Fantasy Fighting For Love(kahani itihas ke sabse takatwar shisya ki)

[Indrajeet]

Waiting Riya jii. ..

 

[Fighter]

Mast & Gajab update dear

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[Jon123]

Sam ho gayi riya ji waiting for next

 

[Riya20]

UPDATE 27
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Mea or riya dono he bhagte huye rojanpaku ke taraf bad rahe the..

Riya ka toa pata nai par mea apna pura jor lagga rhaa tha doudne mea..
Or aisa sirf 2 he cases mea hota hea..
Pehla jab akisame piche hunter lekar tyre pe bethe ho..
Or muje usse bhagte huye kichne bole tab..
Yaa fir jab mea strategic retreat mode mea hota hu or apne doremon(akisame) ke pass ja raha hota hu..

Or abi b mea akisame ke pass apni problems lekar jaa raha tha..
Taki wo apne dimagh ke pitare mea se iska kuch solution nikale ..

Or kuch der ki doud ke baad ham dono rojanpaku pohach gaye..
Jaha muje thoda thoda pasina aane laga tha..
Or mea apne sasse. Durust karne lagga..
Qki college se ROJANPAKU karib 2 km dur hea..
Wahi riya ko dekh koi aisa bol he ni sakta ki wo 2 km doud ke aayi hea abi..
Na ek boond pasina na he jara si b thakan..
Wo ek dam fresh dhik rahi thi..
Par mera dyan abi uss taraf tha he nai mea toa akisame ko dhundte huye unke kamre ke taraf chal pada..

Wahi mere jate he riya sochne lagi ki..

Chalo acha hea..
Riyansh ke roj ke running practice ke wajase uski running speed pehle ke mukable bohot bad chuki hea..

Wahi meane pura ghar lagbhag chan diya par muje akisame toa chodo koi b master na mila yaha..

Tabi mere kano mea appachi ki awaj aai joki baramde se aarahi thi..
Toa mea b uss taraf chal pada..

Jaha samne ka najara dhek muje meri ankho pe wiswas he ni horaha tha..

Or hota b kaise..
Mere samne appachi sakaki ma kensie or akisame chro mil stone paper khel rahe the..

Par mere chokne ka karan ye ni tha..
Balki jis tarikese wo log khel rahe the..

Let me describe it properly..

Is waqt wo chro circle bana khade the par unke sath waha shigure b thi..
Joki judge thi..

Uske 1 2 3 start bolne par charo ne apne hath hawa me karliye..

Yaha tak toa sab normal he tha..
Par jaise jaise unka hath niche aane laga..
Wo ek dusre ke hath ko dekh apne hath me liya gaya action change kar rahe the..
Wo b itne fast ki koi aam banda dhek b ni pata..
Muje b unke hath ke movements bohot he kam dhik rah the..
Par dhek ke ye smaaj toa aahi raha tha ki..
Wo hath ke action change kar rahe hea..

Or mere chokne ka karan b yahi tha..
Ki yaar mana ki ye sab master level fighters he apne apne art mea..
Par kamino ne stone paper ko b ni chodo..
Matlab yaar aisa kon khelta hea..
Kaha se aate hea aise log..

Abi mea aisi he sare chije soch raha tha..
Tabi is mukable ka result aaya..
Jisme appachi jit gaya tha..
Jisse muje lagne lagga ki appachi ki speed in sabme sabse jada he..
Par aisa ni tha..

Qki baki tino masters ki tarha appachi apna hath na badalte huye..
Is game ko game ki he tarha khel raha tha..
Yaa yuh kahu uske bache jaise dimagh mea ye idea aaya he nai ko wo hath badle..

Tabi appachi ko jita hua dhek sakaki or ma kensie muh fula kar kuch bad badane lagge..

Par mene uss taraf dyan naa dete huye..
Muje apni problem yaad aayi..

Or mea yaha itni badi problem hu..
Or mere ye kamchor masters stone paper khel rahe hea..
Ye sab baate dimagh mea aate he..

Mea un sab par chidte huye bola ki..

Aapka student yaha itni badi problem mea he..
Jiske chalte najane kitne der se mea aapsabi ko dhund raha hu..
Or aap sab dheko yaha game khel rahe ho..
Saram karo saram..

Tabi sakaki jo ki har ke wajase already chid chuke the..
Wo meri baate sun..
Mujse bole ki..

Oye khote..
Kya bak bak kiye ja raha hea..
Tuje kya lagraha he..
Ham yaha khel rahe the..
Abe chilguse..
Ham yaha aaj tumhari training kon karwayega Ye decide kar rahe the..
Jisme pichle 15 dino me pehli baar appachi jita hea..
Or aaj ki training wo karwane wala hea..

Wahi mea sakai ko guse mea dhek thoda dar raha tha..
Par appachi ki training wali baat sun meri phat ke char hogai..
Qki appachi training ke waqt khud ko b bhul jata hea..
Or usse hold back yani khud ki taqat pe kabu rakhna he nai aata hea..

Yea sab baate mene appachi ke sath ki gayi 4-5 baar ki training mea samaj li thi..
Qki in sabi baar mea behosh hua tha wo b buri tarha gayal hokar..

Tabi meane unsabi ko clg mea meri or sagar ki baate batai..
Or ye b ki meri agli fight jinse hone wali he..
Unme ek boxer b hea..

Ye sab baate bate huye mea unse bola ki..

Isliye mea soch raha tha ki..
Abi kuch waqt ke liye q na muje wo training mile jisse mea ek boxer ko hara saku..
Yaa kamse kam mea apne aapko bacha saku usske punches sea..

0ar muje ni pata tha ye last wali baate bol meane apne per pe khul hadi nai balke khul hadi par he per de mara hea..

Samje nai naa..
Chalo samja ta hu..

Meri baate sun akisame kuch sochte huye bole ki..

Riyansh jaisa tum bata rahe ho uss boxer(ankit) ke bareme toa..
Tumhare abi ke level ke hisab se toa tum buri tarha pit jaoge..
Or agar kam tym mea tum boxer se effectively ladna shikna chahte ho toa..
Toa muay thai(kick boxing) he ek effective fighting style hea..
Iske madat se tum uss boxer se na khud ko bacha par usse hara b paoge..

Akisame ki baate sun me 10% khush hua toa appachi ke taraf dhek 90% dhuki..

Muje meri mout ankit se pehle appachi ke hatho hoti najar aarahi thi..
Par ab mea piche b nai hat sakta tha..
Iskeliye man marke upar wale ka naam lete huye mea chal pada apne kapde badal ne..
Training ke liye..

Wahi appachi baramde mea he mera intazar kar raha tha..
Or jab mea uske samne aaya toa..

Appachi ke face par 15 dino baad muje training dene ke khushi saaf jalak rahi thi..

Toa muje b thoda confidence aane lga..
Isliye mene usse pucha ki..

Appachi kya muay thai boxer ke against jit payegi..

Tabi appachi apni bacho wali innocent smile dete huye mujse bola ki..

Ofcourse riyansh..
Muay thai ek killer martial art hea..

Ye baat khete huye appachi ki aankho ki chamak dekh mea apne aap se bola ki..

Mea kitna galat tha appachi ko lekar..
Yaha insabi monsters ko chod yahi ek banda he jisse meri fikar hamesa rehti hea..
Isliye mere liye ek safety locket b laya tha isne(ye appachi ne muje tab diya tha jab mea pehli baar omkar se har kar aaya tha)
Agar mea appachi par ni trust kar sakta toa kisi par kaise karunga??

Yahi sab sochte huye mea appachi se bola ki..

Chalo fir suru karte hea.

Next day mea jab utha toa mere sar me jor ka dard horaha tha..
Or jab mene apne aas pass dheka..
Toa mea apne ass pass ki jagha ko dhek yaad karne ki kosis kar raha tha ki is waqt mea kaha hu..
Qki mea iswaqt apne ghar pe apne room mea ni tha..

Thodi der baad jab sar ka dard kam hua toa yaad aaya ki ye toa rojanpaku mea wahi kamra he jaha mea weekends par ruka karta tha..
Par mea yaha kaise..
Muje toa apne ghar hona chahiye thana..
Ahh..
Or kal training ke waqt se muje kuch yaad nai aaraha..
Ahh mera sar..

Tabi uss kamre ka darwaja khula or waha ek tray mea chai lekar riya andar aai..
Jiske ankho mea fikar saaf dhik rahi thi..

Par mere samne wo normal he rahi..
Or muje 0uchne lagi ki ab tum kaise ho..

Jispar mene usse kaha ki..
Muje kya hua hea..
Mea toa tk hu bas sar dhuk ray..
Or yaar kal training ke waqt se kuch yaad he nai aaraha hea..

Meri baate sun riya chera pila sa pad gaya tha or muje chai thama wo jatse waha se muje niche aane ka bolkar chali gayi..

Mere kamre se nikal te he..
Riya waha se bhagte huye sidha akisame ke pass gayi or unse boli ki..

Bhaiya hame jaldi se riyansh ka complete psychological cheack up karna hoga..

Riya ko achanak yuh tnsn mea dekh or uski baate sun akisame usse bole ki..

Q kya hua..
Mene kal he cheack kiya tha usse koi b chot toa nai lagi thi..

Jispar riya boli ki..

Usse bahari nai par internal chot lagi hea..
Wo b dimagh par sayad..
Isliye usse kal training ke waqt se matlab kal jo kuch b hua usse kuch yaad nai hea..

Jisse sun akisame haste huye bole ki..
Ye toa achi baat heana..
Warna muje laga tha ab uske dil mea training ke liye dar ghar kar jayega..
Par agar uski yaddast chali gayi he toa ye toa kafi achi baat hea..

Jispar riya jor se chillayi..

Bhaiyaa...

Jispar akisame hast huye sry bole or aage kaha ki

Aray mea majak kar raha tha..
Or tumhe tnsn lene ki koi b jarurat ni hea..
Qki mene kal he riyansh ki puri body achese cheack kari thi..
Usspe koi gaav ni hea..
Or kal jo hadsa hua uske wajase uska dil itna jada pump hogaya ki uske brain se wo pal ki yaddast he mithayi hea..
Or ye sab martial arts mea aam baat hea..
Or usse uske health par koi b effect ni hoga..
Tum befikar raho..

Wahi mea kamre se apne training wale kapde pehen bahar aaya toa..
Appachi ko dhundne laga..
Muay thai ki training ke liye..

Or muje training ke liye wo b appachi ko dhund tha dhek akisame khush the toa riya ke man mea kal jo hua usse lekar abi b ek dar sa tha..

Par appachi muje kahi b dhikai nai diya..
Tabi elder ne muje bulaya or mujse kaha ki..
Aaj shubha ki training se tum rest lea lo..
Qki appachi is waqt kisi kaam mea busy hea..
Or tumhe b rest ki jarurat hea..
Isliye ghar ho aao..
Or aage ki training shamko karna..

Elder ki baate toa muje jada samaj ni aayi..

Par mea bina koi sawal kiye ghar ke liye nikal gaya..
Or ye baat ROJANPAKU se nikal te waqt mene varsha ko call kar batadi..
Qki muje ye yaad ni tha ki kal mea ghar par kya bol kar raat yaha ruka tha..

Rojanpaku se ghar jab pohacha toa gate par he dad milgaye muje..
Jinhe dekh mene unhe pehle morning wish kiya sath he..
Ye b pucha ki..

Kya hua dad aaj aap office ni gaye..

Qki amuman is waqt we office mea he hote hea..

Jaha dad ne muje dekhte he muje gale se lagaya..
Or muje cheack karne lage jaise muje kuch hua toa nai..
Unka iss tarike ka vyvahar muje ajib toa laga par mea kuch bola nai..

Tabi dad mujse bole ki..
Beta tu ti heana..
Pata nai kal mera or teri maa ka dil me achanak ek dar sa utha ki tuje kuch ho toa ni gaya..
Upar se kal der raat tak b tu ghar nai aaya toa varsha ne riya ko call kiya qki tera phone b dead aaraha tha..

Tab hame pata chala..
Ki training ki thakan ke wajase tu wahi so gaya hea..
Par beta ye koi tarika toa nai hua ek call toa karna chahiye thana tumhe..
Abi jab varsha ka call aaya ki tum ghar aarahe ho toa mea office ke gate se return ghar aagaya..


Ab mea unhe kya bolta ki muje khud kal ka kuch yaad nai..
Isliye jada kuch nai bolte huye mene unhe aagese aisa nai hoga ye baat kahi or fir ham dono ghar mea aagaye..
Jaha mom ne pehli baar dad ki tarha chinta karte juye muje gale lagaya..

Aisa nai tha ki unhe meri fikar kam thi pehle..
Par mere ghar mea kuch ulta chalta he oro ke ghar se..
Jaha sabki mom jada expressive or fikar mand hoti hea..
Yaha mere dad waise hea..

Par ye sab muje khatak toa jarur raha tha..
Par kya karta yaad karne ki kosis par b kuch yaad ni aaraha tha..
Isliye mene shamko riya se he insab ke bareme puchneka socha..

Fir aise he shamtak mea ghar he raha apne family ke sath..
Dad b office nai gaye the aaj..
Shamko jab mea rojanpaku jane wala tha toa aaj pehli baar mom ne muje roka or kaha..
Aaj ka din ghar he rahu mea..
Or pata nai q aaj mera b man ni tha training ka isliye mene b riya ko call kar batadiya ki mea aaj ni aaraha ab sidha kal shubha he aaunga..
Qki kal clg toa tha nai
Qki kal sunday tha toa muje koi fikar b ni thi..

Fir uss din ka pura waqt mea apne family ke sath bitaya..
Fir raatko ham sab bahar gaye dinner karne ke liye..
Or fir aage kuch khass ni hua..

Aaj ke liye itna he..
Keep supporting..

 

[Riya20]

Nice updates... Keep it up....

Waiting Riya jii. ..

Mast & Gajab update dear

Waiting for next

Sam ho gayi riya ji waiting for next

Thnx for your support guys..
Keep supporting..
New update posted..

 

[Riya20]

Mam bura mat manna.... Pr story mai ab kuch maza nhi aa rha ..... Esa lg rha h ki story ek hi jagah pr ruk gyi h.... Aage hi nhi bad rhi h.....na kuch action, na hi suspense, na hi thrill or na hi comedy.... Esa lag rha hi ki aap ek hi baat ko lamba khichte ja rhe ho.... Apki story ka plot bhut acha h.... Pr mujhe esa lag rha h ki aap unnecessary baato ko kuch jyada hi lamba krke update ki length bda rhe ho.... Esa mujhe lgta h baki readers ka pta nhi.... Mai koi writer nhi hu bas jo mujhe lga vo btaya h maine... Sorry mam agr bura lge to

Same here

Firstly thnx for your comments..
N second aapne jo kaha usme bura maane wali koi baat ni thi..
Qki ek story ko successful yaa yuh kahu ki complete hone ke liye agar praisers ke support ke jarurat hoti hea toa utni he jarurat critics ke support ki b hea..
Or apne jo kuch b kaha usse mea b sehmat hu ki..
Story is part par kuch atak si gayi hea..
Qki ek toa pehle 25 din ka gap fir daily update b ni hea..
Toa story thodi se jada slow hogai hea..
Isi karan mene last update mea kuch parts ko cut shot kar post kiya tha taki ye wala part jald khatam ho..
Aisa ni he ki muje meri writing skills pe koi dought hea bas gaps me story ka maja kam kiya he..
Joki muje khudko bura lag raha hea..
Jisse kam karneke kossis mea khud b kar rahi hu..
Or aapne jo complain ki tgitki trill suspense comedy kam so ho rahi hea..
Hope aaj ka update aapko uss complain ko kuch had tak dur kare..
Qki aapke comment ko padne k3 baad mene iss update mea changes kare the kuch jisse muje thoda waqt lag gaya update post karne mea..
N aise he sath banaye rahiyega..
Keep supporting..

 

[crazyrex]

Very nice update

 

[Arjun Singh 72]

awesome update
akir hua Kaya tha
Jo yaddast chali gai

 

[Indrajeet]

Very nice update Riya jii

 

[COSMO]

Riya ji aapne bahut hi achha update likha hai. Padh kar achha laga. Thanks for a nice update.