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Fantasy Emperor, Rule out Darkness:

Is the story of Emperor going good? Should I continue it? Choose after reading.

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    Votes: 30 96.8%
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Note dear readers: the update is in progress. will post it till the weekend. thanks. cheers.
 

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Update-34:
A Golden Trap
Abi tak Emperor ki kahani may:
Wo apni Khushi may bike ko traffic may zig zag kar kay taizy say chalati ja rahi thi.
Aisa mano kay wo wapis apnay bachpan may pohnch kar usko dil khol kay jee rahi hi.
Sad: apnay to mujay sikhana tha nah?
Anum: um, kya?
Sad: ah, bike chalana!.
Anum: to sikha nahi hi tumnay kuch be abi tak? Dramay baz/
Sad: pata nahi sikha hi kay nahi per apki driving skill to itni smooth hi.
Anum: acha. Jantay ho mai hamaisha say bike chalana chahti thi. Per hamari backward family soch nay is cheez ko or mujay daba kay he rakh dia tha.
Sad: kya matlab. Ap sab kuch to karti hai.
Anum: hmph, siraf jab chachu ki teraf ho to he. Chachu sab say different hai. Is lia to I love him.
Sad: different matlab?
Anum: wooo---------

Now Next:

(hay!, jag rahi ho. Sona nahi?)
(nahi, mujay neend nahi aari. Pata nahi kiu.)
(waisy, aikdum yea plan kiu bana tumhara?)
(kiu? Nahi pasand aya tumay to mai plan change be kar kay kahi or chali jati hun?)
(paggal ho kia? Mainay mooka marna hi tumay.)
(hmm, dekho yar mai thori disturb hun. Mujay bus kuch cheezo ka faisla lena hi. I need time.)
(jitna chahia lay lo ok? Mai waisy be akayli thi tum aagi ho to company mil gi thori se.)
(hmm, thanks yar. I can count on you.)
(yes, *smiles!* always baby!. Waisy haya aj itna udas kiu ho. Tum to kabbi be dull nahi hui yar. To phir aisa kiu hi aj?)
Hay: apni ankho ko kass kay band karti hui. Pata nahi yar kiu hi aisa. Bus yea samjo kay mujay be aadat hogi hi normal rehnay ki.
Waisy tumnay itni ajeeb see building may gher kiu lia hi?
Ladki: uski teraf karwet lay kar. Kiu kay yaha kafi khamoshi hi. Koi kissy ko disturb nahi karta or the best part. Yea apartment siraf mera hi. *smiles!*
Haya: sochti hui, hmph, sahi hi, to yea aik jail say kam to nah hua.
Ladki: jo be hi meri jan ab to tum be idher ke kaidy ban chuki ho.
Haya: dil may, (sahi kaha kade to ab shuru hui hi meri or meray is dil ke.)

Ladki: waisy?
Haya: hmph! Bolo.
Ladki: university jana hi madam kay nahi?
Haya: jana hi yar.
Ladki: to so jatay hi nah. It’s quite late right now.
Haya: dil may, (neend bachi hogi to so saku gi nah mai. Pata nahi kya wo be jag raha hoga meri terha. Per wo kiu jagay ga? Hmm, zaruret he nahi usko.)
Haya nay ghusy may karvet lee or ankho ko zeberdesty band karlia.
-----
(tumhay waisa react nahi karna chahia tha.)
(to kia karta? Situation kharab ho jati to? Phir kia.)
(jo be hi per it was not good.)
(ok!, understood. Or kuch kehna hi? Mujay neend aari hi.)
(oh really? So you not missing someone?)
(I don’t know.)
(ok, sleep. Good night.)
(hmph!, neend ka to siraf aik mamooli sa bahana hi. Mujay siraf khamoshi chahia. Ha, siraf khamoshi.)
(acha hi to phir mai be chali jati hun?)
(kiu? Kya tumay be lagta hi kay jo kuch hua wo meri galti he hogi?)
(kya ho gaya hi tumay? Mainay aisa nah to kuch socha hi or nah he sochti hun. Tum kafi stress layray ho or apni soch ko thora badlo. Aj ka wo dream is say jura ho be sakta hi or nahi be per tum to pata nahi kiu sab cheezo ko khud per daltay ja rahay ho. Is there something else?)
(yes, there is.)
(oh? Or wo kya hi?)
(it’s-)
(hmmm?)
(it’s the system. Yea jo mujay aisy he mil gaya hi. Akhir kya maqsad hi iska MONA?)
MONA: th- that
Sad: dekho MONA mainay trust kia hi tum per as a friend per yea system mujay kiu mila yea mujay pata hona chahia. Doosri bat yea kay yea bohot he ajeeb cheez hi. Khud say apni merzi per chalti hi. Kabbi be mai isko handle nahi karta yea khud he handle hota or muj per nai nai cheezo ko kholta ja raha hi.
I’m so confused.
MONA: acha or?
Sad: or kya. Yea he batay hai. Ab darkit ko dekhlo mujay yea he pata hi kay usko level-2 per unlock kia gaya hi per akhir wo hi kya or siraf khul kar he wo meray mind or thoughts kay sath kaisy chaid chad kar sakta hi? Mujay kuch be samaj nahi ara.
*tired face!*
MONA: hmm, so tumay doubts hai system per?
Sad: doubts nahi per mai sure be to nahi hun.
MONA: right. Tumay yad hi kay professor shujah nay kya kaaha tha us din?
Sad: han, kay meri body may pin particles hai.
MONA: yes, to yea samjo kay system be aik life force hi just like a single shoe. Per jab tak wo shoe akayla hi uski value dead hi. Per jaisy he usko aik suitable human DNA milta hi to wo aik complete shoe ka pair ban kay zinda ho jata hi and then phir wo grow karta hi humoid growth kay according,
Sad: hmph, sahi. To you are living then?
MONA: yes, maybe ho sakta hi. mai ziada nahi bata sakti abi per yea hi kay system nay tumhari memory ko scan kar kay apni compatibility arrange ke hi.
Sad: or jo iskay features hai? Like darkit.
MONA: sabber hi thora tum may kay nahi?
Sad: oh, sorry. Bolo.
MONA: hmm, to mai kehri thi kay jaisy jaisy level up hota jai ga system apni complete range or shape tumay dikhata jai ga. Abi yea system bohot weak hi. It needs you jo iskay owner ho kay isko update karo. Baki cheezay ahista ahista khulti jai gi per yea system tumsay juda nahi ho sakta.
It's a part of you right now.
Sad: janta hun.
MONA: baki iskay features be ahista ahista he nikel kar samnay anay hi. Jaisy kay mai khud aik voice module hun jo system kay sath he sath evolve hoti chali jau gi. Per baby agger tum doubt karo gay to mainframe system ka tumharay pass hona koi be value nahi rakhay ga. Is per trust kar kay iskay sath jina sikho. Yea koi toy nahi hi. It’s a big responsibility. Isko soch samaj kay use karo. Ab tum aik mature zone may ah chukay ho. Now react as one. Baki system ka evolution experience say hona hi jaisy jaisy tum experience gain karo gay system tumhari body kay sath grow hota tumay apni range dikhata jai ga. Sab kuch depend karta hi tum per he. Also, darkit ke tumnay bat ke to wo tumharay mind say connected feature hi. Islia jab wo unlock hua to usnay tumhara mind process kia or tumay waisa dream dikhaya jo shaid past, present, ya future be ho sakta hi. It depends. Tumay usko khud per itna sawar nahi karna chahia.
Samjay?
Sad: *smile!* hmmm.
MONA: ah, excuse me? Yea smile kiu?
Sad: bus aisy he. Dekho MONA aj tum mujay such may meri aik friend feel hori ho jisko meri fiker hi. Kya such may tum aik module he ho?
MONA: wh- what you mean.
Sad: um, kuch nahi. Baki jo tumnay samjaya mai koshish karu ga kay tumay proud feel karwau.i have decided something now.
MONA: aha, good per tum stress mat lia karo. Mai be ahista ahista kar kay tumay sab kuch batati jau gi per tumay mujay time dena hoga with your trust.
Sad: mujay trust hi tum per MONA.
Baki aik or cheez poochni hi?\
MONA: poocho?
Sad: mujay bilay kay bad say koi mission kiu nahi mila?
MONA: maybe kay gage completion ki waja say. Shaid abi tak koi aisy situation nahi bani jismay tum perform kar sako. It can be anything.
Sad: to yea tumay nahi pata hoga?
MONA: no, yea bilkul he achanek hota hi jab situation ban jati hi to system detect kar kay experience count karta hi usko or task bana deta hi. Abi tak agger dekho to step by step tumay confident kia hi system nay, chahay wo gher may ho ya bahir.
Sad: right, samaj gaya. Thank you MONA. *pensive face!*
MONA: haya ka sochray ho?
Sad: hmph,
MONA: to rok letay usko. Janay kiu dia?
Sad: shaid mujay lagta hi kay galti meri thi. Mujay usko batana chahia tha halima ka.
MONA: hmmm.
Sad: she will come back agger usko mujay maf karna hoga to.
MONA: to agger usko kuch ho gaya to?
Sad: hum aisa kuch hony he nahi dayn gay MONA.
MONA: yup. Absolutely.
Waisy decide kya kia hi?
Sad: subha batau ga..
MONA: oh! *surprise face!*
----
us he gher kay aik or kamray may:
Anum be aik ajeeb se kashmakash may apnay bed per laty hui ankho ko band kar kay aik gheri se soch may thi: Usko neend he nahi ari thi. aik bechany chal rahi thi usmay.
Anum: kitni khush thi mai. Kia kia socha tha. but that moment ruined it all. Dam. Har bar kuch nah kuch hona zaruri hi shaid.
Per jitna be time uskay sath guzra wo sara ka sara time mainay churaya tha apni is fucked up qismet say. Agger mai aisa nah karti to pata nahi meray andar ki wo ladki kahi such may he kahi per nah gum jati. Per babe? Yea, sab tumnay bina sochay samjay apni choti behen kay sath kia hi. Usko kitna bura laga hoga. Tumnay to us say koi contact be nahi kia. If she is in pain? Phir kya tum khud ko maf kar pao gi?
Hmph, jab mera usnay nahi socha or ja kay late gi sad kay sath to ab mujsay be koi Umeed nah rakhay qurbani ki. Mai har dafa koi be qurbani nahi dun gi.
Is bar it’s me and only me/
Oh, shit!, I forgot. Usnay aikdum say uth kar phone ko pakra or kissy ko call milai. Call per bat karnay say uskay chehray per aik sakoon sa ah chuka tha.
(hmm, sahi ho gaya, ab no tension.)
*relieved face!*

******
Sitaro kay nichay us andehray may be rat apni jawani kay arooj per thi. Us he khamoshi may jhoomti hui *zoom!* karti hui aik Alishan se gari chalti hui aik roshnio say chamektay huay baday say banglo kay tik samnay ah kar ruk chuki thi:
Abi tak usmay say koi be nahi bahir nikla tha,
Wo gari ahista ahista kar kay band hoti chali gi.
Kuch dare aisy he khamoshi rahi.
(gh- gher ah gaya hi, kia soch rahi ho?)
(janti hun, thanks for the day zan. Aj tumnay kafi kuch kia meray lia. Sochna kia hi bus aj kafi dino bad thora acha feel kia hi mainay. Thanks.)
Zan: tumay zaruret thi iski Zainab. Also, mujay tumhari company pasand hi. To yea thanks- tum apnay sath he lay jao.
Zanny: waisy aik bat poochu?
Zan: hmph, sure.
Zanny: yea tum mujay Zainab keh kar kiu bulatay ho? Baki sab to mujay zanny kehtay or tum.
Zan: jo sab kehtay or kartay mai wo nahi karta. I do it my way. Waisy be kitna payara nam hi Zainab or tum aisy he isko use nahi karti.
Zanny: whatever, baki hum kal say kam shuru kartay hai mainay waqar ko task assign kar dia hi hostel ka. Wo kal he hamay update karay ga.
Zan: I see. Sahi ho gaya or ali ka kia? I mean, jab usko pata chalna about me doing it to masla ho sakta.
Zanny: *devil smile!* ali is history zan. Tum bus present per focus karo. Baki kal miltay hai. Thanks again for the coffee and time.
Zan: tum chaho to yea moments roz he ah saktay hai.
Zanny: kk- kya matlab tumhara?
*face with peaking eye!*
Zan: um, kuch be to nahi. Just kidding. Haha.
Zanny: shoulder per tap kartay huay. Be careful. Nahi to kahi mera wo wala roop bahir nah nikel ai.
Samjay?
Zan: whispered, uska to intazar rahay ga.
Zanny: paggal, hum, see you then.
Zan: do see me kahi time nah guzer jai.
Zanny: *blush!* good night zan.
Kehtay he wo gari ka derwaza khol chuki thi.
(rat chura kar rat ko wish kerdi ho. Hai!, zalim kabbi socho to hamara.)
Zanny: dekho zan you are my friend. Tumay batari hun. Ali is my only love or uskay bad ab muj per try karna useless hi. Ok?
Zan: ahan, ok. Sorry. Waisy try abi mari nahi mainay.
Zanny: marna be mat.
Bol kar zanny gari say utri or derwaza band karr kay bina muday banglo kay main gate ki teraf badh gi.
Zan: mai try nahi karta my dear. I just do it. Hmmm, tumay tang karnay ka he to maza ana hi mujay. Baki zan ko inkar karna tumay bohot he bhari per sakta hi. Hahahah, you don’t know me yet. Mera roop tumnay dekh lia to kahi tum he nah dar jana. Zanny kay baray may zan tab tak sochta raha jab tak wo uski ankho say dure rastay pay gum nahi hogi.
(buz, a voice call)
Zan: hello?
Uzma: hmmm, kaisy ho?
Zan: um, bilkul tik or tum?
Uzma: hmph, tuum wo messages avoid kar rahay thay to socha kay call shaid utha lo. Waisy aj kafi busy ho?
Itna avoid kia mujay.
Zan: aray nahi, wo actually aik dost ka problem tha usko help karnay may din guzra mera. Mai class may he ara tha per rastay may wo mil gaya.
Uzma: acha, waisy yea dost ladka hi ya ladki?
Zan: um kiu. Koi masla hi agger wo ladki hui to?
Uzma: *face with horns!* fine tt- tum uski help karlo bad may bat karti hun. Mama bulari.
Zan: acha? Mujay awaz nahi aii waisy.
Uzma: seriously yar.
Zan: hhh, ok, dehan rakhna. Baki jawab mujay chahia. Ok?
Uzma: hmph, tum be.
Jaisy he uzma nay call cut ke uski setting puri ki puri hil chuki thi. Aj usnay aisy kaisy zan say pooch lia is bat ka andaza usko hua he nahi. Shaid yea aj us intazar ka asar tha jo usnay aik aik minute gin kay class may kia tha zan kay lia or jab wo nahi aya to uski kashmakash badhti chali gi. Bohot sochnay kay bad or kai messages send karnay kay bad usnay call milai thi zan ko. Aisa to pehlay kabbi be uzma nay nahi kia tha per ab shaid usmay kuch changes aray thay jiska ahsas ab usko ho be raha tha.
Sadia: bat hogi?
Uzma: hmm, hogi.
Sadia: yea kya chal raha hi?
Uzma: ku- kuch be nahi. Tum aisy he soch rahi ho.
Sadia: listen, uzma yea jo tum kar rahi ho please soch lo is baray may.
Uzma: yar kya kia hi mainay? Formally poocha hi us say bus. Aj usnay classes nahi lee to.
Sadia: acha siraf yea he bat hi nah?
Uzma: han, tum batao yea bukhar kaisy ho gaya tumay or tum itni chup kiu ho kal say? Dekho ab batao mujay.
Sadia: kuch be nahi hi shaid kal restless hogi thi to islia fever hua. Tum tension nah lo bus jobi faisla karo usper dil-o-dimag say sochna.
Mujay yea ladka sahi nahi lagta.
Uzma: acha ok meri ma. Dil may, (tum mujay kiu rokti ho samajti hun mai sadia, per kya karu is bar bat kuch or he hi.)
Sadia: coffee?
Uzma: jao banao meray lia be.
Sadia: hud hi bimar hum hi or order apkay jari hai.
Uzma: hahaha, Mazak kar rahi hun abi lay kay aii. Ab so mat jana.
Sadia: hum, nahi soti jao lao jaldii.
Jaisy he uzma uth kay bahir ki teraf gi,
Sadia ki ankhay bher chuki thi.
(uzma tum nahi janti kay tum kiss daldal may dhas rahi ho. Mai kuch be kar kay us zan ka perda fash kar kay rahu gi. Jo be usnay kia meray sath. Uska anjam usko bhugatna hoga.)
*****
(tumnay bataya nahi kia bol rahay thay?)
(aray tum yea to batao kay tum aii kab or bataya be nahi?)
(mai jab kuch pooch rahi hoti hun haris to mujay siraf us he bat ka jawab chahia hota hi.)
Haris: janta hun Hanya i- I’m sorry.
Hanya: apni heels ko *tip tap tup!* karti hui pool kay pass aii.
Note: (hanya haris ki better half hai. yea shadi aik relationship kum or business power deal ziada thi. islia iska asar be paya jata hi inkay rishtay may. waisy agger dekha jai to hanya bold hony kay sath sath he boht brutal be hi. yea kissy ko be khud say upper nahi samajti or jo be isko chahia hota hi wo usko chin letty hi. abi tak koi be positive feeling hanya ko chu kar be nahi guzri or baki? story may perlo.))
back to the story:
Waisy to Timmy mera hi per tumnay isko apna banaya hua hi? Wo ahista say haris kay pass he bethi or pani may hiltay huay us chamkilay sanp kay sar per hath say sehlaya.
(good boy Timmy I missed you.)
Haris: waisy tumnay bataya nahi kab aii tum? Baki sab kaisy hai waha?
Hanya: oh, sab tik hai it was a waste trip.
Haris: kiu? Kya hua.
Hanya: dad ki waja say gai thi agger wo nah kehtay to mainay nahi jana tha. mujay yea politics pasand nahi hi tum jantay ho per dad pata nahi kiu puri ki puri family ko engage kartay ja rahay hai.
Mujay to samaj nahi ata akhir kya zaruret hi itni meherbani karnay kay lia in kiday makodo per.
So strange.
Haris: dad tumay chahtay hai kay unki help karo is he lia.
Hanya: akhir kab tak wo hamara istamal kartay rahay gay? Kya tumnay abi tak kuch be nahi socha future kay lia? such may haris you are a dumster.
Haris: hanya please!, meray bap kay baray may bat kar rahi ho tum.
Hanya: acha to ab tum is tone may bat karo gay mujsay? Tumhari itni himet hogi hi?
Ab hanya ki un neely ankho may lal doria ah chuki thi.
Usnay Timmy kay sar say hath hataya or apni right heel utar kar haris kay samnay ke.
(Isko dekh rahay hona!? Now, tum jantay ho kay kia karna hi tumay?
(Hi, kya hora hi guys?)
Yea awaz sun kar hanya nay mud kar andar ati hui zanny ko dekha.
Hanya: hay babe. Kaisy hi meri sexy doll?
Zanny: mai to tik tak hun or meri wild cat kaisy hi?
Hanya: aikdum wild. Ready to hunt. Yea bat usnay haris ko dekh kar kahi thi.
Zanny: good to know. yea heel hath may kiu pakri hui hi?
All ok.
Hanya: oh, yeah. All is cool. Bus waisy he yea new lee thi to haris iski shape ko dekh raha tha. sath he sath he is going to give me a massage.
Zanny: uf guys itna romantic mood!. Superb, chalay ap continue karay mai bus change karnay ja rahi hun. Badly need a shower.
Hanya: you should. Lets meet on dinner?
Zanny: paka. See you catty.
Hanya: see you. Doll!.
Haris: hanya yea kk- kya tha?
Hanya: kya tha? tum chahtay ho kay tumhari behen ko pata chal jai tumhari value ka?
Shuker karo kay abi mainay is bat ko cover kar lia hi.
Now where were we. Hmph, usnay nichay say heel upper ki teraf ke or uski tip ko haris kay chehray ki teraf bada dia.
Haris hanya ki harkat ko dekh kar man he man bohot ziada ghusy may to ara tha per wo khamosh tha. uski ankhay bol rahi thiper unko hanya bilkul be pernay ki mood may nahi thi.
(kiss ka intazar hi. Lick it haris.
Come on!!)
Haris nay yea bat suntay sath he apnay hath say hanya ka heel wala bazu pakra. Tab he, *chatak!*
Hanya: apnay ghusy say lal huay chehray may aik demon lag rahi thi. Uski sansay taiz ho chuki thi. Aik dafa samjaya hi tumay kay tum meri permission kay begare mujay touch nahi kar saktay.
Fuck youuu haris. How dare you touch me!!?
Haris: itnay zordar hath or uski goonjti hui awaz say hil chuka tha. ha- hanya, I’m sorry. Please!.
Or chup chap usnay hanya ki heel ko doosri latakti hui side say paker kar usko slow slow lick karna shuru kardia.
Hanya: pehlay he karlo to mujay mera ghusa bar bar tum per nikalna nah paray.
That’s like a good boy haris. Lick it more baby.
Tumhari value mat bhula karo meray samnay.
Now stop.
Haris aik ajeeb se shackle bana kar hanya kay sath betha hua tha.
Hanya: ab aisa karo kay meri doosri heel ko be saf karo. Jaldi.
Haris nay apnay jhukay huay sar kay sath bilkul waisy he kia jaisa usko kaha gaya tha.
Hanya ka chehra haris ko is terha degrade kar kay kafi khil chuka tha.
(ab inko lay jao and bring my home slippers ok?)
Dono heels ko apas may dabata hua haris hanya ko chore kay kamray ki teraf chalta gaya.
(aik din mera waqat be ai ga hanya. Yad rakhna Is bat ko. Mai tumay be aisy he tadpau ga jaisy tum tadpati ho mujay. Just you wait and watch. *grunting teeth!*.)
*****
din bher kay bad akhir-
Mr. khan apnay kamray may abi ah kar bethay he thay or unhonay apni cigarette jalai he thi kay us he waqat.
(buz, voice call, shujah jani calling.)
Mr. khan: hmmm? Itni rat may.
Sochtay or khud ko kehtay he unhonay call pick ke.
(hello kaisy ho khan?)
Mr. khan: mai to tik hun or sunao kaisy ho tum?
Prof shujah: sab chal raha hi bus. Tum yea batao kay kahi tumhari neend kharab to nahi ke mainay? Waisy lagta to nahi kay tumnay apni rat may cigarette pina chori hogi. Abi be wohi pe rahay hogay.
Mr. khan: tum kuch nahi bhultay nah?
Prof shujah: kya karu aadat ka asar hi bus. Waisy sad kaisa hi?
Mr. khan: tik hi or jo kuch tumnay kia uskay lia mai tumhara----
Prof shujah: wo mera be beta hi khan mat bhulo kay mainay koi ahsan nahi kia tum per maid il say chata tha kay wo tik ho jai. Bus aik choti se koshish ke hi bus.
Mr. khan: hmph, to call karnay ke koi khas waja?
Prof shujah: hmm, waja be sad he hi. Tumnay kia socha hi uskay university anay ka? Kab bhejna hi usko.
Mr. khan: is per mai abi kuch be nahi keh sakta yea depend karta hi usper agger wo ana chahay ga to bhej dun ga mujay konsa koi masla hi.
Prof shujah: hmmm, acha hi. Doosri bat yea karni thi mainay kay sad ko koi phone he laydo uski teacher us say bat karna chahti hi.
Tum itna to samajtay ho gay kay aj kal mobile phone kafi important hi.
Mr. khan: bus kardo janta hun sab or mujay pata tha kay koi nah koi mujay is baray may kahay ga he is lia iska be intazam kardia hi mainay. Tumay number bhejdu ga uska or muj per apni yea teaching mat jhada karo samjay?
Prof shujah: aray good ho gaya. To number bhej dena yad say baki bat phir bad may hoti hi. Koshish karo kay usko university kay lia tayar karo.
Mr. khan: kya matlab hi is bat ka?
Prof shujah: tumay to sab pata he hota hi is bat ka be pata lagwa lo.
Good night.
Professor is bat say phir mr. khan ko sochta hua call kat kay ja chuka tha.
*****
Aglay din ka suraj jaisy he chamka to us sunairy dhoop kay sath ahista ahista kar kay Lahore shair be jagna shuru ho chuka tha.
Apnay honto per aik muskurahat lia sad jag kar tayar hora tha. aj wo shishay kay samnay jab aya to usko wo dara hua bhuja sa sad nahi balkay aik nai josh kay sath dubara say jag chuka sad dikh raha tha.
MONA: good to go?
Sad: absolutely.
Us he waqat derwaza khula or----
Anum apni us bheni Khushbu or hatho may tray lia dakhil hui.
(good morning sad?)
Sad: khud may he magan tayar hora tha.
Usnay ahista say anum ko dekha or morning wish kar kay phir say shishay may khud ko dekhnay laga.
Anum: ready horay ho kahi jana hi?
Sad: hmph, insan ko tayar he rehna chahia. Kabbi be kahi be jana per sakta hi.
Anum: acha ge, subha subha philosophy per kay bethay ho?
Kamal ki bat hi.
Aj anum nay aik pink color ke lining frock pehni hui thi or uskay baal khulay huay thay.
(mai chai lai hun. Pe lo thandi ho jani hi.)
Sad: aj chai mainay baba kay sath peeny hi. Unko anay may bus 7 minutes reh gay hai table per. Mai be us he time per pohnchu ga.
Anum: huh? Khairiet to hi aj tum thoray ajeeb lag rahay ho.
Sad: mujay kia hona hi? I’m wonderful.
Anum: kal jo mujsay hua mujay laga kay tum naraz hogay.
Sad: mujay koi zaruret nahi narazgi ki. Bus us time apko thora control rakhna chahia tha. mamla bigar be sakta tha.
Anum: bus mujay ghusa chad gaya tha kay us paggal nay hamari drive ka maza apni us car say kharab kar dia tha.
Sad: shaid galti hamari be ho? Ap be to kafi taiz chalari thi.
Anum: apna sar jhuka kar. Ab sorry kar to dia or kia karu? Bolo!
Yea usnay bohot he Masoom say tarikay or awaz may bola tha kay sad ki hasi chuoot gi.
Anum: *sighs!* kia masla hi has kiu rahay ho?
Sad: ap kafi cute lagi aisy bolti to hasi ah gi. Pehli bar apko aisy dekha.
Anum: *blushes!* acha. Or?
Sad: or? Kuch nahi. Ab table per jana chahia time ho gaya hi all most.
Anum: *grunting teeth!* batao to sahi kay ja kider rahay ho?
Sad: itni baysabri kiu?
Anum: tang he karna to bata kay kardo. Haya ko milnay ja rahay ho.
Yea sun kar sad aikdum say chup ho gaya tha.
Anum: batao?
Sad: ge nahi. Kindly uska ziker ap bar bar mat karay wo khud gi hi khud he ah jai gi. Mujay kuch or be cheezo ko dekhna hi.
Ab chalay chai nichay lay ai.
Kehtay he sad hawa ki terha anum ko chore kar bahir ki teraf nikel kay ja chuka tha.
Anum: akhir isko kya ho gaya hi kahi haya nay contact to nahi kia isko?
Mujay pata lagana he hoga. Aisy nahi Janay day sakti isko.
Usnay tray ko pakra or sad kay Pichay taizy say chalti chali gi.
*****
Kuch dare bad:
aik ahista ahista slow hoti gari campus ki parking may ah kar ruki. kuch dare may he uska pichla derwaza khula or uzma apna bag or phone lay kay usmay say ahista say nikli.
Uzma apni gari say uter kar parking say ahista ahista chal kay nikel rahi thi. Pichlay kuch dino say uska sara ka sara dehan apnay phone per he rehta tha. wo isko aj kal aik pal kay be nahi chorti thi. Har time ya to zan say chat karti rehti thi ya uski purani chat perti rehti thi.
Aj subha say be wo zan say bat karnay may he lagi hui thi usko nah to khanay ka hosh tha or nah he wo kissy ko show kar rahi thi kay wo kya feel kar rahi hi zan kay lia apnay andar. Akhir kiu nah karti zan uski respect be karta tha or usko sunta be tha. sab kuch tha zan may jo aik ladki ko chahia hota hi. He was perfect. Uski personality ka aik halka per dumdar asar uzma ge per be ho chuka tha or wo is nashay may ahista ahista kar kay doob rahi thi.
Kuch dino say usko zan say bat karnay ke yea lat usko khud be pasand ani shuru hogi thi. Uzma uskay reply kay lia bechane rehti thi or uski nazer har time phone ki screen per tiki rehti thi. Jis say ab uska dil zan ki bato may ziada or perhai may kum kum lagna shuru ho chuka tha. aj be wo subha say zan say bat karti hui university tak aii thi or bina kissy ko dekhay chup chap phone pakray chehray per aik bareek smile lia wo class ki teraf chalti jari thi kay tab he achanek-----
(wha- ouuuu!)
(are you ok?)
Uzma: *face with wide eyes!*

To be continued…….
 

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1. To idhar haya gumsum si ha sad ko miss kar rahi ha or uski friend usko samjha rahi ha or idhar anum bhi lagta ha ab haya ki sad ke pas ane nahi degi ek pal ko usko apni behen ki chinta hui thi but fir wahi uski jalan us ler hawi ho gayi usne kisi ko call kiya tha jaise ki haya ka hal chal le rahi ho kahin haya ki roommate bhi anum se mili na ho uska name abhi bataya nahi gaya ha or hays bhi univercity jane wali ha agar to wo sad ki univercity me chale jaye to maja aa jaye kher dekhte han kya hota ha

2. Sad ki jo mona se discussion hua ha system ke bare me usse to yahi lagta ha ki system ek soul ki tarah sad se connected ho gaya ha jo sad ke sath hi uske emotions ke sath hi grow kar raha ha uske nature ke according hi react kar raha ha or agar aisa ha to dusre system bhi ho sakte han jinka nature alag ho wo evil ho to wo apna host bhi evil hi chunenge kher mona ne khud kah diya ha ki abhi sad ka system kamjor ha or sad ko mehnat karni hogi use level up karne me kher dekhte han age kya hota ha

3. Idhar zanny ka bhai to apni biwi ka paltu dog lag raha ha jaise uski biwi use dominate kar rahi ha lekin haris bhi pure badle ke mood me to ha dekhte ha kaise badla keta ha apni wife hanya se or zanny ko kuchh pata hi nahi ha

4. Zan bahut tagdi game khel raha ha zanny oer bhi try marne ki soch raha ha but zanny ko abhi bhi ali se pyar ha bhale hi abhi wo ali se nafrat karti ha jo ki sara kiya dhara zan ka hi ha lekin zanny ke andar jo nafrat or gussa ha ali ke prati usme wo kuchh galat na kar le jisse bad me khud hi pachhtati rahe kher ye to waqt batayega waise bhi ye konsi dudh ki dhuli ha sad ka to isne bhi majak banaya tha

5. Ab uzma ke uper bhi zan ouri tarah hawi ho chuka ha zan ki taraf puri tarah attract ho rahi ha uzma or lagta ha jald hi iska kalyan kar dega zan lekin sadia ko zan ki asliyat pata ha or wo apni dost ko usse bachana chhahti ha or zan se badla lena chhahti ha dekhte han wo zan ki asliyat sabke samne la pati ha ya nahi kher zan ne chal to sab badhiya chali but kya pata sara jal bichhane ke bad koi unexpected entry mar de jiski zan ne bhi kalpna nahi kari ho or sab kuchh dheere dheere zan ke hath se fisal jaye kher dekhte han age ka

6. Idhar sad babu tayaar hoker pata nahi kidhar ko naikal rahe han confidence to pure charam per ha lagta ha kahin univercity to nahi jaa rahe or udhar uzma bhi bhi jo zan ke khayalo me khoyi hui ha kahin to kisi se takrayi ha or use dekhne ke bad wo surprise ha to wo surprise lagat ha sad hi ha jo univercity pahunch gaya ha ab dekhte han ki sad ke naye chapter ki shuruwat idhar se kaise hoti ha kyonki idhar uska sabse bada dushman betha ha zan jo ek bar use almost mar chuka ha ab 2nd time kya hoga dekhte han
 
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1. To idhar haya gumsum si ha sad ko miss kar rahi ha or uski friend usko samjha rahi ha or idhar anum bhi lagta ha ab haya ki sad ke pas ane nahi degi ek pal ko usko apni behen ki chinta hui thi but fir wahi uski jalan us ler hawi ho gayi usne kisi ko call kiya tha jaise ki haya ka hal chal le rahi ho kahin haya ki roommate bhi anum se mili na ho uska name abhi bataya nahi gaya ha or hays bhi univercity jane wali ha agar to wo sad ki univercity me chale jaye to maja aa jaye kher dekhte han kya hota ha
hmm isko deep socho thora shaid samaj jao bato per ghore karo. haya yaha he kiu aii. yea socho
2. Sad ki jo mona se discussion hua ha system ke bare me usse to yahi lagta ha ki system ek soul ki tarah sad se connected ho gaya ha jo sad ke sath hi uske emotions ke sath hi grow kar raha ha uske nature ke according hi react kar raha ha or agar aisa ha to dusre system bhi ho sakte han jinka nature alag ho wo evil ho to wo apna host bhi evil hi chunenge kher mona ne khud kah diya ha ki abhi sad ka system kamjor ha or sad ko mehnat karni hogi use level up karne me kher dekhte han age kya hota ha
yea aik direct hint hi MONA kuch bata be rahi hi or sab chupa be rahi hi/ dekho sad koshish kar raha tha us say nikalwanay ki sari bat. wo depression uski smile say saf ho jata hi agger ghore karo to.
3. Idhar zanny ka bhai to apni biwi ka paltu dog lag raha ha jaise uski biwi use dominate kar rahi ha lekin haris bhi pure badle ke mood me to ha dekhte ha kaise badla keta ha apni wife hanya se or zanny ko kuchh pata hi nahi ha
nahi dost. aj kal working woman wo be high class ke aisy he hai jo apni shadi say khush nah ho. sab ka sab women march ka kasur hi. mera jism meri merzi ko lay kar chal rahi hi hanya. wo dominate kar rahi hi. thora ab critical socho story ko jo dikhta hi zaruri nahi wohi ho.
4. Zan bahut tagdi game khel raha ha zanny oer bhi try marne ki soch raha ha but zanny ko abhi bhi ali se pyar ha bhale hi abhi wo ali se nafrat karti ha jo ki sara kiya dhara zan ka hi ha lekin zanny ke andar jo nafrat or gussa ha ali ke prati usme wo kuchh galat na kar le jisse bad me khud hi pachhtati rahe kher ye to waqt batayega waise bhi ye konsi dudh ki dhuli ha sad ka to isne bhi majak banaya tha
uska to shuru say yea he funda hi to be no-1 or jo ai usko humiliate karay. zanny mushkil hi per uska control wala kam to kar he rahhi hi nah?
5. Ab uzma ke uper bhi zan ouri tarah hawi ho chuka ha zan ki taraf puri tarah attract ho rahi ha uzma or lagta ha jald hi iska kalyan kar dega zan lekin sadia ko zan ki asliyat pata ha or wo apni dost ko usse bachana chhahti ha or zan se badla lena chhahti ha dekhte han wo zan ki asliyat sabke samne la pati ha ya nahi kher zan ne chal to sab badhiya chali but kya pata sara jal bichhane ke bad koi unexpected entry mar de jiski zan ne bhi kalpna nahi kari ho or sab kuchh dheere dheere zan ke hath se fisal jaye kher dekhte han age ka
uzma aik normal ladki hi. har ladki payar ke bhooki hoti hi. aisa he hora hi uskay sath. sadia ka character kafi slippery hi wo badlay say ziada ab jealous hori hi expression note karo uski bato may. yea aik deep impact hi girls sexual trigger ka.
mujay kafi perhna perta hi aisa likhnay kay lia jo unique be ho or simple be.
6. Idhar sad babu tayaar hoker pata nahi kidhar ko naikal rahe han confidence to pure charam per ha lagta ha kahin univercity to nahi jaa rahe or udhar uzma bhi bhi jo zan ke khayalo me khoyi hui ha kahin to kisi se takrayi ha or use dekhne ke bad wo surprise ha to wo surprise lagat ha sad hi ha jo univercity pahunch gaya ha ab dekhte han ki sad ke naye chapter ki shuruwat idhar se kaise hoti ha kyonki idhar uska sabse bada dushman betha ha zan jo ek bar use almost mar chuka ha ab 2nd time kya hoga dekhte han
mainay iska pehlay he bataya tha kay hony wala hi to surprise mat ho baki chapter to khul gaya tha jab ka sad gher wapis aya.
dekha aik sath kitno ko lay kar chalna perta hi babu bai sab kay expression be balance kar rahay hai aj kal is lia time lag jata. story kabbi be kissy aik ke nahi hoti. sabka is may koi nah koi role hi jo agay lay kay chalta hi story ko. baki ab sahi chal rahi hi story kay nahi bata dena. or support kay lia thanku.
 
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iskay ilawa be bat kia karo bro. mujay be to pata chalay kay ap kia sochtay ho story kay baray may? meri bat samaj rahay hona?
 
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