Fantasy Emperor's Domination

[Xabhi]

Nice one bhai

 

[tiaolphprgngbkumzr]

Kya baat hai aaj kal xuanhuan stories ki line lag gyi hai xforum me
Fir bhi good luck

 

[ankuraggar]

Kya baat hai aaj kal xuanhuan stories ki line lag gyi hai xforum me
Fir bhi good luck

Bhai... Kuch smjha nhi aap Kya kehna chahte ho

 

[tiaolphprgngbkumzr]

Me original story ke bare me bol rha tha nothing else

 

[ankuraggar]

Me original story ke bare me bol rha tha nothing else

Ya right.... Name same hai... Starting plot same hai prr iska mtlb ye nhi ki Puri story same rhegi... Bhut kuch different bhi hai isme Jo aage aane per pata chlega.. kyunki is khani ka writer Mai hu... To I know mere mind mein Kya chl rha hai.
So wait... Stay tuned.....
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[ankuraggar]

Mujhe bas ye smajh ni aata ki Naye writers ka support hona chahiye Taki hum aur acha likhe but yaha to gine chune person hi comment krte hai aur story k baare mein btatae hai....
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[ankuraggar]

Update - 4

Chapter 01 – Old Devil (1)

Part - 4

Vikram ye kehkr ki chlo…. Age badh gaya. Use iss baat ki bilkul bhi parvah nhi thi ki wo old devil uske peeche aa rha hai ya nhi. chhadm-amarata ka anubhav karane ke baad, vikram jaanata tha ki use vaastav mein kya karana hai.

svarg rakshak palace vartamaan samay mein ek avishvasaneey roop se shaktishaali vansh tha. us yug mein jab black dragon king - ek peerless master - abhee bhee jeevit tha, koi bhee unki in 9 world mein brabri nahin kar sakata tha. unhen teen pooree peedhiyon ke lie sammaanit kiya gaya tha!

bhale hee wo tees hazaar saal se laapata hai, lekin svarg rakshak palace abhi bhi iss domain mein ahankaarporn roop se khada tha.

is samay, terah varsh ki aayu ke aaspaas ka ek yuva ladaka, teen sunahare daanton vaala ek boodha vayakti k saath svarg rakshak palace ke baahar khada tha.

Mahal ke baaharee shahar ki paridhi se pare, Vikram ne phusaphusaate hue aupachaarik dhan (money) jalaaya: "little blackdragon, aapako chinta karne ki zaroorat nahin hai. Aapane mujhe mera shareer, mera jeevan ko vaapas paane mein meri madad ki hai. ek din, main aapke liye usse badala lene ke lie dusht bhoomi ko nasht kar doonga. ”

samaaroh samaapt hone ke baad, Vikram ne apne saamane swarg protector palace ko dekha. drshya abhi bhi vahee tha, lekin wo log ab vahaan nahin the; sab kuchh videshi ho gaya tha.

Vikram ko little black dragon ke saath bitaye puraane dinon ki yaad aa gyi. unke prayaason ke maadhyam se jameen se is shahar ke nirmaan ki smrti uske dimaag mein taaja thi.

Durbhaagy se, tees hajaar saal baad logon ko dark crow ki yaad nahin aayi.

"ab hume Cleansing incense praacheen sampradaay mein vaapas jana chahiye." boodhe vyakti ne Vikram par nazar daalee aur apane teen chamakadaar sunahare daanton ka khulaasa karate hue apane uddeshy ko bataaya. "ab chalen."

Vikram ne shaanti se apana sir hilaaya. koi phark nahin padata ki yah boodha vyakti kitana shaanadaar ya rahasyamay hai, usakee utpatti Vikram ko aashcharyachakit nahin kar sakatee hai. Vikram ne anaginat kathinaiyon ka anubhav kiya tha aur unaki aatma laakhon varshon se dark crow ke andar phansee huee thee.

Kai yugose vah amar samraaton ke saath kandhe se kandha milaakar chala aur Alchemy God ke saath dost ban gaya, isliye vaastav mein use kya aashchary ho sakata hai?

jab ve ja rahe the, ek behad khoobasoorat ladaki ne mahal se baahar kadam rakha.

Wo ladki svarg ke ek svargadoot, ek anay devi ki tarah thi. Jis waqt vah baahar nikali, usne anajaane mein samaaroh se aag ke avasheshon ke saath-saath uske bagal mein kuchh rahasyamay prateekon ko dekha.

in prateekon ko dekhane ke baad, usakee abhivyakti bahut badal gaee: "abhee yahaan samaaroh kaun kar raha tha?"

paas mein ek boodha naukar turant jaanakaaree lene ke lie idhar-udhar gaya aur parinaamon ke saath vaapas aaya: “shahar ke paharedaaron ka kahana hai ki ek boodha aadamee aur terah saal ki umr ka ek yuva ladaka abhi yahaan the. ve dono hi samaarohapoorvak paisa jala rahe the. ”

ladai ne apana aadesh jaaree kiya: "unaka peechha karo aur unhen turant dhoondho."

"aapaki maharani abhi bhagavaan ke parvat par jaane vaali hai." boodha naukar hichakichaaya.

devi ne dheere se chillaaya: "unhen dhoondho!" usaka shareer tab gaayab ho gaya jab usane donon ko khojane ke lie antariksh mein udaan bharee.

ant mein, vah unhen dhoondh nahin pa rahee thee. vah khoj ke baad mahal mein vaapas laut aayi.

aag ke bagal ke prateek usake dimag mein baar baar aa rahe the. ye prateek lambe samay se dikhaee nahin de rahe the, to aisa kaun tha jo ki hajaaron saal baad baaharee ilaakon mein dikhaee dia? ve dost the ya dushman?

Abhi k liye itna hi..................

 

[Naik]

Chapter 01 – Old Devil (1)

Update -1

"ba ba ... ba ba ... ba ba ..."

aamataur par shaant parvat shrrnkhala mein ek yuva charavaahe kee bheden rotee theen.

thandee raat ki hava ke saath usake shareer ke khilaaph hinsak udaane ke saath vikram ek chattaan ke sheersh par reng gya.

unaka shareer vartamaan mein paseene se bheeg gaya tha. 13 saal ki umr mein, Vikram jaisa ek chhota ladaka is parvat shrrnkhala par chadhane ke lie apanee saaree shakti ka upayog kar raha tha - raat ke aakaash mein yah drshy kisee ko bhee chakit kar deta tha.

yadyapi raat shaant thee, Vikram ke man mein anishchitata kee jvaala se peeda ho rahee thee. ek gareeb parivaar se aane vaale, unke maata-pita donon kisaan the.

saat saal kee umr mein, unhonne ek charavaahe ke roop mein apana jeevan shuroo kiya.

aaj, unhonne apane dainik kaaryon ko poora kar liya tha. haalaanki, subah ke drshtikon ke dauraan, unhonne dekha ki vah apanee agranee bhed ko yaad kar rahe the.

chinta se bharate hue, vah ise khojane ke lie parvat shrrnkhala mein vaapas chala gaya.

sampoorn parvat shrrnkhala ko chhaan-been karane ke baad, vah abhee bhee is bhed kee chhaaya nahin pa raha tha.

laapata bhed aur uske dusht maalik, Digvijay ke baare mein sochakar, Vikram ne usake dil mein sabase bura hone kee aashanka jataee.

achaanak, Vikram ne ek jagah ke baare mein socha jahaan bhed ho sakatee hai. keval ek hee sthaan tha jo unhonne khoja nahin tha - amar daanav groto!

jaisa ki unhonne usase pahale amar daanav grotto kee or dekha, unhonne dekha ki andheree raat mein parvat shrrnkhala praacheen desolet yug se ek bhayankar jaanavar ke samaan thee; isaka munh maanav maans ka bhookha hota hua dikhaee de raha tha.

apane chaaron or se bhediyon kee haul sunakar, vah madad nahin kar sakata, lekin dar mein kaamp gaya.

immortal daanav groto ko aasapaas ke kshetr mein ek shaapit bhoomi maana jaata tha. kinvadantee hai ki ek dusht daanav ne is sthaan kee adhyakshata kee, ek daanav jisane turant kisee bhee atichaar ka sevan kiya.

kisee ne bhee ise gupha ke baahar jeevit nahin kiya tha. is samay, Vikram ke kaanon mein Digvijay ke kode kee aavaaj goonj uthee.

yadi Vikram ne vaastav mein bhedon ko kho diya, to Digvijay nishchit roop se apane maans ko baaghon ko maar denge.

Is bindu par pahunchane ke baad, Vikram ne apane daant pees lie aur gupha ke paas pahunche. raat mein usaka shav gaayab ho gaya. "aaaaaaaahhhhh ...!" ek yuva ladake kee dayaneey cheekh se shaant raat baadhit huee.

aaj k liye itna hi (Total words 2461)

Shaandaar shuruwat dost

 

[Naik]

Chapter 01 – Old Devil (1)

Update -2

Vikram ki bhayabheet aavaaz ek baar phir se sunaee di: “aap, aap, aap kya chaahate hain? … aah…! ”

Achaanak cheekh-pukaar tham gayi.

kuchh samay baad anajaanee daanav groto kee gaharaee par ek maun chuppi chaa gyi, jo ki ek agyat aavaaj se toot gaee: “achchha, achchha, achchha! mera amar dark crow (kaal kauva) aakhirakaar poora ho gaya hai.

"foovosh ... favvosh ... favvosh!" ek kshan baad, ek ajeeb, kaala kauva amar daanav groto se ud gaya. “udo, udo, udo! main tumhaari aatma ka upayog sabhee forbidden burrials ko khojane ke liye karoonga.

sabhi bhoomi ke paar udo! jab tak nau sansaaron ka astitv hai, main tumhen phir se pa loonga! ” amar daanav groto kee gaharaee se, ek bhaaree aavaaj, ek baar phir se baahar aaee aur hava mein uchhal gaee.

Tab se, is svarg aur prthvee par, ek daark crow un planes k upar udata rha.

Svarg k shaharon se sabase khataranaak pahunch aur gupt kshetron tak, yah bina kisi kathnayi ke udaan bharta rha.

Jaise-jaise samay beeta, laakhon saal aaye aur gaye. Ek naya guru uthega har baar dusre k girne prr.

Dheere-dheere, kauva baad mein gaayab ho gya. Yeh apne maalik se bachana chaahata tha, yah apane jeevan ka ek uddeshy khojana chaahata tha.

Bhagavaan se amar samraat tak, … sabhee tarah se black dragon king tak.In paraganon mein se pratyek ke peechhe ek kauva kee chhaaya rahatee hai, jo ki aajaadee paane ke lie sangharsh karata hai.

jaise hee ye sabase majaboot praanee aae aur chale gae, kauva rahasyamay tareeke se samay kee nadee ke roop mein prakat hota raha.

kauva apane bhaagy ko niyantrit karane ke lie taiyaar nahin tha. yah is duniya mein sabase bhayaavah charitr ka virodh karana chaahata tha.

aur ab, kaee yugon ke beetane ke saath laakhon saal beet gae hain ...

Vikram, jo ek nadee mein tair raha tha, ek vyakti dvaara achaanak baahar nikaala gaya tha.

"aaa!" jaise hee use ghaseeta gaya, Vikram achaanak jaag gaya.

Usakee pahalee pratikriya koodana tha kyonki vah apane shareer se aparichit tha. Apane pairon ko khojane mein asamarth, vah lagabhag jameen par gir gaya.

"aah, mera shareer!" neeche dekhane aur yah dekhane ke lie ki usaka shareer ek jaisa kaise raha, Vikram bhut daree huee thee.

hajaaron laharon aur havaon ke khilaaph ladate hue sangharsh ke baad bhee, daark Crow Vikram apane svayan ke shareer ko punah praapt karane ke baad bhi apanee bhaavanaon ko shaamil nahin kar saka.

ek gaharee saans lete hue, usane apana sir utha liya aur paaya ki ek boodha vyakti usake saamane tha.

"hehe, yah vah boodha vyakti hai jisane aapako kayaamat se bachaaya hai." boodhe vyakti ne jor se hansate hue apane teen shesh peele daanton ka khulaasa kiya.

unki ninda ne doosaron ko yah mahasoos karaaya ki unkee muskaan bahut hee bhayaavah thee.

Abhi k liye itna hi (ye update aapko thoda confuse krr skta hai jo ki aane wale kuch updates mein clear ho jayega. Bss ye samajhiye aane wale kuch ypdates ka ye ek chota sa mixture ya precap tha)

Shaandaar update dost

 

[Naik]

Chapter 01 – Old Devil (1)

Update -3

Vikram jo abhi nadi se nikala gya tha us bodhee aadmi dawara, apne pichle jeevan ko yaad krne laga.

Use ache se yaad tha ki wo apne bhedo ko dekhne k liye parvat prr gaya tha uss digvijay k darr se lekin waha jaane k baad kya hua ye use kuch yaad nhi tha.

Yaad thi to bass apni ek cheenkh……

Vikram wahi prr zameen pr baith gaya aur dhyan krne laga. Jaise jaise wo dhyan krta gya use apa pichla jeevan yaad aa gya aur usne jhatt se apni aankhein khol di.

Vikram ki aankhen teji se thandee ho gayi theen aur usakee aabha kuchh aisi thee jo ki ek terah saal ka bachcha baahar nahin nikal sakata tha.

Vikram ne ek gaharee saans lee aur phir boodhe vyakti ko dekha.

Thodee der ke baad, Vikram ne antatah poochha: "mujhe aapako, boodhe aadamee ko kaise sambodhit karana chaahie?"

"saphaee dhoop praacheen sampradaay, Old Devil." boodhe vyakti ne apane munh se javaab diya, abhee bhee muskuraate hue aur har jagah thookate hue apane teen sunahare daant dikhane laga.

"saphaee dhoop praacheen sampradaay ..." Vikram apani saans ke tahat phusaphusae. Is naam ne unake dimaag mein seelband yaaden taaja kar deen.

Ye yaaden us samay se ki theen jab wo dark crow ke shareer mein kaid tha.

Vikram ne boodhe vyakti se poochha: "abhee, kisake paas svarg kee ichchha hai?"

vriddh vyakti abhee bhee muskura raha tha aur usane uttar diya: "svarg kee ichchha? abhi, is yug mein koi bhi vyakti svarg kee ichchha ko poora karane mein saksham nahin hai.

"amar samraat kahaan hai?" boodhe vyakti kee pratikriya sunane ke baad, Vikram kee chinta gahara gayi. vah kab se so raha tha? sau hajaar saal se adhik?

"amar samraat tees hazaar varshon se laapata hai." Vriddh vayakti ne uttar dya.

Vikram ne ek baar phir boodhe vyakti se poochha: "svarg rakshak dragon king ke baare mein kya pata hai?"

"koi nahin jaanata. Black dragon king usi samay amar samraat k saath laapata ho gaya tha. " boodhe shaitaan ne apana sir hila diya.

yah sunakar Vikram ki abhivyakti mein bhaaree badalaav aaya. usne amar daanav paravat ko phir se dekha aur ant mein samajha ki unhonne apane shareer ko kyon vaapas pa liya.

"ab chalen." ek dukhee abhivyakti ke saath, vikram ghoom gae aur door chalana shuroo kar diya.

Abhi k liye itna hi................

Ha kuch kuch dekhte kia hota h