Nakamyab ho to - tumhara nalayak beta
kamyab ho to - mera pyara beta
Gajab hai ???
kamyab ho to - mera pyara beta
Gajab hai ???
Romance EK MUTTHI AASMAN(short story)
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INTER STATE BOXING TOURNAMENT
"sambhal kar, agar hara na muh tod dungi" madhu teekhe swar me boli
Amit has pada
Door se Ali aata dikhai diya apne coach aur team ke saath
Aate hi amit ko dekh kar uske Saamne aaya
"hi ali" amit ne apna haath wave kiya
"oh wahi semi final me mujhse jo haara tha??" Ali muskurate hue bola
Amit chup raha
"you are dying here" bol Ali chala gaya
"uski maa ki...." madhu ne gusse se apna muh khola
"shhhh" amit bola aur stadium ki aur chal pada
Aaj final tha, aur amit ne apni jagah banai hui thi finals me jisme usse ladna tha Ali se jisse wo pichla tournament haar chuka tha
ROUND 1
Ali shuru se hi haavi ho raha tha
SWOOOOOOOOOOOOOOSH
nahi isse baat nahi banegi. Ali ne poora homework kiya hua tha
Amit sirf defence me laga hua tha
"tu to gaya beta, ye gaya punch aur ye mera finals ke liye ticket pakka"ali soch kar has pada
DHAMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMM
Aur sachmuch punch zabardast pada amit ko
" beta "Mr surana aaj apne bete ka match dekhne akele aaye the
Boxing ke apne bete ko maar khata dekh nahi pa rahe the wo
" amit "madhu khadi ho gayi
1 2 3 4 5 6 7....
Amit khada hua
" can you fight "referee ne amit se poocha
Amot ne sar hikalar Haan kiya
SWOOOOOOOOOOOOOOSH
SWOOOOOOOOOOOOOOSH
Fir se wahi story, damn it damn it damn it
Ye strategy ka koi ilaaj nahi hai amit ke Paas fir se bach raha tha
" come on amit"madhu ne apna punch maara hawa me
" madhu?? "amit chaunk pada
Apna chehra sakht kiya usne
Aur fir Ali ke Saamne aaya aur
DHAMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMM
Ek punch seedha rib cage ke neeche
Ali ki aankhen bahar a gayi
Lekin fat se peeche hat gaya wo
" y ye ye to.... "madhu ko yakeen nahi ho raha tha ki amit uske style me lad raha tha
DHAMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMM
Fir se ek punch aur Ali ka chehra sooj gaya
DHAMMMMMMMMMMNMNNNNN
is baar Ali ke taang ladkhada gaye
Damn it ye amit apna style change karke lad raha hai ise mai ab apne tarike se ladna padega
DHAMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMM
Ali chaunk pada, fir se style chan......
DHAP
Ali gir chuka tha ring me, amit ki haalat bhi achi nahi thi
1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10....
"wo jo red colour me hai na, wo mera beta hai" Mr surana apni chalati aankhon se sabko Keh rahe the
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PATRICK BOXING ACADEMY
"3 months intense training hone wali hai amit" Patrick ne amit ke kandhe par haath rakhkar bola
"lekin sir mere exams..." amit bola
"sorry amit, decide kar li. Ya boxing ya apna career ya padhai whatever" Patrick bola
Do second bhi nahi laga amit ko sochne me
"I'm OK with it" amit bola
"fir se soch lo amit, nationals me tum bhidoge rishabh se, jeetne ke chance 20% bhi nahi hai, jabki padh kar tum ek achi khasi career bana sakte ho" Patrick bola
"sir mai kal Subhah apna kit bag lekar pohunch jaunga" bol amit chala gaya
"sambhal kar, agar hara na muh tod dungi" madhu teekhe swar me boli
Amit has pada
Door se Ali aata dikhai diya apne coach aur team ke saath
Aate hi amit ko dekh kar uske Saamne aaya
"hi ali" amit ne apna haath wave kiya
"oh wahi semi final me mujhse jo haara tha??" Ali muskurate hue bola
Amit chup raha
"you are dying here" bol Ali chala gaya
"uski maa ki...." madhu ne gusse se apna muh khola
"shhhh" amit bola aur stadium ki aur chal pada
Aaj final tha, aur amit ne apni jagah banai hui thi finals me jisme usse ladna tha Ali se jisse wo pichla tournament haar chuka tha
ROUND 1
Ali shuru se hi haavi ho raha tha
SWOOOOOOOOOOOOOOSH
nahi isse baat nahi banegi. Ali ne poora homework kiya hua tha
Amit sirf defence me laga hua tha
"tu to gaya beta, ye gaya punch aur ye mera finals ke liye ticket pakka"ali soch kar has pada
DHAMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMM
Aur sachmuch punch zabardast pada amit ko
" beta "Mr surana aaj apne bete ka match dekhne akele aaye the
Boxing ke apne bete ko maar khata dekh nahi pa rahe the wo
" amit "madhu khadi ho gayi
1 2 3 4 5 6 7....
Amit khada hua
" can you fight "referee ne amit se poocha
Amot ne sar hikalar Haan kiya
SWOOOOOOOOOOOOOOSH
SWOOOOOOOOOOOOOOSH
Fir se wahi story, damn it damn it damn it
Ye strategy ka koi ilaaj nahi hai amit ke Paas fir se bach raha tha
" come on amit"madhu ne apna punch maara hawa me
" madhu?? "amit chaunk pada
Apna chehra sakht kiya usne
Aur fir Ali ke Saamne aaya aur
DHAMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMM
Ek punch seedha rib cage ke neeche
Ali ki aankhen bahar a gayi
Lekin fat se peeche hat gaya wo
" y ye ye to.... "madhu ko yakeen nahi ho raha tha ki amit uske style me lad raha tha
DHAMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMM
Fir se ek punch aur Ali ka chehra sooj gaya
DHAMMMMMMMMMMNMNNNNN
is baar Ali ke taang ladkhada gaye
Damn it ye amit apna style change karke lad raha hai ise mai ab apne tarike se ladna padega
DHAMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMM
Ali chaunk pada, fir se style chan......
DHAP
Ali gir chuka tha ring me, amit ki haalat bhi achi nahi thi
1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10....
"wo jo red colour me hai na, wo mera beta hai" Mr surana apni chalati aankhon se sabko Keh rahe the
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PATRICK BOXING ACADEMY
"3 months intense training hone wali hai amit" Patrick ne amit ke kandhe par haath rakhkar bola
"lekin sir mere exams..." amit bola
"sorry amit, decide kar li. Ya boxing ya apna career ya padhai whatever" Patrick bola
Do second bhi nahi laga amit ko sochne me
"I'm OK with it" amit bola
"fir se soch lo amit, nationals me tum bhidoge rishabh se, jeetne ke chance 20% bhi nahi hai, jabki padh kar tum ek achi khasi career bana sakte ho" Patrick bola
"sir mai kal Subhah apna kit bag lekar pohunch jaunga" bol amit chala gaya
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Sorry bro by mistake update incomplete post ho gayaSwaraj bhai ye update to chalu hote hi khtm ho gaya.....
Ali se match matlab ki revenge time
Agle update ka wait hai bhai....
Ab ye update poora hai
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Awesome fantastic Mind-blowing update Bhai...
Ali ko overconfidence le dubi..
Amit le match to jit liya or final Mai cla gya
Dekhte hai Risab ko Hara pata hai ya nhi..
Ali ko overconfidence le dubi..
Amit le match to jit liya or final Mai cla gya
Dekhte hai Risab ko Hara pata hai ya nhi..
Swaraj bhai ye story bahut achchi h ..bs ek request h aapse is story ke baad agent ka last part start karo pls beleive me us story me viewer bhi bahut milenge aur pasand bhi bahut aayegi wo logo ko
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Thanks bro
Agent series like karne ke liye
Trust me isme kuch characters hai jinko introduce karwana zaroori hai
AJNABEE 2 ke khatam hote hi wo story shuru ho jayegi
Saath rahiye. Story bas kuch ki updates me khatam ho jayegi
Beauty and the beast 2 jald shuru karne wala hoon