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Romance Ek Bhool 2 (Completed)

Kirti.s

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UPDATE 40

Bahut khush dikh rahe hai aap?

Raj kuch der se Sumit ko khushi mein idhar udhar tehelte dekh raha tha...Jab usse raha nahi gaya to usne puch hi liya.

Sumit:- Khushi ki hi to baat hai...Bas Megha ka call ka intejaar hai...Fir uske baad nikal jaaunga ek hasin safar ke liye...Apni Kirti ke saath.

Sumit ki khushi aaj uski baaton se bhi jhalak raha tha.

Raj:- To bataiye aage kya plan kiya hai.

Sumit:- Now its time for brain to stop its function and heart to start.

Raj:- Matlab?

Sumit:- Kuch khaas nahi...Dimaag ko chutti de diya hai kuch dino ke liye...Aur dil...Abb usko dhang ka kaam milaa hai...Ishq ladane kaa.

Raj:- Kuch samjha nahi. :hmm:

Sumit:- Abb koi plan nahi karunga...Agar abb bhi plan karne lagunga to aisa lagega jaise Kirti ko paane ke liye koi saajish kar raha hun.

Issi liye abb jo bhi karunga dil se karunga...Ek baar fir se ehsaas karna hai pyaar ke wo hasin pal Kirti ke saath jo itne dino se sirf ek khawhish ban kar reh gaya tha...Ek baar fir se.

Sumit kahi kho sa gaya tha ye baatein kehte hue...Ek baar fir se apne ateet ke hasin yaadon mein.

Aankhein khol kar usne Raj ko dekha.

Sumit:- Aur tera love story? Wo kaha tak pahuncha?

Raj:- Wo...Hum dono...

Sumit:- Ladka sharmaa raha hai...Matlab sab kuch thik chal raha hai.

Raj:- Haan bhai dhire dhire sab thik ho raha hai...Kal bhi 2 ghante saath mein vakt bitaya hamne.

Sumit:- Issi liye abhi tera munh utra hua hai...1 months ki duriyan.

Hanste hue Sumit ne kaha.

Raj:- Kya bhai aap bhi? Pehle hi mai pareshaan hun iss judaai se aur aap hai ki hans rahe hai.

Sumit:- Thoda judaai bhi sehna sikh le...Mujhe hi dekh le...2 saal ki judaai hai...Aur dekh pyar kitna majbut ho gaya hai.

Yahi chhoti chhoti dard hi to hai jo pyar aur jindagi ka matlab samjhaata hai.

Sumit aur apna pravachan deta isse pehle hi Megha ka call aa jaata hai.

Sumit:- Accha mai chalta hun.

Raj:- Best of luck bhai.

Sumit:- Aur haa sun...Abb koi utpatang harkat mat kar dena...Agli baar mai bhi kuch nahi kar paaunga.

Itna keh kar Sumit room se nikal gaya.



Aaj kuch jyada hi shaanti tha Sumit aur Megha ke bich...Dono saath chal rahe thhe aur ek dusre se koi baat cheet bhi nahi...Naa hi koi Hi Hello aur naa hi koi haal chaal puchna...Abb shayad ye vacation apne matlab ka ban gaya tha iss vajah se.

Sumit ne ek najar bhi Megha ki aur nahi dekha...Megha kabhi kabhi Sumit ki taraf dekhti aur agle pal hi najrein badal leti.

Sumit ki chehre ki khushi dekh usse aur bhi gussa aa raha tha.

Megha:- (In her mind) Dusron ke dil ke saath khelne ke baad dekho kitna khush hai. :mad:

Sumit:- Abb to bataa do...Tour ke liye kya plan kiya hai...Kaise jaayenge? Megha ke saath tumne kya baat kiya? Aur wo kaise maan gayi?

Lekin Megha ne koi jawaab nahi diya.

Sumit:- Dekho maine iss vacation ko ek romantic plot ki tarah taiyaar kiya hai...Please tum isse suspense thriller mat banaao. :pray:

Fir bhi Megha ne koi response nahi diya.

Sumit:- Are yaar...Itna kuch kiya hai maine...Vacation ke liye location select kiya...Hotel select kiya...Visiting spots bhi select kiya aur saath hi schedule bhi...Itna sab kuch finalize karne ke baad bhi tumse kuch puchh raha hun to koi response nahi de rahi ho?

Kirti ne itni jaldi kaise haan kar eiya tour ke liye ye soch soch kar dimaag ke neuron mein short circuit ho raha hai? Aur ye bhi samajh mein nahi aa raha hai ki kaunsa gaadi mein jaayenge...Thela, auto, bus, jeep kuch pata nahi.

Tumse pehle pucha tha to kaha tum manage kar logi lekin abb koi jawaab hi nahi de rahi ho?

Abb to shak hone laga hai Kirti iss tour mein aa rahi hai yaa nahi...


Megha:- Tumhe vacation se matlab hai naa.

Sumit:- Haan.

Megha:- To fir chup chaap chalte raho.

Sumit confusion mein chalta raha...Kabhi uske chehre mein Kirti se hone wali mukaakat ka soch kar excitement tha to kabhi confusion ki sach mein Kirti iss tour mein aayegi?

Kuch der aur chalne ke baad Sumit ko apna sapna sach hota dilhai diya.

Gali se main road par aate hi baayi taraf 50 meter ki duri mein Kirti ek car ke baahar khadi thi.

Aankhon ke alawa Sumit ke sharir ke har hissa jaise bejaan ho gaya...Aankhein tha jo Kirti ki khubsurati ko nihaar raha tha.

Aankhon mein dher saara pyar ke saath Sumit ne khud se kaha.

Sumit:- (In his mind) Abb se tumhe inhi palkon mein bitha kar rakhunga.

Picchli baar shayad mera hi pyaar mein koi kami reh gaya tha...Iss baar pyar ka ehsaas kuch aise karaunga ki tum kabhi mujhse dut nahi jaaogi.


Megha bhi Sumit ko ruka dekh wohi par ruk gayi.

Jab Kirti ka najar Sumit par pada to usse vishwash hi nahi hua...Aur jab hua tab usne nafrat se apni najrein badal diya.

Sumit to pehle se hi iss baat ke liye taiyaar tha...Jab usne apna najar idhar udhar ghumaya to Kirti se thodi dur mein ek ladka khada tha...Laghbhag ussi ki umar ka.

Fir Sumit ne apne yaaddaast par jor diya aur yaad karne laga ki kahi wo Kirti ka koi bhai to nahi? Kirti to apni Maa Baap ki ek lauti beti thi...Fir wo yaad karne laga ki kahi wo ladka Kirti ki koi cousin to nahi? Lekin usse aisa kuch yaad nahi aaya.

Agle pal uske dimaagh mein sawal aaya, "Kahi boyfriend to nahi?" Nahi nahi...Aisa nahi ho sakta.

Dar ke saath Sumit aage soch bhi nahi paa raha tha.

Fir usne khud ko sambhaalte hue.

Sumit:- (To himself) Sumit...Be confident.

Fir apna muththi kaste hue wo aage Kirti aur uss ladka ke paas chala gaya.

Sumit:- Hi Kirti...Aaj to bahut khubsurat lag rahi ho.

Pyar bhari aawaj mein Sumit ne taarif kiya...Aur Kirti gusse mein munh fer leti hai...Ye dekh wo ladka bhi Sumit ki taraf gusse se dekhta hai ki Sumit ne Kirti ko uncomfortable feel karwaya.

Fir Sumit uss ladka ki aankho mein dekh kehta hai.

Sumit:- Kaun hai ye vichitra praani?

Sumit ne uss ladke ka getup dekh kar bola...Sir mein chaata jaise baal wo bhi pilaa rang se colored...Sumit ko uske look se koi khaas matlab to nahi tha...Par apna gussa nikaalne ka mauka mil gaya.

Ye sun Kirti gusse mein Sumit ko dekhti hai.

Ladka:- Vivek...Vivek naam hai mera.

Sumit:- V for Vichitra, V for Vivek...Sahi hai. :lol1:

Sumit ne jaise majaak udaate hue kaha...Ye sun Vivek aur Kirti dono gusse mein Sumit ko dekhte hai.

Kirti:- Megha...Isse kyu le kar aayi hai tu? Aur teri dost kaha hai? Jaldi bula...Pehle hi hum late ho chuke hai.

Megha:- (Darte hue) Sumit hi hai wo dost.

Kirti:- Kyaaaaa?

Megha ki baaton se Kirti hairaan reh gayi...Hairaani se bhi jyaada...Itna bada jhuth ka.

Megha:- Kuch baatein karni hai...Yaha side mein aa.

Kirti gusse mein Megha ki taraf jaati hai.

Fir wo dono kuch der baatein karti hai...Kirti ka gussa bhi dhire dhire kam hota jaa raha tha.

Waapas aa kar.

Kirti:- Ye bhi chalega iss tour mein.

Kirti ki baaton mein abhi bhi asantushti dikhai de raha tha.

Megha ne bhi raahat ki saans liya aur ek nafrat bhari najar se Sumit ko dekhne lagi.

Sumit:- Kirti bahut hi stylish driver hai ye tumhara.

Kirti:- Vivek dost hai mera.

Sumit:- Haan to koi galat baat thodi naa hai...Driver dost nahi ho sakte kya?

Kirti:- Baat hi karna bekaar hai.

Kirti ki har ek baat mein Sumit ke liye nafrat tha.

Vivek:- Tumhe ye itna pareshaan kar raha hai aur tum ho ki kuch bol hi nahi rahi ho.

Isse to mai.


Itna keh kar Vivek Sumit ke paas aata hai aur mutthi kas kar Sumit ki taraf haath badhaya hi tha ki Sumit uska haath bich mein pakad kar.

Sumit:- Pura mood bana kar aaya hun yaar iss tour ke liye.

(Kirti ki taraf dekh) Romantic hero hi bane rehne de.

(Vivek ki taraf dekh) Faaltu mein ungli kar Action hero banne mein majbur mat kar.


Itna keh kar Sumit Vivek ka haath jhatak deta hai.

Kirti:- Vivek...Chhodo isse...Kicchad mein patthar fenkne ka kaam mat karo...Mai jaanti hun...Isse kaise deal karna hai.

Vivek gusse se Sumit ko dekh waha se jaata hai aur Megha ka luggage car mein rakh deta hai...Sumit bhi apna luggage rakhta hai.

Kirti jaa kar back seat mein baith jaati hai...Sumit bhi back seat ki taraf jaane wala tha ki Megha uska raashta rok khud Kirti ke saath baith jaati hai.

Sumit abb majburi mein Vivek ke saath front seat mein baith jaata hai.

Car jaise hi aage badha sabhi apne apne khayalon mein khoye hue thhe...Isa tour ka makshad sabhi ke liye alag alag tha...Kisi ko apna pyar haasil karna tha to kisi ko apna nafrat jadd se mitaana tha.

Sumit ke dimaagh mein bhi kayi sawaal tha...Vivek kaun hai? Agar Vivek aur Kirti dost hai to ye dosti kis hadd tak? Vivek ka iss tour mein kya kaam? Megha aur Kirti ki bich ki baat cheet?

Lekin ye sawaalon ko kuch der side rakh Sumit sirf Kirti ke baare mein hi soch raha tha.

Fir wo apna pocket se ek chhota sa mirror nikaal kar kuch aise rakhta hai jisse Kirti ka pura chehra usse pratibimb ke roop mein dikhaai de.

Kirti ko nihaarte hue,

Sumit:- (In his mind) Tumhara khubsurati ke saath saath tumhara mere liye nafrat aur bhi badh gaya hai.

Vaada hai khud se...Tumhara ye nafrat ko jald hi pyaar mein badal dunga.
Very nice update sir ji
Finally ye sb mil vacation ke liye nikl gye lekin ye sath mein vichitra prani vivek kon hai or iska inke sath vacation mein jana kuch samjh nhi aa rha.akhir kya khichdi paka rhi hai megha or kirti sath mil kr.
 

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UPDATE 41

Utro...Naashta ka time ho gaya.

Car ek hotel ke saamne ruka tha...Sumit ke alawa sabhi utar chuke thhe...Lekin Sumit jo apne hi duniya mein khoya hua tha usko isse koi fark nahi pada.

Suna nahi tumne?

Ek baar fir gusse se Kirti ne pucha.

Aawaj thoda tej tha to Sumit ka dhyan bhi toot gaya.

Sumit:- Haan bolo.

Mushkuraate hue Sumit ne pucha.

Kirti:- Naashta karna hai yaa nahi?

Chhidhte hue Kirti ne ek baar fir pucha.

Sumit:- Tumhare saath hun...Issi ehsaas se pet bhar gaya.

Kirti:- Bakwaas band karo...Aage gaadi nahi rukegi...Fir baad mein mat kehna ki bhookh laga hai.

Sumit:- Gaadi mein tum bhi to ho...Jab jab bhookh lagega tab tab tumhe dekh lunga...Bhookh mit jaayega.

Sumit ki aawaj mein pyaar hi pyaar tha...Ye sun Kirti aur bhi chhidh gayi.

Kirti:- Tumse baatein karna hi bekaar hai.

Kirti waha se chali gayi...Megha aur Vivek ke saath.

Sumit car ke window se pyar se Kirti ko jaate hue dekhne laga.

Sumit:- Na jaane kitni raatein tumhari yaadon mein bhukha bitaya hai...Aaj kyu naa tumhare saath hone ki khushi mein bhukha rahu. :D

Kuch aise hi khayalon ke saath Sumit apne pyaar ki duniya mein fir se kho gaya.

Achanak hi ek khayal ke saath Sumit ka dhyan tuta.

Wo jald apne jagah se utth kar car ke back seat par baith gaya...Aur intejaar karne laga Kirti ki waapas aane ka...Aur ek romantic trip ka.

Hotel se waapas aane ke baad jaise hi Kirti ne car ka gate khola Sumit ko dekh fir se aag baboola ho gayi. :mad:

Gusse mein kuch bol bhi nahi paa rahi thi...Megha ko kuch ishaara kar wo front seat mein baith gayi.

Megha fir Sumit ke paas baith gayi...Baithte vakt wo bhi Sumit ko ek najar gusse se dekhti hai.

Sumit:- Are yaar...Tumhare saath to class mein kayi baar baith chuka hun? Abb to Kirti ko mauka do?

Lekin Megha kuch jawaab nahi deti.

Sumit:- Koi baat nahi...Kirti to mere paas jindagi bhar rahegi...Mere humsafar ban kar...Kuch pal hi sahi tum bhi baith jaao...Shayad koi yaadgaar lamha ban jaaye.

Sumit ne hanste hue kaha...Lekin ye baat kaafi tha dono ka gussa aur bhadkaane ka...Lekin dono hi chup rahi...Shayad iss vacation ka mood abhi se kharaab nahi karna chaahti thi.


Car kuch dur aage gaya hi tha ki.

Sumit:- Ae Vichitra Praani...Ye vichitra praani thoda lamba shabd ho gaya...VP short form...Haan ye thik rahega.

Haan to Mr. VP...Ye kya bail gaadi chala raha hai? Cycle wala feeling aa raha hai :sigh:

Vivek:- Ek to subah se drive kar raha hun...Upar se itni dur ka destination rakha hai...Wo to shukr mana ki abhi bhi chala paa raha hun itne thakaan ke baawjud.

Sumit:- Thoda glucose vagera piyaa kar...Taakat milega...Wo bhi instant wala.

Vivek:- Ye jo tu itna bhaunk raha hai...Khud hi kyu drive nahi karta?

Sumit:- Mai to kar lunga drive...Lekin Formula race ki speed racer aur baahar baithe darshak ko hi majaa aata hai.

Megha:- Nahi...Koi jarurat nahi hai iska.

Sumit ke baat khatm hote hi Megha bol uthi.

Sumit bhi Megha ke saath uss raat ka bike wala safar yaad karke muskuraya.


Sumit:- Are yaar...Kitna boring trip chal raha hai...Thoda music ho jaaye.

Chalo Kirti...Tumse shuruwaat karte hai.

Lekin Kirti ne koi response nahi diya.

Sumit:- Accha thik hai...Mai hi shuruwaat karta hun.



Main tenu samjhawan ki
Na tere bina lagda jee

Main tenu samjhawan ki
Na tere bina lagda jee

Tu ki jaane pyaar mera
Main karoon intezar tera
Tu dil, tunhion jaan meri​



Sumit ne pure feel ke saath sur milaa kar gaana suru hi kiya tha ki Kirti ki harkat ne maano uska dil ek baar fir se tod diya.

Jaha Sumit Kirti ko apne dil ki baat gaano ke jariye se bataana chaahta tha wohi Kirti uski gaana ko avoid karne ke liye earphone mobile mein connect kar ke apne kaano mein laga leti hai.

Sumit:- (In his mind) Kya itna hi izzat reh gaya hai mera?

Sumit ne apna gaana band kar diya aur khidki se baahar dekhne laga.

Sumit:- (In his mind) Nahi aaj wo naraaj hai...Aaj mai manaunga to hi kal wo bhi mujhe manayegi jab mai naraaj hounga...Pyar mein ruthna manaana to chalta rehta hai. :)

Ye sochte hi Sumit ke hontho par fir se muskaan chhaa gaya.

Sumit:- (In his mind) Jaanta hun tumhari naraajgi...Abhi to tumhe aur irritate karna hai...Tumhare andar ka gussa aur naarajgi ko jad se mitaana hai...Waapas se tumhe apna banana hai.

Ye sochte hue Sumit ka aatma vishwash fir se badh gaya...Aur fir wo fir se Kirti ko pyaar bhari najro se nihaarne laga.

Yeh sab Megha ke saamne hi ho raha tha...Chaah kar bhi wo Sumit ko avoid nahi kar paa rahi thi.


Fir aise hi ye trip bhi khatm ho gaya...Shaam mein wo sabhi apne destination pahunch gaye.

Yeh ek pahadi ilaaka tha...Kuch bade bade pahaad, kuch bade aur hare ped se behti thandi hawaayein...Aur aasman mein neela baadal...Dhalte shaam mein wo itna hi jaan paaye iss ilaaka ke baare mein.

Sabhi ko intejaar tha to kal ka...Wo bhi besabri se.

Fir sabhi hotel ke andar gaye aur Sumit counter se 2 chaabhi le kar aata hai...Ek Kirti ko de kar.

Sumit:- Socha tha hum 3 hi honge tour mein...Issi liye 2 room book karwaya tha...Ek mein mai aur Kirti aur dusre mein Megha.

Sumit ne muskuraate hue kaha...Kirti to chup thi...Lekin uski aankhein bahut kuch keh rahi thi.

Sumit:- Ohh sorry...Ek mein mai akela aur dusre mein tum dono.

Fir sabhi apne apne room ki taraf jaane lage...Vivek ko Sumit ke saath room share karna accha to nahi lag raha tha lekin wo fir bhi chup chaap chalta raha.

Room mein pahunch kar apna luggage rakhne ke baad Sumit room se nikal kar bahar chala gaya.


Ashish:- What a pleasant surprise? Phone wo bhi tune kiya aaj?

Sumit:- Haan...Aaj bahut hi jyada khush hun...To socha tujhe phone kar lun...Waise bhi tu sirf khushi ke vakt ke hi to dost hai.

Ashish:- Kuch jyada nahi bol raha hai?

Sumit:- Abhi bola hi kaha hun...Bolne to de.

Ashish:- Haan haan...Tera khushi teri baaton se hi jalak raha hai? Lagta hai Megha pat gayi hai.

Sumit ka reaction pehle hi soch Ashish hasne lagta hai.

Sumit:- Fir chutiyapa? :mad:

Ashish:- Accha accha bataa...Kirti ke saath kitna aage badha baat?

Sumit:- Aaj usko itne vakt ke baad dekha yaar wo bhi itne der ke liye...Bahut pyaar aa raha hai yaar uss par...Aatma vishwash bhi badh gaya hai ki iss baar usse apna bana kar hi rahunga.

Excitement mein Sumit ne kaha.

Ashish:- Sirf dekha...Aur itna khush ho raha hai.

Sumit:- Abe pessimistic jantaaon ke sardaar :mad: Yeh to shuruaat hai...Bahut accha suruwaat...Dekhte jaa iss shuruwaat ko mai kitna aage tak le kar jaata hun.

Ashish:- Bharosha hai yaar tujh par...Bhulna mat...Free ki party pending hai.

Sumit:- Abb kiya tune samajhdaari wali baat.

Ashish:- Waise Sumit...Ek confusion hai...Tere ghar walon ko bhi pata hoga iss 4 week ke vacation ke baare mein...Fir tu kaise iss vacation par jaa paaya?

Sumit:- Study.

Ashish:- Malab?

Study:- Ye parents ke liye expectation hai to bacchon ke liye hathiyaar.

Ashish:- Abe saaf saaf bata.

Sumit:- Papa ko phonr mein kaha ki Biochemistry ki Live Class lene jaa raha hun...Pehle to unhe shak hua ki mai itna padhaaku kaise ban gaya hun...Lekin fir wo maan gaye...Bahut khush thhe...Maa ko bhi samjhaa diya.

Aur saath hi 20,000 Rs bhi daal diya unhone mere account mein...Aur baaki ke kuch paise seniors aur doston se...Vacation ka kharcha paani nikal jaayega.


Ashish:- Galat nahi kar raha hai tu?

Sumit:- (Serious ho kar) Galat to kar raha hun lekin majburi hai...Ek aakhiri koshish hi to hai...Uske baad khud ke saath saath Kirti aur ghar walon ke liye bhi jimmedaar ban jaaunga.

Ashish:- Koi baat nahi...Tu tour ko enjoy kar...Aur haan bhulna mat free ki party khaaye bahut din ho gaye mujhe?

Ashish ne Sumit ko serious hota dekh baat ko sambhaal liya.

Sumit:- Tour se aate hi mil jaayega tujhe party.



Dusri taraf

Kirti:- Mujhe bhi abb lagta hai tune sahi kiya...Kuch jyada hi udd raha hai? Aise pankh kaatungi uss Sumit ka iss tour mein ki wo fir se kabhi udd nahi paayega.

Megha kuch nahi boli...Wo abhi bhi apne soch mein gumm thi.

Kirti:- Kya soch rahi hai?

Megha:- Yahi ki kitna galat hai Sumit...Nafrat ho gaya hai usse abb to.

Kirti:- 2 saalo se jaanti hun...Kitna bada dhokhebaaz hai wo ye mujhse accha koi nahi jaanta...Tu dur hi reh usse.

Usse aise sabak sikhaaungi ki wo tujhe bhi kabhi pareshaan nahi karega.

Nafrat bhari aawaj mein Kirti ne kaha.
Brilliant update sir ji
Ye charo apne manzil ko pahuch gye jaha sumit apne baato se kirti ko impress krne ki koshish mein lga hua hai uske opposite kirti irritate hue ja rhi hai.megha gussa toh hai lekin woh apni hi soch mein khoyi hui hai.sumit apne pyaar ki dhun mein itna khoya hua h ki use zara bhi is bare mein nhi socha ki shayad kirti apne life mein move on kr chuki ho or koi uske life mein ho.kirti ke baato mein sumit ke liye itni zyada nafrat h ki shayad hi kbhi pyaar mein badal paye pata nhi ye trip inki zindagi mein kya badlaw layenge.
 

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Bhout bdiya update champ bhai ?

Kirti sumit ko full ignore maar rahi hai

Kirti megha kya karne wali h ab

Kahi is story me bhi khawaishen ki trah sher ka scene to nahi ayega :hinthint:
Yaani koi. Incident ki. Sumit kirti ko. Bchaega ?
Waiting for next UPDATE
Thanks Akki bhai for your support and review...Wo tiger wala scene Kasam mein tha Khwahishein mein nahi :D...Abhi tak to aise scene socha nahi hai iss story mein ... Socha to likh kar post kar dunga. :D...Keep supporting bhai.
 

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Thanks Akki bhai for your support and review...Wo tiger wala scene Kasam mein tha Khwahishein mein nahi :D...Abhi tak to aise scene socha nahi hai iss story mein ... Socha to likh kar post kar dunga. :D...Keep supporting bhai.
Haa kasam me :D

Sabhi naam milte julte rakhe ho
 

Champ_AK_81

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Nice update..
Lekin bhai story ab boring ho rahi hai...ek confusion ko door karne mein aapne story ko itna lamba khinch diya..
Thanks Malikarman bhai for your support and review...Puri koshish karunga aage story boring naa ho...Abb story uss phase mein jaa raha hai jaha updates laghbhag painful aur emotions wale honge...Abb ke iss tragic phase mein sirf kuch hi situational comedy hoga.

Aur rahi baat confusion ka...To abhi yahi kahunga confusion bas shuruaat hai story ka...Abhi iss tour ke baad story mein aur bhi bahut kuch hona baaki hai jis ki shuruaat ye confusion hai...Bahut si alag pehlu dekhne ko milega aapko story mein. :approve:

Saath bane rahiye bhai.
 

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Thanks Malikarman bhai for your support and review...Puri koshish karunga aage story boring naa ho...Abb story uss phase mein jaa raha hai jaha updates laghbhag painful aur emotions wale honge...Abb ke iss tragic phase mein sirf kuch hi situational comedy hoga.

Aur rahi baat confusion ka...To abhi yahi kahunga confusion bas shuruaat hai story ka...Abhi iss tour ke baad story mein aur bhi bahut kuch hona baaki hai jis ki shuruaat ye confusion hai...Bahut si alag pehlu dekhne ko milega aapko story mein. :approve:

Saath bane rahiye bhai.
Palke bichhaye hue intezar hai update ka....
Great heart touching story hai bhai
 
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