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Update 140

Ek sunsaan, murda planet par jahan na hawa chalti thi, na roshni bachi thi do shaktiyaan takraayi. Ek bhookh se phula hua paapi dev, doosra ek shaant aur sadhak devta.

**Gluttony** aaya jaise koi shraap. Ek vikaral titan jiska sharir hamesha badal raha tha, maans aur sone ki chaadar mein lapeta hua. Uske seene mein ek kala vortex tha ek aisi bhookh jo kabhi khatam nahi hoti thi. Har kadam par zameen sad jaati thi, peedhiyan chhil jaati thi, aur aasmaan laal sharab ki tarah tapakne lagta tha. Bhookh se pagal prani mitti se nikal aaye, uske peechhe bhag rahe the kuchh aur khaane ke liye. Gluttony garja:

**"Sab kuch nigal loonga!"**

Aur tab aaya **Kaelus** ek halki si saans ke jaise. Ek lambaa, shaant roop, safed chaadar mein lipta hua. Uske kadam zameen ko chhoote nahi the woh ghoomta tha jaise koi sapna. Jahan woh chala, vahaan sab kuchh shaant ho gaya. Sadi hui bhojan, sharab, bhatakti aatmaayein sabh kuchh dhool ban gaya. Ek shwet surya uske upar chamakne laga jalta nahi, lekin pavitra karta tha.

Gluttony haansa, uske daant ke beech se laal laar tapakti thi:

**"Tu mere bhoj mein bhookha aaya hai?"**

Kaelus chup raha. Uski aankhen band thi. Sir ke upar jo chakrakar mukut tha, woh ek baar ghooma aur samay ruk gaya.

Gluttony jhapaata uski chhe badi panje waqt aur space ko cheerne lage. Bhojan ka toofan aaya sharab acid ban gayi, rotiyon mein keede pad gaye.

**"Sab kuch nigal jaaunga!"**

Kaelus ne ek haath uthaya.

**Shaanti chh gayi.**

Sab kuch ruk gaya.

Bhookh ke roop mein aayi aandhi hawa mein ud gayi.

Jo atmaayein Gluttony ne nigli thi, woh chillane lagi unki cheekh bhookh nahi, satya thi. Kaelus ne unhe jagaya tha. Ek pal ke liye, unhone mehsoos kiya ki kya bhool hui. Gluttony unki cheekhon se kaapne laga.

Kaelus aage badha. Dheere, lekin nirnayak. Jahan kadam rakha, bhojan ki pahaadiyaan ret ban gayi. Zameen safed marble mein badli, jismein mandala aur sacred geometry bani thi.

Gluttony ne puri takat laga di. Usne pahaad ko toda, tarein nigli, aur aakash phaad diya.

**"TU MUJHE ROK NHI SAKTA! MAIN BHUKH HOON!"**

Kaelus ne aankhen kholi.

Do shant sitare chamke jismein jagat ka satya tha.

Aur Gluttony khud ko andhere mein paaya. Akela. Na bhojan, na laar, na awaaz. Sirf ek taraju uske samne tha jismein uski har paapi atma ka wajan tha.

Woh har bite mehsoos kar raha tha. Har cheekh. Har bhool.

Kaelus ne kadam badhaya haath mein danda, aankhon mein shaanti.

**"Discipline mana karna nahi hai... woh yaad dilana hai ki tu kya ban sakta tha."**

Gluttony ghutne par gir gaya. Uski bhookh usi ko nigalne lagi. Haath sona ban kar pigalne lage, sharir sad gaya. Feast palat gaya.

Kaelus ne haath uthaya ek shwet roshni uske haath se nikli aur Gluttony ke seene mein ghus gayi.

Na dhamaaka hua. Na cheekh.

Sirf ek shaanti.

Gluttony dhool mein badal gaya.

Aur Kaelus akela khada raha. Tarazu sahi tha. Bhoj samapt hua.

Sookha, mar chuka ek grah tha jiska har ang Greed ki bhookh ne chaat liya tha. Pahaad sona ban gaye the, nadiyaan heereon mein badal chuki thi, aur hawa mein bhi zahrili chamak thi. Yahaan tha woh **Greed**, chhe haathon wala sunehra rakshas, aankhon mein kabhi na bharti bhookh, gale mein laal ruby ka haar, har haath mein ek chheen li gayi vastu. Uska mukh ek muskaan nahi, ek bhayankar gufa thi, jo har vastu ko nigalne ko tayyar thi.

Aur waha utar aaya **Dharma**, safaid aur sone ke vastra mein, haathon mein ek *Tula* (scale) aur ek *Sankalp-Dand* (staff). Uski aankhon mein na gussa tha, na daya. Sirf santulan.

“Tu rukne aaya hai?” Greed ki hansi grah ke andar tak goonj gayi. “Main chahta hoon. Aur chahta hoon. Aur main sab le sakta hoon.”

Dharma ne tula uthai. Us par Greed ki aatma ka wazan rakha gaya aur turaant ek taraf jhuk gayi, tootne ke kareeb. “Tera bhaar asahya hai,” Dharma bola. “Aur main is vishv mein samanta wapas laane aaya hoon.”

Greed ne pehla vaar kiya *Akhand Bhookh*. Har vastu, har prana uski taraf kheenchne laga. Yeh sirf dhan ki lalach nahi thi, yeh aatma ki lalach thi. Sookhe ped, ret, purani yaadein sab Greed mein samaane lage.

Lekin Dharma ne apna dand zameen par maara. *Karma-Rekha* jali. Har vasna, har ichha ek chakravyuh mein bandh gayi. Tula ne dhadakna shuru kiya, har baar ek karm ka hisaab diya jaa raha tha. Grah ki dhadkan vapas aane lagi.

Greed ne aankhen phaad kar dekha. “Main is grah ka malik hoon!”

Dharma ne shant swar mein kaha, “Tu is grah ka chor hai.”

Greed ab aur bhi vikaari roop mein badalne laga. Uske haath bade hone lage. Har haath mein ab ek devta ki chhavi thi usne un devtaon se chura liya tha: ek ki buddhi, doosre ka shastra, teesre ka vak. Woh ab sab kuch chaahta tha sab kuch khud ke liye.

Usne *Vikriti-Maya* chhodi. Ek jaal jisme Dharma ki tula hilne lagi. Satya aur jhooth ki seema dhundhli hone lagi. Sab kuch Greed ke anukul ban raha tha. Hawayein bolne lagi, “Lelo. Rakho. Sab tumhara hai.”

Par Dharma ne aankhen band ki. Usne ek mantra ucharit kiya *Satya-Drishti*. Uske dand se ek roshni nikli, jisme har chhupi maya jal gayi. Tula ne vishesh roop liya ab usme sirf karm dikhai dene lage.

“Greed,” Dharma garja, “Tu badhta hai, lekin kabhi bharta nahi. Tu khaali hai, aur is khaali pan ka bhaar ab grah sambhal nahi sakta.”

Greed ne antim prahar kiya *Samudra-Spandan*. Usne samay, gyaan, prem, sab kuch churaane ki koshish ki. Yeh uska antim lobh tha anant banne ka lobh. Har roshni usmein ghusne lagi, sab kuch khaatam hone laga.

Lekin Dharma ne apna dand aakaash ki taraf uthaya. Ek *Nyay-Purush* ka roop bana anek yugon ki gyaan se bhara hua. Usne Tula se ek teer banaya *Nirnay-Baan*. Us baan mein har tyag, har satya, har antim gyaan tha jo vishv ne kabhi diya.

Baan chhoda gaya. Aur woh seedha Greed ke vakshasthal mein laga. Sunehra roop phat gaya. Heere-tamgein mitti ban gaye. Greed cheekha ek aisi cheekh jisme laalach ne haar maan li.

“Main... aur... chahta... tha…”

Dharma ne aankhen jhukaayi. “Isi ne tujhe shunya banaya.”

Greed vilin ho gaya. Grah ne saans li. Rait phir se zameen bani. Dhan, vasna, ichha sab apni maryada mein laut aaye. Dharma ne apni tula uthayi. Ab woh seedhi thi. Samta wapas aa chuki thi.

Jaha har taraf achhayi ki jit ho rahi thi toh wahi dusri taraf Rakh se bhare is shant grah par koi zindagi nahi thi. Sannata itna gehra ke saans bhi ghoonjti thi. Aur phir... **Lust** aayi. Uske kadam padte hi, zameen par gulab ugne lagelekin inmein khoon tha, sugandh mein zehar tha.

Hawa mein uski *saansein thi*, har ek ang chhalakta huasharir ek sapna, aankhon mein vish. Uski hansi mein andhera tha, aur har kadam ek nasha. **Lust ke shabdon mein jadoo tha.**

"Aayiye, God of love... dekhte hain tumhara pavitra prem kitna tikta hai mere vasna ke samundar mein."

**God of love** ne aankhen band ki, ek prarthana jaisi shanti uske charo taraf thi. **White crystalline wings** uske peechhe chamak rahi thi. Pyaar uske liye mohabbat tha, nafrat mein bhi samarpan. Uski roshni ne Lust ke gulabon ko sukhaya, uski aura ne mirage tod diye.

Lust ne pehla vaar kiya**pheromone mist** chhodi, jisme har yaad, har ichha ghul gayi. Mohabbat ki jhoothi tasveerein, sharir ki bhookh, unsaid desires.

God of love aage badhaek *shabd*, “**Satya**”, aur poora illusion chhink gaya. Lust cheekhi, lekin uski aawaz mein ab chhed-chhad nahi thi, *ghussa tha.*

“Tumne mere sapno ko todo!”

“Woh sapne the hi jhoothe,” God of love bola, **aankhen kholte hi**, Lust ne apna asli roop dekhaek gandi, kalpnik sharir, joh khud mein hi bhookhi thi.

Tab Lust phooti**tendrils nikle**, *heart-shaped whips* bane, har ek pyar ko vash mein karne ki koshish. Usne God of love par vaar kiya, *ek hazaar illusions*, *ek laakh vaasnaayein.*

Lekin God of love ne apne **light shield** faila diye. Har vaar, har touch, **burn** ho gaya.

**Roshni aur andhera takraaye.**

**White aur Scarlet collide hue.**

Rakh ke tufaan uthe, purane devtaon ki cheekh sunayi di, planet ki zameen crack ho gayi. **Lust ne ant mein apna “Desire Core” khola**ek beating, blood-soaked heart. “Isse chhoo lo... aur tum bhi mere ban jaoge.”

God of love ne haath badhaya. Phir... haath kheench liya.

“Prem mein samarpan hota hai... lekin vasna mein sirf khudgarzi.”

Ek **beam of pure devotion** uske seene se nikli. Woh beam seedha us heart se takraayi.

Explosion. Rakt ke phool ud gaye. **Planet ke gumbad pe white light chhaa gayi.**

Lust ne girte hue kaha

“Tum jeet gaye, lekin main har jagah hoon... har dil mein ek chhoti si jagah meri bhi hai…”

God of love ne aankhen band ki. “Ho sakta hai. Lekin main bhi har jagah hoon aur main kabhi jhukta nahi.”

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Bahut hi shaandar update diya hai VAJRADHIKARI bhai....
Nice and lovely update....
 
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Update 140

Ek sunsaan, murda planet par jahan na hawa chalti thi, na roshni bachi thi do shaktiyaan takraayi. Ek bhookh se phula hua paapi dev, doosra ek shaant aur sadhak devta.

**Gluttony** aaya jaise koi shraap. Ek vikaral titan jiska sharir hamesha badal raha tha, maans aur sone ki chaadar mein lapeta hua. Uske seene mein ek kala vortex tha ek aisi bhookh jo kabhi khatam nahi hoti thi. Har kadam par zameen sad jaati thi, peedhiyan chhil jaati thi, aur aasmaan laal sharab ki tarah tapakne lagta tha. Bhookh se pagal prani mitti se nikal aaye, uske peechhe bhag rahe the kuchh aur khaane ke liye. Gluttony garja:

**"Sab kuch nigal loonga!"**

Aur tab aaya **Kaelus** ek halki si saans ke jaise. Ek lambaa, shaant roop, safed chaadar mein lipta hua. Uske kadam zameen ko chhoote nahi the woh ghoomta tha jaise koi sapna. Jahan woh chala, vahaan sab kuchh shaant ho gaya. Sadi hui bhojan, sharab, bhatakti aatmaayein sabh kuchh dhool ban gaya. Ek shwet surya uske upar chamakne laga jalta nahi, lekin pavitra karta tha.

Gluttony haansa, uske daant ke beech se laal laar tapakti thi:

**"Tu mere bhoj mein bhookha aaya hai?"**

Kaelus chup raha. Uski aankhen band thi. Sir ke upar jo chakrakar mukut tha, woh ek baar ghooma aur samay ruk gaya.

Gluttony jhapaata uski chhe badi panje waqt aur space ko cheerne lage. Bhojan ka toofan aaya sharab acid ban gayi, rotiyon mein keede pad gaye.

**"Sab kuch nigal jaaunga!"**

Kaelus ne ek haath uthaya.

**Shaanti chh gayi.**

Sab kuch ruk gaya.

Bhookh ke roop mein aayi aandhi hawa mein ud gayi.

Jo atmaayein Gluttony ne nigli thi, woh chillane lagi unki cheekh bhookh nahi, satya thi. Kaelus ne unhe jagaya tha. Ek pal ke liye, unhone mehsoos kiya ki kya bhool hui. Gluttony unki cheekhon se kaapne laga.

Kaelus aage badha. Dheere, lekin nirnayak. Jahan kadam rakha, bhojan ki pahaadiyaan ret ban gayi. Zameen safed marble mein badli, jismein mandala aur sacred geometry bani thi.

Gluttony ne puri takat laga di. Usne pahaad ko toda, tarein nigli, aur aakash phaad diya.

**"TU MUJHE ROK NHI SAKTA! MAIN BHUKH HOON!"**

Kaelus ne aankhen kholi.

Do shant sitare chamke jismein jagat ka satya tha.

Aur Gluttony khud ko andhere mein paaya. Akela. Na bhojan, na laar, na awaaz. Sirf ek taraju uske samne tha jismein uski har paapi atma ka wajan tha.

Woh har bite mehsoos kar raha tha. Har cheekh. Har bhool.

Kaelus ne kadam badhaya haath mein danda, aankhon mein shaanti.

**"Discipline mana karna nahi hai... woh yaad dilana hai ki tu kya ban sakta tha."**

Gluttony ghutne par gir gaya. Uski bhookh usi ko nigalne lagi. Haath sona ban kar pigalne lage, sharir sad gaya. Feast palat gaya.

Kaelus ne haath uthaya ek shwet roshni uske haath se nikli aur Gluttony ke seene mein ghus gayi.

Na dhamaaka hua. Na cheekh.

Sirf ek shaanti.

Gluttony dhool mein badal gaya.

Aur Kaelus akela khada raha. Tarazu sahi tha. Bhoj samapt hua.

Sookha, mar chuka ek grah tha jiska har ang Greed ki bhookh ne chaat liya tha. Pahaad sona ban gaye the, nadiyaan heereon mein badal chuki thi, aur hawa mein bhi zahrili chamak thi. Yahaan tha woh **Greed**, chhe haathon wala sunehra rakshas, aankhon mein kabhi na bharti bhookh, gale mein laal ruby ka haar, har haath mein ek chheen li gayi vastu. Uska mukh ek muskaan nahi, ek bhayankar gufa thi, jo har vastu ko nigalne ko tayyar thi.

Aur waha utar aaya **Dharma**, safaid aur sone ke vastra mein, haathon mein ek *Tula* (scale) aur ek *Sankalp-Dand* (staff). Uski aankhon mein na gussa tha, na daya. Sirf santulan.

“Tu rukne aaya hai?” Greed ki hansi grah ke andar tak goonj gayi. “Main chahta hoon. Aur chahta hoon. Aur main sab le sakta hoon.”

Dharma ne tula uthai. Us par Greed ki aatma ka wazan rakha gaya aur turaant ek taraf jhuk gayi, tootne ke kareeb. “Tera bhaar asahya hai,” Dharma bola. “Aur main is vishv mein samanta wapas laane aaya hoon.”

Greed ne pehla vaar kiya *Akhand Bhookh*. Har vastu, har prana uski taraf kheenchne laga. Yeh sirf dhan ki lalach nahi thi, yeh aatma ki lalach thi. Sookhe ped, ret, purani yaadein sab Greed mein samaane lage.

Lekin Dharma ne apna dand zameen par maara. *Karma-Rekha* jali. Har vasna, har ichha ek chakravyuh mein bandh gayi. Tula ne dhadakna shuru kiya, har baar ek karm ka hisaab diya jaa raha tha. Grah ki dhadkan vapas aane lagi.

Greed ne aankhen phaad kar dekha. “Main is grah ka malik hoon!”

Dharma ne shant swar mein kaha, “Tu is grah ka chor hai.”

Greed ab aur bhi vikaari roop mein badalne laga. Uske haath bade hone lage. Har haath mein ab ek devta ki chhavi thi usne un devtaon se chura liya tha: ek ki buddhi, doosre ka shastra, teesre ka vak. Woh ab sab kuch chaahta tha sab kuch khud ke liye.

Usne *Vikriti-Maya* chhodi. Ek jaal jisme Dharma ki tula hilne lagi. Satya aur jhooth ki seema dhundhli hone lagi. Sab kuch Greed ke anukul ban raha tha. Hawayein bolne lagi, “Lelo. Rakho. Sab tumhara hai.”

Par Dharma ne aankhen band ki. Usne ek mantra ucharit kiya *Satya-Drishti*. Uske dand se ek roshni nikli, jisme har chhupi maya jal gayi. Tula ne vishesh roop liya ab usme sirf karm dikhai dene lage.

“Greed,” Dharma garja, “Tu badhta hai, lekin kabhi bharta nahi. Tu khaali hai, aur is khaali pan ka bhaar ab grah sambhal nahi sakta.”

Greed ne antim prahar kiya *Samudra-Spandan*. Usne samay, gyaan, prem, sab kuch churaane ki koshish ki. Yeh uska antim lobh tha anant banne ka lobh. Har roshni usmein ghusne lagi, sab kuch khaatam hone laga.

Lekin Dharma ne apna dand aakaash ki taraf uthaya. Ek *Nyay-Purush* ka roop bana anek yugon ki gyaan se bhara hua. Usne Tula se ek teer banaya *Nirnay-Baan*. Us baan mein har tyag, har satya, har antim gyaan tha jo vishv ne kabhi diya.

Baan chhoda gaya. Aur woh seedha Greed ke vakshasthal mein laga. Sunehra roop phat gaya. Heere-tamgein mitti ban gaye. Greed cheekha ek aisi cheekh jisme laalach ne haar maan li.

“Main... aur... chahta... tha…”

Dharma ne aankhen jhukaayi. “Isi ne tujhe shunya banaya.”

Greed vilin ho gaya. Grah ne saans li. Rait phir se zameen bani. Dhan, vasna, ichha sab apni maryada mein laut aaye. Dharma ne apni tula uthayi. Ab woh seedhi thi. Samta wapas aa chuki thi.

Jaha har taraf achhayi ki jit ho rahi thi toh wahi dusri taraf Rakh se bhare is shant grah par koi zindagi nahi thi. Sannata itna gehra ke saans bhi ghoonjti thi. Aur phir... **Lust** aayi. Uske kadam padte hi, zameen par gulab ugne lagelekin inmein khoon tha, sugandh mein zehar tha.

Hawa mein uski *saansein thi*, har ek ang chhalakta huasharir ek sapna, aankhon mein vish. Uski hansi mein andhera tha, aur har kadam ek nasha. **Lust ke shabdon mein jadoo tha.**

"Aayiye, God of love... dekhte hain tumhara pavitra prem kitna tikta hai mere vasna ke samundar mein."

**God of love** ne aankhen band ki, ek prarthana jaisi shanti uske charo taraf thi. **White crystalline wings** uske peechhe chamak rahi thi. Pyaar uske liye mohabbat tha, nafrat mein bhi samarpan. Uski roshni ne Lust ke gulabon ko sukhaya, uski aura ne mirage tod diye.

Lust ne pehla vaar kiya**pheromone mist** chhodi, jisme har yaad, har ichha ghul gayi. Mohabbat ki jhoothi tasveerein, sharir ki bhookh, unsaid desires.

God of love aage badhaek *shabd*, “**Satya**”, aur poora illusion chhink gaya. Lust cheekhi, lekin uski aawaz mein ab chhed-chhad nahi thi, *ghussa tha.*

“Tumne mere sapno ko todo!”

“Woh sapne the hi jhoothe,” God of love bola, **aankhen kholte hi**, Lust ne apna asli roop dekhaek gandi, kalpnik sharir, joh khud mein hi bhookhi thi.

Tab Lust phooti**tendrils nikle**, *heart-shaped whips* bane, har ek pyar ko vash mein karne ki koshish. Usne God of love par vaar kiya, *ek hazaar illusions*, *ek laakh vaasnaayein.*

Lekin God of love ne apne **light shield** faila diye. Har vaar, har touch, **burn** ho gaya.

**Roshni aur andhera takraaye.**

**White aur Scarlet collide hue.**

Rakh ke tufaan uthe, purane devtaon ki cheekh sunayi di, planet ki zameen crack ho gayi. **Lust ne ant mein apna “Desire Core” khola**ek beating, blood-soaked heart. “Isse chhoo lo... aur tum bhi mere ban jaoge.”

God of love ne haath badhaya. Phir... haath kheench liya.

“Prem mein samarpan hota hai... lekin vasna mein sirf khudgarzi.”

Ek **beam of pure devotion** uske seene se nikli. Woh beam seedha us heart se takraayi.

Explosion. Rakt ke phool ud gaye. **Planet ke gumbad pe white light chhaa gayi.**

Lust ne girte hue kaha

“Tum jeet gaye, lekin main har jagah hoon... har dil mein ek chhoti si jagah meri bhi hai…”

God of love ne aankhen band ki. “Ho sakta hai. Lekin main bhi har jagah hoon aur main kabhi jhukta nahi.”

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Aaj ke liye itna hi

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Nice update....
 
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Update 140

Ek sunsaan, murda planet par jahan na hawa chalti thi, na roshni bachi thi do shaktiyaan takraayi. Ek bhookh se phula hua paapi dev, doosra ek shaant aur sadhak devta.

**Gluttony** aaya jaise koi shraap. Ek vikaral titan jiska sharir hamesha badal raha tha, maans aur sone ki chaadar mein lapeta hua. Uske seene mein ek kala vortex tha ek aisi bhookh jo kabhi khatam nahi hoti thi. Har kadam par zameen sad jaati thi, peedhiyan chhil jaati thi, aur aasmaan laal sharab ki tarah tapakne lagta tha. Bhookh se pagal prani mitti se nikal aaye, uske peechhe bhag rahe the kuchh aur khaane ke liye. Gluttony garja:

**"Sab kuch nigal loonga!"**

Aur tab aaya **Kaelus** ek halki si saans ke jaise. Ek lambaa, shaant roop, safed chaadar mein lipta hua. Uske kadam zameen ko chhoote nahi the woh ghoomta tha jaise koi sapna. Jahan woh chala, vahaan sab kuchh shaant ho gaya. Sadi hui bhojan, sharab, bhatakti aatmaayein sabh kuchh dhool ban gaya. Ek shwet surya uske upar chamakne laga jalta nahi, lekin pavitra karta tha.

Gluttony haansa, uske daant ke beech se laal laar tapakti thi:

**"Tu mere bhoj mein bhookha aaya hai?"**

Kaelus chup raha. Uski aankhen band thi. Sir ke upar jo chakrakar mukut tha, woh ek baar ghooma aur samay ruk gaya.

Gluttony jhapaata uski chhe badi panje waqt aur space ko cheerne lage. Bhojan ka toofan aaya sharab acid ban gayi, rotiyon mein keede pad gaye.

**"Sab kuch nigal jaaunga!"**

Kaelus ne ek haath uthaya.

**Shaanti chh gayi.**

Sab kuch ruk gaya.

Bhookh ke roop mein aayi aandhi hawa mein ud gayi.

Jo atmaayein Gluttony ne nigli thi, woh chillane lagi unki cheekh bhookh nahi, satya thi. Kaelus ne unhe jagaya tha. Ek pal ke liye, unhone mehsoos kiya ki kya bhool hui. Gluttony unki cheekhon se kaapne laga.

Kaelus aage badha. Dheere, lekin nirnayak. Jahan kadam rakha, bhojan ki pahaadiyaan ret ban gayi. Zameen safed marble mein badli, jismein mandala aur sacred geometry bani thi.

Gluttony ne puri takat laga di. Usne pahaad ko toda, tarein nigli, aur aakash phaad diya.

**"TU MUJHE ROK NHI SAKTA! MAIN BHUKH HOON!"**

Kaelus ne aankhen kholi.

Do shant sitare chamke jismein jagat ka satya tha.

Aur Gluttony khud ko andhere mein paaya. Akela. Na bhojan, na laar, na awaaz. Sirf ek taraju uske samne tha jismein uski har paapi atma ka wajan tha.

Woh har bite mehsoos kar raha tha. Har cheekh. Har bhool.

Kaelus ne kadam badhaya haath mein danda, aankhon mein shaanti.

**"Discipline mana karna nahi hai... woh yaad dilana hai ki tu kya ban sakta tha."**

Gluttony ghutne par gir gaya. Uski bhookh usi ko nigalne lagi. Haath sona ban kar pigalne lage, sharir sad gaya. Feast palat gaya.

Kaelus ne haath uthaya ek shwet roshni uske haath se nikli aur Gluttony ke seene mein ghus gayi.

Na dhamaaka hua. Na cheekh.

Sirf ek shaanti.

Gluttony dhool mein badal gaya.

Aur Kaelus akela khada raha. Tarazu sahi tha. Bhoj samapt hua.

Sookha, mar chuka ek grah tha jiska har ang Greed ki bhookh ne chaat liya tha. Pahaad sona ban gaye the, nadiyaan heereon mein badal chuki thi, aur hawa mein bhi zahrili chamak thi. Yahaan tha woh **Greed**, chhe haathon wala sunehra rakshas, aankhon mein kabhi na bharti bhookh, gale mein laal ruby ka haar, har haath mein ek chheen li gayi vastu. Uska mukh ek muskaan nahi, ek bhayankar gufa thi, jo har vastu ko nigalne ko tayyar thi.

Aur waha utar aaya **Dharma**, safaid aur sone ke vastra mein, haathon mein ek *Tula* (scale) aur ek *Sankalp-Dand* (staff). Uski aankhon mein na gussa tha, na daya. Sirf santulan.

“Tu rukne aaya hai?” Greed ki hansi grah ke andar tak goonj gayi. “Main chahta hoon. Aur chahta hoon. Aur main sab le sakta hoon.”

Dharma ne tula uthai. Us par Greed ki aatma ka wazan rakha gaya aur turaant ek taraf jhuk gayi, tootne ke kareeb. “Tera bhaar asahya hai,” Dharma bola. “Aur main is vishv mein samanta wapas laane aaya hoon.”

Greed ne pehla vaar kiya *Akhand Bhookh*. Har vastu, har prana uski taraf kheenchne laga. Yeh sirf dhan ki lalach nahi thi, yeh aatma ki lalach thi. Sookhe ped, ret, purani yaadein sab Greed mein samaane lage.

Lekin Dharma ne apna dand zameen par maara. *Karma-Rekha* jali. Har vasna, har ichha ek chakravyuh mein bandh gayi. Tula ne dhadakna shuru kiya, har baar ek karm ka hisaab diya jaa raha tha. Grah ki dhadkan vapas aane lagi.

Greed ne aankhen phaad kar dekha. “Main is grah ka malik hoon!”

Dharma ne shant swar mein kaha, “Tu is grah ka chor hai.”

Greed ab aur bhi vikaari roop mein badalne laga. Uske haath bade hone lage. Har haath mein ab ek devta ki chhavi thi usne un devtaon se chura liya tha: ek ki buddhi, doosre ka shastra, teesre ka vak. Woh ab sab kuch chaahta tha sab kuch khud ke liye.

Usne *Vikriti-Maya* chhodi. Ek jaal jisme Dharma ki tula hilne lagi. Satya aur jhooth ki seema dhundhli hone lagi. Sab kuch Greed ke anukul ban raha tha. Hawayein bolne lagi, “Lelo. Rakho. Sab tumhara hai.”

Par Dharma ne aankhen band ki. Usne ek mantra ucharit kiya *Satya-Drishti*. Uske dand se ek roshni nikli, jisme har chhupi maya jal gayi. Tula ne vishesh roop liya ab usme sirf karm dikhai dene lage.

“Greed,” Dharma garja, “Tu badhta hai, lekin kabhi bharta nahi. Tu khaali hai, aur is khaali pan ka bhaar ab grah sambhal nahi sakta.”

Greed ne antim prahar kiya *Samudra-Spandan*. Usne samay, gyaan, prem, sab kuch churaane ki koshish ki. Yeh uska antim lobh tha anant banne ka lobh. Har roshni usmein ghusne lagi, sab kuch khaatam hone laga.

Lekin Dharma ne apna dand aakaash ki taraf uthaya. Ek *Nyay-Purush* ka roop bana anek yugon ki gyaan se bhara hua. Usne Tula se ek teer banaya *Nirnay-Baan*. Us baan mein har tyag, har satya, har antim gyaan tha jo vishv ne kabhi diya.

Baan chhoda gaya. Aur woh seedha Greed ke vakshasthal mein laga. Sunehra roop phat gaya. Heere-tamgein mitti ban gaye. Greed cheekha ek aisi cheekh jisme laalach ne haar maan li.

“Main... aur... chahta... tha…”

Dharma ne aankhen jhukaayi. “Isi ne tujhe shunya banaya.”

Greed vilin ho gaya. Grah ne saans li. Rait phir se zameen bani. Dhan, vasna, ichha sab apni maryada mein laut aaye. Dharma ne apni tula uthayi. Ab woh seedhi thi. Samta wapas aa chuki thi.

Jaha har taraf achhayi ki jit ho rahi thi toh wahi dusri taraf Rakh se bhare is shant grah par koi zindagi nahi thi. Sannata itna gehra ke saans bhi ghoonjti thi. Aur phir... **Lust** aayi. Uske kadam padte hi, zameen par gulab ugne lagelekin inmein khoon tha, sugandh mein zehar tha.

Hawa mein uski *saansein thi*, har ek ang chhalakta huasharir ek sapna, aankhon mein vish. Uski hansi mein andhera tha, aur har kadam ek nasha. **Lust ke shabdon mein jadoo tha.**

"Aayiye, God of love... dekhte hain tumhara pavitra prem kitna tikta hai mere vasna ke samundar mein."

**God of love** ne aankhen band ki, ek prarthana jaisi shanti uske charo taraf thi. **White crystalline wings** uske peechhe chamak rahi thi. Pyaar uske liye mohabbat tha, nafrat mein bhi samarpan. Uski roshni ne Lust ke gulabon ko sukhaya, uski aura ne mirage tod diye.

Lust ne pehla vaar kiya**pheromone mist** chhodi, jisme har yaad, har ichha ghul gayi. Mohabbat ki jhoothi tasveerein, sharir ki bhookh, unsaid desires.

God of love aage badhaek *shabd*, “**Satya**”, aur poora illusion chhink gaya. Lust cheekhi, lekin uski aawaz mein ab chhed-chhad nahi thi, *ghussa tha.*

“Tumne mere sapno ko todo!”

“Woh sapne the hi jhoothe,” God of love bola, **aankhen kholte hi**, Lust ne apna asli roop dekhaek gandi, kalpnik sharir, joh khud mein hi bhookhi thi.

Tab Lust phooti**tendrils nikle**, *heart-shaped whips* bane, har ek pyar ko vash mein karne ki koshish. Usne God of love par vaar kiya, *ek hazaar illusions*, *ek laakh vaasnaayein.*

Lekin God of love ne apne **light shield** faila diye. Har vaar, har touch, **burn** ho gaya.

**Roshni aur andhera takraaye.**

**White aur Scarlet collide hue.**

Rakh ke tufaan uthe, purane devtaon ki cheekh sunayi di, planet ki zameen crack ho gayi. **Lust ne ant mein apna “Desire Core” khola**ek beating, blood-soaked heart. “Isse chhoo lo... aur tum bhi mere ban jaoge.”

God of love ne haath badhaya. Phir... haath kheench liya.

“Prem mein samarpan hota hai... lekin vasna mein sirf khudgarzi.”

Ek **beam of pure devotion** uske seene se nikli. Woh beam seedha us heart se takraayi.

Explosion. Rakt ke phool ud gaye. **Planet ke gumbad pe white light chhaa gayi.**

Lust ne girte hue kaha

“Tum jeet gaye, lekin main har jagah hoon... har dil mein ek chhoti si jagah meri bhi hai…”

God of love ne aankhen band ki. “Ho sakta hai. Lekin main bhi har jagah hoon aur main kabhi jhukta nahi.”

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Aag, paani, hawa aur dharti par vijay prapt karne ke baad, ab main antim chunauti ke samne khada thaaakash ka rakshas. Dusre rakshason ke mukable, jo shakti aur tatvon par adharit ladayi ladte the, isne ek alag tareeka apnaya. Yeh shakti ki nahi, buddhi ki pareeksha lene wala tha.

Mujhe ek prachin mandir ke samne pahunchne ka anubhav hua. Uske deewaron par ajeeb se chinhan bane the jo jaise hi main palat kar dekhta, badal jaate. Ek vishal pathar ka dwar mere samne tha, jis par ek anjaani bhasha likhi thi. Jaise hi main aage badha, ek akar mere samne prakat huaek uncha, hooded shaks jiska chehra ek shunyata jaisa tha. Uski poshak aise chamak rahi thi jaise pura brahmand usme sama gaya ho. Uski awaaz mere mann me gunj rahi thi, jaise shabdon ki koi zarurat hi na ho.

"Main Aether hoon, aakash ka swami. Tumne sharirik roop se jeet hasil kar li hai, par shunyata ke kshetra ko sirf bal se nahi jeeta ja sakta. Agar tum meri shakti chahte ho, toh tumhe astitva ki bhoolbhulaiya se guzarna hoga aur yeh sabit karna hoga ki tumhari buddhi is layak hai."

Usne haath ghumaya aur mandir ka dwar khul gaya. Samne ek aisi surang thi jo ghumti-mudti hui anant dikh rahi thi. Jaise hi main bhitar pravesh kiya, sab kuch badal gaya.


Shifting Maze: Bhoolbhulaiya ka Khel

Mere charo taraf ka farsh gayab ho gaya. Main shunyata me mandrane laga, jahan anek dwar thekuchh sacche, kuch jhoothe. Jab bhi main kisi ek disha me badhta, pura parivesh ghoom jata, jaise maine doori aur gurutvakarshan ka gyan kho diya ho.

Main ne ek gehri saans li, Shika ki seekh yaad ki. Mujhe sirf dekhna aur chhoona nahi, mehsoos karna hoga. Maine apni aankhein band ki aur apne bhaavnao se dishaon ka ehsaas kiya. Jab maine aankhein kholi, sirf ek rasta bacha tha, baki sab shunyata me vilin ho gaye the.

Jaise hi main aage badha, maze fir badalne laga. Iss baar, main ek aise gali me tha jisme har taraf aaine lage the. Mera pratibimb mujhe dekh raha tha, par phir, achanak, woh sab zinda ho gaye. Mere aas paas mere hazaron pratibimb khade ho gaye, har ek mera har ek action imitate kar raha tha.

Ek awaaz gunji:

"Sirf asli astitva hi aage ja sakta hai. Baki sab shunyata me sama jayenge."

Main jaanta tha ki shakti ka prayog bekaar hoga. Mujhe asli roop pehchanna tha. Maine gaur se dekhaek pratibimb me halki si deri thi, ek chhoti si chook. Wahi asli main tha. Bina kisi jhijhak ke, maine us pratibimb ki taraf kadam badhaya, aur baaki sare tukde-tukde ho gaye. Agla rasta prakat ho gaya.


Pehli chunauti: Dwaar ka Dhokha

Main ek kaksh me pahucha jisme do dwar the, har ek dwar ke samne ek pathar ka pratikriti thaek ke haath me talwar thi, doosre ke haath me ek danda.

Deewar par ek shabd likha tha:

"Ek dwar agle kadam tak le jaayega, doosra shunyata me sama dega. Ek rakshak sada jhoot bolta hai, doosra sada sach. Tum sirf ek prashn pooch sakte ho."

Mujhe turant samajh aa gaya. Yeh ek purani paheli thi. Maine ek rakshak se poochha, "Agar main doosre rakshak se puchhta ki kaunsa dwar surakshit hai, toh woh kis dwar ki taraf ishaara karega?"

Rakshak ne baayen dwar ki taraf ishaara kiya. Matlab sachcha dwar daayen taraf tha. Bina kisi shanka ke, main us dwar se aage badh gaya.


Doosri chunauti: Anant Seedhiyan

Main ek ghoomti seedhi ke neeche khada tha jo asman tak jati dikh rahi thi. Main chadha aur chadhata rahapar kuch ghanton ke baad, main fir wahi tha jahan se shuru kiya tha.

Aether ki awaaz gunji:

"Rasta hamesha upar nahi hota."

Mujhe samajh aa gayayeh ek chakravyuh tha, ek bhram. Seedhi bekaar thi. Maine upar jaane ke bajaye ek kadam neeche rakha aur hawa me khada ho gaya. Seedhiyan gaayab ho gayi aur ek naya dwar prakat ho gaya.


Antim chunauti: Brahmand ka Tola

Antim kaksh me ek vishal tarazu rakha tha. Ek taraf ek kaala gola tha, doosri taraf anek chhoti-chhoti safed goliyan. Aether ki awaaz fir se gunji:

"Tarazu santulit karo, par dhyaan rahe: Ek ka wajan sabke barabar hai."

Mujhe samajh nahi aya. Kaise ek vastu ka wajan hazaron chhoti vastuon ke barabar ho sakta hai? Phir mujhe samajh aayawoh ek gola ek singularity thi, ek anant bhaar ek bindu me simta hua.

Maine tarazu ko dekha aur ek hi tareeka dikhai diya. Maine apni ungli se safed goliyon ki upasthiti ko mitane ki soch ki. Jaise hi maine yeh socha, goliyan gayab ho gayi aur tarazu santulit ho gaya.

Aether fir prakat hua.

"Tumne dekh liya ki vastavikta sirf wahi nahi hoti jo dikhai deti hai. Tum samajh gaye ho ki niyam todne ke liye unka gyaan hona zaroori hai. Tum yogya ho."

Usne apna haath badhaya. Ek tej safed prakash mujhe gherne laga aur ek aisi shakti ka ehsaas hua jo shabdon se pare thi. Shunyata, aakash, samaysab kuch mere andar sama gaya.

Paanch tatvaagni, pani, vayu, prithvi, aur aakash ab mere the. Antim pareeksha poori ho gayi thi.

Main tayar tha ab jo bhi samne aaye abhi me apne sharir me aayi is asimit urja aur panchguni shakti ko mahsoos kar raha tha ki tabhi dheere dheere meri aankhe band hone lagi mujhe aise lag raha tha ki jaise koi mujhe apne taraf khinch raha ho lekin woh mujhe balki meri aatma ko khinch raha tha

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Bahot badhiya shaandar update
Tow Viraj ne saari Shakti hasil Karli
Panchguni Shakti
Ab dekhte h Kon kheech Raha h
 
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Abhi me apne sharir me aayi is asimit urja aur panchguni shakti ko mahsoos kar raha tha ki tabhi dheere dheere meri aankhe band hone lagi mujhe aise lag raha tha ki jaise koi mujhe apne taraf khinch raha ho lekin woh mujhe balki meri aatma ko khinch raha tha aur jab mene apni aakhe kholi to me Kisi bahut hi ajib jagah par tha aisi jagah jaha aas pass toh kya door door tak bilkul sannata jamin par ajib sa dhua faila hua tha sar ke uper na koi chat aur na hi koi diwaar aisa lag raha tha jaise me dhue se bhare maidaan me khada hu aur abhi me apne pairon par khada hone ka try kar raha tha ki tabhi mere kano me ek aadmi ki aawaj aane lagi aur jab mene us taraf dekha toh waha pahle se hi god of light maujood the aur unke sath aur bhi 4 aadmi maujood the jinme god of death bhi the

"Toh veer kaisa lag raha hai anant urja astra aur panchguni shakti ko mahsoos karke" God of light ne mere taraf badhte hue

Jab woh mere saamne aaya toh mene use ek saumya muskaan dete hue kaha"Bahut achha mahsoos kar raha hu waise aapne mujhe yaha aise achanak kyu bulaya

"Bas ye dekhne ke liye ki kahi tum taakato ke sath aane wali jimmedariyo se parichit karane aaye hai" God of death ne apne jagah par khade rahte hue hi mere sawal ka jawab diya

"Kya matlab hai aapka" mene pucha

God of death ne shanti se jawab diya"Dheeraj rakho jald hi sab samajh jaoge sabse pahle tumhe kuch jaroori baate jaanna jaroori hai " achanak gambhir hote hue"jinme tumhari pichli yaade bhi maujood hai"

Jiske baad gos of death ne mujhe ek ek karke sari baate batana shuru kar diya (refer update 100) jise me pahle toh dhyan aur gambhirta se sun raha tha lekin jaise jaise mujhe shaitaan ki yojna aur uske dwara kiye gaye sare dushkarmon ka jaankar mere dimag me achanak se atyant pida janam lene lagi mere andar ki panchguni shaktiyon me achanak tufaan uthne laga khaaskar krodh ke gun yane agni shakti me mera sharir halka halka lal padne laga pasina lava me badalne laga aur jald hi mera sharir aag ki lapton me badal gaya

"SHAITAAN KO MAAR DALO USKE ASTITVA KO MITA DALO" Puri kahani sunne ke baad aakhiri shabd jo mere dimaag me aa rahe the

Abhi me is bhayanak agni aur krodh ke tufan me julas raha tha ki tabhi achanak se mere andar ki aag shant hone lagi ya ise aise bhi samajh sakte hai ki mere andar ka jal tatva ne turant hi Agni tatva ke saath balance ban taha tha aur jab mene shant hua toh mene dekha ki god of death ke piche khade 3no aadmiyon me se 1 aadmi apna hath mere taraf kiye khada tha jismese ek ajib safed roshni nikal rahi thi aur sabse ajib baat us Roshani se bhi mujhe waise hi bhav mil rahe the jaise abhi mujhe mere andar mahsoos ho rahe the bilkul santulit

"Aao me tumahari mulakat karvata hoo " god of death ne mujhe us aadmi ke taraf ghoorte hue pakar kaha "ye hai god of balance Dharma" usi ajib Roshani wale Aadmi ka parichay karate hue kaha "aur uske daye taraf hai god of discipline Kaelus hai aur bayi taraf he god of love" baki dono ka parichay karane ke baad god of death ek gahan soch me dub gaye aur jab unhone apni aakhe kholi toh unke aankhon me chinta aur dar ka bhav saaf dekha ja sakta tha

"Kya baat hai mrutyu aap itne bhaybhit aur chintit kyun ho" god of balance ne uske pass aate hue pucha

"SHAITAAN anant sadhna ka istemal kar raha hai aur usne sapt papon ko jagrit karte hi ek bridge banane bhej diya jo saaton lokon ko jodega" ye sab kahte hue god of death ke chehre par chinta badhti ja rahi thi lekin phir bhi unhone khudko kabu karte hue kaha "aur anant sadhna ke kaaran usne jo kaam 1 varsh me hone wala tha use samay se pahle pura kar liya hai aur woh kisi bhi kshan dharti lok se apne manjil samadhi lok ke liye nikal sakta hai"

"Thik hai phir use hum raste me hi khatam kar denge" mene utsukta aur josh se kaha

"Nahi woh akela nahi hai saton paap aur raj uske saath hai use maarne se pahle hume unse nipatna hoga pahle humari yojna thi ki tum saton paap ko apne hathon se maro take tum unki shakti apne andar sama pao lekin qb durbhagya se humare pass utna samay nahi hai" god of discipline ne sachhai se avgat karvate hue kaha

"Thik hai phir is yuddh me hum bhi utrenge devta aur shaitanon oe bich ab ek antim yuddh ka samay aa gaya hai hum sabhi jald se jald papon ka nash karenge aur viraj tum jaoge dharti lok shaitaan aur raj se nipatne" god of balance ne yojna me aaye badlaw ko samjhte hue kaha

"Thik hai" sabne ek saath sahamti jatayi

"Viraj is yuddh me tumhe divya aur shaitani dono shaktiyon me santulan ki jarurat hai aur isiliye ab samay aa gaya hai jab tum woh santulan prapt karo" god of balance ne mere sharir me ek naye urja ko pravahit karte hue mujhe jaankari di

Jaise jaise shaitaani shaktiyon ki jankari mere dimag me aayi waise hi badalon ke bich se ek chain blade mere hath me aa gayi jo shaitaani shaktiyon ka pratik tha jaise anant urja astra achayi ka pratik tha aur apni nayi shaktiyon ko mahsoos karte hi me apne lakshya ke taraf badh gaya aur mere baad sare devta bhi ek ek karke apne lakshya ke taraf badh Gaye.

(Abhi aage ke saare fights parallel honge sare ek hi samay par alag alag jagahon par mukabla karenge ab dekhna hai ki kiske bhagya me kon aata hai

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Shaitan tow bahot ziada takatwar ho gaya h
Dekhte h Kon Jeet ta h
Badhiya shaandar update
 
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Very nice update specially fight between Lust n Love. Sahi kaha hai pyaar kabhi jhukta nahi aur jhuk jaye woh wasna hoti hai pyaar nahi.
 
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Ek grah tha jahan kabhi prakash tha, jeevan tha, sapne the. Ab bas ashesh bacha tha. Dharti jali hui, aakash soona, aur hawa mein sirf ek yaad samay ke paap ki. Wahi pe utara **Ujjwal**, god of light, jiska roop na andhkar mein chhup sakta tha, na jhooth mein lapeta ja sakta tha. Uski aatma mein satya tha, uske kadam mein aasha. Uska aana hi shuruat thi ek ant ki.

Lekin usse rokne aayi **Irshya**, ek jalta hua rog, ek chhipta hua zeher. Na uska roop tha, na seema. Har shabd mein jalan, har spandan mein ashaanti. Irshya paap nahi tha, wo har wo dard tha jo doosre ke sukh se paida hota hai. Uski aankhon mein kabhi ujjwal ki chhavi thi, lekin ab un aankhon mein sirf vinasht bhavna thi “Mujhe jo nahi mila, main kisi ko bhi nahi milne dungi.”

Irshya ne dharti ko jakkar liya. Ashesh mitti mein hara vish fail gaya. Uske haathon mein tha *Tama-Kaansh*, ek andhkaar ka astra jo roshni ko kha jaata tha. Usne pehla vaar kiya *Samaan-Vikranti*, ek aghor mantra jo har roshan cheez ko jhoothi pratibimb mein badal deta tha. Ujjwal ke saath chhedchaad shuru ho gayi. Uske chehre mein Irshya usi ka nakli roop ghusaane laga ek roop jo dikhata tha uski khudgarzi, uska ghamand, uski chhupi durbaltaayein.

Ujjwal ne aankhen band ki. Usne apne hriday se ek jwala uthai *Tej-Kiran*, ek shuddh prakash jo roop nahi, aatma tak pahuchta tha. Jaise hi wo kiran vistrit hui, Irshya ke dhokhe jale. Grah par chhayi kali roshni chhilne lagi.

Irshya cheekhi “Tera prakash sab kuch kyon chhoo sakta hai? Mujhe kyon nahi mila tera samaan maan? Main bhi kabhi ujala thi... lekin tujhe sab mil gaya, aur mujhe sirf andhera.”

Prakash ka devta nahi hila. Usne Irshya ke aankhon mein dekha, aur us roshni mein Irshya ko uska purana roop dikha ek devi, ek chamak, ek aradhna, jo samay ke sath doosron se tulna karte karte apne astitva se gir gayi thi.

Irshya aur bhadki. Usne *Jalan-Dhavani* chhoda ek aisi dhwani jo roshni ke vibhaag ko todti thi. Pura grah kampne laga. Ujjwal ka roop chhota hone laga, uske aage andhera badhne laga.

Lekin Ujjwal ne apni asli shakti jagayi *Satyotkarsh*. Ek jwala jisme daya thi, bal tha, aur tyag tha. Usne apne haathon se *Prakash-Setu* banaya, jo nafrat ke saagar ko paar karta tha. Irshya ne us setu ko todne ki koshish ki, lekin wo setu jalan se nahi bana tha wo satya se bana tha.

Ujjwal ne Irshya ke kareeb jaakar us par *Vimukti-Tej* barsaya. Na talwar thi, na agni. Sirf ek roshni thi jo aatma ke andar tak jaati thi. Irshya cheekhi, lekin nafrat nahi, dard se. Us roshni mein usne apna asli roop dekha ek tapasvini devi jo galat disha mein chali gayi thi.

Lekin usne haar nahi maani. Usne antim vaar kiya *Aatma-Bhranti*, jisme usne khud ko Ujjwal mein badal diya. Har disha mein do prakash roop ladh rahe the ek sachcha, ek jhootha. Grah ka aabhaas hi tootta. Surya chhil gaya, aakash fut gaya. Lekin Ujjwal ne aankhon mein aansoon ke saath ek mantra kaha “Jhooth kabhi sach ko chhoo nahi sakta, chahe wo uska saaya kyun na ban jaaye.”

Aur phir, ek antim tej *Swa-Roopaagni*. Ujjwal ne apna prakash is kadar failaya ki poora grah ek aag ban gaya. Us mein sirf sach zinda raha. Irshya jali, aur jali dard ke saath, yaadon ke saath, chah ke saath. Uska roop chhil gaya, aur ant mein sirf ek raakh bachi.

Irshya ke marte hi ujjwal ne aage badhkar grah ko check kiya jisse use ye pata chal gaya ki shaitan pahle hi apne yoina ke aur agarasar ho chuka hai jo jaanne ke baad woh turant apne sathiyon ke pass nikal pada isbaat ki suchna dene

Toh wahi dusri taraf Shunya-Grah. Ek mrityu se bhara hua grah jahan koi gati nahi thi, koi awaaz nahi thi. Bas viran dhool, sookhe pahad aur ek thehraav jaise samay khud ruk gaya ho. Yahi tha Sloth ka rajya. Aalas ka devta. Uski saans bhi dheemi thi, lekin uski taqat... aalas mein chhupi sabse khatarnak maut thi.

Wahi aaya **Mrityu-Dev**, the God of Death. Kaala chola, aankhon mein andhkaar ka saagar, haathon mein *Antya-Kal*, ek khaali darpan jisme jeevan dikhai deta aur phir mitt jaata.

Uski aagman se grah mein ek lehar chali, lekin Sloth ne hilne ki bhi takleef nahi ki.

Sloth zameen par phela tha, jaise koi sadiyon se so raha ho. Uski aankhon mein sukoon nahi, thakaan thi. Bina ladai ke haar jaane ka comfort. Har saans mein chhupa tha ek mantra "Kya fayda?"

"Uth," Mrityu-Dev ki aawaaz pathar bhi chhaani deti, "Tere jeevit hone ka waqt khatam ho gaya."

Sloth ne muskurate hue aankh kholi. "Ladkar kya milega? Main to rukne ka devta hoon. Tu rok nahi sakta, kyunki main gati ke virodh mein hoon."

Mrityu-Dev aage badha. Har kadam se mitti udi, grah ka bhav badalne laga. Lekin Sloth ne apni shakti jagayi *Thaharav-Kshetra*. Ek gola, ek kshetra jisme sab kuch dheema ho jata hai. Hawayein, soch, har ek cell.

Mrityu-Dev ke kadam bhari hone lage. Har soch, har nischay, jaise kachhue ki raftaar le chuki ho. Uska darpan bhi dhundhla gaya.

Sloth ne haath uthaya ek simple haath jisme kuch na tha, lekin usme *Tyag ki Maya* thi. Ek shakti jo jeevan ka rasta rokti thi. Usne kaha, "Aaj tu bhi thak jaayega, Mrityu. Maut bhi kabhi rukti hai."

Lekin Mrityu sirf ruka nahi, usne aankhen bandh ki. Uske andar ka *Kaal* jaag gaya. Har maut ka yaad jang ka, rog ka, dukh ka, tyag ka. Usne woh sab apne andar jagaya.

“Main rukta nahi. Main samapt karta hoon.”

Usne apna darpan uthaya *Antya-Kal*. Ab woh sirf shabd nahi, ek ghoomti maaya ban gaya. Jahan woh dekhta, jeevan apne antim mod par pahuchta.

Sloth ne *Shithilta-Vaayu* ka prahar kiya ek saans jisme gati mukt ho jaati hai. Mrityu ke aas-paas sab kuch ruk gaya. Ghadiyan, dhadkanein, shadow tak.

Par Mrityu ne us rog ko apna banaya. Usne apne andar ushi vaayu ko kheech liya. Maut mein sukoon mila Sloth ko galatfehmi thi. Mrityu mein shakti thi tyag se bhi aage.

Ek ghoomta hua chakra bana Mrityu ke haath mein *Moksha-Chakra*. Usne us chakra ko zameen mein ghuma diya. Dharti phat gayi. Sloth ke neeche se zameen doobne lagi.

“Tu rog nahi, symptoms hai. Aalas ka antim ilaaj main hoon.”

Sloth ab uth chuka tha. Uska shav roop ab sakriya tha. Aankhon mein andhkaar ka dard. Usne antim vaar kiya *Vimukti-Pash*. Ek loop jahan koi kuch nahi karta, bas rota hai aur rukta hai.

Mrityu ne us pash ko todo diya. Usne darpan Sloth ke saamne laaya. Usme Sloth ne apna antim roop dekha ek khaali, vikal, vyarth devta. Aur us roop ko dekhte hi Sloth ka roop jhurna laga. Jaise dhool ka putla hawa mein bikhar raha ho.

Aakhri shabd Sloth ke, “Mujhe sona tha…”

Mrityu ne jawab diya, “Aur main tere sapno ka antim mod hoon.”

Sloth vilin ho gaya. Grah ka thehraav tod gaya. Mrityu ne kadam modha, aur ant ki taraf badh gaya aur jab woh aage badhkar grah ki jaanch karne wala tha ki tabhi waha god of love aa gaya jisne use sabse pahle apne jit khush khabar di aur saath me hi shaitaan ke aage nikal jane ke baare me bhi bataya jiske baad woh dono turant apne sathiyon ke madad karne ke liye nikal pade

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Ek sunsaan, murda planet par jahan na hawa chalti thi, na roshni bachi thi do shaktiyaan takraayi. Ek bhookh se phula hua paapi dev, doosra ek shaant aur sadhak devta.

**Gluttony** aaya jaise koi shraap. Ek vikaral titan jiska sharir hamesha badal raha tha, maans aur sone ki chaadar mein lapeta hua. Uske seene mein ek kala vortex tha ek aisi bhookh jo kabhi khatam nahi hoti thi. Har kadam par zameen sad jaati thi, peedhiyan chhil jaati thi, aur aasmaan laal sharab ki tarah tapakne lagta tha. Bhookh se pagal prani mitti se nikal aaye, uske peechhe bhag rahe the kuchh aur khaane ke liye. Gluttony garja:

**"Sab kuch nigal loonga!"**

Aur tab aaya **Kaelus** ek halki si saans ke jaise. Ek lambaa, shaant roop, safed chaadar mein lipta hua. Uske kadam zameen ko chhoote nahi the woh ghoomta tha jaise koi sapna. Jahan woh chala, vahaan sab kuchh shaant ho gaya. Sadi hui bhojan, sharab, bhatakti aatmaayein sabh kuchh dhool ban gaya. Ek shwet surya uske upar chamakne laga jalta nahi, lekin pavitra karta tha.

Gluttony haansa, uske daant ke beech se laal laar tapakti thi:

**"Tu mere bhoj mein bhookha aaya hai?"**

Kaelus chup raha. Uski aankhen band thi. Sir ke upar jo chakrakar mukut tha, woh ek baar ghooma aur samay ruk gaya.

Gluttony jhapaata uski chhe badi panje waqt aur space ko cheerne lage. Bhojan ka toofan aaya sharab acid ban gayi, rotiyon mein keede pad gaye.

**"Sab kuch nigal jaaunga!"**

Kaelus ne ek haath uthaya.

**Shaanti chh gayi.**

Sab kuch ruk gaya.

Bhookh ke roop mein aayi aandhi hawa mein ud gayi.

Jo atmaayein Gluttony ne nigli thi, woh chillane lagi unki cheekh bhookh nahi, satya thi. Kaelus ne unhe jagaya tha. Ek pal ke liye, unhone mehsoos kiya ki kya bhool hui. Gluttony unki cheekhon se kaapne laga.

Kaelus aage badha. Dheere, lekin nirnayak. Jahan kadam rakha, bhojan ki pahaadiyaan ret ban gayi. Zameen safed marble mein badli, jismein mandala aur sacred geometry bani thi.

Gluttony ne puri takat laga di. Usne pahaad ko toda, tarein nigli, aur aakash phaad diya.

**"TU MUJHE ROK NHI SAKTA! MAIN BHUKH HOON!"**

Kaelus ne aankhen kholi.

Do shant sitare chamke jismein jagat ka satya tha.

Aur Gluttony khud ko andhere mein paaya. Akela. Na bhojan, na laar, na awaaz. Sirf ek taraju uske samne tha jismein uski har paapi atma ka wajan tha.

Woh har bite mehsoos kar raha tha. Har cheekh. Har bhool.

Kaelus ne kadam badhaya haath mein danda, aankhon mein shaanti.

**"Discipline mana karna nahi hai... woh yaad dilana hai ki tu kya ban sakta tha."**

Gluttony ghutne par gir gaya. Uski bhookh usi ko nigalne lagi. Haath sona ban kar pigalne lage, sharir sad gaya. Feast palat gaya.

Kaelus ne haath uthaya ek shwet roshni uske haath se nikli aur Gluttony ke seene mein ghus gayi.

Na dhamaaka hua. Na cheekh.

Sirf ek shaanti.

Gluttony dhool mein badal gaya.

Aur Kaelus akela khada raha. Tarazu sahi tha. Bhoj samapt hua.

Sookha, mar chuka ek grah tha jiska har ang Greed ki bhookh ne chaat liya tha. Pahaad sona ban gaye the, nadiyaan heereon mein badal chuki thi, aur hawa mein bhi zahrili chamak thi. Yahaan tha woh **Greed**, chhe haathon wala sunehra rakshas, aankhon mein kabhi na bharti bhookh, gale mein laal ruby ka haar, har haath mein ek chheen li gayi vastu. Uska mukh ek muskaan nahi, ek bhayankar gufa thi, jo har vastu ko nigalne ko tayyar thi.

Aur waha utar aaya **Dharma**, safaid aur sone ke vastra mein, haathon mein ek *Tula* (scale) aur ek *Sankalp-Dand* (staff). Uski aankhon mein na gussa tha, na daya. Sirf santulan.

“Tu rukne aaya hai?” Greed ki hansi grah ke andar tak goonj gayi. “Main chahta hoon. Aur chahta hoon. Aur main sab le sakta hoon.”

Dharma ne tula uthai. Us par Greed ki aatma ka wazan rakha gaya aur turaant ek taraf jhuk gayi, tootne ke kareeb. “Tera bhaar asahya hai,” Dharma bola. “Aur main is vishv mein samanta wapas laane aaya hoon.”

Greed ne pehla vaar kiya *Akhand Bhookh*. Har vastu, har prana uski taraf kheenchne laga. Yeh sirf dhan ki lalach nahi thi, yeh aatma ki lalach thi. Sookhe ped, ret, purani yaadein sab Greed mein samaane lage.

Lekin Dharma ne apna dand zameen par maara. *Karma-Rekha* jali. Har vasna, har ichha ek chakravyuh mein bandh gayi. Tula ne dhadakna shuru kiya, har baar ek karm ka hisaab diya jaa raha tha. Grah ki dhadkan vapas aane lagi.

Greed ne aankhen phaad kar dekha. “Main is grah ka malik hoon!”

Dharma ne shant swar mein kaha, “Tu is grah ka chor hai.”

Greed ab aur bhi vikaari roop mein badalne laga. Uske haath bade hone lage. Har haath mein ab ek devta ki chhavi thi usne un devtaon se chura liya tha: ek ki buddhi, doosre ka shastra, teesre ka vak. Woh ab sab kuch chaahta tha sab kuch khud ke liye.

Usne *Vikriti-Maya* chhodi. Ek jaal jisme Dharma ki tula hilne lagi. Satya aur jhooth ki seema dhundhli hone lagi. Sab kuch Greed ke anukul ban raha tha. Hawayein bolne lagi, “Lelo. Rakho. Sab tumhara hai.”

Par Dharma ne aankhen band ki. Usne ek mantra ucharit kiya *Satya-Drishti*. Uske dand se ek roshni nikli, jisme har chhupi maya jal gayi. Tula ne vishesh roop liya ab usme sirf karm dikhai dene lage.

“Greed,” Dharma garja, “Tu badhta hai, lekin kabhi bharta nahi. Tu khaali hai, aur is khaali pan ka bhaar ab grah sambhal nahi sakta.”

Greed ne antim prahar kiya *Samudra-Spandan*. Usne samay, gyaan, prem, sab kuch churaane ki koshish ki. Yeh uska antim lobh tha anant banne ka lobh. Har roshni usmein ghusne lagi, sab kuch khaatam hone laga.

Lekin Dharma ne apna dand aakaash ki taraf uthaya. Ek *Nyay-Purush* ka roop bana anek yugon ki gyaan se bhara hua. Usne Tula se ek teer banaya *Nirnay-Baan*. Us baan mein har tyag, har satya, har antim gyaan tha jo vishv ne kabhi diya.

Baan chhoda gaya. Aur woh seedha Greed ke vakshasthal mein laga. Sunehra roop phat gaya. Heere-tamgein mitti ban gaye. Greed cheekha ek aisi cheekh jisme laalach ne haar maan li.

“Main... aur... chahta... tha…”

Dharma ne aankhen jhukaayi. “Isi ne tujhe shunya banaya.”

Greed vilin ho gaya. Grah ne saans li. Rait phir se zameen bani. Dhan, vasna, ichha sab apni maryada mein laut aaye. Dharma ne apni tula uthayi. Ab woh seedhi thi. Samta wapas aa chuki thi.

Jaha har taraf achhayi ki jit ho rahi thi toh wahi dusri taraf Rakh se bhare is shant grah par koi zindagi nahi thi. Sannata itna gehra ke saans bhi ghoonjti thi. Aur phir... **Lust** aayi. Uske kadam padte hi, zameen par gulab ugne lagelekin inmein khoon tha, sugandh mein zehar tha.

Hawa mein uski *saansein thi*, har ek ang chhalakta huasharir ek sapna, aankhon mein vish. Uski hansi mein andhera tha, aur har kadam ek nasha. **Lust ke shabdon mein jadoo tha.**

"Aayiye, God of love... dekhte hain tumhara pavitra prem kitna tikta hai mere vasna ke samundar mein."

**God of love** ne aankhen band ki, ek prarthana jaisi shanti uske charo taraf thi. **White crystalline wings** uske peechhe chamak rahi thi. Pyaar uske liye mohabbat tha, nafrat mein bhi samarpan. Uski roshni ne Lust ke gulabon ko sukhaya, uski aura ne mirage tod diye.

Lust ne pehla vaar kiya**pheromone mist** chhodi, jisme har yaad, har ichha ghul gayi. Mohabbat ki jhoothi tasveerein, sharir ki bhookh, unsaid desires.

God of love aage badhaek *shabd*, “**Satya**”, aur poora illusion chhink gaya. Lust cheekhi, lekin uski aawaz mein ab chhed-chhad nahi thi, *ghussa tha.*

“Tumne mere sapno ko todo!”

“Woh sapne the hi jhoothe,” God of love bola, **aankhen kholte hi**, Lust ne apna asli roop dekhaek gandi, kalpnik sharir, joh khud mein hi bhookhi thi.

Tab Lust phooti**tendrils nikle**, *heart-shaped whips* bane, har ek pyar ko vash mein karne ki koshish. Usne God of love par vaar kiya, *ek hazaar illusions*, *ek laakh vaasnaayein.*

Lekin God of love ne apne **light shield** faila diye. Har vaar, har touch, **burn** ho gaya.

**Roshni aur andhera takraaye.**

**White aur Scarlet collide hue.**

Rakh ke tufaan uthe, purane devtaon ki cheekh sunayi di, planet ki zameen crack ho gayi. **Lust ne ant mein apna “Desire Core” khola**ek beating, blood-soaked heart. “Isse chhoo lo... aur tum bhi mere ban jaoge.”

God of love ne haath badhaya. Phir... haath kheench liya.

“Prem mein samarpan hota hai... lekin vasna mein sirf khudgarzi.”

Ek **beam of pure devotion** uske seene se nikli. Woh beam seedha us heart se takraayi.

Explosion. Rakt ke phool ud gaye. **Planet ke gumbad pe white light chhaa gayi.**

Lust ne girte hue kaha

“Tum jeet gaye, lekin main har jagah hoon... har dil mein ek chhoti si jagah meri bhi hai…”

God of love ne aankhen band ki. “Ho sakta hai. Lekin main bhi har jagah hoon aur main kabhi jhukta nahi.”

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Kahi door, samay aur aakash ke pare, ek battlefield tha jo kisi alag planet par nahi, balki khud prithvi par tha. Lekin waha kuch aisa tha jo viraj ki yodon se alag tha wahan na din tha, na raat. Sirf ek laal roshni thi jo infinite darkness ke beech mein dhadak rahi thi. Wahi khada tha **Viraj** ek aisi entity ke roop me jismein devtaon ka prakash aur shaitanon ka andhkaar ek saath saans le raha tha.

Uska sharir ek chalti hui galaxy jaise lag raha tha har ek ang mein sitaare, har ek nadi mein prakriti aur vinash ka sangam. Uski aankhon mein prakash tha, par andhera bhi jhalak raha tha. Ek hath mein anant urja astra, jo devtaon ne banaya tha. Doosre mein chainblade, jo Narak ke aag se nikala gaya tha.

Aur jaise jaise woh Dharti lok par bane shaitaan ke mahal ke taraf badh raha tha waise hi uske sharir me krodh aur badle ki bhavna aur adhik badh rahi thi aur jab woh mahal ke karib pahuncha toh use waha 3 parchaiyan dikhayi dene lagi jo andhere se uske taraf badh rahe the aur unke aura aur unki aabha ko mahsoos karke woh itna toh samajh gaya tha ki

(Viraj abhi veer ke roop me tha isiliye raj ye nahi jaanta ki woh kaun hai )

Aaj uska saamna tha teen sabse khatarnak shaktiyon se: **Raj**, aur uske saath **Wrath** aur **Pride**. Teenon ne apni jagah le li thi. Aakash garaj raha tha, aur samay swayam ruk gaya tha.

**Raj** ek kaali si aatma jismein har paap ka saar tha. Uska roop koi nahi samajh sakta tha, kyunki har pal woh badal raha tha: kabhi ek sunder devta, kabhi ek jalta hua shaitan. Har baat, har nazar, ek chhal tha. Aur ye isi wajah se ho raha tha kyuki ab woh shaitaan ka wansaj tha usme khud shaitaan morningstar ki taakate thi aur Uske peechhe, Wrath ek jalta hua astra, ek purush jismein har rosh, har badla, har aag ka jwala tha. Aur uske samne, Pride ek rajkumar jaise, sona se bana hua, jiske paas apne hi roop ki puja thi.

"Kya baat hai aap shaitaan ke trimurti dharti lok par kya kar rahe hain kahi shaitaan ne aapko fek toh nahi diya" viraj ne ek shaitani muskaan ke saath kaha

"Chup ho ja agar yuddh karna hai to apne astra chalw na ki juban" Wrath ne gusse me chillaya

Aur isi ke sath yuddh ka pehla vaar Wrath ne kiya. Uski talwar ek aag ka toofan poore battlefield mein fail gayi. Har vaar ek planet tod sakta tha. Par Viraj ne apne chainblade se us vaar ko chir diya. Jahan Wrath gussa mein andha tha, wahin viraj apne man me mein bhavnao ke bich balance banaye rakh raha tha.

"Tum log sirf takat ho. Main niyam hoon ek wada hoon jo bete maa se aur bhai ne apni bahanon se kiya tha" viraj ne kaha.

Pride hansa. Uski hansi itni karkash thu ki usse aasmaan mein darar pad gayi. "Tum kya samjhte ho? Ki tum balance banakar jeet jaoge? Tum ek bhram ho. Hum asli shakti hain."

Pride ne apna golden trident uthaaya aur ek cosmic beam chhodi jo khud samay ke layers ko tod sakta tha. Par Viraj ne apne dono weapons ek saath ghumaye. Ek white light, doosri kaali chhaya. Beam ka impact us tak pahucha hi nahi. viraj ne ek kadam aage badhaya, aur mano jaise ki waqt hi ruk gaya ho Usne Pride ki taraf dekha.

"Tere andar sirf ahankaar hai. Par main saari sachhai hoon jo ahankaar todta hai."

Par iss dafa, raj ne haath uthaya. "Khel band karo," uska awaaz ek shraap jaisi tha. Uski aankhen pure void thi. "Main Shaitaan ka wansaj hoon. Aur Tum sirf devtain ka ek prayog ho. Main tumhare roshni ko nigal jaaunga."

Aur isi ke sath raj ke maidan me utarne se ab yudh sach mein shuru hua.

raj ne apne haathon se ek antim void banaya ek shunya jismein har cheez ghul jaati thi. viraj ne anant urja astra ghumaya, lekin blade ka ek hissa black hole mein sama gaya aur use apne andar khichne laga jiske baad viraj ne turant chainblade ko jamin mein ghusa diya jisse pure battlefield mein shakti ki lehar daud gayi. Har jagah pe shunya aur prakash takraane lage.

Toh wahi ab Wrath aur Pride bhi apne charam par the Wrath ne dharti tod di to pride ne aakash cheer diya, aur raj ne satya ko todne ki koshish ki lekin Har bar, Viraj ne ek hi kaam kiya saans li aur un tono ke hamle ki shakti ko andar liya, aur panchguni rakshason ki shaktiyin ke madad apna aur pure watawaran me balance banaye rakha lekin ye yuddh yahi nahi ruka raj pride aur wrath teenon lagataar viraj par humle karte ja rahe the

Ek samay aaya jahan lag raha tha ki ab viraj bekaboo ho raha hai. Uska sharir ab apne andar balance nahi kar pa raha hai uske usne jo apni bhavnaon ko baandh kar rakha tha woh ab aajad hone lage hai Har vaar mein uska gussa aur badle ki bhavna uske sar ke uper nach rahi thi jo use dheere dheere uske haar ke Taraf le ja rahi thi. Aur ye mahsoos karte hi usne aankhen band ki.

Aur devtaon ka mantra yaad kiya. Usne shaitanon ka gehra gyaan yaad kiya. Fir, ek aakhri baar usne dono shaktiyon ko apne hriday mein milakar unhe santulit kiya.

Jisse Ek aisi roshni phooti jo koi nahi dekh sakta tha. Ek aisi aawaaz nikli jo na devtaon ki thi, na shaitanon ki. Sirf satya ki.

Usne sabse pehle **Pride** ko dekha. "Teri asliyat tere dar mein chhupi hai.tere ahankar me hai" Ek vaar mein, usne Pride ke golden armor ko dust mein badal diya. "Jis din tune apne aap ko dekhega ki tu kitna kamjor hai woh din tera aakhiri din hoga aur de aaj wahi din hai" aur usi ke sath usne Pride ko wahi khatam kar diya

Fir usne **Wrath** ki taraf dekha. "Tu sirf pratikriya hai parantu main kaaran hoon." Usne man ki gati se Wrath ke haath se talwar chheen li aur usse hi uska anta kar diya. "Gussa bina disha ke kewal vinash hai."

Aur akhir mein, raj. Woh tab bhi haans raha tha. "Tu mujhe maar nahi sakta. Tu khud andhkaar ka hissa hai. Tere andar bhi shaitaan ka ansh hai morningstar ka ansh hai"

"Main andhkaar hoon," viraj bola, "Par main uska ant bhi hoon me morningstar ka ansh hoon lekin uska kaal bhi"

Itna bolkar viraj ne dono hath jode jin mese ek mein devtaon ka prakash, doosre mein narak ka andhkaar prakat ho gaya aur unme viraj ne apni shaktiya milaakar usne ek trishul banaya jo aatma tak chubh jaata tha. Ek vaar. Ek aakhri vaar. raj ki hansi ruk gayi. Uska roop hilne laga. Aur ant mein, woh khud ek shunya mein badal gaya.

Yuddh khatam tha. Viraj akela khada tha. Sthir. Saans lete hue. Na garv, na dukh. Sirf ek samvedna use jo badla chahiye tha woh use nahi mila tha lekin use kuch aur mila .

Usne aasmaan ki taraf dekha. Jahan pehle laal andhkaar tha, ab ek naya sitaara chamak raha tha. Jo ghane andhakar me ummid ke tarah chamak raha tha jab woh is tare ko dekh raha tha ki tabhi waha sare dewta aagaye aur use shaitaan ki khabar di jise su woh chal diya. Ek aur jung ke liye. Aakhri jung ke liye lekin akele kyunki ye na kisi dewta ka yuddh tha na kisi yoddha ka ye tha ek bete ek bhai ka usne chainblade ko devtaon ko lauta diya apne yoddha (vir) ka roop chhod diya ab woh sirf viraj tha jise apne pariwar apne duniya ka badla chahiye tha

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