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Romance Ek Bhool 2 (Completed)

Mahi Maurya

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Welcome on the story :dost:...Ek Bhool ke liye aapka iss comment ke liye bahut bahut dhanyabaad aur jaan kar bahut accha laga ki aapko dono hi stories itna pasand aaya...Ummeed hai aapka saath iss story mein bana rahega...Keep supporting :dost:
धन्यवाद सर जी।

आपकी पहली कहानी एक भूल मुझे इतनी ज्यादा पसंद आई कि मैंने वो कहानी 3 बार पढ़ी।
2 बार xossip पर और 1 बार यहां।

बहुत ही बेहतरीन कहानी अब तक की मेरी पढ़ी हुई।

उसका दूसरा भाग भी बहुत अच्छा है।
लेकिन पूरी तारीफ तभी कर सकती हूँ जब ये कहानी पूरी होगी।
अभी मैं आपकी कहानी ही पढ़ रही हूँ।
 

Champ_AK_81

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Are champ bhai apki story lajawab he tabi to padhne ate he bhai
Apto bura man liye
Story ese mod pe ake rok di he ke aage Kya hoga
Uska intejar he lekin update itne din se naiaya he bhai is liye ghusse me nikal gaya bhai
Bhai abhi condition aisa hai ki uss din ko kosh raha hun jis din ye story start kiya tha...Aaj naa hi story mein focus kar paa raha hun, naa hi study mein aur baaki ki cheej mein.
Pehle aapke comments bhi regular thhe...Aur exam ke baad jab fir se likhna suru kiya hai wo bhi band ho gaye...Regular reader ki har baat ko hamesha suna hai chahe wo positive feedback ho yaa fir negative...Aisa lagta hai ki wo story padh rahe hai aur kuch expectations honge...Aapke case meinaisa lag raha tha jaise aapne padhna chhod diya hai aur achanak se comment aata hai story ka the end.
Story ko agar kabhi end karna hoga to sidha lock kar ke private message off kar dunga taaki kisi ko clarification dena na pade.
Abhi aisa socha nahi hai.
Aage bhi update ka timing par sure nahi hun jaise haalaath chal rahe hai...Update delay hona mujhe bhi utna hi frustrate kar raha hai.
 

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धन्यवाद सर जी।

आपकी पहली कहानी एक भूल मुझे इतनी ज्यादा पसंद आई कि मैंने वो कहानी 3 बार पढ़ी।
2 बार xossip पर और 1 बार यहां।

बहुत ही बेहतरीन कहानी अब तक की मेरी पढ़ी हुई।

उसका दूसरा भाग भी बहुत अच्छा है।
लेकिन पूरी तारीफ तभी कर सकती हूँ जब ये कहानी पूरी होगी।
अभी मैं आपकी कहानी ही पढ़ रही हूँ।
Abb ye story bhi ending ki taraf badh raha hai...60% se jyada complete ho chuka hai...Tab tak bich mein apna vichaar rakh sakte hai...Aur taarif ke liye ek baar fir se shukriya. :happy:
 

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UPDATE 74


Dr. Sahab uthh gaye aap?

Sumit ki Papa Sumit ki taraf ne muskuraate hue pucha.

Sumit:- Jab se internship mein aaya hun neend haraam ho chuka hai...Raat raat bhar duty...Thak gaya hun. :sigh2:

S. Dad:- Abb aur kitna baaki hai?

Sumit:- 1 month aur jhelna hai yeh sab kuch...Wo to accha hai ki Surgery mein posting hai abhi...Warna raat raat bhar duty mein lage raho.

S. Dad:- Kyu tujhe surgery karne nahi aata?

Sumit:- Theory to sab aata hai...Bas practical nahi...Aur kisi surgeon mein itna himmat bhi to nahi hai.

S. Dad:- Kis cheej ki himmat?

Sumit:- Responsibility ka...Agar patient ko kuch ho gaya to...Bewkoof hi honge wo jo complicated surgery MBBS level ke doctor ko denge.

Bas unko surgery karte dekh sikh raha hun...Ye bhi bahut hai iss level mein.


Rashmi:- Apna Naa kaamyaabi chupaana koi inse sikhe...Sidhe keh dijiye kuch nahi aata aapko.

Sumit:- Abhi bhi thoda bahut neend ke nasha mein hun...Kuch keh dunga to Papa Papa kar ke rona mat.

Rashmi:- Aap aur aap ka excuses.

Sumit:- Accha mera surgery ka skill tab pata chalega...Jab tujh par try karunga...Fir bataana.

Agar inn mein se koi bhi beemari ho jaaye to bataana... Appendicitis, Pancreatitis, Cholecystitis...

Rashmi:- Bas bas....Papa dekhiye naa...Na jaane kya kya beemari lag jaane ki dua kar rahe hai...Apna surgery ka skill prove karne ke liye.

S. Dad:- Ukshaane ka kaam bhi to tu hi kar rahi hai.

Rahmi:- Kya Papa? Aap hamesha bhaiya ka hi support karte hai.

Sumit:- Iss liye kehta hun...Soch samajh kar panga le.

Fir aise hi hansi majaak mein din beet jaata hai.

Few days Later


Congrats...Aaj tumhara half century complete hua.

Megha ki ye baat Sumit ko samajh mein nahi aaya.

Sumit:- Kis baat ki half century?

Megha:- Kirti ko bhulne ki...Pichle 50 din se ek baar bhi tumhaare munh se Kirti ke baare mein nahi suna.

Sumit:- (In his mind) Wo to mere kan kan (particle) mein maujud hai...Bhulna aur bhulaa paana asambhav hai.

Lekin saamne se Sumit ne Megha ko koi jawaab nahi diya.

Megha:- Majaak kar rahi thi...Lekin tum itna khaamosh kyu ho aaj kal...Aur koi koshish bhi nahi kar rahe ho?

Iss baar gambhir aawaj mein Megha ne pucha.

Sumit:- Abb usko aur pareshaan karne ka dil nahi karta...Jitna koshish karna tha kar chuka hun.

Megha:- Fir Kirti ko kaise manaaoge?

Sumit:- Abb nahi...Agar usse mere pyaar ka ehsaas hoga to wo khud aayegi...Warna kismat ki marji.

Itna keh kar Sumit waha se thoda dur hat gaya aur saamne ho rahi surgery ki aur dekhne laga.

Megha se iss baare mein wo aur baat karna nahi chaahta tha.

Neha:- Ye to acchi baat hai naa wo Kirti se dur ho raha hai...Tere liye to acchi baat hai...Fir baar baar kyu tu usse Kirti ki yaad dila rahi hai?

Thoda gusse mein Neha ne Megha se pucha.

Megha:- Aise agar Sumit mujhe mil bhi jaaye to bhi manjur nahi...Aur ye kaisa pyaar hai ki usse paane ke liye usko aisa dukhi hota dekh iss mein apna khushi dhundu.

Aur yakin ke saath keh sakti hun agar Sumit Kirti se sach mein hamesha ke liye dur ho gaya to uska pyaar se vishwash utth jaayega...Naa hi usse kabhi mujhse pyaar hoga aur naa hi kisi aur se...Achha ye hi hai ki usse uska pyaar mil jaaye.

Neha:- Fir tera kya hoga?

Megha:- Kuch nahi...Jab se sach mein Sumit se pyaar ka ehsaas hua tha tab se hi pata tha Sumit mera kabhi nahi hoga...Aur agar ho bhi gaya to usse hi ye ehsaas hona chahiye.

Tabhi OT. mein Raj aata hai.

Bhaiya!!!!

Sumit ke paas aa kar Raj bola.

Sumit:- Itna dara hua kyu hai? Koi baat hai kya? Bol mai dekh lunga.

Raj:- Baat aap se hi related hai.

Sumit:- Mujhse?

Raj:- Kirti se related.

Sumit:- Meri Kirti ya teri?

Raj:- Aapki.

Baat to dono ki bahut dhire se chal raha tha taaki Surgery mein kisi ko disturb naa ho...Sumit kone mein chala aaya.

Sumit:- Bataa.

Raj:- Kirti ki engagement fixed ho gaya hai.

Sumit:- Ek tej dard Sumit ke seene mein utha jaise kisi ne chaaku bhonk diya ho...Aaknkhein band kar ke uss dard ko sehan karne ki koshish kiya lekin shayad kaamyaab nahi ho paaya.

Ek pal bina ruke wo OT room se nikal gaya...Sumit ko aise jaate dekh Megha bhi uska picha karne lagi.

Sumit sidhe hospital ki chhat ki taraf jaane laga...Chhat mein pahunch kar ek kone mein chala gaya...5 floor niche jameen ki taraf dekhne laga.

Megha jab waha pahuchi to Sumit ko dekh wo bhi dar gayi...Wo kuch kehti isse pehle hi Sumit niche baith gaya.


Megha abb Sumit ke paas gayi.

Megha:- Sumit...Ye sab kya hai?



Sumit:- Wo Kirti...

Dard mein itna hi bol paaya Sumit.

Megha:- Haan suna maine bhi.

Sumit abb aage kuch nahi bola.

Kuch der chup rehne ke baad.

Sumit:- Please tum jaao yaha se...Akela chhod do mujhe.

Lekin Megha Sumit ko aise akela chhodne ko taiyaar nahi thi.

Fir niche dekhte hue Sumit.

Sumit:- Itna himmat nahi hai abb mujhme...Suicide ka khayal bahut pehle aata tha...Wo bhi sirf khayal.

Bas abhi akela rehna chaahta hun...Iss liye yaha chhat mein aa gaya.

Megha:- Kab tak aise hi akele tadapte rahoge...Pichle kuch mahine se tum khud ko sabhi se dur karte aa rahe ho...Dekho kya haalat bana rakaha hai? Dard baatne se kam hota hai...Naa ki usko apne andar dafnaane se.

Sumit:- Lekin dard aisa hai jo baanta bhi nahi jaa sakta aur naa hi baantna chaahta hun.

Vakt bhi aisa hai ki hamesha khushi baatne wala Sumit ke hisse mein aaj baatne ke liye agar kuch hai to bhi ye dard. :sigh2:

Megha:- Kuch to bolo...Dard halka ho jaayega..Tumhe aisa dekh....

Sumit:- Halka hoga...Khatm nahi.

Aur waise bhi kehne ke liye bahut kuch tha...Bahut armaan tha...Vaada....Pyaar...Aur na jaane kya kya...Lekin abb sab kuch bhulta jaa raha hun...Aakhir bataau bhi to kise? Jo mujhse dur jaa rahi hai? Jiski jindagi mein mera koi ahemiyat nahi hai.

Please chali jaao tum...Mujhse aur bardaast nahi ho raha hai.

Aakhiri line Sumit ne Megha ko dekh kar kaha.

Megha:- Nahi aaj tumhe bolna hi hoga...Aise khamoshi se ek baar fir dard ka ghunt peene nahi dungi.

Abb Sumit se bhi aur control nahi ho raha tha...Dhire dhire aankhon se aansu ki dhaar behna suru ho gaya.

Sumit:- Pata nahi kaisa pyar hai ye? Aaj bhi Kirti ko galat nahi maan paa raha hu...Aur uski bhi kya galti? Mai hi pada tha uske piche uske laakh mana karne ke baawjud...Ummeed...Shayad yahi ek cheej mujhe le duba.

Aaj nahi to k ye hona hi tha.

Megha:- Abhi himmat rakho...Hum baat karenge Kirti se.

Megha ne ye keh to diya...Lekin usse bhi pata tha Kirti se baat karne ka koi faaidaa nahi.

Sumit:- Nahi...Abb usse aur pareshaan nahi karunga...Wo abb apne jindagi mein khush rahe yahi sahi hai.

Aur mai...Kab tak aise hi aashiq ki rarah apna jindagi gujaarta rahunga...Bhula dunga usse...Bhula dunga.

Bhale hi Sumit ki aawaj mein dard tha lekin aakhiri ki bat mein dridh nischay tha...Aur ye kehne ke baad chehre mein ek baar fir dard bhare nishan aa gaye.
 

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UPDATE 74


Dr. Sahab uthh gaye aap?

Sumit ki Papa Sumit ki taraf ne muskuraate hue pucha.

Sumit:- Jab se internship mein aaya hun neend haraam ho chuka hai...Raat raat bhar duty...Thak gaya hun. :sigh2:

S. Dad:- Abb aur kitna baaki hai?

Sumit:- 1 month aur jhelna hai yeh sab kuch...Wo to accha hai ki Surgery mein posting hai abhi...Warna raat raat bhar duty mein lage raho.

S. Dad:- Kyu tujhe surgery karne nahi aata?

Sumit:- Theory to sab aata hai...Bas practical nahi...Aur kisi surgeon mein itna himmat bhi to nahi hai.

S. Dad:- Kis cheej ki himmat?

Sumit:- Responsibility ka...Agar patient ko kuch ho gaya to...Bewkoof hi honge wo jo complicated surgery MBBS level ke doctor ko denge.

Bas unko surgery karte dekh sikh raha hun...Ye bhi bahut hai iss level mein.


Rashmi:- Apna Naa kaamyaabi chupaana koi inse sikhe...Sidhe keh dijiye kuch nahi aata aapko.

Sumit:- Abhi bhi thoda bahut neend ke nasha mein hun...Kuch keh dunga to Papa Papa kar ke rona mat.

Rashmi:- Aap aur aap ka excuses.

Sumit:- Accha mera surgery ka skill tab pata chalega...Jab tujh par try karunga...Fir bataana.

Agar inn mein se koi bhi beemari ho jaaye to bataana... Appendicitis, Pancreatitis, Cholecystitis...

Rashmi:- Bas bas....Papa dekhiye naa...Na jaane kya kya beemari lag jaane ki dua kar rahe hai...Apna surgery ka skill prove karne ke liye.

S. Dad:- Ukshaane ka kaam bhi to tu hi kar rahi hai.

Rahmi:- Kya Papa? Aap hamesha bhaiya ka hi support karte hai.

Sumit:- Iss liye kehta hun...Soch samajh kar panga le.

Fir aise hi hansi majaak mein din beet jaata hai.

Few days Later


Congrats...Aaj tumhara half century complete hua.

Megha ki ye baat Sumit ko samajh mein nahi aaya.

Sumit:- Kis baat ki half century?

Megha:- Kirti ko bhulne ki...Pichle 50 din se ek baar bhi tumhaare munh se Kirti ke baare mein nahi suna.

Sumit:- (In his mind) Wo to mere kan kan (particle) mein maujud hai...Bhulna aur bhulaa paana asambhav hai.

Lekin saamne se Sumit ne Megha ko koi jawaab nahi diya.

Megha:- Majaak kar rahi thi...Lekin tum itna khaamosh kyu ho aaj kal...Aur koi koshish bhi nahi kar rahe ho?

Iss baar gambhir aawaj mein Megha ne pucha.

Sumit:- Abb usko aur pareshaan karne ka dil nahi karta...Jitna koshish karna tha kar chuka hun.

Megha:- Fir Kirti ko kaise manaaoge?

Sumit:- Abb nahi...Agar usse mere pyaar ka ehsaas hoga to wo khud aayegi...Warna kismat ki marji.

Itna keh kar Sumit waha se thoda dur hat gaya aur saamne ho rahi surgery ki aur dekhne laga.

Megha se iss baare mein wo aur baat karna nahi chaahta tha.

Neha:- Ye to acchi baat hai naa wo Kirti se dur ho raha hai...Tere liye to acchi baat hai...Fir baar baar kyu tu usse Kirti ki yaad dila rahi hai?

Thoda gusse mein Neha ne Megha se pucha.

Megha:- Aise agar Sumit mujhe mil bhi jaaye to bhi manjur nahi...Aur ye kaisa pyaar hai ki usse paane ke liye usko aisa dukhi hota dekh iss mein apna khushi dhundu.

Aur yakin ke saath keh sakti hun agar Sumit Kirti se sach mein hamesha ke liye dur ho gaya to uska pyaar se vishwash utth jaayega...Naa hi usse kabhi mujhse pyaar hoga aur naa hi kisi aur se...Achha ye hi hai ki usse uska pyaar mil jaaye.

Neha:- Fir tera kya hoga?

Megha:- Kuch nahi...Jab se sach mein Sumit se pyaar ka ehsaas hua tha tab se hi pata tha Sumit mera kabhi nahi hoga...Aur agar ho bhi gaya to usse hi ye ehsaas hona chahiye.

Tabhi OT. mein Raj aata hai.

Bhaiya!!!!

Sumit ke paas aa kar Raj bola.

Sumit:- Itna dara hua kyu hai? Koi baat hai kya? Bol mai dekh lunga.

Raj:- Baat aap se hi related hai.

Sumit:- Mujhse?

Raj:- Kirti se related.

Sumit:- Meri Kirti ya teri?

Raj:- Aapki.

Baat to dono ki bahut dhire se chal raha tha taaki Surgery mein kisi ko disturb naa ho...Sumit kone mein chala aaya.

Sumit:- Bataa.

Raj:- Kirti ki engagement fixed ho gaya hai.

Sumit:- Ek tej dard Sumit ke seene mein utha jaise kisi ne chaaku bhonk diya ho...Aaknkhein band kar ke uss dard ko sehan karne ki koshish kiya lekin shayad kaamyaab nahi ho paaya.

Ek pal bina ruke wo OT room se nikal gaya...Sumit ko aise jaate dekh Megha bhi uska picha karne lagi.

Sumit sidhe hospital ki chhat ki taraf jaane laga...Chhat mein pahunch kar ek kone mein chala gaya...5 floor niche jameen ki taraf dekhne laga.

Megha jab waha pahuchi to Sumit ko dekh wo bhi dar gayi...Wo kuch kehti isse pehle hi Sumit niche baith gaya.


Megha abb Sumit ke paas gayi.

Megha:- Sumit...Ye sab kya hai?



Sumit:- Wo Kirti...

Dard mein itna hi bol paaya Sumit.

Megha:- Haan suna maine bhi.

Sumit abb aage kuch nahi bola.

Kuch der chup rehne ke baad.

Sumit:- Please tum jaao yaha se...Akela chhod do mujhe.

Lekin Megha Sumit ko aise akela chhodne ko taiyaar nahi thi.

Fir niche dekhte hue Sumit.

Sumit:- Itna himmat nahi hai abb mujhme...Suicide ka khayal bahut pehle aata tha...Wo bhi sirf khayal.

Bas abhi akela rehna chaahta hun...Iss liye yaha chhat mein aa gaya.

Megha:- Kab tak aise hi akele tadapte rahoge...Pichle kuch mahine se tum khud ko sabhi se dur karte aa rahe ho...Dekho kya haalat bana rakaha hai? Dard baatne se kam hota hai...Naa ki usko apne andar dafnaane se.

Sumit:- Lekin dard aisa hai jo baanta bhi nahi jaa sakta aur naa hi baantna chaahta hun.

Vakt bhi aisa hai ki hamesha khushi baatne wala Sumit ke hisse mein aaj baatne ke liye agar kuch hai to bhi ye dard. :sigh2:

Megha:- Kuch to bolo...Dard halka ho jaayega..Tumhe aisa dekh....

Sumit:- Halka hoga...Khatm nahi.

Aur waise bhi kehne ke liye bahut kuch tha...Bahut armaan tha...Vaada....Pyaar...Aur na jaane kya kya...Lekin abb sab kuch bhulta jaa raha hun...Aakhir bataau bhi to kise? Jo mujhse dur jaa rahi hai? Jiski jindagi mein mera koi ahemiyat nahi hai.

Please chali jaao tum...Mujhse aur bardaast nahi ho raha hai.

Aakhiri line Sumit ne Megha ko dekh kar kaha.

Megha:- Nahi aaj tumhe bolna hi hoga...Aise khamoshi se ek baar fir dard ka ghunt peene nahi dungi.

Abb Sumit se bhi aur control nahi ho raha tha...Dhire dhire aankhon se aansu ki dhaar behna suru ho gaya.

Sumit:- Pata nahi kaisa pyar hai ye? Aaj bhi Kirti ko galat nahi maan paa raha hu...Aur uski bhi kya galti? Mai hi pada tha uske piche uske laakh mana karne ke baawjud...Ummeed...Shayad yahi ek cheej mujhe le duba.

Aaj nahi to k ye hona hi tha.

Megha:- Abhi himmat rakho...Hum baat karenge Kirti se.

Megha ne ye keh to diya...Lekin usse bhi pata tha Kirti se baat karne ka koi faaidaa nahi.

Sumit:- Nahi...Abb usse aur pareshaan nahi karunga...Wo abb apne jindagi mein khush rahe yahi sahi hai.

Aur mai...Kab tak aise hi aashiq ki rarah apna jindagi gujaarta rahunga...Bhula dunga usse...Bhula dunga.

Bhale hi Sumit ki aawaj mein dard tha lekin aakhiri ki bat mein dridh nischay tha...Aur ye kehne ke baad chehre mein ek baar fir dard bhare nishan aa gaye.
Beautiful update bhai bechare ka dil tut gaya..
 

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UPDATE 74


Dr. Sahab uthh gaye aap?

Sumit ki Papa Sumit ki taraf ne muskuraate hue pucha.

Sumit:- Jab se internship mein aaya hun neend haraam ho chuka hai...Raat raat bhar duty...Thak gaya hun. :sigh2:

S. Dad:- Abb aur kitna baaki hai?

Sumit:- 1 month aur jhelna hai yeh sab kuch...Wo to accha hai ki Surgery mein posting hai abhi...Warna raat raat bhar duty mein lage raho.

S. Dad:- Kyu tujhe surgery karne nahi aata?

Sumit:- Theory to sab aata hai...Bas practical nahi...Aur kisi surgeon mein itna himmat bhi to nahi hai.

S. Dad:- Kis cheej ki himmat?

Sumit:- Responsibility ka...Agar patient ko kuch ho gaya to...Bewkoof hi honge wo jo complicated surgery MBBS level ke doctor ko denge.

Bas unko surgery karte dekh sikh raha hun...Ye bhi bahut hai iss level mein.


Rashmi:- Apna Naa kaamyaabi chupaana koi inse sikhe...Sidhe keh dijiye kuch nahi aata aapko.

Sumit:- Abhi bhi thoda bahut neend ke nasha mein hun...Kuch keh dunga to Papa Papa kar ke rona mat.

Rashmi:- Aap aur aap ka excuses.

Sumit:- Accha mera surgery ka skill tab pata chalega...Jab tujh par try karunga...Fir bataana.

Agar inn mein se koi bhi beemari ho jaaye to bataana... Appendicitis, Pancreatitis, Cholecystitis...

Rashmi:- Bas bas....Papa dekhiye naa...Na jaane kya kya beemari lag jaane ki dua kar rahe hai...Apna surgery ka skill prove karne ke liye.

S. Dad:- Ukshaane ka kaam bhi to tu hi kar rahi hai.

Rahmi:- Kya Papa? Aap hamesha bhaiya ka hi support karte hai.

Sumit:- Iss liye kehta hun...Soch samajh kar panga le.

Fir aise hi hansi majaak mein din beet jaata hai.

Few days Later


Congrats...Aaj tumhara half century complete hua.

Megha ki ye baat Sumit ko samajh mein nahi aaya.

Sumit:- Kis baat ki half century?

Megha:- Kirti ko bhulne ki...Pichle 50 din se ek baar bhi tumhaare munh se Kirti ke baare mein nahi suna.

Sumit:- (In his mind) Wo to mere kan kan (particle) mein maujud hai...Bhulna aur bhulaa paana asambhav hai.

Lekin saamne se Sumit ne Megha ko koi jawaab nahi diya.

Megha:- Majaak kar rahi thi...Lekin tum itna khaamosh kyu ho aaj kal...Aur koi koshish bhi nahi kar rahe ho?

Iss baar gambhir aawaj mein Megha ne pucha.

Sumit:- Abb usko aur pareshaan karne ka dil nahi karta...Jitna koshish karna tha kar chuka hun.

Megha:- Fir Kirti ko kaise manaaoge?

Sumit:- Abb nahi...Agar usse mere pyaar ka ehsaas hoga to wo khud aayegi...Warna kismat ki marji.

Itna keh kar Sumit waha se thoda dur hat gaya aur saamne ho rahi surgery ki aur dekhne laga.

Megha se iss baare mein wo aur baat karna nahi chaahta tha.

Neha:- Ye to acchi baat hai naa wo Kirti se dur ho raha hai...Tere liye to acchi baat hai...Fir baar baar kyu tu usse Kirti ki yaad dila rahi hai?

Thoda gusse mein Neha ne Megha se pucha.

Megha:- Aise agar Sumit mujhe mil bhi jaaye to bhi manjur nahi...Aur ye kaisa pyaar hai ki usse paane ke liye usko aisa dukhi hota dekh iss mein apna khushi dhundu.

Aur yakin ke saath keh sakti hun agar Sumit Kirti se sach mein hamesha ke liye dur ho gaya to uska pyaar se vishwash utth jaayega...Naa hi usse kabhi mujhse pyaar hoga aur naa hi kisi aur se...Achha ye hi hai ki usse uska pyaar mil jaaye.

Neha:- Fir tera kya hoga?

Megha:- Kuch nahi...Jab se sach mein Sumit se pyaar ka ehsaas hua tha tab se hi pata tha Sumit mera kabhi nahi hoga...Aur agar ho bhi gaya to usse hi ye ehsaas hona chahiye.

Tabhi OT. mein Raj aata hai.

Bhaiya!!!!

Sumit ke paas aa kar Raj bola.

Sumit:- Itna dara hua kyu hai? Koi baat hai kya? Bol mai dekh lunga.

Raj:- Baat aap se hi related hai.

Sumit:- Mujhse?

Raj:- Kirti se related.

Sumit:- Meri Kirti ya teri?

Raj:- Aapki.

Baat to dono ki bahut dhire se chal raha tha taaki Surgery mein kisi ko disturb naa ho...Sumit kone mein chala aaya.

Sumit:- Bataa.

Raj:- Kirti ki engagement fixed ho gaya hai.

Sumit:- Ek tej dard Sumit ke seene mein utha jaise kisi ne chaaku bhonk diya ho...Aaknkhein band kar ke uss dard ko sehan karne ki koshish kiya lekin shayad kaamyaab nahi ho paaya.

Ek pal bina ruke wo OT room se nikal gaya...Sumit ko aise jaate dekh Megha bhi uska picha karne lagi.

Sumit sidhe hospital ki chhat ki taraf jaane laga...Chhat mein pahunch kar ek kone mein chala gaya...5 floor niche jameen ki taraf dekhne laga.

Megha jab waha pahuchi to Sumit ko dekh wo bhi dar gayi...Wo kuch kehti isse pehle hi Sumit niche baith gaya.


Megha abb Sumit ke paas gayi.

Megha:- Sumit...Ye sab kya hai?



Sumit:- Wo Kirti...

Dard mein itna hi bol paaya Sumit.

Megha:- Haan suna maine bhi.

Sumit abb aage kuch nahi bola.

Kuch der chup rehne ke baad.

Sumit:- Please tum jaao yaha se...Akela chhod do mujhe.

Lekin Megha Sumit ko aise akela chhodne ko taiyaar nahi thi.

Fir niche dekhte hue Sumit.

Sumit:- Itna himmat nahi hai abb mujhme...Suicide ka khayal bahut pehle aata tha...Wo bhi sirf khayal.

Bas abhi akela rehna chaahta hun...Iss liye yaha chhat mein aa gaya.

Megha:- Kab tak aise hi akele tadapte rahoge...Pichle kuch mahine se tum khud ko sabhi se dur karte aa rahe ho...Dekho kya haalat bana rakaha hai? Dard baatne se kam hota hai...Naa ki usko apne andar dafnaane se.

Sumit:- Lekin dard aisa hai jo baanta bhi nahi jaa sakta aur naa hi baantna chaahta hun.

Vakt bhi aisa hai ki hamesha khushi baatne wala Sumit ke hisse mein aaj baatne ke liye agar kuch hai to bhi ye dard. :sigh2:

Megha:- Kuch to bolo...Dard halka ho jaayega..Tumhe aisa dekh....

Sumit:- Halka hoga...Khatm nahi.

Aur waise bhi kehne ke liye bahut kuch tha...Bahut armaan tha...Vaada....Pyaar...Aur na jaane kya kya...Lekin abb sab kuch bhulta jaa raha hun...Aakhir bataau bhi to kise? Jo mujhse dur jaa rahi hai? Jiski jindagi mein mera koi ahemiyat nahi hai.

Please chali jaao tum...Mujhse aur bardaast nahi ho raha hai.

Aakhiri line Sumit ne Megha ko dekh kar kaha.

Megha:- Nahi aaj tumhe bolna hi hoga...Aise khamoshi se ek baar fir dard ka ghunt peene nahi dungi.

Abb Sumit se bhi aur control nahi ho raha tha...Dhire dhire aankhon se aansu ki dhaar behna suru ho gaya.

Sumit:- Pata nahi kaisa pyar hai ye? Aaj bhi Kirti ko galat nahi maan paa raha hu...Aur uski bhi kya galti? Mai hi pada tha uske piche uske laakh mana karne ke baawjud...Ummeed...Shayad yahi ek cheej mujhe le duba.

Aaj nahi to k ye hona hi tha.

Megha:- Abhi himmat rakho...Hum baat karenge Kirti se.

Megha ne ye keh to diya...Lekin usse bhi pata tha Kirti se baat karne ka koi faaidaa nahi.

Sumit:- Nahi...Abb usse aur pareshaan nahi karunga...Wo abb apne jindagi mein khush rahe yahi sahi hai.

Aur mai...Kab tak aise hi aashiq ki rarah apna jindagi gujaarta rahunga...Bhula dunga usse...Bhula dunga.

Bhale hi Sumit ki aawaj mein dard tha lekin aakhiri ki bat mein dridh nischay tha...Aur ye kehne ke baad chehre mein ek baar fir dard bhare nishan aa gaye.
Bdiya update champ bhai :love:
Sumit:- Meri Kirti ya teri?
Kirti hi kirti h :haha:

Kirti ki engagement fix ho gyi :sigh:
Vese usi se hui kya vo ladka tha jo tour pe gya tha 🤔🤔🤔

Khair dekhte h ab sumit megha ki bat kuch badti h kya :love3:
 

Champ_AK_81

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Badhiya update,
To Aakhirkar Sumeet ka ummeed toot hi gaya. Dekhate hai kab wo isase ubarta hai aur megha ko apanata hai.
Thanks Chintu bhai for your support and review...Keep supporting.
 
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