Romance " Fitoor "

[Tahirtahir111]

Zabardast update

 

[Samurai]

Chotu sa update tha but mast tha
Wo bhi aise moke pe khatam kiya
Agar readers ki sansein atak jati to

Ye rahul ni lag ra jisne phone uthaya hai ya to Nati hai ya fir
Dadi
Lets see

rahul to giyo kaam se dadi ke nati ne uthaya tha thanks

 

[Samurai]

for 101 pages

 

[Samurai]

mera pehla comment h apki story pe actually kal se hi padhni start ki hai .
bohat pyari love story hai . sabdo pe kafi achi pakad hai apki . apke update jyada lambe to nhi hote lekin apke sabdo ke meaning bohat gahri hoti hai . agar dhyan se padha or samjha jaye to ap 3-4 update jitna 1 hi update mai likh dete ho . Mann ko jaise thandak si mil jati hai apke sabdo ki gahrayi mai khoke . apki story pe mera pehla comment qabool kare .
thank for this lovely update .
keep entertaining us.

on story . Chhoti si love story hai , adhi paar hai aadhi bachi hai thanks

 

[Samurai]

Superb Update​

Baat to bilkul sahi hai Reveka ki.



Really straight forward idea.



Very nice Socha nahi tha itni jaldi bol degi Riya...But jo bhi kaha bahut shaandar tarike se kaha wo bhi itne kam time me.

Yaha bhi uska pyar hi dikh raha hai...Bina kuch jaane saamne kaun hai aur kaisa mood me hai, keh diya apni dil ki baat...Jo apne dil me tha usse chhupaaye bina aur mauka ka intejaar kiye bina bina hi sab kuch keh diya.

Lekin aisa lag raha hai koi misunderstanding hone wala hai...Shaayad dusri taraf Rahul nahi hai.

Superb Update...Very well written.

Waiting from response from other side...Agar Rahul hai to waiting for his lovely reply.

Update se achha apka review tha adhi story paar aadhi bachi hai thanks

 

[Samurai]

Aaj do update the abb kal kya likhu:

 

[Samurai]

Mast update
Gajab dha diya
Wse ye kaisa proposal tha
Rejected

Parth arhah hai roya khush hai
Mummy ko to bahu hi chahiye na riya ho ya nati
Dadi se poche begair mean beta serious hi hogyi mummy to
Ek or update aye ga na aj

Haan mom ko bahu se matlb par natasha ke sath dadi wala locha proposal seedha sadha sweet sa tha abhi bht rayeta failayegi apki nati thanks

 

[Samurai]

ye kya fast bus chali the kya ju ne jo ye riya furr se call kiya or furr se kat diya.
bechara samne vala kon hai ye bhi na dekha or bus lejake sedha uske accident kar diya acha huaa vo druva tha natasaha hoti to fear se dono ki story ki what lag jati.
ab delhi main miln hoga dono ka lagata hai

baba ji pyaar karna asan hota hai par ijhaar karna bahot mushkil upar se Riya ki train to platform chhod chuki hai , wakt kam hai aur kaam jyada kyu ki uska samna Natasha se hai jo naha dho kar rahul ke peechhe hai
Thanks

 

[Samurai]

So lovely update.....
Rahul ki dil ki dhadkane toh bullet train ki tarah doudne lagi hai Riya ki muhhbotte izhar sun kar.....
Aap ne iss update ke madhyam chehre mein muskurahat la diya....
for the update

pyaar ki dastan me dard aur khushi dono bhari hoti hai . Pata hai jab mai koi love story padhti hoon to mere dimag me kayi din tak wo ghoomti rahti hai abhi aur bhi adaayein hain Natasha ki thanks

 

[_ABHAY_Smarty_]

Wow... Wow.. wow...
Mere pass sabd nhi hai tareef k lie.... Such a beautiful moment that was....
Super... Se upar... Hai boss.....

Itne din gyb rha uske liye sorry but.. story continue padta tha... And aaj mauka mill hi gya...

He he he.. what a lol moment yaar....

"Reveka ~ koi na bura dikhta hoga .
Riya ~ sabse handsome hai wo"

Toh aakirkaar riya ne apne pyaar ka ijhaar kr hi diya... All thanks to revika... Itna encourage koi exam k liye kyu nhi krta....

Lekin kya rahul uske pyaar ko accept krega.. yaa fir se natasha ka darr use ijhaar nhi krne dega...

Kya hoga jab riya or rahul party me milenge.... ek magical night is coming in our way...


Bhut hi besabri wala wait.... jaldi se update dedo....