Romance " Fitoor "

[Blade axel]

very nice update bro ...

 

[Prince sarkash]

Awesome update bro

Lagta hai Dadi nay dekh liya hai

Keep going

Will wait for next update

 

[Loveshuda111]

Natasha to bhut bdi .......h
Gajab ka fayda utha rhi
Isse Rahul bhi riya ke baare me bhul gya
Rahul ki haalat ekdam waisi ho gyi thi jaise jindagi pichhe chhut rhi lekin aise mil rhe h ki kabhi alag hi na ho
Emotions ko bhut achhe se darsaya gya h
And dusre car me i guess riya ki family ya kuhu ho

 

[ULTRA]

 

[ULTRA]

superb update

may be dhurv hi dekh raha hoga

 

[Samurai]

Well I am new here aur is site par ye main pehli hi story padh raha hu. starting kafi achi hai bas abhi to 2 hi update padhe hai jisme pehle main to introduction diya aur dusre main hero ke rishte ki baat chala di. ab thoda thoda intrest badhta ja raha hai kyuki story ka start acha hai ab dekhte hai aage kya hoga is kahani main... Keep up the good work.

on xf sir . I hope story apko pasand aayegi . Thanks

 

[Samurai]

aakhir teesre update main hero heroine ki mulakat ho hi gayi

Mulakat bhi aisi ki hadd

Kya baat kya baat aakhir bhai ne behan ko mana hii liya aur lagta hai ke car shayad apne hero ki hi hogi update 4 was superb

Bhai aur bahan ka rishta bahot pyara hota hai . Bhai saab ka role aage hai . Thanks

 

[Champ_AK_81]

Very nice Update.

Totally Speechless.

Bahut acche se emotions ko dikhaya...Rahul ka pacchtaana apne bhul ke liye aur fir Riya ke liye fikar.

Riya ka bhi Rahul ke baare me hi sochna.

Aur fir dono ki ek dusre ki saath baatein aur care.

Very nice...Really really great writing...Cant express it in my review.

Pyar har lamhe ke saath gehra hota jaa raha hai...Dekhte hai Car me kaun hai...Dadi ya fir Natasha...Jo bhi ho dhamaka hona to tay hai.


Excellent update...

Keep writing like this.

 

[Samurai]

 

[Samurai]

Zabardast update

Thanks