Fantasy (FUTURE) { Adult , Incest , Thriller , Romance , Fantasy }

[RAJIV SHAW]

Super mind blowing update hai bhai waiting for next.

 

[Raju Bhai]

Pahle uske purane update bhi yha lane padenge nhi to naye logo ko kya pta lagega ki is ki kahani kha se suru hui thi or kya hya tha

Bhai tujha kis ne keh diya ye apnay avi bhai hai?? Avi bhai se last time mere bat huye thi us ne kaha tha wo abhi bohat busy hai jesay free hoga wo apni story main mere family mera gaon complete karay ga or tujha kaha se laga is ka likhna avi bhai k jesa ? Avi Bhai bohat badey writer thay Yar kam se kam us ki bessti toh mat karo Yar ye keh k us jesa likha raha hai.... Ye sirf new writer ki trick hai k avi bhai k nam se id bana k story chalu ki hai taa k jalde se views badhay or reviews aai .. Or yadi ap logo ko story pasand aa rahi hai toh bhai writer ko support karo yadi ap is liye story parha rahay ho k avi Bhai hai toh bhool jao is bat ko..yahan pe yadi original writer ki stories parha ne hai toh wo kuch he writers hai or new hai.... dev 'abhay smarty' rkarya' baba bhai' aarif or mysteriouman' shubham' anandsing 'rishu' harryharsh' warrior boy' prince sahil' rishika' ye hai new or old writers hai xf pe baki sab fake hai

 

[Jay Sutar]

jadardast update bhai'
PEACE.

 

[Rohan008]

Keep rocking bhai
Brilliant update

 

[Ng_TheViper]

Nice update...

Pehle laga tha ki bachi jisko bachaya h wo koi 5-6 saal ki hogi but ye to abhi bilkul choti lag rahi h shayad 1 saal ki b ni .. maybe veer n isliye bacha Lia ki masoom nanhi si jaan n abhi duniya dekhi b ni .. maybe koi aur baat b ho bcoz bachi n abtk pareshan ni kia measn kch to baat h usme.

Veer n bachi ki information dene wale ko b apni powers s badal k Mama ji ko Batane k liye bola but agar Sach b pata chal jata to b Kya problem thi bcoz uske MAA baap to rahe ni us condition m b bachi ko veer apnepaas rakh sakta tha..
Maybe bachi Bach kaise gai is baat ko chupana chahta ho...

I think , update m veer Kya soch Raha h wo b likhna chahiye Taki cheeze clear rahe..

Kher , veer ab minaal aur rina ki help Kar Raha h . Rana to gaya ..

Let's see.

 

[Mahiirathore]

Nice Update bhai

Komal ko veer n apne gar rakhh liya h

Divya veer koi body dekhlar fan ho gyii h

Rina or minal par musibat aa gyii but veer n badii chalaki se unko control karke bacha rha h. Kudh in sab se durr rah rha h

Dekhte h aage kya hota h

 

[Rana1101]

Bhai Mere Naam Ke Villain Rana Ke Haath Todh Dena Iss Naam Ganda Karne Ke Jurm Mein

 

[crazyrex]

Very nice and fantastic update

 

[Abhi]

Superb update
Veer bacchi ko ghar le aaya.
Usne bacchi ko information dene walo ko
Badal kar information dene ko kaha.
Divya veer ki body dekhkar shock ho gayi.
Veer ne apni power se komal ko bacha liya.
Veer ke pass teleportation or samay rokne ki shakti hogi.
Jiska upyog vo kar raha hai.

 

[Raj]

SUPERB AND INTERESTING UPDATE BHAI