Romance " Fitoor "

[Samurai]

Great job bro

But too short

Keep going

Will wait for next update

hmm short ho ja raha hsi biggo updt ki try karungi . Thanks

 

[Samurai]

Awesome update ,
Update padh kar dil prasannata se prafullit ho gaya,
riya aur krish ka conversation to lajawab hai,
Aur riya ka sharmana it's an epic moment,
lekin ye natasha hamesha rahul ki khushiyo ko grahan lagane aa jati hai,
ab rahul ki mummy ko bhi sath le jane ke piche bhi uska koi maksad jaroor chhipa hai,
aur krish ka pochinki wala dialogue to jabardast tha,
ab dekhte hai aage kya hota hai,
Waiting for next update

rahul ki mom ko pata rahi hai natasha kyu ki dadi ko patana uske vash ka nahi hai par wo dumbo Rahul ko pata hi nahi payi khair abhi to rayeta failna shuru hua hai thanks

 

[Samurai]

Welcome back dear,
शाम को ऑफिस से आके पढूंगा

 

[Samurai]

Superb update

Bhai natasha ka kuchh karo.ye ladki har bar band bajane pahunch jaati hai hero ka.

Abhi to Natasha kya karegi ye tension ho rahi hai baki to baad ki baat hai upar se mom ko bhi mila liya usne

And welcome back

Good to see you

thanks

 

[Samurai]

shandarr update bro....

thanks

 

[Champ_AK_81]

Waiting for next update.

 

[Jitu kumar]

Waiting for next update

 

[PARADOX]

waiting...

 

[Samurai]

Superb Update

Portion between Krish and Riya was nice...Bahut masti majaak tha.

Krish Pubg ke liye gf ko block kar diya. . Sahi hai.

Romantic portion between Riya and Rahul was excellent. Rahul to deewana ban gaya hai.

And Natasha was equally irritating.

Har baar aa jaati hai Rahul ke saath saath readers ka mood off karne.





Great update...Waiting to see Rahul in Delhi with Riya.

Superb going.

Pasand karne aur sath dene ke liye shukriya . Aaj kal wakt kam mil raha idhar aane ka isliye likh bhi kam pa rahk hoon saath rahiyega dhamaka karne ka man hai thanks

 

[Champ_AK_81]

Pasand karne aur sath dene ke liye shukriya . Aaj kal wakt kam mil raha idhar aane ka isliye likh bhi kam pa rahk hoon saath rahiyega dhamaka karne ka man hai thanks

Post update whenever you get free time...And for me (as reader) quality matters than quantity...More quantity is always great, but what matters most is quality and quality of each and every update is fine. ...Superb going.

And I will always be connected with this awesome story as a reader.