Romance Fir Milenge

[Assassin]

aye se he chalte jao.
abhi ke updates story ko aage bhadhane ke liye ache se likhe hai.

bus us bhudhe wale seen ko jada na kichane ke chakar main tum jald baji main likha gai.
us jagah par tum hari story ki line bigad gai hai aage se aye se seen ko likhate samaya dhayan rakahne ka

Mene kaha tha bhai buddhe ka scene aana baki he just wait a Lil more. Tanik thoda dhiraj rakho

 

[rgcrazyboy]

Mene kaha tha bhai buddhe ka scene aana baki he just wait a Lil more. Tanik thoda dhiraj rakho

becha bhudha kahi is waiting ke chakar main nikal na jai.
fear uske seen ke liye uski atama ko lana padega

 

[Assassin]

becha bhudha kahi is waiting ke chakar main nikal na jai.
fear uske seen ke liye uski atama ko lana padega

Just 2 Updates more

 

[Arjun Singh 72]

Awesome fabulous update
Feeling dono taraf h
Keep posting

 

[VIKRANT]

Socha nahi tha fir kabhi kalam hath me lunga aur isi story ko fir likhunga, jisko maine xp pe adhura chhoda tha, shayad quarantine ka asar he ya muze iska ant mil gaya he (?) pata nahi.

Kai readers ko lagta he Love Story ka end happy ending ya sad ending me he hota he. Iske alawa agar koi writer story ko alag tarike se pura kare to readers ki demand hoti he ke 2nd part likho, ending unke marzi se ho

Anyway back to story, me likhne ka kaam karunga, aap padh ke batane ka kariye ke mene jo likha he usme sahi kya he aur galat kya hai.
So lets begin..... ​

bro for the new story thread here.

 

[Assassin]

Awesome fabulous update
Feeling dono taraf h
Keep posting

Thanks Arjun

 

[Assassin]

bro for the new story thread here.

bru

 

[VIKRANT]

Update 6 : Ek ehsaas ​

From view of Sweety
(Sweety ki najaro se) :


Shaam ko 7 baje jab ham thak kar hotel pohonche tab aisa lag raha tha jaise koi badi jung jeet kar aaye ho aur wo hotel ka darbaan bhi hame aise salute de raha tha jaise sach me hamne koi mahan kaam kiya ho.


Jab me aur Abhi ghum rahe the tab jara bhi is dard ka ehsas nahi hua ,par ab sach me pair buri tarah se dard kar rahe the.



2nd floor tak jaise taise khud ko koste hue ham apne apne rooms tak pohonch he gaye , faltu me 2nd floor pe room liya aur upar se is hotel me lift bhi nahi thi.


Abhi to jaise he room ka door khola to sidha jake bed par ludak gaya, na shoes utare na fresh hua , kuch nahi kiya aur bed par padte he so gaya.

Mene he uske room ka door close kiya aur apne room me aagayi.


Sabse pehle bag rakh di side me, mobile charging pe lagaya aur fresh hone gayi.

Waise is waqt mera bhi man kar raha tha jakar direct bed pe let jau aur subah tak uthana he nahi par ye dress bhi to new he jisme dekhakar Mr. Abhishek flat ho gaye the.


Ha sach me flat he to hua tha wo, abhi bhi yaad aa raha he kaise subah sabke samne nashte ki table pe aise dekh raha tha jaise ham pehli bar mile ho, par uske baad pure din me ek baar bhi usne aisa nahi kiya ye baat acchi lagi muze.


Meri bhi baki ladkiyo ki tarah hamesha se ek khwahish rahi he ke unki tarah koi muze bhi pyar se dekhe na ki hawas se, mera khayal rakhe na ki har baar meri ha me ha milaye.

Muze protect kare na ki meri meri space me interfere kare, jitne hak se meri problems me mera sath deta ho utne he hak se uski problems bhi share kare.

Jitni care meri karta he utna bharosa bhi muz par kare.

Meri jitni respect karta he utni he respect dil se mere mummy papa ki bhi kare, and so on ! Bas itni he khwahishe he meri !



Ab to change bhi kar liya ,ab jake dekhti hu Mr Alsi uth gaye ya nahi .


Mene mobile charger se nikala kiya aur Abhi ke room ke bahar jake khadi hui aur sochne lagi ye utha bhi hoga ya nahi.


3-4 baar knock kiya par door to khola nahi isne, to vaise he andar ghus gayi.


Aur ye janaab sab ghode, gadhe bech kar so rahe he.


Me bhi halke kadmo se bina koi awaj kiye Abhi ke pas gayi ,dekha ke uska mobile side me vibrate kar raha he .


Jab mobile hath me liya to kisi Shreya ka call aa raha he aur sath me uska photo bhi tha.

Waise dikhane me khubsurat he hai ye shreya ,par iske sath kya relation hoga Abhi ka ?


Dikhane me bhi khubsurat lag rahi he , figure se bhi hot he lag rahi he bas Abhi se 1-2 saal chhoti lag rahi he.


Girlfriend to nahi hogi na ? Kyonki classmate to ho nahi sakti.

Aur jabtak me ye sab soch rahi thi tabtak call cut ho gayi thi.

Tab dekha smartphone he aur ye finger touch sense se bhi unlock hota he

Waise to me kabhi dusro ke mobile phones ko hath bhi nahi lagati par idhar to dil ka (crush ka) mamla he to sab gunah maaf kar deti hu.


Mene dhire se Abhi ke right hand ki finger se touch sensor pe touch karwaya aur bingo lock open ho gaya .


Thanks to all these new technology ,isi ki wajah se ye possible hua D:


Sabse pehle gallery he check ki ,ab ye har kisi ki aadat he hai ke kisi ka bhi mobile hath me aajaye to ham sabse pehle gallery he check karte he jaise usme koi Alibaba ka khajana gada hoga


Waise contact list me kisi bhi ladki ka no. gf jese nam se save nahi tha.


And again bingo ,as expected usi Shreya ke sath kai sare pics aur selfies gallery me the, kuch me ek aur ladka bhi tha sath me ,jiski age 1 saal kam ho shayad.

Bad me kai sare nature ke ek se badhkar ek pics the, har photo kisi professional photographer ki tarah liya tha.


Aage aur bhi photos the family ke ,jisme again wo shreya dikh gai.


Lagta he ye ladki Abhi ke family ke jyada he close he. Kuch pics me Abhi aur wo dusra ladka(Shivam) dono trecking aur shooting karte dikh rahe the ,jisme Abhi ekdam dashing lag raha tha.


Aur aage bhi aise he kai pics the jinhe dekhate dekhate time ka pata he nahi chala.


"Dusro ke mobile ko bina permission ke hath nahi lagaya karte Sweety ! "


Is awaj se me present me laut ayi, ya yu kaho apni sapno ki duniya se jameen par aa giri.


Yakinan ye Abhi ki he awaj thi.

Sweety : Wo me bas dekh rahi thi ke tumne caves me pics kaise nikale he .


Abhi : Wo us camera me he , check it out aur agar chahiye ho to wahi cord se tumhara mobile connect karo aur le lo ,me fresh ho kar aata hu.


Sweety : OK .


Kuch der me Abhi bhi fresh hoke aaya , tab me camera me click ki hui photos dekhne me busy thi.

Pata nahi kese wo har photo itni bariki se leta he, mere jitne bhi photos liye the sab ke sab amazing the.


Aur bandar wala scene bhi acche se capture kiya tha, kai photos to muze bhi nahi pata usne kab liye , par unke natural expressions dekhane jese the.



Bas baad me yu he kuch der hamne bate ki ek dusare ke like n unlike ki , uske photography wale shauk ki , about family and all.
Bas isi sab me waqt kaisa bita pata he nahi chala.


Fir 9:30 ko dinner ko dinner karne ka keh ke me apne room me wapas aayi.



To be continued...

Greattt bro. Such a mind blowing story and your writing skill.

Story ki starting kafi dilchashp tarike se hui and uske baad jaise jaise story aage badhti gai story me rochakta aati gai. Abhishek and sweety ke bich ki baatcheet amazing thi and ab to sweety ke views se pata bhi chal gaya ki uske andar bhi abhishek ke liye love feeling hai.

Overall amazing story line and work bro. Greattt going. Keep it up.

Agle update ka intjar rahega.

 

[Assassin]

Greattt bro. Such a mind blowing story and your writing skill.

Story ki starting kafi dilchashp tarike se hui and uske baad jaise jaise story aage badhti gai story me rochakta aati gai. Abhishek and sweety ke bich ki baatcheet amazing thi and ab to sweety ke views se pata bhi chal gaya ki uske andar bhi abhishek ke liye love feeling hai.

Overall amazing story line and work bro. Greattt going. Keep it up.

Agle update ka intjar rahega.

for review Vikrant

 

[Naina]

Update 4: Nightmare !​

Ek dusare ko good night wish karne ke baad ham dono apne apne rooms me aa gaye.

Khana to acche se hua tha to bed pe let gya, mobile bhi full charge ho chuka tha aur sath me mataji ke 10-12 missed calls bhi dikh gaye .

Me : Ha maa kaisi ho ? Khana Wana ho gaya tum sabka udhar ? ye shivam aur shreya kidhar he abhi ?

Maa : Baat mat badal, pehle bata kidhar tha tu abhi ? Itni der se phone laga rahi hu uthata kyo nahi ?

Me : Are shant ho jao maa, wo battery low ho gayi thi mobile ki to charging pe laga diya tha. Aur khana ho gaya he mera.

Maa : Chal thik he fir so ja. me bhi kaam nipta leti hu. Good night.

Me : Good Night Aai.

Kapde change kiye aur socha thoda dost logo se he chat kar lu, par usme bhi man nahi lag raha tha .

Shreya aur Shivam se bhi baat ki to wo jaldi he baat karke good night bolke so gaye.

Kuch der game khel khel kar timepas karne laga par wo bhi boring lagne laga .

Is se pehle to me dosto se aur dono bhai behno se kai ghanto tak chat karta tha aur jabtak mobile ki battery low hone ka msg na aye tab tak game khelta tha .

Par aaj kisi bhi cheej me dil nahi lag raha tha, akhir har baar najar darwaje ki or jati aur har baar bas ek he khayal ata ke ek baar jake dekh lu ke wo so gayi he ya nahi !




And the most important thing ke sweety ko kaise malum ke me khana khaake aya hu !

Ye ladki sach me meri jasusi to nahi kar rahi !


Jane do ab to 12:30 baj chuke he ,kal jaldi uthna bhi he, ab bas so jata hu.


Fir me bhi light off karke so gaya .


And here it start again.....


The nightmare !


Jab ankhe khuli to dekha me hotel ke room me nahi balki kisi hospital ke bed pe hu, aur mere samne ek bahot daravane chehare ka doctor khada he, jiske hath ki har ungali pe injections lage he aur sala daravani hasi ke sath muze pucchta he ke,


"Bol meri beti se shadi karega ya nahi ?",


Sala idhar ek to injections dekhke he halat kharab hui he aur ye haramkhor shadi ki baat kar raha he.


"Dhaaad" aur ek jordaar awaj ke sath dahaadti hui uski khubsurat (uski najaro me) beti andar ayi aur usne jese he muze dekha to wo bhi shaitaani hasi ke sath meri taraf badhane lagi aur me bed se utarkar usko darwaje se dhakka dekar bahar bhaga .


Bahar dekha to pura hospital sunsaan he , kahi bhi koi bhi nahi dikhai de raha , sala yaha waha bhag raha tha par bahar Jane ka ek rasta bhi nahi mil raha.


Aur picche wo chudail haste hue aa rahi he.
Sala ye idhar has rahi he aur meri fat ke hath me aa rahi he .


Kisi bhi room ka darwaja open nahi ho raha , aur me bachao ,bachao chillate hue bhaagne laga aur itna bhagkar, chillakar bhi mila kya dead end !


Wo chudail sali chhipkali ki tarah upar ceiling par rengate hue aa rahi thi aur mera kaleja muh me agaya tha aur jese he wo muz pe jhapat padi me buri tarah se chillate hue bed se niche gir gaya !



Sala itna bura sapna dekha dimag kharab ho gya aur sath me koi jorse darwaja bhi pitne laga .


Darte hue mene darwaja khola to samne koi 70 saal budhau aur meri pyari sweety jo abhi abhi nind se uthi hui lag rahi thi khade the .


Budhau puchhane laga,

Budhau : kya hua beta, kyu itne jorse chillaye ? Koi bhoot dekha kya ?


Sala budhau se accha to wo chudail thi jo ek he baar me kha jati kam se kam iske jesa dimag ka dahi , dudh, lassi to nahi karti.


Us budhau ke picche khadi sweety ne uske jesa muh chalane ki nakal karte hue funny chehara banaya sala me to sab bhul gaya kon chudail, kaisa sapna, kon doctor aur budhau ki bakwas bhutiya kam chutiya type theory.


Jese tese budhau ko room se bhaga diya tab jake chain mila ,aur sweety mere sukoon bhara chehara dekh ke joro se hasne lagi.


Mai : "Kya ?"


Sweety : "kuch nahi ", aur firse hasne lagi .


Mai : ab bataegi ya nahi?


Sweety : Yaar tumhe dekhakar aisa laga ke tuze chudail se kam us uncle se jyada dar lag raha he.


Mai : Ha yaar sach me dimag kharab kar diya isne .


Sweety : Chalo so jao ab dekho 3 baj gaye he ,aur subah 6 baje ka plan cancel karte he ,uski jagah 10 baje nikalenge idhar se OK.


Mai : ya it will be better, good night.


Sweety : ( muskurate hue ) Good night have bad dreams.


Ispar mene hath jod kar usko darwaje ki taraf ishara kiya .
Aur wo bhi hasti hui firse good night kehkar uske room me chali gayi.


Aur me , me to chupchap chaddar odh kar so gaya bina koi daravana sapna dekhe.



To be continued...

Yeh romance chalte chalte bich mein horror plus comedy tadka
joh bhi ho kaafi funny hai..
btw doctors daravane nahi hote

Attraction kaho ya pyar kaho ya jo bhi kaho iska ehsas he bahot khushnuma sa lag raha tha, bas uski ek zalak dekhane ke liye dil itna bechain ho raha he jaise kai saalo baad mil raha hu.
Uska yu meri taraf gusse se dekhana bhi pyar lag raha he, par ise pyar bhi nahi samaz sakta kyonki wo khana ke liye company dene nahi aya is wajah se gusse me ho sakti he.

Pehle puri tarike se jaan le woh ki ladki koun hai.. actually mein kahan se aayi hai.. family background kya hai, kahin koyi aparadh karke idhar chupi ho.. bina jaankari ke pyar karna.. ant mein kahin ghatak sabit na hon jaye abhishek ke liye..
Khair let's see what happens next
Brilliant update.... Great going