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kya aap chahte hai ki me is kahani ko intresting banane ke liye photos our gifs ka tadka lagau??????


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Mai aaj apni ek nayi kahani shuru kar raha hun. is kahani ko me thoda hat kar likhe ki koshish karne wala hun. mana ki maine pichli kahani me kuch galtiya ki hongi our kisi karan wo kahani maine adhuri chhod di..
mai wo kahani bhi puri karunga par is kahani ke pura hone ke baad hi us kahani ke tarah mudna pasand karunga

ye kahani action se bharpur, thrill se khachakhach bharne ki puri koshish karunga, yaha sex bhi he our romanch bhi yaha daravne manjar bhi hai our pyar bhare mosam bhi....

mai sabhi dosto se ummid karta hun ki aap sab mere is dusre kahani par dher sara pyar barsayenge our pura saath denge.
OUR EK SABSE JARURI BAAT KAHANI KA HAR EK UPDATE HAR 2 DIN BAAD ME POST KARUNGA....AGAR KISI KARAN DERI HUYI TO AGLA AANE WALA UPDATE KAFI LAMBA HOGA.......WAISE KAHANI KE UPDATES ME DERI HONE KI KOI GUNJAISH NAHI HAI ....FIR BHI ME CLEAR KAR RAHA HUN

Mai aap sab se vinati karunga ki kahani mai likh raha hun to mujhe motive kare na ki usme kamiya nikal kar mujhe demotive na kare.......is kahani ko me thoda realistic tarike se likhne ka prayas karunga isliye kahani aapko pasand aaye yehi meri koshish rehne wali he......

aapko is kahani ko padhne me jyada interest aaye our utne hi maja aaye iski puri koshish karunga


like our comments karne apna pyar jataye
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Bhai mast update but bhut lamba time ho gya plz thoda speed badhao naa....
han jarur mere bhai time lamba to ho gaya update diye koshish karunga juldi update de saku
 

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Update 14

Ab tak ,

Maine apni sari property apne kabje me kar li or champaklal ko apna sathi banaya. Prerna, bua our fufa se pehchan ho gayi our sab sath ho gaye , maine unhe apne sheher wala ek makan unhe de diya jiske chalte wo sab bhi khush the. Our me bhi khush tha apno ke milne ke karan …..prerna ko sach ka pata chal chukka tha, fir bhi wo sach manane ke liye bilkul bhi tayyar nahi thi ……

..ab aage

Prerna : “ sach chahe kuch bhi ho aap hi mere papa our aap hi meri mummy hai….me our kuch nahi janti hun samjhe aap log” our rone lagi

To urmila bua ne prerna ko gale se lagaya or chup karaya…

Urmila : “ha meri bachhi chup ho ja tu meri bacchi hai me hi teri maa hun yehi sach hai isliye kabhi is baat ka jikar nahi karenge……”

Surya : “haam meri bacchi mera wada hai fir kabhi tumhe aaisi bat nahi kahunga tum hi meri beti ho…our hamesha rahogi..”

Mai : “ek minute –ek minute ye kya laga rakha hai sab ne aaj khushi ka pal hai our aap log you ro dho kar bita rahe ho sab .”

Urmila : “dhattt , me bhi na mera bacha mujhe mil gaya mai bata nai sakti maine kya pa liya hai….”

Mai : “ haa maa me bhi nahi bata sakta, our ye chui mui bhi to mujhe mil gayi dekho to kitni khubsurat ban gayi hai hai na bua maa…” meri baat se prerna yani ke meri choti behen sharma gayi meri baate sun kar

Urmila : “haan hamari gudiya bohot pyari hai our dil ki achi bhi hai…our sundarta ki baat kare to usne apni maa se pai hai ”

Prerna : “acha ji me kaha sundar hun kuch bhi kehti ho maa aap bhi” uski baat sun sab muskurane lagte hai

Mai : “bua maa me bahar ja raha hun me thodi der me aaunga choti tu chal mere sath “

Urmila : “ kya hua beta abhi to aaye hai our kaha jana hai ? “

Prerna : “ab kaha jana hai bhaiya batao na” maine use chup rehne ka ishara kiya wo kuch nahi boli

Mai : “kuch nahi bua maa mai juldi wapis aaunga bas aap tab tak aaram kariye, choti chal juldi”

Hum dono bahar aagaye our jab hum gadi ke pass pahunche to prerna ne meri aankho me dekha our jhat se mere sine se lag gayi. Maine bhi uske jajbat samje our use apne baho me bhar liya our uske mathe ko chumte huye kaha

Mai : “choti mera wada hai mai tujhse kabhi alag nahi hounga…..na hi tujhe mujhse alag hone dunga ” meri baat sun usne apni pakad our tight kar li our boli

Prerna : “bhaiya aap mujhse kabhi dur mat hona , jab se aap gaye ho mujhe kuch bhi acha nahi lagta tha…aap wapis aagaye mujhe aaise laga jaise meri jaan mujhme wapis aagayi.” Maine use apne se alag kiya our usase kaha

Mai : “mujhe tujhse koi alag nahi kar sakta meri gudiya raani…..” gudiya rani prerna ka bachpan ka naam tha jo vikram ne rakha tha bade pyar se …..uske muh se wo naam sun kar wo khush ho gayi

Prerna : “ waise bhaiya kaha jana hai ?”

Mai : “ gudiya hum ja rahe hai apne mall me jaha se hum ghar ka sara saman le aayenge” meri is baat par wo khush hote huye boli

Prerna : “wow bhaiya shoping aaj pehli baar me shoping karne ja rahi hun bhaiya wo bhi aapki vajah se”

Mai : “choti wo mall ab tumhare naam hai meri pyari gudiya rani ke naam” our maine uske mathe ko chum liya our hum gadi me baith gaye….prerna mujhe dekh rahi thi….gadi chelate huye mera uspe dhyan gaya to maine muskurate huye pucha

Prerna : “ kuch nahi bhaiya mujhe abhi bhi yakin nahi ho raha aap wapis aagaye ho…..sapne jaisa lag raha hai sab kuch ….” Maine uske haath me chimti kati to wo uchal gayi

Prerna : “ ooooouuuuuch bhaiya dard hota hai na ….aah mummy…..” maine haste huye kaha

Mai : “tujhe sapne se bahar la raha tha isliye “ dono hasne lage

Prerna : “sach me bhaiya aap aagaye mujhe sab kuch mil gaya…..jo me chahti thi bhagwan se”

Hum dono baate karte huye mall pahunch gaye

Mai : “ ye sab bate chhodo our secretry ko bulwao our gadi ka intejam karao tum thik hai”

Prerna : “ji bhaiya mai abhi aayi….”prerna ke jate hi mai waha ke kichen shap me ghus gaya…..

Mere andar jate hi staff mere samne aakar khada ho gaya to us shop ka salesman ne khaa

Salesman : “ aaise na sir kya lenge aap ?”

Mai : “mujhe apne ghar ke liye achi se achi new and modern saman chahiye apne kitechen ke liye”

Salesman : “ji sir ye dekhiye…ye aaj ka best trend hai …..ye saman isi hafte prerna mam ne mangwaye hai….” Maine bhi keh diya

Mai : “ thik hai ise pack karwa do our sath hi same ek our set bhi pack karo…”

Salesman : “ji sir ho jayega”

Maine waha ka kaam khatam kar dusre shops me bhi chala gaya waha se bhi dher sare saman apne dono ghar ke liye pack karwaye

Dusri our prerna apne office ke pass pahunchi prerna ko dekh secretry ne pucha

Secretry : “ mam aap yaha ?”

Prerna : “wo sab badme tum pehle 1 truck ka intejam karo ghar ka sara saman usme load karwane ka intejam karwao “

Secrerty : “ji mam kara deti hun bas mujhe 5 min de dijiye “ our wo turant phone par lag gayi our fir usne sara intejam karwa liya

Prerna bhi mere pass aagyi jab me furniture shop me tha me beds-sofa almariya le raha tha

Prerna : “ bhaiya ye le lete hai ye maa ko pasand aayega bohot jyada”

Mai : “thik hai ye pack karao our haa same to same 2 pices……”

Prerna : “ han bhaiya gadi piche khadi hai usme load karwa denge thik hai…”

Mai : “ thik he gudiya chalo our bhi bohot sara saman lena hai…”

Prerna : “ haan thik hai bhaiyya aaj hi kyu par ?”

Mai : “aaise hi aaj hi lenge ….kal me wapis gaav ja raha hun mujhe kuch kaam niptane hai” meri baat sun kar wo thoda chounk gayi

Prerna : “kya kaha gaav ? konsa gaav our aap gaav me kyu reh rahe ho?”

Mai : “ ghar chal kar me samjhaunga abhi kaam pe lag jao meri maa” wo haste huye mere sath chal di



Humne dher sara saman load karwaya our ghar ke liye hotel se khana pack karwa kar ghar aa pahunche. 2 Gadiya hamare piche piche aagayi….humne workers ke madat se sara saman ghar me sahi jagah par set karwa liya…..our fir hum sab khana khana khan eke liye baith gaye …..khana testy tha to sabko bhaa gaya ……fir hum sab ghar ki chat par aakar baith gaye……fir prerna ne fir se gaav wali baat chhed di

Prerna : “ab batao bhaiya aapne kaha tha bataoge ghar jakar “ ispar fufa ji ne pucha

Fufa: “kya batane wala tha vikram tumhe?” maine prerna ke taraf ishara kiya ki wo kuch na bole par wo mani nahi

Prerna : “papa wo bhaiya kisi gaav jane ki baat kar rahe the” ispar urmila bua ke kaan khade ho gaye

Bua : “ kya konse gaav our kyu jana hai?” me samajh gaya ki me fas gaya hun ab

Fufa : “ye prerna kis gav ki bat kar rahi hai vikram?”

Mai : “ji wo apne gaav ki baat kar rahi hai mai kal wapis ja raha haun gaav.” Meri bat sun kar bua ne pucha

Bua : “kya kaha kamlapuri, tum waha nahi jaoge, samjhe meri baat nahi jaoge tum waha” unke mathe par dar ki ek shikan najar aayi mujhe maine pucha

Mai : “kya hua bua maa, me to pichle 6-7 mahino se waha reh raha hun” meri bat sun sabko ascharya hua

Fufa : “ye kya keh rahe ho tum waha 6-7 mahino se reh rahe ho our ab tumhe hamari yaad aayi ?”

Mai : “mujhe bataya ghaya tha ki mere pariwar me koi jinda nahi hai…..to me…….” Maine apni bat adhuri chhodd di

Bua : “ vikram……” maine unki bat bich me kaat di

Mai : “ pehle meri sari baat sun lo fir tay karna ki kya sahi hai kya nahi thik hai …..”

Bua : “ batao sab kuch “

Prerna : “ haan bhaiya bataiye”

mai :” to suno aap sabhi …”

maine usne sab kuch bataya jo mere gaav aane se lekar aab tak jo kuch hua ….usme maine ajay ke khoon ke bare me kuch nahi bataya……..use sunane ke baad sab thoda normal huye



bua : “ matlab tumhe sab kuch pata hai?”

mai :” nahi bua maa adha adhura hi pata hai mujhe ,, par me sab sach jaan hi lunga juldi” meri is baat par fufa ji bole

fufa : “ beta kuch bato ko na jano to hi behtar hota hai, warna wo bohot taklife dene wali sabit hoti hai”

mai :” haan fufa ji par mujhe haak hai apne pariwar ki sacchai janane ka ……our mujhe janana hai aakhir mere pariwar ke sath ye hadsa kaise hua…..our aap log jinda hai to sab log aaise kyun kehte hai ki aap sab mar chuke hai us aag me? Our mujhe ye bhi janana hai ki our bhi koi jinda hai ?” ispar fufa ji bahana bana kar waha se chale gaye

prerna : “ bhaiya mujhe bhi aapke sath gaav aana hai” maine mana karte huye kaha

mai : “ me ye nahi chahta ki aap logon ke jinda hone ki khabar kisi ko lage…isliye jab tak me sach ka pata na laga lun tab tak koi gaav ki taraf nahi aayega. Samjhi tum .” wo naak folate huye boli

prerna :” thik hai samajh gayi…..me apse bat nahi karungi….” Our wo uth kar chali gayi….bua maa ko jab maine dekha to paya wo gehri soch me thi …kch soch rahi thi wo.. maine unse pucha

mai : “ kya hua bua maa kya soch rahi hai aap? “

bua :” mai ye soch rahi hun. Tumne jo bataya usase mujhe yakin nahi ho raha hai” mai kuch samjha nahi tha unki bat

mai : “ me kuch samjha nahi bua maa “

bua : “tum bachpan me darpok the lekin jo tumne abhi bataya usase mujhe yakin nahi ho raha hai mere bacche…ki tune ye sab kiya hai …..” me samajh gaya unhe kya kehna hai

mai : “ghar se jane ke baad me jin halato me raha …un halato ne mujhe majboot bana diya bua maa……our dekh lo me pehle jaisa darpok nahi raha “

bua : “haan wo to me dekh rahi hun mere bacche “

mai :” aap jyada mat socho bua maa, me sab thik kar dunga fir hum gaav me rahenge khushi khushi “



aaise hi hamari bate hoti rahi …..

wahi dusri our

champaklaal ko kisi anjaan call aaya



unknown : “ kyu champaklaal , maine suna hai tujhse wo mall kisi bachhe ne chin liya aaj…..hahahahahaha” champaklaal gusse me

champaklaal : “ tujhe usase kya haan china hai usne par wo us property ka asli waris hai samjhe”

unknown : “ haattt chutiya, chullu bhar pani me dub mar saale darpok , namard jo ek bacche se har gaya”

champaklal : “ kya kaha namard …hahahaha…..tu apni biwi our apni betiyon ko mere pass bhej de unki chut me jab faad-faad kar mere maal sahet bhej dunga tab meri mardangi ka wo chaap dekh lena thik hai…our tu jo koi bhi ho ye jaan le…..wo ladka us mall ka asli waris hai ….our han maine man liya usase mai haar gaya……to bhi tujhe usase kya ha…..me uska partner to ban hi gaya na…..” wo samne wala insaan gussa ho gaya

unknown : “ champaklaal tune bohot badi galti kardi , tujhe mere ghar ki ourton ko bich me nahi lana chahiye tha …tujhe ye bohot bhari padega …chapmaklaal tu pachtayega “

champaklaal : “ukhad le jo ukhadna hai tujhe…..dekhte h kon pachtayega chutiye……our sun….” bolne se pehle hi phone cut ho gaya tha…….wo insaan jisne phone kiya tha…usne apne sathi se gusse me kaha

unknown : “ shamshersingh us do take ke chapaklal ke biwi bacchonko utha lao , bina unke wapis aaye to soch lena tumhari biwi ko tumhare samne hi me ragad ragad ke chodunga samjha tu……ab nikal “ wo apne malik ki baat sunkar waha se turant apne admiyon ke sath nikal gaya apni car me
 

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Badhiya story h brother pls continue krna
 
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Writer Bhai maza aa gaya story padh kar superb story likhi hai tumne 👌👌 Action, adventure, mystery se bharpur hai🔥🔥
Shukriya aap sabhi ka me is story ko pura karunga dosto..... Har plot ko soch samjh kar aage badhana hota h so thoda late ho ja raha hai.... Juldi juldi karne ki koshish lagi h
 

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Shukriya aap sabhi ka me is story ko pura karunga dosto..... Har plot ko soch samjh kar aage badhana hota h so thoda late ho ja raha hai.... Juldi juldi karne ki koshish lagi h
Agla update aaj hi milega ap sab ko
 
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