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Romance Fir Milenge

rgcrazyboy

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ek or dimag ka ghuma hu aa writer.
kaha se story kaha le jane ki koshishi kar ra hai ho.
writing se lamba break leke aye se karname karna jaruri hai kya :bat:
 

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ek or dimag ka ghuma hu aa writer.
kaha se story kaha le jane ki koshishi kar ra hai ho.
writing se lamba break leke aye se karname karna jaruri hai kya :bat:
Thanks for your reply :D
And NO story is getting of track, this update is Lil funny but it is base of upcoming scenarios. So you may think this is some fantasy type dope story but it's not.
You have to wait till tomorrow morning to see clear sky.
 

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Thanks for your reply :D
And NO story is getting of track, this update is Lil funny but it is base of upcoming scenarios. So you may think this is some fantasy type dope story but it's not.
You have to wait till tomorrow morning to see clear sky.
abhi tak trak par nahi thi kya story:D
vese bhi kaha aaj dono ghumne jane vale the or dono ghumte waha kand hone wala tha.
par tum to rat ko sapne main he kand karwa rahai ho.
ab ye na ho jai ki khoda pahad or nikal chuha :dazed:
 
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abhi tak trak par nahi thi kya story:D
vese bhi kaha aaj dono ghumne jane vale the or dono ghumte waha kand hone wala tha.
par tum to rat ko sapne main he kand karwa rahai ho.
ab ye na ho jai ki khoda pahad or nikal chuha :dazed:
Next update ke padh lena :popcorn2:
 
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Update 5 : I forget everything with you !

Raat jitni bhayanak thi subah utni he khubsurat, aur subah uthate he shower liya.


Fir gharwalo se baat hui ke abhi mobile switch off rahega to koi call na kare( battery bhi to bachani hoti he bhai ) , fir shreya aur shivam dono se baat ki.


Par ye Shreya ek jagah jane ke liye jyada he jor de rahi thi, koi Bibi ka Makbara jesa naam he us jagah ka aur usne Google se info nikalne se bhi mana kiya tha. Keh rahi thi, "bhaiya you must see that place, that is really awesome !"

To mene bhi socha chalo ab itna ise recommend kar rahi he to pehle ise he dekh lete he , niche hotel ke ground floor jane se pehle camera bhi charging pe lagaya aur room se bahar nikala.


Sweety ke room ki doorbell bajayi ,
2min me usne bhi darwaja khola aur kaha ,

Sweety : bas taiyaar ho rahi hu ,5 minutes lagenge !


Ab me kya pagal hu jise inke 5 min ke bare malum nahi hoga.


Me : Are suno aaram se taiyaar hoke niche nashte pe aao , koi jaldi nahi he !

Usne bhi cute si smile di aur uske kam me lag gayi ,aur me bhi niche hotel ke ground floor pe aagaya .


Ek table ke pas chair pe baith ke ham dono ke liye nashte ka order diya aur waiter ko bhi bol diya nashta 15 minutes baad lana abhi ke liye sirf coke aur chips chalega .

Kuch 15-16 minutes me hr nashta bhi agaya aur sweety bhi !

Sach me jitna bhi ham log ladkiyo ke makeup ka majak udate ho par jab bhi wo puri tarah tayyar hoke aati he to bas kayamat lagti he .

Kuch aise he sweety bhi dikh rahi thi .

Jab wo samne se aane lagi to kab me khud uth ke khada hua pata he nahi chala .

Bas aajtak jin isshq mohabbat ki bato ka majak udaya karta tha wahi bate sach hote dikh rahi thi .

Mere ek college friend ne kaha tha ke jab wo samne se aye to hame aaspaas kya chal raha he ,kon he kisi ka bhi pata nahi chalata , thik waise he mere sath ho raat tha.

Bas kab wo mere samne aake khadi hui pata bhi nahi chala ,bas pair pe kuch dard ka ehsaas hua aur me bhi present situation me aagaya .

Jab dekha to sweety ne pair pe sandle ki heel se halke se mere pair pe mara tha jisse me hosh aaya tha.

Tab malum pada ke mere is aashiqui ke chakkar me use sabke bich awkward feel ho sakta he.

Anyway ham dono apni apni chairs pe baith gaye aur nashta karne lage , tab usne he baat ki shuruat ki ,

Sweety : To ham sabse pehle kaha jayenge ?

Me : Bibi ka Makbara se start karte he .

Ispe usne jo khatarnak look diya wo dekhte bana.

Sweety : Dekh rahi hu tum jyada he aashiq mijaj hote ja rahe ho mister .

Me : Kya ! Are meri sis ne kaha he wo Makbara pehle dekho ,bahot badhiya he aisa bola, isliye waha chalne ke liye kaha.


Sweety : Hmm par isse accha ham pehle Verul jayenge caves dekhane aur kal Bibi ka Makbara. Kya kehte ho ?

Me : Bibi ka Makbara pehle kyu nahi madam jara samzaiye to .

Sweety : Wo isliye ke waha subah 7 baje ka jo scene hota he wo hamne pehle he miss kiya he aur abhi 9:45 ho rahe he to aaj Verul ke caves he dekhenge,ok.

Me :Chalo thik he , abhi fatafat nashta khatam karo aur jaldi se ready hoke aao .


Fir dono ne nashta khatam kiya aur apne apne rooms me gaye bags lene ke liye.

Bags me sirf jarurat ka saman he bhara jese water bottle, camera, extra battery , aur kuch snacks bhi.

Baki ka saman room me he rakh ke bahar aya to dekha sweety pehle se ready hoke bahar khadi thi.

Me : muze laga tum ready nahi hogi !

Sweety : Nashte ke pehle he bags wagaira sab ready rakha tha bas uthana he to baki tha .

Me : Smart ho , ha.

Sweety : we're getting late.


Aur dono hotel ke bahar aagaye aur ek riksha se pehle bus stop aur waha se Verul bas pakad ke Verul ki taraf nikle.


( A bit info on Verul/ Ellora caves :

Verul caves ya Ellora ki gufaye hamare purvajo ki sadiyo purani karigiri ki ek khubsurat misaal he jise dekhakar aap usi me kho jate ho.

Ye total 34 gufaye he,jo ki ek he bade pahad (mountain) me khod ke tarashi gayi he .)

Mene ticket counter jake mere aur sweety ke liye tickets liye aur uski taraf chal pada .

Sweety : yaar abhi firse bhuk lagi he , kuch he kya?

Me : Abhi to adha ghanta bhi nahi hua he :D ,aur puri 34 gufaye dekhani he hame .

Sweety : 34 nahi dekh sakte abhi, 27,28 & 29 number wali bakiyo se dur he to unko baad me dekhna padega. Aur kuch khane ko he kya ye batao baki bad me .

Me : Ha kuch snacks he .

Aur mene bag se snacks nikal ke use diye aur sath me mera canon ka camera bhi nikala.

Sweety : Wow DSLR camera , kya baat he ! Ab mere photos aur bhi clear ayenge !

Aur is bat pe me sirf uska muh dekhta reh gaya.

Me : (lag gayi vaat :doh: )

Sweety : (snacks khate hue ) Aise kya dekh rahe ho chalo abhi us gate ke pas wale garden pe photo nikalte he.

Aur ham chal pade us garden ki taraf photo khinchane ke liye.

Waha sach me kafi accha scene tha ,harabhara garden, usme rang-birange plants aur flowers aur sabse majedaar the ped (tree) par baithi hui bandaro ki toli, jiski najar sweety ke hath me pakde hue snacks par thi.


Sweety ne ek jagah pe khade hue mast pose di aur me bhi uske photo click karne me lag gaya , 4-5 photos click karne ke baad sweety ne puchha.


Sweety : Kaisi dikh rahi hu me Mr. Abhi ?

Me : (ghabrai awaj me ) Bandar !

Sweety : (gusse me ) Kya kaha !

Me : Wo wo bandar....

Aur sweety meri taraf badhane he wali thi ke picche se ek bandar aya aur usne sweety ke hatho se snacks ka packet chhin liya aur wahi side me baith ke khane laga.

Aur sweety ,jiska chehare ke expression Jo pal pal me badal rahe the aur use samaz nahi raha tha ke wo kya kare :D


Tabhi baki bandaro ki toli bhi aagayi jisme se 3-4 bandar us pehle wale bandar ke hath se snacks chhinne me lag gaye.

Tabhi ek chhota bandar ka bachha sweety ke pas aake hath aage karke mangne lag gaya aur isse sweety bahot jyada dar gayi :D


Aur me , me to is majedaar pal ko camera me kaid kar raha tha ki Sweety ki keher wali najar muzpe pad gayi ,aur ab batane ki jarurat nahi ke mene pics nikalna rok diya hoga :)


Mene jeb se ek chocolate nikal ke us bandar ke bacche ko di aur sweety ko lekar us garden se nau-do-gyarah hua.


Sweety : (meri taraf gusse se ghurte hue ) Photo delete kiye ?

Me : (anjan bankar ) konse photo?

Sweety : Bano mat . Abhi ke abhi delete kardo !

Me : ...

Sweety : Ye aise kya dekh rahe ho ?

Aur jab sweety ne bhi picche mudke dekha to wo bhi dekhati reh gayi .


Ye 16 no. ki Kelashnath gufa he jo apne aap me ek nayak kalakari he, jisko upar se niche tarasha gaya tha .
( Google kar lena isko)

Iske Andar bhi kai sare mandir , rath aur murtiya he jinki nakashi (design) bohot khubsurat he .


Aise he ek ek karke ham dono sabhi gufaye dekhane lage.
Sachme manna padega 2ri sadi me bhi un karigaro ne sirf chhinni aur hathode se itni khubsurat kalakari taiyaar ki jo aaj ham machine aur drills ka use karke bhi nahi kar sakte .



Aise he ghumane me hame 3 ghante lag gaye ,is beech mene aur sweety ne kafi sari pics li , khud ki aur un sabhi gufao ki bhi, aur mene sweety ko bhi DSLR camera kese use karte he wo bhi sikha diya to wo bhi pics nikalne me magan hui .




Fir ek jagah ped ki chhaw me baith ke kuch snacks khaye aur exit gate ki taraf jane lage.



Is sab me sham ke 5 kab baj gaye the pata bhi nahi chala.

Ab subah se itna chal rahe the ke pairo ne bhi jawab de diya ke ab aur nahi, to sidha riksha wale ko kisi restaurant le chalne ka kaha.

Sweety : Thak gayi yaar. Bas ab restaurant me khana khayenge aur wapis hotel me jake so jayenge.


Me : Me to paanchakki(watermill) dekhane ka soch raha tha, suna he waha sham ka najara dekhane layak hota he!


Sweety : Chupchap hotel chalo. Kal Bibi ka Makbara dekhane ke baad jayenge waha .

Me : accha accha samazz gaya



To be continued...
 

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Update 6 : Ek ehsaas

From view of Sweety
(Sweety ki najaro se) :


Shaam ko 7 baje jab ham thak kar hotel pohonche tab aisa lag raha tha jaise koi badi jung jeet kar aaye ho aur wo hotel ka darbaan bhi hame aise salute de raha tha jaise sach me hamne koi mahan kaam kiya ho.


Jab me aur Abhi ghum rahe the tab jara bhi is dard ka ehsas nahi hua ,par ab sach me pair buri tarah se dard kar rahe the.



2nd floor tak jaise taise khud ko koste hue ham apne apne rooms tak pohonch he gaye , faltu me 2nd floor pe room liya aur upar se is hotel me lift bhi nahi thi.


Abhi to jaise he room ka door khola to sidha jake bed par ludak gaya, na shoes utare na fresh hua , kuch nahi kiya aur bed par padte he so gaya.

Mene he uske room ka door close kiya aur apne room me aagayi.


Sabse pehle bag rakh di side me, mobile charging pe lagaya aur fresh hone gayi.

Waise is waqt mera bhi man kar raha tha jakar direct bed pe let jau aur subah tak uthana he nahi par ye dress bhi to new he jisme dekhakar Mr. Abhishek flat ho gaye the.


Ha sach me flat he to hua tha wo, abhi bhi yaad aa raha he kaise subah sabke samne nashte ki table pe aise dekh raha tha jaise ham pehli bar mile ho, par uske baad pure din me ek baar bhi usne aisa nahi kiya ye baat acchi lagi muze.


Meri bhi baki ladkiyo ki tarah hamesha se ek khwahish rahi he ke unki tarah koi muze bhi pyar se dekhe na ki hawas se, mera khayal rakhe na ki har baar meri ha me ha milaye.

Muze protect kare na ki meri meri space me interfere kare, jitne hak se meri problems me mera sath deta ho utne he hak se uski problems bhi share kare.

Jitni care meri karta he utna bharosa bhi muz par kare.

Meri jitni respect karta he utni he respect dil se mere mummy papa ki bhi kare, and so on ! Bas itni he khwahishe he meri !



Ab to change bhi kar liya ,ab jake dekhti hu Mr Alsi uth gaye ya nahi .


Mene mobile charger se nikala kiya aur Abhi ke room ke bahar jake khadi hui aur sochne lagi ye utha bhi hoga ya nahi.


3-4 baar knock kiya par door to khola nahi isne, to vaise he andar ghus gayi.


Aur ye janaab sab ghode, gadhe bech kar so rahe he.


Me bhi halke kadmo se bina koi awaj kiye Abhi ke pas gayi ,dekha ke uska mobile side me vibrate kar raha he .


Jab mobile hath me liya to kisi Shreya ka call aa raha he aur sath me uska photo bhi tha.

Waise dikhane me khubsurat he hai ye shreya ,par iske sath kya relation hoga Abhi ka ?


Dikhane me bhi khubsurat lag rahi he , figure se bhi hot he lag rahi he bas Abhi se 1-2 saal chhoti lag rahi he.


Girlfriend to nahi hogi na ? Kyonki classmate to ho nahi sakti.

Aur jabtak me ye sab soch rahi thi tabtak call cut ho gayi thi.

Tab dekha smartphone he aur ye finger touch sense se bhi unlock hota he :happy:

Waise to me kabhi dusro ke mobile phones ko hath bhi nahi lagati par idhar to dil ka (crush ka) mamla he to sab gunah maaf kar deti hu.


Mene dhire se Abhi ke right hand ki finger se touch sensor pe touch karwaya aur bingo lock open ho gaya .


Thanks to all these new technology ,isi ki wajah se ye possible hua D:


Sabse pehle gallery he check ki ,ab ye har kisi ki aadat he hai ke kisi ka bhi mobile hath me aajaye to ham sabse pehle gallery he check karte he jaise usme koi Alibaba ka khajana gada hoga :lol:


Waise contact list me kisi bhi ladki ka no. gf jese nam se save nahi tha.


And again bingo ,as expected usi Shreya ke sath kai sare pics aur selfies gallery me the, kuch me ek aur ladka bhi tha sath me ,jiski age 1 saal kam ho shayad.

Bad me kai sare nature ke ek se badhkar ek pics the, har photo kisi professional photographer ki tarah liya tha.


Aage aur bhi photos the family ke ,jisme again wo shreya dikh gai.


Lagta he ye ladki Abhi ke family ke jyada he close he. Kuch pics me Abhi aur wo dusra ladka(Shivam) dono trecking aur shooting karte dikh rahe the ,jisme Abhi ekdam dashing lag raha tha.


Aur aage bhi aise he kai pics the jinhe dekhate dekhate time ka pata he nahi chala.


"Dusro ke mobile ko bina permission ke hath nahi lagaya karte Sweety ! "


Is awaj se me present me laut ayi, ya yu kaho apni sapno ki duniya se jameen par aa giri.


Yakinan ye Abhi ki he awaj thi.

Sweety : Wo me bas dekh rahi thi ke tumne caves me pics kaise nikale he .


Abhi : Wo us camera me he , check it out aur agar chahiye ho to wahi cord se tumhara mobile connect karo aur le lo ,me fresh ho kar aata hu.


Sweety : OK .


Kuch der me Abhi bhi fresh hoke aaya , tab me camera me click ki hui photos dekhne me busy thi.

Pata nahi kese wo har photo itni bariki se leta he, mere jitne bhi photos liye the sab ke sab amazing the.


Aur bandar wala scene bhi acche se capture kiya tha, kai photos to muze bhi nahi pata usne kab liye , par unke natural expressions dekhane jese the.



Bas baad me yu he kuch der hamne bate ki ek dusare ke like n unlike ki , uske photography wale shauk ki , about family and all.
Bas isi sab me waqt kaisa bita pata he nahi chala.


Fir 9:30 ko dinner ko dinner karne ka keh ke me apne room me wapas aayi.



To be continued...
 

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aye se he chalte jao.
abhi ke updates story ko aage bhadhane ke liye ache se likhe hai.

bus us bhudhe wale seen ko jada na kichane ke chakar main tum jald baji main likha gai.
us jagah par tum hari story ki line bigad gai hai aage se aye se seen ko likhate samaya dhayan rakahne ka :dazed:
 
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