME CLEAR KAR RAHA HUN

Mai aap sab se vinati karunga ki kahani mai likh raha hun to mujhe motive kare na ki usme kamiya nikal kar mujhe demotive na kare.......is kahani ko me thoda realistic tarike se likhne ka prayas karunga isliye kahani aapko pasand aaye yehi meri koshish rehne wali he......

aapko is kahani ko padhne me jyada interest aaye our utne hi maja aaye iski puri koshish karunga


like our comments karne apna pyar jataye
shukriya
 
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is kahani me sex incident bohot sare he par abhi uske liye thoda our samay lagega ....kahani ko samjhe our usko enjoy kare.......
our comments kar ke bataye kahani aapko kaisi lag rahi hai......shurwaat damdar ho na ho par kahani ka aage ka hissa romanch bhara hona ye thriller ki khasiyat hoti hai
 
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Update 8


Na jane baba ne kya khilaya tha mujhe mera bita hua kal yaad aane laga tha…..mujhe apne andar bohot hi alaj hi mehsus ho raha tha …..ek aalag hi ehsaas jaise mere andar ek alag hi shaktiya basi huyi ho…..meri aankh aaj alag hi taarah chamak rahi thi pehle se bhi jyada hi nili lag rahi thi ……

Mujhe sab yaad aaraha tha dheere-dheere mujhe apne atit ke hare k panne wakt ke sath yaad aane lage the…….me sheher se kaafi dur sunsaan raste par jungle ke bich se gujar raha tha me apne khayalo me hi gun huye bas gadi chala raha tha ki achanak ek meri najar samne gayi to dekha rasta band tha our maine gadi rok di our niche utar gaya …maine dekha to mujhe aaspas koi najar nahi aaya our maine us bhari bharkam ped ko apne dono hatho me aaram se utha liya our raste ke side me fenk diya….tabhi ek kaar teji se aayi our mujhse takra gayi, car ne mujhe bohot hi jor se takkar mari thi. Jisake karan me hawa me udta hua thodi dur jakar gira……me nahi utha kyun ki ye sab achanak hone ke karan mujhe ek jhatka sa laga our me behosh ho gayaa tha to unhe laga me to nikal liya yani ke mar gaya….to gadi se rakha uthar kar niche aagaya…..our pedo ke piche chupe kaliya our uske chamche bhi bahar aagaye….

Kaliya : “kamal kar diya rakha tune to ek hi jhatke me chuje ko uda diya maja aagaya…..dekh to iski gadi kamal ki hai……manana padega iski pasand hatke hai.” ispar rakha haste huye bola

Rakha : “hahahahaha par khair sala to chala gaya hamare liye ye jabardast gadi chhod kar” doho ki haste huye gadi dekhne lage kaliya ne apne sathiyon se kaha

Kaliya : “jao re use utha kar jungle me kahi dafna do…..saale ki laash ka pata bhi na chalne paye.” Our dono apne sathiyon ko order de kar bas tamasha dekh rahe the…

Rakha : “kyu re kaliya tune suna aaj Thakur sahib kya keh rahe the……wo us avinash ki ghar ki murgiyon ki baat kar rahe the….”

Kaliya : “isme konsi nayi baat he rakha ye to in sabka roj ka kaam he kisi na kisi ghar ki orat ye roj utha kar le hi aate he jo asani se maan jaye use rakhil bana lete he our jo asani se na mane use jabardasti kar ke apne hi kheto me dafna dete he pure pariwar ke sath.”

Ispar rakha hasne laga

Rakha : “khair jo bhi ho par hame bhi to chakhne ka mouka de hi dete hai….haha” kaliya bhi hasne laga…dono ki bate jari thi

Dusri taraf unke sathiyon ne mujhe uthaya our ghane pedo ke pass aagye our mere liye ek gaddha khod rahe the…..jab unka kaam pura hua our unhone mujhe uthaya our jaise hi mujhe gaddhe me fekne wale the ki meri aankh khul gayi our maine apne hatho se do logon ki gardan pakad li our khud ko hawa me uchalte huye un dono logon ko gaddhe me gira diya ye dekh kar baki sathi hairan the unke chehre par dar dikhai de raha tha……mara hua insaan jinda kaise ho gaya…..

Kuch hi palo me sabhi mujhe marne ke liye meri taraf lafpke main sabko bas ek-ek waar me hi khatam kar diya…..our usi gaddhe me unhe dafan kar diya…..kaliya our rakha idhar bate karne me busy the our gadi me rakha saman dekhne ja hi rahe the ki mai unke samne aakar khada ho gaya…..

Mujhe dekh kar unki aawaj band ho gayi……wo dono kuch harkat karte usase pehle maine rakha ki gardan pakad li our dusre haath se uska kandha pakad liya our ….gusse se kaliya ki taraf dekhte huye…gurrata hua bolne laga

Mai : “tum log ho kon our kiske aadesh par tumne ye sab kiya hai , sach nahi bataya to me iski gardan tod dunga” our maine our thoda kas liya uski gardan par apna haath……rakha ki aawaj nikalna band ho gayi thi our wo chatpata raha tha….kaliya ne ye dekh kar apna muh khola.

Kaliya : “bh…bh…bha….” Mai fir se gurra kar bola

Mai : “ mere pass jada wakt nahi he juldi bol….”

Kaliya : “Thakur ji our unke dono beto ne hi hume aapko marne ke liye bheja he…..” mujhe ascharya hua uski baat sun kar

Mai : “ye kya bak rahe ho wo mujhe kyun marna chahte he????” kaliya ne turant jawab diya

Kaliya : “ye hum nahi jante bas hame itna pata he ki un sabki najar avinash ke pariwar par he tumhe marne ke baad wo unki betiyon ko uthwane wale the….ya shayad utha bhi liya hoga” maine ye sunte hi rakha ki gardan apne haath se hi dhad se alag kar di……ye dekh kar kaliya dar gaya our dar ke mare waha se bhag gaya,…..apni gadi lekar…..

Mera sine ke niche ka hisse me khoon ke daag pad gaye the maine uska sharir raste ke side ghani jhadiyon me fenk di…..maine jaan bujh kar kalliya ko jane diya taki wo un haram jade thakur ko mere an kahe shabdo ka paigaam de …

Maine apni bag se ek our shirt nikali our fir pehen li…..maine apni gadi gaav ki our mod li……mujhe lagbhag gaav pahunchte raat ho gayi thi…..jab me apne ghar louta to dekha ballu kaka our mala kaki bahar baithe sagar ke sath kuch baat kar rahe the….unhone apni taraf aati huyi gadi dekhi……unhe nahi pata tha us gadi me me hun…..wo gadi ke pass aaye kuch bolne wale the ki maine darwaja khol kar bahar aagaya….mujhe dekh dono ne samajh gaye….

Mai gadi se utra our kaka se kaha..

Mai : “kaka sara saman mere kamre me rakhwa do our ha sambhal kar kuch totna nahi chahiye…” meri baat khatam hote hi mala kaki boli…

Mala : “chote malik wo sagar ke mata pita ne aapko ghar bulaya hai …..” maine pucha

Mai : “kyu kisliye bulaya hai mujhe?kya bat hai?” ispar mala kaki ne kaha

Mala :” mujhe nahi pata par kuch paresan karne wali baat hai” ye sun kar mujhe halka sa andaj hone laga akhir vajah kyat hi bas use pakka karna tha….. to mai sagar ke sath uske ghar aagaya

Mai jaise hi andar aaya …unke ghar me sab aaise baithe huye the jaise ghar me matam chaya ho…….mene chuppi todi….

Mai : “kya bat hai kya hua sabko aaise kyu baithe ho…” maine dekha chacha bhi vahi moujud the…….chacha ne kaha

Chacha : “vikram aaj fir ajay aaya tha ghar me kal dopehar tak agar dono ladkiya nahi unke haweli par gayi to wo unhe uthwa lega our unhe kisi kothe par bechne ki dhamki dekar gaya hai….” maine sab sunane ke baad kaha

Mai : “to ab kya? “ wo dono pati patni ro rahi thi andar unki betiya ro rahi thi…..bechara sagar use abhi kuch bhi andaja nahi tha ki akhir kya pareshani he unke ghar walon ko

Chacha : “vikram hame thane me report likhwani chahiye…..unke khilaf case kar dete he.” Maine uunhe rokte huye kaha…

Mai : “usase kaam nahi hoga bulki koi yakin bhi nahi karega hamari bato par…….mere pass ek tarika he isase nipatne ka.” Meri baat sun kar sab meri our dekhne lag eek ummid ke sath

Chacha : “batao kya karna hai” sukhiya ne bhi jawab diya

Sukhiya : “batao chote malik me apne pariwar ke liye kuch bhi karne ke liye tayyar hun…..” maine uhne thoda darane ke liye kaha

Mai : “soch lo kaka uska anjaam bohot bura sabit ho sakta hai……ye gaav chodna pad sakta hai aapko…..ya fir mout ko gale lagana pad sakta hai, bolo kya ab bhi taiyyar hai aap???” meri baat sun kar sukhiya ke andar thoda sa dar dikhayi diya par uski biwi rani uthi our ek koyta lekar gusse me boli

Rani : “chote malik jo hoga so hoga par mere rehte meri betiyon ki ijjat ki rakhsha karungi har haal me chahe kisi ka bhi gala katna pade me piche nahi hatungi….|” mai rani kaki ki baat se prabhavit hua….maine chacha ki taraf dekha our fir ekdam shaanti se jawab diya..

Mai : “kal kaki aap khud apni dono betiyonko sajaogi par jaruri baat ajay singh ke haweli nahi jana hai bulki use khet wale jhopdi me bulao ……” meri baat sun kar sab hairan ho gaye…..undar baithi unki dono betiya ye sab sun rahi thi….chacha bhi khud ko rok na sake

Chacha : “ye kya bol raha hai tu dimag to kharab nahi ho gaya tumhara?” rani kaki ne bhi bola

Rani :”chote malik isase acha he me khud apni bacchiyon ko jeher dekhar unhe anadmay mout de du unhe is nark jaise jeevan se bacha ne ke liye mukt kar du….” Maine muskurate huye jawab diya

Mai : “jeher me leke aaun ya aap le aayengi bataiye……” sab asamanjas me mujhe dekhne lage….fir maine serious hote huye kaha

Mai : “ab bas ho gaya meri baat dhyan se suno……aaise ho ya waise marne se bach nahi sakte par meri baat nanenge to hum is sab se to bach sakte he our kisi ko pata bhi nahi chalega…..”

Rani : “ji chote malik aap bataiye.”

Chacha : “par karna kya chahte ho vikram ?”

Sukhiya : “chote malik kaise hum apni bachiyon ko unke hawale kare???” maine fir tokte huye kaha

Mai : “dekho ye rasta sahi nahi hai par iske alawa bhi koi our tarika bhi nahi hai…..kal kaki our kaka aap dono khud ajaysingh se milenge our use manayenge ki wo khud pahadi ke pass wali kheti me jo jhopdi bani hai waha aaye…..our yaad rahe uske waha aane ki khabar kisi ko bhi hone na diya jaye…..our haan kaki meri baa tab aap dhyan se suniye ab me jo bolunga ye shayad ek nari ke liye achi baat nahi hogi par koi our rasta nahi hai hamare pass.” Sab meri baat dhyan se sun rahe the….

Mai : “aap ajay singh ko apne jhase me lane ki koshish karengi ……uske liye aapko use jism ka lalach dijiye our usase betiyon ke sath wo sab karne ke badle paise ki baat kare …isase ajay singh ko shak nahi hoga….our wo kheto me aane ke liye raji ho jayega ……tab use ye bhi kehna aapne our meri betion ke bare me kisi ko na pata chale our aap maje kar paao jab man kare tab unke sath suhagraat manaye……..ek baar wo kheto me aajaye bas fir hamara kaam ho jayega…..” sabke muh khulle ke khulle reh gaye….sab log soch me dube huye the

Rani : “agar wo kheto me aa bhi gaya tab bhi hamari betiya surakshit nahi hongi….” Chacha ne bhi sehmati jatayi…

Chacha : “haan vikram rani sahi keh rahi he wo sand takatwar hai…ye teeno uske samne kuch nahi kar payengi…..” maine muskurate huye kaha

Mai : “ye baat me ache se janta hun….par inhe unse ladne ki jarurat hi nahi padegi me khud use thikane lagane wala hun……” meri baat se chacha ke chehre par dar ke bhav dikhne lage……

Chacha : “ye tum kya bol rahe ho vikram beta…tum use kyun marna chahte ho????” maine unhe jawab diya

Mai : “to chacha baat ye hai ki jab se me is gaav me aaya hun our gaav walo ko mere bare me pata chala hai tab se mujhpar najar rakhi ja rahi hai…..our aaj jab me sheher se aaraha tha tab mujhe marne ka pura intejaam kar diya gaya tha…..par maine rakha ko mar diya our unke sathiyon ko bhi mar diya hai……to me agli chal chalne ka mouka unhe kyun dun….? Batao….isliye me inhe us ajay singh se bacha lunga our use bhi thikane lagaunga…..use kisne mara ye pata karne ke liye unhe mahino lag jayenge our is douran me Thakur samet dusre bete ko bhi mouth keg hat utar dunga…..” meri baat se rani our sukhiya ke chehre par unmmid ki lou dikhayi di……par dono ke man me dar bhi tha ki ajay singh mar gaya to Thakur unka jeena haram kar dega….

Chacha : “mujhe kuch bhi samajh nahi aaraha ki Thakur bhanupratap ki tumse kya dushmani he tumhe to wo thik se jante bhi nahi hai to tumhe wo marna kyun chahte he????”

Mai : {jhooth}“ wo to mujhe nahi pata hai, par me pata lagte hi pehle aapko hi bataunga chacha bas ek akhri baar mera sath dijiye.” Ispar chacha ne jawab diya

Chacha : “akhri baar nahi me hamesha hi tumhara sath dunga me janta hun tum jo bhi karoge uske piche jarur koi wajah hogi…..”

Sukhiya : “maaf karna chote malik par mujhe ye sab thik nahi lag raha hai” rani ne bhi sehmati dikhayi

Rani : “chote malik aapne hamare liye ye sab socha ye achi baat he hum aapka maan rakhte hai parantu ajay singh se chutkara to ho jayega par us shaitan Thakur se hum bach nahi sakte …”

Sukhiya : “isase acha hai hum aaj raat hi ye gaav chhod kar kahi dur chale jayenge jaha inki najar tak nahi ja sakegi….”

Mai : “soch lo kaka ye duniya ajay singh jaise bhediyon se bhari padi hai….kab tak surakhshit reh paoge kya jab waise hawas ke pujariyon se pala padega fir bhag khade honge kisi our sheher me…..mai itna janta hun apne hakk ke liye our apne pariwar ke liye ladna gunah nahi hai…..aaise me jaan bhi jaye to bhi koi gam nahi hona chahiye….”

Sukhiya : “aapki baat bilkul sahi he chote malik parantu yehi ek rasta hai mere pass hum yaha se dur chale jaye….” Hum sab me baate ho rahi thi ki dimple kamre se bahar aayi our usne kaha

Dimple : “chote malik me taiyyar hun, na me dar kar yaha se jaungi na mera pariwar yaha se jayega…..mere pariwar ko bachane ke liye mujhe agar meri jaan bhi jati hai tab bhi me piche nahi hatungi” sabhi dimple ki baat sunkar hairan pareshan the par uski baat sunkar me muskurane laga…..uske andar ek alag hi gussa ek alag ki jajba najar aaraha tha….

Rani : “nahi meri bacchi ye tu kya bol rahi hai hum ye gaav chod kar chale jayenge….”

Sukhiya : “haan beta hum kahi dur chale jayenge” ispar dimple ne pucha

Dimple : “maa-pitaji chote malik sahi keh rahe he kya ajay se bachkar bhi hum mehfuj jeevan ji sakenge uske jaise rakshas har jagah bhare huye hai …..school me collage me bus me raste par gaav me shehro me har jagah log aankhose balatkar karne lagte he……par me bhagungi nahi me ladungi…..our me sabko ladna sikhaungi ….jo hoga dekha jayega ….bina lade kayar ki tarah haar manungi nahi ……aaise bhi marna hai waise bhi marna hai to me ladte huye marna chahungi….par apni ya apne pariwar ki ijjat nilam nahi hone dungi….” Uski baate sun kar mujhe bohot khushi hui mujhe dimple par garv mehsus hone laga…..mujhe uski aankho me wo aag najar aane lagi thi jo maine kai jamane se ek ladki ke andar dekhi nahi thi…..mujhe dimple bha chuki thi..

Rani our sukhiya dono apni beti ki baate sun kar tayyar ho gaye unme bhi josh aagaya ….chacha bhi is baat se raji ho gaye…..fir maine unhe sari yojna batayi….our fir chacha our me ghar chale gaye…..chacha ke ghar se khana khakar me wapis aagay our apne kamre me aakar kamra andar se band kar diya our sara saman dekhne laga




























 
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deri ke liye mujhe khed he ......kal raat ko agla update mil jayega ........age se agar lete update aane wala hoga to me bata diya karunga aap sabko....me ye kahani adhuri nahi chhodne wala .......dekha jaye to mujhe adhure kaam pasand nahi he....meri pichli story ke wakt kuch problem ho gayi thi so wo rokni padi mujhe....wo bhi story fir se shuru ki jayegi taki aap sab us kahani ko bhi padh sake...........aap sabhi ka pyar aaise hi bana rahe yehi meri chah hai ..........
 
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