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Pati patni me ye baat ho gai ye sahi raha par bhai ab shweta apne pati ka hi manegi? John our rahul ki kaman bhi ramesh ke haath hogi? Our is kahani ka asli hero kon? Bahut sawalo ke jawab aap ko is story me dene he? Ye koi suggestion nahi he bhai sirf mere dimag me aaye sawal he bas our kya bolu story best flow Main chal rahi hai
Bahut sare sawal honge hi. Sab ke javab milenge.
 
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Kahani me interest khatam ho sakta hai. Par kahani nahi. Kahani ka flow kafi decided hi hai. Jara sa socho 1 second ke liye ke confession karne ke bad chor kya chori karna chhod deta hai.

Dayri hai. Nam soch ke likha hai. Writers to kafi dur tak scoh ke likhte hai. Par interest ek aisi chij hai jo kisi ka bhi kabhi bhi khatam ho sakta hai. Chahe wo reader ka reading ke liye aur writer ka writing ke liye.

Baki sab ki apni apni soch hai. Sab independent hai. Jo end socha hai wo nahi aayega tab tak kahani chalti rahegi. Mai bich raste me kahani nahi chhodta.
 

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Bahut sare sawal honge hi. Sab ke javab milenge.
Ye hui na baat
 
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Kahani me interest khatam ho sakta hai. Par kahani nahi. Kahani ka flow kafi decided hi hai. Jara sa socho 1 second ke liye ke confession karne ke bad chor kya chori karna chhod deta hai.

Dayri hai. Nam soch ke likha hai. Writers to kafi dur tak scoh ke likhte hai. Par interest ek aisi chij hai jo kisi ka bhi kabhi bhi khatam ho sakta hai. Chahe wo reader ka reading ke liye aur writer ka writing ke liye.

Baki sab ki apni apni soch hai. Sab independent hai. Jo end socha hai wo nahi aayega tab tak kahani chalti rahegi. Mai bich raste me kahani nahi chhodta.
Bilkul theek baat confessions karne ka baad bhi chor chori karna nahi chidta ...it means jitne b encounters shweta karegi jaruri nahi husband ko sab bata k kare ...kuch chori se bhi kare ..uska maza hi alag h ....
 

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Awesome story
 
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Awesome story
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Part 33: 8 december 2024 - part 2

maine jaise hi call kiya ke muje waha se sidha pucha gaya....

john: aunty to thik hai na
mai: ha thik hai. udhar rahul?
john: aapke baju wale kamare me hi hu. shant ho gaya hai.
mai: sari bat bata di?
john: sab kuch end to end bata diya
mai: kya reaction tha?
john: ham ladko me sensitivity jaisa kam hota hai upar se aapka beta... hamne uski sensitivity ka trailer kal hi dekha... shant ho gaya turant. udhar aunty?
mai: ro rahi thi. par ab shant hai. samnse lund khali kar diya mera.
john: rahul shayad abhi hamare sath nahi judega aaj. dur rahe to leave it. he needs time. thoda sharma raha hai... apni maa ko chod raha hai wo bat apne bap ko pata chal jaye to... you know what I mean...
mai: ha koi bat nahi. let him take his own time. ham milte hai breakfast me. shweta ke kapade to le kar aa. nangi hai. naha kar aati hi hogi.

baju me hi to tha john. turant doorbell baja di. maine khola aur john samne...

john: kaha hai meri chammak chhallo
mai: naha rahi hai..
john: uncle... do you mind...
mai: abe ja na jata hai to... permission to aise mang raha hai ke..

abhi to kuch bolu usse pahale wo bathroom tak pahunch hi gaya tha.... usne darwaja bahar se khatkhataya to... shweta ne darvaja to turant khol diya par aisa soch kar ke maine khatkhataya...

shweta: are benchod tu? wo bahar hi hai
john: ab to mai andar officially bina dar ke aa sakta hu meri jaan. puch ke aaya tere pati se....
shweta: sameerrrrr?
mai: yes....

fir kya tha... garm garam bathroom me garam garam pani me mere samne.. shweta aur john ke bich me chudai ka ek session hua.... bahut transparent bathroom bhi nahi tha. par inhone janbuj kar khol ke bhi rakha tha to fir maine bhi ejoy kiya... pics rakhta hu aapke samne kuch ke kis tarah se pahali bar john aur shweta ne mere samne chudai ka aanand uthaya....


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shweta aur john jab bahar aaye to shweta mere samne sharma rahi thi.

mai: relax shweta. hamare naye rishte ki shuruat yaha se hoti hai. your cuckold husband.

gili shweta ne muje kiss kiya aur mere gale lag gai...

mai: mere kapade bhi gile kar diye tune to chalo koi bat nahi. john sahab kya kapade hai meri shweta ke liye.

aur fir ek dancer ka clothes nikala john ne.

mai: dancer?
john: ha dancer
shweta: to muje kya dance karna hai kahi par?
john: ha ek club hai. mere dost ka. mai abhi contact karunga usko aur dekhte hai kuch jugad ho jaye to

aisa kah ke wo chala gaya kisi ko phone lagane...

shweta: aapko sach me koi problem nahi hai na
mai: nahi muje koi problem nahi hai. puchna to tuje chahie. kya tuje koi problem hai?
shweta: fir na mai bahut expose ho jaungi logo ke samne
mai: to tum mana kar do to bhi koi problem nahi hai
shweta: par mera man bhi hai. modeling dancing ye sab mere shokh hai
mai: to fir kar lo
shweta: are aap to dono taraf bol rahe hai
mai: are mai to support kar raha hu bas tuje. tuje kya karna hai? rahi bat expose ho jane ki to... uske liye shanti se baith kar bat karte hai. rahul ko bhi bula le aur john ko bhi bula le. kyonki aage kya karna hai hame wo bhi to decide karna padega na. aisa na ho jaye ke teri chut ke pyas ke chakkar me hamare ghar ka nam puri tarah se mitti me mil jaye.
shweta: isi wajas se dar rahi hu. idhar to sab photos bhi khichenge to fir...
mai: to fir rahane dete hai
shweta: agar maan lo... jara soch lo ke mai haa bolti hu to?
mai: to fir mai alag sochunga fir kuch
shweta: kya?
mai: to fir mai jo hoga usme tera pura sath dunga aur tumhe answer karne ki jarurat nahi hai. mai hi javab de dunga kisi ko bhi. bas tum ye socho ke karna kya hai. pahale to kapade pahan lo tumhe thand lagegi

shweta sochte sochte kapade pahan ne lagi. par abhi bhi ye tay nahi hua tha ke shweta kya chahti hai. shweta ki bat bhi to sahi thi. hamare khandan ki koi ijjat hai. aur fir aisa hoga to ye viral milf ho jayegi. kuch samaj nahi aa raha tha aur john andar aa gaya


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john: mast lag rahi hai tu janeman
mai: oye janeman ke aashiq.. sun meri bat
john: ha bolo bolo uncle
mai: dekh mai kya soch raha tha... I mean ham dono soch rahe the ke ye itna aasan nahi hai. public expose karna. abhi tak jo bhi kiya tha sab private me hua tha.
john: kya uncle aap aaye aur darne lage. shweta aunty to bindas the ekdam
shweta: john abhi tak ham sirf private me open the. abhi socho ham log bahar jayenge... to samaj sakate ho na? ye issue maine raise kiya hai tere uncle ne nai. ghar ki ijjat bhi to dhyan me rakhna hai na...
john: ok ok but not to worry... ye to hamne private club book kiya hai
shweta: to pahale ye batana chahie tha na
john: are par muje laga uncle darne lage hai to mai to bas...
mai: benchod tu aadhi aadhi bat mat bola kar
john: are uncle iske badale gand maroge kya meri?
shweta: wo kaha kisi ki marenge....

aisa kar ke dono hasne pade. isme to meri bhi hasi chhut gai to be very honest. ab muje roast pasand aane laga. aur isme to mera hi hone wala hai. par shweta aur john ka bond muje khalta hai. john bahut risky insan lag raha hai. aur upar se ghar jate hai wo javed aur ramesh. meri chhutti mil gai hai ka matalab ab shweta daregi nahi. chut ki pyas to mai mita nahi sakata. kal itni sukun bhari chudai ke bad jab uthi tab wapas mere samne john ke sath bathroom me chudne lag gai. ye batata hai ke shweta par najar rakhna jaruri to hai. bas ye bat dhyan me rakhe ke ghar ke sanskar aise nilam na hote rahe. abhi mere samne gul khilane wali ye aurat kya kya karegi uska koi idea nahi. upar se muje ab ye dar satane laga hai ke mere to sare patte iske samne aa chuke hai. to ab ye to aur bhi satark ho jayegi. mere liye spy karna aur bhi kathin hone wala hai. kyonki ab to recorder bhi nahi hai uske purse me aur chhutti le kar mai bhi har jagah uska picha to nahi kar sakta.

mera aisa sochna galat bhi ho sakata hai. kyonki shweta ne khud se mere samne confess kar diya. warna wo kabhi confess hi na karti. mai samne se batane wala tha. to mera ye sochna is tarike se galat bhi hai. muje shweta par trust karna padega. shweta meri biwi hai. khushi ke mare usne abhi abhi subah mere lund ko wapas chhua muh me liya aur mera maal bhi piya. warna wo na karti. par chut ki pyas... again... abhi shant hone ke bawjud subah wapas pyasi ho gai hai to fir kya kar sakte hai. muje satark rah kar sab karna padega. ab na aise hoga. mere samne jo bhi ho usme cool raho aur baki spy karna to jari hi rakho. kab ye aurat palat jaye uski koi guarantee nahi hai. aisa man ke chalenge to chutiya nahi banuga. warna ab to sare patte khulne ke bat mai chutiya hi lagunga.

mai: to pura din udhar hi rahenge?
john: aish karenge idhar udhar. rahul ko bula lu?
mai: nahi abhi nai. mai pahale uske sath akele me alag se bat karna chahta hu. room par hi hai na?
john: ha. chalo mai aata hu

mai aur john shweta ko chhod kar baju ke room me chale gaye. maine john ko bol diya ke mai jab ishara karu to room se chale jana. usko thoda surprise to hua ke mai use door rakh raha hu par mai bhi chalak insan hu. mai bhi ab chutiya nahi ban sakta na pura plan to maine bana liya hai. rahul ne darvaja khola.... rahul thoda dara hua laga muje. muje aur john ko sath me dekh kar...

mai: andar aau?
rahul: ha aao
mai: john tu ab ja. mai rahul se akele me bat karunga

john ki fat gai. abhi abhi to bat shuru bhi nahi hui aur maine use nikal diya... john chala gaya. maine aur rahul ne batchit shuru ki...

mai: chalo mai bata hi deta hu ke I know everything. even tumhara kal ka pahala encounter with your own mom. congratulations ab you are official madarchod.
rahul: kya bakwas kar rahe ho papa aap... aur aapko pata kaise chali ye bat?

rahul ke fat ke hath me aa gai thi ekdam. rahul ki jara jyada hi fat ke hath me aa rahi thi 2 din se. kyonki uske sath kya ho raha hai use kuch pata hi nahi chal raha hai... jab mai use dekhta raha to...

rahul: john ne kuch bataya aapko?
mai: ha bhi nahi bhi
rahul: to aapne sab kuch dekha?
mai: ha sab kuch saf saf dekha. you were good
rahul: mom ki khushi ke liye dad... wo... mai waisa nahi hu...
mai: par tumne to puri tarah se kal apni maa ko.... tumhari aurto ko le kar badi ghatiya soch hai
rahul: mai kya karu. muje aurto ki aazadi pasand nahi hai. mai manta hu ke aurte pairo ki juti ke barabar hai bistar par. not in real life. real life me mai kitni ijjat karta hu.
mai: but still she is your mom
rahul: I agree. but nangi hui na wo aurat. nangi hui matalab ab wo mard ki gulam hui. aur malik apne gulam ke sath kuch bhi kar sakta hai. mom enjoyed it too muje blame mat kijiye aap
mai: tum agreesive kyo ho rahe ho? ham just discussion kar rahe hai.
rahul: nai mai ek to ye 2 din se mere sath ho raha hai wahi nahi samaj pa raha hu. ek to mere me guilt bhari hui hai kal maa ke sath maine jo kuch kiya
mai: ise haivaniyat kahate hai
rahul: I know but I dont know... mai aurat ko apne aaspas nangi dekh lu to mere upar pura... kaise samjau? mai nahi samaj sakata ke fir wo kaun hai meri maa hai ya bahan hai ke randi.. sorry I mean koi bhi hai.... mai abhi bhi apne aap ko rok nahi paya. mai kya karu papa

aisa karke rahul rone laga. rahul ko aurat ko istemal karne ka achha tarika samjana padega. par abhi mere liye wo topic nahi hai. mai main topic par aata hu.

mai: hmmm wo ham kabhi... mai tumhari maa aur tum sath me baithenge aur fir ek bar shanti se is par bat karte hai. tumhari maa ko kitna kya kya pasand hai ke nahi hai wo sab discuss kar ke aage badhe hai. par abhi ke liye... mere khayal se muje tumhari alag help chahie...
rahul: ha papa bolo
mai: dekho tumhari maa ka rup maine pichle dino me bahut bat change hote hue dekha hai aur muje bhi nahi idea tha ke kal wo apne bete ke sath bhi... matalab wo kamal to thi hi par full of surprise bhi hai. aur use sambhalna mere akele ke bas ki bat nahi hai

fir rahul ne muje wo sawal pucha ke mai kya kar raha hu isme aur mai kyu aisa cuck bana baitha hu. to wo mai aapke pas wapas repeat kar ke bor nahi karunga to maine usko puri kahani end to end bata di. rahul ab sab samaj gaya tha

rahul: ok papa thik hai aapka kahana hai ke aapko maa par bharosa nahi hai
mai: ha exactly. aur abhi bhi pata nahi mai yaha hu wo john ke sath kya bat kar rahi hogi idea nahi hai. par ek rasta hai.
rahul: kya rasta hai?
mai: batata hu... haa. abhi 1 hour ho gaya hai hamare batchit karte hue to recording to aa chuka hoga
rahul: are aap ke recording se to muje dar lagne laga.

fir maine recording open kiya. john baju me chala gaya tha.... jab maine use nikal diya room se...

shweta: tum kyo wapas aa gaye?
john: are tere pati ne muje bhaga diya...
shweta: shhhhh recording ho raha hoga mat bol kuch bhi
john: wo recorder kaha hai?
shweta: usne nikal kar muje hi diya tha. mere hath me tha maine ye table par rakha tha. yaha nahi hai. to shayad wapas usne le liya hoga... par rakha yahi kahi par hoga...
john: uski bettery bhi low hogi. aur abhi bhi lagta hai tuje ke wo recording sunte honge? kyonki ab jara tum hi socho recording sun kar kya karenge. aur ham kaha aisi waisi bat karne wale hai
shweta: ha recorder yaha nahi hai to usne kahi andar uske bag me rakh diya hoga. to use dur rakh detu hu aur idhar aaja ham bat karte hai....
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rahul: ye recorder kaha rakha hai aapne?
mai: table par pda tha. to TV ke piche dal diya tha. john teri maa ko le kar bathroom me aaj subah hi chodne gaya tha. tab rakh diya.
rahul: aapse ab muje dar lag raha hai
mai: teri maa se darne ki jarurat hai waise to. yahi tuje aur muje dhyan rakhna hai. ye kuch bhi kare hame pata chal jana chahie.
rahul: ok
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john: tum itna dar kyo rahi ho
shweta: ab bahut sambhal ke kadam rakhne padenge....
john: ab darne ki kya jarurat hai? abhi to uski permission le kar subah hi choda tha tuje darling
shweta: ha sab permission le kar karna padega. tab to kahe ki aazadi? usko pasand nahi aayega to mana bhi karenge... samaj rahe ho.. uska man karega to ha bolenge. ye to.... fasne wali bat ho gai na....
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mai: dekha na teri maa par bharosa kar sakte hai?
rahul: tab to kal rat ko usko punishment di wo to ekdam proper di
mai: wo ham baap bete alag se bat karne baithenge. ghar jane par. abhi ke liye ha... teri bat sahi hai...

dekha... abhi tak ye samaj nahi aa raha hai muje ke ye shweta kya chij hai.. kabhi sanskaro ki bat karti hai, subah ro rahi thi. par rone ke mere hi samne apne young boyfriend john se chud gai. agali rat apne bete se chudi hai aur wo bhi ghinoni tarike se... to ye sab chal kya raha hai? shweta ko mai jan paunga kabhi?
 

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Ye part padh kar aisa lag raha he ke shweta alag kism ki ourat he ek taraf wo bolti he ki usko mardo ki command me rahna pasand he par pati ki command me rahna pasand nahi jab ki pati khud use chudai ke liye support kar raha he
Hahaha ourate bhi gajab hoti he.
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