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Pichhle Do teen Updates mein kahani ne ek naya rukh le liya hai... Dimple Sanvy se lagatar impressed hoti jaa rahi hai... Pehle Arif Reza ke khilaf uski fighting skills dekh kar, then uss Brain Competition mein Sanvy ka words ko exact order mein yaad rakhna aur ab Miss Linda ke saath huyi ghatna sab kuchh kaafi gehra asar chhod gaya Dimple par...
So, laazmi tha ke wo Sanvy se seekhna chahti thi, especially those rare fighting skills... Par thoda sa paison ka ghamand baaki tha usmein jiske chalte galat bol gayi thi wo but baad mein khud hi ye cheez realise bhi ho gayi usse... Especially Veronica ke saath huyi baat cheet se bhi kaafi kuchh samjhi Dimple... Wahin Veronica ne jab usse Rashid Reza se bachaya tha tab wo theek se Veronica ko nahi dekh paayi thi... That's why uska ek clear face nahi balki ek dhundhli si image hi rahi Dimple ke Brain mein...
Khair, chahe pehchan naa paayi ho Dimple usse par Veronica ne bhi apni baaton aur Kitchen mein huyi cheezon se Dimple ko hairaan zaroor kar diya... Wahin Saneel aur Sanveer ke beech ki similarities ko jiss tarah Dimple ne saamne rakha wo saaf dikhata hai ke kitni baareeki se Dimple ne Sanvy ko observe kiya hai... Ab observation skills to of course uske sharp hain hi...
To, Veronica ki baat maante huye Dimple ne Sanvy se seekhne ki apni ichha ko sahi tareeke se saamne rakha aur fir Sanvy bhi maan gaya... Aakhir mana kaise kar de wo, uski life ki Heroine hai wo... Iss beech Dimple ko apna pehla test dena pada joki 1600m ki daud thi... National Record ke itna paas pahunchna wo bhi itni si umra mein saaf dikhata hai ke Sanvy se seekhne ke baad Dimple will turn into a hypersonic Missile... (And Sanvy's capabilities can only be imagined, I mean agar Dimple uss se seekh kar itni dangerous banegi to wo khud kya ban jaayega aage chalkar??)...
Par iss aakhiri update mein Jo future scene dikhaya aapne wo kaafi saare sawaal apne peechhe chhod gaya... Wo 2029 ka scene tha, currently story is running in 2020, matlab uss waqt 23–24 saal ke ho chuke honge ye dono... Sabse pehli baat jo notice ki jaa sakti hai wo Dimple ka Sanvy ko “AAP” kehkar sambodhit karna... It's almost evident ke Dimple bhi wo Organization join karegi jiski currently head shayad Veronica hai aur jinka slogan tha – “Wrong is not wrong if the result is right”... Sanvy of course Veronica ke baad uss organization ko lead karega & Dimple uske under kaam karti hai isiliye usse shayad aap kehkar sambodhit kiya hoga...
Secondly, Dimple ka Sanvy par attack karna with the same knife that Veronica used to save her from Rashid Reza... Ye attack ke do pehlu hain... Pehla to ye ki ye attack original hai, I mean Dimple sach much kisi kaaran se Sanvy ko maarna chahti thi... Ya fir jaise aapki pichhli dono stories mein Main Protagonist Villains ka Chutiya kaat diya karte the khud ko kamzor dikhakar, similarly yahaan Sanvy kar raha hoga Villain ko kisi jaal mein fansans ke liye...
Agar aisa hai to sab sahi hai par agar Dimple sach much usse maarna chahti thi then... Kyunki usne khud kaha ke ek hit mein Sanvy ki jaan jaa sakti thi, which means ke Sanvy satya mein oopar pahunch sakta tha... Khair, “RUTHLESS, HEARTLESS COLD BLOODED MURDERER”... In mahaan shabdon se to mujhe bilkul hairaangi nahi huyi... Definitely yahi ban jaayega Sanvy, iss baat mein koyi shakh nahi... Ye cheez to ussi din saabit ho gayi thi jab Arif ka patta cut hua tha... Those ending Lines by Principal Ranjana Matthews (Wo Ram – Raavan Waali)... Wo padhkar samajh aa gaya tha ke Veronica ki maut ke baad Sanveer will show up his another side, a side that'll turn him into something unimaginable...
Khair, mudde ki baat ye hai ki do cheezen yahaan ho sakti hain... First, Dimple ye apne Moral Values ke chalte kar rahi thi, I mean Maybe Sanvy will end up Hurting some Innocent people in his War against G.O.D. aur ussike chalte Dimple usse maarne ka thaan baithi... Secondly, maybe Sanvy will kill Dimple's Mom or maybe a slight chance her Dad... Maybe un dono mein se koyi ek Jaiden Chaudhary ya fir Directly G.O.D. ke saath connected ho aur uska haath Veronica ki death mein bhi ho...
So, over-all teen speculations hain... Pehli, Sanvy aur Dimple Villain Logis ka Chutiya kaat rahen hain, Secondly, Dimple wants Sanvy dead because he might have Killed or Harmed someone connected very closely to her & Third, For the sake of Saving some Innocent lives... Par ye teeno speculations bhi galat ho sakti hain kyonki VJ bhai aapki estory mein guess lagana matlab... Chhodo comparison tak naa mila mujhko to
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At last, Dimple has started getting trained from Sanvy... Aur pehle din ka lesson Vegetable chopping ke zariye sikhaya Sanvy ne... Jiss prakaar ke Angles & All ki jaankari di Sanvy ne usse, I think iske baad bhi agar 2029 mein wo Sanvy par sahi mein hamla kar rahi hai to usko ek psychiatrist se consult karna hi chahiye... Wahin jo Oath li Dimple ne uska bhi ek role ho sakta hai inki aage ki journey mein... Wahin jinn Moves – “Authority Moves” ke baare mein currently Sanvy ne Dimple ko bataya unhe nearly Perfect kar chuki hogi wo 2029 mein... Good progress
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At last, bahut se sawaal hai jinka jawaab shayad aage chalkar mile... Par iss update ka pehla scene ek badi cheez mujhe bata gaya... Wo ye ki ye Story meri umeed se bhi zyada massive hone waali hai... I mean Attitude 2 ko padhne ke baad ek cheez to main samajh gaya tha ke aapki imagination alag hi level ki hai aur iss story se ummedein bhi kaafi badh gayi thi... But the first scene of this update showed up with the fact that this “GALATH” Is going to remain in every readers heart forever...
Baaki VJ bhai aapki lekhni ki tareef ab kya hi karun... Nishabd sa kar diya hai iss update ne mujhe... Wo Brain Challenge mein Vice Principal ke dwara use kiye gaye words hon ya fir Ye Vegetable Training waala scene, ya fir 2029 waale scene mein jinn cheezon aur drishyon ka aapne varnan kiya, aur of course aaj tak jo bhi fight scenes likhen hain aapne iss story mein... You have just shown that you're a Genius... Aapki Imagination ki to koyi seema hai hi nahi baaki aapki knowledge alag alag subjects par, I mean you're not going to see such a deadly combination regularly... Kyonki ab tak ye story ye bhi dikha chuki hai ke aap story likhne se pehle kiss level ki research karte ho...
Iss se ye bhi saaf ho jaata that the hardwork you put in to present this masterpiece in front of us can't even be imagined... Simply ek 4000 words ka update likhne mein hi aadmi ke dimaag ke nut & bolt loose ho jaate hain and writing such skillfully... I just hope ke aap iss forum se kinaara naa kar len... I know ke aap do stories complete kar chuke hain & of course ye bhi karenge... Bas yahi Dua karunga ke aapki life mein Sab kuchh theek rahe aur aap issi tarah se apne dimaag ke jaadu se sabhi readers ko entertain karte rahen...
Really – Really Outstanding Updates Bhai & Waiting For Next...
So, laazmi tha ke wo Sanvy se seekhna chahti thi, especially those rare fighting skills... Par thoda sa paison ka ghamand baaki tha usmein jiske chalte galat bol gayi thi wo but baad mein khud hi ye cheez realise bhi ho gayi usse... Especially Veronica ke saath huyi baat cheet se bhi kaafi kuchh samjhi Dimple... Wahin Veronica ne jab usse Rashid Reza se bachaya tha tab wo theek se Veronica ko nahi dekh paayi thi... That's why uska ek clear face nahi balki ek dhundhli si image hi rahi Dimple ke Brain mein...
Khair, chahe pehchan naa paayi ho Dimple usse par Veronica ne bhi apni baaton aur Kitchen mein huyi cheezon se Dimple ko hairaan zaroor kar diya... Wahin Saneel aur Sanveer ke beech ki similarities ko jiss tarah Dimple ne saamne rakha wo saaf dikhata hai ke kitni baareeki se Dimple ne Sanvy ko observe kiya hai... Ab observation skills to of course uske sharp hain hi...
To, Veronica ki baat maante huye Dimple ne Sanvy se seekhne ki apni ichha ko sahi tareeke se saamne rakha aur fir Sanvy bhi maan gaya... Aakhir mana kaise kar de wo, uski life ki Heroine hai wo... Iss beech Dimple ko apna pehla test dena pada joki 1600m ki daud thi... National Record ke itna paas pahunchna wo bhi itni si umra mein saaf dikhata hai ke Sanvy se seekhne ke baad Dimple will turn into a hypersonic Missile... (And Sanvy's capabilities can only be imagined, I mean agar Dimple uss se seekh kar itni dangerous banegi to wo khud kya ban jaayega aage chalkar??)...
Par iss aakhiri update mein Jo future scene dikhaya aapne wo kaafi saare sawaal apne peechhe chhod gaya... Wo 2029 ka scene tha, currently story is running in 2020, matlab uss waqt 23–24 saal ke ho chuke honge ye dono... Sabse pehli baat jo notice ki jaa sakti hai wo Dimple ka Sanvy ko “AAP” kehkar sambodhit karna... It's almost evident ke Dimple bhi wo Organization join karegi jiski currently head shayad Veronica hai aur jinka slogan tha – “Wrong is not wrong if the result is right”... Sanvy of course Veronica ke baad uss organization ko lead karega & Dimple uske under kaam karti hai isiliye usse shayad aap kehkar sambodhit kiya hoga...
Secondly, Dimple ka Sanvy par attack karna with the same knife that Veronica used to save her from Rashid Reza... Ye attack ke do pehlu hain... Pehla to ye ki ye attack original hai, I mean Dimple sach much kisi kaaran se Sanvy ko maarna chahti thi... Ya fir jaise aapki pichhli dono stories mein Main Protagonist Villains ka Chutiya kaat diya karte the khud ko kamzor dikhakar, similarly yahaan Sanvy kar raha hoga Villain ko kisi jaal mein fansans ke liye...
Agar aisa hai to sab sahi hai par agar Dimple sach much usse maarna chahti thi then... Kyunki usne khud kaha ke ek hit mein Sanvy ki jaan jaa sakti thi, which means ke Sanvy satya mein oopar pahunch sakta tha... Khair, “RUTHLESS, HEARTLESS COLD BLOODED MURDERER”... In mahaan shabdon se to mujhe bilkul hairaangi nahi huyi... Definitely yahi ban jaayega Sanvy, iss baat mein koyi shakh nahi... Ye cheez to ussi din saabit ho gayi thi jab Arif ka patta cut hua tha... Those ending Lines by Principal Ranjana Matthews (Wo Ram – Raavan Waali)... Wo padhkar samajh aa gaya tha ke Veronica ki maut ke baad Sanveer will show up his another side, a side that'll turn him into something unimaginable...
Khair, mudde ki baat ye hai ki do cheezen yahaan ho sakti hain... First, Dimple ye apne Moral Values ke chalte kar rahi thi, I mean Maybe Sanvy will end up Hurting some Innocent people in his War against G.O.D. aur ussike chalte Dimple usse maarne ka thaan baithi... Secondly, maybe Sanvy will kill Dimple's Mom or maybe a slight chance her Dad... Maybe un dono mein se koyi ek Jaiden Chaudhary ya fir Directly G.O.D. ke saath connected ho aur uska haath Veronica ki death mein bhi ho...
So, over-all teen speculations hain... Pehli, Sanvy aur Dimple Villain Logis ka Chutiya kaat rahen hain, Secondly, Dimple wants Sanvy dead because he might have Killed or Harmed someone connected very closely to her & Third, For the sake of Saving some Innocent lives... Par ye teeno speculations bhi galat ho sakti hain kyonki VJ bhai aapki estory mein guess lagana matlab... Chhodo comparison tak naa mila mujhko to
...At last, Dimple has started getting trained from Sanvy... Aur pehle din ka lesson Vegetable chopping ke zariye sikhaya Sanvy ne... Jiss prakaar ke Angles & All ki jaankari di Sanvy ne usse, I think iske baad bhi agar 2029 mein wo Sanvy par sahi mein hamla kar rahi hai to usko ek psychiatrist se consult karna hi chahiye... Wahin jo Oath li Dimple ne uska bhi ek role ho sakta hai inki aage ki journey mein... Wahin jinn Moves – “Authority Moves” ke baare mein currently Sanvy ne Dimple ko bataya unhe nearly Perfect kar chuki hogi wo 2029 mein... Good progress
...At last, bahut se sawaal hai jinka jawaab shayad aage chalkar mile... Par iss update ka pehla scene ek badi cheez mujhe bata gaya... Wo ye ki ye Story meri umeed se bhi zyada massive hone waali hai... I mean Attitude 2 ko padhne ke baad ek cheez to main samajh gaya tha ke aapki imagination alag hi level ki hai aur iss story se ummedein bhi kaafi badh gayi thi... But the first scene of this update showed up with the fact that this “GALATH” Is going to remain in every readers heart forever...
Baaki VJ bhai aapki lekhni ki tareef ab kya hi karun... Nishabd sa kar diya hai iss update ne mujhe... Wo Brain Challenge mein Vice Principal ke dwara use kiye gaye words hon ya fir Ye Vegetable Training waala scene, ya fir 2029 waale scene mein jinn cheezon aur drishyon ka aapne varnan kiya, aur of course aaj tak jo bhi fight scenes likhen hain aapne iss story mein... You have just shown that you're a Genius... Aapki Imagination ki to koyi seema hai hi nahi baaki aapki knowledge alag alag subjects par, I mean you're not going to see such a deadly combination regularly... Kyonki ab tak ye story ye bhi dikha chuki hai ke aap story likhne se pehle kiss level ki research karte ho...
Iss se ye bhi saaf ho jaata that the hardwork you put in to present this masterpiece in front of us can't even be imagined... Simply ek 4000 words ka update likhne mein hi aadmi ke dimaag ke nut & bolt loose ho jaate hain and writing such skillfully... I just hope ke aap iss forum se kinaara naa kar len... I know ke aap do stories complete kar chuke hain & of course ye bhi karenge... Bas yahi Dua karunga ke aapki life mein Sab kuchh theek rahe aur aap issi tarah se apne dimaag ke jaadu se sabhi readers ko entertain karte rahen...
Really – Really Outstanding Updates Bhai & Waiting For Next...
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