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Update 3 : Shopping !


Ab pet bhar ke khana hua he tha aur subah bus me bhi thik se so nahi paya tha to room me aate he bed pe let gya aur vese he so gya .


Shaam ko 6 baje mobile ke ring se nind tut gai , dekha to ghar se pitashree ka call he.

Call attend karne pe unhone puccha kya kar rahe ho ?
Kaha ruke ho ? Sham ka kya plan he ?
etc etc.

Me: Kuchh nahi baba, abhi thoda ghumane jaunga city me aur bahar he kisi restaurant me khana khaunga.


Fresh hone ke baad mast baal set kiye aur mast white shirt aur blue jeans pehen ke nikal pada shopping ke liye .


Room se bahar aake pehle sweety ke room ka door dekha to wo pehle se lock tha.


Ab hotel ke gate se bahar aake pehle ek riksha me beth ke paas wale ATM me le jane ko kaha.


ATM se 20000 nikalke riksha wale ko bazar le chalne ko kaha aur kuch 5 minute me bazar bhi pohonch gaya.


Ab me thehra apne maa baba ka iklouta ladka par joint family hone ke vajah se 2 cousins bhi he to unka bhi sochna padata he.


Ghar me mere maa- baba aur chacha-chachi aise 2 parivaar rehte he.


Ab ghar wale jikra hua he to ek chhota sa intro bhi ho jaye...


Me : Abhishek Arjun Thakur, age 19 ,civil engineering kar raha hu 2nd year me hu.



Maa : Rachana ,
housewife he . Ghar me sabse gussel par sabse jyada pyar karne wali bhi. Inki aur chachi ki acchi banti he.



Baba : Arjun Thakur.
Sindhudurg ki ek namankit Tourist company me manager he.
Ye ek jinda dil insan he ,mere sath bhi ek friend ki tarah rehte he par apne usulo ke pakke bhi he.
And the most important thing maine photography ka shauk inhi se paya he.



Chacha : Vishal Thakur.

Baba ke sath usi tourist company supervisor ka job karte he .
Ye hamesha se mere supporter rahe he , free time me inke sath carom aur shooting khelne me maja aata he. Inki aur chachi ki love marriage hui he.



Chachi : Shweta Thakur.
Ye ek housewife ke sath sath social worker bhi he.
To maa ko bhi apne sath kisi program me le jati he.


Chacha ki beti Shreya : ye abhi 12th pass out he aur aage jakar Bsc karne ka soch rahi he .


2 beta Shivam : ye shreya se 1 saal chhota he aur 11th class me padhata he , ye bhi mere bahot close he, free time me ham dono Jyadatar shooting karne jate he.


Aur ab milte hamare ghar ke sabse purane member se yani hamare ghar se,

Ye ek chhota sa single floor wala bangla he jisme niche ek hall usi se attached dining hall aur kitchen bhi he . Fir maa-baba ka bedroom fir store room, uske baad chacha-chachi ka bedroom ata he.


1st floor pe 4 rooms he jisme me aur Shivam ka ek he room he, shreya ka alag room he ,fir ek storeroom jaha kabad vagaira rakhte he aur ek guestroom he mehmaano ke liye.


1st floor ke bad upar terrace bhi he jaha khane ke bad sab gappe ladate he .


Ghar ke front side ek chhota aangan he sath me baba ki car, meri bike aur shreya ki scooty rakhne ke liye ek shed bhi he.


Ghar ke backside me maa ne ek khubsurat garden banaya he .


OK now back to story, to maine market se family walo ke liye gifts kharidna shuru kiya .


Yaha Aurangabad me shaal vagaira acchi milti he aur maa-baba subah ghumane bhi jate he to unke liye aur chacha-chachi ke liye shaal kharide.


Shreya ke liye ek designer panjabi dress liya. mere liye aur shivam ke jackets liye sath me gloves bhi liye.


In sab me raat ke 8:30 bhi baj chuke the to socha yahi kisi restaurant me khana kha leta hu, to jese he market se bahar nikala to kisi ne sar pe ek chapat lagai.

Pichhe mud ke dekha to koi nahi tha, aage badha to fir ek baar wahi hua par is baar mene chapat marne wale ko dekh liya tha !



Mai - Ha to madam aap jara ye batane ka kasht karenge ke apne hamare sar pe chapat kyu mari?


Aur ispe us ladki ne firse muze Chapat mari aur mera dimag khiska sala na jaan na pehchaan aur ye ladki mare he ja rahi he .


Ladki : Abhishek kutte ,kamine tu Aurangabad aya aur bataya bhi nahi !


Mene us ladki ko thik se dekha to kisi se uski shakal milti julti lag rahi thi, lekin kuch bhi yaad nahi aa raha tha to mene bhi akhir surrender kar diya !


Mai : I'm really sorry madam par me sach me apko pehchaan nahi pa raha hu to please aap he apna parichay de !


To ispe wo jor se hasne lagi aur aaspaas ke log hamari taraf he dekhane lage to mene bhi waha se jana thik samza.


Mai : Suno ham kisi restaurant me chal kar bate karte he yaha bich raste par khade khade bate karne se restaurant me beth ke bate karenge, kya khayal he ?


Ladki : Ha chalo me yaha ka achha restaurant janti hu.


To ham dono pas he ke ek restaurant me gaye aur tab usne bataya wo meri childhood friend Nidhi he ,
aur tab mere bhi dimag ki batti full power se jali ke itne jor se khuleaam hasne wali yahi Nidhi he .


Usne bataya ke 7th ke baad uske papa jo govt. officer he unka promotion hua tha aur wo sath me dusri jagah jane ke order bhi mile the to wo aur unki family yaha Aurangabad aake settle hue the.

Me : Wese ek baat bata mene tuze nahi pehchaana par tu muze kaise ? How ?

Nidhi : Buddhu tere pics dekhe the mene Fb pe, fir tera insta account bhi check kiya mene. Mountain Tracking karne laga he tu aajkal, ha ?

Me : Bas weekend pe ya kisi holiday pe Vishal, Gulfam, Rohit company ke sath nikal leta hu kahi na kahi pe . Akhir is engineering wali jindagi me yahi to apna sahara he.

Nidhi : he he he, engineering itni boring bhi nahi hoti samza. Me bhi electrical engineering kar rahi hu by the way.

Me : Gajab, konse college me....

Me bolte bolte ruk gaya aisa laga jaise samne sweety thi abhi.

Nidhi : What ? Bhoot dekha kya tune ?

Aur wo bhi pichhe dekhne lagi par waha koi nahi tha.

Anyway mene bhi is baat ko ignore kiya fir dinner kar ke nikal pade.

Nidhi : Achha abhi konse hotel me ruke ho ? Me subah lene aaungi tuze, nashta mere ghar pe hoga.

Me : Aree sun to, me subah he jane wala hu yaha koi caves he udhar aur fir kailash mandir aur caves he udhar bhi jana he muze.

Nidhi : Ha to sath me jayenge na, me mummy se car le lungi na.

Me : Tu samaz le na baat yaar Nidhi. Me....

Nidhi : Ek ek minute tu mujhko avoid kar raha he haa ? Matlab tu akela nahi aaya he yaha right ? Kaun he tere saath ? Bata bata I'm exciting.

Aur sahi me wo bolte bolte kudne lagi thi and I just started remembering days when we were in school :lol:

Me : Arre koi nahi he meri maa, bas aise he akele he ghumna chahta hu so...

Nidhi : Achha matlab tu ab muzse jhut bolega, jaldi bata warna mere pas Shreya ka number he, tu janta he na wo kitni der tak ye baat pachayegi ?

Me : OK OK calm down, just calm down.

Nidhi : Ab aaya na niche, bol ab.

Me : We just met yesterday and we're totally anonymous to each other and tomorrow we're going to travel together, bass itna he.

Nidhi : Bass ?

Me : Ha bass, aur kya ?

Nidhi : Thik he thik he kar le enjoy. Par wapas Jane se pehle ghar aa jana. Aur mobile de apna tu.

Fir usne mere mobile se uske number ring di.

Nidhi : Me tu ghar ka address send karungi abhi. 2 din tak ghum le uske saath fir tu mere ghar hona chahiye chahe akela aa ya usko sath la.

Me : ( hath jod ke) Ji Sarkar jo hukum.

Nidhi : Chal ab me bhi jati hu, mumma ke bohot calls aaye he, unko bataya hota na to tuze lene aati wo idhar he.

Me : Ha kaku ko aur kaka ko namaste kehna meri taraf se, aur kehna ke me aa jaunga parson. Good night.

Nidhi : good night sweet dreams.

Ab wo uski scooty leke chali gayi ghar.

Mene jab time dekha to 9:15 ho gaye the aur ab iss time to koi auto wala bhi nahi tha to paidal he chal pada hotel ki taraf.

Hotel tak pohonchte-2 khana sahi se hajam ho gaya tha.

Hotel ke entrance me jo waiting lounge tha waha pe sweety bhi dikh gayi.

Dekhne se he lag raha tha jaise kisi ka wait kar rahi ho bohot der se aur jaise he usne muze dekha to aise gusse se ghurne lagi jese insan nahi koi alien hu.


Sweety ne muze dekhkar kaha ,

Wo : “Ho gaya khana ?”

Sweety : kya hua Mr Abhishek ? Mene puccha tumhara khana hua ya nahi ?

Sweety ne bade teekhe lehje me puccha tha.

Me : Ha market me meri purani dost mil gayi thi to usi ke sath khana kha liya aur tumne khana khaya ?

Sweety : Ha mene bhi abhi abhi khana kha liya he , tumhara wait kiya par tum apne dost ke sath busy the na .


Me : sorry yaar wo Nidhi aur me bahot saal baad mile to waqt ka pata bhi nahi chala .


Sweety : It's ok . hota he kai baar. Chalo good night milte he kal 6 baje .

Me : Aree suno, to...

Sweety : Tomorrow 6 o clock, sharp. Good night.


Me : Good night.

Aur me chal pada apne room ki or.


To be continued...
Kya wo sweety yaa jo bhi hai piccha kar rahi thi Abhishek ka...yaa aise hi mil gayi usko waha Nidhi ke saath....upar se nakhre to dekho :sigh:

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Update 4: Nightmare !


Ek dusare ko good night wish karne ke baad ham dono apne apne rooms me aa gaye.

Khana to acche se hua tha to bed pe let gya, mobile bhi full charge ho chuka tha aur sath me mataji ke 10-12 missed calls bhi dikh gaye .

Me : Ha maa kaisi ho ? Khana Wana ho gaya tum sabka udhar ? ye shivam aur shreya kidhar he abhi ?

Maa : Baat mat badal, pehle bata kidhar tha tu abhi ? Itni der se phone laga rahi hu uthata kyo nahi ?

Me : Are shant ho jao maa, wo battery low ho gayi thi mobile ki to charging pe laga diya tha. Aur khana ho gaya he mera.

Maa : Chal thik he fir so ja. me bhi kaam nipta leti hu. Good night.

Me : Good Night Aai.

Kapde change kiye aur socha thoda dost logo se he chat kar lu, par usme bhi man nahi lag raha tha .

Shreya aur Shivam se bhi baat ki to wo jaldi he baat karke good night bolke so gaye.

Kuch der game khel khel kar timepas karne laga par wo bhi boring lagne laga .

Is se pehle to me dosto se aur dono bhai behno se kai ghanto tak chat karta tha aur jabtak mobile ki battery low hone ka msg na aye tab tak game khelta tha .

Par aaj kisi bhi cheej me dil nahi lag raha tha, akhir har baar najar darwaje ki or jati aur har baar bas ek he khayal ata ke ek baar jake dekh lu ke wo so gayi he ya nahi !


Attraction kaho ya pyar kaho ya jo bhi kaho iska ehsas he bahot khushnuma sa lag raha tha, bas uski ek zalak dekhane ke liye dil itna bechain ho raha he jaise kai saalo baad mil raha hu.


Uska yu meri taraf gusse se dekhana bhi pyar lag raha he, par ise pyar bhi nahi samaz sakta kyonki wo khana ke liye company dene nahi aya is wajah se gusse me ho sakti he.


And the most important thing ke sweety ko kaise malum ke me khana khaake aya hu !

Ye ladki sach me meri jasusi to nahi kar rahi !


Jane do ab to 12:30 baj chuke he ,kal jaldi uthna bhi he, ab bas so jata hu.


Fir me bhi light off karke so gaya .


And here it start again.....


The nightmare !


Jab ankhe khuli to dekha me hotel ke room me nahi balki kisi hospital ke bed pe hu, aur mere samne ek bahot daravane chehare ka doctor khada he, jiske hath ki har ungali pe injections lage he aur sala daravani hasi ke sath muze pucchta he ke,


"Bol meri beti se shadi karega ya nahi ?",


Sala idhar ek to injections dekhke he halat kharab hui he aur ye haramkhor shadi ki baat kar raha he.


"Dhaaad" aur ek jordaar awaj ke sath dahaadti hui uski khubsurat (uski najaro me) beti andar ayi aur usne jese he muze dekha to wo bhi shaitaani hasi ke sath meri taraf badhane lagi aur me bed se utarkar usko darwaje se dhakka dekar bahar bhaga .


Bahar dekha to pura hospital sunsaan he , kahi bhi koi bhi nahi dikhai de raha , sala yaha waha bhag raha tha par bahar Jane ka ek rasta bhi nahi mil raha.


Aur picche wo chudail haste hue aa rahi he.
Sala ye idhar has rahi he aur meri fat ke hath me aa rahi he .


Kisi bhi room ka darwaja open nahi ho raha , aur me bachao ,bachao chillate hue bhaagne laga aur itna bhagkar, chillakar bhi mila kya dead end !


Wo chudail sali chhipkali ki tarah upar ceiling par rengate hue aa rahi thi aur mera kaleja muh me agaya tha aur jese he wo muz pe jhapat padi me buri tarah se chillate hue bed se niche gir gaya !



Sala itna bura sapna dekha dimag kharab ho gya aur sath me koi jorse darwaja bhi pitne laga .


Darte hue mene darwaja khola to samne koi 70 saal budhau aur meri pyari sweety jo abhi abhi nind se uthi hui lag rahi thi khade the .


Budhau puchhane laga,

Budhau : kya hua beta, kyu itne jorse chillaye ? Koi bhoot dekha kya ?


Sala budhau se accha to wo chudail thi jo ek he baar me kha jati kam se kam iske jesa dimag ka dahi , dudh, lassi to nahi karti.


Us budhau ke picche khadi sweety ne uske jesa muh chalane ki nakal karte hue funny chehara banaya sala me to sab bhul gaya kon chudail, kaisa sapna, kon doctor aur budhau ki bakwas bhutiya kam chutiya type theory.


Jese tese budhau ko room se bhaga diya tab jake chain mila ,aur sweety mere sukoon bhara chehara dekh ke joro se hasne lagi.


Mai : "Kya ?"


Sweety : "kuch nahi ", aur firse hasne lagi .


Mai : ab bataegi ya nahi?


Sweety : Yaar tumhe dekhakar aisa laga ke tuze chudail se kam us uncle se jyada dar lag raha he.


Mai : Ha yaar sach me dimag kharab kar diya isne .


Sweety : Chalo so jao ab dekho 3 baj gaye he ,aur subah 6 baje ka plan cancel karte he ,uski jagah 10 baje nikalenge idhar se OK.


Mai : ya it will be better, good night.


Sweety : ( muskurate hue ) Good night have bad dreams.


Ispar mene hath jod kar usko darwaje ki taraf ishara kiya .
Aur wo bhi hasti hui firse good night kehkar uske room me chali gayi.


Aur me , me to chupchap chaddar odh kar so gaya bina koi daravana sapna dekhe.



To be continued...
Attraction... :sigh:
Ye gaya ab...par ek baat samajh naa aayi iss Sweety ko ye kaise pata chala ki Abhishek ne chudail ka sapna dekha....ye iss story mein bhoot bhootni bhi hai kya :ecs:

Kya sweety ka Baap bhi doctor hai :lol:

Mazza aa raha hai.....
 
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Update 5 : I forget everything with you !

Raat jitni bhayanak thi subah utni he khubsurat, aur subah uthate he shower liya.


Fir gharwalo se baat hui ke abhi mobile switch off rahega to koi call na kare( battery bhi to bachani hoti he bhai ) , fir shreya aur shivam dono se baat ki.


Par ye Shreya ek jagah jane ke liye jyada he jor de rahi thi, koi Bibi ka Makbara jesa naam he us jagah ka aur usne Google se info nikalne se bhi mana kiya tha. Keh rahi thi, "bhaiya you must see that place, that is really awesome !"

To mene bhi socha chalo ab itna ise recommend kar rahi he to pehle ise he dekh lete he , niche hotel ke ground floor jane se pehle camera bhi charging pe lagaya aur room se bahar nikala.


Sweety ke room ki doorbell bajayi ,
2min me usne bhi darwaja khola aur kaha ,

Sweety : bas taiyaar ho rahi hu ,5 minutes lagenge !


Ab me kya pagal hu jise inke 5 min ke bare malum nahi hoga.


Me : Are suno aaram se taiyaar hoke niche nashte pe aao , koi jaldi nahi he !

Usne bhi cute si smile di aur uske kam me lag gayi ,aur me bhi niche hotel ke ground floor pe aagaya .


Ek table ke pas chair pe baith ke ham dono ke liye nashte ka order diya aur waiter ko bhi bol diya nashta 15 minutes baad lana abhi ke liye sirf coke aur chips chalega .

Kuch 15-16 minutes me hr nashta bhi agaya aur sweety bhi !

Sach me jitna bhi ham log ladkiyo ke makeup ka majak udate ho par jab bhi wo puri tarah tayyar hoke aati he to bas kayamat lagti he .

Kuch aise he sweety bhi dikh rahi thi .

Jab wo samne se aane lagi to kab me khud uth ke khada hua pata he nahi chala .

Bas aajtak jin isshq mohabbat ki bato ka majak udaya karta tha wahi bate sach hote dikh rahi thi .

Mere ek college friend ne kaha tha ke jab wo samne se aye to hame aaspaas kya chal raha he ,kon he kisi ka bhi pata nahi chalata , thik waise he mere sath ho raat tha.

Bas kab wo mere samne aake khadi hui pata bhi nahi chala ,bas pair pe kuch dard ka ehsaas hua aur me bhi present situation me aagaya .

Jab dekha to sweety ne pair pe sandle ki heel se halke se mere pair pe mara tha jisse me hosh aaya tha.

Tab malum pada ke mere is aashiqui ke chakkar me use sabke bich awkward feel ho sakta he.

Anyway ham dono apni apni chairs pe baith gaye aur nashta karne lage , tab usne he baat ki shuruat ki ,

Sweety : To ham sabse pehle kaha jayenge ?

Me : Bibi ka Makbara se start karte he .

Ispe usne jo khatarnak look diya wo dekhte bana.

Sweety : Dekh rahi hu tum jyada he aashiq mijaj hote ja rahe ho mister .

Me : Kya ! Are meri sis ne kaha he wo Makbara pehle dekho ,bahot badhiya he aisa bola, isliye waha chalne ke liye kaha.


Sweety : Hmm par isse accha ham pehle Verul jayenge caves dekhane aur kal Bibi ka Makbara. Kya kehte ho ?

Me : Bibi ka Makbara pehle kyu nahi madam jara samzaiye to .

Sweety : Wo isliye ke waha subah 7 baje ka jo scene hota he wo hamne pehle he miss kiya he aur abhi 9:45 ho rahe he to aaj Verul ke caves he dekhenge,ok.

Me :Chalo thik he , abhi fatafat nashta khatam karo aur jaldi se ready hoke aao .


Fir dono ne nashta khatam kiya aur apne apne rooms me gaye bags lene ke liye.

Bags me sirf jarurat ka saman he bhara jese water bottle, camera, extra battery , aur kuch snacks bhi.

Baki ka saman room me he rakh ke bahar aya to dekha sweety pehle se ready hoke bahar khadi thi.

Me : muze laga tum ready nahi hogi !

Sweety : Nashte ke pehle he bags wagaira sab ready rakha tha bas uthana he to baki tha .

Me : Smart ho , ha.

Sweety : we're getting late.


Aur dono hotel ke bahar aagaye aur ek riksha se pehle bus stop aur waha se Verul bas pakad ke Verul ki taraf nikle.


( A bit info on Verul/ Ellora caves :

Verul caves ya Ellora ki gufaye hamare purvajo ki sadiyo purani karigiri ki ek khubsurat misaal he jise dekhakar aap usi me kho jate ho.

Ye total 34 gufaye he,jo ki ek he bade pahad (mountain) me khod ke tarashi gayi he .)

Mene ticket counter jake mere aur sweety ke liye tickets liye aur uski taraf chal pada .

Sweety : yaar abhi firse bhuk lagi he , kuch he kya?

Me : Abhi to adha ghanta bhi nahi hua he :D ,aur puri 34 gufaye dekhani he hame .

Sweety : 34 nahi dekh sakte abhi, 27,28 & 29 number wali bakiyo se dur he to unko baad me dekhna padega. Aur kuch khane ko he kya ye batao baki bad me .

Me : Ha kuch snacks he .

Aur mene bag se snacks nikal ke use diye aur sath me mera canon ka camera bhi nikala.

Sweety : Wow DSLR camera , kya baat he ! Ab mere photos aur bhi clear ayenge !

Aur is bat pe me sirf uska muh dekhta reh gaya.

Me : (lag gayi vaat :doh: )

Sweety : (snacks khate hue ) Aise kya dekh rahe ho chalo abhi us gate ke pas wale garden pe photo nikalte he.

Aur ham chal pade us garden ki taraf photo khinchane ke liye.

Waha sach me kafi accha scene tha ,harabhara garden, usme rang-birange plants aur flowers aur sabse majedaar the ped (tree) par baithi hui bandaro ki toli, jiski najar sweety ke hath me pakde hue snacks par thi.


Sweety ne ek jagah pe khade hue mast pose di aur me bhi uske photo click karne me lag gaya , 4-5 photos click karne ke baad sweety ne puchha.


Sweety : Kaisi dikh rahi hu me Mr. Abhi ?

Me : (ghabrai awaj me ) Bandar !

Sweety : (gusse me ) Kya kaha !

Me : Wo wo bandar....

Aur sweety meri taraf badhane he wali thi ke picche se ek bandar aya aur usne sweety ke hatho se snacks ka packet chhin liya aur wahi side me baith ke khane laga.

Aur sweety ,jiska chehare ke expression Jo pal pal me badal rahe the aur use samaz nahi raha tha ke wo kya kare :D


Tabhi baki bandaro ki toli bhi aagayi jisme se 3-4 bandar us pehle wale bandar ke hath se snacks chhinne me lag gaye.

Tabhi ek chhota bandar ka bachha sweety ke pas aake hath aage karke mangne lag gaya aur isse sweety bahot jyada dar gayi :D


Aur me , me to is majedaar pal ko camera me kaid kar raha tha ki Sweety ki keher wali najar muzpe pad gayi ,aur ab batane ki jarurat nahi ke mene pics nikalna rok diya hoga :)


Mene jeb se ek chocolate nikal ke us bandar ke bacche ko di aur sweety ko lekar us garden se nau-do-gyarah hua.


Sweety : (meri taraf gusse se ghurte hue ) Photo delete kiye ?

Me : (anjan bankar ) konse photo?

Sweety : Bano mat . Abhi ke abhi delete kardo !

Me : ...

Sweety : Ye aise kya dekh rahe ho ?

Aur jab sweety ne bhi picche mudke dekha to wo bhi dekhati reh gayi .


Ye 16 no. ki Kelashnath gufa he jo apne aap me ek nayak kalakari he, jisko upar se niche tarasha gaya tha .
( Google kar lena isko)

Iske Andar bhi kai sare mandir , rath aur murtiya he jinki nakashi (design) bohot khubsurat he .


Aise he ek ek karke ham dono sabhi gufaye dekhane lage.
Sachme manna padega 2ri sadi me bhi un karigaro ne sirf chhinni aur hathode se itni khubsurat kalakari taiyaar ki jo aaj ham machine aur drills ka use karke bhi nahi kar sakte .



Aise he ghumane me hame 3 ghante lag gaye ,is beech mene aur sweety ne kafi sari pics li , khud ki aur un sabhi gufao ki bhi, aur mene sweety ko bhi DSLR camera kese use karte he wo bhi sikha diya to wo bhi pics nikalne me magan hui .




Fir ek jagah ped ki chhaw me baith ke kuch snacks khaye aur exit gate ki taraf jane lage.



Is sab me sham ke 5 kab baj gaye the pata bhi nahi chala.

Ab subah se itna chal rahe the ke pairo ne bhi jawab de diya ke ab aur nahi, to sidha riksha wale ko kisi restaurant le chalne ka kaha.

Sweety : Thak gayi yaar. Bas ab restaurant me khana khayenge aur wapis hotel me jake so jayenge.


Me : Me to paanchakki(watermill) dekhane ka soch raha tha, suna he waha sham ka najara dekhane layak hota he!


Sweety : Chupchap hotel chalo. Kal Bibi ka Makbara dekhane ke baad jayenge waha .

Me : accha accha samazz gaya



To be continued...
Ye to bhukhad bhi hai aur haq to sise jata rahi hai jaise gf ho...bandar wala mast scene tha....ye Bibi ka makhbara waha koi kaand hona hai kya....chalo apan log bhi ghoom aaye vellore caves ko kahani mein hi sahi...

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Socha nahi tha fir kabhi kalam hath me lunga aur isi story ko fir likhunga, jisko maine xp pe adhura chhoda tha, shayad quarantine ka asar he ya muze iska ant mil gaya he (?) pata nahi.

Kai readers ko lagta he Love Story ka end happy ending ya sad ending me he hota he. Iske alawa agar koi writer story ko alag tarike se pura kare to readers ki demand hoti he ke 2nd part likho, ending unke marzi se ho :hmm:

Anyway back to story, me likhne ka kaam karunga, aap padh ke batane ka kariye ke mene jo likha he usme sahi kya he aur galat kya hai.
So lets begin.....
bhai story ka koi sahi end nahi hota. kyoki jingi aur jindgani sab ki mukammal hi hoti hai ye to dekhane vali ke najariye par depend karta hai ki end mukammal hai ya nahi. chuki story ek slice of life hoti hai to kai baar khatti bhi hogi aur kai baar mithi bhi. aap likhate jaiye ham aap ki story mai apne liye sukh bhi dundenge aur dukh bhi, safalta bhi aur asafalta bhi. aap romance likh rahe hai to mai itana avasya kahunga jab jab dil main gudgudi hogi ya dil mai dard ki huk uthegi tab tab mere liye ye kahani safal hogi. jab jab aise chan aayenge main aapko avasya suchit karunga. kahani suru karne ke liye BADHAI................................
 
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