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Thanks bro
Dekhte hai aage kya hota hai
Amit ka safar yahi khatam nahi hota
Saath rahiye
Romance EK MUTTHI AASMAN(short story)
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Dekhte hai aage kya hota hai
Amit ka safar yahi khatam nahi hota
Saath rahiye
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Thanks naina jiKoi na ek baar haar gaya to kya phir se try karni chahiye.... kamyabi jarur milegi...
waise yeh pratick kuch zyada hi ajib hain... match ke time gayab raha....
Khair let's see what happens next
Brilliant update Swaraj ji.. Great going
Amit ka safar abhi khatam nahi hua hai
Aur amit harega bhi nahi aage badhega
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Thanks bhaisahab
Aapne mere story ko ji like kiya hai uske liye thanks
Rahi baat do stories ek Saath likhne ki to baar sahi hai
Isliye mai is story ko khatam karna chahta hoon jald se jald
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"tum rishabh bhaiyya wale gym join kyun nahi kar lete amit, wahan tumhe acha guidance milega" madhu ne amit ke baalon par haath ferte hue kaha
"nahi madhu mai thik hoon, waise bhi yahan maine grow kiya hai, koi baat nahi next time ache se perform karunga" amit bola
Madhu ne gaur se dekha amit ko, kai mahine se relationship me hai is ladke ke Saath, iske dil me kya chal raha hai use ache se pata hai
"aise nahi chalega utho" madhu ne adesh diya
"l lekin madhu kahan ja rahe hai" amit bola
"Patrick boxing academy" madhu ne amit ka haath pakad lagbhag kheechte hue kaha
"lekin kyun" amit bola
"wo wahan pata chal jayega" madhu ne amit ko kheechte hue le Jaana jari rakha
Academy pohunch kar madhu seedha amit ko Ander le gayi
"arey amit kal kya shandar perform kiya tumne, waise rest le lete aaj" mihir bola
"mihir sir, Patrick sir kahan milenge" madhu ne poocha
"ring me hai, kyun??" mihir ne hairaani se poocha
"kuch nahi" bol madhu amit ko le gayi ring ke a der jahan par Patrick boxing gloves pehen kar exercise kar raha tha
"mujhe kuch kehna hai amit ke baare me" madhu boli
"Haan pata hai, maine promise kiya tha ki ye tournament jeetne ke baad hi ise train karunga" Patrick shaant hokar bola
"come on sir ye iski pehli tournament hai aur aap isse kais.... Mmmfff bfffffff" amit ne madhu ka muh apne haathon se band kar diya
"ruk jao madhu" amit bola aur Patrick ke Saamne khada ho gaya
"us tournament se maine bohut kuch seekha hai, mai fir se us tournament me hissa Lunga aur aapko sabit kar doonga" amit Patrick ke aankhon me aankhen daal kar bola
"uksi zaroorat nahi hai, kyunki tumhari pehli tournament hai, isliye mai tumhe train karunga ye tournament haarne ke bawjood" Patrick bola
"j ji ji??" amit ko yakeen nahi hua
"Haan ab bhago aur kal se taiyyar shuru karo" Patrick bola
Amit daud kar chala gaya aur Patrick madhu ke Paas aaya
"madhu tum iski stamina badhaogi" Patrick bola
Madhu ne Haan me sar hilaya
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Subah ke 4 baje
"aawwnnnn" band aankhon se gate kholkar madhu ke Saamne khada ho gaya amit
"10 kilometers daily, na kam na zyada, constant speed ke Saath" madhu boli.track suit pehen rakha tha madhu ne lekin neeche sirf short pehna hua tha
Amit ki nazar wahan jate hi madhu ka para chad gaya
"ab tharak panti band karo aur chalo shuru karte hai" madhu boli
Daudne ke Waqt amit thak kar choor ho Jaata Hai, kisi bench par baith Jaata Hai
Madhu sab dekhti hai, samajhti hai lekin wo kuch nahi kar sakti
Success ke peeche koi short cut nahi hai
Wo madhu ko ache se pata hai
Amit ka stamina poor hai aur wahi uske haar ka kaaran bana
Har din ye silsila chalta raha lekin amit ne kabhi bhi band nahi kiya daudna
Ab to wo madhu ke just peeche chalta daudta rehta hai
"ye lo madhu" amit ne ek bag thama diya madhu ko
"kya hai ye?? Aur itne paise kharch karne ki kya zaroorat thi??" madhu boli aur packet khol diya
Ek t shirt aur ek jeans thi usme
"k kal shopping mall me bohut der se use dekh rahi thi na t tum" amit sar khujte hue bola
Madhu ki aankhen chalak uthi
"ro kyun rahi ho tum" amit ne poocha
"koun ro raha hai, waise amit kal mere liye ek bada din hai. Asian games ke selection ke liye Jaana Hai mujhe, tum aaoge??" madhu ne poocha
"na kehti tab bhi aata" amit haakar bola to madhu bhi muskura uthi
ASIAN GAMES TOURNAMENT
Aankhen fuli hui aur chehra sooja hua tha
Lekin wo nahi ho paaya jo madhu chahti thi
Jise dekhne ke liye amit aaya tha
"mat ro madhu plz chup ho jao" kanika madhu ke haath par haath rakh kar Keh rahi thi
"kanika zara yahan to aana" mihir ke bulate hi kanika ne madhu ka haath kas kar pakda aur fir chali gayi
"lao apna haath do madhu" amit bola aur madhu ka gloves kholne laga
Bencha par baithi madhu chupchap apna haath Amit ke Saamne rakhe
"tum bohut acha ladi aaj, kam se kam us opponent se behtar jisne galat fayda uthakar ye match jeeta" amit bola
Madhu chup thi
"mai ye baat tumhe tasalli dene ke liye nahi bol raha hoon madhu, balki isliye kyunki mujhe pata hai ki tum kitni behtareen boxer ho" amit fir bola aur doosre haath ka gloves kholne laga
"maine to kabhi sapne me bhi nahi socha tha ki Asian games ke selection tak pohunch paunga, lekin tum to is stage tak a gayi, I'm proud of you madhu" amit bola
"amit" madhu dheere se boli
"k kya madhu" amit bola
Madhu ne apne haklane wale bf ke chehre ko pakda aur
Muahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh
"thanks, I love you" apna lips alag karte hue madhu boli
"m me too" amit bola
"me too se kya matlab??"
"n nahi matlab mai tumse pyaar karta hoon madhu"
"whatever, mai nahi maanti"
"aah madhu tum..."
"acha zor se chillao, fir dekhenge"
"z zor se y yahan"
"oh yani tum nahi karoge"
"I LOVE YOU M MADHU"
"mujhe sunai nahi diya"
"oh please madhu"
"ha ha ha"
"tum has kyun r rahi ho??"
"nahi madhu mai thik hoon, waise bhi yahan maine grow kiya hai, koi baat nahi next time ache se perform karunga" amit bola
Madhu ne gaur se dekha amit ko, kai mahine se relationship me hai is ladke ke Saath, iske dil me kya chal raha hai use ache se pata hai
"aise nahi chalega utho" madhu ne adesh diya
"l lekin madhu kahan ja rahe hai" amit bola
"Patrick boxing academy" madhu ne amit ka haath pakad lagbhag kheechte hue kaha
"lekin kyun" amit bola
"wo wahan pata chal jayega" madhu ne amit ko kheechte hue le Jaana jari rakha
Academy pohunch kar madhu seedha amit ko Ander le gayi
"arey amit kal kya shandar perform kiya tumne, waise rest le lete aaj" mihir bola
"mihir sir, Patrick sir kahan milenge" madhu ne poocha
"ring me hai, kyun??" mihir ne hairaani se poocha
"kuch nahi" bol madhu amit ko le gayi ring ke a der jahan par Patrick boxing gloves pehen kar exercise kar raha tha
"mujhe kuch kehna hai amit ke baare me" madhu boli
"Haan pata hai, maine promise kiya tha ki ye tournament jeetne ke baad hi ise train karunga" Patrick shaant hokar bola
"come on sir ye iski pehli tournament hai aur aap isse kais.... Mmmfff bfffffff" amit ne madhu ka muh apne haathon se band kar diya
"ruk jao madhu" amit bola aur Patrick ke Saamne khada ho gaya
"us tournament se maine bohut kuch seekha hai, mai fir se us tournament me hissa Lunga aur aapko sabit kar doonga" amit Patrick ke aankhon me aankhen daal kar bola
"uksi zaroorat nahi hai, kyunki tumhari pehli tournament hai, isliye mai tumhe train karunga ye tournament haarne ke bawjood" Patrick bola
"j ji ji??" amit ko yakeen nahi hua
"Haan ab bhago aur kal se taiyyar shuru karo" Patrick bola
Amit daud kar chala gaya aur Patrick madhu ke Paas aaya
"madhu tum iski stamina badhaogi" Patrick bola
Madhu ne Haan me sar hilaya
----------------------------------------------------------------------
Subah ke 4 baje
"aawwnnnn" band aankhon se gate kholkar madhu ke Saamne khada ho gaya amit
"10 kilometers daily, na kam na zyada, constant speed ke Saath" madhu boli.track suit pehen rakha tha madhu ne lekin neeche sirf short pehna hua tha
Amit ki nazar wahan jate hi madhu ka para chad gaya
"ab tharak panti band karo aur chalo shuru karte hai" madhu boli
Daudne ke Waqt amit thak kar choor ho Jaata Hai, kisi bench par baith Jaata Hai
Madhu sab dekhti hai, samajhti hai lekin wo kuch nahi kar sakti
Success ke peeche koi short cut nahi hai
Wo madhu ko ache se pata hai
Amit ka stamina poor hai aur wahi uske haar ka kaaran bana
Har din ye silsila chalta raha lekin amit ne kabhi bhi band nahi kiya daudna
Ab to wo madhu ke just peeche chalta daudta rehta hai
"ye lo madhu" amit ne ek bag thama diya madhu ko
"kya hai ye?? Aur itne paise kharch karne ki kya zaroorat thi??" madhu boli aur packet khol diya
Ek t shirt aur ek jeans thi usme
"k kal shopping mall me bohut der se use dekh rahi thi na t tum" amit sar khujte hue bola
Madhu ki aankhen chalak uthi
"ro kyun rahi ho tum" amit ne poocha
"koun ro raha hai, waise amit kal mere liye ek bada din hai. Asian games ke selection ke liye Jaana Hai mujhe, tum aaoge??" madhu ne poocha
"na kehti tab bhi aata" amit haakar bola to madhu bhi muskura uthi
ASIAN GAMES TOURNAMENT
Aankhen fuli hui aur chehra sooja hua tha
Lekin wo nahi ho paaya jo madhu chahti thi
Jise dekhne ke liye amit aaya tha
"mat ro madhu plz chup ho jao" kanika madhu ke haath par haath rakh kar Keh rahi thi
"kanika zara yahan to aana" mihir ke bulate hi kanika ne madhu ka haath kas kar pakda aur fir chali gayi
"lao apna haath do madhu" amit bola aur madhu ka gloves kholne laga
Bencha par baithi madhu chupchap apna haath Amit ke Saamne rakhe
"tum bohut acha ladi aaj, kam se kam us opponent se behtar jisne galat fayda uthakar ye match jeeta" amit bola
Madhu chup thi
"mai ye baat tumhe tasalli dene ke liye nahi bol raha hoon madhu, balki isliye kyunki mujhe pata hai ki tum kitni behtareen boxer ho" amit fir bola aur doosre haath ka gloves kholne laga
"maine to kabhi sapne me bhi nahi socha tha ki Asian games ke selection tak pohunch paunga, lekin tum to is stage tak a gayi, I'm proud of you madhu" amit bola
"amit" madhu dheere se boli
"k kya madhu" amit bola
Madhu ne apne haklane wale bf ke chehre ko pakda aur
Muahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh
"thanks, I love you" apna lips alag karte hue madhu boli
"m me too" amit bola
"me too se kya matlab??"
"n nahi matlab mai tumse pyaar karta hoon madhu"
"whatever, mai nahi maanti"
"aah madhu tum..."
"acha zor se chillao, fir dekhenge"
"z zor se y yahan"
"oh yani tum nahi karoge"
"I LOVE YOU M MADHU"
"mujhe sunai nahi diya"
"oh please madhu"
"ha ha ha"
"tum has kyun r rahi ho??"
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