Fantasy Emperor's Domination
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For New Story ankuraggarपहला अपडेट और प्रोलॉग
एक छोटे बच्चे विक्रम के पहाड़ों पर भेड़ चराने से कहानी की शुरुआत होती है, वो एक भेड़ को ढूंढ रहा है जो कि दुष्ट मालिक दिग्विजय की है...!!!
ढूंढते ढूंढते वो एक गुफा के पास पहुचता है जो कि एक शापित जमीन पर थी
आगे देखते हैं क्या होगा विक्रम के साथ...
Note : - Apki English Padne me kafi kathinai ka samnaa krna pd rha h,
thoda achhe se word ko likhe to hm jaise noob logo ka bhlaa ho
Guys.. sorry for delay. Actually Mai job krta hu aur is wajah se update nhi de paya hu... Lekin her Sunday abhi update aayega aur do update aayenge..
Aur saath hi kuch readers ka kehna hai ki Meri story mein Kya likha hai English mein samajh no as RHA hai to aap sb bataye ki Hindi mein continue krru Mai ye English mein hi.
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Aur saath hi kuch readers ka kehna hai ki Meri story mein Kya likha hai English mein samajh no as RHA hai to aap sb bataye ki Hindi mein continue krru Mai ye English mein hi.
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words kuch jyada hard ho rahe hai...normal world ka use kare...yadayapi ke jagah koi aur prayayvachi sabad use kare..
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Chapter 01 – Old Devil (1)
Update -2
Vikram ki bhayabheet aavaaz ek baar phir se sunaee di: “aap, aap, aap kya chaahate hain? … aah…! ”
Achaanak cheekh-pukaar tham gayi.
kuchh samay baad anajaanee daanav groto kee gaharaee par ek maun chuppi chaa gyi, jo ki ek agyat aavaaj se toot gaee: “achchha, achchha, achchha! mera amar dark crow (kaal kauva) aakhirakaar poora ho gaya hai.
"foovosh ... favvosh ... favvosh!" ek kshan baad, ek ajeeb, kaala kauva amar daanav groto se ud gaya. “udo, udo, udo! main tumhaari aatma ka upayog sabhee forbidden burrials ko khojane ke liye karoonga.
sabhi bhoomi ke paar udo! jab tak nau sansaaron ka astitv hai, main tumhen phir se pa loonga! ” amar daanav groto kee gaharaee se, ek bhaaree aavaaj, ek baar phir se baahar aaee aur hava mein uchhal gaee.
Tab se, is svarg aur prthvee par, ek daark crow un planes k upar udata rha.
Svarg k shaharon se sabase khataranaak pahunch aur gupt kshetron tak, yah bina kisi kathnayi ke udaan bharta rha.
Jaise-jaise samay beeta, laakhon saal aaye aur gaye. Ek naya guru uthega har baar dusre k girne prr.
Dheere-dheere, kauva baad mein gaayab ho gya. Yeh apne maalik se bachana chaahata tha, yah apane jeevan ka ek uddeshy khojana chaahata tha.
Bhagavaan se amar samraat tak, … sabhee tarah se black dragon king tak.In paraganon mein se pratyek ke peechhe ek kauva kee chhaaya rahatee hai, jo ki aajaadee paane ke lie sangharsh karata hai.
jaise hee ye sabase majaboot praanee aae aur chale gae, kauva rahasyamay tareeke se samay kee nadee ke roop mein prakat hota raha.
kauva apane bhaagy ko niyantrit karane ke lie taiyaar nahin tha. yah is duniya mein sabase bhayaavah charitr ka virodh karana chaahata tha.
aur ab, kaee yugon ke beetane ke saath laakhon saal beet gae hain ...
Vikram, jo ek nadee mein tair raha tha, ek vyakti dvaara achaanak baahar nikaala gaya tha.
"aaa!" jaise hee use ghaseeta gaya, Vikram achaanak jaag gaya.
Usakee pahalee pratikriya koodana tha kyonki vah apane shareer se aparichit tha. Apane pairon ko khojane mein asamarth, vah lagabhag jameen par gir gaya.
"aah, mera shareer!" neeche dekhane aur yah dekhane ke lie ki usaka shareer ek jaisa kaise raha, Vikram bhut daree huee thee.
hajaaron laharon aur havaon ke khilaaph ladate hue sangharsh ke baad bhee, daark Crow Vikram apane svayan ke shareer ko punah praapt karane ke baad bhi apanee bhaavanaon ko shaamil nahin kar saka.
ek gaharee saans lete hue, usane apana sir utha liya aur paaya ki ek boodha vyakti usake saamane tha.
"hehe, yah vah boodha vyakti hai jisane aapako kayaamat se bachaaya hai." boodhe vyakti ne jor se hansate hue apane teen shesh peele daanton ka khulaasa kiya.
unki ninda ne doosaron ko yah mahasoos karaaya ki unkee muskaan bahut hee bhayaavah thee.
Abhi k liye itna hi (ye update aapko thoda confuse krr skta hai jo ki aane wale kuch updates mein clear ho jayega. Bss ye samajhiye aane wale kuch ypdates ka ye ek chota sa mixture ya precap tha)
Update -2
Vikram ki bhayabheet aavaaz ek baar phir se sunaee di: “aap, aap, aap kya chaahate hain? … aah…! ”
Achaanak cheekh-pukaar tham gayi.
kuchh samay baad anajaanee daanav groto kee gaharaee par ek maun chuppi chaa gyi, jo ki ek agyat aavaaj se toot gaee: “achchha, achchha, achchha! mera amar dark crow (kaal kauva) aakhirakaar poora ho gaya hai.
"foovosh ... favvosh ... favvosh!" ek kshan baad, ek ajeeb, kaala kauva amar daanav groto se ud gaya. “udo, udo, udo! main tumhaari aatma ka upayog sabhee forbidden burrials ko khojane ke liye karoonga.
sabhi bhoomi ke paar udo! jab tak nau sansaaron ka astitv hai, main tumhen phir se pa loonga! ” amar daanav groto kee gaharaee se, ek bhaaree aavaaj, ek baar phir se baahar aaee aur hava mein uchhal gaee.
Tab se, is svarg aur prthvee par, ek daark crow un planes k upar udata rha.
Svarg k shaharon se sabase khataranaak pahunch aur gupt kshetron tak, yah bina kisi kathnayi ke udaan bharta rha.
Jaise-jaise samay beeta, laakhon saal aaye aur gaye. Ek naya guru uthega har baar dusre k girne prr.
Dheere-dheere, kauva baad mein gaayab ho gya. Yeh apne maalik se bachana chaahata tha, yah apane jeevan ka ek uddeshy khojana chaahata tha.
Bhagavaan se amar samraat tak, … sabhee tarah se black dragon king tak.In paraganon mein se pratyek ke peechhe ek kauva kee chhaaya rahatee hai, jo ki aajaadee paane ke lie sangharsh karata hai.
jaise hee ye sabase majaboot praanee aae aur chale gae, kauva rahasyamay tareeke se samay kee nadee ke roop mein prakat hota raha.
kauva apane bhaagy ko niyantrit karane ke lie taiyaar nahin tha. yah is duniya mein sabase bhayaavah charitr ka virodh karana chaahata tha.
aur ab, kaee yugon ke beetane ke saath laakhon saal beet gae hain ...
Vikram, jo ek nadee mein tair raha tha, ek vyakti dvaara achaanak baahar nikaala gaya tha.
"aaa!" jaise hee use ghaseeta gaya, Vikram achaanak jaag gaya.
Usakee pahalee pratikriya koodana tha kyonki vah apane shareer se aparichit tha. Apane pairon ko khojane mein asamarth, vah lagabhag jameen par gir gaya.
"aah, mera shareer!" neeche dekhane aur yah dekhane ke lie ki usaka shareer ek jaisa kaise raha, Vikram bhut daree huee thee.
hajaaron laharon aur havaon ke khilaaph ladate hue sangharsh ke baad bhee, daark Crow Vikram apane svayan ke shareer ko punah praapt karane ke baad bhi apanee bhaavanaon ko shaamil nahin kar saka.
ek gaharee saans lete hue, usane apana sir utha liya aur paaya ki ek boodha vyakti usake saamane tha.
"hehe, yah vah boodha vyakti hai jisane aapako kayaamat se bachaaya hai." boodhe vyakti ne jor se hansate hue apane teen shesh peele daanton ka khulaasa kiya.
unki ninda ne doosaron ko yah mahasoos karaaya ki unkee muskaan bahut hee bhayaavah thee.
Abhi k liye itna hi (ye update aapko thoda confuse krr skta hai jo ki aane wale kuch updates mein clear ho jayega. Bss ye samajhiye aane wale kuch ypdates ka ye ek chota sa mixture ya precap tha)
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Chapter 01 – Old Devil (1)
Update -3
Vikram jo abhi nadi se nikala gya tha us bodhee aadmi dawara, apne pichle jeevan ko yaad krne laga.
Use ache se yaad tha ki wo apne bhedo ko dekhne k liye parvat prr gaya tha uss digvijay k darr se lekin waha jaane k baad kya hua ye use kuch yaad nhi tha.
Yaad thi to bass apni ek cheenkh……
Vikram wahi prr zameen pr baith gaya aur dhyan krne laga. Jaise jaise wo dhyan krta gya use apa pichla jeevan yaad aa gya aur usne jhatt se apni aankhein khol di.
Vikram ki aankhen teji se thandee ho gayi theen aur usakee aabha kuchh aisi thee jo ki ek terah saal ka bachcha baahar nahin nikal sakata tha.
Vikram ne ek gaharee saans lee aur phir boodhe vyakti ko dekha.
Thodee der ke baad, Vikram ne antatah poochha: "mujhe aapako, boodhe aadamee ko kaise sambodhit karana chaahie?"
"saphaee dhoop praacheen sampradaay, Old Devil." boodhe vyakti ne apane munh se javaab diya, abhee bhee muskuraate hue aur har jagah thookate hue apane teen sunahare daant dikhane laga.
"saphaee dhoop praacheen sampradaay ..." Vikram apani saans ke tahat phusaphusae. Is naam ne unake dimaag mein seelband yaaden taaja kar deen.
Ye yaaden us samay se ki theen jab wo dark crow ke shareer mein kaid tha.
Vikram ne boodhe vyakti se poochha: "abhee, kisake paas svarg kee ichchha hai?"
vriddh vyakti abhee bhee muskura raha tha aur usane uttar diya: "svarg kee ichchha? abhi, is yug mein koi bhi vyakti svarg kee ichchha ko poora karane mein saksham nahin hai.
"amar samraat kahaan hai?" boodhe vyakti kee pratikriya sunane ke baad, Vikram kee chinta gahara gayi. vah kab se so raha tha? sau hajaar saal se adhik?
"amar samraat tees hazaar varshon se laapata hai." Vriddh vayakti ne uttar dya.
Vikram ne ek baar phir boodhe vyakti se poochha: "svarg rakshak dragon king ke baare mein kya pata hai?"
"koi nahin jaanata. Black dragon king usi samay amar samraat k saath laapata ho gaya tha. " boodhe shaitaan ne apana sir hila diya.
yah sunakar Vikram ki abhivyakti mein bhaaree badalaav aaya. usne amar daanav paravat ko phir se dekha aur ant mein samajha ki unhonne apane shareer ko kyon vaapas pa liya.
"ab chalen." ek dukhee abhivyakti ke saath, vikram ghoom gae aur door chalana shuroo kar diya.
Abhi k liye itna hi................
Update -3
Vikram jo abhi nadi se nikala gya tha us bodhee aadmi dawara, apne pichle jeevan ko yaad krne laga.
Use ache se yaad tha ki wo apne bhedo ko dekhne k liye parvat prr gaya tha uss digvijay k darr se lekin waha jaane k baad kya hua ye use kuch yaad nhi tha.
Yaad thi to bass apni ek cheenkh……
Vikram wahi prr zameen pr baith gaya aur dhyan krne laga. Jaise jaise wo dhyan krta gya use apa pichla jeevan yaad aa gya aur usne jhatt se apni aankhein khol di.
Vikram ki aankhen teji se thandee ho gayi theen aur usakee aabha kuchh aisi thee jo ki ek terah saal ka bachcha baahar nahin nikal sakata tha.
Vikram ne ek gaharee saans lee aur phir boodhe vyakti ko dekha.
Thodee der ke baad, Vikram ne antatah poochha: "mujhe aapako, boodhe aadamee ko kaise sambodhit karana chaahie?"
"saphaee dhoop praacheen sampradaay, Old Devil." boodhe vyakti ne apane munh se javaab diya, abhee bhee muskuraate hue aur har jagah thookate hue apane teen sunahare daant dikhane laga.
"saphaee dhoop praacheen sampradaay ..." Vikram apani saans ke tahat phusaphusae. Is naam ne unake dimaag mein seelband yaaden taaja kar deen.
Ye yaaden us samay se ki theen jab wo dark crow ke shareer mein kaid tha.
Vikram ne boodhe vyakti se poochha: "abhee, kisake paas svarg kee ichchha hai?"
vriddh vyakti abhee bhee muskura raha tha aur usane uttar diya: "svarg kee ichchha? abhi, is yug mein koi bhi vyakti svarg kee ichchha ko poora karane mein saksham nahin hai.
"amar samraat kahaan hai?" boodhe vyakti kee pratikriya sunane ke baad, Vikram kee chinta gahara gayi. vah kab se so raha tha? sau hajaar saal se adhik?
"amar samraat tees hazaar varshon se laapata hai." Vriddh vayakti ne uttar dya.
Vikram ne ek baar phir boodhe vyakti se poochha: "svarg rakshak dragon king ke baare mein kya pata hai?"
"koi nahin jaanata. Black dragon king usi samay amar samraat k saath laapata ho gaya tha. " boodhe shaitaan ne apana sir hila diya.
yah sunakar Vikram ki abhivyakti mein bhaaree badalaav aaya. usne amar daanav paravat ko phir se dekha aur ant mein samajha ki unhonne apane shareer ko kyon vaapas pa liya.
"ab chalen." ek dukhee abhivyakti ke saath, vikram ghoom gae aur door chalana shuroo kar diya.
Abhi k liye itna hi................
umeed hai iss update mein aapko apne kuch pichle update se aaye sawalo k jawab mil gaye honge....
So enjoy.... and keep supporting
So enjoy.... and keep supporting