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anil.master

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Bhai tujha kis ne keh diya ye apnay avi bhai hai?? Avi bhai se last time mere bat huye thi us ne kaha tha wo abhi bohat busy hai jesay free hoga wo apni story main mere family mera gaon complete karay ga or tujha kaha se laga is ka likhna avi bhai k jesa ? Avi Bhai bohat badey writer thay Yar kam se kam us ki bessti toh mat karo Yar ye keh k us jesa likha raha hai.... Ye sirf new writer ki trick hai k avi bhai k nam se id bana k story chalu ki hai taa k jalde se views badhay or reviews aai .. Or yadi ap logo ko story pasand aa rahi hai toh bhai writer ko support karo yadi ap is liye story parha rahay ho k avi Bhai hai toh bhool jao is bat ko..yahan pe yadi original writer ki stories parha ne hai toh wo kuch he writers hai or new hai.... dev 'abhay smarty' rkarya' baba bhai' aarif or mysteriouman' shubham' anandsing 'rishu' harryharsh' warrior boy' prince sahil' rishika' ye hai new or old writers hai xf pe baki sab fake hai
bhai ye hak tuze kisane diya kisiko fake writer bolne ka mana ke id same ho lekin koi writer chota ya bada nahi hota har ek ka likhne ka apna lehja hota he isiliye sabki respect karani chahiue or rahi baat iss writer ki to inhone kabhi nhi bola ke wo wahi avi he to phir tumhe inhe aise baat karne ki permission kisane di aur kisiki aukat banane se pehle khudki aukat banani padati he aur aaj tumhari aukat meri najro me bohot choti ho chuki he sharm ani chahiye
 

Raju Bhai

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bhai ye hak tuze kisane diya kisiko fake writer bolne ka mana ke id same ho lekin koi writer chota ya bada nahi hota har ek ka likhne ka apna lehja hota he isiliye sabki respect karani chahiue or rahi baat iss writer ki to inhone kabhi nhi bola ke wo wahi avi he to phir tumhe inhe aise baat karne ki permission kisane di aur kisiki aukat banane se pehle khudki aukat banani padati he aur aaj tumhari aukat meri najro me bohot choti ho chuki he sharm ani chahiye



Maine jis bande ka reply diya hai pehlay wo parho phr maine kya likha hai wo bhi parha theek tarha se phr bola... Maine kaha hai k yadi story pasand hai to writer ko support karo yadi tm avi Bhai samjha k parha rhay ho toh bhool jao is bat ko... Or tmhri soch pe depend karta hai k tum kya sochte ho.. Rahi bat avi Bhai ki toh wo tmhray soch se bohat aagay hai or Maine kya kaha naam avi ka use kiya hai or q kiya hai avi ka nam use ye b har koi samajh raha hai bhai or agar sacha writer hota to pehlay update se har reader poch raha hai toh sach bata deta naa par ignore kar raha hai readers k is question ko... Or sharam kisay aani chahiye kisay nahi ye b har koi samajha raha hai
 
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Arjun Singh 72

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Maine jis bande ka reply diya hai pehlay wo parho phr maine kya likha hai wo bhi parha theek tarha se phr bola... Maine kaha hai k yadi story pasand hai to writer ko support karo yadi tm avi Bhai samjha k parha rhay ho toh bhool jao is bat ko... Or tmhri soch pe depend karta hai k tum kya sochte ho.. Rahi bat avi Bhai ki toh wo tmhray soch se bohat aagay hai or Maine kya kaha naam avi ka use kiya hai or q kiya hai avi ka nam use ye b har koi samajh raha hai bhai or agar sacha writer hota to pehlay update se har reader poch raha hai toh sach bata deta naa par ignore kar raha hai readers k is question ko... Or sharam kisay aani chahiye kisay nahi ye b har koi samajha raha hai
use Kar liya to Kya ho gaya
Avi Bhai fix Kiya hua name hi
 

123fuckeravi

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UPDATE 6
Tabhi minal ko aisa laga ki koi use controle kar raha hai
Minal ne rana ka hath pakda aur use mod diya
Rana ko yakeen nahi hua ki ek ladki ne uska hath itni aasani se mod diya
Tabhi rana ke hath ki haddi toot gayi
Kyunki minal ne kuch jyada hi jor laga diya tha.....
MINAL KO kya kisi ko bhi yakeen nahi hua
Ki yeh hua kaise
Lekin minal wohin pe nahi ruki
Usne rana ke munh pe ek laat maari
Woh dard se tadap utha
Apne boss ki aisi haalat dekh kar
Rana ke ladke minal pe jhapat pade
Ek ne minal ko punch maarne ki koshish ki
Aur dusre ne laat
Minal ne Block kiya
Dono ke munh pe kick maari
Baaki jo ladke the
Unki fat padi thi
Yeh dekhke ki itni speed mein minal ne dono ko kick maari thi
Lekin woh jante the
Ki agar woh kuch nahi karenge
Toh rana ka baap unhein nahi chhodega
Tabhi minal un ladko ke upar kud
Gayi
Uske baad batane ki jarurat Nahi hai
Ki wahan kya hua hoga
Kuch der mein police bhi aagayi
Inspecter shayad bhaang pee ke aaya tha
Inspecter...geraftaar kar lo is ladki ko
Minal...maaine kya kiya
Inspecter...kya kiya
In ladko ko itni buri tarah se maara hai tumne
Aur puch rahi ho kya kiya
(Tabhi ek ke baad ek gaadi college mein ghusi aur usmein se nikle
Commissioner sahab
Inspecter ne jab commissioner ko dekha
Uski gaand fat gayi
Inspecter...sir aap yahan
Commissioner....beti aap theek toh hain
(Tabhi minal commissioner ko papa kehte hue uske gale se lagke rone lagi
Inspecter bechare ki shakal aise ho gayi
Jaise uski izzat loot li gayi ho
Commissioner....le jao in haramzado ko lockup mein
Itni achhe se khatirdari karna
Ki zindagi bhar yaad rakhkhe
(Inspecter koi risk nahi lena chahta tha
Use dar tha ki kahin commissioner ko pata na lag jaaye ki
Woh uski beti ko arrest kar raha tha
Un sab ladko ko woh leke nikal gaya
Kuch der mein commissioner bhi nikal gaye
Uday aur ravi ko hospital le jaya gaya
Rina aur minal bhi unke sath chali gayi
Aur idhar veer nisha ka wait karne laga
Kuch der mein woh aagayi
Nisha... kya hua janab aaj akayle baithe ho
Tumhari dost nahi dikh rahi hain
(Veer ne use poori baat bata di
Nisha ke chehre pe muskurahat aagayi
Nisha...man mein...bachchu aage aage dekho hota hai kya
(Idhar hospital mein
Uday aur ravi lete hue the
rina minal ko ajeeb najro se dekh rahi thi
Minal....kya hua aise kyun dekh rahi hai
Rina...tune kab itni achchi tarah se ladna seekha
Uday...yeh sab karna hi tha
Toh thoda jaldi kar leti
Humari haddi tootne ka wait kyun kar rahi thi
Minal...mujhe khud nahi pata ki
Maine woh sab kaise kiya
Rina...kya
Ravi...kahin tere andar koi aaatma toh nahi aagayi thi
Rina...phir bakwaas shuru kar di tumne
Chup chaap lete raho
Ravi...are toh tum hi batao
Ki minal ke andar itni power kaise aagayi
(Sab soch mein pad gaye
Aur idhar veer nisha se aur kuch der baate karke apni class mein chala gaya
Jab rana ke baap ko pata laga ki
Rana lockup mein hai
Toh usne inspector ko phone lagaya
Don...kutte ke bachche teri himmat kaise hui mere bete ko lockup mein daalne ki
Tuihe apni jindagi pyari nahi hai kya
Inspecter....aapke bete ne commissioner ki beti pe hath daala hai
Main kuch nahi kar sakta
Don...achcha ruk tu
(Aur phir usne commissioner ko phone lagaya
Don... commissioner abhi ke abhi mujhe mera beta lockup ke bahar chahiye
Warna itne police waalo ki laashein gidengi
Ki tu ginga reh jayega
Commissioner....tu mujhe dhamki de raha hai
Itne din se maine tumhe bachaye rakhkha hai
Ek ishara karunga toh tera naamo nisha mit jayega
Karu boss ko phone karu
Aur batau ki tere bete ne kya harkat ki hai
Don....dekh yaar main Apne bete ki taraf se maafi maangta hoon
Use maaf kar de
Commissioner...kar dunga jab mera gussa Thanda ho jayega
(Aur phir phone cut gaya
Jab veer college se ghar pahuncha
Toh mami komal ko khila rahi thi
Phir mami komal ko veer ke god mein rakhke kitchen mein chali gayi
Kyunki divya aane waali thi
Jaise hi divya ghar pahunchi woh veer ko dekh ke ruk gayi
Divya...man mein...yeh kya ho raha hai mere sath
Bhaiya ko dekhke mujhe kya ho ja raha hai
Kahin mujhe bhaiya se pyar
Veer....are gudiya tu aagayi
Divya...haan bhaiya
(Phir teeno ne khana khaya
Tabhi veer ko kuch ehsaas hua
Aur woh khana ke beech mein uth gaya
Mami...kya hua veer
Veer...kuch nahi
(Aur yeh kehke veer apne room ki taraf badh gaya
Mami...batao toh hua kya
(Lekin veer kuch nahi bola
Aur apne room mein ghuske gate band kar liya
Tabhi uske saamne ek portal aagaya
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Aur veer uske andar chala gaya....
 

123fuckeravi

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Dosto Ek update raat ko bhi de dunga
Thanks for supporting me...
 
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sonukale

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Superb update
Lajawab story
Keep posting
 
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RAJIV SHAW

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Super update hai bhai waiting for next update
 

Rocky2602

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Nice n fantastic update
Waiting
 

Raj142

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Jabrdust update bhai
 
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