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Well I am new here aur is site par ye main pehli hi story padh raha hu. starting kafi achi hai bas abhi to 2 hi update padhe hai jisme pehle main to introduction diya aur dusre main hero ke rishte ki baat chala di. ab thoda thoda intrest badhta ja raha hai kyuki story ka start acha hai ab dekhte hai aage kya hoga is kahani main... Keep up the good work.
aakhir bhai ne behan ko mana hii liya aur lagta hai ke car shayad apne hero ki hi hogi update 4 was superb
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Update ~ 28
Apne room me jakar sir tham kar baith gaya . Achanak use jab mobile ke vibration ka ahsas hua to usne dekha ki time 01 :30 am ho rahe the aur mobile par Riya ke 44 calls pade the .
Riya ka khayal jehan me aate hi Rahul ke pairon tale jameen khisak gayi kyu ki wo Riya ko suicide point par aadhi raat akeli chhod kar aaya tha wo bhi 31st ki night koi chance hi nahi tha cab milne ka . Rahul ne apni is harqat par khud ko poori taqat se ek goonsa jada aur bina der kiye bahar ki ore bhaga .
Uske papa aur dadi rokte rah gaye lekin Rahul ko na kisi ki awaaj aa rahj thi na hi koi dikhai de raha tha . apni car ko uski takat se bhi tej daudane ki koshish karte huye Rahul ne Riya ka no dial kiya to uska no switch off aa raha tha .
Aaj pahli baar hua tha ki kisi anhoni ki aashanka se Rahul ke haath paaw phool gaye the . Apne bhagwan ko manata hua wo 30 min me suicide point pahunch gaya . wahan sannata pasara tha . Uski party place ki lights off ho chuki thi aur wahan jo do char ghar bane the unki lights bhi off thi . Rahul apni car me hi sir thame baith gaya . Kadake ki thand me bhi uske mathe pe paseene ki boonde chamak uthi aur use apna dimag block hota mahsoos hone laga .
Rahul Kuhu ko call lagane hi ja raha tha ki achanak chhotu ke ghar ka door khula aur dari sahmi si Riya bahar aa gayi . Rahul ke pairon me jaise jaan aa gayi thi .wo car se utar kar betahasha Riya ki taraf dauda , wo bas Riya ko salamat dekh kar tasalli karna chahta tha , doosri taraf jab Riya ko confirm ho gaya ki ye Rahul hai to wo betasha Rahul ki ore daudi aur jis pal dono aamne samne aaye Riya uske uske haanton ko pakad kar rone lagi .
Riya ke rone se uska darr saaf pata chal raha tha . Rahul ko khud se nafrat hone lagi thi . Usne Riya ko apni baahon me buri tarah jakad diya . Uski aankhein bhi namm ho gayi . Wo Riya ko lagataar sorry bole ja raha tha . Riya hichkiyan le kar rote huye boli .
Riya ~ mujhe laga aap ko kuchh ho gaya hai , mai bahut dar gayi thi .
Rahul uski masoomiyat par mar mita . Ek taraf Rahul use itni raat ko akele chhod kar chala gaya tha to doosri taraf wo thi jo abb bhi uski salamti ko lekar pareshan thi .
Riya ~ mai bahut dar gayi thi , aap ne meri call bhi nahi li aur aaye bhi nahi .
Rahul ~ mujhe maaf kar do mai bahot pareshan hoon Riya . Mai bahot sharminda hoon jo mujhse itni badi galti ho gayi aakhir mai aise kad bhi kaise sakta hoon.
Riya ~ koi baat nahi mai theek hoon aur abb rlx hoon kyu ki aap sahi salamat hain .
Rahul ~ tumne kuchh khaya Riya ?
Riya ~ nahi mujhe bahut fikar ho rahi thi aap ki to kaise khati par haan party jaise aap chahte the karwa di maine .
Rahul~ tum bhookhi bhi ho aur tumne jacket bhi nahi dali hai . Chalo car me baitho yaar maine kya socha tha kya ho gaya . Tumko dekhna chahta gha aur kya kya dekh liya
mere sath to aise hi hota hai par maine tumhare sath bhi yahi kar diya . Kitna bira hoon mai .
Riya ~ bahot achchhe ho aap . Duniya me sabse achchhe ho . Kuchh bura nahi hua . Na aap ke saath na mere sath .
Riya ne apne panje unche kiye aur khud ko upar uthane lagi kyu ki wo Rahul se chhoti thi . Rahul ne uski kamar me haath lapeta aur use upar kheench liya . Riya ne apne haathon md Rahul ka chehra thama aur apni aankhein band kar ek meetha sa chumban Rahul ke maathe par ankit kar diya . Jawaab me Rahul ne uske honthon ko apne hontho se tham liya .
Thodi door par khadi car me baithe do log is najare ko dekh stabdh the .
Apne room me jakar sir tham kar baith gaya . Achanak use jab mobile ke vibration ka ahsas hua to usne dekha ki time 01 :30 am ho rahe the aur mobile par Riya ke 44 calls pade the .
Riya ka khayal jehan me aate hi Rahul ke pairon tale jameen khisak gayi kyu ki wo Riya ko suicide point par aadhi raat akeli chhod kar aaya tha wo bhi 31st ki night koi chance hi nahi tha cab milne ka . Rahul ne apni is harqat par khud ko poori taqat se ek goonsa jada aur bina der kiye bahar ki ore bhaga .
Uske papa aur dadi rokte rah gaye lekin Rahul ko na kisi ki awaaj aa rahj thi na hi koi dikhai de raha tha . apni car ko uski takat se bhi tej daudane ki koshish karte huye Rahul ne Riya ka no dial kiya to uska no switch off aa raha tha .
Aaj pahli baar hua tha ki kisi anhoni ki aashanka se Rahul ke haath paaw phool gaye the . Apne bhagwan ko manata hua wo 30 min me suicide point pahunch gaya . wahan sannata pasara tha . Uski party place ki lights off ho chuki thi aur wahan jo do char ghar bane the unki lights bhi off thi . Rahul apni car me hi sir thame baith gaya . Kadake ki thand me bhi uske mathe pe paseene ki boonde chamak uthi aur use apna dimag block hota mahsoos hone laga .
Rahul Kuhu ko call lagane hi ja raha tha ki achanak chhotu ke ghar ka door khula aur dari sahmi si Riya bahar aa gayi . Rahul ke pairon me jaise jaan aa gayi thi .wo car se utar kar betahasha Riya ki taraf dauda , wo bas Riya ko salamat dekh kar tasalli karna chahta tha , doosri taraf jab Riya ko confirm ho gaya ki ye Rahul hai to wo betasha Rahul ki ore daudi aur jis pal dono aamne samne aaye Riya uske uske haanton ko pakad kar rone lagi .
Riya ke rone se uska darr saaf pata chal raha tha . Rahul ko khud se nafrat hone lagi thi . Usne Riya ko apni baahon me buri tarah jakad diya . Uski aankhein bhi namm ho gayi . Wo Riya ko lagataar sorry bole ja raha tha . Riya hichkiyan le kar rote huye boli .
Riya ~ mujhe laga aap ko kuchh ho gaya hai , mai bahut dar gayi thi .
Rahul uski masoomiyat par mar mita . Ek taraf Rahul use itni raat ko akele chhod kar chala gaya tha to doosri taraf wo thi jo abb bhi uski salamti ko lekar pareshan thi .
Riya ~ mai bahut dar gayi thi , aap ne meri call bhi nahi li aur aaye bhi nahi .
Rahul ~ mujhe maaf kar do mai bahot pareshan hoon Riya . Mai bahot sharminda hoon jo mujhse itni badi galti ho gayi aakhir mai aise kad bhi kaise sakta hoon.
Riya ~ koi baat nahi mai theek hoon aur abb rlx hoon kyu ki aap sahi salamat hain .
Rahul ~ tumne kuchh khaya Riya ?
Riya ~ nahi mujhe bahut fikar ho rahi thi aap ki to kaise khati par haan party jaise aap chahte the karwa di maine .
Rahul~ tum bhookhi bhi ho aur tumne jacket bhi nahi dali hai . Chalo car me baitho yaar maine kya socha tha kya ho gaya . Tumko dekhna chahta gha aur kya kya dekh liya
mere sath to aise hi hota hai par maine tumhare sath bhi yahi kar diya . Kitna bira hoon mai .Riya ~ bahot achchhe ho aap . Duniya me sabse achchhe ho . Kuchh bura nahi hua . Na aap ke saath na mere sath .
Riya ne apne panje unche kiye aur khud ko upar uthane lagi kyu ki wo Rahul se chhoti thi . Rahul ne uski kamar me haath lapeta aur use upar kheench liya . Riya ne apne haathon md Rahul ka chehra thama aur apni aankhein band kar ek meetha sa chumban Rahul ke maathe par ankit kar diya . Jawaab me Rahul ne uske honthon ko apne hontho se tham liya .
Thodi door par khadi car me baithe do log is najare ko dekh stabdh the .
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