Romance Ek Bhool(Completed)

[Champ_AK_81]

dr sahab net problem kar raha hai......... like to ho jata hai kuchh der mein lekin comment post kai baar me hota hai..........

aaj rat ko review dunga.............lekin update dete rahna..........ye bhi meine raat hi padh li thi

ab intzar hai

Koi baat nahi bhai...Jab net thik se kaam kare tab comment post kijiye.

 

[kamdev99008]

Koi baat nahi bhai...Jab net thik se kaam kare tab comment post kijiye.

Aaj ke update ka intzar hai

 

[lone_hunterr]

Don't take holiday as your readers are waiting eagerly for updates....

Jaldi se mystery khatam ho and pata chale ki Sameer ne apni dushman se shadi kari kyun

 

[Champ_AK_81]

update champ ji..... great going

Thanks Naina ji for your support and comment...Keep supporting.

 

[Champ_AK_81]

Great update sir ji...
Maza aa gaya good long updates
Ignorant Sameer. Frustrated Rajesh and Divya. Angered Priya. Wicked Shruti and Karan.
Vaise lagta to ye karan bhi dhokebaaj h but isne kuch kiya nhi abb tak
Waiting for more hope you won't take Christmas break

Merry Christmas

Thanks Lone Hunterr bhai for your support and review and Merry Christmas...I wont take break today...Update will be posted within few moments...Keep supporting.

 

[Champ_AK_81]

Aaj ke update ka intzar hai

Kuch hi der me bhai.

 

[Champ_AK_81]

Don't take holiday as your readers are waiting eagerly for updates....

Jaldi se mystery khatam ho and pata chale ki Sameer ne apni dushman se shadi kari kyun

Update bas kuch hi der mein bhai.

 

[Champ_AK_81]

UPDATE 41​

Sameer aur Priya ki team aage ghumne ke liye nikle hi the ki thodi dur chalne ke baad Shruti Sameer se kehti hai.

Shruti:- Sameer...Mai aur aage nahi chal paaungi...Thoda sir dard (headache) hai aur rest karna chahti hun...Aasmaan me baadal bhi aa gaye hai aur baaris bhi ho sakti hai...Aur aise me mera nikalna thik nahi hoga.

Sameer:- Haan thik keh rahi ho...Tumhe abhi rest karna chaahiye...Agar tum kaho to mai aur Rajesh bhi ruk jaate hai.

Sameer ne fikar jataate hue kaha.

Shruti kuch bolti isse pehle hi Rajesh kehta hai.

Rajesh:- Excuse me Sameer...Tujhe yaha rukna hai to ruk mai nahi rukne waala.

Rajesh ne Shruti ki taraf gusse se dekhte hue kaha...Aur uski baat se pata chal raha tha ki kitna gussa dabaa kar rakha hai Rajesh ne Shruti ke liye apne dil me.

Sameer:- Ye kya keh raha hai Rajesh? Shruti hamaari dost hai...Aur tu uske baare me aisa kaise bol sakta hai?

Sameer bhi thoda gussa ho gaya Rajesh par.

Rajesh:- Hamaari nahi sirf teri dost hai...Maine kabhi isse apna dost nahi maana...Aur tera yaadasht accha hai to tujhe ye pata hona chaahiye ki hamaare bich ladaayi bhi ho chuki hai aur mai kabhi isse baat bhi nahi karta.

Mai to sirf iss liye tera saath rehta hu kyu ki tu mera dost hai...Mai iss ladki se koi matlab nahi rakhna chaahta aur tere kehne par iss ladki ke liye apna trip miss nahi karna chaahta.

Tum dono decide kar lo aur jaldi se bataao ki tujhe aana hai ya nahi.

Rajesh ki har aawaj me Shruti ke liye nafrat tha...Udhar Shruti bhi bahut gussa ho gayi thi Rajesh ki baat sun kar lekin wo show nahi karti...Bas apne man me sochti hai.

Shruti:- (In her mind) Jitna bolna hai bol le...Pehle Priya aur uski team ko maja chakhaungi fir aur uske baad tera number aayega.

Shruti ye soch hi rahi thi ki Sameer ne Rajesh se kaha.

Sameer:- Tu jaa aur maje kar...Mai Shruti ke paas rahunga...Shaayad usse meri jarurat pad jaaye.

Sameer ki baat sunne ke baad Rajesh jaane hi waala tha ki Shruti ki voice sun ruk gaya.

Shruti:- Nahi Sameer...Tum bhi jaao...Bas chhoti si sir dard hai...Rest karungi to thik ho jaayega...Maine to mausam ko dekh jyaada tabiyat na bigad jaaye ye soch kar rest karne ka decision liya hai...Warna mujhe bhi jaane ka man tha.

Sameer:- Nahi mera bhi jaane ka man nahi hai....(Rajesh ki taraf dekhte hue) Kisi ki baat se mera mood kharab ho gaya hai.

Shruti:- Nahi Sameer tum jaao...Mai ye nahi chahti ki tum meri vajah se yahi raho...Thoda sa sir dard hai rest karungi to thik ho jaayega...Aur apna mood thik kar lo aur jaakar enjoy karo...Roj aise ghumne ka mauka nahi milta hai aur jab mil raha hai tab aisi chhoti chhoti baato ko ignore karke enjoy karna chaahiye.

Fir bhi Sameer nahi maana...Wo Shruti ko akele chhod jaana nahi chaahta tha...Lekin Shruti ke aage uska kuch nahi chala.

Sameer:- Are you sure? Mai chala jaau.

Shruti:- Abb jyada der mat karo...Pehle hi tum sab late ho gaye ho.

Sameer:- Ok thik hai mai jaa raha hu...Apna khayaal rakhna.

Itna keh kar Sameer aur Rajesh nikal gaye...Rajesh ko abb raahat mila Shruti ki bakwaas se.

Shruti ko koi sir dard nahi hua tha...Uska mood kharab tha Sameer ka usko wish na karne ki vajah se...Aur agar wo ghumne jaati to waha pe Karan aur Priya bhi mil jaati...Aise me uska bigda hua mood aur kharaab ho jaata...Aaj uska birthday tha to wo apna mood aur kharab karna nahi chaahti thi.

Sameer ko jabardasti bhejne ke picche bhi ek maksad tha...Jab Rajesh ki baat se Sameer gussa ho gaya tha tab Shruti ko ek mauka mila...Shruti jaanti thi Sameer jaldi gussa nahi hota hai aur jab hota hai uska gussa bahut khatarnaak hota hai...Aise me agar Sameer ko Priya ya Rajesh par gussa aaya to tamasha hona tay tha.

Abb ye sab baat ko bhul kar Shruti apne birtbday aur Priya ko beizzat karne ka sochne lagi.



Udhar raaste me Sameer aur Rajesh khaamoshi ke saath chal rahe the...Sameer Rajesh se naraaj tha to Rajesh Sameer ka gussa kam hone ka intejaar kar raha tha taaki wo Sameer se baat kar sake...Jab bahut der chalne ke baad bhi Sameer ka gussa shaant nahi hua to Rajesh ne keh hi diya.

Rajesh:- Sameer mujhe tujhse kuch kehna hai.

Rajesh ki baat par Sameer Rajesh ko gusse se ghur kar dekhta hai aur kehta hai.

Sameer:- Rajesh please...Abhi mera mood thik nahi hai...Aur mai koi baat karna nahi chaahta.

Lekin Rajesh ko kuch fark nahi pada...Wo apna baat har haal me kehna chaahta tha.

Rajesh:- Pehle ye bata ki tu gussa kyu hai.

Sameer:- Teri vajah se...Tune jo Shruti se kaha wo mujhe bilkul accha nahi laga...Aaj uska birthday hai aur tune aaj uske saath aise baat kiya.

Rajesh:- Mai tujhe pehle bhi keh chuka hu...Mujhe usse koi matlab nahi hai...Aur uske liye accha din ho ya bura isse bhi matlab nahi.

Mai bas ye kehna chaahta hu tujhse ki tu apne dost ko samjha de...Kabhi Divya aur mere baare me kuch ulta sidha baat na kare aur mujhe hukum naa de...Teri vajah se bardaast kar raha hu...Warna mujhe uss ladki se koi matlab nahi aur mai uski koi bhi baat maana nahi chaahta...Wo bas apme kaam se hi matlab rakhe to accha hoga...Wo bas tujhse dosti rakhe mujhse nahi.

Mai bas tujhse dosti rakhna chahta hu...Aur yahi bataana chaahta hu ki tu uss ko sambhaal le baat bigadne se pehle...Mai bhi apni taraf se kosish karunga usse dur rehne ka.

Mai ye nahi kahunga ki tu usse dosti chhod de...Teri life hai jo karna hai kar...Mujhe koi problem nahi tera najdeeki uske saath badhe yaa fir dooriya badhe...Mai bas usse dur rehna chahta hu.

Uski puri baat sunne ke baad Sameer bola.

Sameer:- Ye sab baad me sochenge...Abhi ghumne aaye hai ....Iss baat se hame hamaara mood kharab karna nahi chaahiye...Chal abhi ghumte hai baad me iss baare me baat karenge.

Sameer ki baat se lag raha tha ki wo relax hone ki koshish kar raha hai lekin abhi tak ho nahi paaya tha.

Iske baad dono map se address dekh pahunch jaate hai uss jagah jaha par sabhi gaye the aur enjoy kar rahe the.

Uss jagah ka maahaul dekh Rajesh aur Sameer apni tension bhul enjoy karne lage.

 

[Champ_AK_81]

UPDATE 42​

Der se hi sahi lekin Rajesh aur Sameer uss pahadi ilaake me pahunch hi gaye...Waha pe pahunch kar dekha to sabhi apni dosto ke saath ghum rahe the aur masti kar rahe the...Teacher ne bhi keh diya tha ki jyaada dur na jaaye.

Aise hi ghumte ghumte Sameer ki najar Priya aur uski dosto par jaata hai...Priya aaj bahut dino ke baad aise muskuraa kar enjoy kar rahi thi...Wo bahut hi pyaari lag rahi thi...Lekin Sameer ko isse kuch fark na pada...Wo usse ignore karke dusri taraf jaane lagta hai.

Sameer aage badh hi raha tha ki Rajesh ki aawaj se ruk jaata hai.

Rajesh:- Mujhe Divya bula rahi hai...Kuch time ke liye usse baat karke aata hu...Tujhe jaana hai to jaa aur intejaar karna hai to kuch der ke liye ruk.

Rajesh ki aawaj se lag raha tha ki abhi bhi uska gussa khatam nahi hua tha.

Sameer:- Ok jaa...Mai intejaar karta hu...Lekin jaldi aana.

Sameer ne muskuraate hue kaha...Wo picchli baato ko bhul jaana chaahta tha...Lekin Rajesh kuch kahe bina hi chala gaya.

Rajesh aur Divya kareeb aadhe ghante tak baat karte hai...Sameer bore ho gaya tha lekin fir bhi intejaar karta raha...Rajesh aur Divya ko haste baat karta dekh uska frustration bhi badh raha tha...Lekin wo kar bhi kya sakta tha...Rajesh ne to usse keh diya tha ki agar wo rukna nahi chaahta to jaa sakta hai...Khair kuch der baad uska intejaar khatam ho gaya...Divya se baat karne ke baad Rajesh aa gaya...Rajesh ke chehre me abhi bhi muskaan tha.

Sameer:- Lagta hai bahut gehri dosti hai...Iss liye itni der tak baat kar raha tha..

Rajesh:- Haan bahut jyaada.

Rajesh bahut time baad Divya se baat karne ke baad aaj muskuraaya tha...Aur wo Sameer se fir se ladkar apna mood kharab karna nahi chaahta tha...Aur jitna ho sake utna Sameer ki baat ko ignore karna chaahta tha kuch der ke liye.

Sameer:- Ye dosti hi hai yaa dosti se badhkar.

Sameer ko laga yahi accha vakt hai Rajesh se baat karne ka aur ladaayi khatam karne ka...Rajesh bhi accha mood me dikh raha tha aur shaayad isse accha mauka Sameer ko nahi mil sakta tha.

Rajesh:- Haan bahut acche dost hai hum...Tu jis tarah se pucch raha hai isse to yahi lag raha hai ki tu mujhe indirectly puch raha hai ki kahi mai Divya se pyar to nahi karta...To iska jawaab ye hai ki abhi tak pyaar ke baare me socha nahi...Lekin kuch pata nahi aage kya ho...Aur hamaari dosti bhi utni hi gehri hai jitna Shruti aur tera.

Rajesh ko abhi Sameer ki har ek baat kadwa lag raha tha...Aur chhidhte hue usne Sameer ko jawaab diya.

Sameer:- Ajeeb dosti hai hamaara...Tu aur mai bahut acche dost hai...Shruti meri dost hai aur Divya teri...Shruti tujhse nafrat karti hai aur Divya mujhse...Pata nahi aage kya kya hone waala hai hamaare saath.

Sameer ne Rajesh ka gussa kam karne ke liye muskuraate hue kaha...Lekin Rajesh ka daba hua gussa abb baahar nikal raha tha.

Rajesh:- Bilkul galat...Shruti jaisi ghatiya ladki nahi hai Divya...Wo tujhse nafrat nahi karti...Usse kisi ko bevajah nafrat karne ka faltu time nahi hai jaise ki Shruti ke liye...Sameer tu bata...Mai to Shruti se baat nahi karta tha aur naa hi Divya...Priya aur Karan ka bhi usse koi lena dena nahi tha...To kyu wo sabhi se nafrat karti hai...Chal maan leta hu ki wo tujhe apna dost maanti hai aur tere dushman ko apna dusman...To fir teri dusmani mujhse aur Divya se to nahi hai...To fir wo kyu hamaare picche padi hai?

Shaayad baat samajh me aa gaya hoga tujhe...Aur tujhe itna hi kahunga ki galti se bhi Divya ka comparison uss Shruti se mat karna...Kaha shaant aur sabka care karne waali Divya aur kaha wo bevajah sabse nafrat karne waali Shruti.

Galti se bhi compare mat karna...Warna accha nahi hoga....Tune aaj tak shaant Rajesh ko dekha hai...Agar mera gusse ki aag bhadak gaya to sab kuch jal ke rakh ho jaayega.

Rajesh ne apne andar kaid gusse ko aaj baahar nikaal hi diya...Shruti ke liye jitna nafrat tha usse baahar nikaal hi liya...Last ki lines ko bolte hi uske aankhe gusse se laal ho gaya...Divya se baat karne ke baad chehre me jo muskaan aaya tha pal bhar me wo gaayab ho gaya.

Sameer to Rajesh ko bas dekhta hi raha...Kabhi socha nahi tha usne ki Rajesh itna gussa bhi ho sakta hai...Usne socha ki filhaal bahas karna thik nahi hai...Jaise bhi karke Rajesh ko shaant karaana chaahiye.

Sameer:- Teri baat bhi apni jagah sach hai...Mujhe bhi nahi pata yaar Shruti aisa kyu behave kar rahi hai...Mai usse samjha dunga ki tujhse koi matlab na rakhe...Aur tujhe apne tarike se jeene de...Abb to thik hai na.

Sameer ko ummeed tha ki abb Rajesh ka gussa shaant ho jaayega.

Rajesh:-Ha jarur samjhaana...Aur jitna jaldi ho sake utna hi accha hai...Warna pata nahi mai kya kar baithu.

Sameer:- Accha shaant ho jaa yaar...Bol dunga usse...Abb to khus hai na...Chal abb gussa thuk de aur pehle jaisa Rajesh ban jaa aur chal enjoy karte hai...Chal pahad par chhadhte hai thodi dur tak.

Sameer ne muskuraate hue kaha...Uski iss baat se Rajesh ka gussa kam ho gaya...Aur usne bhi socha ki kyu Shruti ki vajah se apna mood kharab karke trip kharaab kare.

Iske baad dono hi dost chal padhe ghumne aur masti karne...Kuch pal baad Rajesh ka gussa bhi khatam ho gaya aur wo bhi Sameer ke saath normal ho kar baate karte hue ghumne laga...Dono pahaad ka environment dekh bahut khus ho gaye...Nayi nayi najaare aur thandi hawayein mehsoos kar ke dil khus ho gaya dono ka...Chhidiyon ki pyaari aawaj aur ekaant jagah ghumne me bahut majaa aa raha tha unhe...Unhe lag raha tha ki wo alag hi duniya me aa gaye hai...Shehar ki crowd, pollution, noise aur ghutan se dur ek alag hi duniya me ye dono aa gaye hai...Ye dono aise hi ghum rahe the ki Rajesh bola.

Rajesh:- Sameer tu bhi bahut ajeeb insaan hai yaar...Khud hi kehta hai ki koi tej aggressive ho kar tujhse baat kare ye tujhe pasand nahi lekin aaj to gusse me maine kitna kuch bol diya fir bhi tu shaant reh kar muskuraate hue mujhe samjhaane laga.

Rajesh ne hairaani me puccha to Sameer ne muskuraate hue jawaab diya.

Sameer:- Tu acche se mujhe nahi jaan paaya yaar...Gusse me hi sahi lekin tune jo bhi bola ekdam sach bola...Aur tu apne andar daba hua gussa baahar nikaal raha tha...Agar koi meri galti ke bina mujhse aggresively baat kare to mai usse nahu chhodta...Tu to mera dost hai yaar...Tujhse galti ho bhi gaya to bhi maaf kar dunga lekin tune koi galti kiya hi nahi tha to fir mera gussa hone ka sawaal hi nahi hai...Ek baat jaan le tu mera dost tha, hai aur rahega...Shruti to baad me meri dost bani hai...Uski jidd ke saamne mai tere saath kabhi bura bartaaw nahi karunga.

Sameer ki baat sunn Rajesh bahut khus ho gaya...Khushi iss baat ka tha ki Shruti ke aane ke baad bhi unn dono ke dosti par koi asar nahi pada hai.

Ye dono kuch aage badhe hi the ki tabhi jor se baarish hone lagti hai...Aas paas theharne ka koi jagah bhi nahi tha.

Rajesh:- Sameer hame waapas chalna chaahiye...Ye baarish jaldi rukne waali nahi hai...Niche camp hai chal jaldi se waha pahunchte hai aur baarish se bach jaayenge...Warna bimaar pad sakte hai ham.

Sameer:- Ha thik kaha...Chal jaldi se waapas...Yaha theharne ki jagah bhi nahi hai...Pehle niche camp me jaate hai...Waha se jugaad lagayenge hotel jaane ka...Aaj Shruti ka birthday hai aur abhi tak maine usse wish bhi nahi kiya...Jaldi se jaana hoga hame.

Itna keh kar Sameer aur Rajesh bhaagne lagte hai niche ki taraf...Tabhi unhe ek ladki ki tej aawaj sunaai deti hai "Bachaao"...Wo dono thodi der ruk jaate hai...Dobaara aawaj nahi aata to laga unhe bhram hua hai baarish ki aawaj me...Wo fir se niche camp ki taraf daud lagaate hai.

Ki tabhi fir se ladki ki "Bachaao, Koi hai,help me" ka aawaj aata hai...Iss baar dono sure ho jaate hai ki ye ladki ki aawaj hi hai.

Rajesh:- Sameer...Sach me koi ladki mushibat me hai yaar...Chal ham help karte hai.

Sameer:- Nahi tu jaa...Mai dekhta hu kya mushibat hai uss ladki ka...(Side me khaai ki taraf ek ladki ki latakte hue haath ko dekhte hue) Wo ladki gir rahi hai..Mai bachaata hu usse aur bacha lunga...Tu ruka to tera tabiyat kharab ho jaayega...Tujhe sardi lag jaayega...Tu jaldi se camp ki taraf jaa aur baarish se bach...Mai bacha lunga uss ladki ko.

Sameer ne ladki ki taraf daudte hue kaha tha...Rajesh ko bhi bharosha tha ki wo uss ladki ko bacha lega...Aur iss me uska kaam nahi tha...Ulta dono aur bimaar pad sakte the...Wo niche ki taraf chala gaya.

Sameer ne jaise hi apni baat khatam kiya wo ladki ke kareeb pahunch hi gaya...Aur jaldi se usne ladki ko upar khinchne ke liye kadam aage badhaaya hi tha ki tabhi wo bhi fisal gaya.

 

[kamdev99008]

to ye tha priya ko bachane ka scene........... lekin isme bhi shruti ka hath tha kya?

aur sameer jo khud ko bahut intelligent samajhta hai...........use ek ladki apni ungliyon par nacha rahi hai...........
shuruati update se aisa nahi lagta ki sameer ab tak shruti ko pehchan paya ho........... wo abhi bhi apni bhool ka jimmedar hone ka shak neha par kar raha hai

dekhte hain aage