Adultery Ek Anokhi Zindagi

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Mai aaj apni ek nayi kahani shuru kar raha hun. is kahani ko me thoda hat kar likhe ki koshish karne wala hun. mana ki maine pichli kahani me kuch galtiya ki hongi our kisi karan wo kahani maine adhuri chhod di..
mai wo kahani bhi puri karunga par is kahani ke pura hone ke baad hi us kahani ke tarah mudna pasand karunga

ye kahani action se bharpur, thrill se khachakhach bharne ki puri koshish karunga, yaha sex bhi he our romanch bhi yaha daravne manjar bhi hai our pyar bhare mosam bhi....

mai sabhi dosto se ummid karta hun ki aap sab mere is dusre kahani par dher sara pyar barsayenge our pura saath denge.
OUR EK SABSE JARURI BAAT KAHANI KA HAR EK UPDATE HAR 2 DIN BAAD ME POST KARUNGA....AGAR KISI KARAN DERI HUYI TO AGLA AANE WALA UPDATE KAFI LAMBA HOGA.......WAISE KAHANI KE UPDATES ME DERI HONE KI KOI GUNJAISH NAHI HAI ....FIR BHI ME CLEAR KAR RAHA HUN

Mai aap sab se vinati karunga ki kahani mai likh raha hun to mujhe motive kare na ki usme kamiya nikal kar mujhe demotive na kare.......is kahani ko me thoda realistic tarike se likhne ka prayas karunga isliye kahani aapko pasand aaye yehi meri koshish rehne wali he......

aapko is kahani ko padhne me jyada interest aaye our utne hi maja aaye iski puri koshish karunga


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update 12, 13

 

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Update 13​

subah ka samay ho raha tha Thakur ki haweli me sannata Chaya hua tha dukh ka mohol tha kyun ki unka ladla beta ajay singh Thakur kai dino se lapata tha….na kisi ko koi khabar thi na uske admiyon ki…..un admiyon ke ghar wale bhi unki talash me bhatak chuke the ab to unhe koi ummid bhi najar nahi aarahhi thi……par kahi na kahi Thakur ko shak hone laga tha ki uska beta kisi dushman ke hatho fas to nahi gaya…..

Dono baap bete baith kar videshi sharab pi rahe the, Thakur se sabar nahi hua our usne apne vichar apne bete ke samne rakh diye.

Bhanupratap : “ samar mujhe ajay ke you lapata hone ke piche usi ladke ka haath hone ka shak ho raha hai, tumhe kya lagta hai?” samar ne bhi haan bhari

Samarsingh : “ han pitaji, me bhi yehi kehne wala tha…..aapko yaad hai kaliya ko usne jinda chhoda tha….to kya pata is namakharam ne sach bata diya ho.”

Bhanupratap : “wo aaisa nahi karega par baat jaan par aachuki thi to usne bak diya hoga…..mujhe uspe bharosa to hai samar…..”

Samarsingh : “ pitaji itna bhi bharosa mat kiya karo wo sab paiso ke bhookhe hai…..kya pata wo hame bhi dhokha dene se pehle na soche”

Bhanupratap : “mai manta hun wo lalchi hai par dhokhe baaj nahi hai samar han ye ho sakta hai ki mout ke dar se usne bol diya ho….our us ladke ne iski jaan baksh di ho….”

Samarsingh : “ha aaisa bhi ho sakta hai……par ye nahi samjh pa raha hun ye ladka dekhne se to aaisa nahi lag raha hai……ki wo aaisa kuch kar sakta ho…..” bhanu parat gussa ho gaya apne bet eke aaisi baton par

Bhanupratap : “tu kiski tarafdari kar raha hai wo hamara dushman hai yaad rakhna …usne kiya hai ya nahi me nahi janta . bus itna yaad rakho use khatam karna hai jitna juldi ho sake……” itna sun kar samar singh apni jagah se utha

Samarsingh : “mai aaj hi bahar se logon ko bulata hun….uska kaam khatam kar dete hai…..” ispar uske pita ne use rok diya

Bhanupratap : “ nahi abhi nahi pehle uski akad todni hogi….uske baad use khatam karenge jao our daroga se kaho maine use yaad kiya hai” samarsingh samajh gaya uske baap ke dimag me kya chal raha hai

Wo waha se chala gaya . uske jate hi thakurain aakar boli

Pramila : “aaj tak maine aapse kuch bhi nahi manga hai par aaj me mangti hun , mujhe mera beta chahiye….aap kya karoge kya nahi me nahi janti mujhe chahiye…amrita ki halath dekhi hai aapne ….wo na to kuch thik se kha rahi hai na hi baat kar rahi hai…..our jab baccho ko pata chalega tab kya hoga……soch hai???” ispar Bhanupratap ne shanti se jawab diya

Bhanupratap : “ dhund rahe hai pramila wo mera bhi to beta hai jitna pyar tum usase karti ho me bhi karta hun…..samjhta hun bahu par kya bit rahi hai…..chinta mat karo wo mil jayega juldi…..”

Samarsingh ki biwi purvi our amrita dono bhi upar se unki ssari bate sun rahi thi…….amrita kisi abhinetri ki tarah pure man se aapna abhinay me kisi tarah ki kami nahi aane de rahi thi….

Sabhi ko yehi lag raha tha ki ….amrita sach me ajay singh me jane ke baad toot gayi hai……..par use koi dukh nahi tha uske jane ka….wo santusth thi uski behen ka pehla hattyara maar chukka hai…..use koi gam nahi tha apne pati ko marne ka ……bulki wo agle kadam ke bare me soch rahi thi….

Purvi ne uske chehre ke badalte rango ko dekh chuki thi par wo kuch samajh nahi pa rahi thi……..our wo rasoyi ghar chali gayi ……..

Dusri taraf kaliya ko reh reh kar wahi najara sote jagte huye dikhayi de raha tha …..kaise rakha ki gardan maine haath se ukhad di our uske admiyon ko mar diya ….kaise mai ek truck ke takkar se bhi bach gaya……ye sab soch kar uske dar ke mare pasine nikal rahe the…….

Use yakin nahi ho raha tha koi sadharan sa dikhne wala ladka ye karnama kar sakta tha…isliye wo bahana banakar apne gaav chala gaya tha….kyun ki use apni jaan pyari thi wo janta tha Thakur use mere piche jarur fir se bhej sakta hai our wo jaan gawayega isliye usne ye tarika apnaya…

Samar singh apne kuch admiyon ke sath thane aapahuncha….usne dekha thane me kuch hi hawaldar the…..jo apna kaam kar rahe hai….samar singh ko dekh sab khade huyi our pranam kiya……is bartav ko ijjat kaho ya dar ye aap logon par h……samar sidha andar chala gaya …..usne dekha ek kursi par daroga pair failaye ek akhbar ko apne muh par dhake kharrate laga raha hai …… samar singh ye dekh kar gussa huya usne kursi ko ek laat mari…daroga niche gir gaya…our hadbadate huye gusse me bola

Daroga : “kon hai be harami ki oulad….” Itna kehte hi samne samrsingh ko dekh ke dar ke mare khada hua our praman kiya

Samarsingh : “kuch kaam kar liya kar daroga hai tu is thane ka…..”

Daroga : “ji chote Thakur ……yaha aane ki taklif kyun uthai mujhe bulwa lete…..” samar bola

Samarsingh : “ pitaji ne tumhe us ladke par najar rakhne our use kisi tarah fasa kar andar dalne ko kaha hai…..ab jao ur use andar dalo…..our ye lo uski kimat…” samar singh ne 1LAKH rupiye uske samne fenk di.

Daroga : “ ji chote Thakur aapka kaam ho jayega…. Aap befokar rahiye…..” ispar samarsingh ne kaha……

Samar singh : “ kaam ho jayega nahi juldi hona chahiye samjhe, our mere bhai ka kuch pata chala ? tum log nikamme ho juldi pata .

Samar singh ke jate hi daroga sajjan yadav ne turant apne hawaldaro ko hokum diya ….vikram singh Thakur ke bare me aab tak ki sari jankari nikalne ke liye keh diya…….our sare log usi kaamo me jut gaye…..

Yaha dusri our me avinash chacha ke ghar par hi tha nayan our karan apne apne school-collage ja chuke the…avinash chacha aaj apne karyalay nahi gaye the….chachi apni dukan par jane wali thi…..par hamari chal rahi baato ke karan wo ruki thi kyun ki ye masla unhe bada lag raha tha…..

Kamana : “ par tum dono ko ye karna hi nahi chhaiye tha……wo Thakur chup nahi baithne wala hai ab…..agar use pata chala to ??????” ispar maine kaha

Mai : “kuch bhi nahi hoga chachi…..aap fiikar mat karo…..” chacha ne bhi jawab diya

Avinash : “dekho kamana tumhe pata hai agar me kuch karta hun to maine pehle se bohot ache se soch liya hota hai…..our khud socho wo our uska pariwar tumhare piche pada hai……wo bas mouke ki talash me hai….our me us wakt ka intejar kar nahi sakta ki kab wo hamare pariwar ko nuksan pahunchaye…….me purani galtiya nahi dohrane wala …jo mene atiti me kit hi….” Kamana chachi unki baato ko ache se samjh rahi thi….par mujhe unki bato se ye pacha chal chuka tha ki kuch na kuch aaisa hua hai jis karan inke jiwan me ye badlav aaya hai….

Kamana : “ aapki baat sahi hai par wo chup nahi baithe gaya…..meri bachhiyon ko kuch ho gaya to me apko kabhi maaf nahi karungi…..”

Avinash : “ mere hote huye kuch nahi hoga ye mera wada hai….me mere bacchiyon ko kuch nahi hone dunga…….” maine bhi unhe jawab diya….

Mai : “kisi ko kuch nahi hoga chachi kyun ki Thakur ko kabhi bhi ye nahi pata chalega ki is sab ke piche hamara haath hai....”

Avinash : “sab log dhyan se suno na sukhiya muh kholega na uska pariwar wale kisi ko kuch bolenge……” ye baat bilkul sahi thi….fir bhi chachi ko thoda dar sata raha tha to unhone kaha

Kamana : “fir bhi aap jakar unhe agah kar do…..thakur bhanupratap chup baithne walo me se nahi hai uske bare me yaha koi nahi janta kyun ki usne apna asli chehra kisi ke samne nahi aane diya……woe k rakshas buddhi wala insaan hai?” avinash chacha bhi is bare me sochne lage….

Mai : “dekho chachi jo bhi kuch hua hai usme chacha ne sirf saath diya hai ….use our uske admiyon ko maine hi thikane lagaya hai…isliye aap befikar raho chachi….our yakin mano unka kisi ko kuch pata nahi chalne wala hai……kabhi nahi…” meri baat se unhe thodi rahat mili…..

Avinash : “dekha tum bevajah firkar kar rahi ho…..tumhe jo baat pata nahi hai aaj wo bata raha hun suno…….tumhe yaad hai jis din Thakur ne tumpar hath dalne ki koshish ki thi ????”

Kamana : “ me wo din kaise bhool jau?”

Avinash : “ tumhare gahr jane ke baad maine use agah kiya tha to usne kaha ki wo mujhe tumhe apne bachhiyon ko kabhi jine nahi dega…mouka milte hi khatam kar dega our mujhe ghutne tekne par majbur karega our tab meri majburi ka fayda uthakar tumhare sath wo sab karega jo usne socha tha………to tum khud socho ki me us din ka intejar karu ya khud ke bachav ke liye kadam uthau???” unki baat sun kar kamana chachi unhe dekh rahi thi …mujhe ye baat pata thi…ajay ne mujhse marne se pehle kahi thi……chacha ki bato se chachi ko pasina aane laga our wo tension me agayi….

Kamana : “apne ye mujhse kyu chupaya …..?” ispar chacha ne unko gale lagaya our bole ki

Avinash : “kya batata our uske baad tumhe darte huye roj jite huye dekhna mujhse nahi ho pata…..” maine chachi se kaha

Mai : “aaise log sudharte nahi chachi aaise logon ko saja deni padti hai ……our aapko darna nahi chahiye balke aapko himmat se khade rehna chahiye sabki suraksha ke liye……aap ek nari hai our ek naari sabhi ke upar bhari padti hai agar wo than le to…..”

dono meri bato se muskuraye …..halaki dono andar se aane wale wakt ke chalte ghabra rahe the….wo ye jante the ki aane wala wakt acha ya bura kya hone wlaa hai koi nai janta par unhe muskilon ka samna karna badega…..

mai : “chodo ye sab bekar ki bate ….kahi ghumne chale baccho ke exam ke baad mera bohot man ho raha hai ghumne jane ka….kya kehte ho aap log….” Meri bato par sabke chehre me smile aagayi….

Kamana : “haan beta mera bhi bohot dino se kahi ghumne ka man ho raha tha ……pakka chalenge…me aaj hi sabse baat karungi”

Avinash : “haan pichli bar kab gaye the yaad nahi hai”

Mai : “kaha chalna hai chachi aap hi decide karo ….me chalta hun…sheher jana hai kisi kaam se….parso aaunga….” Meri bat sun kar dono puchtach karne lage

Kamana : “kya kaam hai jo itne din waha rukna hai….tum rahoge kaha khaoge kaha?” ispar chacha ne muskurate huye jawab diya

Avinash : “ are tum bhi kya bol rahi ho iski property waha bhi hai wahi reh lega …..waise vikram ja kyu rahe ho?” maine jawab diya

Mai : “aapne jo kagjat diye the usme waha ki property ka jikar kiya gaya hai ….to me waha ja kar uski bagdor apne hatho me lene ki soch raha hun…..jo bhi hai wo mera hai to uspe hak bhi mera hi hona chhiye “

Kamana : “beta kisi jhagde me mat padna….”

Avinash : “han vikram agar problem huyi to mujhe phone karo me sambhal lunga mere pehchan police me kafi achi hai….”

Mai : “nahi chacha ji me sab sambhal lunga…aap log fikar mat karna…..thik hai chalta hun me….”

Mai waha se jane laaga tha ki chachi me mujhe roka

Kamana : “suno to vikram pichli bar ki tarah mujhe is bar bhi kuch kapdo ka stock mangwana hai tum aate huye le aana thik hai …..ruko me wo list our paise le aati hun”

Wo apne kamre me gayi our thodi der me wapis aayi unke hath me ek chitthi our kuch paiso ki gaddiya thi to mai wo lekar bahar nikal gaya …..

Avinash chacha sukhiya ke ghar chale gaye our chachi apne dukan ki our nikal gayi……mai chacha ke ghar se nikal kar apne ghar aagya…maine dekha mala ghar me nahi thi umesh bahar khel raha hai our nilam our uski ek dost apne kamre me baithi bate kar rahi thi darwaja band tha andar …mai apne kamre me gaya our apne kapde pehne ek bag me kuch saman our paiso ki kuch gaddiya daal li …..jab mai kamre se nikal raha tha tabhi mere kano me ajib si aawaje nikalne lagi ……mere kano me jaise hi wo aawaje padi me samajh gaya wo dono ladkiya kya kar rahi hai….mai muskurate huye waha se nikal aaya bahar

Maine apni gadi me bag rakha our sheher ki our nikal pada…..dusri our thane me sab log meri sari jankari nikalne me lage huye the…..our daroga aram se kursi par soya pada tha…

Me 2.30 ghante me sheher aachuka tha….mai sheher me aate hi usi hotel me pahuncha jaha me pichli baar bhi aaya tha…

Mai hotel ke andar gaya our ek table par ja kar baith gaya….us waiter ne jaise hi mujhe dekha turant ek coffee liye mere pass aagaya

Waiter : “ye lijiye sir aapki special coffee….our kuch chahiye sir?” maine muskurate huye jawab diya..

Mai : “ ha mere dost mujhe phone chahiye…” usne adar ke sath jawab diya

Waiter : “jo hokum aapka sir abhi le aaya tab tak aap apni coffie ka maja uthaye….” Wo itna kehkar waha se lout gaya …..mai muskurate huye coffee pine laga

Kuch der baad woe k phone ke sath wapis aaya our uske hath me ek baksa bhi tha…..wo use mere samne rakh kar wapis mud kar chala gaya..maine dekha us bakse me ek chitthi rakhi huyi thi our uske sath ek gun thi uske sath nile color ki goliya bhi

Maine wo phone utaya our maine kaha……

Mai : “vardha me chahta hun yaha aajao mujhe jarurat hai tumhari yaha…..kya…” meri bat puri hone se pehle hi vardha ne jawab diya….

Vardha : “mere malik aapka hokum sir aankho par mai kal sham tak sheher pahunch jaunga…….aapke liye to jan bhi hajir hai”

Mai : “pehle bat to sun lo ..meri bat ajib lagegi tumhe par me chahta hun tum apna sara kaam ghar bar bech kar yaha hi aajao” ye sun kar vardha kuch der chup raha our fir bola

Vardha : “malik mai kal sham tak aajaunga …..aap fikar mat kijiye rahi bat property ki to use mere bhai behen sambhal lenge mera kya hai me akela hun …ajaunga…”

Mai : “thik hai vardha me sheher me hun 2 dino tak, yahi aajana me intejar karunga…”

Vardha : “ji me aajunga par mere sath 2 log our rahenge malik u samjh lo mere bharose mand hai wo dono…..”

Mai : “thik hai vardha me intejar karunga….” Our maine phone waiter ko pakda diya our apne sheher wale makano ki taraf chala gaya…

Karib adhe ghante ki trafik our puchtach ke baad mai waha aa pahuncha jaha ek makan tha …..dusra isi gali ke dusre kone me tha

Maine dekha ghar kafi morden hai par ….salo se koi rehta nahi h isliye kafi gandagi chayi huyi hai aaspass…mai us colony ke director se milne ke liye chala gaya use maine sari baat batayi ….to usne mujhe ijjate dete huye kaha ki wo saaf saafai ke liye kisi ko bulwa lega our saaf karayega……….maine dono gharo ko saaf karwane ke liye keh diya our unhe kuch paise de diye….our waha se mall ki our chala gaya…..

Mai mall ke pass pahuncha to dekha mall kafi bada tha is shahar ka sabse bada our sabse alishan mall tha …..maine apni gadi park kar di our mall ke andar chala gaya…….pure ek ghante tak maine mall ki ek-ek dukan dekhi our mai waha se us mall ke exicative ke office pahuncha…….maine dekha waha ek ladki baithi huyi hai our dekhne se wo hi exicative lag rahi thi….uski secretry se puch kar mai andar gaya our mujhe andar aata dekh kar wo puchne lagi

Ladki : “ ji boliye kya kaam hai aapko mujhse? “ mai niche baith gaya our usase kaha

Mai : “ji mera naam hai vikram singh Thakur our me yaha is mall ke owner se milne aaya hun….” Wo ladki itrati huye boli

Ladki : “aap is wakt yaha ke owner se hi baat kar rahe ho mr…..” maine bhi choukne ka natak kiya

Mai : “ooo acha mujhe laga tha koi adhed umar ka admi ya ourat hogi…”

Ladki : “kya kaam hai bataiye warna aap ja sakte hai…” ab me akad ke baith gaya

Mai : “dekho miss job hi aapka naam hai, mujhe is mall ke asli owner se milna hai, unhe bulao” ispar wo thodi gusse se boli

Ladki : “maine kaha na me hi owner hun yaha ki …” maine apni jeb se apna phone nikalte huye kaha

Mai : “thik hai fir police ke aane ke bad sach batana ki owner kon hai” police ka naam sunte hi uski thodi hawa tight ho gayi

Ladki : “police ko kyu bula rahe ho ruko ye dekho me tumhe mall ke property paper dikhati hun, police ko mat bulao is mall me kabhi police nahi aayi hai aaj tak”

Mai : “thik hai dikhao …..” usne papar ki copy dikhai jise dekh kar me khud bhi ek pal ke liye chowk gaya kyun ki iske papar asli lag rahe the…. Maine chacha ko phone lagaya …..our unhone phone utha liya

mai : “chacha mujhe ek jankari chahiye sheher ka jo mall hai use bechne ya kharine ka koi record hai to pata kijiye”

avinash : “nahi vikram aaisa koi record nahi hai agar hota to maine jab ye property papers nikalwaye to is property ka koi jikar bhi nai hota….tumhare dada ne is property ko kisi ke naam nahi kiya hai ….jo bhi kagjat maine tumhe sope the wo sare tumhare naam par hi vasiyat ke mutabik unke marne ke pachhat kiye gaye the….”

Mai : “thik hai chacha me samjh gaya” maine phone kaat diya our us ladki ki taraf dekhte huye bola

Mai : “ to miss aapke ye kagaj jhuthe hai, to ab aap sach bataogi ya mujhe police ka sahara lena padega” meri bat sun ke wo gussa ho gayi our chillate huye boli

Ladki : “hey mister tumne dekha nahi ye property papers h me iski malkin hun tum kya mai khud police ko yaha bula rahi hun” maine kuch react nahi kiya our usne police ko call karne ke bajaye kisi our ko call kar diya. Uski bato ko maine gour se suna to me samjh gaya ki usne kisi our ko hi call kiya hai..

Mai : “are waah mere kehne se pehle hi tumne asli malik ko phone laga diya, chalo acha hai maltab mujhe tumhe marna nahi padega ……khair me to dukhi ho raha tha itni khubsurat ladki ki jaan me kaise lu……” mene ye janbujh kar kaha tha our meri iis baat ka gehra asar us ladki par hua uske pasine nikalne lage wo dar ke mare kampne lagi thi….par wo Jahir nahi hone de rahi thi par uske chehre pe nikal rahe pasino ne apna jawab pehle hi de dia tha…..karib 20 minute baad ek mota sa admi our 6 log andar ghuse ……wo aate hi chillate huye bola

Admi : “ kon hai wo harami ki aulad jo apna haak jatane yaha aaya hai?” us ladki ne meri our ishara kiya

Mai : “ acha to tum malik ho yaha ke ?” us admi ne akadte huye gusse me kaha

Admi : “ haan me hi malik hun yaha ka…..tujhe kya dikkat hai bata?”

Mai : “chalo mere sawalo ka jawab do fir”

Admi : “mai tumhare sawalo ka jawab kyu du kon ho tum ha…..”

Mai : “are bas sawalo ka naam sunkar hi dar gaye waah bhai?”

Admi : “me kisi se nahi darta pucho jo puchna hai” maine muskurate huye bola

Mai : “chalo ye batao ki tum yaha ke asli malik ho to is ladki ka naam isme kyun hai “ maine property paper ki our ishara karte huye kaha

Admi : “meri property meri marji me kisi ke bhi naam rakhu tumhe usase kya ????”

Mai : “chalo koi baat nahi ab ye batao ye property kisase kharidi hai unka naam batao?” us admi ne jhooth bolte huye kaha

Admi : “ maine ye property 9 saal pehle kantilal panjwani se kharidi thi .”

Mai : “our ab wo kaha milenge ?” ispar wo haste huye bola

Admi : “uske liye tumhe upar jana hoga “ uski bat sunte hi sab hasne lage mujhe bhi hasi aayi me bhi hasne laga

Mai : “matlab ye Jahir hai ki tumne is property par kabja kiya hai……..” meri bat sun kar wo boukhla gaya

Admi : “ kon ho tum our tum ye kaise jante ho? “ maine usase kaha

Mai : “CID “

Admi : “ CCCCIIDD” mere itna kehte hi uske chehre ka rang utar gaya ….to maine kaha

Mai : “ are itne CCCCIIDD nahi be CID hota hai , maine CID OUR yaha ke collector ko phone kar diya hai wo aate hi honge.”

Admi : “usase pehle teri laash bhi nahi milegi unhe…..salo dekh kya rahe ho thikane laga do ise” uski baat sunte hi us admi ke piche khade sut but wale log aage badhe

Sabne apne piche se har ek ne apni talwar bahar nikali our mujhe marne ke liye aage badhe…..talware dekh mai muskurate huye aage badha our unke waar karne se pehle hi ek admi ko laat mari our uski talwar uske hath se chhut gayi our maine badi furti se us talwar ko pakad liya …….ek pal ke liye ye dekh sab ruk gaye

Admi : “nikammo mar dalo use” sare admi eksaath aage badhe our mujhpar waar karne lage wo ladki table ke niche ghus gayi

Maine un logon ke kiye har waar ko nakam kar diya our sabke sharir par talwaar se nichan banaye our sabke hatho se talware gira di our apni talwar wahi farsh me ghusa di our us admi ki our badha…..jaise hi mai uski our badha tabhi us admi ne furti se apne jeb se apni gan nikali our mujhpar chala di …….mere sambhalne se pehle hi wo goli mere pet me ghus chuki thi our dusri goli mere kandhe me lag chuki thi……our me wahi piche kursi mar gira ……ye dekh admi khush ho gaya

Admi : “hahaha hahaha dekha …..bada hero ban raha tha mere admiyon ko hara kar ab tu aaram kar le ok bete…..” itna keh kar usne mere sir par gan taan di our goli chalane wala tha ki maine apni ankhe kholi our uski gun pakad li our agle hi par meri aankhe kaali ho gayi our maine uske gun ke do tuke kar diye our wo dar ke mare piche hat gaya ……mai apni jagah se utha our usase bola….

Mai : “ye mere pariwar ki amanat hai our tune dhokhe se ise apne kabje me kar liya hai ……..sidhi tarah maan ja warna me is gun ki tarah tere bhi do tukde kar dunga” ye kehne ke bad meri aankho ko maine apne asli roop me le aaya….wo is najare ko dekh ghutno ke bal baith gaya our maafi mangne laga…..

Wo sare admi vi ye dekh dar gaye the……koi kuch nahi bol raha tha

Admi : “ye ye ye meri jaydat nahi he ye mere janane wale ki property thi uska naam kya tha kya tha ??? haan yaad aaya unka naam vikram singh thakur tha our unke bete rajveer singh Thakur is mall ke racheta the unhone apni dekhrekh me ise banvaya tha , uske marne ke baad maine ispar kabja kar liya tha our jhoothe kagjat banwaye the……” maine us ladki ko aawaj di

Mai : “suno ladki bahar aajao darne ki jarurat nahi ………chalo to mr apna naam batao our agar tumne ispar kabja kiya tha to is ladki ke naam ye property kyu ki huyi hai????

Admi : “mera naam champaklal Mehta hai, is ladki ka maine istemal isliye kiya tha taki bhavisya me koi jaydat ka malik aajaye to ya to me use hata du raste se ya fir jaydat par kabja karne ke mamle me ye ladki fasegi mera naam kahi nahi aayega isliye ye sab kiya maine….” Ye bat sun kar us ladki ke pairo tale jamin khisak gayi ….jise wo apne pita saman samjti thi woe k number ka farebi dhokhebaj nikla

Mai :” suno our jakar is room ka CCTV footage nikal kar le aao…..abhi “ us ladki ne kisi ko phone kiya

Admi : “mujhe chhod ho police ke hawale mat karo meri ijjat chali jayegi….” Maine usase pucha

Mai : “to bata aaj tak is mall se kitne paise kamaye hai tune?” usne apni gardan niche kar ke jawab diya

Admi : “lagbhag 100crore rupee kamaye hai” maine uski padi huyi gun uthayi our usme goliya cheak ki our fir uske sir par tan di

Mai : “ab batao kitne paise kamaye tune?” usne dar ke mare apni aankhe band kar di our tutlane laga

Admi : “ nahi nahi ruko ruko 9 saal me lagbhag maine 350crore kamaye hai yehi sach hai mujhe kuch mat karo ”

Mai : “ to ab dhyan se sun le abhi ke abhi apne accountant ko phone kar our usme se 250 crore mangwa le……ye mere dada ji our mere baap ki mehnat ka hissa hai samjha….” Meri baat sun kar usne mujhe dekha

Admi : “ kon ho tum ?”

Mai: “ me hun vikram singh Thakur ka eklouta pota our Raajveer singh Thakur ka eklouta beta …….J. vikram singh Thakur, is mall ka asli waris……” meri baat sun kar wo ladki meri our ascharya se dekhne lagi ……maine uski our dhyan nahi diya tha par us ladki ki aankho me aasu the….uski aankhe kafi kuch sawal liye baithi huyi thi .wo meri baat sun kar dar gaya jaise usne koi bhooth dekh liya ho our usne turant landline phone utha liya our apne accountant ko phone kar ke paise mangwaye …usne mujhse aankhe nahi milayi …..tab tak CCTV lekar ek ladka aaya our bahar secretry ko dekar chala gaya….jab secretry andar aayi our andar ka najara dekh kar kar wo dar gayi our wo footage us ladki ke hatho me de kar wapis chali gayi…..

Mai us admi se puchtach karta raha ….usase sari jankari nikali our maine ladki ki our apna rukh liya to dekh uski aankho me aasu jhalak rahe the maine usase pucha ….

Mai : “to miss prerna aaise kisi ki property ke jhoothi malkin kone ke bawajud itni akad achi nahi hoti……” ispar wo kuch nahi boli apni gardan niche kar ke wo bas aankho se aansu baha rahi thi

Mai : “chup ho jao ab tum….mere samne mat rona tum bhi kasoorwar ho……aaisi kya majburi thi jo tumne is jaise insaan ka sath diya?”

Ispr usne jawab diya

Prerna : “ghar ki halat our garibi ke chalte me majbur thi…..meri maa bimar rehti hai our pita ji our mai jaise taise kaam karke apna ghar chelate hai par bua ke liye aspatal ka kharcha hum utha nahi pate the isliye maine inka sath diya taki ye bua ke ilaj ke liye paise dede” itna kehkar wo chup ho gayi

Mai : “ acha to ye bat hai vajah sahi hai par tarika galat hai miss prerna, aaise karne se acha tha tum sadko par sabjiya hi bech leti”

Prerna : “ ji us wakt mujhe sahi galat ka dhyan nahi tha bas bua ko bachna hi mera lakshya tha”

Mai :” thik hai koi bat nahi tum aajad ho ab se chaho to tum ja sakti ho” mere baat ka koi jawab nahi diya usne our bahar chali gayi..

Fir uske kuch hi der me us admi champaklal ka accountant our kuch hathiyar band admi andar aaye our sath me 4 bags unke hatho me the.. accountant ne apne boss ko niche jamin par baithe dekha uske naak se khoon beh raha tha…..to usne pucha

Accountant : “ boss ye kya hua koun h ye our ye paise kisliye mangwaye” usne meri taraf dekh kar pucha

Mai : “ me tera baap hun, is jagah ka asli waris our in paiso ka asli hakdar samjhe…..”

Admi : “ye raajveer singh ka beta vikram singh hai. Ise paise de do our chalo yaha se.” apne boss ki baat sun kar unhone sare bag mere samne rakh diye our waha se jane lage…..tab maine us champaklal se kaha

Mai : “suno champaklal ji mere is ravaiye ke liye me mafi chahunga, aapki kartut mujhe pasand nahi aayi……par aapne mere pariwar ki amanat sambhal kar use behtar banana ke liye aapka shukriya ada karta hun our isliye maine aapko 100crore diya hai kyun ki aapki wo mehnat pasine ki kamayi hai, mana ki tarika galat tha par aapne ise sambhala yehi sabse achi baat hai”

Champaklal : “ maaf kar do beta mai us maine ise sambhalne ke liye hi apne naam karwane ka socha tha par badme lalach ke karan ye sab kiya ..itna kuch hone ke bawajud tumne mujhe police ke hawale nahi kiya our tumne jab 66% profit rakam mangi tabhi me samjh gaya tha ki tum ache ho apne dada ki tarah apne pita ki tarah dayawan ho…mujhe maaf kar do “

Mai : “me ek shart par aapko maaf kar sakta hun, agar mere sare business me aap mera sath dena hoga. Bolo manjur hai apko?” meri baat sun kar wo khush ho gaya….mujhe use shishe me utarna pada kyun ki usne wo dekh liye tha jo dekhna nahi chahiye tha isliye mujhe use apna sathi banana ke alawa koi rasta nahi tha ya fir use our uske admiyon ko marna padta

Champaklal : “han jarur beta me tumhe help karunga badle me tumhe bhi meri help karni hogi….”

Mai : “abhi jo ladki yaha thi usi ko yaha ki manager banana hai use wapis bulao our abhi sare staff ko yaha bulwao……our aap khud mera intro karwao…” meri baat sun kar usne haami bhari our andar washroom me jakar khud ka huliya thik kiya our bahar baithi secretry se kehkar sabko suchna pahuncha di gayi…prerna secrerty ke pass hi khadi thi to accountant ne use andar jane ko kaha to wo andar aayi

Mai : “prerna aao baitho” wo dar rahi thi

Prerna : “aapne mujhe kyu bulaya hai sir?”

Champaklal : “ vikram singh Thakur tumhe yaha ka manager banana chahte hai isliye mana mat karo”

Mai : “dekho ye mat samjhna ki maine tumhare garibi our mushkil halato ko dekh kar ye offer diya hai ….maine tumhe is liye chuna hai kyun ki tumhari management our sabke sath nature bohot acha hai”

Prerna : “me puri imandari se apna kaam karungi sir, meri galtiyon ke bawajud aapne mujhe is layak samjha yehi mere liye bohot hai sir…” prerna ke man me kuch our hi chal raha tha …..wo kuch alag hi soch rahi thi …..

Mai : “tumhe tumhare mummy our papa se milna hai aaj bulke abhi, le chalogi?” wo bina soche samjhe hi jhat se bol padi

Prerna : “ji sir le chalungi” tabhi secretry andar aagayi our boli

Secretry :” ji sir sab aagaye hai meeting shuru kar sakte hai”

Champaklal : “ tum chalo hum abhi aaye” champaklal ne mujhe ishara kiya me our prerna sab bahar aagye jaha meeting hone wali thi….

Mujhe dekh sare staaf chouk gaya abhi kuch gante pehle hi mai sabke shop me ghum chukka tha …champaklal sabko kehne laga

Champaklal : “ mere dosto mere sathiyon ….aaj tak aapne apni mehnat our apni kabiliyat se is mall ko behtar unchayiyon par pahuncha diya hai, par aaj me apke same ek sach batana chahta hun, ummid hai aap meri baat ka samman karoge….our sab kuch waisa hi rahega jaisa aaj tak chal raha hai”

Champaklal : “ mai champaklal Mehta is mall ka asli malik nahi hun…..is mall ka asli malik hai J.vikram singh Thakur jo Raajveer singh Thakur ke ekloute bete hai …ye unki virasat hai. Our aaj mai unhe unka haaak louta raha hun…..aaj se me aapka malik nahi hun vikram singh Thakur aapke malik honge, our prerna yadav aapki manager rahengi aaj se …..” maine kaha

Mai : “mere sabhi sathiyon se me ye kehna chahunga …ye mall ek pariwar hai our hum is pariwar ke sadasya hai ekdusre ko sath le chalenge sath khade rahenge sukho me dukho me….hamesha sabke khushiyon me haath batayenge……our jaise chapaklal ji ne kaha aaj se prerna sirf manager nahi managing director hongi is mall ki sari dekh rekh unke Kaman me hogi…….our agle mahine se aap sabki pagar dugni kar di jayegi ….taki aap apne pariwar ki jarurato ko pura kar sake…..par uske badme mujhe aap sabka vishaws our sath chahiye our samse jaruri aap sabka pyar chahiye….” Meri ye bat sun kar sab taliya bajane lage …….champaklal muskurane laga ,meri bate sun kar ….par prerna samjh nahi pa rahi thi maine use MD kyu banaya ….bat to manager ki huyi thi

Uske bad champaklal ke admiyon ne paiso se bhare bags meri gadi me rakh diye our mai prerna ko lekar uske ghar ki our chal pada….wo mujhe aaise dekh rahi thi jaise kuch padh rahi ho….maine uski our bina dekhe usase pucha

Mai : “kya dekh rahi ho aaise ?” usne najre fer li our boli

Prerna : “kuch nahi dekh rahi hun” maine usase kaha

Mai : “ mujhse jhooth nahi bol sakti tum, batao ab”

Prerna : “kuch nahi ???” maine uski ankho me dekh kar jawab diya

Mai : “ kyun kya ho gaya mere chehre par kuch laga hai ???”

Prerna : “nahi kuch nahi”

Mai : “to batao, ghar me our kon-kon hai tumhare?”

Prerna : “ mai mummy our papa bas hum teen hi log rehte hai” maine jan bujh kar poocha

Mai : “ bas itne hi ? baki sadasya nahi hai ghar me jaise chacha chachi mama mami?” ispar wo thodi udas ho gayi or boli

Prerna : “wo sab amir hai our mere mummy papa garib hai isliye wo log hamse koi wasta nahi rakhte maine to unhe bachpan me dekhi hun uske bad aaj tak nahi dekh nahi payi unhe kabhi” aaise hi hamari bate hoti rahi our bato hi bato me hum uske ghar pahunch gaye….

Maine dekha ek choti si choul thi jisme sabhi log bhed bakriyon ki tarah kiraye par rehte the…..kar gate ke pass khadi kar di ….jaise hi prerna ko mehengi gaadi se utarta dekh logon ki najre prerna par padi……..mai bhi gadi se utra our uske piche jane laga…..choul ke log ourte prerna ko ajib najar se dekh rahe the…ek ladki ke anjaan mehengi gadi wale ke sath dekhne ka matlab hamesha galat hi soch liye karte hai log yaha bhi aaise hi hua…..

Log aaise dekh rahe the jaise ki usne gunah kar diya ho….hum dono sidhiya chadhte huye upari manjil par aagaye ……our ek ghar me ghus gaye….aas pas ki ourte khidki our darwaje ke pass kan lagakar andar ki batchit sunne ki koshish kar rahe the…….andar aate hi prerna ne apni maa ko pukara

Prerna : “maa-maa kaha hai aap dekho to mere sath kon aaya hai …….” Uski maa bahar aayi unka naam tha urmila our usase puchne lagi

Urmila : “kya hua beta kon aaya hai?” uski maan ne uske mathe ko chumte huye pucha

Prerna : “mai jaha kaam karti hun na ye waha ke asli malik hai maa aaj hi aaye hai our inhone mujhe waha ki MD bana diya hai, to aaj se aapko ilaj ki koi chinta karne ki koi jarurat nahi he meri pagar 6 guna badh gayi hai” par uski maa ka prerna ki bato par dhyan hi nahi tha

Wo mujhe dekh rahi thi, dheere dheere meri taraf badh rahi thi…..unki aankhe nam ho gayi thi……jab prerna ne dekha maan hosh me nahi hai to usne aawaj di par uski maa ne nahi suni….

Uski maa ko meri our aata dekh our unki aankho me unke man ki boli dekh me muskurate huye haan me sir hilaya……wo mere karib aai our apne dono hatho se mere chehre ko apne hatho me pakad kar boli

Urmila : “tu…tu….vikram hai na? …tu..tu mera vikram hai na?bol na tum era vikram hi hai” maine niche jhukh kar unke mathe ko chum liya …..ye dekh our sun kar prerna ki kuch samajh me nahi aaya

Mai : “han bua me hi hun vikram aapka beta aapki jaan “ our ye sunte hi bua ne mujhe apne gale se lagaya our rone lagi jor jor se ……..

Urmila : “kaha tha mere bacche kaha chala gaya tha tu…?.mujhe chhod kar hum sabko akela chod kar kyu chala gaya tha ?” our rone lagi maine unhe apni baho me kas liya our mere bhi aankho se ansu behne lage

Mai : “aab me aagaya hun na bua maa mai ab kahi nahi jaunga…” bua mujhse alag huyi our boli

Urmila : “pakka na apni maa ko chodkar nahi jayega na , agar tu gaya to dekh lena me mar jaungi” maine unke muh par apna hath rakh diya

Mai : “ mare apke dushman bua maa , ab me aapko chod kar kahi nahi jaunga, bulki aaj aap mere sath chalogi…..” our maine fir se unhe gale laga liya

Urmila : “hame akela chod kar mat jana mere bacche tumhare bina hum ji nahi sakte hai…..”

Mai : “ nahi ma me kahi nahi jaunga ……” hamara ye sara rona dhona dekh prerna ki aankho me bhi aansu the par wo samjh nahi pa rahi thi ki aakhir uski maa mere gale lag kar ro kyu rahi hai wagera wagera, bua mujhse alag huyi our prerna ko dekh kar boli

Urmila : “ idhar aa meri bacchi, ye kkon hai pata hai tumhe?”

Prerna : “ kon hai maa? Our aap unhe kaise janti hai?”

Urmila : “ bewakuf ladki ye tumhara bada bhai hai tumhara saga bhai….”ye sun kar prerna ne meri our dekha our agle hi pal mere gale se lag gayi hum teeno ro rahe the to hamari ho rahi aawajo ke chalte padosi bhi jama ho gaye the…sab puchtach karne lage to urmila bua ne khushi khushi sabko bata diya ki me unka khoya hua beta hun ….itne me fufa ji bhi aagaye…..unhe bhi sab kuch bata diya fufa bhi mere gale lag kar bohot roye ….fir maine unhe apne sath lekar aagaya apen naye wale ghar me jo sheher me hi tha…

Ghar ko ache se saaf kar diya tha. Hum sab andar aagaye ….ghar me kuch bhi nahi tha pura ka pura khali pada hua tha ……maine kaha

Mai : “ye ghar aapke liye papa ne banwaya tha bua maa…taki wo aapke shadi ki salgirah par aap dono ko tohfa de sake….our aaj ye kaam mai unki our se pura kar raha hun bua maa aaj se ye ghar aapka hai bua maa…” meri bat sun kar bua ne jhoothe gusse se kaha

Urmila : “ kya kaha mera ghar fir se bol?” mai apni galti samajh gaya

Mai : “ hamara ghar bola tha maine aapko shayad galat sunayi diya hai na fufa ji “ fufa bhi hasne lage prerna to jaise mujhse aaise chipak gayi thi jaise diwar par chipkali chipakti hai

Fufa : “ prerna bechare ko ab baksh bhi de kitni der se usase chipki huyi hai wo kahi nahi jane wala hai hame chod kar ab” our hasne lage

Mai : “haan mera wada hai kabhi akela anhi chhodunga aap sabko……”

Prerna : “ab me kabhi jane bhi nahi dungi apko, par mera ek sawal hai puchu maa?”

Urmila : “haan beta “

Prerna : “ agar ye mera saga bhai hai to ye aapko bua maa kyu bol raha hai maa kyu nahi?” uska ye sawal dono ko sach batane ke liye majbur kar chukka tha

Fufa : “prerna sach ye hai ki tumhare pita RAAJVEER SINGH THAKUR hai…our vikram tumhara saga bhai ……our me tumhara fufa hun our urmila tumhari bua hai………..par hum dono tumhe pani beti hi mante hai tum hamari beti ho” ye sun kar prerna fufa ke gale lag gayi urmila bhi prerna ko pyar se shehlane lagi…….

TO BE CONTINUE

 

[randibaaz chora]

Bhai mast update but bhut lamba time ho gya plz thoda speed badhao naa....

 

[Premkumar65]

Update 1


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Subah ke 6 baj rahe the…..suraj ki halki roshni me kudrat ki sundarta me char chand laga rahe wo ped………pani se nikalti wo thandak….panchiyonki wo kilbilahat …….unki madhur aawaj ye sab mehsus kar mujhe bohot sukun mil raha tha…...wo ladka apne sath ek bag liye ek gaav ki taraf badhne laga…..raste me use job hi dikhta wo bas use dekh muskurakar suprabhat bol dete the……{aage ki kahani apni jubani.}

Mai us kudrat ki sundarta ko niharta hua kheton ke raste se gujar raha tha…..kheton me kaam kar rahe log mujhe dekhte our muskurakar fir apne kaam me vyast ho jate the….me aage badta hua gaav ke pass se gujarti hui nadi ke pass pahuncha…..aaj ken aye jamane me v wahi purana pul……ek pattar se bana hua our dusra lakdi se banaya hua……nadi ki choudai jyada badi nahi thi…..us nadi me nahate bacche puri tarah maje le rahe the….pul ki dusri our janwaron ko nehlaya ja raha tha……..kuch der rukne ke baad me aage badh gaya our gaav me pravesh kar gaya…..

Gaav jyada bada nahi tha yahi koi 350-400 ghar honge yani ke yehi koi 2000 ke aass pass yaha log rehte honge ………sare log apne apne kaam me vyst the…..gaav ke coubare par kuch log baithe baate kar rahe the unme kuch budhe v the our kuch javan bhi…….mai unke pass gaya …..to wo sab meri taraf dekhne lag eek bujurg ne pucha…

Bujurg admi 1 : “koun ho beta tum?”

Bujurg admi 2 : “tum yaha ke to nahi lagte?”

Mai : “ji baba me yaha aaj pehli baar aaya hun…..kya aap log jante hai kamalsingh Thakur ka ghar kaha hai..?”

Meri baat sun kar sab meri taaraf ascharya se dekhne lage…..mai unke bare me puch raha tha jinhe gujare 80 saal ho chuke the…..

Bujurg admi 1 : “konse kamalsingh Thakur ki baat kar rahe ho……?”

Mai : “wahi kamalsingh Thakur jo ek jamare me yaha ke Thakur hua karte the……kya aap unhe ya unke pariwar ko jante hai?”

Bujurg admi 2 : “are unhe kon nahi janta, gaav ke panchayat ke pass unka putla hai gaav ke sabhi log unhe jante bhi haii our mante bhi hai….our ye unke dost hua karte the”.

Bujurg admi 1 : “haan me our wo hum dono pakke dost the jaise langotoya yaar ho…us jamane me hamne angrez logon ke naak me dam kar diya tha…..4 baar pakde gaye our char baar hum waha se nikal aaye the…par tum kyu puch rahe ho….”

Mai : “me yaha unke pariwar walo se milne aaya hun …..mai unke bete rajveersingh ka beta hun…..”

Meri ye baat sun ke sab mujhe dekhne lage…wo budha admi mere pass aaya our mere chehre ko pakad ke dekhne laga….ankhe kaan chehre ki banavat……dekhne ke baad usne pakka kiya….

Bujurg admi 1 : “tum sach keh rahe ho tum rajveer ke bête ho? Rajveer ke jane ke baad yaha sab kuch badal gaya hai beta ……par tum kumarsingh Thakur jaise dikhte ho…..”

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Bujurg admi 2 : “beta ab unke pariwar ka koi bhi nahi raha.”

Mai : “kya matlab?”

Bujurg admi 1 :” beta 10 saal pehle ghar me aag lagne se pura pariwar us aag me jal kar mar gaya ….”

Usme ek admi ne jawab diya

Admi : “fir 2 saal pehle us ghar ki marammat kar k eek pariwar ko rehne ke liye gav walo ne diya hai…..”

Mai : “mujhe wo ghar pata bata do me chala jaunga….”

Admi : “chalo me tumhe le chalta hun……”

Fir hum waha se aage badhe. Wo admi mujhse bola…

Admi : “mai avinash yaha ke panchayat ka mukhiya .”

Mai : “mai hun vikram.”

Avinash : “us pariwar ko maine hi wo ghar banva kar diya hai…..par ab agar tum waha rahoge to unka kya hoga? Khair unke liye kuch our intejam kar dunga me”

Mai : “mere pass pariwar ki akhri astitva ke tour par yahi ek nishani bachi hai chacha…….kya me aapko chacha keh sakta hun ?agar aap bura na ,mane to?” Wo khush hota hua bola

Avinash : “are kyu nahi kyu nahi mujhe khushi hui……waise beta wo ghar tumhara hai me unka intejam kahi our kar dunga…..waise ab tak tum kaha the our tumhe koi khabar kyu nahi hai pariwar walon ki?”

Mai : “darasal mujhe haal hi me pata chala ki gaav me mere rishtedar raha karte he to me chala aaya……par yaha to sab kuch bikhra hua hai….shayad mere nasib me parivar ka pyar hi nahi hai…….”

Avinash bhauk ho jata hai…..

Avinash : “dekho beta jo ho gaya so ho gaya..dil chota mat karo….duniya me jo aate hai unhe jana hi padta hai me tum sabko…….jab tak raho unke liye khush raha karo…..akhir tumko bhi uni ke pass jana hai…..to unke liye behtar zindagi jiyo.”

Mai : “haan yehi soch kar to abhi tak jeeta aaya hun”

hum waha pahunch gaye. Maine dekha waha ek orat apne bachhe ko nehla rahi thi our wo bachha maje se pani ke sath khelta hua naha raha tha …….our ek ladki kapde sukha rahi thi ….ek admi apni bailgadi ka kuch kaam kar raha tha…..jaise hi hum waha pahunche….wo admi our wo orat apna kaam bich me chhod kar hamare pass aaye our uhone avinash ko pranam kiya….

{Intro :

Ballu : ek kisan jo apne pariwar ka pet bharne ke liye mehnat karta hai har khushiya dena chahta hai apne bacchon ko……umar 38 saal. Dekhne me savla …..sukda sa sharir ……masum sa admit ha…..swabhav se kafi achha sabka adar karta tha…



Mala : bullu ki biwi …..khubsurat orat thi…..wo 35 saal ki hone ke bawajud wo 30 saal ki lagti thi. Apne pati ke sath mehnat karti thi….lambe kale ghane baal uski undarta me char chand lagate the…..uski bindi …our uske gaal par bana kala til usme char chand laga rahe the…..



Nilam : dono ki beti…17ki hone ke bavajud ..gaav ke mahavidhyalay me padhti hai…..badi to ho gayi par abhi bhi bachpana bhara hua hai….shararati hai aaye din har kisi se jhagda karke aati hai…..iske maa our baap dono iski harkato se pareshan the…..jaise ki bagiche se fal churana, dusronki cycile punchar karna, baniye ki dukan se mithayee churana…..our bhi bohot kuch shararato me shamil hai…….jawan to thi par abhi jawani chadhi nahi thi duniya se bekhabar wo apne aapme mast thi…..sundar lambe baal iske bhi gaal par same jagah tilt ha jo iski maa ke gaal par tha…..hamesha ghagra choli pehenti……

Umesh : wo nilam se 5 saal chota hai…wo bhi usi school me padhta hai…natkhat hai hamesha khelta retha hai……}

Hamare pass aakar badi vinamrata se kaha.

ballu : “:pranam mukhiya ji.”

Mala : “pranam mukhiya ji.”

Avinash : “ji……kaise hai aap dono…..subah subah hi taiyyari me lage ho….? Kahi ja rahe ho kya?”

Ballu : haan mukhiya ji dhan lene ja rahe raha hun sham tak aajaunga wapis…

Avinash : achi baat hai is saal bhi fasal aachi aayi hai ….are ha inse milo ye hai vikram….ye is ghar ke malik hai our ye yaha rehne aaye hai…..

Avinash ki baat sun kar dono pati patni ekdusre ko dekhne lage our kuch palo me dono ke chehre par chinta ke bhav ane lage……

Ballu : pranam vikram babu……

Mai : ji pranam kaka….

Avinash : “dekho ballu mai janta hun dono ke man me kya chal raha hai…….ye ghar inke purkho ka hai our you samajh lo inke pariwar ki akhri nishani hai ..our insaniyat ken ate hume inka hakk inhe de dena chhaiye….”

Ballu apni patni ko thoda side me le gaya our kuch baat karke agaye our bole…..

Mala : “ji hum rukawat nahi banenge hume 2-3 din de dijiye taki hum rehne ka thikana dhund sake……”

In sabki baate ho rahi thi mera dhyan ghar ki our tha……ghar kaafi bada lag raha tha……manjila hone ke sath sath wo purane jamane me jaise hote the waise hi mitti ka bana hua tha…..

Avinash : “beta tumhe tumhara ghar mil jayega…unhe thoda wakt de do……”

Mai bich me bol pada…..

Mai : “thik hai koi juldi nahi he jab tak aapko rehne ke liye achhi jagah nahi milti aap yaha rahiye…..mere liye ek kamra kafi he…..filhal”

Avinash : “ballu aaplog inke liye ek karma tayyar kijiye hum ghum kar aate hai .”

Mala : “ji mukhiya ji…..aap chinta na kare…..”

Hum waha se aage badh gaye……..

Mai : “aapka shukriya kaise karu nahi janta par jarurat ke wakt apke sath khada rahunga.”

Avinash : “are beta koi bat nahi ye mera farj he aavwalo ki samashya matlab meri samasya……”

Mai : “samajh gaya par hum ja kaha rahe hai......waise ye gaav mujhe acha laga…saaf suthri jagah he….acha mohol..mitti ki khushbu…..mujhe ssheher itna acha nahi lagta…”.

Avinash : “tabhi to me yaha apne pariwar ke sath rehta hun….dikhavepan se kafi dur shanti se jeevan je raha hun.”

Mai : “acha gaav me kahi khana acha milta ho to kya aap mujhe bata sakte hai? Wo isliye ki ab se me yahi rahunga to jab tak mera ghar thik se rehne layak na banal un tab tak ka intejam ho jaye…”

Avinash : “are iski koi jarurat nahi …tab tak tum mere mehman ho to mere ghar par hi khane ka intejam ho jayega…..”

Mai : “mujhe our kuch puchna tha mai jannana chahta hun ki mere pariwar ki is gaav me ya kahi ass pass koi jaydat hai ? agar hai to mujhe pata hona chahiye…….”

Avinash : “thik hai me kal pata karvata hun waise panchayat ke pass kagjat hone unme dekh pata chal jayega……mere khayal se honi chahiye itne mahan shaksh ki jaydat na ho aaisa mumkin nahi h…”

Mai : “ji shukriya…chacha.”

Nice story.

 

[Premkumar65]

Update 2​

…..hum dono unke ghar pahunch gaye….ghar kisi purine mehel se kam nahi tha…..mitthi ka bana ye ashiyana….bohot dekhaniya tha…..2 banjila aaspaass ghane ped….bagicha…..kutte billiya…….pass me 2 gadiya khadi thi……..gaav me hone ke bavajud kafi ameer tha mukhiya…

Ghar ke andar ka najara viparit tha….bahar se dekhne me jitna simple tha andar se usse viparit tha……mano jaise ye koi 5 star hotel ho….har ek chij videshi lag rahi thi…..tv-se lekar har choti-choti chijo tak sab kuch kafi mehenga tha…….

{ Intro 2 : avinash ka pariwar

Avinash - umar 45 saal dekhne me kisi film ke hero se kam nahi lagta sirf ganja hone ke kagar par achuka hai ….tandurst sharir.6 fit ki height . log sheher jate hai gaav se uth kar lekin iska ulta hai ye sheher se yaha gaav me basne aaye our yehi ke hokar rehne lage lagbhag 20 saal ho chuke inhe yaha….inhone rural/urban deployment ke bare me kaafi kuch padha hai….our usi ke adhar par gaav me kafi kuch suvidha muhayia karai hai….inme shiksha se lekar choti moti sari jarurat ki chije shamil hai…..



Kamana – avinash ki patni unki umar 40 saal ..hamesha saree pehenti hai lambe baal.. wo sundar our swabhimani orat hai our behad ziddi…nidar …..our himmat wali….wo apne pati ki barabari ka ek bhi mouka nahi chhodti…..jitni khubsurat utni hoshiyar…..gaav me ye ek dukan chalati hai …orto or ladkiyon ke kapde unki dukan par milte hai…..gav ki sari orte inki tarah jeena chahti hai…. Inki 2 betiya 1 beta hai.




Komal : badi beti iski umar 21 saal sheher me padhai kar rahi hai….kafi gusse wali hai…..hamesha paiso ka ghamand chadha rehta hai…..jisse wo ameeri ka pradarshan karne ka koi mouka nahi jane deti…….ye bhi apni ma ki tarah sundr hai……..MBA kar rahi hai taki use amir business women banna hai……



Nayan : ye hai unki choti beti umar 18 saal ki hai abhi abhi 12th pass ki hai our ye agriculture padh kar safal kisaan ki beti banna hai our adhunikta se kheti ho aage badhana hai……our apni mitthi ke sath bandhe rehna chahti hai apne papa ki ladli …shant swabhav ki our sharmili ladki hai…..

Karan – 9th me hai .gaav ke school me hi padhta hai…..honhar our acha ladka hai….padhai me vi kafi acha hai….sath hi running me bohot jyada ruchi rakhta hai….apne mata pita ka agyakari beta hai….awara kism ke ladko se duri banaye rakhta hai….apne kaam se kaam rakhna iski aadat hai…. Dikhne me sawla hai our kad me thoda chhota hai…..}



Avinash ne ghar ke sabhi sadasyon ko aawaj dekar bulaya our mujhse milvaya…..{komal city me hai yaha nahi h}



Avinash : “kamana ye hai vikram our vikram ye h meri biwi kamna our ye mere bachhe nayan our karan.”

Mai : “Namaste aap sab se milkar bohot khushi hui…..”

Kamana : “hame bhi khushi huyi tumse mil kar vikram.”

Avinash : “ye is gaav ke virpurush kamalsingh Thakur ke akhri waris hai vikram singh Thakur…..ye haal hi me loute hai sheher se our ab yahi isi gaav me rahenge….”

Ye sun kar kamana ne ashcharya se pucha

Kamana : “kya aap sach keh rhe hai ……… kamal Thakur ke pariwar se hai…….wahi jinka putla gaav ke panchayat ke pass hai…….wahi jinhone is gaav ko basaya…..”

Avinash muskurate huye bola……: “haan kamana ye unhi ka pota hai. “

Kamana : “nayan beta jao pani do vikram ji ko……”

Avinash : “vikram ka khana aaj se kuch dino tak hamare yaha hi hoga…..our aaj ye hamare mehman hai ……to ache se khatirdari honi chahiye”………kamana muskurate huye boli….

Kamana : “haan kyu nahi ye bhi koi kehne wali baat hai . itna mahan shaksh jo padhare hai hamare ghar……”

Mai : “chachi me koi mahan nahi hun, mahan wo hote hai jo logo ke liye jeete hai our unke liye kuch karte hai…..me to bas badnasib hun” ………our meri ankhe nam ho gayi…ye dekh dono ekdusre ko dekhne lage…avinash ne mere kandhe par hath rakha our dilasa dene lege…….kamana ne mere ankhe ponch kar boli…

Kamana : “beta samajhti hun pr kon kehta hai tum badnasib ho…..tum khush nasib ho kyun ki tum unke akhri waris ho….tum khushnasib ho ki tumhe unke sanskaro our pidhi ko aage badhane ka jimma mila hai……ye mat samjho ki tum akele ho ye gaav ye sab tumhare sath hai to akele kaise huye…..our tumne mujhe chachi kaha hai to hamara bhi rishta atut bana hai……”

Mai muskurate huye bola : “ji chachi…..mai kabhi kabhi dukhi ho jata hun…..aapne jo kaha wo sahi hai manta hun …..par mujhe apno ko dekhne ka bhagya bhi nahi mila ……”

Avinash : “koi baat nahi jo hota hai uske piche koi na koi vajah jarur hoti hai , chalo fresh ho lo….khana khate huye baat karenge …mujhe panchayat me bhi jana hai 10 baje tak…..”

Inki biwi boli tont marte huye…..

Kamana :”haan dekho maharaj chale apne rajdarbar me jhagde suljhane …”..is baat par bachhe bhi hasne lage…

Nayan : “dekha papa maa aapko kabhi nahi bakshegi…hahahaha”

Karan : “to maharaj kya aaj hum bahar ghumne ja sakte hai apna ghoda lekar…juldi wapis aajayenge dopeher se pehle……hahahha”

Kamana : “rajkumar koi jarurat nahi bahar jane ki aawara log aapko bigadne ki taak me baithe hai……..aap rajmehel se bahar kadham nahi rakhenge warna aapko karagruh ki saja sunayi jayegi….”

Karan : “maharaj ji ye dasi hamare upar hokum jata rahi hai dekho.”

Avinash : “wo dasi kamana na kar mujhse samana warna par jarega thamana …..ja putra ja wo nahi rokegi tumhe…..”

Waah kya drama chal raha tha inke ghar me me bas maje le raha tha sab haste huye ek dusre ko bas hasa rahe the tang khinch rahe the

Kamana : “dekha vikram beta sab ek taraf ho jate hai hamesha our mujhe ek taraf kar dete hai……”

Mai : “koi baat nahi chachi mai hun na apke sath …..aapka angrakshk yani ke bodyguard .”

Avinash : “lo nayya dub gayi nayan dekho to isne bodyguard bhi bana liya….ab hame bhi yaha se nikalna chahiye warna ye bodyguard hame kahi ka nahi chhodega…….”

Hum sab hasne lage…..

Nayan : “kuch nahi papa bodyguard ko jab chahe bhaga denge aap chinta mat karo …..”

Avinash : “haha waise bhi bina tankha ke kaam thodi bodyguard bana rahega . haha”

Nayan : “sahi kaha papa kyu maa aapka bechara bodyguard to bhookha hi rahega to bhag jayega…hahahhahaha”

Kamana : “uski chinta tum mat karo …dekh lungi me jao chalo tumv taiyyar ho jao our niklo clg ke liye..”

Fir uske baad sabne khana kha liya our fir avinash our nayan chale gaye apne apne raste….mujhe ek kamra diya gaya rest karne ke liye……me kamre me jate hi so gaya…..

Mere bare me abhi tak kisi ko pata nahi tha……

Me gehri nind me soya hua tha . Dopehar karan ki aavaj se meri nind khuli……

Karan : “bhaiyya vikram bhaiya ……utho….me utha our uski our dekte huye pucha”

Vikram : “sham ho gayi kya ?”

Karan haste huye bola : “are nahi abhi to 1 baj rahe hai dopehar ke….maa niche bula rahi hai…apko….”

Vikram : “thik hai chalo me fresh hokar aata hun…”

me fresh hone chala gaya , muh dhone ke baad apne aap ko aayne me dekhne laga khud ko dekhte huye bite kal ko yaad kar raha tha ……bahar aagaya….kamana chachi khana laga rahi thi….cha chahte huye bhi meri najar unke gaal par bane til par chali gayi….use dekh kar mere chehre par muskan aagayi……

kamana : “uth gaye beta…lagta hai nind achi aayi?”

Mai kursi par baithate huye bola….

Mai : “ha chachi aaj pehli baar itni achi our gehri nind me soya hu…..apnepan ka nasha hi alag hota hai…..”

Kamana : “haan beta par nasha nahi pyar kaho ….jaha apnapan hota hai waha pyar hota hai….our jaha pyar hota hai waha khushiya hoti hai…..”

Mai : “chachi ek baat kahu aapko bura na lage to ?”

Kamana : “kaho beta me kyu bura manane lagi? bolo me bura nnahi manungi”

Mai : “pakka ?”

Kamana : “ab bol bhi do.”

Mai : “aap bohot khubsurat hai our sabse jyada khubsurat aapke gaal par bana til lagta hai….”

Meri baat sun kar wo sharma jati hai…our mere kandhe par mukka marte huye boli.

Kamana : “acha badmash kahi ke apni chachi ko ched rahe ho……”

Mai : “ab sach to sach hai our me kyu chedu aapko aapko to chacha chedenge …..hahaha….”

Chachi our bhi jyada sharma rahi thi ….karan bhi aagaya our sehmati jataye huye bola

Karan : “sachhi ma vikram bhaiyyane sach hi to kaha aap khubsurat hai isliye hi to papa ne aapko patakar shadi kar li hahahaha….”

Hum teeno hasne lage……

Kamana : “karan badmash maa se aaise baat karte hai….? “

Karan : “maa aap meri dost ho guru ho maa ho….sab aap hi to ho to me jab chahe aapse har baat share kar sakta hun….”

Vikram : “ha chachi karan samajhdar hai, usne sahi kaha…maa baap ko apne bacchho se dost ki tarah bartav karna chahiye taki ek dusre ko samjhe …..”

Kamana : “janti hun beta isliye hamare ghar ka mohol aaisa hai jaise hum sab ek hi umar ke ho…hasi khushi …sath rehte hai……”

Karan : “han vikram bhaiya bas ek shaksh ko chhod kar…….”

Vikram : “kya matlab our bhi koi hai ?”

Karan : “haan hamari hitlar didi komal. Jo sheher me rehkar padh rahi hai…”

Kamana : “karan aaisa nahi kehte …..ek din wo bhi hamare sath hi hasi khushi rahegi……”

Karan : “galti huyi bhagwan se usko dusre vishwayudh me hitlar ki behen banate to acha hota bechara wo jit jata ……hahaha”

Kamana our me hasne lage…….maine karan se gaav ghumane ko keh diya wo khushi se raji ho gaya…..

Interesting story.

 

[Premkumar65]

Update 3​

Gaav ka najara ramaniy tha man mohak…….hariyali…….kamsin ladkiya, gadarayi orte…………madmast bhabhiya…..gaav me jyada tar fashion ka koi lena dena nahi hota ….khule gale ka blouse pehna jaaata hai taki sabko darshan hota rahe our pehenne me bhi acha mehsus ho……..sidhe bola jaye to….na jyada tight na jyada loose……..par is sab se mardo our ladko ka louda to khada ho jata hai uska kya ……..sheher ke mukable gaav me lafde jyada hote hai……kheto me baago me tabele me jangle me har jagah koi na koi chudta rehta hai……..har gaav me aaisi 2-3 jagah rehti hai jo khatarnak ya darawni mani jati hai usme pehla hai khandahar dusra purani bhutiya haweli/ghar……….our tisra ya to Thakur ki haweli ya sarpanch ya koi our jamindar ……kyun ki inse jyada khatarnak kon ho sakta hai…..garibo ka khoon chusne wale…….orton ki ijjat lootne wale…..unke mehnat par hakk jatane wale……

Khair aage badhte hai……..

Hum ghaav ki galiyaro se gujarte huye panchayat pahunch gaye maine kamal singh Thakur ke smarak ko apne ghutno par baith kar pranam kiya our waha se aage badh gaya….. karan mujhe har jagah ke bare me batata ja raha tha our me uski baato par dhyan de raha tha…..

Karan : “bhaiya ye hai yaha ka school our piche ki taraf collage hai …..wahi chote mote subject padhaye jate hai bas .arts our commerce…….science ya engineering ki padhai karni ho to shaher jana padta hai yaha se 4 ghante ka rasta hai.”

Mai : “school ke aass pass ka area kaafi sundar hai……tum bhi yehi padhte ho??” ispar usne haste huye jawab diya

Karan : “:haan bhaiyya mai yehi padhta hun our dusara school thodi na hai yaha…”

Mai : “haan sahi hai, waise tumhare papa shaher se yaha aake bas gaye thoda ajeeb nahi lagta ?” usne meri taraf dekh ke bola

Karan : “haan ajeeb jarur hai par aap bhi to ajeeb hi huyi na aap bhi to sheher se yaha rehne aagaye…..hahahaha”

Mai : “hahahaha…sahi kaha mujhe gaav jyada pasanad hai”

Fir karan our me gaav se bahar kheto ki taraf aagaye…..dur tak bas har jagah bas dhan hi dhan najar aarahe the….dusri taraf ganne ke saro ke gehu ke ket najar aarahe the

Karan : “ye jo aap dekh rahe hai ye saari jamin aapke purkhon ki hai aaise log kehte hai….gono ne apna pet bharne ke liye inka istemal kar anaj ugate hai….our wo jo aap dekh rahe hai us pahadi ko waha se yaha tak aapki hi jamin hai aaise papa kehte the…..”

Mai : “oo acha matlab ye saari jamin hamare pariwaar ki hai?” karan ne haan me sir hilaya …..

mere chehre par muskan aagayi…mai man me sochne laga .”itni saari jaydadt me to bas ghar ke bare me soch raha tha par yaha to jackpot lag gaya…….kangaal bane ghum raha tha ek hi din me arab pati ban gaya dikhne me ye sari jamin 300-400 ekad hogi ….waah re vikram ye dekh ke na ho jana chakram ……ab honge parakram…….”

Mujhe un pahado ke pass kuch dikha dikhne me ghar jaisa tha to maine pucha…. Uske ass pass kuch duri par laal our kale rang ka kapda najar aaraha tha……

Mai : “karan ek baat to batana wo jo pahadi hai waha wo ghar kiska hai….” Wo thoda ghabra gaya…

Karan : “are ni bhaiya wo to wo to……” use pasine aane lage….

Mai : “are karan kya hua tum ghabra kyu rahe ho” wo wapis mudne laga….

Karan : “bhaiya aap papa se puch lijiye wo darawani jagah hai” maine uske kandhe par haath rakhte huye kaha

Mai : “ chalo kahi our chalte hai tum relax ho jao…..bahadur log darte nahi hai samjhe” wo haste huye bola

Karan : “papa bhi yehi kehte hai……”

mai :” chalo kahi our chalte hai…..”

fir hum dono waha se nadi ki our aagaye waha abhi bhi kuch log naha rahe the apne janwaron ko nehla rahe the…..kafi chehel pehel thi waha se thodi duri par xforum tha yani ke aass pass ke charo gaawo tak jane ka ye ekmatra hi rasta tha…..in charo gaawo ko nadi ne gher rakha tha our uske baad pahadi thi …….our yehi rasta sheher jata tha….barish ke dino me nadi ka star badhne par kheto me pani aajata tha….har ek gaav unchayi par hone ki wajah se gaav me pani ghusne ka koi rasta nahi tha……pahadi ilaka hone ki vajah se aass pass ghane jangal the…or jangal hai to jangli janwaron ka hona bhi lajmi hai isliye pahado our gaawo ke bich nadi bani huyi thi isliye janwaron ka koi khatra nahi tha…in ilako me magarmacch bhi nahi paye jate the….ek tarah se ye pura Ilaka surakshit tha…….agar aaisi jagah koi raja apna killa banata to us kile par akraman kar use hasil karna mushkil hota…....hamla karne wala jeet bhi jaye tab bhi uske lagbhag sare sathi mare jayenge.

Fir hum our thoda idhar udhar ghume our fir apne ghar ki taraf wapis aagaye…. Bahar mujhe ballu dikhayi diya…..

Mai : “ballu kaka kya sari safayi ho gayi?” uske chehre par udasi chayi huyi thi…mujhe acha nahi laga….

Ballu : “haa babu bas ho gaya …aap kal yaha reh sakte hai…..” maine unke pass gaya

Mai : “dekho ballu kaka mana ki aapko dukh ho raha hai par sach to yehi hai na ki ye ghar mera hai….fir bhi mai chahta hun ki aap log yehi rahe mere sath agar aapko our kaki ko koi pareshani na ho to ……” wo rote huye mere pair pakadne wala tha par maine unhe rok diya…..

Ballu : “maaf karna chote malik mai lalach me aagaya tha…..ye bhool gaya tha ki hum apke pariwar ke wafadar rahe hai…..” maine unhe shant kiya

Mai : “dekho kaka is duniya me insaan khali haath aata hai our jate wakt bhi khali haath hi jata hai….meri dekhbhal ke liye mujhe koi n koi chahiye to me chahta hun aap hi yaha rahe…..kaki ko bata do ki kahi jane ki jarurat nahi hai….aap log niche wale kamro me rakhiye mujhe upar wale kamre de dijiye…”

Ballu aankhe pochte huye : “aapka bohot bohot shukriya chote malik….aapka ye ehsaan hum kaise chukayenge pata nahi ……”

Mai : “kaka ehsaan wagera me nahi manta insaniyat me vishwas rakhta hun…..”

Ballu : “aapke vichar mahan hai chote malik.”

Karan : “bhaiyya kaafi der ho gayi hai mummy-papa intejar kar rahe honge….chalte hai..”

Mai : “kaka chalo me chalta hun subah milte hai.”



Karan our hum wapis ghar aagaye jaha sab hamara intejar kar rahe the….ghar me ghuste hi avinash baras pada

Avinash : “kaha the tum dono batakar to jate….”

Karan : “papa mummy ko batakar gaye the bhaiyya ko gaav dikha lata hun” maine bhi uska sath dete huye kaha

Mai : “bas aaise hi nikal gaye the…”

Avinash : “chalo jao juldi fresh ho jao fir khana khate hai….”

Kamana : “garam-garam pakode kon khayega?”

Avinash : “koi khaye na khaye mai to aaya….” Nayan bhi apna morcha sambhal li

Nayan : “me bhi apke team me hun papa…..”

Avinash : “acha beta ek baat batao collage se koi trip ja rahi hai maine suna…” nayan chehekte huye boli…

Nayan : “haan papa ja rahi hai 7 din ke liye our mujhe bhi jana hai please is baar mana mat karna…”

Kamana : “nahi avinash ye nahi jayegi .”

Avinash : “are kyun nahi jayegi wo jarur jayegi…..akhir ab wo bhi to duniya ko apne najariye se dekhe..”

Kamana : “aap use bigad rahe hai avinash fir mat kehna maine uspar dhayn ni diya”

Avinash : “tum uski chinta mat karo meri beti samajhdar hai wo apne aap ko sambhal sakti hai….” Nayan khushi se uchal kar papa ke galo ki pappy leti hai

Nayan : “thank you papa I love you aap hamesha mera sath dete hai…?” our apni ma ki taraf dekhti hai..our apne maa ke pass jakar unke gale lagti hai

Kamana : “apna khayal rakhna meri pyari gudiya. Bas tumhari fikar hoti hai hamesha isliye me tokti hun hamesha.” Our apni beti ke mathe ko chum leti hai

Nayan : “mummy mai aapki beti hun our me apna khayal rakhna janti hun aap chinta mat kiya karo na hai na papa ….”

Avinash : “haan meri pyari bacchi samajhdar bhi hai our bahadur bhi kamana use jeene do apni zindagi.”

Our sab apne apne kam me lag gaye. Fir raat ka khana hua fir sab apne apne kamre me chale gaye..

Agle din sabki subah roj marra ke kamo se shuru huyi…….kisan apne kheto ke taraf chale gaye ……kaam kaaj wale sheher ki taraf….our me kya kar raha tha ….chhat par khade hokar yoga kar raha tha ….

Dhyan laga raha tha watavaran me shanti chayi huyi thi ….me aaisi awastha me tha jaha kuch sunayi nahi deta na hawa ki aawaj na panchiyonki our na hi kisi our ki ise hum kuch bhi keh sakte hai jaise ki magn avastha ya dhyanmagn awastha…….mai karib ek ghante tak isi awastha me dhyan lagane ke baad waha se utha kr apne karme me gaya our naha dho kar niche aagaya ……nayan our ashok apne apne raste ja chuke the karan bhi jane ki tayyari me tha ……our kamana kitchen ke kamo me vyast thi ……unhone jaise hi mujhe dekha wo bahar aayi our muskurate huye boli….

Kamana : “aagaye beta tum baith jao our garam karam nasta karlo aaj maine pudi banayi hai sath me chole bhi ………khakar batana kaisa baana hai” mai bhi muskurate huye baith gaya . our mai naste par toot pada….pehla nivala jaise hi khaya mere muh se achanak hi bol nikal gaye

Mai : “uuuummmmmmm waaah chahi bohot hi testy bana hai……aaisa swaad chake kafi samay ho gaya hai.” Chachi khush huyi ….par agle hi pal mere chehre par thodi udasi cha gayi wo chachi ne dekh li to unhone pucha

Kamana : “tumhe achanak kya hua tum udas kyu ho gaye….” Mene muskurate huye kaha

Mai : “kuch nahi kisi ki yaad aagayi bas u hi.”

Kamana : “ye to achi baat hai na kisi ko yaad karna …isme udas kyu hona , waise wo koun hai?”

Mai : “chachi you samajh lo ki wo bhi mera pariwar hi tha…..par ab wo apne beto ke pass rehte hai…..our me yaha hun.”

Kamana : “ye acha hua unhe akhari samay me apne poto ke sath samay mil gaya, jarur ho nek dil insaan honge.”

Mai : “haan chachi mujhe kuch kaam se sheher jana hai sham tak wapis aaunga .”

Kamana : “thik hai mujhe bhi dukan par jana hai.” Our wo kuch sochne lagi mai apni jagah se uth kar kamre ki our chal diya.

Kamana : “acha sheher ja hi rahe ho to mera ek kaam kar doge vikram????” maine muskurate huye jawab diya

Mai : “boliye na chachi isme puchne ki kya baat hai bataiye me kar dunga” maine unki taraf aate huye jawab diya

Kamana : “kuch saman mangwana hai apni dukan ke mai tumhe pata likh kar deti hun bas waha jakar unhe batana maine bheja hai …baki me phone par unse baat kar lungi.”

Mai : “ thik hai le aaunga .” our unhone apni car ki chabi meri our badha di

Kamana : “ye lo ise le jao.” Maine unki our dekhte huye bola

Mai : “ab iski kya jarurat thi mai bus se chala jata hun na .”

Kamana : “mai koi bahana nahi sunana chahti chup chap le jao.”

Mai : “jo hukum chachi sahiba .” our mai muskurate huye apne kamre ki our badh gaya chachi wahi khadi kuch soch me dubi huyi thi

Kamana apne man me soch rahi thi ki , “ye ladka kitna acha hai dil ka saaf hai ise aaye 2 din bhi thik se nahi huye lekin ye pariwar me sabko apna sa lagne laga hai. Itna soch kar wo kitchen me chali jati hai our apne kaam khatam karne lagti hai…..

Mai tayyar hokar our ek bag utha kar bahar nikla our car me us bag ko rakha our waha se sheher ki taraf nikal gaya…..raste me jate huye soch raha tha, “ mai ab gaav me aa to gaya hun par mujhe har samay choukanna rehna hoga logo ki pareshaniyon ke mujhe koi lena dena nahi hai, kisi ke najar me nahi aana hai. Pichali galtiyon ki dohrane ki sochna bhi nahi hai.

Mai Karib 3 ghante baad me sheher pahuncha , waha pahunchne ke baad mai ek chote se dhabe me jakar ek table par baith gaya jab wo admi mere pass aaya usne pucha

Waiter : “sahib boliye aapke liye kya le aau garam ya thanda???” maine muskurate huye jawab diya

Mai : “ mujhe ek idli ek wada ek dosa our ek uttappam jiske sath vardha ka diya wo gift jo usne aaj subah hi yaha bheja hoga sath me usse baat karne ke liye ek phone .” us admi ne mujhe ek baar upar se niche dekh raha tha uske chehre par ascharya ke bhav the wo kuch sochte huye waha se gaya our karib 10 min baad wapis aaya khana lekar sath me phone lekar

Waiter : “ye lijiye sahib aapka khana our ye raha aapke liye phone…..” mere phone lete hi samne se aawaj aai

Vardha : “aapka kaam ho gaya hai mere malik.”

Mai : “vardha mujhe tumpar pura yakin hai janta hun tumne mera sath hamesha diya hai. Bas our ek kaam kardo mere liye uske baad tum aajad ho.” Samne se uski aawaj aai

Vardha : “aapko chhod kar kaha jaunga malik is umra me, our mujhe aap dur mat kijiye malik mera to duniya me aapke siva koi hai bhi to nahi, kya mai apne akhari samay me aapke sath nahi reh sakta mallik mujhe bohot khushi hogi.” Maine kuch sochte huye kaha

Mai : “thik hai vardha karib 1 mahine ke baad tum mujhe isi dhabe par milna. Ab meri baat puri dhyan se suno………………………………………………………………………………….samajh gaye meri baat koi chuk nahi honi chahiye our kisi ko pata bhi nahi chalna chahiye,”

Vardha : “samajh gaya malik aap bharosa rakhiye kaam ho jayega , aapki aavaj sunkar dil ko sukun mila hai aaj , ek saal ho gaya hai aapko mile aap na hote to mai kab ka upar nikal gaya hota…” vardha bhauk ho jata hai .

Mai : “apna khayal rakhna vrdha juldi milte hai……”

Our mai khana kha kar waha se kamana ke bataye dunak ke liye nikal gaya ….kuch der me rasta puchte puchte us dukan ke pas khada hua , par dikhne me ye koi dukan nahi godam lag raha tha ….mai andar gaya….ek lady ne kuch sawal jawab kiye our mujhe 3 bade packet thama diye maine wo car ke piche dal diye our waha se rawana hua ….mai raste se ra hi raha tha ki ek jagah meri najar gayi wo thoda kam bhid bhad wala ilaka tha jaha uske bagal me ek garden tha ……maine apni car roki our dekha ki 2 ladkiya thodi dari dari si khadi thi our 7-8 lafange unhe gher kar khade huye the

Wo lafange un ladkiyon ke badan ko chu rahe the, har chuwan ke sath wo ladkiya kaamp jati our aankho se ansu bahane lagti mujhse ye dekha nahi gaya…..par mere man ne mujhe roka

Mera man 1 : “ye kya soch raha hai kisi lafde me mat pad warna pakda jayega fir se, hame kya lena dena unse to apne raste nikal.” Dusri aawaj aayi…

Mera man 2 : “nahi vikram ye galat hoga wo unhe bachana ye tumhara kartavya hai jao unhe bachao warna unke sath galat ho jayega….”

Mera man 1 : “hota hai to hone de na tujhe kya jyada se jyada kya hoga wo un sabka maja hi le lengi…..”

Mera man 2 : “kya maja lelengi wo rakshas unhe man denge unki ijjat loot lenge ye kaha ki insaniyat hai ….tu to harami hai vikram ko aaisi pattiya mat padha mai janta hun vikram kaisa insaan hai”

Mera man 1 : “kaisa insaan hai isne bhi to chuton ke samundar me gote lagaye hai to isme kya galat hai bhala.”

Mera man 2 : “are rakshas buddhi jabardasti our pyar me bohot antar hota hai, vikram uski bat mat suno tum yaad karo tumhari maa ke sath bhi to aaisa hi hua tha yaad karo our socho ye 8 lafange unka kya karenge mar denge wo mar jayengi kal akhbar me khabar aayegi tab kya apne aap se najre mila pagoge wahi karo jo tumhe aata hai……

Maine kuch soch kar car se bahar aane ka faisla kiya tabhi mujhe ek aawaj sunayi di, wo lafange un ladkiyon ko ek omini van me dal diye our aage badh gaye…..wo jis raste gaye the WO SHEHER SE BAHAR KI OUR JA RAHI THI wo ladkiya chillate hye madat ki guhar laga rahi thi

Ladki 1 : “chodo hame jane dooo…….koi hai bachao hame……” ek ladke ne uske gaal par jordar tamacha mara usne dhamkate huye kaha

Lafanga 1 : “chup kar haramjadi warna ye dekh ye chaku teri pet me ghusake atadiya bahar nikal dunga, ab chup reh kar maje kar warna dekh le.|”

Ladki 2 : “hame jane do hamare gale ki chain lelo par hame jane do hum paise bhi de denge jitney mango hum de dengi plz hame jane do…..” isfar dusra ladka bola,

Lafanga : “dekho bhaiyyo aaj to ye paise wali chidiya haath lagi hai…..inka jism bhi to dekho kya gajab ka lag raha hai…..mera to inko dekha tab se hi khada hai inki chut me jane ke liye hahahaha…..” sab haste huye unko pakad kar rahe huye the

Sheher ke bahar ek viran pade badi mill ke andar gadi ghus gayyi maine apni gadi bahar khadi kar di our teji se anadar aagya …

Jaise hi me waha pahuncha to dekha un logo ne un dono ladkiyon ke kapde faad diye our unke badan pa hath ghuma rahe the wo ladkiya jor jor se chilla rahi thi par waha unhe bachane koi nahi asakta tha kyun ki wo jagah sunsan thhi….

Wo dono ladkiya bra panty me jamin par padi thi …kuch ladke nange khade the kuch kapde nikal rahe the maine der na lagate huye waha ka ek sariya {iron rod} utha liya our kisi ke kuch pata chalne se pehle unke mukhiya ke garden se aar-par kar diya ye sab maine itni tezi se kiya ki baki sab dekhte rahe uske khoon ki chinte un ladkiyon ke jism par ja giri…..kuch pal bad jab sabko pata chala ki kya hua wo mujhe marne ke liye aage badhe to maine us sariye ki madat se ek ke pet pet ki atadiya fad di …….ek ladke ne piche se mere pith par laat pari our ek ne bada sa danda bhi mar diya mai apne aap ko sambhal na saka our halka aage ki our girte huye samne wale ke shaksh ke ankho me wahi rod ghusa di our use niche girakar khud ko girne se bacha liya …….fir bache 3 logo ki taraf badha to wo omini ki our bhage mujhe laga wo bhag jayenge par unhone car se talware nikali our meri our tane khade the ….ye sare najare dekh charo our khoon dekh wo ladkiya dar ke mare ek dusre se chipki kaamp rahi thi ,,,, yaha maine teeno se ek rod ki madat se niptane me laga hua tha tabhi mere haath me ek ladke ki talwar aaaggyi our maine agle hi pal teeno ki gardan hawa me uchal di our us talwar se mere hatho ke nishan mita diye our rod liye ladkiyon ki taraf gaya wo mujhe apni our aate dekh kafi dar gayi….wo ourjyada kampne lagi….to maine rod ko ek our rakh diya our unke pass aaya, un dono k agora jism dekh mera man machalne laga par maine dhyan nahi diya

Wo dono rote darte meri our dekhne lagi …maine muskurate our sahnti se unke sar par haath rakh sehla diya our kaha

Mai : “hey hey hey daro nahi mai kuch nahi karunga , ab tum surakshit ho daro nahi hame yaha se chalna hoga me tum dono ko ghar chhod deta hun chalo……” ek ladki darte huye boli

Ladki 1 : “ k..k.,..ko..ko…kon ho aap our aap aapne inhe …..” maine unke hotho par ungli rakhi our kaha

Mai : “ssssshhhhhhhh………….yaha kuch nhai hua na tumne mujhe dekha…..na maine tumhari koi help ki …..kisi ke aane se pehle yaha se nikalna chahiye…….”

Ladki 2 : “par par hamare pas koi kapde nahi hai kaise jayenge bahar…”

mai kuch soch raha tha ki yaad aaya ki wo saman unme kuch hoga to mai apni car ke pass gaya our us bag me dekhne laga mujeh kuch ladkiyon ke kapde mile to maine unme se 2 jodi nikal liye…..our un ladkiyon ke pass aaya our unhe kapde dekar maine dhabe par mile us box se kuch gun powder nikali our un sabke muh par faila di…..our fir aag laga di taki unke chahre jal jaye …..fir hum tejji se waha se nikal gaye…..hum teeno car me baith gaye

Wo dono ladkiya piche baith gayi maine pani ki bottle unki our ki our kaha

Mai : “muh dho lo ache se taki kisi ko koi shak na ho…..our han tum me se koi ek dukan me jakar mere liye ek shart le kar aayegi dukan se…our han XXL size ka le aana t shart bhi chalegi mai nahi ja sakta meri shart me kafi khoon laga hai , batao kon jayega?” usme se ek ladki boli

Ladki 2 : “m…m…mai chali jaungi..” maine paise uski taraf badhaye…..usne paise le liye our main eek dukan ke pass car roki our wo ladki 2 dukan ke andar gayi karib 20 min baad ek packet ke sath wapis aayi……us ladki ke car me baithate hi maine car aage badha di our ek café ke samne rok di our apni shart nikal kar unke samne hi t-shart pehen li …..meri body dekh un dono ko ascharya hua …sadharan sa dikhne wala ladka itna fit kaise hai ho sakta hai wo kuch nahi bol rahi thi bas dekh rahi thi fir ek dusre ko dekh rahi thi……jab mera hua to maine unse sawal kiya……

Mai : “aap dono ke naam kya hai ??” ispar dono ne jawab diya

Ladki 1 : “me divya mathur”

Ladki 2 : “our me anamika yadav our aapka naam???” maine muskurate huye jawab diya

Mai : “mera naam vikram hai tum dono ko maine unke sath us gardan ke pas dekha tha jab tak me car se utarta wo tum dono ko car me dal kar ja chuke the to mai unke piche aagaya…”

Divya : “aapka shukiya ada kaise kare hume samhjh nahi aaraha hai.”

Anamika : “haan aap nahi hote to pata nahi hum kya karti shayab mar jati ya khud ko mar leti.” Maine unhe tokte huye kaha

Mai : “dekho jo hua so hua jo nahi hua uske bare me mat socho our ha jaruri baat ghar jate hi sabko bata dena par yaad rahe ghar ke bahar kisi ko na pata chale, wo isliye kyun ki agar kabhi unlogo ko tum dono ka pata chal gaya to family tumhara bachav kar sake samajh gayi ?”

Meri dono ne haan me apni gardan hilayi…. Fir mai fir se chachi ke liye jo saman liya tha waha ja kar fir se same kapde pack karvaye…our un ladkiyon ke bataye address par pahunch gaye ….hum teeno car se utre our maine unhe fir se sab samjhaya …par fir jo hua uska mujhe kuch andaja nahi tha

Jis ghar ke pass humne gadi roki thi waha upar balcony me khada koi chay pi raha tha hame dekh raha tha divya ne upar dekha our dono ne mere dono hatho ko pakad kar lagbhag khichte huye ghar ke andar le jane lagi maine bhi jyada na natak kate huye aage badhne laga wo shaksh bhi niche aagaya …divya ne darvaja khatkhataya to ek lady ne darwaja khola

Aurat : “divvya ye kya hai kon hai ye our ye kya battamiji ho rahi hai our anamika tum bhi iska sath de rahi ho? Chhodo use ni to ……. “ anamika ne unki baat bich me katate hye bol padi



Anamika : “hato aunty raste se pehle andar aane do fir batate hai uncle kaha hai unhe bhi bulaiye……” upar se wo shaksh niche aate huye bola

shaksh : “baccho kon hai ye our ye kay ho raha hai yaha batao ?”

uski baat puri hote hi divya ne mera hath chhoda our ja kar apne papa ke gale lag gayi our rone lagi ..achanak divya ko rota dekh kar us shaksh ko achanak dar ki leher sharir me mehsus huyi our uske mathe ko chumte huye use pyar se pucha, udhar anamika ne bhi phone kar ke apne mata pita ko bhi bula liya…kuch hi der me wo dono bhi aagaye to anamika bhi apni maa ke gale jakar lag gayi our rone lagi …..sab dar gaye the

Interesting story. Lot of twist and turns.

 

[Premkumar65]

Update 4

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{intro 3 anamika our divya ke pariwar….

Divya ka pariwar –

Rajendra mathur – divya ke papa sheher ke jane mane DGP isni umar 52 saal hai….kadak mijaj our imandar ….neki ke sath shatir bhi tha isi ke chalte ihe promotion mil jaya karte the….har koi inse darta tha…kyun ki ye kisi se darte jo nahi the……




Latika - divya ki maa age 45 khubsurat ke sath utni hi masun apne pati our bachho se behar pyar karti hai , kai mahila kalyyan sansthao se judi hone ki vajah kaafi janii mani hasti mani jati hai is sheher ki ….




Divya - inki eklouti beti jo shadi ke kai saal baad inki good me aag giri …koi ise inke darwaje par chhod gaya tha…..khubsurat our kafi tej ladki thi ……ye mba kar rahi hai iski age 22 saal hai…shant swabhav apni maa ki tarah.. tha par uske papa DGP hone ke karan collage me sab isse dur rehte the shivay kuch bigde ladko ke.

Anamika ka pariwar –

Vishal yadav – ye yaha ke press ke malik our rajendra ke bachpan ke dost unki age 50 saal hai …..mehnati admi hai press chelate hai to himmat wale bhi hai ….pariwar our apne desh se bohot pyar hai .



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Shalini – anamika ki maa age 45 saal hote huye bhi 30-32 saal ki lagti thi ….unka kad unke jism ki banawat unki sundarta unka pehnava dekh koi bhi inko ek model ya ek heroin samjh lega ye apne pati ke sath press ka kaam sambhalti thi …… inki do betiya hai



Badi beti – simran yadav ye ek police officer ki traiing le rahi hai…padhai me tej hone ke sath wo khel khud me bhi awaal aaya karti thi …..age 24 saal hai our ye kafi fit our fouladi sharir ki malkin hai khel kud ne is eek takatwar shirir pradan kiya tha isi ke sath wo apni life police ki nokri se logo ki desh ki seva karna chahti thi…..



Choti beti – anamika yadav age 22 divvya ki saheli ye bhi MBA kar rahi hai dono ek hi class me hai hamesha sath rehti hai …padhau our sath hi shant saral swabhav ….jyada kisike sath milti jultti nahi hai ….

Inke pariwar ke baki ke sadasya aage chalkar shamil honge }

Shalini : “kya hua meri bacchi tum dono ro kyu rahi ho our ye ladka kon hai………?”

Vishal : “batao baccho kya hua?

Rajendra : “ab dono rona band karogi ya me ….” Maine sabki baat bich me kat di our bola

Mai : “ek minute ye sab kya ho raha hai aap log bade ko na unpar dabav dalne se acha unse pyar se puchiye filhal itna kahunga ki inhe thoda shant hone dijiye ye sab bata dengi.” Rajendra gussa hua our bola

Rajendra : “ye ladke tum hote kon ho hame salah dene wale?” maine bhi tu tadak kar jawab diya

Mai : “ me koi bhi hun usse aap logo ko kya, meri baat chhodo apne betiyon ko sambhaliye me chala mujhe koi shouk nahi hai yaha ruk kar aapki bate sunane ka me chalta hua…….” Mai jane ke liye muda darvaje par pahuncha ki kisi ne mera hath pakd liya maine mud kar dekha to ye divya ki maa latika thi …uski aankhe nam thi usne bhigi aankho se bade pyar se kaha

Latika : “sorry beta maaf kardo, inka swabhav hi aaisa hai bura mat mano …..plz mujhe batai akhir kya hua hai……?” maine unki aankho me jo mamta divya ke liye dekhi mujhe meri maa ek jhalak dikh gayi…maine dhire dhire unhe sab bata diya jo hua sab kuch bata diya jise sun kar latika our shalini sunn reh gayi our rajendra our vishal ascharya our dar se kaamp gaye…….undono ko betiyon se jyada mere kiye kand se ascharya ho raha tha ….fir mohol shant ho gaya ou

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Rajendra : “kya tumne akele un sabko mar diya?” use yakin nahi ho raha tha mere kahe par

Vishal : “ye kaisa sawal hai rajendra balki hame iska shukriya ada karna chahiye our un lasho ka kuch karna chahiye.”

Mai : “uski chinta mat kijiye aap log unke chehre jal chuke hai unhe koi pehchan nahi payega unke pas koi pehchan karne wali koi id nahi bachi hai maine sab jala di….” Dono fir mujhe bas dekhne lage…fir rajendra ne shalinta se kaha

Rajendra : “beta mujhe maaf kar do battamiji ke liye maine anjane me kya kuch kaha …tumhari vajah se hamari ijjat hamara gourav aaj sahi salamat hai.” Vishal ne bhi han me han milayi

Shalini : “kya nam hai beta tumhara ?”

Mai : “ji mera nam Vikram singh Thakur hai, mai yehi pass ke gaav me rehta hun……”

Rajendra : “mai Rajendra mathur our ye meri patni latika. Mai yaha ka DGP hun.

Vishal : “mera naam vishal yadav hai our ye meri patni shalini, anamika ko tum mil hi chuke ho ye meri choti beti hai badi beti police traning kar rahi hai. Mai apni ek press chalata hun, “naya jeevan naya savera “ ye akhbar hamari press ki shan hai ….”

Fir hum logo ne idhar udhar ki baat ki our maine jane ki ijajat mangi ….fir mai waha se gaav ki taraf nikal aaya …….ghar pahunchte pahunchte sham ho chuki thi ….

Ghar me sabhi moujud the mere aate hi sabki najar meri taraf ho gayi….kamana kaki ne sabko pehle hi bata diya tha ki me sheher gaya hua hun…..par mujhe aane me kafi der ho chuki thi jo ki honi nahi chahiye thi ….

Aate hi avinash ne our kamana ne sawalo par sawal kiye fir maine unhe bahana bana kar taal di our sabne khana kha liya our fir is sard bhari raat me sab bister me ludak gaye……

Aaise hi pura ek mahine tak maine subah juldi uth jata jaise ki rojana aadat thi mujhe raat ke matlab subah ke 3 baje uth kar bahar tehelne jana din nikalte hi wapis aana……..mujhe mere guru ne shikhaya tha ki subah 3 baje ka jo wakt hota hai wo ek aaisa jariya hai …jiske sahi istemal se hum hamare andar ki wo takat wo shakshiyat pehchan pane me kabil bante hai jise khud bhagwan ne fursat nikal kar hamare andar ek jagah chupai hoti hai……unhone sabke andar aaisi koi na koi energy takat chupa rakhi hai …..us takat ke kabil banana hai ki nai ye hamare karm par nirbhar hai……ye sabse asan tarika ye hota hai ki subah 3 baje ke Karin uthe ….dhyan lagaye our yoga ka abhyas kare sath me sehat ke liye vyayam bhi kare……jisasse hamare anadar ki us energy ko ek alag sa ehsas hone lagta hai our wo hamare sare angon ko suchna dene lagta hai our dheere dheere wo takat ubhar kar bahar aajati hai …..jime kafi samay lagta hai…..mujhe khud use pehchanane me 11 saal lage the …..our ye itna asan bhi nahi hota tha…..mere guru ne mujhe jo marg dikhaya use maine swikar liya …..shuru shuru me aaise jeevan jina mushkil lagta tha par aaj mere liye sab khel sa lagta hai……

Khair aaise hi ek mahina bit gaya…..avinash ka pariwar mere khafi karib ho chukka tha….sab mujhe apna sa samjhne lage the….mai bhi unhe apna sa samjhne laga tha…….ek taraf kamana ji meri taraf akarshit ho rahi thi wahi dusri taraf nayan mere pyar me pad chuki thi, har samay wo mujhe dekhti chori chupe….mujhe bhi wo achi lagti thi par maine jaan bujh kar use egnor karna shuru kar chukka tha….par maine jo chaha tha usase ulta asar hua mere egnor karne se use our bhi meri taraf akarshan badh gaya……me sab jante huye bhi nashamaj bana rehta tha…..avinash apne karmachari logon ke sath hamare pariwar ki sari jaydat ke kagajad jutane our unhe mere naam karane laga hua tha …..usme jitna bhi kharcha hua maine unhe de diya…….is bich ballu kaka ne mere liye pura ghar saaf kara diya khud ke liye niche intejam kar liye our mere liye upar ke pura manjila thik se saja diya tha jaise pehle hua karta tha…..

Wahi sheher me bhi kuch aaisa hi haal tha divya bhi mere pyar me pad chuki thi jiski bhanak mujhe bhi nahi thi na uski saheli anamika ko bhi iski koi jankari nahi thi……use meri wo himmat bha gayi jo mene us din jo kiya usase pata lag hi chukka tha, unke liye kapdo ka intejam kiya , our unke jism par kam kapde hone ke bawajud maine na hi unki taraf dekha na hi unhe sharm mehsus hone di bulki unki ijjat kiour unhe unke ghar le gaya……. fir uske papa jo sab bato se anjan apni beti ke sath aaya hua dekh kuch galat soch chuke the our mujhe darane ke liye unhone waisi bhasha ka prayog karna sahi samjha par unke ke muh se muh laga kar mera baat karna wo bhi bina dare …..kahi na kahi mere ye sare andaj divvya ke dil me ghar kar chuke the …..tab se wo roj raat ko bas mere hi khwab dekhti aarahi thi…..usne apne sapno me bohot si yaade bun li thi….me in sab baato se bilkul anjaan tha ……

.fir ek din subah wahi sab jo har din hota tha….par aaj kuch alag hone wala tha jo pehle se hi tay tha…….aaj Ballu kaka ne mera ghar mere rehne layak bana diya tha….aaj mujhe waha shift hona tha our apne hisab se apne kamre ko sajana tha…..our aaj avinash chacha……mujhe mere sare jamin jaydat ke kagjat mere hawale karne wale the…..jo unhone ek mahine pehle banwane diye the……unki achhi khasi pehchan our gav ke panchayat ki madat se kam juldi ho gaya jis kaam ko 3 mahine me lagte hai wo kaam un sabne milkar 1 mahine hi me pura kar diya tha……

Khair subah mai uth kar gaav ke chakkar lagane chala gaya tha jab so rahe the…din nikalte hi wapis aagaya……jaise hi ghar ke andar aaya…..samne mujhe avinash mujhe dikh gaye roj ki tarah akhbar padh rahe the…maine unhe morning wish kiya…...to wo mujhe dekhte huye bole……

Avinash : “morning vikram beta……”

Mai : “ha chacha ji”

Avinash : “karan ko bhi apne sath le jaya karo na isi bahane wo bhi kuch sikh lega tumhe dekh kar warna to alshi ki tarah der tak sota hai…”

Mai : “ha chacha ji kal se le jaya karunga….” Our me waha se apne kamre ki our jane wala tha ki ki unhone fir mujhe rok diya….

Avinash : “are han vikram tumhare pariwar ki jo jaydat ke kagaj tumne mangwaye the wo tayyar ho chuke the….aaj yaad se panchayat aajana …..kagjat ke sath puri jankari tumhe di jayegi……our sath hi sare gav walo ko ye bhi batana jaruri hai ki Thakur khandan ke tum waris ho……our ab se us sari jamino par tumhara adhikar hai……” maine hami bhari….

Mai : “ ji chacha ji samjh gaya our ek baat aapse kehni thi….ballu kaka se milkar aaraha hun ….to aaj me us ghar me shift hone ki soch raha tha…..” meri baat se avinash ke chehre par thodi udasi si mujhe dikhi….

Avinash : “mai cha…..” unki baat puri hone se pehle hi kamana chachi ne tok diya…..

Kamana : “ aagaye tum ye lo garma garam chay pi lo…….” Kamana ne avinash ke udas chehre ko dekha our puch liya….

Kamana : “ab aapko kya ho gaya thodi der pehle to gana gungunate huye akhbar padh rahe the aap…?” ispar avinash chacha ne jawab diya

Avinash : “ab ye mujhse kya puch rahi ho tum manchale se hi puch lo…..” chachi ne meri our dekha our pucha

Kamana : “kya hua vikram kya kar diya tumne?”

Vikram : “wo me …maine bas itna kaha tha ki me haweli me shift ho jata hun aaj……” ispar chachi bhi sad ho gayi fir kuch soch kar boli

Kamana : “avinash apko isme udas hone ki kya jarurat hai wo bas shift ho raha hai gaav chhod ke to nahi ja raha na….”

Avinash : “kamana me udas nahi hun bas iski adat ho gayi thi mujhe…..”

Kamana : “haan janti hun ye bhi to hamare pariwar ka hissa ban chukka hai….par uski baat bhi ekdam sahi hai…..me vikram ki baat par sehmat hun…. Our aapko bhi hona chhiye….”

Mai : “haan our me asani se aaplogo ka picha nahi chhodne wala.”

Avinash : “thik hai vikram beta par meri ek shart hai …..khana hamare sath hi khana hoga…..” chachi khush hote huye boli

Kamana : “ha ye shi kaha apne…” mai bhi muskurate huye bola..

Mai : “ye bhi koi kehne wali baat hai…..mujhe manjur hai…..sab manjur hai ….”

Kamana : “chalo ab ho gaya ho to ye chay piyo ….thandi hone se pehle…..tab tak me karan ko utha deti hun …” our wo chali gayi….

Humne chay pi our mai nahane chala gaya our nahakar bas towel me bahar aaya …..pehle to mera dhyan nahi tha me gana gungunate huye kamre me aaya our ayne ke samne khade hokar baalo par haath ferne hi wala tha ki mujhe nayan dikhi jo mere bed ke pass khadi dekh rahi thi….mai turant piche muda our usase pucha

Mai : “nayan ye kya harkat hai ……jao yaha se.” meri baat sunte hi usne najar niche kar li our kehne lagi

Nayan : “darwaja khula tha to me aagayi……”

Mai : “rehne do jao yaha se” wo apni jagah se nahi hili

Nayan : “mujhe apse kuch baat karni hai …….plz ek baar meri baat sun lo na aap.” Maine ek lambi saas chodte huye use jawab diya..

Mai : “dekho me janta hun tumhe kya kehna hai. job hi tum soch rahi ho wo sab galat hai …..dimag se nikalo our jao yaha se….”

Nayan : “agar aap jante hai to aaisa kyu dikhate ho aap hamesha ki jaise kuch jante nahi hai…..mai aapse pyar karne lagi hun ……mujhe aap ache lagte ho…our kuch dikhai nahi deta hai aapke alawa….” Maine shanti se jawab diya..

Mai : “dekho nayan , ye sab is umar me lagav ho jata hai our usi ko tum pyar samajh rahi ho…..samjhi ye sab dimag se nikal do our apni padhai par dhyan do…..samjhi ab jao yaha se…..” meri baat sun rahi thi uske aankho se ansu behne lage…

Nayan : “kya…kya me sundar nhi hun kya me aapko achi nahi lagti ….kya mujhme koi kami hai……ya kya me buri hun?????” wo subakte huye boli… mujhse uske ansu dekhe nahi ja rahe the…to mujhe koi na koi hal nikalna tha to maine jhooth bolne ki soch li our kaha.

Mai : “dekho nayan ye bachpana chhodo samjhi tumhari umar pyar karne ki nahi padhai me dhayn dene ki hai samjhi……our han tum sundar ho behad hi sundar our achi ladki ho…..par meri shadi pehle se ho chuki hai isliye me tumse dur rehta hun …..ab samajh gayi na ki maine tumhe mana kyun kiya……..ab dimag se sab nikalo our chup chap apni padhai par dhyan do warna me chacha chachi ko sab bata dunga ….” Meri baat sun kar wo ascharya se mujhe dekhne lagi our fir kuch samay dekhne ke baad rote huye kamre se bhaag gayi…..

Maine us baat par jyada dhyan na dete huye tayyar ho gaya our fir apna saman our sath me karan ko lekar haweli pahuch gaya our fir ….apna saman apne kamre me sahi se saja diya our panchayat ki our nikal gaya……

Panchayat me pahuncha to dekha pura gaav jama ho chukka hai….sath ki panchayat ke sare sadasya sarpanch our our bhi kai bade log waha moujud the…….our ek taraf ek badi si kursi par ek bujurg admi baitha mujhe dekh apni muchon par taav de raha tha uske bagal me dono tarah shayd uske bete hi the……mere waha pahunchte hi sare panch our log khade ho gaye…..to sarpanch ji ne sabko baithne ko keh diya……

Sarpanch : “aao vikram beta sab tumhara hi intejar kar rahe the, aao aapko sabse mila du…..”

Mai : “namaste sarpanch ji jaisa aapko thik lage….”

Sarpanch : “to mere pyare gaavwalo ye hai hamari shan hamare shri. Kamal singh Thakur ji ke unke aakhri waris. Vikram singh Thakur….aap sab to inse pehle bhi mil chuke hai our jante bhi hai…” maine bhi sabki our dekh kar sabko namate kaha

Fir sarpanch ji mujhe us bujurg admi ke pass le gaye our unse parichay karaya

Sarpanch : “beta ye hai yaha ke Thakur bhanu pratap singh, our ye unka chota beta ajay singh thakur our ye hai bada beta samarsigh Thakur….” Maine bhanu pratap singh ke pair chu kar ashirwad liya mere is harkat ki ummid bhanu pratap ko nahi thi….our na hi logon ko thi

Bhanupratap : “jite raho bete tumhe lambi umar mile…..” unhone muskurate huye kahan…par unke dono bete mujhe ajib tarike se ghur rahe the….

Mai : “aap sabse milkar khushi huyi……” fir sarpanch ji ne ek kar sabhi pancho se bhi milwa diya our fir chacha ji ne kagjat sabke samne rakh diye …..

Sarpanch : “gaav walo jaise ki aap sab ye jante hi hai ki aap log ab tak apne kheto ke sath sath Thakur pariwar ke kheton ko bhi sambhalte aaye ho …..par aaj wakt aagaya hai ki aaj se wo sari jamin vikram singh Thakur ki dekh rekh me hi rahe….is baat se koi inkar nahi kar sakta…...our is gaav ke shashak kamal singh Thakur ji ke banaye purine riwajo ke mutabik sabhi gaav walo ko unke kheton se kamaye kamayi ka 50% hissa vikram singh Thakur ke hawale kar diya jaye…..

Our pure panchayat ne ye faisala kiya hai ki jo is riwaj ka samman karte huye ye uska palan karega use uchit upahar diya jayega….our jo is riwaj ko na mankar uska apman karega use our uske pure pariwar ko gaav se bedakhal kar diya jayega…….aap sabhi ko pata hai fir bhi our ek baar mai us riwaj ko dourah raha hun……hamara yehi manana hai ki kamalsingh Thakur ji agar na hote our na ye riwaj na banaye hote to aaj ye gaav itna khush haal na hota……..our ye riwaj unke banaye huye hai ……unhe badalne ka hakk unke alawa kisi ko nahi hai….han agar use badalna chahe to sirf unke waris ise badal sakte hai par unke wais yani ke vikram singh Thakur ji ke Thakur banane ke 1 saal bad hi is riwaj me badlav kiya ja sakta hai jo is gaav our gaav walo ke hit me hi hoga……” ye sab sun kar gaav walo me khusur-pusur hone lagi….koi khush tha to koi dukhi ho gaya tha….our kuch to gussa bhi the par riwaj ka apman karne ki galti koi nahi kare ki bhool nahi karna chahta tha….ispar bhanu pratap ke bade bete ne kaha..

Samarsingh : “hum jante hai ki riwaj jaruri hai par gav walo ki mehnat ki kamayi lootna ye konsa tarika hai….ise anyay kehna sahi rahega” mujhe bhi kuch had tak ye baat sahi lagi….usme se kuch gaav wale uthe our bolne lage

Admi 1: “sarpanch ji bade Thakur sahi keh rahe hai ye to anyay hai hamre sath……” ek our admi khada tha wo bhi bola

Admi 2 : “hum riwaj ka palan karenge par aap hi sochiye agar hum 50% kamayi ka denge to hamara pariwar our unki jarurate kaise utha payenge….” Sarpanch kuch bolne ko hua to tabhi ek ourat uthi our boli

Ourat : “mera to marad bhi nahi hai me apne achhon ki padhai ka kharcha nahi utha paungi aaise me to baccho ka bhavishya andhere me chala jayega…..”our wo ankho se ansu nikalne lagi…..sarpanch fir se kuch bolne ko hua tabhi ajay singh Thakur bola

Ajay singh : “par ek baat bataye ye sab me kamal singh Thakur ka waris hai ya koi behrupiya hai jo sabko lootne ke hisab se aaya hai….jaha tak hamne suna hai wo to bhag gaya tha ……iska kya sabut hai ke ye wahi hai haan sarpanch ..” ispar avinash chacha apni jagah se uthe our ek kagaj uni our badhate huye bole

Avinash : “ye raha wo sabut jo hamare gav ke kuch bujurgo ne pakka kiya hai ki yehi vikram singh hai….uske pith par wohi nishan hai jo bachpan me unke pith par tha jo sabne dekha tha……our rahi baat inki sachhai ki to ye jaan lo ki inki shakal kamal singh Thakur ji se hubahu milti hai….ab bhi aapko shak hai to ye dekh lijiye……” aaisa kehte huye chacha ne pardada ji ki tasvir unhe dkhayi jab wo jawan the tab ki …..

Ye wo taswir thi jo us wakt agrez sarkar ne kamal singh Thakur ko pakadne ke liye inam me chapi thi….jise pardadi ne unke pyar me use apne ghar me saja kar rakha tha…..warna hum bharat wasiyon ke pass us wakt kaha se camera hota tha……

Tasvir dekh ajay singh chup ho gaya……fir sabne apni apni ray di…..pareshani batayi ispar sarpanch ji ne samadhan bhi bataya sabka hone ke baad maine apni baat kehne ki icha jahir ki…

Mai : “ me mafi chahta hun aap sabse,aapke mehnat ka hissa lene ke liye par riwaj ko badla nahi ja sakta…..par han agar 1 saal bad ise badla ja sakta hai to aaj jo aap tyag karenge uske badle me aap sabko 2 bigha jamin dunga…” meri baat sunkar sabko bohot ascharya hua ispar panchayat ne mujhe tokna chaha par mene nahi suni to sarpanch bole

Sarpanch : “ye kya kar rahe hai aap, ye sahi nahi hoga” ispar maine jawab diya..

Mai : “manta hun ye sahi nahi hoga par inki pareshaniya bhi to sahi hai…..jamin hamari huyi to kyya hua mehnat inhone hi ki hai our is jamin ko ubjau banaye rakha….ek tarah se dekha jaye to inse lene ke bajaye inhe hi dena chahiye inke is upkar ke badle…..to ye mera akhri faisla hai…our ye jamin mai es gaav ke har ek pariwar ko 2 bigha jamin di jayegi jisme aap our panchayat ka har ek sadasya shamil hai…..”

Sarpanch : “jaisa aapko thik lage….waisa hi hoga….” Ye sunkar bhanu pratap our unke bete gusse se waha se nikal gaye…bina kuch bole……. Maine unpar dhyan nahi diya…..maine fir bolna shuru kiya



Mai : “ yehi sahi mujhe laga to maine ye tay kiya jisase aapka bhavishya surakshit ho our aapki tarakki ka fal aapko our apke pariwar walo ko mile….our rahi baat aapke mehnat ka 50% hisse ki baat to mujhe yakin hai ki ye jo bhi rakam hai wo 2 bigha janim ke mukable bohot kam hogi………our ek baat mujhe na paiso ka lalach hai na jaydat ka ….mai yaha bas apne pariwar ke liye aaya tha par mai maine bohot der kar di aane me….our mere jagah wo hote to wo bhi yehi faisla karte , mai bas unke naam ko barkarar rakhna chahta hun…pariwar ka pyar to nahi pa saka …..to shayad aaplogo se mujhe thoda pyar our apnapan mile..….our ek jaruri baat isi mahine wo jamine aapsb ke nam kar di jayegi par riwaj ke mutabik mai riwajo me badlav karke wo jamin ke kagaj aapko 1 saal bad hi milengi gaav ke bade tyohar yani ke MELE ke din…”

Our usi ke sath sabke chehre khil gaye our sab mujhe dua dete huye apne ghar chale gaye….maine chacha se baat kar sab samjha diya our haweli aagaya our aram karne chala gaya…..

Chalo ab baat karne hai gaav ki our jaydad ki…..to gaav me karib 400 pariwar the yani ke sab ko 800 bigha se bhi jyada jamin deni thi yani ke 500 acre ke karib jamin gaav walo me battunga….

Ab ye bhi jan lo ki hamare pariwar ke pass kul milakar 1100 acre jamin hai…usme se 500 chali bhi gayi tab bhi 600 bachengi mere hisse me….waise mere hare k kadam ke piche ka hare k raaj samay ke sath ujagar honge……

Mai dopeher ki achi si nind lene ke baad fresh hua our fir chacha our chachi ke sath samay gujar diya our aaise hi aaj ka din bhi gujar gaya…..

Raat me me apne kamre me baithe property ke kagaj dekh raha tha……gaav ki our pass ke gaawo ki milakar kul 1100 acre jamin Thakur pariwar ke naam thi yani ke wo ab meri ho chuki thi …

“Kumar. Vikram Rajveer Singh Thakur.”

Ye laal aksharo me likha hua tha……mere chehre par muskan aagayi……fir me ek-ek kar sare kagaj dekhne laga ….

gaav ka ye bada sa ghar…..

gaav ke bahar pahadi ke pass wali jo haweli hai wo bhi mere hi naam par hai

sath hi sheher me bhi mere naam ek shoping mall bhi hai ye jaan kar mujhe thoda tajjub hua…..

our usi sheher me our do bade makan bhi hai jo ki sheher ke bicho bich bane huye hai….mujhe iski koi jankari nahi thi………par ab me jaan chukka tha…..maine almari me sare kagajat rakh diye sambhal kar our ghar ki chat par aagaya…..

mujhe raat ka andhera hamesha se pasand tha…….wo shanti wo thandi hawaye…mujhe khub bhati thi…..me chhat par tehelte huye pure gaav ko dekh raha tha…..me kafi dino se ye mehsus kar raha tha, ye gaav kafi alag hai, yaha ajib si shanti mehsus hoti hai…..yaha ke log, yaha ke riti riwaj kafi kuch alag hai.

mai bas gaav ki our dekh raha tha aaise hi kaafi raat ho chuki thi mere aankho me nind ka namonishan bhi nahi tha…..mujhe gaav ke bahar pahadi ki taraf kuch halchal dikhayi dene lagi…. mujhe laga koi apne kheto ki our ja raha hoga ye soch kar mai niche jane ko hua tabhi mujhe waha lagi aag dikh gayi…….mujhe thoda shak hua….to me turant us our badh gaya…….mai tezi se bhagte huye waha aapahuncha maine dekha wo aag bohot hi bhayanak tarike se us dhan ke khet ko apne lapete me le chuki thi………maine dekha wo dhan ka khet lagbhag adhe se jyada jal chukka tha…. Our kuch ki der me dekhte hi dekhte wo jagah raakh me tabdil ho gayi…..mai kar bhi kya sakta tha to maine aaspass un logon ki talash ki par mujhe koi nahi mila to me wapis aakar so gaya…..

subah meri nind khuli maine dekha mere lal bahadur {land} subah subah salami de rahe hai pure josh me. Mujhe bina kapdo ke sone ki aadat thi . .maine use dekh kar muskurate huye usase bola

mai : “saale kamiye yaha tujhe koi chut nahi milne wali samjha ab chup chap kone me jake so ja laal bahadur…” itna kehkar maine jaise hi samne dekha me hakka bakka reh gaya….samne mala garam chay liye darwaje par khadi mere lal bahadur ko aankh fade dekh rahi thi

mujhe uske chehre par pasina saaf najar aaraha tha mujhe bhi kuch nahi sujh raha tha…maine apne apne land ko chaddar me chupa liya… our.kuch der sochne ke baad maine unhe aawaj di….

Mai : “kaki……kaki???” maine thoda jor se kaha to unhe hosh aaya….unhone sharam se apna sir niche kar diya our dheere se boli

Mala : “babuji w…wo me chay layi thi aapke liye……” maine normal hote huye kaha

Mai : “kaki me chay kabhi nahi pita aap mujhe doodh hi de dijiye….” Mere aaisa kehne se achanak unhone apni aankhe badi karte huye mujhe ghoora

Mai : “kya hua kaki garam doodh hi to manga hai aap aaise kyu dekh rahi hai?”

Mala : “nahi babuji kuch nahi …me ..wo ..wo abhi leaayi….” Wo jane ko huyi tabhi maine unhe rok diya….

Mai : “kaki wo…wo mujhe maaf kar de mujhe darwaja band karke sona chahiye tha….” Unhone meri our bina dekhe hi jawab diya.

Mala : “nahi aapki koi galti nahi hai babu ji wo me hi bina aawaj diye aagayi thi…..aap kisi se mat kahe …..” maine muskurate huye jawab diya

Mai : “aaisi baat bhala koi kisi se kehta hai kya? Aap befikar rahiye kisi ko kuch nahi kahunga…par ek baat bolu, aap bohot sundar hai kaki…” mere itna sunte hi wo niche bhag gayi our apne bete ke haath doodh ka gilas bhej di….mai bhi muskurate huye doodh pi liya our uth kar nahakar niche aagaya….

Mala kaki najre chura rahi thi mene bhi unhe tang kiye bina bahar nikal kar avinash chacha ke ghar ki our chal diya… bich raste me hi tha ki mujhe chillane our rone ki aawaj aane lagi to me us our badh gaya waha kafi log jama ho rahe the….mujhe anadaja ho chukka tha is baat ka ki yaha bheed kyu hai…

Chacha bhi mujhe wahi mil gaye……chacha us pariwar ko dilasa de rahe the….

Avinash : “ sukhiya sambhalo khud ko, aaise haar man kar aaisa kadam nahi uthana chahiye tha tumhe…..” wo rote huye bola…

Sukhiya : “to kya karu avinash babu hamare pas koi vikalp nahi bacha .” fir se rone laga

Sarpanch : “sukhiya kya marne se sab thik ho jayega…..kyu apne bachho ki zindagi kharab karne par tula hai tu…thodi si bhi akal nahi hai tujhme…”

Sukhiya : “sarpanch ji mere khet jal gaye, sab kuch loot gaya….me karja kaise chukau wo log mujhe kaccha chaba jayenge…aaise me me karu to bhi kya karu”

Avinash : “tu to mar jayega our teri biwi ka kyat ere bachho ka kya ye to nahi socha na tu unhe pareshaniyon me chhood kar khud bhagne ki soch rahe ho…”

Sarpanch : “dekho sukhiya sabhal khud ko dimag shant rakh…..koi na koi hal nikal aayega…..par ye samajh nahi aaya ki aag lagi kaise…..?”

Sukhiya : “ab isase kya farak padta hai sab to raakh ban chukka hai…” tabhi maine aage badhte huye kaha….

Mai : “farak padta hai sukhiya kaka, ye aag lagi nahi lagayi gayi thi ….maine raat me dekha tha , jab me waha pahuncha tab tak sab jhal chuka tha…”

Avinash : “ye kya bol rahe ho kon the wo kya tumne unhe dekha…?”

Mai : “itni dur se mujhe dikhai nahi diya kon the par woe k se jyda log the our unhone hi aag lagayi hai mere pahunchne se pehle hi wo ja chuke the….” Meri baat sun kar sukhiya ka chehra peela pad gaya our wo shant ho gaya….

Avinash : “ to ye kisi ne jaan bujh kar kiya hai, par use isase kya milega?”

Sukhiya : “me nahi janta avinash babu.” Maine aage badh kar kaha ke kandhe par hath rakh diya our unhe kaha

Mai : “dekho kaka, jo hua so hua use badalna mumkin nahi hai, par aapko paiso ki jarurat ho to mujhse le lijiye jab aap ke pass aajaye tab louta dena…..” sukhiya our baki sabko ascharya hua Thakur hote huye mere juban se aaisi bhasha sun kar hajam nahi ho rahi thi

Sukhiya : “nahi nahi chote malik me pehle se hi karje me doob chukka hun our karja nahi utha sakta .” usne mere samne apne haath jode to maine unke hath pakad liye our unse kaha

Mai : “kaka me koi karja nahi de raha bas aapki madat kar raha hun…..mujhe apna samjh kar swikar kar lo our apna our pariwar ka khayal rakho bas our kuch nahi….” Meri baat sun sukhiya ne mere hath ko chum liya

Sukhiya : “chote malik me aapka ehsan kaise chukka paunga .”

mai : “apne ehsan nahi karte hai kaka sath dete hai samjhe aap.”

Sabhi log meri baat se prabhavit huye……gaav ke log mere aaise bartav ki vajah se mujhe pasand karne lege. Fir mohol thoda shant hua sab apne apne kaam me lag gaye ….. par me our avinash chacha wahi ruke …..avinash chacha ne mujhe ishare se side me bula liya…

Avinash : “vikram mujhe kuch gadbad lag rahi hai?” me bhi bat se sehmat hua

Mai : “mujhe bhi yehi lagta hai….sukhiya kaka ko ye pata hai ki iske piche kon hai…bas dhan jalne ki vajah se koi apni jaan nahi deta .”

Avinash : “me bhi yehi soch raha tha” maine chacha ko apne sath le kar gaya our sukhiya ke ghar me ghusa…..waha sabhi moujud the…sukhiya uski biwi unki dono betiya our ek beta…sabhi abhi bhi ansu baha rahe the hame dekhte hi sabne aansu poch liya…our aaise jatane lage jaise sab thik hai…

Bahut is story hain ek ke andar.

 

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Bahut is story hain ek ke andar.

sahi kaha ....mana ki shurwati dour me maine na to sex seen add kiye hai na our kuch masala par aage chal kar kahani our rochak banane wali hai.......isliye kahani ko real feel dene ki koshish kar raha hun......