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Fantasy Ek Badshah (Action, Thrills, Romance)

STORY AAP KO KAISI LAG RAHI HAI

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rnarock

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not good update
bro you disappoint me
Hero ko apna ma bap ka parichoy
dia tha hero ka mom ne
phir bhi hero ko itna jalil karne ka bad bhi kuch nahi kaha
aur apne apko madam ki assistant kehlate hai
really mujhe bohot nirasa hua


Bhai mujhe maaf karna iske liye agge sabko rona hai....
 

Tiwari_baba

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Issi ko kahte hai... Unchi dukan or fike pakwan.... Ameer aadmi ko falon se lade hue ped (tree) ki tarah hona chahiye ki uska fal sabko mile.... Na ki taad ke ped ki tarah uncha rhe jhuke hi naa... In logo ne bahut kuchh bol diya yash ko... Ab ye sab koun hai.. Or kya ho rha hai yaaha... Aage ka intezaar hai
 

Arjun Singh 72

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awesome update
bhai thoda plot ko hat ke rakhna
dusharo ki story we tabhi padne main
maza aayega keep posting
 

Mathur

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awesome one sir ji human values, feelings, humanity se bharpur update tha

update review

mujhw thodi narazgi beshak hai ki YASH ne muh tod javab na dia but ik khushi bhi hai ki YASH ne saaf saaf aane vale time mai mn sabke rone ki baat confirm krdi
YASH ne apne nature apni MAA ki sikhayi baat aur pyaar se bhare nature ka bkhubi saboot dia hai
bs dekhna ye hoga jo jamin iik aasman ko uski aukat yaad dila rhi hai aasman use kb uski aukat yaad dilayega
dekhna toh bnta hai bhai ji

aur in unknown bando ko dwkh kr toh ye kgta hai ki ye koi mission pr hai like kuch dangerous hone se rokne aayen hai yan khatra paida krne valon ko thokne
ache hi lg rhe hai ye log guess hau mera

aur awaz ka khulasa toh baad mai hi hoga

KEEP WRITING
KEEP UPDATING

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Stone cold

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UPDATE 22:


Recp. Abhi ye sawal jawab chal hi rahe the k eek dumse koi room me aya jisko dekh main shock ho gaya…



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Abhi supriya mujhse sawal kar hi rahi thi ke room me do logo aur enter huwe….jinme se ek to aunty thi shayad wo NEHA ki MOM ho aur ek ladki thi main jisse dekh ke shock huwa q k wo koi aur nhi balki wo club wali ladki hi thi……..wo bhi mujhe dekhke utna hi shock hui jitna main howa tha.. wo to mujhe POONAM aur SUPRIYA se bhi ziyada khatarnat lag rahi thi….mujhe dekhhi aise rahi thi ke mano abhi mujhe kha jaigi….


Jo aunty thi wo to mujhe dekh bina hi direct NEHA ke pass jake usse boli…


AUNTY : kya huwa mera bacha aap theek to hona kya fir se waisa hi huwa…


NEHA : ji mom waisa hi huwa aur ab main theek hun.


Bech me POONAM boli


POONAM : kya baat hai bua fir se apka kya matlab hai…kya di ko pehle bhi heart me dard huwa hai….


Ab main samjha ke ye dono POONAM aur SUPRIYA NEHA ke mama ki betiya hai. Main to piche khada bas sab sun raha tha….


AUNTY : kabhi2 aisa hota hai humne kai doctors ko dekhaya kafi sare test bhi kiye magar sabne ye hi bola ke usko heart me koi problem hai magar iska dard ye hi janti hai kabhi2 to raat2 bhar tarap ke juzar jati hai….na jane kya huwa hai meri bachi ko.


POONAM : to bua apne pehle humme q nhi bataya ke didi itni paresan hai….


AUNTY : beta pata to hai na ye kaisi hai yahan tak ke apne papa ko bhi nhi batane diya isne…waise tum dono yahan kya rahi ho..


POONAM : wo kya hai bua aaj hum yahan field visit ke liye aye the ye papa ke dost ka hospital hai to soch yahan se kuch knowledge liya jaye agge jake kam ayga….


ANUTY : acha hai beta waise neha tum to aaj office jaldi chali gai thi to fir ye sab kaise huwa beta…


NEHA : actually mom MAHIN MAM ne mujhe ek site pe bheja tha wahan ki report collect karne ke liye q k aaj sham tak wo report boss ko bhejni thi main wohi report leke aur site visit karke arahi thi to raste me car band ho to mujhe unhone lift di…


Itna bol neha ne apni ungli se meri taraf ishara kiya tab jake aunty ka dhiyan meri taraf huwa…


Maine aunty ko Namaste kiya to unho to pehle mujhe upar se niche tak dekh aur boli…


AUNTY : Namaste tumhara bahut2 shukriya neha ko hospital lane ke liye aur ab tum jasakte ho hum yaha dekh lege…..


bahut hi rud tarika tha aunty ka najane q mujhe kafi hurt huwa tha unka aisa bola. itna hurt to mujhe SUPRIYA ke bolne ka bhi nhi huwa tha main kuch nhi bola aur seedh bahar chala gaya……main thodi hi dur gaya tha ke mujhe ek dum yaad aya ke meri car ki key to andar hi reh gai hai….main wapas gaya to aunty neha ko kuch bol rahi thi jisse sun main wahin gate ki side ho gaya aur sunne laga…


AUNTY : beta aap ko kitni bar bola hai aise chote logon ko kabhi muh nhi lagte….in jaison ki to yehin tamanna hoti hai ke kaise bhi karke bade ghar ki ladki phasaye….


NEHA : thoda chidke, mom please aisa kuch bhi nhi hai ..wo to bas mujhe lift de raha tha….


tabhi hi SUPRIYA boli ti hai


SUPRIYA : nhi bua mujhe lagta hai wo di ko sachme phasane ka plan kar raha hai aur wo to aise dekha raha tha jaise wo di se sachme pyar karta hai..fir supriya jo huwa wo sab aunty ko batati hai uska mujhse sawal karna aur mera uske sawalon ka jawab dena…


Neha pareshan ho ke supriya ko chillate huwe…


NEHA : shutup supriya aisa kuch bhi nhi jaisa aap log soch rahe ho….ye ek coincidence tha bas aur kuch nhi…


tabhi hi wo ladki club wali boli…


LADKI : acha to didi humme suru se batao ke kya huwa tha kaise wo mila aur aap dono me kya baat hui in details….


Main bahar khada in logon ki soch ke bare me soch ke andar hi andar gusse se barta ja raha tha…




Fir NEHA ne sab kuch bata diya jo kuch bhi humare sath huwa…hummare beech ki sari baaten.


Neha ke chup hote hi wo club wali ladki boli


LADKI : dekha MOM kitni asani se usne di ko divert kiya apni baton me…


AUNTY : beta POOJA main kuch samji nhi…tabhi poonam boli…


POONAM : main batati hun bua aapko….


tabhi hi NEHA fir se boli…


NEHA : full gusse se, q aap log bina bat ka batangad bana rahe ho…aur tum teeno kuch ziyada hi samjhte ho apne apko….meri tabiyat ka kuch to khayal karo…..aur mom app bhi inke bataon me arahi ho..


AUNTY : beta aap badi bholi ho aap ko nhi pata ke ajkal ke ladke kaise2 tarike azmate hai…aur rahi baat apki tabiyat ki to apko kuch nhi ho ga hum sab yahan hai….tumhe ye janna bahut zaruri hai beta tum ziyad socho mat bas poonam jo bata rahi hai uspe thande dimag se socho…to poonam explain beta….


Ab tak mujhe samjh achuka tha ke neha ko chodke yahan jitney bhi hai sab ki soch kuch2 milti julti hai….


POONAM : acha to didi apni batayaa ke usne aapke lift mangne se car roki..


NEHA : dhire se, han


POONAM : to mujhe ye bataiye ke uske ane se pehle bhi kai car gayi hogi to kya kissine apko lift di…


NEHA : nhi…


POONAM : to didi aaj ke time me kissi ke pass bhi dosaron ke liye time nhi hai magar ye banda apko dekhte hi lift deta hai….


NEHA : kya insaniyat naam ki koi chiz nhi hoti kya…


POONAM : hoti hai didi agar wo insaniyat ke nate ho magar yahan to apko full phasaya ja raha hai…


NEHA : isse ye to sabit nhi hota hai ke wo phasa raha tha..


POONAM : hoga di sabit hoga…jab usne apse pucha ke kahan jana hai to aapne kya bataya…


NEHA : ye hi ke RAJPUT GROUP ke office..


POONAME : to usne kahan “kya ittefak hai main bhi wahin ja raha hun” right..


Neha me han me sar hilaya…


POONAM : fir apne usse kai sawal kiye kya usne turnat unka jawab diya…


NEHA : nhi…turant nhi bad me diyeee.


POONAM : ye hi to didi aap samhj nhi pai usne aap ko apke hi bataon me phasaya raha aur apko bewaqoof banata raha..aur to aur kitna jhoot bhi bolta gaya apse aree itni badi company ki malkin ka ek ladka assistant ho hi nhi sakta hai aur ye bat main sabit karke bata ti hun..


POOJA : wo kaise POONAM di..


POONAM : wo aise ke phupaji ka bhi koi chuta business nhi hai unke assistant ko dekha hai unki kitni umar hai….aur han usne bola ke usse malkin ki jagha meeting attend karni hai to kya wo meeting me gaya nhi gaya na to isse yehi sabit ho ta hai wo bahut dino se apko follow karke ye sab plan kiya hoga….


Jab poonam ne bolna band kiya to aunty ne bolna shuru kiya..


AUNTY : dekho beta hum to tumhe bas itna hi bata rahe hai ke tum logon pe itni jaldi bharosa mat kiya karo in garibon ki to yehi fitrat hoti hai ke ameer ghar ki ladkiyan phasaye….aur beta agar aapki gadi kharab ho gai thi to aap apne papa ko bhi phone kar sakte thi aise rahaa chalte logon pe itna trust bhi achi bata nhi main to bolti hun ye jo aap ko job karna ke bhooth hai na usse choodo aur apna business join karo jahan sab apne hi log hai wahan…


Ye sab sunke mere to mano sar pe asman hi phat gaya tha kya log aise bhi kuch soch sakte hai kissi ke bare me…aur jo hal mera tha wohi neha ka bhi tha…


Neha bas apni mom aur apni behon ki soch ke bare me hi sochti hui kabhi apni mom ko to kabhi apni behno ko dekh rahi thi..


Aur main to bas gusse ko andar piye ja raha tha aap logon se to laad sakte ho magar unki sochse bilkul bhi nhi aur jahan soch aisi ho wahan to kabhi bhi nhi aap jeet sakte ho…


Ab to mere liye bhi ye masla ho gaya tha ke main apni car ki key lene andar kaise jaun…q k mujhe samjh agaya tha ke iska bhi in logo ke pas koi na koi explanation zarur hoga ke…dekha janbhujke key yaha chodi thi wagaira22…..magar mujhe key chahiye to thi isliye main do kadam pich hoke fir agge aya ke unhe lage main abhi aya hun…


MAIN : kya main andar asakta hun auntyji…..


Mere bolte hi sab ek jhakte se palte meri taraf….aur firse aunty thoda gusse se boli…


AUNTY : ab kya kam hai yahan tumhe bola na jao….


MAIN : thoda dheerse, wo auntyji meri car ki key wahan hai ye bol maine apne ungli se ishara kiya….


Aunty turant jake car ki key lake mere pass ai aur mere hath upar kar ke key mere hath me de mari……aur apne danth cabate huwe boli….


AUNTY : sune be gandi nali ke agar do bara kabhi tu meri beti ka aspas bhi dekha to tere liye acha nhi ho ga mere bhai se bolke tujhe zinda gaad dugi samjha ab chalta ban yaha se….


Main kuch nhi bola aur palat ke jane laga tabhi supriya boli kya bua aap bhi kaison ke muh lag rahi ho jiske na baap ka pata hai aise bhikarion ko muh nahi lagate balki unke muh pe paise de marte hai ye bol ke kuch note supriya ne apne press me se nikal ke mujhe piche se demare…..


Mera to gi kya ke abhi ke abhi unko inki auwat dekha do magar fir kuch soch ke main palta aur bola….


Is waqt meri anakhen num thi..aur zaban bhi bhari ho gai thi….


MAIN : auntyji insane jo kuch bhi bolta hai wo apne bol ka khud zimmedar hota hai ye jo hum alfaz use karte hai wo bade soch samjh ke humme use karne chahiye take agge jake aisa na ho humme ek din apne hi kahe gaye alfazon pe pachtana pade…..itna bolke main roka nhi seedha bahar nikal gaya aur apni car ko full speed me agye badadi….




Sham ke time Ek ghane jungle me ek khandar tha jaha kuch log bhi the aur us khandar ke aspas kuch truck bhi khade the kuch log undar the aur kuch log bahar pehra de rahe the….. in logon se koi 500 miter ki duri pe kuch aur log bhi the….


Jo apas me bat kar rahe the…


Admi1: humme kuch bhi karke aaj ye mamla khatam karna hai…..


Admi2: han bilkul hum aaj inme se kissi ko bhi nhi chodne wale hai..


Admi3: maine check kiya hai wahan bahar koi 20 log hoge magar andar kitne hai ye pata nhi hai…


Admi1 : kya hum scan karke pata nhi laga sakte ke andar kitne hai….


tabhi admi3 wireless pe kissi se bolta hai…


Admi3: kya hum scan kar sakte hai khandar ko…


Samne se ek ladki ki awaz ati hai..


LADKI : nhi kar parahi hun q k interior me hone ke karan kafi greenery hai jiski wajha se satellite khandar ko scan nhi kar paraha hai….


Admi1 : tum kosish karti raho hum kuch manually karne ki kosish karte hai….


Fir admi1 : admi2 se, tum jake us khandar ke piche ka manual digitize karo tab tak main aur admi3 dawat ki taiyari karte hai…..


Tab hi ek aur ladki ki awaz ai..


LADKI2: main yahan piche hi hun yahan bhi 10 log hai main unse 300 meter ki duri pe hun……


Admi1: tum kab ai…


LADKI2: jab tum sab aye tab hi….


Admi1: hai tum jahan ho wahin raho…..admi2 abhi tumhe join karta hai apni location gps me load karo….


LADKI2: theek hai…





Abhi sab apas me baat hi karahe the ke, sab ke wireless pe ek tez sound howa aur jab wo khatam huwa to in panchon logo ki ruh kamp gai wo awaz sunke…






Keep Supporting, Thanks and Regards
rnarock

Badhiya update bhai
To Neha ko heart ka pehle sehi problem hai Lekin uski maa aur behen ki soch mei hi problem hai kiasi ghatiya soch hai inki
YASH ne bilkul sahi kaha badme pachtane ke siway kuch kar nahi sake ge ye log aur wo club wali ladki neha ki hi sagi behen hai ab to bohot maza ayega
Aur ye kon log hai jungle me kuch gair kanoni ho raha hai aur wo admi shayad police
 
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