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Thriller GaLaTH...(THE WRONG THAT MADE EVERYTHING RIGHT)
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vj4u WOW yrrr Awesome story hai sir g abhi to base creation ke liye just Normal flashback hi chal raha hai aur story itni interesting aur mazedaar hai to jab story apne present timeline me ayegi to kamaal hi kr degi ,kamaal kya dhamaal macha degi,
BOhot hi umdaa likh rahe ho aap specially jo aapne SANVY, VERONICA, DIMPLE ke character ki detailing ki hai ab tk that's really good.
Ab agr baat us future glimpse ki Karen jisme DIMPLE back se attack krti hai SANVY pr aur jaise usse Nafrat se dekhti hai aur jo kehte hai usko usme Nafrat aur gussaaa saad jhalak raha hai iska matlab kuch aisa hone waala hai in 2non ki life me jiske baad jahaan ab tk SANVY apne dushmanon ko sirf peettaaa tha lekin he starts killing them brutally aur DIMPLE ye dekh legi yaa shayad SANVY ka koi Enemy DIMPLE ki family ka koi ya uske Parents me se bhi ho sakta hai usse SANVY kill kr dega aur yehi reason hogaa DIMPLE ki itni nafrat ka , maybe possible ke inke friends me se bhi aage chl kr koi Enemy ho sakta hai .
Qes : AUr jahan tk baat hai ke itni Nafrat ke baad bhi DIMPLE SANVY ke saath us location pr kyun gayiii hai jo eak mission lag raha hai aur DIMPLE ke attack krne ke bawajood bhi SANVY ne us pr koi attack kyun nahi kiya ?
Ans : pehli baat ye ke wo 2non kisi organisation like agency ka part hain aur eak hi team me hai that's why they are going together for the mission ,
2nd ke SANVY DIMPLE pr counter attack kyun nahi kr raha sirf defence hi kr raha hai to uska reason hai ke He LOVE'S DIMPLE isi liye wo counter attack nahi kr raha .
Pr DIMPLE ki ye Nafrat khatarnaak zaroor sabit ho sakti hai SANVY ke liye aur uske khud ke liye bhi jo bilkul bhi acha nahi hoga .
Ab agr baat present ki karen meanske abhi tak ye flashback story jahan tak pohonchi hai to yaani ke Pom night to SANVY & DIMPLE ko agree krne ke liye VERONICA ne hi koi tigdam lagayii hai mujhe andaaza to hai ke kyaa kiya hoga pr abhi "ME NAHI BATAOUNGAAA" ye to sabko aage chl kr hi pata chale gaa aur jahan tak in 2non ke participation ka sawaal hai to uska jugaad bhi VERONICA pehle se hi laga chuki hai.
baaki aage dekhte hai ke kyaa hota hai
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ANd sorry ke ab tak ki complete story padh li aur review ab de raha hun but baat ye hai ke 1 update padho to phir agli padhne se khud ko rok hi nahi paata to review kaise deta story hai hi itni kamaal.
Eak request hai ke if possible to please update thora jaldi dene ki try kiya kro aap baaki life ke kaam to hain hi to agr possible nahi bhi hai to no problem yhen just Continue the story as its already going.
BOhot hi umdaa likh rahe ho aap specially jo aapne SANVY, VERONICA, DIMPLE ke character ki detailing ki hai ab tk that's really good.
Ab agr baat us future glimpse ki Karen jisme DIMPLE back se attack krti hai SANVY pr aur jaise usse Nafrat se dekhti hai aur jo kehte hai usko usme Nafrat aur gussaaa saad jhalak raha hai iska matlab kuch aisa hone waala hai in 2non ki life me jiske baad jahaan ab tk SANVY apne dushmanon ko sirf peettaaa tha lekin he starts killing them brutally aur DIMPLE ye dekh legi yaa shayad SANVY ka koi Enemy DIMPLE ki family ka koi ya uske Parents me se bhi ho sakta hai usse SANVY kill kr dega aur yehi reason hogaa DIMPLE ki itni nafrat ka , maybe possible ke inke friends me se bhi aage chl kr koi Enemy ho sakta hai .
Qes : AUr jahan tk baat hai ke itni Nafrat ke baad bhi DIMPLE SANVY ke saath us location pr kyun gayiii hai jo eak mission lag raha hai aur DIMPLE ke attack krne ke bawajood bhi SANVY ne us pr koi attack kyun nahi kiya ?
Ans : pehli baat ye ke wo 2non kisi organisation like agency ka part hain aur eak hi team me hai that's why they are going together for the mission ,
2nd ke SANVY DIMPLE pr counter attack kyun nahi kr raha sirf defence hi kr raha hai to uska reason hai ke He LOVE'S DIMPLE isi liye wo counter attack nahi kr raha .
Pr DIMPLE ki ye Nafrat khatarnaak zaroor sabit ho sakti hai SANVY ke liye aur uske khud ke liye bhi jo bilkul bhi acha nahi hoga .
Ab agr baat present ki karen meanske abhi tak ye flashback story jahan tak pohonchi hai to yaani ke Pom night to SANVY & DIMPLE ko agree krne ke liye VERONICA ne hi koi tigdam lagayii hai mujhe andaaza to hai ke kyaa kiya hoga pr abhi "ME NAHI BATAOUNGAAA" ye to sabko aage chl kr hi pata chale gaa aur jahan tak in 2non ke participation ka sawaal hai to uska jugaad bhi VERONICA pehle se hi laga chuki hai.
baaki aage dekhte hai ke kyaa hota hai
.ANd sorry ke ab tak ki complete story padh li aur review ab de raha hun but baat ye hai ke 1 update padho to phir agli padhne se khud ko rok hi nahi paata to review kaise deta story hai hi itni kamaal.
Eak request hai ke if possible to please update thora jaldi dene ki try kiya kro aap baaki life ke kaam to hain hi to agr possible nahi bhi hai to no problem yhen just Continue the story as its already going.
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