Riya20
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Fantasy Fighting For Love(kahani itihas ke sabse takatwar shisya ki)
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Bahut achcha update tha Riya jii.....but itni training ke baad bhi riyansh ko bevkufo jaisa treat karna achcha nhi lg rha uske andar thodi confidence show kijiye kyoki ab bhi usme 1st update jaisi bevkufi dikh rhi Jo achchi nhi lgi mujhe.......
Sab theek hai bas kahani ki raftaar thodi tej kardo toh achchha hoga.
Arjun Singh 72
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nice update
lakin last main Riya ke sath Kya hua samaj nahi aaya
lakin last main Riya ke sath Kya hua samaj nahi aaya
Riya20
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Thnx for your beautiful review and suggestion..
Aapne jo riyansh ki bevkufi ko lekar baat kahi usse mea bilkul shemat hu..
Par mea abi riyansh ko full confidence mea ni dikha sakti..
Uski 2 wajha hea..
Ek ki abi tak jitni b choti moti fights hui hea..
Har baar uske level badenge..
Or agar abi se riyansh sab samajne ki kabiliyat aagayi toa bachkani harkate mea dhikana chahti hu wo ni ho payega..
2nd abi tak jo martial arts ki duniya riyansh ne dekhi hea wo toa beginners se b pehle wali duniya hea..
Martial arts ko pura form jab riyansh ke saamne aayega tab uski kya koi b normal bande ki fatni chahiye..
Isliye bas hero ko dhire dhire kar confidence dene ka socha hea..
Plus riyansh ek common man he without any talent..
Or jis raaste pe wo chal raha he waha sirf or sirf usse usse behtar log he milenge..
Isliye riyansh ka b dhire dhire aage badna jaruri hea..
Acha lagga ki aap ko story achi lag rahi hea keep supporting..
Riya20
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Thnx everyone for your beautiful reviews..
Story speed b kuch dino mea tez hojayegi..
Till then keep supporting like this only..
Riya20
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Thnx for your review..
Agar mea sahi hu toa riya behaviour achanak change hona aapko samaj nai aaya..
Agar aisa hea toa..
Ye ek common baat he ladki ka naraz yaa dhuki hona..
Jab kabi koi unhe badsurat yaa rakshas chudail aise pukare..
Or yaha rajan toa dar ke mare riya ko rakshas bol raha tha..
Jaise usne sahi mea rakshas dhek liya ho..
Qki akeli ladki 9 pe bhari jo padi thi..
Bas riya isliye achanak rone laggi wo baat..
Or riyansh khush isliye tha isse qki..
Riya ka jo background hea..
Usse riya thodi alag hea..
Or story ka ahem hissa b riya ke upar he depend karta hea..
Or wo kaise or q toa wo aage pata chalega..
Sry mere narration mea kahi kami rah gayi isliye aap samaj nai paaye..
Aagese dyan rakhungi is baat ka..
Keep supporting like this only..
Naina
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Hmmm... yeaha to heroin hi, hero ko bachati fir rahi villain se....
Btw brilliant update....
Btw brilliant update....