Black water
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Congratulations New story bhai.
Update jaberjast hai. Dekhte hai aage kya hota hai.
Komal ne hi sayad hero ke mom ko marwaya hoga.
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Update jaberjast hai. Dekhte hai aage kya hota hai.
Komal ne hi sayad hero ke mom ko marwaya hoga.
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Rocky2602
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UPDATE 3
MAIN..ghar chalein
Geeta..chaliye
Main.. please sheetal aur daadi ko kuchh mat bataiyega
Geeta..nahi bataungi
Mujhe toh vishwaas nahi hua
Ki geeta maan gayi
Main..aap itni jaldi maan gayi
Geeta..woh meri chhoti behen hai
Aaj mujhe ehsaas hua
Ki maine Uske sath kitna galat kiya
Mujhe aisa nahi karna Chahiye tha
Mujhe maaf kar dijiye
Main..aap maafi kyun maang rahi hain
Chaliye ab chalte hain
Uske baad hum dono jab bahar nikle
Toh doctors ka heart fail ho gaya
Mujhe zinda dekhke
Meeta didi ek side gum sum hui bathi Thi
Main unka hath pakda
Aur woh jab apni Gardan uthake mujhe dekhi
Toh unke chehre pe jo khushi dikhi
Main bata nahi sakta
Woh khadi hui aur ek jhatke mein mere seene se lagke rone lagi
Main..aap ro kyun rahi ho
Aap khush nahi ho kya
Meeta.. bakwaas mat kar bahut maarungi
Main..achcha nahi karta
Chaliye ab
Geeta ne mera hath pakad rakhkha tha
Aur meeta didi bas mujhe hi dekhe ja rahi thi
Tabhi mujhe meeta didi ki man ki baatein sunayi dene lagi
Main muskura diya
Geeta ne kaha tha
Ki jab woh mera pyar accept kar legi
Tab mujhe powers milengi
Shayad main dusro ke man mein jhaank sakta hoon
Uske baad hum car mein baithe
Geeta.. kapde change kar lijiyega
Raaste mein
Main..theek hai
Meeta.. kar lijiyega
Yeh aap kabse ho gaya
Geeta..tu apna kaam kar
Jyada apne dimaag pe jor daalne ki jarurat nahi hai
Meeta ne bura sa munh banaya
Aur dusri taraf dekhne lagi
Main mall ke saamne car rok diya
Aur phir hum teeno mall mein ghus gaye
Lagbhag saare log mujhe ghur rahe the
Main unhein ignore maara
Phir maine apne liye kapde liye
Aur change kar liya
Didi ne payment kiya
Kyunki mera mobile purse sab pata nahi kahan tha
Uske baad hum ghar aagaye
Ghar aaye toh kya dekhta hoon
Komal apni dono beti ke sath aayi hui hai
Daadi aur sheetal ka ro ro ke bura haal ho chuka hai
Main unke paas pahunch gaya
Aur sheetal mujhe dekhte hi mujhse lipatke rone lagi
Daadi bhi mere paas aagayi
Lekin komal aur uski dono beti ke chehre ka rang udd gaya
Mujhe zinda dekhke
Sheetal..yeh keh rahi thi
Ki aap mar gaye
Daadi..nikal jaa yahan se
Daayan kahin ki nikal
Sheetal..mujhe toh meeta ne bataya tha
Main kyun jhuth bolungi
Meeta..main kyun aap se aisa bolne lagi
Mera dimaag kharab hai
Yeh bolke meeta ne mujhe ankh maar diya
Komal ..tum sab se aur ummid bhi kya ki ja sakti hai
Jiski maa randi rahi ho
Bas yahin galti kar di komal ne
Kyunki uske baad uske gaal pe ek thappad pada jo maara tha geeta ne
Are bhai aise hi thodi meri gaand fat rahi thi unse
Geeta..randi toh tu hai
Saali chhinaal
Haram ki jani
72 lund ki
Agar yahan se nahi gayi
Toh tum teeno maa betiyo ko nanga karke maarungi
Ab dekho bhaiya geeta Thi
Karate black belt
Jo woh keh rahi thi woh aisa kar sakti thi
Kyunki komal ke gaal pe uski paancho ungliyo ke nishaan chhap gaye the
Aur komal ko yeh baat pata thi
Woh khoon ka ghunt peeke
Wahan se nikal gayi
Ab maine is liye kuchh nahi kiya
Kyunki ab hum jo karne waale the
Woh kisi ne socha bhi nahi hoga
Kyunki jab se main jaaga tha
Mere dil se dar nikal chuka tha
Chahe woh kisi ka bhi ho
Dimaag mein aise aise plan ban rahe the
Ki bata nahi sakta
Sheetal..are you ok
Main..yep
Aur phir hum sabne sath mein khaana khaaya
Main Apne room mein aagaya
Aur apne plan ke baare mein sochne laga
Ki usmein kya kya loop holes hain
Tabhi geeta mere room mein aagayi
Main..aap yahan kya kar rahi ho
Geeta..main main toh aapko dekhne aayi thi
Main..mujhe toh aisa nahi lagta
Geeta..aap mere man mein jhaank rahe hain
Main..aapko kaise pata
Geeta.. mujhe is liye pata hai
Kyunki mujhe sab kuchh pata hai
Aapke baare mein
Main..lekin kaise
Geeta..main kyun batau
Man mein jhaankiye
Aur jab main dhyan lagake jhaanka
Toh yeh pata chala
Ki jab hospital mein mujhe hosh aaya
Tab meri aankho mein dekhte hi
Geeta ko sab yaad aagaya
Geeta..toh pata chal gaya aapko
Main..iska matlab aap sapno waali geeta ho
Toh phir meri didi kahan hai
Geeta..main hi hoon
Aur didi mat boliye
Main..achcha nahi bolta
Aur geeta mere pairo ke paas baith gayi
Aur phir mere pair dabane lagi
Main..yeh kyun karti ho aap
Geeta..meri marzi
Main..didi
Geeta..bol rahi hoon didi mat boliye
Main..ab aadat hai
Itni jaldi thodi jaayegi
Waise mujhe kab yaad aayega
Sab kuchh
Geeta..jab aapse aapki sab biwi pyar karne lagengi
Main..ab mujhe neend aarahi hai
Geeta..toh so jaaiye
Ab main kya karta meri aadat thi jaldi sone ki
Toh main so gaya
Aur tabhi main pahunch gaya
Apne mehel mein
Ab wahan sirf 9 ladki hi thi
Toh geeta didi gayab ho gayi
Tabhi ek ladki ne apna ghunghat utha diya
Meri aankhein chaundhya gayi
Saali yeh kaun hai
Tabhi woh mere paas aake baith gayi
Haan is baar main dar nahi raha tha
Mera naam ritika hai
Aur main aapki dusri biwi hoon
Main..lekin main aapse kabhi mila hi nahi
Ritika..ab usmein meri galti thodi hai
Aapko mujhe dhundna hoga
Kyunki mere dad ne mera rishta tay kar diya hai
Aur jald hi meri engagement hone waali hai
Main..lekin apna address toh batao
Yaar yeh kya hai
Main kaise dhundunga aapko
Ritika.. don't worry kal jab aap college jaayenge
Toh mujhse mulaqaat ho jaayegi aapki
Yeh bolke woh hansne lagi
Main uske man mein jhaanka
Lekin mujhe kuchh sunayi nahi diya
Ritika..yahan aapki powers kaam nahi karengi
Main..aur agar maine aapko pata liya
Toh mujhe kaunsi power milegi
Ritika..kya matlab hai pata liya
Main..ab hum ladke aise hi baat karte hain
Ritika..yeh sab geeta didi ko pata hai
Ki aapki kaunsi biwi se aapko kaunsi powers milengi
Main..iska matlab unhein yeh bhi pata hoga
Ki meri kaunsi biwi kahan pe hai
Ritika..nahi yeh koi nahi jaanta
Unhein bas mere baare mein pata hai
Aur mujhse aapko kaunsi powers milengi woh pata hai
Main.. theek hai
Subah hote hi pitaji ghar meinAur jaagte hi jo geeta dekh chuki thi
Woh sab mujhe pata chal gaya
Main dauda hua neeche gaya
Aur isse pehle ki papa didi ko ek aur thappad maarte
Main unka hath pakad liya
Main..papa yeh kya hai
Papa..tu hat saamne se
Iski itni himmat ki yeh komal ki gaali degi
Main..usne bhi humari maa ko gaali di thi
Papa..jhuth bolta hai
Aur papa ne mujhe thappad maarne ki koshish ki
Main unka hath pakad liya
Main..dekhiye papa
Galti pe maarenge
Toh maar kha lunga
Lekin kisi aur ke kehne mein aake
Agar aap mujhe maarenge
Toh main maar Nahi khaaunga
Papa..tune mera hath pakda
Apne baap ka hath pakda
Main..are bhai jab aap humein chhodke chale gaye the
Tab yaad nahi aaya aapko
Ki aap humare baap hain
Papa..yeh tune jo kapde pehne hain
Woh mere paiso ke hain
Yeh ghar mera hai
Main..yeh aapka ghar nahi hai
Yeh ghar hai daadi ka
Papa..maa tum padhaare
Aur aav dekha na taav meeta ke gaal pe thappad maarna shuru kar diya
Geeta ne jab yeh dekha
Toh woh meeta ke saamne aagayi
Lekin pitaji ne geeta ko bhi thappad maar diya
Meri aankh khul gayi
Behenchod aisa laga kisi ne mujhe thappad maar diya ho....
MAIN..ghar chalein
Geeta..chaliye
Main.. please sheetal aur daadi ko kuchh mat bataiyega
Geeta..nahi bataungi
Mujhe toh vishwaas nahi hua
Ki geeta maan gayi
Main..aap itni jaldi maan gayi
Geeta..woh meri chhoti behen hai
Aaj mujhe ehsaas hua
Ki maine Uske sath kitna galat kiya
Mujhe aisa nahi karna Chahiye tha
Mujhe maaf kar dijiye
Main..aap maafi kyun maang rahi hain
Chaliye ab chalte hain
Uske baad hum dono jab bahar nikle
Toh doctors ka heart fail ho gaya
Mujhe zinda dekhke
Meeta didi ek side gum sum hui bathi Thi
Main unka hath pakda
Aur woh jab apni Gardan uthake mujhe dekhi
Toh unke chehre pe jo khushi dikhi
Main bata nahi sakta
Woh khadi hui aur ek jhatke mein mere seene se lagke rone lagi
Main..aap ro kyun rahi ho
Aap khush nahi ho kya
Meeta.. bakwaas mat kar bahut maarungi
Main..achcha nahi karta
Chaliye ab
Geeta ne mera hath pakad rakhkha tha
Aur meeta didi bas mujhe hi dekhe ja rahi thi
Tabhi mujhe meeta didi ki man ki baatein sunayi dene lagi
Main muskura diya
Geeta ne kaha tha
Ki jab woh mera pyar accept kar legi
Tab mujhe powers milengi
Shayad main dusro ke man mein jhaank sakta hoon
Uske baad hum car mein baithe
Geeta.. kapde change kar lijiyega
Raaste mein
Main..theek hai
Meeta.. kar lijiyega
Yeh aap kabse ho gaya
Geeta..tu apna kaam kar
Jyada apne dimaag pe jor daalne ki jarurat nahi hai
Meeta ne bura sa munh banaya
Aur dusri taraf dekhne lagi
Main mall ke saamne car rok diya
Aur phir hum teeno mall mein ghus gaye
Lagbhag saare log mujhe ghur rahe the
Main unhein ignore maara
Phir maine apne liye kapde liye
Aur change kar liya
Didi ne payment kiya
Kyunki mera mobile purse sab pata nahi kahan tha
Uske baad hum ghar aagaye
Ghar aaye toh kya dekhta hoon
Komal apni dono beti ke sath aayi hui hai
Daadi aur sheetal ka ro ro ke bura haal ho chuka hai
Main unke paas pahunch gaya
Aur sheetal mujhe dekhte hi mujhse lipatke rone lagi
Daadi bhi mere paas aagayi
Lekin komal aur uski dono beti ke chehre ka rang udd gaya
Mujhe zinda dekhke
Sheetal..yeh keh rahi thi
Ki aap mar gaye
Daadi..nikal jaa yahan se
Daayan kahin ki nikal
Sheetal..mujhe toh meeta ne bataya tha
Main kyun jhuth bolungi
Meeta..main kyun aap se aisa bolne lagi
Mera dimaag kharab hai
Yeh bolke meeta ne mujhe ankh maar diya
Komal ..tum sab se aur ummid bhi kya ki ja sakti hai
Jiski maa randi rahi ho
Bas yahin galti kar di komal ne
Kyunki uske baad uske gaal pe ek thappad pada jo maara tha geeta ne
Are bhai aise hi thodi meri gaand fat rahi thi unse
Geeta..randi toh tu hai
Saali chhinaal
Haram ki jani
72 lund ki
Agar yahan se nahi gayi
Toh tum teeno maa betiyo ko nanga karke maarungi
Ab dekho bhaiya geeta Thi
Karate black belt
Jo woh keh rahi thi woh aisa kar sakti thi
Kyunki komal ke gaal pe uski paancho ungliyo ke nishaan chhap gaye the
Aur komal ko yeh baat pata thi
Woh khoon ka ghunt peeke
Wahan se nikal gayi
Ab maine is liye kuchh nahi kiya
Kyunki ab hum jo karne waale the
Woh kisi ne socha bhi nahi hoga
Kyunki jab se main jaaga tha
Mere dil se dar nikal chuka tha
Chahe woh kisi ka bhi ho
Dimaag mein aise aise plan ban rahe the
Ki bata nahi sakta
Sheetal..are you ok
Main..yep
Aur phir hum sabne sath mein khaana khaaya
Main Apne room mein aagaya
Aur apne plan ke baare mein sochne laga
Ki usmein kya kya loop holes hain
Tabhi geeta mere room mein aagayi
Main..aap yahan kya kar rahi ho
Geeta..main main toh aapko dekhne aayi thi
Main..mujhe toh aisa nahi lagta
Geeta..aap mere man mein jhaank rahe hain
Main..aapko kaise pata
Geeta.. mujhe is liye pata hai
Kyunki mujhe sab kuchh pata hai
Aapke baare mein
Main..lekin kaise
Geeta..main kyun batau
Man mein jhaankiye
Aur jab main dhyan lagake jhaanka
Toh yeh pata chala
Ki jab hospital mein mujhe hosh aaya
Tab meri aankho mein dekhte hi
Geeta ko sab yaad aagaya
Geeta..toh pata chal gaya aapko
Main..iska matlab aap sapno waali geeta ho
Toh phir meri didi kahan hai
Geeta..main hi hoon
Aur didi mat boliye
Main..achcha nahi bolta
Aur geeta mere pairo ke paas baith gayi
Aur phir mere pair dabane lagi
Main..yeh kyun karti ho aap
Geeta..meri marzi
Main..didi
Geeta..bol rahi hoon didi mat boliye
Main..ab aadat hai
Itni jaldi thodi jaayegi
Waise mujhe kab yaad aayega
Sab kuchh
Geeta..jab aapse aapki sab biwi pyar karne lagengi
Main..ab mujhe neend aarahi hai
Geeta..toh so jaaiye
Ab main kya karta meri aadat thi jaldi sone ki
Toh main so gaya
Aur tabhi main pahunch gaya
Apne mehel mein
Ab wahan sirf 9 ladki hi thi
Toh geeta didi gayab ho gayi
Tabhi ek ladki ne apna ghunghat utha diya
Meri aankhein chaundhya gayi
Saali yeh kaun hai
Tabhi woh mere paas aake baith gayi
Haan is baar main dar nahi raha tha
Mera naam ritika hai
Aur main aapki dusri biwi hoon
Main..lekin main aapse kabhi mila hi nahi
Ritika..ab usmein meri galti thodi hai
Aapko mujhe dhundna hoga
Kyunki mere dad ne mera rishta tay kar diya hai
Aur jald hi meri engagement hone waali hai
Main..lekin apna address toh batao
Yaar yeh kya hai
Main kaise dhundunga aapko
Ritika.. don't worry kal jab aap college jaayenge
Toh mujhse mulaqaat ho jaayegi aapki
Yeh bolke woh hansne lagi
Main uske man mein jhaanka
Lekin mujhe kuchh sunayi nahi diya
Ritika..yahan aapki powers kaam nahi karengi
Main..aur agar maine aapko pata liya
Toh mujhe kaunsi power milegi
Ritika..kya matlab hai pata liya
Main..ab hum ladke aise hi baat karte hain
Ritika..yeh sab geeta didi ko pata hai
Ki aapki kaunsi biwi se aapko kaunsi powers milengi
Main..iska matlab unhein yeh bhi pata hoga
Ki meri kaunsi biwi kahan pe hai
Ritika..nahi yeh koi nahi jaanta
Unhein bas mere baare mein pata hai
Aur mujhse aapko kaunsi powers milengi woh pata hai
Main.. theek hai
Subah hote hi pitaji ghar meinAur jaagte hi jo geeta dekh chuki thi
Woh sab mujhe pata chal gaya
Main dauda hua neeche gaya
Aur isse pehle ki papa didi ko ek aur thappad maarte
Main unka hath pakad liya
Main..papa yeh kya hai
Papa..tu hat saamne se
Iski itni himmat ki yeh komal ki gaali degi
Main..usne bhi humari maa ko gaali di thi
Papa..jhuth bolta hai
Aur papa ne mujhe thappad maarne ki koshish ki
Main unka hath pakad liya
Main..dekhiye papa
Galti pe maarenge
Toh maar kha lunga
Lekin kisi aur ke kehne mein aake
Agar aap mujhe maarenge
Toh main maar Nahi khaaunga
Papa..tune mera hath pakda
Apne baap ka hath pakda
Main..are bhai jab aap humein chhodke chale gaye the
Tab yaad nahi aaya aapko
Ki aap humare baap hain
Papa..yeh tune jo kapde pehne hain
Woh mere paiso ke hain
Yeh ghar mera hai
Main..yeh aapka ghar nahi hai
Yeh ghar hai daadi ka
Papa..maa tum padhaare
Aur aav dekha na taav meeta ke gaal pe thappad maarna shuru kar diya
Geeta ne jab yeh dekha
Toh woh meeta ke saamne aagayi
Lekin pitaji ne geeta ko bhi thappad maar diya
Meri aankh khul gayi
Behenchod aisa laga kisi ne mujhe thappad maar diya ho....
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Black water
Vasudhaiv Kutumbakam
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Fabulous update bhai
nilu12
I am a man, by mistakly username taken as nilu
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maja aa gaya bhai. ab hogi baap ki thukai
Superb update Bhai.
Dekhte hai hero apne bap ko kaise pelta hai.
Waiting for next update
Dekhte hai hero apne bap ko kaise pelta hai.
Waiting for next update
DAIVIK-RAJ
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Mind blowing update brother
Rocky2602
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