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Fantasy Emperor's Domination

ankuraggar

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Prologue

Ye kahani hai ek ladake ki jo laakhon varshon se kaid tha, aur usne ek nashvar shareer ko vaapas pa liya hai.

Wah ghatate hue kleenjing inens praacheen sampradaay ka shishy ban gaya, jahaan usaka kulapati usaka shishy hua karata tha.

Ab vah is sampradaay ko usake poorv gaurav par vaapas laega.

Yeh sheersh par pahunchane aur un logon se badala lene kee unakee yaatra hai jinhonne unhen kaid kar liya tha.

Yah puraane doston se milane aur nae saathee banaane kee unakee kahaanee hai.

Yah nau sansaaron ko peechhe chhodate hue aur hevens ka agala shaasak banane ka unaka maarg hai.

kaee sahasraabdee beet chuke hain aur visheshagyon ka svarn yug beet chuka hai.

ek maastar jisake shishyon mein ek baar 9 duniyaon mein sabase adhik amar the, sabhee ne use chhod diya hai.

apane nashvar shareer, nashvar kaaya aur nashvar jeevan chakr ke saath ... vah 9 duniyaon ko paar kar lega aur jo uchit hai use le jaega.
 
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ankuraggar

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Chapter 01 – Old Devil (1)

Update -1

"ba ba ... ba ba ... ba ba ..."

aamataur par shaant parvat shrrnkhala mein ek yuva charavaahe kee bheden rotee theen.

thandee raat ki hava ke saath usake shareer ke khilaaph hinsak udaane ke saath vikram ek chattaan ke sheersh par reng gya.

unaka shareer vartamaan mein paseene se bheeg gaya tha. 13 saal ki umr mein, Vikram jaisa ek chhota ladaka is parvat shrrnkhala par chadhane ke lie apanee saaree shakti ka upayog kar raha tha - raat ke aakaash mein yah drshy kisee ko bhee chakit kar deta tha.

yadyapi raat shaant thee, Vikram ke man mein anishchitata kee jvaala se peeda ho rahee thee. ek gareeb parivaar se aane vaale, unke maata-pita donon kisaan the.

saat saal kee umr mein, unhonne ek charavaahe ke roop mein apana jeevan shuroo kiya.

aaj, unhonne apane dainik kaaryon ko poora kar liya tha. haalaanki, subah ke drshtikon ke dauraan, unhonne dekha ki vah apanee agranee bhed ko yaad kar rahe the.

chinta se bharate hue, vah ise khojane ke lie parvat shrrnkhala mein vaapas chala gaya.

sampoorn parvat shrrnkhala ko chhaan-been karane ke baad, vah abhee bhee is bhed kee chhaaya nahin pa raha tha.

laapata bhed aur uske dusht maalik, Digvijay ke baare mein sochakar, Vikram ne usake dil mein sabase bura hone kee aashanka jataee.

achaanak, Vikram ne ek jagah ke baare mein socha jahaan bhed ho sakatee hai. keval ek hee sthaan tha jo unhonne khoja nahin tha - amar daanav groto!

jaisa ki unhonne usase pahale amar daanav grotto kee or dekha, unhonne dekha ki andheree raat mein parvat shrrnkhala praacheen desolet yug se ek bhayankar jaanavar ke samaan thee; isaka munh maanav maans ka bhookha hota hua dikhaee de raha tha.

apane chaaron or se bhediyon kee haul sunakar, vah madad nahin kar sakata, lekin dar mein kaamp gaya.

immortal daanav groto ko aasapaas ke kshetr mein ek shaapit bhoomi maana jaata tha. kinvadantee hai ki ek dusht daanav ne is sthaan kee adhyakshata kee, ek daanav jisane turant kisee bhee atichaar ka sevan kiya.

kisee ne bhee ise gupha ke baahar jeevit nahin kiya tha. is samay, Vikram ke kaanon mein Digvijay ke kode kee aavaaj goonj uthee.

yadi Vikram ne vaastav mein bhedon ko kho diya, to Digvijay nishchit roop se apane maans ko baaghon ko maar denge.

Is bindu par pahunchane ke baad, Vikram ne apane daant pees lie aur gupha ke paas pahunche. raat mein usaka shav gaayab ho gaya. "aaaaaaaahhhhh ...!" ek yuva ladake kee dayaneey cheekh se shaant raat baadhit huee.

aaj k liye itna hi (Total words 2461)
 

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Congratulations for new story
Nice start
 

Ajay

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Prologue

Ye kahani hai ek ladake ki jo laakhon varshon se kaid tha, aur usne ek nashvar shareer ko vaapas pa liya hai.

Wah ghatate hue kleenjing inens praacheen sampradaay ka shishy ban gaya, jahaan usaka kulapati usaka shishy hua karata tha.

Ab vah is sampradaay ko usake poorv gaurav par vaapas laega.

Yeh sheersh par pahunchane aur un logon se badala lene kee unakee yaatra hai jinhonne unhen kaid kar liya tha.

Yah puraane doston se milane aur nae saathee banaane kee unakee kahaanee hai.

Yah nau sansaaron ko peechhe chhodate hue aur hevens ka agala shaasak banane ka unaka maarg hai.

kaee sahasraabdee beet chuke hain aur visheshagyon ka svarn yug beet chuka hai.

ek maastar jisake shishyon mein ek baar 9 duniyaon mein sabase adhik amar the, sabhee ne use chhod diya hai.

apane nashvar shareer, nashvar kaaya aur nashvar jeevan chakr ke saath ... vah 9 duniyaon ko paar kar lega aur jo uchit hai use le jaega.
Congratulations for new story bhai
 
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Ajay

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Chapter 01 – Old Devil (1)

Update -1

"ba ba ... ba ba ... ba ba ..."

aamataur par shaant parvat shrrnkhala mein ek yuva charavaahe kee bheden rotee theen.

thandee raat ki hava ke saath usake shareer ke khilaaph hinsak udaane ke saath vikram ek chattaan ke sheersh par reng gya.

unaka shareer vartamaan mein paseene se bheeg gaya tha. 13 saal ki umr mein, Vikram jaisa ek chhota ladaka is parvat shrrnkhala par chadhane ke lie apanee saaree shakti ka upayog kar raha tha - raat ke aakaash mein yah drshy kisee ko bhee chakit kar deta tha.

yadyapi raat shaant thee, Vikram ke man mein anishchitata kee jvaala se peeda ho rahee thee. ek gareeb parivaar se aane vaale, unke maata-pita donon kisaan the.

saat saal kee umr mein, unhonne ek charavaahe ke roop mein apana jeevan shuroo kiya.

aaj, unhonne apane dainik kaaryon ko poora kar liya tha. haalaanki, subah ke drshtikon ke dauraan, unhonne dekha ki vah apanee agranee bhed ko yaad kar rahe the.

chinta se bharate hue, vah ise khojane ke lie parvat shrrnkhala mein vaapas chala gaya.

sampoorn parvat shrrnkhala ko chhaan-been karane ke baad, vah abhee bhee is bhed kee chhaaya nahin pa raha tha.

laapata bhed aur uske dusht maalik, Digvijay ke baare mein sochakar, Vikram ne usake dil mein sabase bura hone kee aashanka jataee.

achaanak, Vikram ne ek jagah ke baare mein socha jahaan bhed ho sakatee hai. keval ek hee sthaan tha jo unhonne khoja nahin tha - amar daanav groto!

jaisa ki unhonne usase pahale amar daanav grotto kee or dekha, unhonne dekha ki andheree raat mein parvat shrrnkhala praacheen desolet yug se ek bhayankar jaanavar ke samaan thee; isaka munh maanav maans ka bhookha hota hua dikhaee de raha tha.

apane chaaron or se bhediyon kee haul sunakar, vah madad nahin kar sakata, lekin dar mein kaamp gaya.

immortal daanav groto ko aasapaas ke kshetr mein ek shaapit bhoomi maana jaata tha. kinvadantee hai ki ek dusht daanav ne is sthaan kee adhyakshata kee, ek daanav jisane turant kisee bhee atichaar ka sevan kiya.

kisee ne bhee ise gupha ke baahar jeevit nahin kiya tha. is samay, Vikram ke kaanon mein Digvijay ke kode kee aavaaj goonj uthee.

yadi Vikram ne vaastav mein bhedon ko kho diya, to Digvijay nishchit roop se apane maans ko baaghon ko maar denge.

Is bindu par pahunchane ke baad, Vikram ne apane daant pees lie aur gupha ke paas pahunche. raat mein usaka shav gaayab ho gaya. "aaaaaaaahhhhh ...!" ek yuva ladake kee dayaneey cheekh se shaant raat baadhit huee.

aaj k liye itna hi (Total words 2461)
Nice start bhai
 
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