Romance Ek Hateli Lovestory ;) (complete)

[mashish]

Update 41​

Apni chori pakdi gayi hai ye komal ke dhyan me aa gaya aur wo gardan jhuka kar kuch na bolte huye khadi rahi itne me uski maa aayi aur boli

Sangeeta-abhi ko tumhe ghar chhod kar gaya hai wo ladka kaun tha??..

Komal kuch nahi boli to uske pitaji ne use dobara shanti se pucha par awaj ka tone wahi tha

Sayajirao- suna nahi tumhari maa kya puch rahi hai?

Komal apni sari himmat jama karke boli

Komal-aniket..

Sayajirao-pura naam?

Komal-aniket narayanrao rane

Sayajirao kuch der tak kuch sochne lage, shayad kuch yaad kar rahe the fir bole

Sayajirao-ye wahi hai na, tumhare college ke trustee ka ladka

Komal ne gardan hila kar ha kaha

Sayajirao-tumhara usse kya sambandh ?

Ab komal ke saamne sawal aa gaya tha ki sirf dost hai bol ke baat taal de par agle hi pal dimag me khayal aaya ke aaj na kal ye baat batani hi hhai fir aaj kyu nahi? Par pata nahi kyu wo bol baithi

Komal-dost hai..

Sayajirao-bulao use

Komal ko kuch samajh me nahi aaya

Komal-theek hai bula lungi

Sayajirao-bula lungi nahi abhi bulao

Komal ab darr se tharthar kamp rahi thi aurt kampte hatho se usne aniket ko call lagaya, idhar kya hua hai aniket is baat se bekhabar tha,wo to komal ki khubsurti me hi khoya hua tha wo phone uthate hi bola

Aniket-yes my love, bolo

Komal-aniket tum abhi ke abhi mere ghar aao

Aniket-kyu mere saas sasur baahar gaye hai kya

Aniket apne hi mood me tha

Komal-nahi wo dono yahi hai aur papa ne tumhe ghar par aane ko kaha hai

Aniket-aailasasur ji ne bulaya hai, badhiya, waise bhi main khud unse milne ka soch raha tha..

Komal-aniket baat serious hai jaldi aao

Aniket-don’t worry kau main abhi aaya

Aur aniket se gadi ghuma li aur khud se bola

Aniket-sala baap aur ladki ne ek hi din jhatke dene ka plan banaya hai pehle beti se roop se ghayal kiya ab baap kya karega pata nahi

Aniket se jhat se avinash ko phone lagaya

Aniket-avi main komal ke ghar jar aha hu, uske papa ne bulaya hai tub hi pahuch waha

Avinash-mereko bhi bulaya hai kya

Aniket-hao sab ko bulaya hai meri barat nikalne wali hai, tub hi kamal ki baat karta hai men..

Avinash-fir kyu bulaya hai?

Aniket-abey meko kya malum aura b CID banna band karega, bataya utna kar sawal mat kar aur waha pahuch ke baahar hi rukiyo, komal ka baap pailwaan hai unki beti se lafda yahi shamshan me apne naam ki adhi lakdiya, hath pair tod ke baahar feka to hospital leke jane waha koi hona chahiye na aur aaj tak apna anubhav hai pyaar ke mamle me meri hamesha dhulayi huyi hai wo yash ka matter ho ya suman ka

Avinash-ye bhi hai be, par ek acha hua, is baar maar khane me alag nahi lagega teri net practice huyi hai pehle hi

Aniket-ab baate baad me kar aur jaldi pahuch, main bhi pahuch raha hu

Idhar komal full tension me thi ke ab kya hoga? Ek pal ko lagta ne darr ke mare aniket nahi aaya to? Par usne wo khayal nikal diya, aniket darne walo ne se nahi tha aur wo aayega iska komal ko pura yakin tha aur itne me aniket aaya aur komal ki dhadkane aur badh gayi

Aniket ke aate huye sayajirao ki firing shuru ho gayi

Sayajirao-naam kya hai tera?

Aniket-aniket

Sayajirao-baap ne pura naam nahi sikhaya kya?

Sayajirao ke baat karne ke tarike se aniket samajh gaya tha ke mamla serious hai

Aniket-aniket narayanrao rane

Sayajirao-college ke trustee ka beta hai na tu?

Aniket ne bas ha me gardan hilayi

Sayajirao-tum dono kaha gaye the?

Aniket-tekdi wale Krishna mandir me

Sayajirao-waha kya kaam tha?

Aniket situation normal karne ke liye bola

Aniket-mandir me kyu jayenge kaka, bhagwan ke darshan karne gaye the

Sayajirao gusse ne aniket ki tarav dekh rahe the

Sayajirao-abhi aate waqt darwaje par ka nameplate nahi dekha kya? Pailwan sayajirao patil bolte hai mujhe, sidhe sidhe jawab de nahi to aaya chalk e hai jayega rengte huye

Aniket ne ha me gardar hilayi

Sayajirao-college me yahi sab karne jate ho kya? Yahi sab sikhaya hai maa baap ne? mujhe ache se pata hai amiro ke baccho ke lakshan, bholi bhali ladkiyo ko apne piche lagana, timepaas karna par dhyan me rakhna ye meri beti hai aur aainda iske aaspaas bhi dikha to….

Itna bol ke sayaji rao apne shirt ki bahi uper kar rahe the aur mucho ko taav diya, ab aniket ko bhi thoda gussa aa gaya tha, kyuki use kuch bhi bolo kitni bhi galiya do wo she lega par uske maa baap ko bola hua use sehan nahi hota tha usne man me kuch nishchay kiya aur bola

Aniket-iske aaspaas dikha to kya?

Sayajirao ne ek sansanit thappad aniket ko jad diya aur aniket sidha jamin par gira, komal ki himmat nahi ho rahi thi ek bhi shabd bolne ki, wo gardan jhuka kar ro rahi thi, aur aniket samajh gaya tha ke buddhe ne pailwani jarur chhodi hai par ab bhi hath me bahut jaan hai aur agar ye case hath ke baahar nikal gaya to aaj ek bhi haddi nahi bachegi, wo waise hi pade pade bola

Aniket-maaf karna kaka par aap samajhte ho main waisa nahi hu, yakin na ho to komal ko puch lo

Ab sayajirao komal ki taraf mude

Sayajirao-komal sach sach batana tum sirf dost ho ya kuch aur..aur khabardar agar jhuth bola to

Ab komal ki bari thi, usne man hi man socha ki yahi sahi samay hai, ab nahi bol payi to kabhi nahi bol payegi, usne decide kar liya tha kea b piche nahi hatna hai

Komal-papa hum pyaar karte hai ek dusre se

Sayajirao ne kabhi ladka aur ladki me bhedbhav nahi kiya tha aur aaj bhi nahi kiya ek thappad komal ko bhi laga

Sayajirao-sharam nahi aati baap ke saamne aise baat karte huye

Komal-maaf karna papa par jo sach hai wo yahi hai, hum dono ek dusre se bahut pyaar karte hai

Idhar aniket ko bilkul pasand nahi aaya tha komal ko mara hua

Aniket-kaka job hi jitna bhi maarna hai meko maro par komal ko saja mat do

Sayajirao-ab tu mujhe batayega ki main meri beti se kaise baat karu

Pata nahi kyu par aniket ko is situation me bhi hasi aa gayi aur use hasta dekh sayajirao aur bhadak gaye

Sayajirao-thappad bhul gaya kya jo has raha hai

Aniket ka darr ab nikal gaya tha aur ab jo bhi hoga uske liye wo tayar tha aniket aage bola

Aniket-kal tak wo aapki beti thi, aaj meri jivansathi hai, shadi to main usse hi karunga aapki majri se ya aapki marji ke bagair, ab bhale hi aap mere hath pair tod doya kanyadaan ke liye maan jao

Aniket seena chauda karke sayajirao ke saamne khada tha aur chehre par gajab ka confidence tha darr ka kahi namonishan bhi nahi tha

Sayajirao-abhi ke abhi tere baap ko phone kar

Aniket ne phone lagaya aur uske kuch bolne se pehle hi sayajirao ne phone le liya..aur bole

Sayajirao-main sayajirao patil bol raha hu aur apna ladka jinda chahiye to agle adhe ghante me yaha aao, nahi aaya to tere bete ki body raat ta pahucha dunga

Narayanrao bhi aisi baat sunkar khawal gaye

Narayanrao-aye sayaji…mere bete ke baal ko bhi dhakka laga to khade khade chir dunga..aa raha hu main….



To Be Continued…..

superb update

 

[SANJU ( V. R. )]

इक्कीसवीं सदी में भी पुरानी विचारधारा कायम है । जब लड़की और लड़का एक दूसरे से बेपनाह मोहब्बत करते हैं तो फिर कोई न कोई चाहे वो लड़की के गार्डियन हो या लड़का के , विलेन बन के सामने टपक ही पड़ते हैं । न जाने इन्हें क्या परेशानी होती है ! अरे , जीवन लड़की और लड़का को बितानी है तो शादी ब्याह के फैसले उन्हीं को करने दो न !
ठीक है , आज से तीस चालीस साल पहले अधिकांशतः फैसले घर के गार्डियन लिया करते थे पर वो समय और था , आज का समय कुछ और है ।
मां बाप को भी समय के अनुसार बदलना चाहिए जैसे कि अनिकेत के फादर ने किया । पर कोमल के फादर अभी भी दकियानूसी सोच के शिकार लगते हैं। ऐसे लोग अपने फैसले जबरदस्ती अपने औलादों पर थोपते है जिसका खामियाजा बच्चों को ताउम्र उठाना पड़ता है ।

खैर देखते हैं आगे चलकर दोनों की लवस्टोरी का क्या अंजाम होगा ।
बहुत ही बेहतरीन लिख रहे हो भाई । कोमल का कायापलट जिन शब्दों के साथ लिखा वो सच में बहुत बढ़िया था । उसके रूप सौंदर्य का वर्णन बहुत ही बढ़िया ढंग से किया गया है । डायलॉग में कामेडी तो कभी सेंटिमेंट ! लाजबाव ।
कन्वर्सेशन लिखने में भी बहुत कमाल किया है ।
अविनाश के रूप में एक बेहतरीन दोस्त का किरदार गठन किया गया है जो हर समय अपने दोस्तों के लिए एक पांव पे खड़ा है ।

बहुत बहुत सुंदर अपडेट्स । आउटस्टैंडिंग एंड टू गुड अपडेट ।

 

[Mr. Nobody]

Update 41​

Apni chori pakdi gayi hai ye komal ke dhyan me aa gaya aur wo gardan jhuka kar kuch na bolte huye khadi rahi itne me uski maa aayi aur boli

Sangeeta-abhi ko tumhe ghar chhod kar gaya hai wo ladka kaun tha??..

Komal kuch nahi boli to uske pitaji ne use dobara shanti se pucha par awaj ka tone wahi tha

Sayajirao- suna nahi tumhari maa kya puch rahi hai?

Komal apni sari himmat jama karke boli

Komal-aniket..

Sayajirao-pura naam?

Komal-aniket narayanrao rane

Sayajirao kuch der tak kuch sochne lage, shayad kuch yaad kar rahe the fir bole

Sayajirao-ye wahi hai na, tumhare college ke trustee ka ladka

Komal ne gardan hila kar ha kaha

Sayajirao-tumhara usse kya sambandh ?

Ab komal ke saamne sawal aa gaya tha ki sirf dost hai bol ke baat taal de par agle hi pal dimag me khayal aaya ke aaj na kal ye baat batani hi hhai fir aaj kyu nahi? Par pata nahi kyu wo bol baithi

Komal-dost hai..

Sayajirao-bulao use

Komal ko kuch samajh me nahi aaya

Komal-theek hai bula lungi

Sayajirao-bula lungi nahi abhi bulao

Komal ab darr se tharthar kamp rahi thi aurt kampte hatho se usne aniket ko call lagaya, idhar kya hua hai aniket is baat se bekhabar tha,wo to komal ki khubsurti me hi khoya hua tha wo phone uthate hi bola

Aniket-yes my love, bolo

Komal-aniket tum abhi ke abhi mere ghar aao

Aniket-kyu mere saas sasur baahar gaye hai kya

Aniket apne hi mood me tha

Komal-nahi wo dono yahi hai aur papa ne tumhe ghar par aane ko kaha hai

Aniket-aailasasur ji ne bulaya hai, badhiya, waise bhi main khud unse milne ka soch raha tha..

Komal-aniket baat serious hai jaldi aao

Aniket-don’t worry kau main abhi aaya

Aur aniket se gadi ghuma li aur khud se bola

Aniket-sala baap aur ladki ne ek hi din jhatke dene ka plan banaya hai pehle beti se roop se ghayal kiya ab baap kya karega pata nahi

Aniket se jhat se avinash ko phone lagaya

Aniket-avi main komal ke ghar jar aha hu, uske papa ne bulaya hai tub hi pahuch waha

Avinash-mereko bhi bulaya hai kya

Aniket-hao sab ko bulaya hai meri barat nikalne wali hai, tub hi kamal ki baat karta hai men..

Avinash-fir kyu bulaya hai?

Aniket-abey meko kya malum aura b CID banna band karega, bataya utna kar sawal mat kar aur waha pahuch ke baahar hi rukiyo, komal ka baap pailwaan hai unki beti se lafda yahi shamshan me apne naam ki adhi lakdiya, hath pair tod ke baahar feka to hospital leke jane waha koi hona chahiye na aur aaj tak apna anubhav hai pyaar ke mamle me meri hamesha dhulayi huyi hai wo yash ka matter ho ya suman ka

Avinash-ye bhi hai be, par ek acha hua, is baar maar khane me alag nahi lagega teri net practice huyi hai pehle hi

Aniket-ab baate baad me kar aur jaldi pahuch, main bhi pahuch raha hu

Idhar komal full tension me thi ke ab kya hoga? Ek pal ko lagta ne darr ke mare aniket nahi aaya to? Par usne wo khayal nikal diya, aniket darne walo ne se nahi tha aur wo aayega iska komal ko pura yakin tha aur itne me aniket aaya aur komal ki dhadkane aur badh gayi

Aniket ke aate huye sayajirao ki firing shuru ho gayi

Sayajirao-naam kya hai tera?

Aniket-aniket

Sayajirao-baap ne pura naam nahi sikhaya kya?

Sayajirao ke baat karne ke tarike se aniket samajh gaya tha ke mamla serious hai

Aniket-aniket narayanrao rane

Sayajirao-college ke trustee ka beta hai na tu?

Aniket ne bas ha me gardan hilayi

Sayajirao-tum dono kaha gaye the?

Aniket-tekdi wale Krishna mandir me

Sayajirao-waha kya kaam tha?

Aniket situation normal karne ke liye bola

Aniket-mandir me kyu jayenge kaka, bhagwan ke darshan karne gaye the

Sayajirao gusse ne aniket ki tarav dekh rahe the

Sayajirao-abhi aate waqt darwaje par ka nameplate nahi dekha kya? Pailwan sayajirao patil bolte hai mujhe, sidhe sidhe jawab de nahi to aaya chalk e hai jayega rengte huye

Aniket ne ha me gardar hilayi

Sayajirao-college me yahi sab karne jate ho kya? Yahi sab sikhaya hai maa baap ne? mujhe ache se pata hai amiro ke baccho ke lakshan, bholi bhali ladkiyo ko apne piche lagana, timepaas karna par dhyan me rakhna ye meri beti hai aur aainda iske aaspaas bhi dikha to….

Itna bol ke sayaji rao apne shirt ki bahi uper kar rahe the aur mucho ko taav diya, ab aniket ko bhi thoda gussa aa gaya tha, kyuki use kuch bhi bolo kitni bhi galiya do wo she lega par uske maa baap ko bola hua use sehan nahi hota tha usne man me kuch nishchay kiya aur bola

Aniket-iske aaspaas dikha to kya?

Sayajirao ne ek sansanit thappad aniket ko jad diya aur aniket sidha jamin par gira, komal ki himmat nahi ho rahi thi ek bhi shabd bolne ki, wo gardan jhuka kar ro rahi thi, aur aniket samajh gaya tha ke buddhe ne pailwani jarur chhodi hai par ab bhi hath me bahut jaan hai aur agar ye case hath ke baahar nikal gaya to aaj ek bhi haddi nahi bachegi, wo waise hi pade pade bola

Aniket-maaf karna kaka par aap samajhte ho main waisa nahi hu, yakin na ho to komal ko puch lo

Ab sayajirao komal ki taraf mude

Sayajirao-komal sach sach batana tum sirf dost ho ya kuch aur..aur khabardar agar jhuth bola to

Ab komal ki bari thi, usne man hi man socha ki yahi sahi samay hai, ab nahi bol payi to kabhi nahi bol payegi, usne decide kar liya tha kea b piche nahi hatna hai

Komal-papa hum pyaar karte hai ek dusre se

Sayajirao ne kabhi ladka aur ladki me bhedbhav nahi kiya tha aur aaj bhi nahi kiya ek thappad komal ko bhi laga

Sayajirao-sharam nahi aati baap ke saamne aise baat karte huye

Komal-maaf karna papa par jo sach hai wo yahi hai, hum dono ek dusre se bahut pyaar karte hai

Idhar aniket ko bilkul pasand nahi aaya tha komal ko mara hua

Aniket-kaka job hi jitna bhi maarna hai meko maro par komal ko saja mat do

Sayajirao-ab tu mujhe batayega ki main meri beti se kaise baat karu

Pata nahi kyu par aniket ko is situation me bhi hasi aa gayi aur use hasta dekh sayajirao aur bhadak gaye

Sayajirao-thappad bhul gaya kya jo has raha hai

Aniket ka darr ab nikal gaya tha aur ab jo bhi hoga uske liye wo tayar tha aniket aage bola

Aniket-kal tak wo aapki beti thi, aaj meri jivansathi hai, shadi to main usse hi karunga aapki majri se ya aapki marji ke bagair, ab bhale hi aap mere hath pair tod doya kanyadaan ke liye maan jao

Aniket seena chauda karke sayajirao ke saamne khada tha aur chehre par gajab ka confidence tha darr ka kahi namonishan bhi nahi tha

Sayajirao-abhi ke abhi tere baap ko phone kar

Aniket ne phone lagaya aur uske kuch bolne se pehle hi sayajirao ne phone le liya..aur bole

Sayajirao-main sayajirao patil bol raha hu aur apna ladka jinda chahiye to agle adhe ghante me yaha aao, nahi aaya to tere bete ki body raat ta pahucha dunga

Narayanrao bhi aisi baat sunkar khawal gaye

Narayanrao-aye sayaji…mere bete ke baal ko bhi dhakka laga to khade khade chir dunga..aa raha hu main….



To Be Continued…..

Awsome yr... Ye to mere jesi situation nikdi... Bs mere me papa ki jaga bhabhi maa aayi thi... Rocking update....

 

[Chinturocky]

Awesome, dono BAAP ka milana romanchak hoga

 

[SHADOW KING]

majedar update ...to aniket ko ghar bulane ko kaha sayajirao ne aur puchhtachh ki ..
aniket ko zabardast thappad bhi maar diya aur jab komal ne pyar ka naam liya to usko bhi thappad mila ..
ab gusse me aniket ke maa baap ko bhi ghar bula liya hai aur dhamki bhi de di ..

ab aniket ke maa baap aane par sayajirao maan jata hai ya koi lafda karta hai dekhte hai ..

waise aniket aur komal ne bahut himmat dikhayi ..

 

[Naik]

Update 41​

Apni chori pakdi gayi hai ye komal ke dhyan me aa gaya aur wo gardan jhuka kar kuch na bolte huye khadi rahi itne me uski maa aayi aur boli

Sangeeta-abhi ko tumhe ghar chhod kar gaya hai wo ladka kaun tha??..

Komal kuch nahi boli to uske pitaji ne use dobara shanti se pucha par awaj ka tone wahi tha

Sayajirao- suna nahi tumhari maa kya puch rahi hai?

Komal apni sari himmat jama karke boli

Komal-aniket..

Sayajirao-pura naam?

Komal-aniket narayanrao rane

Sayajirao kuch der tak kuch sochne lage, shayad kuch yaad kar rahe the fir bole

Sayajirao-ye wahi hai na, tumhare college ke trustee ka ladka

Komal ne gardan hila kar ha kaha

Sayajirao-tumhara usse kya sambandh ?

Ab komal ke saamne sawal aa gaya tha ki sirf dost hai bol ke baat taal de par agle hi pal dimag me khayal aaya ke aaj na kal ye baat batani hi hhai fir aaj kyu nahi? Par pata nahi kyu wo bol baithi

Komal-dost hai..

Sayajirao-bulao use

Komal ko kuch samajh me nahi aaya

Komal-theek hai bula lungi

Sayajirao-bula lungi nahi abhi bulao

Komal ab darr se tharthar kamp rahi thi aurt kampte hatho se usne aniket ko call lagaya, idhar kya hua hai aniket is baat se bekhabar tha,wo to komal ki khubsurti me hi khoya hua tha wo phone uthate hi bola

Aniket-yes my love, bolo

Komal-aniket tum abhi ke abhi mere ghar aao

Aniket-kyu mere saas sasur baahar gaye hai kya

Aniket apne hi mood me tha

Komal-nahi wo dono yahi hai aur papa ne tumhe ghar par aane ko kaha hai

Aniket-aailasasur ji ne bulaya hai, badhiya, waise bhi main khud unse milne ka soch raha tha..

Komal-aniket baat serious hai jaldi aao

Aniket-don’t worry kau main abhi aaya

Aur aniket se gadi ghuma li aur khud se bola

Aniket-sala baap aur ladki ne ek hi din jhatke dene ka plan banaya hai pehle beti se roop se ghayal kiya ab baap kya karega pata nahi

Aniket se jhat se avinash ko phone lagaya

Aniket-avi main komal ke ghar jar aha hu, uske papa ne bulaya hai tub hi pahuch waha

Avinash-mereko bhi bulaya hai kya

Aniket-hao sab ko bulaya hai meri barat nikalne wali hai, tub hi kamal ki baat karta hai men..

Avinash-fir kyu bulaya hai?

Aniket-abey meko kya malum aura b CID banna band karega, bataya utna kar sawal mat kar aur waha pahuch ke baahar hi rukiyo, komal ka baap pailwaan hai unki beti se lafda yahi shamshan me apne naam ki adhi lakdiya, hath pair tod ke baahar feka to hospital leke jane waha koi hona chahiye na aur aaj tak apna anubhav hai pyaar ke mamle me meri hamesha dhulayi huyi hai wo yash ka matter ho ya suman ka

Avinash-ye bhi hai be, par ek acha hua, is baar maar khane me alag nahi lagega teri net practice huyi hai pehle hi

Aniket-ab baate baad me kar aur jaldi pahuch, main bhi pahuch raha hu

Idhar komal full tension me thi ke ab kya hoga? Ek pal ko lagta ne darr ke mare aniket nahi aaya to? Par usne wo khayal nikal diya, aniket darne walo ne se nahi tha aur wo aayega iska komal ko pura yakin tha aur itne me aniket aaya aur komal ki dhadkane aur badh gayi

Aniket ke aate huye sayajirao ki firing shuru ho gayi

Sayajirao-naam kya hai tera?

Aniket-aniket

Sayajirao-baap ne pura naam nahi sikhaya kya?

Sayajirao ke baat karne ke tarike se aniket samajh gaya tha ke mamla serious hai

Aniket-aniket narayanrao rane

Sayajirao-college ke trustee ka beta hai na tu?

Aniket ne bas ha me gardan hilayi

Sayajirao-tum dono kaha gaye the?

Aniket-tekdi wale Krishna mandir me

Sayajirao-waha kya kaam tha?

Aniket situation normal karne ke liye bola

Aniket-mandir me kyu jayenge kaka, bhagwan ke darshan karne gaye the

Sayajirao gusse ne aniket ki tarav dekh rahe the

Sayajirao-abhi aate waqt darwaje par ka nameplate nahi dekha kya? Pailwan sayajirao patil bolte hai mujhe, sidhe sidhe jawab de nahi to aaya chalk e hai jayega rengte huye

Aniket ne ha me gardar hilayi

Sayajirao-college me yahi sab karne jate ho kya? Yahi sab sikhaya hai maa baap ne? mujhe ache se pata hai amiro ke baccho ke lakshan, bholi bhali ladkiyo ko apne piche lagana, timepaas karna par dhyan me rakhna ye meri beti hai aur aainda iske aaspaas bhi dikha to….

Itna bol ke sayaji rao apne shirt ki bahi uper kar rahe the aur mucho ko taav diya, ab aniket ko bhi thoda gussa aa gaya tha, kyuki use kuch bhi bolo kitni bhi galiya do wo she lega par uske maa baap ko bola hua use sehan nahi hota tha usne man me kuch nishchay kiya aur bola

Aniket-iske aaspaas dikha to kya?

Sayajirao ne ek sansanit thappad aniket ko jad diya aur aniket sidha jamin par gira, komal ki himmat nahi ho rahi thi ek bhi shabd bolne ki, wo gardan jhuka kar ro rahi thi, aur aniket samajh gaya tha ke buddhe ne pailwani jarur chhodi hai par ab bhi hath me bahut jaan hai aur agar ye case hath ke baahar nikal gaya to aaj ek bhi haddi nahi bachegi, wo waise hi pade pade bola

Aniket-maaf karna kaka par aap samajhte ho main waisa nahi hu, yakin na ho to komal ko puch lo

Ab sayajirao komal ki taraf mude

Sayajirao-komal sach sach batana tum sirf dost ho ya kuch aur..aur khabardar agar jhuth bola to

Ab komal ki bari thi, usne man hi man socha ki yahi sahi samay hai, ab nahi bol payi to kabhi nahi bol payegi, usne decide kar liya tha kea b piche nahi hatna hai

Komal-papa hum pyaar karte hai ek dusre se

Sayajirao ne kabhi ladka aur ladki me bhedbhav nahi kiya tha aur aaj bhi nahi kiya ek thappad komal ko bhi laga

Sayajirao-sharam nahi aati baap ke saamne aise baat karte huye

Komal-maaf karna papa par jo sach hai wo yahi hai, hum dono ek dusre se bahut pyaar karte hai

Idhar aniket ko bilkul pasand nahi aaya tha komal ko mara hua

Aniket-kaka job hi jitna bhi maarna hai meko maro par komal ko saja mat do

Sayajirao-ab tu mujhe batayega ki main meri beti se kaise baat karu

Pata nahi kyu par aniket ko is situation me bhi hasi aa gayi aur use hasta dekh sayajirao aur bhadak gaye

Sayajirao-thappad bhul gaya kya jo has raha hai

Aniket ka darr ab nikal gaya tha aur ab jo bhi hoga uske liye wo tayar tha aniket aage bola

Aniket-kal tak wo aapki beti thi, aaj meri jivansathi hai, shadi to main usse hi karunga aapki majri se ya aapki marji ke bagair, ab bhale hi aap mere hath pair tod doya kanyadaan ke liye maan jao

Aniket seena chauda karke sayajirao ke saamne khada tha aur chehre par gajab ka confidence tha darr ka kahi namonishan bhi nahi tha

Sayajirao-abhi ke abhi tere baap ko phone kar

Aniket ne phone lagaya aur uske kuch bolne se pehle hi sayajirao ne phone le liya..aur bole

Sayajirao-main sayajirao patil bol raha hu aur apna ladka jinda chahiye to agle adhe ghante me yaha aao, nahi aaya to tere bete ki body raat ta pahucha dunga

Narayanrao bhi aisi baat sunkar khawal gaye

Narayanrao-aye sayaji…mere bete ke baal ko bhi dhakka laga to khade khade chir dunga..aa raha hu main….



To Be Continued…..

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