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Update 52
Poonam..... Tum use jaise tum chaho waise mar dena, lekin us se pehle wo mujhe chahiye wo bhi zinda.
MLA...... Lekin tumhari us se kya dushmani hai aur tum use kaise janti ho, aur sabse badi baat wo tumhe zinda kyu chahiye?
Poonam..... In sab baton se tumhara koi matlab nahi, tum bs mujhe wo zinda lakr doge, uske baad wo tumhara.
MLA..... Thik hai, to btao wo kaham milega?
Poonam fr use kuch btati hai aur call cut kr deti hai, idher MLA ke face pe smile thi.
Mla man me...... AK tune mere bete ko mar kr acha nahi kiya, ab tu marega mere hathon se, aa raha hu main teri maut bn kr, hahahahahaha.
Ab aage.......
Idher aryan dhruv ko uske ghr chod apne ghr aata hai aur sidha bar me jaker whiskey pine lgta hai, use isha dwara kahi gyi kahani yaad aa rahi thi, use to apne parents ki shakal tk yaad nahi thi aur na hi koi photo thi uske pass unki, usne to jab se hosh sambhala hai isha ko apna sab kuch manta aaya hai, uske liye isha uski maa aur baap dono the,
Flashback 1.....
Ek ghr ke angan me ek bacha aur ek ladki khel rahe the yeh dono aur koi nahi aryan aur isha hai, isha aryan ko pkdane ke liye uske piche-2 bhag rahi thi, wahi aryan apne chote-2 pairon se bhag raha tha, dono ki hasi us angan me gunj rahi thi.
Isha.... Golu ruk ja betu, khana kha le.
Golu.... Nahi didu, jab tk aap apna promise pura nahi krogi tb tk nahi khaunga.
Isha.... Golu betu aise zid nahi krte.
Tabhi us ghr me sanjay enter krta hai, wo angan me in dono ko aise bhagta hua dekhta hai to wo unke pass jata hai aur bhagte hue golu ko pkd kr wahan padi chair pr beth use apni godh me bithata hai.
Sanjay...... Kya hua tum dono aise bhag kyu rahe the?
Isha..... Dekho na sanjay, golu khana nahi kha raha.
Sanjay... Kyu golu khana kyu nahi kha rahe ho?
Golu..... Jab tk didu apna promise pura nahi krti tb tk nahi khaunga.
Sanjay..... Kaun sa promise?
Isha.... Kal raat yeh so nahi raha tha, to maine ise promise kiya tha ki subah ko main ise ghumane le jaungi, bs usi baat ki zid kr raha hai.
Sanjay..... To thik hai fir aaj hum golu ko ghumane le chlte hai.
Isha.... Lekin sanjay aaj mera practical hai.
Sanjay... Ohhh to yeh problem hai, to ek kaam krte hain na, hum sb pehle college chalte hain, tum wahan apna practical attend krna, jb tk tum wapas nahi aogi tb tk main golu ke sath canteen me rahunga.
Isha...... Haan yeh thik rahega, lekin tum golu ka wahan dhyan to rakh loge na.
Sanjay... To tumhe lya lagta hai main golu ka dhyan nahi rakh skta.
Isha.... Are mera wo mtlb nahi tha, sorry agr tumhe bura lga ho to.
Sanjay... It's ok, to golu chloge humare sath college.
Golu khush hote hue....... Yaa hoo (isha ki godh me jakr uske galon pr kiss krte hue) thank u didu.
Sanjay..... Are wah idea maine diya aur kisi sirf didu ko di ja rahi hai.
Yeh sun golu sanjay ke pass jata hai aur uske galon pe bhi kisi deta hai.
Thodi der baad teeno taiyar hokr ghr se nikalte hai, fr college pahunch kr isha apni class me chli jati hai aur sanjay golu ko lekr canteen me chla jata hai.
Thodi der baad jab isha free hokr canteen jati hai to hairan ho jati hai, woh dekhti hai ki golu ek table pe betha hua hai aur uske charon taraf ladkiyan hi ladkiyan thi, jo kabhi golu ke galon ko sehla rahi thi to kabhi uske galon ko kiss kr rahi thi, jis se golu ke pure chehre pe lipstick ke nishan pad gye the aur sanjay chupchap dusre table pe betha golu ko dekh muskura raha tha.
Isha jhat se golu ke pass jati hai aur use apni godh me utha leti hai.
Isha...... Tum sab ko koi kaam nahi hai, jo mere golu ko pareshan kr rahi ho.
Ladki 1 haste hue.. ...... Are hum kahan pareshan kr rahe hai ise.
Isha golu ke face ko apni chunri se saaf krte hue...... To yeh iske galon pe itni lipstick kaise aa gyi.
Ladki 2...... Are yar yeh itna cute hai ki humse raha nahi gya.
Isha...... Bs kro mere bhai ko najar mat lgao.
Ladki2....... Are hum kahan najar lga rahe hai, hum to iski najar utar rahe the.
Isha.... Bs bs bahut najar utar li tum logo ne.
Isha golu ko lekr sanjay ke pass jati hai, fr teeno car me beth ghumne nikal jate hai, sham ko jab sb wapas ate hai to isha golu ko lekr apne ghr chli jati hai, raat ke khane ke baad isha golu ek room me chle jate hai, jo spl isha ne golu ke liye taiyar krwaya tha, jahan hr ek cheez yahan tk ki deewaron me bhi cartoon characters bne hue the, hr taraf kholne pade the, isha golu ke bed pe beth jati hai air golu jhat se isha ki godh me sir rakh kr let jata hai aur isha ka ek hath pkd leta hai, isha use ek lori gaa kr sunati hai jis se golu jhat se so jata hai, golu ke sone ke baad isha apne room me jane ke liye uthane wali hoti hai ki wo dekhti hai ki golu ne uska hath kas ke pkda hua tha, agr wo uthne ki koshish bhi kregi to golu jaag skta tha, isha golu ki neend khrab nahi krna chahti thi to wo aise hi golu ke sath let jati hai aur wahin so jati hai, yeh aaj ki baat nahi hai, yeh to in dono ka roz ka hai ki golu isha ka hath pkd kr sota hai aur isha golu ki neend ki parwah krte hue wahi so jati hai.
Subah isha uth kr apne dailly routine ke kaam kr golu ko uthane aati hai.
Isha.... Golu uth ja beta dekh subah ho gyi hai.
Golu nahi uthta to isha uske sir pe hath ferti hai aur use hilakr uthane lgti hai.
Golu ankhen band kiye hue hi..... Sone do na didu.
Isha..... Uth ja mera bacha, mujhe college bhi to jana hai.
Golu ankh kholte hue...... Rehne do na didu aaj college jana.
Isha..... Acha to main ghr pe kya krungi?
Golu..... Hum sath me khelenge aur fr ghumne jayenge.
Isha.... Acha, abhi kal hi to itna ghuma hai, tera man nahi bhra kya?
Golu masoom si shakl bna kr...... Ghumna to ek bahana hai didu, mujhe to bs apke sath, apke pass rehna hai, jab aap college chli jati ho to mujhe ghr me bahut akelapan mehsus hota hai.
Isha golu ki yeh baat sun bhavuk ho jati hai aur use gale se lga leti hai.
Sanjay yeh sb door pe khda sun raha tha, jo isha ko college jane ke liye bulane aaya tha.
Isha.... Acha chl thik hai aaj main sara din tere sath rahungi.
Golu khush hote hue.... Sachi didu... Aap duniya best didu ho.
Isha.... Chal ab fresh ho ja, main niche breakfast pe tera wait krti hu.
Golu isha ke gaal chum ke bathroom me ghus jata hai, wahi isha jab bahr jane ke liye palti to door pe sanjay ko dekh kr.
Isha..... Are sanjay tum kab se yahan ho?
Sanjay..... Jab se tum golu ko utha rahi thi aur yeh kya isha aaj fr tum golu ki zid ki wajah se college nahi jaogi.
Isha.... Haan, mere liye golu se bad kuch nahi hai.
Sanjay..... Lekin isha aise kab tk chalega, kahan tum kabhi college se bunk nahi krti thi aur ab hr dusre din golu ki zid ki wajah se tum college hi nahi jati ho.
Isha...... Tum nahi samjhoge sanjay, aaj golu ne wo keh diya jo kabhi main mehsus krti thi, akelapan kaisa hota hai aur kitna chubhta hai yeh main janti hu aur main yeh golu ko kabhi mehsus nahi hone dungi.
Aise hi baat krte hue dono niche dinning table pe beth jate hai.
Sanjay...... Lekin jra socho is tarah to tum use apne upr nirbhar bna rahi ho, fr wo bahr ki duniya ko kaise dekhega aur smjhega.
Isha...... Hmmm keh to tum thik rahe ho, to ab hume kya krna chahiye?
Sanjay..... Iska ek hi rasta hai, golu ko kisi playway ya fr kisi school me addmision kra do.
Isha kuch soch kr.... Yeh to bahut badiya idea hai, thnks sanjay.
Poonam..... Tum use jaise tum chaho waise mar dena, lekin us se pehle wo mujhe chahiye wo bhi zinda.
MLA...... Lekin tumhari us se kya dushmani hai aur tum use kaise janti ho, aur sabse badi baat wo tumhe zinda kyu chahiye?
Poonam..... In sab baton se tumhara koi matlab nahi, tum bs mujhe wo zinda lakr doge, uske baad wo tumhara.
MLA..... Thik hai, to btao wo kaham milega?
Poonam fr use kuch btati hai aur call cut kr deti hai, idher MLA ke face pe smile thi.
Mla man me...... AK tune mere bete ko mar kr acha nahi kiya, ab tu marega mere hathon se, aa raha hu main teri maut bn kr, hahahahahaha.
Ab aage.......
Idher aryan dhruv ko uske ghr chod apne ghr aata hai aur sidha bar me jaker whiskey pine lgta hai, use isha dwara kahi gyi kahani yaad aa rahi thi, use to apne parents ki shakal tk yaad nahi thi aur na hi koi photo thi uske pass unki, usne to jab se hosh sambhala hai isha ko apna sab kuch manta aaya hai, uske liye isha uski maa aur baap dono the,
Flashback 1.....
Ek ghr ke angan me ek bacha aur ek ladki khel rahe the yeh dono aur koi nahi aryan aur isha hai, isha aryan ko pkdane ke liye uske piche-2 bhag rahi thi, wahi aryan apne chote-2 pairon se bhag raha tha, dono ki hasi us angan me gunj rahi thi.
Isha.... Golu ruk ja betu, khana kha le.
Golu.... Nahi didu, jab tk aap apna promise pura nahi krogi tb tk nahi khaunga.
Isha.... Golu betu aise zid nahi krte.
Tabhi us ghr me sanjay enter krta hai, wo angan me in dono ko aise bhagta hua dekhta hai to wo unke pass jata hai aur bhagte hue golu ko pkd kr wahan padi chair pr beth use apni godh me bithata hai.
Sanjay...... Kya hua tum dono aise bhag kyu rahe the?
Isha..... Dekho na sanjay, golu khana nahi kha raha.
Sanjay... Kyu golu khana kyu nahi kha rahe ho?
Golu..... Jab tk didu apna promise pura nahi krti tb tk nahi khaunga.
Sanjay..... Kaun sa promise?
Isha.... Kal raat yeh so nahi raha tha, to maine ise promise kiya tha ki subah ko main ise ghumane le jaungi, bs usi baat ki zid kr raha hai.
Sanjay..... To thik hai fir aaj hum golu ko ghumane le chlte hai.
Isha.... Lekin sanjay aaj mera practical hai.
Sanjay... Ohhh to yeh problem hai, to ek kaam krte hain na, hum sb pehle college chalte hain, tum wahan apna practical attend krna, jb tk tum wapas nahi aogi tb tk main golu ke sath canteen me rahunga.
Isha...... Haan yeh thik rahega, lekin tum golu ka wahan dhyan to rakh loge na.
Sanjay... To tumhe lya lagta hai main golu ka dhyan nahi rakh skta.
Isha.... Are mera wo mtlb nahi tha, sorry agr tumhe bura lga ho to.
Sanjay... It's ok, to golu chloge humare sath college.
Golu khush hote hue....... Yaa hoo (isha ki godh me jakr uske galon pr kiss krte hue) thank u didu.
Sanjay..... Are wah idea maine diya aur kisi sirf didu ko di ja rahi hai.
Yeh sun golu sanjay ke pass jata hai aur uske galon pe bhi kisi deta hai.
Thodi der baad teeno taiyar hokr ghr se nikalte hai, fr college pahunch kr isha apni class me chli jati hai aur sanjay golu ko lekr canteen me chla jata hai.
Thodi der baad jab isha free hokr canteen jati hai to hairan ho jati hai, woh dekhti hai ki golu ek table pe betha hua hai aur uske charon taraf ladkiyan hi ladkiyan thi, jo kabhi golu ke galon ko sehla rahi thi to kabhi uske galon ko kiss kr rahi thi, jis se golu ke pure chehre pe lipstick ke nishan pad gye the aur sanjay chupchap dusre table pe betha golu ko dekh muskura raha tha.
Isha jhat se golu ke pass jati hai aur use apni godh me utha leti hai.
Isha...... Tum sab ko koi kaam nahi hai, jo mere golu ko pareshan kr rahi ho.
Ladki 1 haste hue.. ...... Are hum kahan pareshan kr rahe hai ise.
Isha golu ke face ko apni chunri se saaf krte hue...... To yeh iske galon pe itni lipstick kaise aa gyi.
Ladki 2...... Are yar yeh itna cute hai ki humse raha nahi gya.
Isha...... Bs kro mere bhai ko najar mat lgao.
Ladki2....... Are hum kahan najar lga rahe hai, hum to iski najar utar rahe the.
Isha.... Bs bs bahut najar utar li tum logo ne.
Isha golu ko lekr sanjay ke pass jati hai, fr teeno car me beth ghumne nikal jate hai, sham ko jab sb wapas ate hai to isha golu ko lekr apne ghr chli jati hai, raat ke khane ke baad isha golu ek room me chle jate hai, jo spl isha ne golu ke liye taiyar krwaya tha, jahan hr ek cheez yahan tk ki deewaron me bhi cartoon characters bne hue the, hr taraf kholne pade the, isha golu ke bed pe beth jati hai air golu jhat se isha ki godh me sir rakh kr let jata hai aur isha ka ek hath pkd leta hai, isha use ek lori gaa kr sunati hai jis se golu jhat se so jata hai, golu ke sone ke baad isha apne room me jane ke liye uthane wali hoti hai ki wo dekhti hai ki golu ne uska hath kas ke pkda hua tha, agr wo uthne ki koshish bhi kregi to golu jaag skta tha, isha golu ki neend khrab nahi krna chahti thi to wo aise hi golu ke sath let jati hai aur wahin so jati hai, yeh aaj ki baat nahi hai, yeh to in dono ka roz ka hai ki golu isha ka hath pkd kr sota hai aur isha golu ki neend ki parwah krte hue wahi so jati hai.
Subah isha uth kr apne dailly routine ke kaam kr golu ko uthane aati hai.
Isha.... Golu uth ja beta dekh subah ho gyi hai.
Golu nahi uthta to isha uske sir pe hath ferti hai aur use hilakr uthane lgti hai.
Golu ankhen band kiye hue hi..... Sone do na didu.
Isha..... Uth ja mera bacha, mujhe college bhi to jana hai.
Golu ankh kholte hue...... Rehne do na didu aaj college jana.
Isha..... Acha to main ghr pe kya krungi?
Golu..... Hum sath me khelenge aur fr ghumne jayenge.
Isha.... Acha, abhi kal hi to itna ghuma hai, tera man nahi bhra kya?
Golu masoom si shakl bna kr...... Ghumna to ek bahana hai didu, mujhe to bs apke sath, apke pass rehna hai, jab aap college chli jati ho to mujhe ghr me bahut akelapan mehsus hota hai.
Isha golu ki yeh baat sun bhavuk ho jati hai aur use gale se lga leti hai.
Sanjay yeh sb door pe khda sun raha tha, jo isha ko college jane ke liye bulane aaya tha.
Isha.... Acha chl thik hai aaj main sara din tere sath rahungi.
Golu khush hote hue.... Sachi didu... Aap duniya best didu ho.
Isha.... Chal ab fresh ho ja, main niche breakfast pe tera wait krti hu.
Golu isha ke gaal chum ke bathroom me ghus jata hai, wahi isha jab bahr jane ke liye palti to door pe sanjay ko dekh kr.
Isha..... Are sanjay tum kab se yahan ho?
Sanjay..... Jab se tum golu ko utha rahi thi aur yeh kya isha aaj fr tum golu ki zid ki wajah se college nahi jaogi.
Isha.... Haan, mere liye golu se bad kuch nahi hai.
Sanjay..... Lekin isha aise kab tk chalega, kahan tum kabhi college se bunk nahi krti thi aur ab hr dusre din golu ki zid ki wajah se tum college hi nahi jati ho.
Isha...... Tum nahi samjhoge sanjay, aaj golu ne wo keh diya jo kabhi main mehsus krti thi, akelapan kaisa hota hai aur kitna chubhta hai yeh main janti hu aur main yeh golu ko kabhi mehsus nahi hone dungi.
Aise hi baat krte hue dono niche dinning table pe beth jate hai.
Sanjay...... Lekin jra socho is tarah to tum use apne upr nirbhar bna rahi ho, fr wo bahr ki duniya ko kaise dekhega aur smjhega.
Isha...... Hmmm keh to tum thik rahe ho, to ab hume kya krna chahiye?
Sanjay..... Iska ek hi rasta hai, golu ko kisi playway ya fr kisi school me addmision kra do.
Isha kuch soch kr.... Yeh to bahut badiya idea hai, thnks sanjay.
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matlab ab kuch din flashback mein rahnaa hai and isi bich apne MLA sahab aayenge apne aadmiyon k saath....
lekin agar yeh unke haath la gaya to iska blood sample Poonam ko mil jaayega jo ki sahi nahi rahegaaaa
dekhte hain pahle ki kya hota hai flashback mein.....
waise bhai mere hisaab se Flashback abhi detailed naa dikhaa k baad mein sabke saamne bataao jaise Isha ne apna version bataya waise to jyaada accha rahegaa.
Waise writer aap ho and aap jyada acche se samajhte ho ki kab kya karna chahiye....
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lekin agar yeh unke haath la gaya to iska blood sample Poonam ko mil jaayega jo ki sahi nahi rahegaaaa
dekhte hain pahle ki kya hota hai flashback mein.....
waise bhai mere hisaab se Flashback abhi detailed naa dikhaa k baad mein sabke saamne bataao jaise Isha ne apna version bataya waise to jyaada accha rahegaa.
Waise writer aap ho and aap jyada acche se samajhte ho ki kab kya karna chahiye....
4 next update