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kya aap chahte hai ki me is kahani ko intresting banane ke liye photos our gifs ka tadka lagau??????


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Mai aaj apni ek nayi kahani shuru kar raha hun. is kahani ko me thoda hat kar likhe ki koshish karne wala hun. mana ki maine pichli kahani me kuch galtiya ki hongi our kisi karan wo kahani maine adhuri chhod di..
mai wo kahani bhi puri karunga par is kahani ke pura hone ke baad hi us kahani ke tarah mudna pasand karunga

ye kahani action se bharpur, thrill se khachakhach bharne ki puri koshish karunga, yaha sex bhi he our romanch bhi yaha daravne manjar bhi hai our pyar bhare mosam bhi....

mai sabhi dosto se ummid karta hun ki aap sab mere is dusre kahani par dher sara pyar barsayenge our pura saath denge.
OUR EK SABSE JARURI BAAT KAHANI KA HAR EK UPDATE HAR 2 DIN BAAD ME POST KARUNGA....AGAR KISI KARAN DERI HUYI TO AGLA AANE WALA UPDATE KAFI LAMBA HOGA.......WAISE KAHANI KE UPDATES ME DERI HONE KI KOI GUNJAISH NAHI HAI ....FIR BHI ME CLEAR KAR RAHA HUN

Mai aap sab se vinati karunga ki kahani mai likh raha hun to mujhe motive kare na ki usme kamiya nikal kar mujhe demotive na kare.......is kahani ko me thoda realistic tarike se likhne ka prayas karunga isliye kahani aapko pasand aaye yehi meri koshish rehne wali he......

aapko is kahani ko padhne me jyada interest aaye our utne hi maja aaye iski puri koshish karunga


like our comments karne apna pyar jataye
shukriya
 
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aaj chota update isliye chota sa de diya hai taki update 16 ko lamba our meaning full bana saku ...is update ko itna hi rakhna jaruri tha.....
 

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Shukriya aap sabhi ka me is story ko pura karunga dosto..... Har plot ko soch samjh kar aage badhana hota h so thoda late ho ja raha hai.... Juldi juldi karne ki koshish lagi h
Writer bhai time Lena hai toh le sakte ho utna koi badi baat nai hai bas regular update de dena😅

{Bas itna kahunga ki story acchi hai tumhari kyuki dimag band karke nai padhna padta hai 😅 kyuki bekar ke plot developments nai aa rahe hai story mein jo ki bohot hi sahi direction hai }
 

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Raat ka khana hum sab ne mil kar khaya, bua maa mere sath sona chahti thi our prerna bhi mere sath hi sona chahti thi ….to fir maine living room yani ke hall me hi bister laga diye our sabhi ek sath so gaye…. Prerna mai bua maa our fufa ji aaise tino ek sath so gaye….bua maa ne mujhe apne bacche ki tarah pass me sulaya tha mujhe kafi sukun mil raha tha……..aaise hi me mamta se bhari nind me so gaya…..

Subah jab meri nind khuli to bua maa kichen me kuch kar rahi thi, our gudiya raani badi sayani mere sine par pair rakh kar bade aaram se so rahi thi …….maine use dekha wo baccho jaise so rahi thi use dekh mujhe hasi aarahi thi fufa ji nahakar bathroom se bahar aaye our bedroom me chale gaye wo wapis aaye our prerna ko aaise sote dekh kar wo bhi hasne lage our unhone bua maa ko bulaya…unhone dekha to woo bhi hasne lage jor –jor se….hamari hasi sun kar prerna jag gayi our hame haste dekh samajh gayi kya hua hai , aaj fir wo soye huye pankha ban gayi thia…..

Prarna : “haa haan samjh gayi aap log kyu has rahe ho, isme meri kya galti hai haan ye to meri bimari hai…nind me pankha ban jana “ ispar maine kaha

Mai : “are meri gudiya hum sab isliye has rahe hai , tu aaise so rahi hai isliye nahi tu sote huye nanhe baccho jaise so rahi thi…..our pehle tu apna chehra dekh le jaa….” Meri baat sun kar sab log our jor se hasne lage….wo turant bhagi aayne me dekhne ke liye jab usne dekha wo khud bhi hasne lagi……. Our aakar apni maa ko dekhte huye boli

Prerna : “ maa aapki ye adat kab jayegi ….aapne haldi se fir meri muche bana di ….aap sach me badmash ho rahi ho badhti umar ke sath” our hasne lagi….

Bua maa : “ hahahahahahahahahaha……………….. are meri pyari beti me tere liye hameshaa aaise hi badmashi karti rahungi jab tak tu yaha hai, teri shadi ke bad to me nahi aapaungi na hamesha tere sath rehne ke liye….”

Prerna : “ aap chinta mat karo mai aapko dahej ke taur par sath me le jaungi haha”

Fufa : “kyu mujhe bhookha marna hai kya jo ise sath me le jayegi…..?”

Prerna : “ wo mere pitashri aapko bhi le jaungi samjhe” sab normal ho gaye

Bua maa : “tune bol diya isi me khus hai beti.”

Prerna :” mai aap logon se dur nahi hone wali maa…” tabhi mera phone bajne laga our mai waha se chhhat par chala aaya….



Mere phone par vardha ka phone tha……maine phone utha liya

Mai : “haan bolo vardha…….”

Vardha : “ji malik me sham tak pahunch jaunga me aadhe raste me hun…..”

Mai : “ thik hai, mere kahe mutabik sab ho gaya?”

Vardha : “ haan malik our ek jaruri baat batani thi…..police aapke bare me puchtach kar rahi hai aaisa mujhe sunane ko aaraha hai, thoda sawdhan rahiye.” Maine muskurakar kaha

Mai : “ haan mujhe is bat ka pehle se hi shak tha…..tum aajao fir bat karenge…..”

Vardha : “ji malik.” Our phone cut ho gaya … tabhi piche se prerna ki aawaj aayi…..

Prerna : “ bhaiiyya maa niche bula rahi hai….judli chalo…”

Mai : “ haan chalo…” hum niche ja rahe the to prerna ne pucha? “

Prerna : “bhaiya ye vardha kon hai…..? “ mai samjh gaya usne sun liya hai

Mai : “acha vardha , maine use our uske kuch admiyon ko apne liye our apne ghar raksha ke liye bulaya hai isliye wo apne kuch admiyon ke sath aaraha hai….” Wo samajh gayi

Prerna : “oo acha ab me samjhi……” hum aachuke the….

Bua maa : “vikram jao juldi se naha lo our garma garam nasta khao…”

Mai : “ji bua maa abhi aaya …” mai chala gyaa nahane….

Fufa aaj bade khush the our khushi –khushi kaam par chale gaye…





Dusri taraf



Kamalpuri thane me vikram ke bare me bare me sari jankari ikattha ho chuki thi……..daroga bus paiso ke bare me soch raha tha use vikram ki jankari ke badle paise jo mil rahe hai…..isliye uske man me laddu futne lage the………usne turant apni gadi nikali our bhanupratap singh Thakur ke haweli ki taraf apne ek hawaldar samet chala gaya………

Wo kuch hi der me wo haweli aapahuncha….bhanupratap singh Thakur ….daroga ko dekhte hi samajh gaya ye sala kamina aagaya apni roti lene our mere matlab ki chij dene…

Bhanupratap singh : “ aaaoo… sajjan , aab juldi se khush khabri sunao……or apni muh mangi rakam le jao….” Daroga khush ho gaya …

Daroga : “ji aap to antaryami ho maybaap, khushkhabri ye hai ki uski sari janam kundali hai mere pass…our “ usne baat adhuri rakhi

Bhanupratap singh : “our kya bolo aage….” Daroga ne jawab diya

Daroga : “ dusri baat jo pata chali hai wo achi nahi hai,”

Bhanupratap singh : “ batao mujhe uske bare me sab kuch “

Daroga : “ ji suniye

Iska naam vikram singh hi hai ,jab wo yaha se bhaga uske baad wo ek train se south ki our gaya, waha kuch din jhopdiyon me raha waha ke logon ke sath rehne ke karan uska swabhav bhi mawaliyon jaisa ho gaya tha….uske baad jinho ne use panah di thi us pariwar ke liye ye har kaam karne laga…kuch dango ke karan us pariwar ko mar diya gaya our us ghar ki ourton ki ijjat loot li gayi unke mohalle me kai pariwaro ke sath ye hadsa ho gaya………our ye jis leader ke karan hua tha isne uska sir bich bajhar me kaat diya jiske karan waha dar ka mohol paida ho gaya tha….our ise jail ho gayi…..our use baal sudhar grah me rakha gaya….waha usne padhai ki..uske ache bartav our padhne ki lagan dekh bade adhikariyon ne use aage padhaya…usme aaye sudhar ke karn use achi nokari di jane wali thi par usne police ki nokri ke liye minnate ki

our police ki nokri pai….uske baad usne kais are band case ko closed kar diya tha…….dhire dhire uski police ki nokari uska junun ban gaya …..our iske chalte uske kais are dushman ban gaye….our uspar mouke dekh kar hamle hone lage par ye hamesha bach jata par jakhmi ho jata …..fir ek din isne tang aakar waha ke sare gundo our mawaliyon ko marne ka tay kiya our incounter ke naam par sabko marne laga…..sara sheher iske is ravaiye se dar me rehne laga to iske adhikariyon ne ise nokri se nikal diya our use sheher chood kar jane ke liye keh diya taki uske dushman use dhund nap aye…. Uske bad wo 3 saal tak kisi ko nahi dikha ….na kisi ko mila…..fir ek din is gaav me aaya uske baad ki kahani aap jante ho Thakur sahib

Bhanupratap singh : “ooo to ab me samjha usne mere admiyon ko dhool kaise chakha di akele hokar bhi……” daroga ko chinta hone lagi

Daroga : “kya kaha aapne use marne ki koshish ki hai, wo ek pagal sand hai ….wo apne dushmano ko jinda nahi rakhta hai…..”

Bhanupratap singh : “ haan to wo mere raste ka patthar hai , use mujhe har haal me hatana hai, tujhe jo chahiye me tujhe dunga…..uske khilaf case kar jo karna h wo tu khud soch le..sajjan yadav….” Uske man me lalach aagya par dar bhi uske sath muft me puche pad gaya tha uske

Daroga : “ agar wo bach gaya to wo picha nahi chhodega yad rakha malik , me to apna transfer karwa hi lunga aap khud ka dekh lena….”

Bhanupratap singh : “ wo jab jinda bachega tab ka tab dekhenge…our chinta mat kar tera naam kahi nahi aayega”

Daroga : “thik hai me jitna ho sake karunga aapke liye…” Bhanupratap singh janta tha daroga bas paiso ke liye ye sab kar raha hai tabhi use ek baat yad aayi

Bhanupratap singh : “dekho sajjan mujhe yakin hai ajay ke you gayab hone me usi ladke ka haan ho sakta hai….isliye tu is baat ka pata laga… our haan tune kya kaha tha south me uske dushman hai ..” daroga samajh gaya baat ko

Daroga : “samajh gaya aap kya kehna chahte hai”

Bhanupratap singh : “samajh gaya na to ab tu un sab ko ye khabar pahuncha de ki wo yaha is kamalpuri gaav me hai…..aaye our use yaha se le jakar uska kissa khatam kar de ….” Daroga ko bhi ek ummid dikhne lagi

Daroga : “ ji malik matlab sap bhi mar jaye our lathi bhi na toote……me chalta hun “

Bhanupratap singh : “ are sajjan tu kab se sudhar gaya ye to lete jaa……tera inaam hai aaj 4 guna de raha hun kyun ki tunhe dher sare raste khol diye use sabak sikhane ke liye samjha ….” 4 lakh rupee pakar sajjan bohot khush hua our waha se nikal gaya…..thane ki our…..
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Daroga sajjan ke waha ke jane ke baad bhanupratap singh ne turant apne bete samarsingh ko sandesh bhej kar use bulawa bhej diya…..samarsingh gaav ke jangle ki taraf apne bhai ki talash me kuch logon ke sath gaya hua tha….par ajay singh ka na to kuch pata chal pa raha tha our na hi koi khabar mil pa rahi thi…….wahi thane me aane ke baad sajjan singh ne sabhi hawaldaro our apne sathiyon ko 5000-5000 hajar ka inaam diya thaki unki mehnat ke karan hi daroga ko itne paise bakshish me mile the…

Wahi sheher me mai apne Mall pahunch gaya our our prerna ke sath apne office me chala gaya……maine prerna ko sare mall ki jimmedari uske hawale kar di ……our maine ye announced bhhi kar diya ki aaj se is mall ki malkin prerna hi hai…..ye jankar sabko vishwas nahi hua ki me uske naam ye mall kyu kar raha hun….par jab maine unhe bataya ki prerna meri sagi behen hai jo bachpan me bichad gayi thi….our aaj pure 19 saal baad mai prerna se mila hun to sab hairan reh gaye……..prerna bhi bohot khush thi jab uske prati logon ka pyar dekh….bua maa bhi khush thi mere aane se pariwar pura ho gaya tha…aaj kai salo baat uske chehre ki wo khushi uski biwari ko najarandaj kar rahi thi……..fufa bhi khush the aaj kyun ki unhe bhi wi sukun mil agya tha jiski wo talash kar rahe the…….unhone apne kaam par sabhi sathiyon ko ye khush khabri bata di ki unka beta wapis aagaya ….ye khabar sun kar sabne fufa ji ko badhaiya di our unki khushi me shamil ho gaye..

Wahi mall me bhi maine sabhi logon ko gifts bate our unke atmavishwas ko badhawa diya….wo sab khushi khushi apne apne dukan par lout gaye our kaam karne lage…mai prerna ke sath office me aaya kyun ki mujhe kuch yaad aaya our uske bare me usase baat karna jaruri tha ….

Hum baith kar baat karne lage

Mai : “gudiya mujhe ek baat to bata, buaa maa ko kya bimari hai?” meri bat sun kar wo boli

Prerna : “ bhaiya maa ko na tension lene ke karan unko saas lene me problem hai..our usi ke karan wo jyada bimar rehti hai.”

Mai : “ thik hai mujhe unki report de dena…..hum unko mere pehchan ke ek dr hai unke pass le chalenge.”

Prerna :” par bhaiya abhi to ek aspatal me unka ilaj ho raha hai na….fir ye sab kyuu?” maine use samjhate huye kaha

Mai : “ haan par maine ye socha he ki ab ialaj me jaha kahu wahi hoga taki bua maa juldi se thik ho jaye.. wo riste me meri bua to hai par maa se kam bhi nahi hai isliye mai unhe bua maa kehta hun….”

Prerna : “thik hai bhaiyya jaisa aapko thik lage…..” mai bas muskuraya….

Mai : “waise tumhari padhai ka kaisa chal raha hai gudiya….” Mere is sawal se wo boli

Prerna : “ kaha bhaiya, 12th tak hi padh payi hun uske baad to paiso ki jarurat thi to mai yaha job kar rahi thi…..”

Mai : “thiik hai koi bat nahi tum is saal admission lelo ab tum aage padhna jo tum chaho…..”

Prerna : “ sacchi bhaiya kya me aage padh sakti hun????”

Mai : “haan isme puchne wali kya bat hai tumhe aage padhna hi chhaiye” wo meri bat sun kar khushi se apni jagah se uthi our mere gale lag gayi

Prerna : “thank you bhaiya thank you so much “ our mere gaalo par usne kiss kar di

Mai : “ tere liye kuch bhi gudiya ..” hum aaise hi baat karte huye apna wakt gujarne lage maine prerna ke aaj tak ke zindagi ke wo har sukh dukh ke bare me usase jaan liya…..our maine soch liya apne pariwaar ki har khushi ke liye mai har ek kwahish puri karunga…..chahe wo job hi ho

Hum dono fir shehe me ghumne nikal pade……wahi ……maldivs me…..miss eleven apne roj marra ki zindagi me vyast ho chuki thi….par fir bhi wo bohot satark thi……wo sheher me apne khabriyon jariye use har aane jane wale deshi-videshi paryatakon par najar gadaye huye thi…..waise bhi maldivs me eleven ko haath lagana koi baccho ka khel nahi tha…….eleven ko yaha kisi tarah ka koi dar to nahi tha par ….jis tarah se wo pichle hades me bachi thi…us pal ko sahi dhang se dekha jaye to jisne bhi uspar hamla kiya tha wo koi sadharan shaksh to nahi hoga …..jisne bhi ye sajish rachi thi wo jarur koi bade unche oudhe wala tha …..use utsukta ho rahi thi us insaan ke bare me janane ki jisne use marne ke liye apne sathiyon ko uske ghar bheja wo bhi aadhi raat gaye…….isi baat ki tehkitak karne ke liye eleven ne uske sabse khass our wafadar sathi ya kahe ristedar……..jiska naam hai Robert jo uske sage chacha lagte hai…….maldives me kadam rakhte hi eleven ne apne chacha Robert ko is baat ke the tak jane ke liye kaha tha…..our unhone waisa hi kiya…our sari jankari juta kar wo aaj eleven se milne aaye huye the…………robert ne aate hi apni batiji ko apne gale se lagaya …..

Robert : “ kaise ho meri bacchi……”

Eleven : “puch kya rahe ho bade papa…..aapko kaise lag rahi hun bataiye….”

Robert : “ hamesha ki tarah meri pari bitiya lag rahi ho tum “

Fir thodi idhar udhai ki bate hui fir wo dono mudde par aa pahunche

Eleven : “ bataiye bade papa kya pata chala?” ispar thoda serious hote huye unhone jawab diya

Robert : “ hmm, baat bohot pechida hai beti…….”

Eleven : “me kuch samjhi nahi kya mera shak sahi hai….” Naa me sir hilate huye Robert ne kaha

Robert : “ nahi is baat tum galat ho , wo sab tumhe isliye target kar rahe hai kyun ki tum hi wo ek louti insaan ho jise us shaks ka pata hai …….our wo sirf our sirf tumhare jariye hi us tak pahunch sakte hai……isliye us raat unhone apne ek choti si tukdi waha tumhare ghar bheji thi taki tum waha se bhag kar siddha uske pass pahuncho, tumhe marne ka unka koi irada nahi tha……our naa hai kyun ki tum unke bohot kaam ki ho….”

Eleven : “oooh to ab mai samjhi ye sab is tarah se chal raha hai……tabhi to mai sochu ki mere aaisa koi dushman hai ni jo itni ghatiya harkat ko anjaam de sake….to is baat se saaf Jahir hai wo mere sir tak pahunchna chahte hai……”

Robert : “ bilkul sahi kaha beti wo uske piche hai….our is baar wo akele nahi hai , unhone is baar apne saath bohot se khatarnak sanghtano ko shamil kiya hai…..jo duniya me sabse jyada khatarak logon me shamil hai……..kuch bada hone wala hai meri bacchi…tumhe use agah karna hoga …..taki wo khud ka bachav kar sake…” apne chacha ki ye baat sun kar eleven thoda tension me aagayi….

Eleven : “ matlab baat bohot hi gambhir hai , mere sir ko agah karna bohot jaruri hai…. Bade papa mai chati hun aap khud ye sandesh lekar jaye jo me ek chitthi par likh rahi hun our haan aap khud unhe sab kuch batana jo mujhe abhi bataya hai…”

Robert : “ thik hai beti mai kal hi yaha se rawana ho jata hun”

Eleven : “ ji bade papa me aapki ticket book karwati hun…..chaliye khana khate hai….” Our dono khana khane chale gaye….



Wahi gaav me bhanupratap ne apni chal vikram singh yani ke mere khilaf rach di thi uska eklouta mohra tha daroga sajjan yadav……..uske jariye wo mera patta saf karne ki yojna banayi ja rahi thi….wahi ek our amrita kuch soch nahi pa rahi thi ki aakhir use aage konsa kadam uthana chahiye..jisase ghar me darar ban jaye our baat bete me foot pad jaye…jiske chalte wo ek-ek ko kiye ki saja de sake……amrita ki dushami is ghar ke mardo se thi…orton ne kuch nahi bigada tha ye soch kar usne apni yojnaye banayi thi…..

Ek taraf gaav me sukhiya ka priwaar kaafi khush tha …par kahi na kahi thoda dar bhi tha pakde jane ka…….dimple apne padhai par dhyan nahi de pa rahi thi use reh rehkar wo din yaad aaraha tha….wo hamesha yehi soch lekar baith jati thi…….agar chote Thakur nahi hote to mera kya hota meri behen ka kya hota mera pura pariwaar bikhar jata …….our jis tarah se vikram ne un sabko mout dedi our ajay singh ko maar diya…….our mere chehre par dar ka koi nishan hi nahi tha…meri wo himmat our takat ……maa beti dono nangi hone ke bawajud bhi mera unki our koi akarshan na dekh kar………kahi na kahi use ye bhaa gaya tha…..par wo is baat se bekhabar.......

Par chintajanak baat ye thi ki sukhiya ki beti amrita us hadse ke baad se dari sehmi si rehne lagi thi…wo har choti aawaj se darne lagi thi……na kisi se koi baat karti na kisi se milti na to wo apnne school ja rahi thi…..is baat se anjaan sukhiya our uske ghar wale apne apne soch me hi khoye huye raha karte hai……..

Dusri taraf sheher me divya mujhse mila chahti thi par na to uske pass mera koi phone number tha na koi pata tha…..wo bas gaav ka naam janti thi uske alaawa kuch nahi janti thi……pr uske pita rajendra mathur yani ke mr.DGP unhone police hone ke naate vikram singh Thakur yani ke mai…..meri saari jankari nikalwayi….our apne dost vishal yaadav….use bhi sari jankari batayi…..rajendra mathur mere bare me sari bate janane ke baad bohot hi prabhavit huye mere vyaktiva our bahaduri ke karname jaan kar our ye bhi ke me na to jhukne walo me se hun our na to tootne walo me se hun……unhone mere sare records check kiye …jiske bad unke najar me mere prati ek alag hi akarshan ban gaya……..

Dusri our kuch log ek tannel se niche ki our ja rahe the ….ek train se jo jamin ke niche bane ek lab ki our ……unhone karib 1 ghante ke safar ke baad apni manjil par train rok di our niche utar kar andar lab me aaye our unhone kisi dr se baat kar ke ek bade se parsal ko utha liya our waha se wapis nikal gaye…. Ye vahi jagah hai jiska video eleven k e ek khabri dwara liya gaya tha….wo dr our uska malik yaha se lab ko shift karne me lage huye the kyun ki unhe shak hai ki koi yaha tak pahunch jayega .. is shak ke binah par unhone is jagah ko khali karna hi behtar shamjha kyun ki ye pichle 30 saalo ki mehnat hai to wo kisi tarah ka koi risk nahi chahte the….

To be continue…………..
 

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Bohot hii shandar update h bhai
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Subah ki kiran ke sath meri nind khul gayi…. Bua maa kal li tarah aaj bhi subah jaldi uth kar naha chuki thi ….unhone ghar me ek chota sa mandir banva liya tha…..jaise sabke ghar me hota hai……maine dekha prerna to kal ke jaise hi mere sine par pair laad kar so rahi thi….fufa ji subah juldi chale gaye the kaam par, maine prerna ke paise apne sine se hataye our uske najdik chala gaya our uske gaal ko apne daton me pakad liya our jor se kaat liya….wo dard se chullate huye uthi…….wo our kuch bolti usase pehle mai nahane bhag gaya….

Thande pani se nahane ka alag hi maja hai, nahate huye mujhe achanak kuch yaad aaya…..vardha kal sham ko aane wala tha to kyu nahi aaya, kya kahi fas to nahi gaya who….usne koi call bhi nahi kiya……par aaise kaise ho sakta hai….aaise hi soch raha tha….

Tabhi mujhe ek our baat yaad aagayi ki mai khud usase milne wala tha ,

Mai : “ dhatt teri ki mujhe milne jana tha use tay kiye jagah par “

Our me fatafat nahakar bahar nikla our turant apni gadi lekar kisi ko na bataye waha se nikal gaya jaha vardha ko ane ke liye kaha tha….mai mall ke pass pahuncha to mujhe waaha koi nahi mila to mene socha wo usi waiter ke pass gaye honge to me us hotel ki taraf nikal pada……kuch der me hi mai waha aapahuncha , mujhe dekh kar us waiter ne ishara kiya hotel ke piche aajaye to mai waha gaya ….

Fir usne apne kamre ki our ishara kar bataya ki wo sab waha hai …..mai waha aaya mujhe dekhte hi vardha aakar mere samne jhuk gaya

Vardha : “ pranam malik aapke sath rehne ka aapki seva karne ka mouka mila hai is baat se mujhe bohot khushi hai…” baki 4 log bhi uske jaise niche jhuke huye the….

Mai : “ye kya kar rahe ho vardha ….aaj se tumko me vardha mama kahunga yaad rahe ..” usne ha kaha maine unhe uthaya our gale se lagaya

Mai : “tumne jo mere liye aaj tak kiya hai uska ehsaan me kabhi nahi chuka sakta mai ache se janta hun par mai koshish karunga”

Vardha : “nahi malik aap aisa mat sochiye aapke liye hame kuch karne ka mouka mila hai yehi hamare liye kafi hai…..”

Maine bakiyon ki taraf ishara karte huye pucha

Mai : “inki tariff? Ye hai tumhare bodyguard?”

Vardha : “haan malik – ye hai ekbaal-rajesh-mahesh our ye hai pandu”

Mai : “ thik hai chalo chalte hai ghar jana hai me bina bataye aaya hun yaha tumhe lene …..”

Vardha : “ ji malik “ sab gadi me baith gaye our maine gadi aage badhayi ……

Mai : “ dekho vardha mujhe tum par bharosa hai isliye me in Charon ko sath me rakhne ke liye raji hun par meri kuch sharte hongi. Jo sabko manani hogi, meri sartho ka ullanghan kiya gaya to tum jante ko me kya karunga ye mujhe batane ki jarurat nahi hai na” usne kaha

Vardha : “ji malik maine inhe pehle hi samjha diya hai…aap chinta na kare”

Mai : “ fir bhi me batana chahta hun, sab log ab dhyan se suno, our apne dimag me set karlo….aaj se tum mere sath mere ghar me ya fir haweli me rahoge …..lekin ek bat ache se dimag me daal lo mere ghar me kisi bhi ourat ya ladki se bat karte samay hamesha apni najre niche honi chahiye …….our tabhi baat karna jab bohot jaruri ho ya wo khud baat kare…..our ye ghar ke rule bahar bhi lagu honge…….kisi ladki ourat se battamiji nahi han agar koi pasand aati hai to mujhe batana mai khud shadi kara dunga…….our ha mere nokar nahi ho tum sab ek dost jaise par apni jimmedari our had dono ko bholna mat thik hai…”

Sab ek sath : “ji samjh gaye. “

Vardha : “ bacche samajhdar hai malik wo aisi harkate nahi karege”

Mai : “mai janta hun vardha mama, to bataiye kya jaruri bat hai jo aap batana chahte the?”

Vardha : “ police walo ke najar me aap aagaye ho, sajjan yadav aapko fasane ki sajish rach raha hai…..our use kuch our bhi pata chala hai apke bare me, jo ki sahi nahi hai, wo iska pura fayda uthane wala hai”

Mai : “koi bat nahi vardha mama karne do jise jo karna hai us Thakur ko uska beta milne se raha “

Vardha : “hahahaha mujhe pata hai kya kiya hoga apne”

Mai : “tumse kuch chupa nahi hai mama”

Aaise hi jaruri bate karte huye hum ghar aagaye…. Prerna bas apne office jane ke liye taiyyar baithi thi…..mere aate hi wo bhadak gayi…

Prerna : “kaha chale gaye the , jante ho kitni pareshan ho gayi thi mai …” maine use apne gale se lagaya our kaha

Mai : “mai to kahi nahi gaya tha bas in logon ko lane gaya tha” prerna ne unhe dekha our pucha

Prerna : “ye kon hai bhaiya ?” maine vardha ki our ishara kiya our kaha

Mai : “ ye vardha hai our ro log hai ekbaal-rajesh-mahesh our ye hai pandu ye sab mere sath gaav me rahenge “

Prerna : “ thik hai bhaiya….par aap yahi rook jao na hamare sath”

Mai : “han mera bhi man hai par mujhe bohot jaruri kaam karne hai isliye mera gaav me hona bohot jaruri hai” tabhi bua maa bhi aagayi

Bua maa : “ kaha chale gaye the beta tum, kuch kha kar to jate na…”

Mai : “ aab aagaya hun na maa inse milo ye hai vardha our ye inke sathi hai , ye gaav me hamare kheto our ghar ki rakhwali karenge “

Bua maa : “ye thik kiya, Namaste bhaisahab”

Vardha : “ shukriya badi malkin, apse mil kar khushi huyi “

Bua maa : “ are behen bol sakte ho mujhe aap”

Vardha : “ haan behen jaise ho aap pan mere liye badi malkin hi thik hai. Ye meri aapse reqvest hai ”

Mai : “ rehne do bua maa isase aap nahi jit sakti ye aaise hi hai ”

Bua maa :” thik hai chalo sab log fresh ho jao me khana banati hun sabke liye……” prerna ne kaha

Prerna : “bhaiya tab tak aap mujhe mere office tak chhod aao na please .” maine uska hath pakadte huye kaha

Mai : “ please wagera ki kya jarurat hai meri gudiya chalo chalte hai..” our hum dono nikal gaye…….

Wahi dusri our divya our anamika kahi ja rahi thi dono apni bike par thi to anamika ki najar meri gadi par padi…..gadi dekh kar samjh gayi ki ye meri gadi hai….our mere sath kisi ladki ko dekh kar usne turant divya se kaha

Anamika : “ye divya wo dekh tera hero kisi ladki ke sath ghum raha hai” mai our prerna haste huye bate kar rahe the …..hamara dhyan nahi tha unki our jaise hi signel green hua hum aage badh gaye

Divya ne signal tod diya our hamare picha karne lagi….kuch der bad hum mall ke bahar aakar rukhe our sath me hath pakad kar ekdusre se chipak kar chalne lage ise dekh kar divya jal gayi our gusse me dekhne lagi

Mai : “ gudiya tera admission ka kya hua kuch socha ki nahi?” ispar meri our dekhte huye boli

Prerna : “haan bhaiya maine subah hi ek collage me baat kar li hai bas mujhe admission start hone ka wait karna hoga aaisa unhone kaha hai.”

Mai : “ thik hai gudiya, ek bat bata tujhe car chalani aati hai?” ispar usne naa me apna sir hilaya

Prerna : “ nahi aati hai bhaiya, kyu puch rahe ho aap?” maine uske mathe par sabke samne kiss kiya to wo dono our jalan mehsush karne lagi

Divya : “ dekh kaise chumma chati kar raha hai wo me uski jaan lelungi chudail kahi ki…”

Anamika : “ kuch bhi mat bol tu pehle wo koun he ye jaan lete hai”

Divya : “janana kya hai kamini dekh use kaise chipki huyi hai mere rajkumar se….”

Anamika : “acha wo tera kaise ho gaya wo to uska lag raha hai. Kya pata wo pehle se hi sath ho dono “ divya bhi sochne lagi

Divya : “chup kar kuch bhi mat bol yaar dil mat tod tu ab mera “

Anamika : “ are khud soch na dono ko dekh kar kitne khus lag rahe hai dono jaise ek dusre ke liye hi bane ho” divya dekhne lagi uski aankho me pani bhar aaya tha…

Mai : “ are gudiya mai isliye puch raha hun kyun ki main tere liye ek gadi lene wala hun taki meri pyari gudiya jab collage jaye to badi thaath se jaye ….bas bohot ji li garibi me ab tu mere mutabik apni lifestyle chunegi samjhi” wo mujhe dekhte huye boli

Prerna : “ acha our aisa kyu karu me aapke pasand ki lifestyle”

Mai : “kyun ki tum meri behen ho meri jaan ho samjhi our is mall ki malkin to apna status banaye rakhna tum ye meri kwashish hai samjhi ki nahi batao ni manogi meri bat “ muskurate huye boli

Prerna : “ haan mere pyare bhaiya jaisa aap kaho “ bat karte huye hum office pahunche maine use bye kehkar waha se bahar jane laga

Divya anamika chup gayi taki me unhe dekh nap au …mere jate hi divya waha baithi hamari secretry se bat karne lagi

Divya : “suniye miss abhi jo andar gayi wo kon hai ?” secretry ne unhe dekh our jawab diya

Secretry : “wo hamari boss hai yani ke is mall ki malkin hai . aapko koi kaam hai unse?”

Divya : “kuch nahi bas janana tha ki wo kon h bas itna hi”

Secretry : “unka naam hai prerna surya yadav ….wo sheher ke dusri our rehti hai , our yaha ki malkin hai“

Anamika : “acha our abhi jo ladka yaha se gaya wo kon hai?” secretry ko kuch ajib laga use shak hone laga ki ye dono kya janana chah rahe hai kuch to gadbad hai isliye usne jhooth bola

Secretry : “kya janna hai aapko sach sach batao?”

Anamika : “wo dono kon lagte hai ek dusre ke ye janana hai kyun ki wo ladka vikram hamara dost hai” unpar vishwas nahi ho raha tha isliye secretry ne jhooth bolne ka tay kiya taki use shak tha kuch khatre ka

Secretry : “wo dono juldi shadi karne wale hai …ye property vikram singh ki hai unhone hi prerna madam ko yaha ki owner banaya hai …our kuch janana hai to aap madam se bat kar lijiye ….” Uski ye bat sun kar divya ke ankho se ansu nikalne lage…..secretry ke bato se anamika samjh gyi dono fas jayengi bevajah isliye wo divya ko lekar ghar chali gayi divya pure raste ro rahi thi uska dil toot gaya tha uske sajaye sapne bhi bikhar gaye the

Wo ghar jate hi kamre me ghus gayi or rone lagi anamika ne use samjhaya par koi fayda nahi hua fir anamika haar kar ghar chali gayi

Mai wapis aakar sabke sath khana khaya our bua maa se ijajat lekar ….sare jaruri saman lekar gaav ki our rukh pakad liya…














 

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Subah ki kiran ke sath meri nind khul gayi…. Bua maa kal li tarah aaj bhi subah jaldi uth kar naha chuki thi ….unhone ghar me ek chota sa mandir banva liya tha…..jaise sabke ghar me hota hai……maine dekha prerna to kal ke jaise hi mere sine par pair laad kar so rahi thi….fufa ji subah juldi chale gaye the kaam par, maine prerna ke paise apne sine se hataye our uske najdik chala gaya our uske gaal ko apne daton me pakad liya our jor se kaat liya….wo dard se chullate huye uthi…….wo our kuch bolti usase pehle mai nahane bhag gaya….

Thande pani se nahane ka alag hi maja hai, nahate huye mujhe achanak kuch yaad aaya…..vardha kal sham ko aane wala tha to kyu nahi aaya, kya kahi fas to nahi gaya who….usne koi call bhi nahi kiya……par aaise kaise ho sakta hai….aaise hi soch raha tha….

Tabhi mujhe ek our baat yaad aagayi ki mai khud usase milne wala tha ,

Mai : “ dhatt teri ki mujhe milne jana tha use tay kiye jagah par “

Our me fatafat nahakar bahar nikla our turant apni gadi lekar kisi ko na bataye waha se nikal gaya jaha vardha ko ane ke liye kaha tha….mai mall ke pass pahuncha to mujhe waaha koi nahi mila to mene socha wo usi waiter ke pass gaye honge to me us hotel ki taraf nikal pada……kuch der me hi mai waha aapahuncha , mujhe dekh kar us waiter ne ishara kiya hotel ke piche aajaye to mai waha gaya ….

Fir usne apne kamre ki our ishara kar bataya ki wo sab waha hai …..mai waha aaya mujhe dekhte hi vardha aakar mere samne jhuk gaya

Vardha : “ pranam malik aapke sath rehne ka aapki seva karne ka mouka mila hai is baat se mujhe bohot khushi hai…” baki 4 log bhi uske jaise niche jhuke huye the….

Mai : “ye kya kar rahe ho vardha ….aaj se tumko me vardha mama kahunga yaad rahe ..” usne ha kaha maine unhe uthaya our gale se lagaya

Mai : “tumne jo mere liye aaj tak kiya hai uska ehsaan me kabhi nahi chuka sakta mai ache se janta hun par mai koshish karunga”

Vardha : “nahi malik aap aisa mat sochiye aapke liye hame kuch karne ka mouka mila hai yehi hamare liye kafi hai…..”

Maine bakiyon ki taraf ishara karte huye pucha

Mai : “inki tariff? Ye hai tumhare bodyguard?”

Vardha : “haan malik – ye hai ekbaal-rajesh-mahesh our ye hai pandu”

Mai : “ thik hai chalo chalte hai ghar jana hai me bina bataye aaya hun yaha tumhe lene …..”

Vardha : “ ji malik “ sab gadi me baith gaye our maine gadi aage badhayi ……

Mai : “ dekho vardha mujhe tum par bharosa hai isliye me in Charon ko sath me rakhne ke liye raji hun par meri kuch sharte hongi. Jo sabko manani hogi, meri sartho ka ullanghan kiya gaya to tum jante ko me kya karunga ye mujhe batane ki jarurat nahi hai na” usne kaha

Vardha : “ji malik maine inhe pehle hi samjha diya hai…aap chinta na kare”

Mai : “ fir bhi me batana chahta hun, sab log ab dhyan se suno, our apne dimag me set karlo….aaj se tum mere sath mere ghar me ya fir haweli me rahoge …..lekin ek bat ache se dimag me daal lo mere ghar me kisi bhi ourat ya ladki se bat karte samay hamesha apni najre niche honi chahiye …….our tabhi baat karna jab bohot jaruri ho ya wo khud baat kare…..our ye ghar ke rule bahar bhi lagu honge…….kisi ladki ourat se battamiji nahi han agar koi pasand aati hai to mujhe batana mai khud shadi kara dunga…….our ha mere nokar nahi ho tum sab ek dost jaise par apni jimmedari our had dono ko bholna mat thik hai…”

Sab ek sath : “ji samjh gaye. “

Vardha : “ bacche samajhdar hai malik wo aisi harkate nahi karege”

Mai : “mai janta hun vardha mama, to bataiye kya jaruri bat hai jo aap batana chahte the?”

Vardha : “ police walo ke najar me aap aagaye ho, sajjan yadav aapko fasane ki sajish rach raha hai…..our use kuch our bhi pata chala hai apke bare me, jo ki sahi nahi hai, wo iska pura fayda uthane wala hai”

Mai : “koi bat nahi vardha mama karne do jise jo karna hai us Thakur ko uska beta milne se raha “

Vardha : “hahahaha mujhe pata hai kya kiya hoga apne”

Mai : “tumse kuch chupa nahi hai mama”

Aaise hi jaruri bate karte huye hum ghar aagaye…. Prerna bas apne office jane ke liye taiyyar baithi thi…..mere aate hi wo bhadak gayi…

Prerna : “kaha chale gaye the , jante ho kitni pareshan ho gayi thi mai …” maine use apne gale se lagaya our kaha

Mai : “mai to kahi nahi gaya tha bas in logon ko lane gaya tha” prerna ne unhe dekha our pucha

Prerna : “ye kon hai bhaiya ?” maine vardha ki our ishara kiya our kaha

Mai : “ ye vardha hai our ro log hai ekbaal-rajesh-mahesh our ye hai pandu ye sab mere sath gaav me rahenge “

Prerna : “ thik hai bhaiya….par aap yahi rook jao na hamare sath”

Mai : “han mera bhi man hai par mujhe bohot jaruri kaam karne hai isliye mera gaav me hona bohot jaruri hai” tabhi bua maa bhi aagayi

Bua maa : “ kaha chale gaye the beta tum, kuch kha kar to jate na…”

Mai : “ aab aagaya hun na maa inse milo ye hai vardha our ye inke sathi hai , ye gaav me hamare kheto our ghar ki rakhwali karenge “

Bua maa : “ye thik kiya, Namaste bhaisahab”

Vardha : “ shukriya badi malkin, apse mil kar khushi huyi “

Bua maa : “ are behen bol sakte ho mujhe aap”

Vardha : “ haan behen jaise ho aap pan mere liye badi malkin hi thik hai. Ye meri aapse reqvest hai ”

Mai : “ rehne do bua maa isase aap nahi jit sakti ye aaise hi hai ”

Bua maa :” thik hai chalo sab log fresh ho jao me khana banati hun sabke liye……” prerna ne kaha

Prerna : “bhaiya tab tak aap mujhe mere office tak chhod aao na please .” maine uska hath pakadte huye kaha

Mai : “ please wagera ki kya jarurat hai meri gudiya chalo chalte hai..” our hum dono nikal gaye…….

Wahi dusri our divya our anamika kahi ja rahi thi dono apni bike par thi to anamika ki najar meri gadi par padi…..gadi dekh kar samjh gayi ki ye meri gadi hai….our mere sath kisi ladki ko dekh kar usne turant divya se kaha

Anamika : “ye divya wo dekh tera hero kisi ladki ke sath ghum raha hai” mai our prerna haste huye bate kar rahe the …..hamara dhyan nahi tha unki our jaise hi signel green hua hum aage badh gaye

Divya ne signal tod diya our hamare picha karne lagi….kuch der bad hum mall ke bahar aakar rukhe our sath me hath pakad kar ekdusre se chipak kar chalne lage ise dekh kar divya jal gayi our gusse me dekhne lagi

Mai : “ gudiya tera admission ka kya hua kuch socha ki nahi?” ispar meri our dekhte huye boli

Prerna : “haan bhaiya maine subah hi ek collage me baat kar li hai bas mujhe admission start hone ka wait karna hoga aaisa unhone kaha hai.”

Mai : “ thik hai gudiya, ek bat bata tujhe car chalani aati hai?” ispar usne naa me apna sir hilaya

Prerna : “ nahi aati hai bhaiya, kyu puch rahe ho aap?” maine uske mathe par sabke samne kiss kiya to wo dono our jalan mehsush karne lagi

Divya : “ dekh kaise chumma chati kar raha hai wo me uski jaan lelungi chudail kahi ki…”

Anamika : “ kuch bhi mat bol tu pehle wo koun he ye jaan lete hai”

Divya : “janana kya hai kamini dekh use kaise chipki huyi hai mere rajkumar se….”

Anamika : “acha wo tera kaise ho gaya wo to uska lag raha hai. Kya pata wo pehle se hi sath ho dono “ divya bhi sochne lagi

Divya : “chup kar kuch bhi mat bol yaar dil mat tod tu ab mera “

Anamika : “ are khud soch na dono ko dekh kar kitne khus lag rahe hai dono jaise ek dusre ke liye hi bane ho” divya dekhne lagi uski aankho me pani bhar aaya tha…

Mai : “ are gudiya mai isliye puch raha hun kyun ki main tere liye ek gadi lene wala hun taki meri pyari gudiya jab collage jaye to badi thaath se jaye ….bas bohot ji li garibi me ab tu mere mutabik apni lifestyle chunegi samjhi” wo mujhe dekhte huye boli

Prerna : “ acha our aisa kyu karu me aapke pasand ki lifestyle”

Mai : “kyun ki tum meri behen ho meri jaan ho samjhi our is mall ki malkin to apna status banaye rakhna tum ye meri kwashish hai samjhi ki nahi batao ni manogi meri bat “ muskurate huye boli

Prerna : “ haan mere pyare bhaiya jaisa aap kaho “ bat karte huye hum office pahunche maine use bye kehkar waha se bahar jane laga

Divya anamika chup gayi taki me unhe dekh nap au …mere jate hi divya waha baithi hamari secretry se bat karne lagi

Divya : “suniye miss abhi jo andar gayi wo kon hai ?” secretry ne unhe dekh our jawab diya

Secretry : “wo hamari boss hai yani ke is mall ki malkin hai . aapko koi kaam hai unse?”

Divya : “kuch nahi bas janana tha ki wo kon h bas itna hi”

Secretry : “unka naam hai prerna surya yadav ….wo sheher ke dusri our rehti hai , our yaha ki malkin hai“

Anamika : “acha our abhi jo ladka yaha se gaya wo kon hai?” secretry ko kuch ajib laga use shak hone laga ki ye dono kya janana chah rahe hai kuch to gadbad hai isliye usne jhooth bola

Secretry : “kya janna hai aapko sach sach batao?”

Anamika : “wo dono kon lagte hai ek dusre ke ye janana hai kyun ki wo ladka vikram hamara dost hai” unpar vishwas nahi ho raha tha isliye secretry ne jhooth bolne ka tay kiya taki use shak tha kuch khatre ka

Secretry : “wo dono juldi shadi karne wale hai …ye property vikram singh ki hai unhone hi prerna madam ko yaha ki owner banaya hai …our kuch janana hai to aap madam se bat kar lijiye ….” Uski ye bat sun kar divya ke ankho se ansu nikalne lage…..secretry ke bato se anamika samjh gyi dono fas jayengi bevajah isliye wo divya ko lekar ghar chali gayi divya pure raste ro rahi thi uska dil toot gaya tha uske sajaye sapne bhi bikhar gaye the

Wo ghar jate hi kamre me ghus gayi or rone lagi anamika ne use samjhaya par koi fayda nahi hua fir anamika haar kar ghar chali gayi

Mai wapis aakar sabke sath khana khaya our bua maa se ijajat lekar ….sare jaruri saman lekar gaav ki our rukh pakad liya…
Divya ka love bohot badhiya show karaya h brother next update ka intezar rhega
 

Tri2010

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Update 16


Daroga sajjan ke waha ke jane ke baad bhanupratap singh ne turant apne bete samarsingh ko sandesh bhej kar use bulawa bhej diya…..samarsingh gaav ke jangle ki taraf apne bhai ki talash me kuch logon ke sath gaya hua tha….par ajay singh ka na to kuch pata chal pa raha tha our na hi koi khabar mil pa rahi thi…….wahi thane me aane ke baad sajjan singh ne sabhi hawaldaro our apne sathiyon ko 5000-5000 hajar ka inaam diya thaki unki mehnat ke karan hi daroga ko itne paise bakshish me mile the…

Wahi sheher me mai apne Mall pahunch gaya our our prerna ke sath apne office me chala gaya……maine prerna ko sare mall ki jimmedari uske hawale kar di ……our maine ye announced bhhi kar diya ki aaj se is mall ki malkin prerna hi hai…..ye jankar sabko vishwas nahi hua ki me uske naam ye mall kyu kar raha hun….par jab maine unhe bataya ki prerna meri sagi behen hai jo bachpan me bichad gayi thi….our aaj pure 19 saal baad mai prerna se mila hun to sab hairan reh gaye……..prerna bhi bohot khush thi jab uske prati logon ka pyar dekh….bua maa bhi khush thi mere aane se pariwar pura ho gaya tha…aaj kai salo baat uske chehre ki wo khushi uski biwari ko najarandaj kar rahi thi……..fufa bhi khush the aaj kyun ki unhe bhi wi sukun mil agya tha jiski wo talash kar rahe the…….unhone apne kaam par sabhi sathiyon ko ye khush khabri bata di ki unka beta wapis aagaya ….ye khabar sun kar sabne fufa ji ko badhaiya di our unki khushi me shamil ho gaye..

Wahi mall me bhi maine sabhi logon ko gifts bate our unke atmavishwas ko badhawa diya….wo sab khushi khushi apne apne dukan par lout gaye our kaam karne lage…mai prerna ke sath office me aaya kyun ki mujhe kuch yaad aaya our uske bare me usase baat karna jaruri tha ….

Hum baith kar baat karne lage

Mai : “gudiya mujhe ek baat to bata, buaa maa ko kya bimari hai?” meri bat sun kar wo boli

Prerna : “ bhaiya maa ko na tension lene ke karan unko saas lene me problem hai..our usi ke karan wo jyada bimar rehti hai.”

Mai : “ thik hai mujhe unki report de dena…..hum unko mere pehchan ke ek dr hai unke pass le chalenge.”

Prerna :” par bhaiya abhi to ek aspatal me unka ilaj ho raha hai na….fir ye sab kyuu?” maine use samjhate huye kaha

Mai : “ haan par maine ye socha he ki ab ialaj me jaha kahu wahi hoga taki bua maa juldi se thik ho jaye.. wo riste me meri bua to hai par maa se kam bhi nahi hai isliye mai unhe bua maa kehta hun….”

Prerna : “thik hai bhaiyya jaisa aapko thik lage…..” mai bas muskuraya….

Mai : “waise tumhari padhai ka kaisa chal raha hai gudiya….” Mere is sawal se wo boli

Prerna : “ kaha bhaiya, 12th tak hi padh payi hun uske baad to paiso ki jarurat thi to mai yaha job kar rahi thi…..”

Mai : “thiik hai koi bat nahi tum is saal admission lelo ab tum aage padhna jo tum chaho…..”

Prerna : “ sacchi bhaiya kya me aage padh sakti hun????”

Mai : “haan isme puchne wali kya bat hai tumhe aage padhna hi chhaiye” wo meri bat sun kar khushi se apni jagah se uthi our mere gale lag gayi

Prerna : “thank you bhaiya thank you so much “ our mere gaalo par usne kiss kar di

Mai : “ tere liye kuch bhi gudiya ..” hum aaise hi baat karte huye apna wakt gujarne lage maine prerna ke aaj tak ke zindagi ke wo har sukh dukh ke bare me usase jaan liya…..our maine soch liya apne pariwaar ki har khushi ke liye mai har ek kwahish puri karunga…..chahe wo job hi ho

Hum dono fir shehe me ghumne nikal pade……wahi ……maldivs me…..miss eleven apne roj marra ki zindagi me vyast ho chuki thi….par fir bhi wo bohot satark thi……wo sheher me apne khabriyon jariye use har aane jane wale deshi-videshi paryatakon par najar gadaye huye thi…..waise bhi maldivs me eleven ko haath lagana koi baccho ka khel nahi tha…….eleven ko yaha kisi tarah ka koi dar to nahi tha par ….jis tarah se wo pichle hades me bachi thi…us pal ko sahi dhang se dekha jaye to jisne bhi uspar hamla kiya tha wo koi sadharan shaksh to nahi hoga …..jisne bhi ye sajish rachi thi wo jarur koi bade unche oudhe wala tha …..use utsukta ho rahi thi us insaan ke bare me janane ki jisne use marne ke liye apne sathiyon ko uske ghar bheja wo bhi aadhi raat gaye…….isi baat ki tehkitak karne ke liye eleven ne uske sabse khass our wafadar sathi ya kahe ristedar……..jiska naam hai Robert jo uske sage chacha lagte hai…….maldives me kadam rakhte hi eleven ne apne chacha Robert ko is baat ke the tak jane ke liye kaha tha…..our unhone waisa hi kiya…our sari jankari juta kar wo aaj eleven se milne aaye huye the…………robert ne aate hi apni batiji ko apne gale se lagaya …..

Robert : “ kaise ho meri bacchi……”

Eleven : “puch kya rahe ho bade papa…..aapko kaise lag rahi hun bataiye….”

Robert : “ hamesha ki tarah meri pari bitiya lag rahi ho tum “

Fir thodi idhar udhai ki bate hui fir wo dono mudde par aa pahunche

Eleven : “ bataiye bade papa kya pata chala?” ispar thoda serious hote huye unhone jawab diya

Robert : “ hmm, baat bohot pechida hai beti…….”

Eleven : “me kuch samjhi nahi kya mera shak sahi hai….” Naa me sir hilate huye Robert ne kaha

Robert : “ nahi is baat tum galat ho , wo sab tumhe isliye target kar rahe hai kyun ki tum hi wo ek louti insaan ho jise us shaks ka pata hai …….our wo sirf our sirf tumhare jariye hi us tak pahunch sakte hai……isliye us raat unhone apne ek choti si tukdi waha tumhare ghar bheji thi taki tum waha se bhag kar siddha uske pass pahuncho, tumhe marne ka unka koi irada nahi tha……our naa hai kyun ki tum unke bohot kaam ki ho….”

Eleven : “oooh to ab mai samjhi ye sab is tarah se chal raha hai……tabhi to mai sochu ki mere aaisa koi dushman hai ni jo itni ghatiya harkat ko anjaam de sake….to is baat se saaf Jahir hai wo mere sir tak pahunchna chahte hai……”

Robert : “ bilkul sahi kaha beti wo uske piche hai….our is baar wo akele nahi hai , unhone is baar apne saath bohot se khatarnak sanghtano ko shamil kiya hai…..jo duniya me sabse jyada khatarak logon me shamil hai……..kuch bada hone wala hai meri bacchi…tumhe use agah karna hoga …..taki wo khud ka bachav kar sake…” apne chacha ki ye baat sun kar eleven thoda tension me aagayi….

Eleven : “ matlab baat bohot hi gambhir hai , mere sir ko agah karna bohot jaruri hai…. Bade papa mai chati hun aap khud ye sandesh lekar jaye jo me ek chitthi par likh rahi hun our haan aap khud unhe sab kuch batana jo mujhe abhi bataya hai…”

Robert : “ thik hai beti mai kal hi yaha se rawana ho jata hun”

Eleven : “ ji bade papa me aapki ticket book karwati hun…..chaliye khana khate hai….” Our dono khana khane chale gaye….



Wahi gaav me bhanupratap ne apni chal vikram singh yani ke mere khilaf rach di thi uska eklouta mohra tha daroga sajjan yadav……..uske jariye wo mera patta saf karne ki yojna banayi ja rahi thi….wahi ek our amrita kuch soch nahi pa rahi thi ki aakhir use aage konsa kadam uthana chahiye..jisase ghar me darar ban jaye our baat bete me foot pad jaye…jiske chalte wo ek-ek ko kiye ki saja de sake……amrita ki dushami is ghar ke mardo se thi…orton ne kuch nahi bigada tha ye soch kar usne apni yojnaye banayi thi…..

Ek taraf gaav me sukhiya ka priwaar kaafi khush tha …par kahi na kahi thoda dar bhi tha pakde jane ka…….dimple apne padhai par dhyan nahi de pa rahi thi use reh rehkar wo din yaad aaraha tha….wo hamesha yehi soch lekar baith jati thi…….agar chote Thakur nahi hote to mera kya hota meri behen ka kya hota mera pura pariwaar bikhar jata …….our jis tarah se vikram ne un sabko mout dedi our ajay singh ko maar diya…….our mere chehre par dar ka koi nishan hi nahi tha…meri wo himmat our takat ……maa beti dono nangi hone ke bawajud bhi mera unki our koi akarshan na dekh kar………kahi na kahi use ye bhaa gaya tha…..par wo is baat se bekhabar.......

Par chintajanak baat ye thi ki sukhiya ki beti amrita us hadse ke baad se dari sehmi si rehne lagi thi…wo har choti aawaj se darne lagi thi……na kisi se koi baat karti na kisi se milti na to wo apnne school ja rahi thi…..is baat se anjaan sukhiya our uske ghar wale apne apne soch me hi khoye huye raha karte hai……..

Dusri taraf sheher me divya mujhse mila chahti thi par na to uske pass mera koi phone number tha na koi pata tha…..wo bas gaav ka naam janti thi uske alaawa kuch nahi janti thi……pr uske pita rajendra mathur yani ke mr.DGP unhone police hone ke naate vikram singh Thakur yani ke mai…..meri saari jankari nikalwayi….our apne dost vishal yaadav….use bhi sari jankari batayi…..rajendra mathur mere bare me sari bate janane ke baad bohot hi prabhavit huye mere vyaktiva our bahaduri ke karname jaan kar our ye bhi ke me na to jhukne walo me se hun our na to tootne walo me se hun……unhone mere sare records check kiye …jiske bad unke najar me mere prati ek alag hi akarshan ban gaya……..

Dusri our kuch log ek tannel se niche ki our ja rahe the ….ek train se jo jamin ke niche bane ek lab ki our ……unhone karib 1 ghante ke safar ke baad apni manjil par train rok di our niche utar kar andar lab me aaye our unhone kisi dr se baat kar ke ek bade se parsal ko utha liya our waha se wapis nikal gaye…. Ye vahi jagah hai jiska video eleven k e ek khabri dwara liya gaya tha….wo dr our uska malik yaha se lab ko shift karne me lage huye the kyun ki unhe shak hai ki koi yaha tak pahunch jayega .. is shak ke binah par unhone is jagah ko khali karna hi behtar shamjha kyun ki ye pichle 30 saalo ki mehnat hai to wo kisi tarah ka koi risk nahi chahte the….

To be continue…………..
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Subah ki kiran ke sath meri nind khul gayi…. Bua maa kal li tarah aaj bhi subah jaldi uth kar naha chuki thi ….unhone ghar me ek chota sa mandir banva liya tha…..jaise sabke ghar me hota hai……maine dekha prerna to kal ke jaise hi mere sine par pair laad kar so rahi thi….fufa ji subah juldi chale gaye the kaam par, maine prerna ke paise apne sine se hataye our uske najdik chala gaya our uske gaal ko apne daton me pakad liya our jor se kaat liya….wo dard se chullate huye uthi…….wo our kuch bolti usase pehle mai nahane bhag gaya….

Thande pani se nahane ka alag hi maja hai, nahate huye mujhe achanak kuch yaad aaya…..vardha kal sham ko aane wala tha to kyu nahi aaya, kya kahi fas to nahi gaya who….usne koi call bhi nahi kiya……par aaise kaise ho sakta hai….aaise hi soch raha tha….

Tabhi mujhe ek our baat yaad aagayi ki mai khud usase milne wala tha ,

Mai : “ dhatt teri ki mujhe milne jana tha use tay kiye jagah par “

Our me fatafat nahakar bahar nikla our turant apni gadi lekar kisi ko na bataye waha se nikal gaya jaha vardha ko ane ke liye kaha tha….mai mall ke pass pahuncha to mujhe waaha koi nahi mila to mene socha wo usi waiter ke pass gaye honge to me us hotel ki taraf nikal pada……kuch der me hi mai waha aapahuncha , mujhe dekh kar us waiter ne ishara kiya hotel ke piche aajaye to mai waha gaya ….

Fir usne apne kamre ki our ishara kar bataya ki wo sab waha hai …..mai waha aaya mujhe dekhte hi vardha aakar mere samne jhuk gaya

Vardha : “ pranam malik aapke sath rehne ka aapki seva karne ka mouka mila hai is baat se mujhe bohot khushi hai…” baki 4 log bhi uske jaise niche jhuke huye the….

Mai : “ye kya kar rahe ho vardha ….aaj se tumko me vardha mama kahunga yaad rahe ..” usne ha kaha maine unhe uthaya our gale se lagaya

Mai : “tumne jo mere liye aaj tak kiya hai uska ehsaan me kabhi nahi chuka sakta mai ache se janta hun par mai koshish karunga”

Vardha : “nahi malik aap aisa mat sochiye aapke liye hame kuch karne ka mouka mila hai yehi hamare liye kafi hai…..”

Maine bakiyon ki taraf ishara karte huye pucha

Mai : “inki tariff? Ye hai tumhare bodyguard?”

Vardha : “haan malik – ye hai ekbaal-rajesh-mahesh our ye hai pandu”

Mai : “ thik hai chalo chalte hai ghar jana hai me bina bataye aaya hun yaha tumhe lene …..”

Vardha : “ ji malik “ sab gadi me baith gaye our maine gadi aage badhayi ……

Mai : “ dekho vardha mujhe tum par bharosa hai isliye me in Charon ko sath me rakhne ke liye raji hun par meri kuch sharte hongi. Jo sabko manani hogi, meri sartho ka ullanghan kiya gaya to tum jante ko me kya karunga ye mujhe batane ki jarurat nahi hai na” usne kaha

Vardha : “ji malik maine inhe pehle hi samjha diya hai…aap chinta na kare”

Mai : “ fir bhi me batana chahta hun, sab log ab dhyan se suno, our apne dimag me set karlo….aaj se tum mere sath mere ghar me ya fir haweli me rahoge …..lekin ek bat ache se dimag me daal lo mere ghar me kisi bhi ourat ya ladki se bat karte samay hamesha apni najre niche honi chahiye …….our tabhi baat karna jab bohot jaruri ho ya wo khud baat kare…..our ye ghar ke rule bahar bhi lagu honge…….kisi ladki ourat se battamiji nahi han agar koi pasand aati hai to mujhe batana mai khud shadi kara dunga…….our ha mere nokar nahi ho tum sab ek dost jaise par apni jimmedari our had dono ko bholna mat thik hai…”

Sab ek sath : “ji samjh gaye. “

Vardha : “ bacche samajhdar hai malik wo aisi harkate nahi karege”

Mai : “mai janta hun vardha mama, to bataiye kya jaruri bat hai jo aap batana chahte the?”

Vardha : “ police walo ke najar me aap aagaye ho, sajjan yadav aapko fasane ki sajish rach raha hai…..our use kuch our bhi pata chala hai apke bare me, jo ki sahi nahi hai, wo iska pura fayda uthane wala hai”

Mai : “koi bat nahi vardha mama karne do jise jo karna hai us Thakur ko uska beta milne se raha “

Vardha : “hahahaha mujhe pata hai kya kiya hoga apne”

Mai : “tumse kuch chupa nahi hai mama”

Aaise hi jaruri bate karte huye hum ghar aagaye…. Prerna bas apne office jane ke liye taiyyar baithi thi…..mere aate hi wo bhadak gayi…

Prerna : “kaha chale gaye the , jante ho kitni pareshan ho gayi thi mai …” maine use apne gale se lagaya our kaha

Mai : “mai to kahi nahi gaya tha bas in logon ko lane gaya tha” prerna ne unhe dekha our pucha

Prerna : “ye kon hai bhaiya ?” maine vardha ki our ishara kiya our kaha

Mai : “ ye vardha hai our ro log hai ekbaal-rajesh-mahesh our ye hai pandu ye sab mere sath gaav me rahenge “

Prerna : “ thik hai bhaiya….par aap yahi rook jao na hamare sath”

Mai : “han mera bhi man hai par mujhe bohot jaruri kaam karne hai isliye mera gaav me hona bohot jaruri hai” tabhi bua maa bhi aagayi

Bua maa : “ kaha chale gaye the beta tum, kuch kha kar to jate na…”

Mai : “ aab aagaya hun na maa inse milo ye hai vardha our ye inke sathi hai , ye gaav me hamare kheto our ghar ki rakhwali karenge “

Bua maa : “ye thik kiya, Namaste bhaisahab”

Vardha : “ shukriya badi malkin, apse mil kar khushi huyi “

Bua maa : “ are behen bol sakte ho mujhe aap”

Vardha : “ haan behen jaise ho aap pan mere liye badi malkin hi thik hai. Ye meri aapse reqvest hai ”

Mai : “ rehne do bua maa isase aap nahi jit sakti ye aaise hi hai ”

Bua maa :” thik hai chalo sab log fresh ho jao me khana banati hun sabke liye……” prerna ne kaha

Prerna : “bhaiya tab tak aap mujhe mere office tak chhod aao na please .” maine uska hath pakadte huye kaha

Mai : “ please wagera ki kya jarurat hai meri gudiya chalo chalte hai..” our hum dono nikal gaye…….

Wahi dusri our divya our anamika kahi ja rahi thi dono apni bike par thi to anamika ki najar meri gadi par padi…..gadi dekh kar samjh gayi ki ye meri gadi hai….our mere sath kisi ladki ko dekh kar usne turant divya se kaha

Anamika : “ye divya wo dekh tera hero kisi ladki ke sath ghum raha hai” mai our prerna haste huye bate kar rahe the …..hamara dhyan nahi tha unki our jaise hi signel green hua hum aage badh gaye

Divya ne signal tod diya our hamare picha karne lagi….kuch der bad hum mall ke bahar aakar rukhe our sath me hath pakad kar ekdusre se chipak kar chalne lage ise dekh kar divya jal gayi our gusse me dekhne lagi

Mai : “ gudiya tera admission ka kya hua kuch socha ki nahi?” ispar meri our dekhte huye boli

Prerna : “haan bhaiya maine subah hi ek collage me baat kar li hai bas mujhe admission start hone ka wait karna hoga aaisa unhone kaha hai.”

Mai : “ thik hai gudiya, ek bat bata tujhe car chalani aati hai?” ispar usne naa me apna sir hilaya

Prerna : “ nahi aati hai bhaiya, kyu puch rahe ho aap?” maine uske mathe par sabke samne kiss kiya to wo dono our jalan mehsush karne lagi

Divya : “ dekh kaise chumma chati kar raha hai wo me uski jaan lelungi chudail kahi ki…”

Anamika : “ kuch bhi mat bol tu pehle wo koun he ye jaan lete hai”

Divya : “janana kya hai kamini dekh use kaise chipki huyi hai mere rajkumar se….”

Anamika : “acha wo tera kaise ho gaya wo to uska lag raha hai. Kya pata wo pehle se hi sath ho dono “ divya bhi sochne lagi

Divya : “chup kar kuch bhi mat bol yaar dil mat tod tu ab mera “

Anamika : “ are khud soch na dono ko dekh kar kitne khus lag rahe hai dono jaise ek dusre ke liye hi bane ho” divya dekhne lagi uski aankho me pani bhar aaya tha…

Mai : “ are gudiya mai isliye puch raha hun kyun ki main tere liye ek gadi lene wala hun taki meri pyari gudiya jab collage jaye to badi thaath se jaye ….bas bohot ji li garibi me ab tu mere mutabik apni lifestyle chunegi samjhi” wo mujhe dekhte huye boli

Prerna : “ acha our aisa kyu karu me aapke pasand ki lifestyle”

Mai : “kyun ki tum meri behen ho meri jaan ho samjhi our is mall ki malkin to apna status banaye rakhna tum ye meri kwashish hai samjhi ki nahi batao ni manogi meri bat “ muskurate huye boli

Prerna : “ haan mere pyare bhaiya jaisa aap kaho “ bat karte huye hum office pahunche maine use bye kehkar waha se bahar jane laga

Divya anamika chup gayi taki me unhe dekh nap au …mere jate hi divya waha baithi hamari secretry se bat karne lagi

Divya : “suniye miss abhi jo andar gayi wo kon hai ?” secretry ne unhe dekh our jawab diya

Secretry : “wo hamari boss hai yani ke is mall ki malkin hai . aapko koi kaam hai unse?”

Divya : “kuch nahi bas janana tha ki wo kon h bas itna hi”

Secretry : “unka naam hai prerna surya yadav ….wo sheher ke dusri our rehti hai , our yaha ki malkin hai“

Anamika : “acha our abhi jo ladka yaha se gaya wo kon hai?” secretry ko kuch ajib laga use shak hone laga ki ye dono kya janana chah rahe hai kuch to gadbad hai isliye usne jhooth bola

Secretry : “kya janna hai aapko sach sach batao?”

Anamika : “wo dono kon lagte hai ek dusre ke ye janana hai kyun ki wo ladka vikram hamara dost hai” unpar vishwas nahi ho raha tha isliye secretry ne jhooth bolne ka tay kiya taki use shak tha kuch khatre ka

Secretry : “wo dono juldi shadi karne wale hai …ye property vikram singh ki hai unhone hi prerna madam ko yaha ki owner banaya hai …our kuch janana hai to aap madam se bat kar lijiye ….” Uski ye bat sun kar divya ke ankho se ansu nikalne lage…..secretry ke bato se anamika samjh gyi dono fas jayengi bevajah isliye wo divya ko lekar ghar chali gayi divya pure raste ro rahi thi uska dil toot gaya tha uske sajaye sapne bhi bikhar gaye the

Wo ghar jate hi kamre me ghus gayi or rone lagi anamika ne use samjhaya par koi fayda nahi hua fir anamika haar kar ghar chali gayi

Mai wapis aakar sabke sath khana khaya our bua maa se ijajat lekar ….sare jaruri saman lekar gaav ki our rukh pakad liya…














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