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riyansh ne to saagar ko aline naam diya hi tha, ab Alisha bhi ushe aline samajhne lagi...
but, jo bhi ho.. Ye saagar sach me chalak hai... jaha hero apne dushmano ke basic fighting skill bhi nahi janta, wohi saagar unke pure ke pure biodata, riyansh ke samne kholke rakh diya...
Kabhi kabhi... to esi feeling ati hai ki.... saagar riyansh ko help kar raha hai... aur joh woh riyansh ke samne banke dikhata hai... reality me yesa nahi hai.... ab is baat kitni sachchai hai ye ane wale updates hi batayenge... khair khafi funny update thi....
Btw brilliant update mam
Bahut hi khub surat update
Nice one waiting next
Thnx for your beautiful reviews..Superb update bro...
Waiting for next
Thnx for your review..Bahut bhadia update hai riya jii.
Thnx for your beautiful review..very nice update
keep posting jabardast like it
Same hereMam bura mat manna.... Pr story mai ab kuch maza nhi aa rha ..... Esa lg rha h ki story ek hi jagah pr ruk gyi h.... Aage hi nhi bad rhi h.....na kuch action, na hi suspense, na hi thrill or na hi comedy.... Esa lag rha hi ki aap ek hi baat ko lamba khichte ja rhe ho.... Apki story ka plot bhut acha h.... Pr mujhe esa lag rha h ki aap unnecessary baato ko kuch jyada hi lamba krke update ki length bda rhe ho.... Esa mujhe lgta h baki readers ka pta nhi.... Mai koi writer nhi hu bas jo mujhe lga vo btaya h maine... Sorry mam agr bura lge to