Romance " Fitoor "

[Champ_AK_81]

Cant describe anything about this Update.

Best Update...Padhne me bahut maja aaya...Really a great Update...One of the best Update I have ever read in any story.

Rahul ~ Riyaaaaa , uski call aayi thi , kkkkkya bol rahi thi , bol na yaar please .uff unbelievable , mere liye call kiya usne . Usne khud kaha wo sab paka kaha kya yaar ,

Rahul's expression says everything...Kitna utaawla aur khus ho gaya Riya ka apne liye pyar ki izahaar sun kar...Yahi to wo baat aur pal hota hai jo har premi sunna chaahte hai.

Dhruva ka Rahul ko sataana padh kar bahut majaa aaya...Rahul ka reaction dekhne laayak tha.

Dhruva wapas daudte huye room se bhag gaya . Rahul ne back to back saikdon baar recording suni . Tadap utha wo Riya ko dekhne ke liye . Uska ek ek shab Rahul ke ishq ki doobti nayya ko sanjeewni ban kar laga tha . Ishq uske bheetar teji se saanse bharne laga tha . Isi khushi me use Kuhu ki baatein bhi yaad aa gayi ki Riya uske liye bahut Royi hai . Aankh band kar usne thandi saans li aur uske jehan me Riya ka muskurata chehra ghoom gaya jo aaj sirf uska tha , Rahul ke aankhon ke kinare khushi ke amrit se bheegte chale gaye .

...Really great writing.

Rahul ka sabhi dar aur soch ek pal me clear ho gaya Riya ki izahaar sun kar.

Really great proposal updates...Majaa aa gaya dono ka pyar dekh kar aur padh kar.

Khair, koi issue nahi hua...Dhruva ne suna...Warna bahut kuch ho sakta tha.

Now, lets wait and watch...How Rahul Natasha from his life.

 

[Champ_AK_81]

Sorry for late reading...Kal update post hua tha ye baat pata hi nahi chala aur itna accha update miss kar diya.

 

[Champ_AK_81]

Waiting for today's update.

 

[Aryan s.]

Waiting for more

 

[Champ_AK_81]

Waiting for next update.

 

[Jitu kumar]

Awesome update ,
Update padh kar man mayur ki tarah nachane laga,
revaka ke encourage karne par riya ne apne pyar ka ijahar kar hi diya,
mujhe to laga tha ki agar natasha ne phone uthaya hoga to satyanash ho jana tha,
lekin dhruva ne call uthaya tha aur usne rahul ko recording bhi suna diya,
ab dekhte hai ki rahul apne pyar ka ijahar kaise karta hai,
Waiting for next update

 

[Samurai]

Sorry kal busy thi , Update aaj

 

[Samurai]

hamesha ki tarah lazwab update.
pyar sacha ho to unhe milne se koi rok nahi sakta .wese to log kahte hai ye sab film baate hai dialogue hai etc etc. but aisa haqikat mai bhi hota hai bas pyar sacha hona chahiye .
thanx for this lovely and romantic update .
keep entertaining us.

aapne sahi kaha ki sachche pyar ko koi rok nahi sakta hai baki logo ka kya hai kuchh bhi kahne se pahle wo bhool jate hain ki kahaniya bhi kisi ne ji hoti hain tab wo logon tak pahunchti hai . Abhi bht kuchh bacha hain. Thanks

 

[Champ_AK_81]

Sorry kal busy thi , Update aaj

Ok will be waiting.

 

[Faizan_okerlund]