Fantasy Fighting For Love(kahani itihas ke sabse takatwar shisya ki)

[Indrajeet]

Thnx for your beautiful review and suggestion..
Aapne jo riyansh ki bevkufi ko lekar baat kahi usse mea bilkul shemat hu..
Par mea abi riyansh ko full confidence mea ni dikha sakti..
Uski 2 wajha hea..
Ek ki abi tak jitni b choti moti fights hui hea..
Har baar uske level badenge..
Or agar abi se riyansh sab samajne ki kabiliyat aagayi toa bachkani harkate mea dhikana chahti hu wo ni ho payega..

2nd abi tak jo martial arts ki duniya riyansh ne dekhi hea wo toa beginners se b pehle wali duniya hea..
Martial arts ko pura form jab riyansh ke saamne aayega tab uski kya koi b normal bande ki fatni chahiye..
Isliye bas hero ko dhire dhire kar confidence dene ka socha hea..

Plus riyansh ek common man he without any talent..
Or jis raaste pe wo chal raha he waha sirf or sirf usse usse behtar log he milenge..
Isliye riyansh ka b dhire dhire aage badna jaruri hea..
Acha lagga ki aap ko story achi lag rahi hea keep supporting..

Vaise aapse puchna tha ki aapko martial arts ki itni knowledge kaise h ? Actually mujhe martial arts sikhna tha isliye aapse puch rha

 

[ʜeisenberg]

badiya

 

[crazyrex]

And a good fight with rajan
Very nice and fantastic update

 

[Scorpionking]

Shaandaar update riyaji maza aagaya padke Riya ka chidana bahut hi accha Laga .

 

[Reza]

Nice update bro...
Waiting for next

 

[Riya20]

Hmmm... yeaha to heroin hi, hero ko bachati fir rahi villain se....
Btw brilliant update....

Thnx for your review..
N aapne jo baat kahi usse muje wo pal yaad aagaya jab mene ye story likhne ka decision liya tha..
Mea female centric story likhna chahti thi..
And plot b waisa he banaya..
Par kuch soch kar usme mene usse re edit kiya..
N jo feelings ab riyansh dhire dhire show karega usse padkar maja jaroor aayega..
Tab tak riya rahegi riyansh ke sath..
Keep supporting like this only..

 

[COSMO]

Riya ji aap bahut achha likh rahi hai.padh kar maza aata hai. Urvi aur riyansh ke bich fight ka intajar hai.

 

[Riya20]

Vaise aapse puchna tha ki aapko martial arts ki itni knowledge kaise h ? Actually mujhe martial arts sikhna tha isliye aapse puch rha

Martial arts ka knowledge toa muje 2 reason ke wajase hea..
1st mene khud 6 saal taekwando karatte shikha tha..
2nd ye story ka plot jisne muje apne taraf khicha..
Ye stoey kuch had tak korean based series par hea..
Mene bass issme apne man mutabik changes kiye hea..
N if aap Martial arts shikna chahte ho toa..
I guess aapko apne waha dhundne chahiye classes..
Bcz mene martial arts goa Panjim mea kari thi..

 

[Indrajeet]

Martial arts ka knowledge toa muje 2 reason ke wajase hea..
1st mene khud 6 saal taekwando karatte shikha tha..
2nd ye story ka plot jisne muje apne taraf khicha..
Ye stoey kuch had tak korean based series par hea..
Mene bass issme apne man mutabik changes kiye hea..
N if aap Martial arts shikna chahte ho toa..
I guess aapko apne waha dhundne chahiye classes..
Bcz mene martial arts goa Panjim mea kari thi..

Thanks for your precious suggestion..

 

[Riya20]

badiya

And a good fight with rajan
Very nice and fantastic update

Shaandaar update riyaji maza aagaya padke Riya ka chidana bahut hi accha Laga .

Nice update bro...
Waiting for next

Thnx everyone for your beautiful reviews..
Acha lagga ki aapsabi ko story achi lagrahi hea..
Keep supporting like this only..