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Thriller GaLaTH...(THE WRONG THAT MADE EVERYTHING RIGHT)

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Pichhle Do teen Updates mein kahani ne ek naya rukh le liya hai... Dimple Sanvy se lagatar impressed hoti jaa rahi hai... Pehle Arif Reza ke khilaf uski fighting skills dekh kar, then uss Brain Competition mein Sanvy ka words ko exact order mein yaad rakhna aur ab Miss Linda ke saath huyi ghatna sab kuchh kaafi gehra asar chhod gaya Dimple par...

So, laazmi tha ke wo Sanvy se seekhna chahti thi, especially those rare fighting skills... Par thoda sa paison ka ghamand baaki tha usmein jiske chalte galat bol gayi thi wo but baad mein khud hi ye cheez realise bhi ho gayi usse... Especially Veronica ke saath huyi baat cheet se bhi kaafi kuchh samjhi Dimple... Wahin Veronica ne jab usse Rashid Reza se bachaya tha tab wo theek se Veronica ko nahi dekh paayi thi... That's why uska ek clear face nahi balki ek dhundhli si image hi rahi Dimple ke Brain mein...

Khair, chahe pehchan naa paayi ho Dimple usse par Veronica ne bhi apni baaton aur Kitchen mein huyi cheezon se Dimple ko hairaan zaroor kar diya... Wahin Saneel aur Sanveer ke beech ki similarities ko jiss tarah Dimple ne saamne rakha wo saaf dikhata hai ke kitni baareeki se Dimple ne Sanvy ko observe kiya hai... Ab observation skills to of course uske sharp hain hi...

To, Veronica ki baat maante huye Dimple ne Sanvy se seekhne ki apni ichha ko sahi tareeke se saamne rakha aur fir Sanvy bhi maan gaya... Aakhir mana kaise kar de wo, uski life ki Heroine hai wo... Iss beech Dimple ko apna pehla test dena pada joki 1600m ki daud thi... National Record ke itna paas pahunchna wo bhi itni si umra mein saaf dikhata hai ke Sanvy se seekhne ke baad Dimple will turn into a hypersonic Missile... (And Sanvy's capabilities can only be imagined, I mean agar Dimple uss se seekh kar itni dangerous banegi to wo khud kya ban jaayega aage chalkar??)...

Par iss aakhiri update mein Jo future scene dikhaya aapne wo kaafi saare sawaal apne peechhe chhod gaya... Wo 2029 ka scene tha, currently story is running in 2020, matlab uss waqt 23–24 saal ke ho chuke honge ye dono... Sabse pehli baat jo notice ki jaa sakti hai wo Dimple ka Sanvy ko “AAP” kehkar sambodhit karna... It's almost evident ke Dimple bhi wo Organization join karegi jiski currently head shayad Veronica hai aur jinka slogan tha – “Wrong is not wrong if the result is right”... Sanvy of course Veronica ke baad uss organization ko lead karega & Dimple uske under kaam karti hai isiliye usse shayad aap kehkar sambodhit kiya hoga...

Secondly, Dimple ka Sanvy par attack karna with the same knife that Veronica used to save her from Rashid Reza... Ye attack ke do pehlu hain... Pehla to ye ki ye attack original hai, I mean Dimple sach much kisi kaaran se Sanvy ko maarna chahti thi... Ya fir jaise aapki pichhli dono stories mein Main Protagonist Villains ka Chutiya kaat diya karte the khud ko kamzor dikhakar, similarly yahaan Sanvy kar raha hoga Villain ko kisi jaal mein fansans ke liye...

Agar aisa hai to sab sahi hai par agar Dimple sach much usse maarna chahti thi then... Kyunki usne khud kaha ke ek hit mein Sanvy ki jaan jaa sakti thi, which means ke Sanvy satya mein oopar pahunch sakta tha... Khair, “RUTHLESS, HEARTLESS COLD BLOODED MURDERER”... In mahaan shabdon se to mujhe bilkul hairaangi nahi huyi... Definitely yahi ban jaayega Sanvy, iss baat mein koyi shakh nahi... Ye cheez to ussi din saabit ho gayi thi jab Arif ka patta cut hua tha... Those ending Lines by Principal Ranjana Matthews (Wo Ram – Raavan Waali)... Wo padhkar samajh aa gaya tha ke Veronica ki maut ke baad Sanveer will show up his another side, a side that'll turn him into something unimaginable...

Khair, mudde ki baat ye hai ki do cheezen yahaan ho sakti hain... First, Dimple ye apne Moral Values ke chalte kar rahi thi, I mean Maybe Sanvy will end up Hurting some Innocent people in his War against G.O.D. aur ussike chalte Dimple usse maarne ka thaan baithi... Secondly, maybe Sanvy will kill Dimple's Mom or maybe a slight chance her Dad... Maybe un dono mein se koyi ek Jaiden Chaudhary ya fir Directly G.O.D. ke saath connected ho aur uska haath Veronica ki death mein bhi ho...

So, over-all teen speculations hain... Pehli, Sanvy aur Dimple Villain Logis ka Chutiya kaat rahen hain, Secondly, Dimple wants Sanvy dead because he might have Killed or Harmed someone connected very closely to her & Third, For the sake of Saving some Innocent lives... Par ye teeno speculations bhi galat ho sakti hain kyonki VJ bhai aapki estory mein guess lagana matlab... Chhodo comparison tak naa mila mujhko to :noo:...

At last, Dimple has started getting trained from Sanvy... Aur pehle din ka lesson Vegetable chopping ke zariye sikhaya Sanvy ne... Jiss prakaar ke Angles & All ki jaankari di Sanvy ne usse, I think iske baad bhi agar 2029 mein wo Sanvy par sahi mein hamla kar rahi hai to usko ek psychiatrist se consult karna hi chahiye... Wahin jo Oath li Dimple ne uska bhi ek role ho sakta hai inki aage ki journey mein... Wahin jinn Moves – “Authority Moves” ke baare mein currently Sanvy ne Dimple ko bataya unhe nearly Perfect kar chuki hogi wo 2029 mein... Good progress :D...

At last, bahut se sawaal hai jinka jawaab shayad aage chalkar mile... Par iss update ka pehla scene ek badi cheez mujhe bata gaya... Wo ye ki ye Story meri umeed se bhi zyada massive hone waali hai... I mean Attitude 2 ko padhne ke baad ek cheez to main samajh gaya tha ke aapki imagination alag hi level ki hai aur iss story se ummedein bhi kaafi badh gayi thi... But the first scene of this update showed up with the fact that this “GALATH” Is going to remain in every readers heart forever...

Baaki VJ bhai aapki lekhni ki tareef ab kya hi karun... Nishabd sa kar diya hai iss update ne mujhe... Wo Brain Challenge mein Vice Principal ke dwara use kiye gaye words hon ya fir Ye Vegetable Training waala scene, ya fir 2029 waale scene mein jinn cheezon aur drishyon ka aapne varnan kiya, aur of course aaj tak jo bhi fight scenes likhen hain aapne iss story mein... You have just shown that you're a Genius... Aapki Imagination ki to koyi seema hai hi nahi baaki aapki knowledge alag alag subjects par, I mean you're not going to see such a deadly combination regularly... Kyonki ab tak ye story ye bhi dikha chuki hai ke aap story likhne se pehle kiss level ki research karte ho...

Iss se ye bhi saaf ho jaata that the hardwork you put in to present this masterpiece in front of us can't even be imagined... Simply ek 4000 words ka update likhne mein hi aadmi ke dimaag ke nut & bolt loose ho jaate hain and writing such skillfully... I just hope ke aap iss forum se kinaara naa kar len... I know ke aap do stories complete kar chuke hain & of course ye bhi karenge... Bas yahi Dua karunga ke aapki life mein Sab kuchh theek rahe aur aap issi tarah se apne dimaag ke jaadu se sabhi readers ko entertain karte rahen...

Really – Really Outstanding Updates Bhai & Waiting For Next...

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Wow ! Outstanding review Death king bhau.
 
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Death king , Rudrathakur aur Jaguar भाई का रिभियू पढ़कर मुझे तो समझ में ही नहीं आ रहा है अब मैं क्या लिखूं ! कुछ प्वाइंट छोड़ा ही नहीं है उन्होंने ।
तीनों ने गजब का प्रिडिक्ट किया है ।

मुझे तो इस बात की खुशी है कि यह स्टोरी अब 2029 तक जारी रहने वाली है । 2020 के समय की स्टोरी फिलहाल रनिंग में है मतलब फ़्लैश बैक चल रहा है । इसके बाद प्रजेंट और फिर अपडेट्स ही अपडेट्स सालों तक । :D
वाह ! खुब मजा आने वाला है ।

इसके अलावा अब मैं सलाद काटने की कोशिश भी करने वाला हूं । सनवीर आहार्य की नजरों में , पूर्ण परफेक्ट होने के लिए उस के स्टाइल में सलाद काटना बहुत जरूरी है । वैसे मुझे विश्वास है , वैसा सलाद तो अपने जिंदगी में कटने से रहा ! इतना परफैक्शन लाना सम्भव ही नहीं । पर इसी बहाने भोजन में सलाद की मात्रा तो जरूर बढ़ जायेगी । :D

हमेशा की तरह सुपर से भी ऊपर वाला अपडेट था वि जे भाई ।
ब्रिलियंट अपडेट था यह ।
आउटस्टैंडिंग एंड अमेजिंग ।
 

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AB TAK AAPNE PADHA KI JAHAN EK TARAF SONU KA MAZAK UDAANE PAR SANVY CHOUBEY MISS KE KHILAAF STAND LETA HAI WAHIN DUSRI TARAF DIMPLE KO SIKHANE KE LIYE SANVY TAIYAR HO JAATA HAI.

AB AAGE:-


CHAPTER-1

(THE ETIOLOGY OF BEING GALATH)


UPDATE-58

DATE-1ST MAY 2029


(A GLIMPSE OF THE FUTURE)


AREA-NORTH AMERICA

PLACE-TIAGA BOREAL FOREST





REPORT OUR LOCATION....!!!


chopper se utarne ke baad jaise hi woh automatic bird hume chhod wapas ghoom door gaya toh apne hand bag se MBITR as in multiband inter/intra team sat phone nikaal piche ki taraf throw kiya maine jisse turant lapak liya DIMPLE ne...


DIMPLE-THIS IS DIMPLE BATRA...*** AUTHORIZATION CODE 10001, REPORTING OUR LOCATION....

hum BOREAL west 46/49 outskirts ke edge par pahunch chuke hain..

our exact location is latitude 53 degree west...

and now we are heading inside... time of entering the non hostile ground,2300...( night,11 pm..)

over and out...


sat phone par reporting karte hue apne bade se ruck sag bag ko kandhon par laade mere piche piche chal rahi thi DIMPLE....

forest area ke edge par pahunch chuke the hum jahan pahunchte hi neeche jhuk wahan moujud safedh mitti joki dekhne se barf ki tarah dikh rahi thi,usse press kar kuch check karne lag gaya tha mai...


DIMPLE-toh ye hain CONIFEROUS TREES....


forest ke andar ghus chuke the hum jahan hamara swagat chaaron taraf kudrati tour par bane bade bade CONIFEROUS TREES ne kiya tha...

chaand tha aasman me par roshni kaafi kam thi.. hamare haathon me hamari torch lights thi jjnki roshni ke sahare hum aage badhte jaa rahe the...


MAI man me-BOREAL... wakayi kamal ka forest hai ye... not dense but too huge..lag raha hai jaise puri duniya hai ye...

DIMPLE-soil is wet...

MAI-what else do you expect..!!!yahan ka summer paani barsata hai aur woh bhi achanak...

radio andar rakh lo..

DIMPLE-rakh liya hai...kya lagta hai, unka base kitna andar hoga...!!!!

MAI-approx,8 kms...

DIMPLE-how do you know...!!!!???


jahan jaa rahe the hum,us jagah ke exact location ki koi khabar nahi thi hume..

aise me mere jawab se DIMPLE ka hairan hona laazmi hi tha...


MAI-ye dekho... seeing the dots...they are humans...


calculator jaisa dikhne waala ek chota sa device aage kiya maine DIMPLE ke jisse dekh ek baar phir aankhein badi ho gayi thi uski...


DIMPLE-ye....ye toh wahi HEAT SIGNATURE IMPULSE SCANNER hai naa jo aapne college....


aage bolte bolte rook gayi thi new girl aur maine bhi kuch kaha nahi...

uske haath se apna device lekar apne pocket me daal liya tha maine...

HEAT SIGNATURE IMPULSE SCANNER...kisi bhi unknown aur non residential jagah par 10 km ke range me kisi bhi living body ke heat ko capture kar exactly read karne ki quality hoti hai isme...

mera khudka invention hai ye...

abhi bhi mere device me kareeb 10 heat signatures show ho rahe the...


DIMPLE-how can you be sure ki wahan human hi hain.. jaanwar ka herd bhi toh ho sakta hai...!!!

MAI-thermal readings faint hai joki human existence me hi hote hain..animals hote toh dense hota...

sawal ho gaye hon toh move fast now...counting abhi 10 ki hai par i am sure ki ye reading base ki nahi,uske aage kisi safe surrounding ya fence ki hai..

numbers badhne ki possibility hai which will not be good...


apni baat bol mai un CONIFEROUS TREES se hota hua aage badh chuka tha..

DIMPLE bhi mere piche the...hum dono ne hi apne apne torch 45 degree angle par palm se sataya hua tha aur ungliyon ke giraft me hamare ED brown pistols chamak rahe the..

thoda tez par behadh chowkanne the is waqt hum dono..kareeb 20 minutes forest ke andar chal chuke the hum par tabhi..

mere aur DIMPLE, dono ke hi kadam ek saath rook gaye the...

REASON....

CONIFEROUS TREES ka woh aad jiske cover me hum ab tak aage badh rahe the,woh 10 metre me khatm hone waala tha...

uske aage tha ek 150 metre lamba aur lagbhag utna hi chowda open ground...

matlab saaf tha..us ground me cover rakhte hi we were going to be completely open...

kisi bhi tarah se chhupne ka koi chance nahi tha..

but achi baat ye thi ki mere banaye heat signature impulse scanner me abhi bhi kisi living body ka sign kareeb 5 kms door tha..

mere is device ko dodge ya manupalate nahi kiya jaa sakta tha...

atleast mujhe toh itna confidence tha hi...


DIMPLE-are you sure aapke device ko trick nahi kiya jaa sakta..

MAI-scared..!!!wapas jaa sakti ho...


meri baat par kuch keh nahi paayi DIMPLE..usse paused dekh aage badhne ko hua hi tha mai ki tabhi...


DIMPLE-can i shield....!!!!

MAI-go ahead...


scared..!!!mere is alfaz ka jawab diya tha DIMPLE ne...

mere haan bolte hi apne torch aur revolver, dono par grip thoda aur strong karte hue aage badh gayi woh...

apne apne knees ko halka bend karte hue badi chapalta se us open field me aage badh rahe the hum dono..

75 metres matlab ki aadha ground bina kisi rukawat ya danger ke araam se cross kar chuke the hum...


MAI-DIMPLE STOP...!!!!!


halke zor se boli thi maine ye baat par phir bhi fraction of the second se late ho chuka tha mai...


DIMPLE-ELECTRONIC MOTION SENSOR TRIGGER WIRE...SHIT....


field ke mid way par ek infrared ray,ek beam lagayi gayi thi joki ek security alarm hota tha...

jahan se bhi is device ko operate kiya jaa raha hota tha,kisi ke is beam ko touch karte hi wahan syren jaisa bajne lagta tha...


DIMPLE-sorry....


DIMPLE ka sorry jaise suna hi nahi tha maine..apne device me movement check karne me laga tha mai joki surprisingly normal hi tha..

wire trip hone par signatures ko speedily move karna chahiye tha par aisa kuch hua tha nahi...

they were all normal as before...


MAI-heat signatures ke movement abhi bhi normal hai..

DIMPLE-really...!!!but kyun...!!i mean tripping se alarm toh baja hi hoga...

MAI-hmm.. let's keep moving...and this time,try to be a bit more careful...


dobara aage badh chuke the hum par is baar chowkannapan pehle se double tha..

kuch hi der me woh maidan cross kar chuke the hum..

waise maidan bhale hi cross hi chuka tha par aage ka area abhi bhi kaafi open hi tha..

agle 200 metre tak koi bade pedh nahi the...

tiaga regions me ugne waale normal shrubs,mosses jaise chote chote poudhe aur phool thi dikh rahe the hume bas aur woh bhi har taraf nahi balki thode thode parts aur ek dusre ke gaps me...


DIMPLE-kaise dekh liya aapne us electronic trigger wire ko..it was invisible for naked eyes aur infrared binoculars abhi tak hamare bags me hi hai..

MAI-wire ke dono siro par zameen se lag behadh dim green lights flash ho rahe the..

ab zameen me aur aise open area me jugnoo toh chamkenge nahi..

hence, trigger wire....hold....


woh chote chote phool aur poudhe waale region me pair rakhne hi waale the hum ki tabhi DIMPLE ke haath ko pakad usse thoda piche kheench liya maine..


DIMPLE-land mines,right..!!!!


zameen me jhuk soil ko utha usse check kar hi raha tha mai ki tabhi DIMPLE ki baat sun palta mai uski taraf aur...


MAI-aisa kyun laga tumhe..!!!???

DIMPLE-forest edge par aap wahan ki soil check kar rahe the...

aapko pata tha ki mines bicche hone ka khatra hai jungle ke andar isiliye woh soil check kiya tha aapne..

cold aur wet wheather ki wajah se yahan ki soil acidic hoti hai aur extra hard bhi...

but most importantly, soil surface ke andar moujud permafrost joki frozen soil se banta hai,woh mines bichane waale case me soil ke acid ko slow poison me badal deta hai that results a small change in the colour of the soil..

white layers ke beech black blemishes create hote hain soil me joki yahan dikh rahe hain..

MAI-you are right...good...

DIMPLE-yahan se mines ka diameter kareeb 80 metres ka hai...


apne night sight binocular ko nikaal aage ke area ko check karne lagi thi DIMPLE..

ayr phir binocular ko neeche kar..


DIMPLE-how do we pass this 80 metres without stepping in any of the mines..

MAI-these shrubs and moses will help us...

DIMPLE-matlab...!!!

MAI-i will explain on the way..follow me...


ye bol halka jump lete hue ek shrub area me land hua mai aur phir waise hi ek dusre moses ke upar jump laga diya maine..

DIMPLE was following me..


MAI-permofrost sirf soil ko hi posion kar sakte hain,par fertile blocks me uge poudhon aur phoolon ko nahi...

par agar phoolon aur poudhon ko ukhaad wahan mines lagaye jaayen toh permofrost ka asar double ho jaata hai...the whole area becomes dark and with that suspicious...

isiliye mines lagane waale ne in poudhon aur phoolon ko mines free hi rakha hoga...

in areas me bhi mines lagana,usse pata tha it wont work..

par pata hai kamal ki baat kya hai...!!!

SOOBH....

MAI-tumhe bhi pata hona chahiye ki piche se SANVEER AHARYA par waar karna,it also won't work...never...


DIMPLE jisne apne back belt se ek badi si knife nikaal mere back head par aim karke throw ki thi,bijli si tezi ke saath ghoom us knife ko apne maathe se 2 inch door catch kar liya tha maine...


wahin DIMPLE face par shock,nafrat par most importantly, aankhon me dher saara dard liye hue mujhe hi dekh rahi thi...


MAI-COLD STEEL CHAOS BOWIE KNIFE.... common DIMPLE...kuch toh empathy rakho..

jis knife se meri MAA ne kabhi tumhari jaan bachayi thi,ussi se unke bete ki jaan lene chali thi tum...(RASHID REZA UPDATE)

DIMPLE- empathy....woh bhi tum jaise RUTHLESS, HEARTLESS COLD BLOODED MURDERER se...kaise pata chala tumhe...!!!

MAI-you know,this is what i so like about you.. itne challenging time me bhi apni curiousity kam nahi hone deti tum...

khair, SANVY ne toh hamesha tumhari saari curiosity calm ki hai,aaj bhi karega...

waise logic zyada tough nahi hai...jis ladki ko yahan ki soil,uski fertility,performost,uske side effects ke baare me pata ho,kya usse mines ke exact pin point location ke baare me andaza nahi hoga..

tumhare is jagah ke defination ne plants,flowers aur unka mines par prabhav,inke baare me tumhe pata hone ke logic ko clear kar diya tha...

aur sab kuch pata hone ke baawjud,unlike DIMPLE BATRA jo shield lene ke liye hamesha taiyar rehti hai,you remained back...

strange right...!!!


knife swing karte hue smile kar raha tha mai aur meri ye smile andar hi andar maar rahi thi DIMPLE ko..


DIMPLE-waise acha hi hua ki knife se bach gaye tum...

medulla oblaganta me pierce hota knife causing you instant death...usme kya maza...

before dying,i want you to suffer...


phoolon aur poudhon ke upar se jump lete hue theek jahan mai khada hua tha,wahan pahunchi DIMPLE aur...

SOOBH..SOOBHHHH...SOOBHHHH.....

hawa ko cheerte hue uske haath zig zag aur swingy pattern me ghumne lage the mere sharir par...

LAND MINES area ke beech khade the...agar hum dono me se kisi ek ka bhi pair ya koi bhi body part mine soil ke upar padh jaata toh dono ke liye hi game over tha but DIMPLE..

usse is baat se naa fark padna tha aur naa pada..

DHAKKKK..

teen aur sliding moves ke baad DIMPLE ka left hand fist merr chin par padh hi gaya..

shoulder joints ke pure pressure ko use karte hue bohot hi powerful hit tha ye jisne mere dono pair zameen se ukhaad se diye the..

hawa me piche ki taraf palath sa gaya tha mai par isse pehle ki mere pair zameen ko pura chhodte,floor pressure ko use kar pairon ko jhatka sa diya maine..

result...

back flip sa maarta hua pura 360 degree ghum sa gaya mai..

but kyunki ek lade hue bag ke saath back flip maarne ke liye jitne pressure ki zaroorat padti hai,utna floor pressure essert nahi kar paaya tha mai isiliye apne pairon me nahi balki girte hue apne thighs ke bal gira tha mai..

but thanks to my fast thinking,kyunki ghutne se neeche ka area maine fold kiya hua tha isiliye poudhon waale area ke edge par hi rook gayi thi meri body..

ek lambi saans chhod khada hua mai aur apne kapde jhaadte hue DIMPLE par nazar gayi meri jo mujhe hi ghoor rahi thi..


MAI-not bad, finally you have nearly perfected...

"THE AUTHORITY MOVES"...




BACK TO 2020:-

DATE-30TH JULY


CITY-DEHRADUN

PLACE-URJA PARK






WHAT'S WITH THE EXTRA EXCITEMENT...KOI MAGIC NAHI SIKHAANE WAALA MAI...!!!


apne promise ke exact hafte ke baad new girl ke is naye learning path ke liye hum dono morning ke 6 baje yahan the, dehradun ke outskirts me bane URJA PARK me..

face par new girl ke excitement kisi bacche ki tarah joki magic show me jaane se pehle ki hoti hai par jisse dabane ki puri koshish kar rahi thi woh,phir bhi saaf jhalak rahi thi...


DIMPLE-jo chizen maine tumhe karte hue dekha hai but most importantly,woh cheezen jo tumne kabhi ki nahi hai mere saamne par i have presumed that..

kabhi nahi socha tha maine ki that all can be real...

but ab woh saare once in a life learning lessons mai sikhne waali hun, excitement toh hoga hi...

par ek baat batao, dehradun se itni door is abandoned aur unfinished government project waale park me kyun aaye hain hum...???

MAI-answer ka chota part tumhare sawal me hi hai...it's abandoned...itna gigantic garden hone ke baawjud bohot kam log aate hai yahan aur itni subah toh bilkul bhi nahi...

unfinished project zaroor hai ye garden par the grass covering is good here...trees ki counting bhi kaafi hai jis wajah se bohot achi breeze 24/7 behti hai har taraf...


DIMPLE-aur cool breeze kisi bhi tarah ke intense training me soothness laane ka kaam karta hai...

MAI-haan par mujhse sikhne ke liye tumhe soothness sirf dimag me chahiye hoga and this place will help in that...

so ready for lesson number one..!!!

DIMPLE-always...

MAI-there is nothing as LESSON...

lesson ek aisi cheez hai jo by heart ki jaati hai..aur by hearted seekh ek waqt ke baad yaa toh hum bhool jaate hai ya phir out of practice ho jaate hain...

but on the other hand,if we LIVE what we learn,toh woh seekh hume hamare grave me jaane ke baad hi chhodti hai...

jo bhi tumne dekha hai mujhe karte hue ya phir assume kiya hai ki mai kar sakta hun,woh saari chizen maine sikhi nahi hai..

jee hain...ab tumhari baari...par usse pehle...



"IN FEARFUL DAY,IN RAGING NIGHT...

WITH A STRONG HEART,FULL MY SOUL IGNITE...

WHEN ALL SEEMS LOST IN THE WAR OF LIGHT...

LOOK TO THE SKIES FOR THE HOPE BURNS BRIGHT...

WHEN IMPORTANT,ONLY THEN I WILL FIGHT...

IN THE WORLD OF WRONG,I WILL DO WHAT'S ONLY RIGHT...



heart ke upar chest par apne haath rakh bole the maine ye saare lines jinhe sun aankhen hairangi se thodi bhar uthi new girl ki aur...


DIMPLE-oath..!!!are you serious..???

MAI-very...anti-caking additives.. washing detergent me paaye jaana ek chemical hai ye jisse kapde dhone jaisa harmless product bhi banta hai aur jaan lene waala explosive bhi...

skill se zyada important uska use hota hai..

jo oath maine bola aur ab tum bologi,if you are a correct person by heart,you will forever respect and follow the words..

yaad rahe,jo bhi tum sikhogi,koi school ya college ka regular drill nahi hoga..

it's gonna be serious..very, very serious...so...

DIMPLE-khudko check me rakhne ke liye,oath..i get it and i am ready...

MAI-kis GOD me yakin rakhti ho..???

DIMPLE-i believe in the power,not the image...

BRILLIANT...


new girl ki soch joki mujhse bilkul bhi alag nahi thi,usse jaan man hi man gesture diya tha maine usse...


MAI-then oath lete waqt ussi power ko zehen me rakhna...

DIMPLE-sure..

IN FEARFUL DAY,IN RAGING NIGHT...

WITH A STRONG HEART,FULL MY SOUL IGNITE...

WHEN ALL SEEMS LOST IN THE WAR OF LIGHT...

LOOK TO THE SKIES FOR THE HOPE BURNS BRIGHT...

WHEN IMPORTANT,ONLY THEN I WILL FIGHT...

IN THE WORLD OF WRONG,I WILL DO WHAT'S ONLY RIGHT"...


meri hi tarah chest ke upar haath rakh pure dil se oath repeat kiya tha new girl ne..


DIMPLE-so, what am i living today...???


nice.. learning ki jagah living joki mera tarika tha,use kiya tha new girl ne jispar smile karte hue left ki taraf badh gaya mai par agle kuch palon me jab ek bade se transparent polithin ko lekar wapas louta mai jisse dekh thoda zyada hi hairan ho gayi new girl...


DIMPLE-onion,tomato,carrot, cabbage...ye sab kya lekar ghum rahe ho tum...???

MAI-you missed radish..(mooli)


paas hi bane ek bench par un saare raw vegetables ko palat diya tha maine..


MAI-saw anything common...!!!

DIMPLE-sab 5,5 hain...

MAI-yup matlab tumhare paas 5 mouke hain...

DIMPLE-for what...!!!???


kuch kaha nahi maine balki apne track pant me fasa kar rakhe ek chiz ko bahar nikaal liya jisse dekh...


DIMPLE-ye toh wahi CRAFTSMEN MEZZALUNA SLICER knife hai naa jisse tumne us din salad kaata tha..


halka smile kar raha tha mai new girl ko dekh jiska matlab turant samajh gayi thi woh..


DIMPLE-are you serious...!!!salad kaatna..ye hai mera first learning task...!!!!

MAI-onion,tomato .95 A.o...cabbage 191A.o...carrot and raddish .65A.o...

DIMPLE-their radius....

MAI-haan..is knife se aise kaatne hain tumhe ye saare raw vegs ki in sabka cutting breadth exact c.m me calculate ho..exact c.m..

DIMPLE-aur kya hoga aisa karne se...!!???

MAI-first rule for learning..no questions..i say, you do,am I clear..!!!


meri awaaz me jo command tha,usse sun ek pal ke liye aisa laga DIMPLE ko jaise woh is waqt kisi high intensity army drill ka hissa hai aur saamne uske uska handler khada hai...


DIMPLE-understood..


ek shabd ka exact wahi jawab diya tha new girl ne jo sunana tha mujhe..


MAI-knife ke vegs ko touch karte hi your time starts..

i.e.2 minutes par try...

DIMPLE-what..!!!2 minutes...exact angles samajhne me kaafi waqt lag jaana hai..

MAI-toh lagne do..abhi ke liye you have five chances...now start...


meri baat sun ek lambi saans chhodi new girl ne aur mere haath se knife lekar us bench ki taraf jahan saare vegs joki uska task the, badh gayi woh..

onion aur tomato, carrot aur radish jodiyon me the isiliye unme se ek ek nikaal aas paas rakh diya new girl ne..

lastly cabbage bhi nikaal liya tha usne aur phir saare vegs ko alat palat karte hue unke angles samajhne lagi thi woh...

apni ungliyan ko scale,compass aur divider ki tarah use me laa vegs ke pure length aur breadth ko check karne me lag chuki thi new girl..

finally jab usse saare angles ko partial knowledge hone laga toh knife hold kiya usne..

maalum tha usse ki knife ke kisi bhi veg par rakhte hi uska given time shuru jo jaayega isiliye mujhe ek baar dekh lambi saans chhod saare calculations ko dimag me set kar usne knife sabse pehle onion ke upar rakh diya jiska matlab tha,her time had started...

SHIT...

par ye start kuch hi palon me end tak pahunch chuka tha..

angles chhodo,yunhi normally bhi tezi se onions kaatne me amateur thi new girl..

pehla slice hi tedha cut hua tha uska..jo angle banana tha, woh nahi ban paaya tha..


DIMPLE-first attempt toh fail ho gaya..kya mai practice ke liye baaki vegs par try kar sakti hun..???

MAI-sure..

DIMPLE-and it wont count as a try..!!!

MAI-sure...


jo leverage diya tha maine,usse sun khush ho gayi thi new girl par ye khushi zyada der tak tik nahi paayi thi...

reason..

onion ki hi tarah kisi bhi veg ko dhang se kaat nahi paayi thi woh.

frustration ne hadh se zyada ghar kar liya tha uske man me par face calm rakh apne second attempt ke liye ready ho gayi thi new girl..

par us patience ne kuch pay kiya nahi usse.. second ke baad third,fourth aur apne fifth as in final attempt me bhi completely fail ho gayi thi new girl..


DIMPLE-shit...shit...shit....shit...i am not doing this shit anymore...

MAI-karne ke liye attempt bacha bhi nahi hai... paanchon attempts aur mera budget, dono khatm ho chuke hain...

DIMPLE-attempt hote bhi toh nahi karti mai...

MAI-kyunki first time in life,kisi task me fail ho rahi ho tum..?? continously...!!!

DIMPLE-please..ye koi task ho hi nahi sakta...aur agar nahi sikhana tha toh first time ki tarah mana kar dete..

ye prank karne ki zaroorat kya thi..!!???

MAI-ye koi prank nahi tha...

DIMPLE-really... matlab tumhare saare heroics ka base salad kaatna hai..!!!


mock kiya tha new girl ne mujhe jispar smile kar aage badha mai aur uske paas pahunch...


MAI-may i..


apna knife maanga maine new girl se aur uske mujhe knife hand karte hi..

KTKTKTKTKTKTKTKTKT....

adha tircha jo shape de diya tha new girl ne saare vegs ko,unhe apne hisaab se angles banate hue kaatne chhatne laga tha mai..

jis speed se ye sab kar raha tha mai,new girl was quite surprised with my hand speed..

90 seconds.. exactly itne waqt ke baad mera hand movement rook chuka tha jiske baad knife chhod left me neeche baith gaya mai aur..

DHBBB..DHBBB..DHBBB..DHBBB...DHBBB...

apne chaar ungliyon ko fork ki tarah halka curve angle dete hue neeche lagi ghaans me zor se haath maara maine...kul paanch baar.

mere aisa karte hi ghaans aur uske neeche chuppi mitti ud si gayi aur agle hi pal un paanchon spots me gadhe ho chuke the..


MAI-vegs lekar aao..


meri saari harkat dekh confused face ke saath mere slice kiye onion,tomato,carrot,radish aur cabbage ko liye aayi new girl mere paas jiske baad..


MAI-pehle do gaddhon me onion aur tomato ko daalo..phir carrot aur radish and final hole me cabbage...


mere instruction ko sun neeche baith gayi new girl par jaise hi pehle hole me onion ko daala usne toh aakhein hairangi ki hadh tak failti chali gayi uski..

reason...

.95A.o...woh hole exactly utna hi bada tha jitna onion ka radius tha...

onion ko us hole me rakhne kw baad new girl ne turant tomato ko next hole me daala aur aisa karte hue bhi uski hairangi ka thikana nahi raha..

second hole ka radius bhi exactly utna hi tha jitna first hole ka tha...

itna hi nahi tomato aur onion, dono ke edges bhi exactly same cms ke kaate the maine..unki fitting hole me bilkul same baithi thi...

aur ye sab sirf onion aur tomato waale gaddhe ke hi nahi balki baaki teeno holes ki bhi kahani thi..

agle dono holes ka radius bhi exactly .65.A.o tha and finally cabbage ka .191.A.o...

bilkul waisa jaise shuru me bataya tha maine..saath hi saath unke cutting edges ke angles bhi same the..

fifth hole me cabbage ko daal apni vismay se bhari aankhon ke saath dekhne lagi mujhe new girl aur...


DIMPLE-this is bloody impossible...kaise kiya tumne ye..!!

MAI-balance..aisa word hai ye jispar ye pura planet tika hai phir ye mamuli hits kya chiz hain...

kisi ko hit karna badi baat nahi..par us hit ka exact impact reassure karna,ye badi aur zaroori baat hoti hai..

hamare haath,pair,sharir ke har ang aur unse release hone waale pressure par hamara complete control zaroori hai..

aur is balance,is technique ko master karne ka sabse best tarika hai chop salads..

kyunki vegs slightly spongy hote hain but at the same time,they are tough from within..

isiliye knife ke through unke perfect shape ko angle dena,its tough..

usse bhi tough hota hai unke slices ke on point cms tak ko calculate karte hue unhe kaatna..

par agar aisa karne me master kar liya jaaye toh...


DIMPLE-a person can know the exact dynamics of his or her wrist strength but more importantly,how to use that strength...


saare ganit ko samajh jaise ek baar phirse apne aap me hi surprise ho gayi thi new girl...


MAI-exactly...so,agar ab bhi sikhna chahti ho toh ghar jaao and practice what you tried here...

DIMPLE-oh i will..and sorry..tumhare methods par shak karne ke liye...


new girl ki baat par bas smile dete hue palath gaya mai jiske baad woh bhi turant mere saath ho li thi..

garden route bhar jahan mai pure park ko dekhne me laga hua tha wahin new girl ke dimag me bas woh pehla task hi ghum raha tha..

dekhte hi dekhte hum garden ke entrance gate ke paas pahunch chuke the par tabhi kuch click hua new girl ke dimag me aur..


DIMPLE-hey,ek sawal hai mera...!!!!

MAI-pucho..

DIMPLE-that night in mossy falls jab tum ladh rahe the us aadmi se toh i felt something..

aisa laga mujhe jaise apne hi nahi balki saamne waale ke moves bhi tum direct kar rahe ho...


new girl ki baat par is baar surprise hone ki baari meri thi..

i knew ki she has sharp eyes and a very good observation skill but jo abhi bataya usne,usse saaf pata chalta hai ki wakayi bandi me dum hai.. bohot dum...

wahin mere expressions ko dekh samajh gayi new girl ki uska andesha sahi tha..


DIMPLE-i knew it...mai sahi hun,right..!!!please batao mujhe,kaise kiya tha tumne woh..!!

MAI-"THE AUTHORITY MOVE".aisa move jisme hamare opponent ko pata hi nahi chalta ki uake daaw woh nahi balki hum direct kar rahe hain...

it's like hacking someone's mind and inserting our inputs...

DIMPLE-what...!!!kisi ke dimag me apne hisaab se thoughts daalna..ye kaise possible hai..???

MAI-naa mind hack karna odd hai naahi kisi ko apne hisaab se trap karna odd hai...

MAI-chalo,let me prove it to you..

DIMPLE-i am all in...

MAI-1 se 9 tak koi bhi ek number chuno aur mai bata dunga ki kya chuna hai tumne...

DIMPLE-really..!!!

MAI-ab ye bhi odd lag raha hai kya...ofcourse..common,2,3,4,5.. jo bhi number chunana hai tumhe, select....

DIMPLE-okay..

MAI-man me zor zor se bolo 7,7,7,7...

DIMPLE-hahahaha...haar gaye tum..7 nahi soch rahi thi mai...

MAI-jaanta hun..9.. that's the number...


new girl ki smile ek jhatke me gayab ho chuki thi...sahi number jo bata diya tha maine...


DIMPLE-how...!!!how did you know...???

MAI-aur kaise,i hacked your mind...

DIMPLE-common yaar..be serious..

MAI-mazak nahi kar raha hai.
acha batao,kuch der pehle ye hack waale sentence ko bolte waqt kaun se shabd ko repeat kiya tha maine..


meri baat sun new girl ke dima ka rewind button click ho chuka tha..


DIMPLE-ODD....

MAI-right.. aur uske baad numbers bolne se pehle bhi ek baar phirse ODD word use kiya tha maine..

isiliye jab maine 2,3,4,5 ye numbers bole toh tumhare subconscious mind me basa ye ODD word trigger hua..

you were bented towards odd number...ab 1 bohot common odd number hota hai..3 aur 5 maine bol diye the..7,5 ke baad next odd number hai which makes it look easy to predict isiliye tumhare dimag ne 9 chuna ya phir ye kahun ki..

DIMPLE-tumne mere dimag ko bina bole hi majboor kiya 9 select ke liye....outstanding......

MAI-i know..asta labista babe's..kal school me milte hain...


garden ke bahar jahan meri B.M
X aur new girl ki car khadi thi, pahunch chuke the hum..


aur kyunki mera demonstration pura ho chuka tha isiliye B.M.X me baith jahan aage badh gaya mai wahin ek baar phirse aankhein badi kar mujhe piche se jaata hue dekh rahi thi new girl..

labh sile hue the uske par dil aur dimag..unhe toh bolna hi tha aur woh bol bhi rahe the..


DIMPLE-hai kya ye ladka...!!!



sanjeevni buti sa hai,jo khaa le phir woh MAR NAHI SAKTA...

us abhedhya diwaar ki tarah hai jiski suraksha milne waala shaksh DAR NAHI SAKTA...

kisi na kisi kaam me anadi har koi hota hai magar...

kya kuch aisa bhi hai jo ye ladka KAR NAHI SAKTA...








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Death king , Rudrathakur aur Jaguar भाई का रिभियू पढ़कर मुझे तो समझ में ही नहीं आ रहा है अब मैं क्या लिखूं ! कुछ प्वाइंट छोड़ा ही नहीं है उन्होंने ।
तीनों ने गजब का प्रिडिक्ट किया है ।

मुझे तो इस बात की खुशी है कि यह स्टोरी अब 2029 तक जारी रहने वाली है । 2020 के समय की स्टोरी फिलहाल रनिंग में है मतलब फ़्लैश बैक चल रहा है । इसके बाद प्रजेंट और फिर अपडेट्स ही अपडेट्स सालों तक । :D
वाह ! खुब मजा आने वाला है ।

इसके अलावा अब मैं सलाद काटने की कोशिश भी करने वाला हूं । सनवीर आहार्य की नजरों में , पूर्ण परफेक्ट होने के लिए उस के स्टाइल में सलाद काटना बहुत जरूरी है । वैसे मुझे विश्वास है , वैसा सलाद तो अपने जिंदगी में कटने से रहा ! इतना परफैक्शन लाना सम्भव ही नहीं । पर इसी बहाने भोजन में सलाद की मात्रा तो जरूर बढ़ जायेगी । :D

हमेशा की तरह सुपर से भी ऊपर वाला अपडेट था वि जे भाई ।
ब्रिलियंट अपडेट था यह ।
आउटस्टैंडिंग एंड अमेजिंग ।
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