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Thriller GaLaTH...(THE WRONG THAT MADE EVERYTHING RIGHT)

Lover_boy143

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Finally logged in...kaafi dino se try kar raha yha par kisi reason se, wasn't able to pop back in...

Guys, lamba arsa guzar gaya...life ab thodi thodi smooth hone lagi hai... kuch minor hiccups ab bhi hain jinhe clear karne me laga hun...

Phir mujhe khud bhi is kahani ko ek baar dobara padhna padega just to align my mind and connect for further writing...

Itne din wait kiya hai.. kuch time aur len...Will be back for sure...

Waise bhi asal kahani toh ab shuru hone waali hai..i am sure ki jo hoga,waisa kuch kahin nahi padha hoga aapne...

Just wait for some time...And yes, thanks to all my readers jo ab bhi is kahani par aa rahe hain... aapke comments se aapki excitement aur ummid dikhti hai is kahani se and i won't let that down..

Will be back...

*V.J PROMISE..*
Welcome back Sirji😍
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Aj bs kheyal aya k chlo chk karte hain
believe me apko dobara dekh k bohat khushi hoi🤗
I hope k apki baaki ki problem b jaldi hi solve ho jai gi....
 

Gaurav1969

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Mindblowing fabulous update bhai aapki rachna ko mera sat sat pranam .
AB TAK AAPNE PADHA KI JAHAN EK TARAF NITS KE DAD APNI WIFE KO SANEEL AHARYA SE JUDA EK KISSA SUNATE HAIN WAHIN DUSRI TARAF SANVY NAMITH KO PUNISH KARTA HAI.

AB AAGE:-


CHAPTER-1

(THE ETIOLOGY OF BEING GALATH)


UPDATE-11


CITY-DEHRADUN

PLACE-SANEEL'S RESIDENCE





GOOD MORNING AUNTY...

SAALE,TU ABHI TAK TAIYAR NAHI HUA..AUR YE NAWABO KI TARAH POSE MAARE KAR KYA RAHA HAI TU..??


mere ghar me ghuste hi pehle MAA ko dekh namaste kaha tha NITS aur SONU ne jiske baad un dono ki nazar padi sofe par baithe mujhpar aur mujhe dekh kuddhte hue apni baat kahi NITS ne..


REASON...


us waqt mai ek behadh dheeli t-shirt joki asal me mere dad ki thi,usse pehen sofe par kisi nawab ke pose me baitha hua tha mai.

neeche bhi jeans, snicker ya trouser nahi balki ek dheela pajama pehna hua tha maine.

mujhe yun dekh jahan ek taraf MAA ji ki vegetables kaat rahi thi,woh sir halka neeche kiya has rahi thi wahin SONU aur NITS jinhone kareeb ek ghante pehle hi phone karkar mujhe taiyar rehne ko bola tha,ghusse se bhar uthe aur dhadhdhadaate hue mere paas pahunch mujhe lapetne ko hue par tabhi..


MAA-arre relax baccho...woh taiyar hi hai...tum dono ko tang karne ke liye shirt ke upar apne dad ki t-shirt aur trousers ke upar pajama pehne baitha hai ye...

MAI-kya MAA...thodi der rook nahi sakti thi..


apni baat bolte hue us t-shirt aur pajame ko utaar diya maine..

white shirt of gehri khaakhi rang ke trousers pehne the maine jisse dekh...


SONU-kkya bbaat hai.. bhai appna smmart llag rraha hai...

NITS-kaaika smart..bandar ko kapde pehna diye hain,waisa lag raha hai..

MAI-toh sidhe sidhe bol naa teri tarah lag raha hun...

NITS-teri toh..ab uthega ki yahi pasre rehna hai..

MAI-pehle do baaton ka jawab chahiye mujhe..

pehli...ye clear karo ki jaana kahan hai..???bas taiyar reh,hum aa rahe hain,itna hi bola tha tune...

dusri-hamari shaan ko aur badhane ke liye car aayi hai yaa tum dono bas khudka manhoos mooh uthaye aa gaye ho...


meri baat sun SONU aur NITS,dono ne hi kuch pal ghura mujhe par phir..


NITS-car me hi aaye hain be...mera baapu mere naam se kuch de naa de,tera naam lete hi sab de deta hai...

SONU-driver uncle ke saath car bheji hai uncle ne..

MAI-driver uncle ki kya zaroorat..!!!hum khud.

MAA-tum khud kuch nahi chalaoge beta...driver bhaiya ke saath hi jaana padega tumhe..

din ka waqt hai,raat ka nahi..jahan tu NITS ke through car keys churakar chupchap car lekar nikal pade aur raaste me koi roke nahi..


MAA ki baat sun mai halka muskura pada par SONU aur khaaskar NITS ke mooh khul chuke the..

jisse woh apna secret samajh rahe the, MAA ko pata jo thi unki woh harkat..


NITS-aunty woh,mai naa is SANVY ke kehne par hi..

MAA-relax beta..itni shaitaniyan bhi zaroori hai nahi toh life boring ho jaayegi...

waise jaa kahan rahe ho tum sab jo aaj t-shirt me nahi, formal wear me ho..

SANVY ko bhi aisa hi ready rehne bola tha tumne...

SONU-wwo aunnty,hhamari ekk ffriend kki mmom ka STTEFERT SAROVVAR HOTEL me art exhibbition hhai.

hhum tteeno wwahin jja rrahe hhain...

MAI-let me guess...RASHI ki mom ka..


NITS ko ghurte hue kahi ye baat maine jispar apne khisse niporne laga woh..

MOM-arre waah..is she good...???

NITS-first time dekhenge aunty...waise bhi,hume toh arts, painting ka koi knowledge hai nahi...

woh toh RASHI ne puri gang ko invite kiya, isiliye jaa rahe hain..

MAA-jaana bhi chahiye aur ab jab jaa hi rahe ho toh koshish karna un paintings ko feel karne ki..

"aksar tarashi hui tasvire zindagi ke maayne sikha deti hain"...

MAI-bhains ke aage bin baja rahi ho aap MAA...inhe nahi aana kuch samajh...

SONU-hhaan aur ttu toh hhar painting ppar kkitab likh degga nna...

NITS-aur nahi toh kya..khud ke liye kaala akshar bhains barabar hai aur humare knowledge par comment karta hai...

MAI-knowledge...gyan ki bhi buddhi brasht ho jaaye jo tere mooh se apna naam bhi sun le woh...

chalo ab..aa raha MAA...

NITS-abbe aa raha nahi jaa raha hai tu...

MAA-jaakar wapas bhi toh loutega naa... isiliye jaate waqt aa raha hun, aisa kehte hain...

NITS-dekh be,ek gyan yahin mil bhi gaya mujhe aur mai seekh bhi gaya..ab naa ho rahi buddhi brasht gyan ki...

MAI-aur le le thoda gyan..mai aata hun exhibition se..

NITS-abbe rook...aa raha hun mai bhi aunty..

SONU-mmai bbhi..


mere piche lapakte hue kahi ye baat dono ne jispar MAA bas muskura uthi..

kuch hi palon me hum teeno hi NITS ke baapu ki honda city me the.. darwaze se mom hume hi dekh rahi thi aur gaadi ke aage badhte hi unhone door band kar diya tha..


IN THE CAR:-


ab batao sir..kya sochkar RASHI ki mom ke exhibition me jaane ka kasht kar rahe hain aap..???

saale, kuch bhi kar le,nahi pat sakti woh tere se gaandu...

NITS-kyun nahi pategi be..??aur tu saale,mujhe support karne ki jagah bas maarte hi reh meri..

khud toh apne liye koi na koi jugaad bana hi leta hai,aur hamari baari aati hai toh gaand dikha deta hai..

MAI-jahan jo dikhana chahiye,wahi dikhata hun mai..aur saale, RASHI hai ek alag league ki bandi..

nahi milega be tum dono ko yog...

SONU-aaisse kkaise...ttujhpe bbhi ttoh ussne ssamne sse intterest dikkaya ttha..

saammne se nnumbber ddiya ttha ussne ttujhe..wwoh ttoh ttune hhi intterest nnahi dikkhaya isiliye bbat aagge nnahi bbadhi ttum ddono kke bbeech..

NITS-aur tu hamare league se alag hai kya be...???aur mai toh interest dikha raha hun..mujhse kyun na pategi woh..??

MAI-kyunki usse power, influence waali company ke saath rehne acha lagta hai..

ab dhyan se sun RASHI BEHAVIOUR ANALYTICS & ENCYCLOPEDIA..

sabse pehle uski friendship hui thi us gaandu ROHAN se..

ab ROHAN jaise chutiye se koi uske behaviour ko lekar toh dosti karega nahi..

obviously,school me uski reputation ki wajah se impressed hui thi RASHI usse..

SATTU se RASHI ke baare me info ke dauran ye baat note ki thi maine aur isiliye uski class ki taraf tab gaya mai jab ROHAN bhi wahan aane waala tha...

aur shuruat me jab mai uski class me gaya,usse baat ki toh mujhe koi khaas bhaav nahi diya tha RASHI ne...

lekin jab ROHAN class me aaya aur mujhe dekh darne laga,tab pehli baar maine RASHI ki aankhon me apne liye interest waale bhaav dekhe the...

isiliye mai bina kuch aage kahe wapas lout aaya tha kyunki mai jaanta tha ki ab woh khud mere piche aayegi..

aur hua bhi aisa hi...uske section change karne ke piche bhi reason yahi tha..

RASHI bhaamp gayi thi ki hamara group ROHAN ke group se zyada strong hai isiliye usne waisa kiya..

bottom line, RASHI ko ye love shuv me filhal koi interest nahi hai..

usse bas influencual aur strong logon ke beech rehna hai jo woh hai ab..

toh chaahe kar de propose,par jab gaand ke saath dil tootega toh hugne mere paas may aayiyo..

NITS-louda tutega dil.. sirf attraction tha aur woh bhi nahi hota agar ye saari baatein pehle hi bata deta tu.. chutiya saale..

modo driver uncle gaadi..nahi jaana hume kisi exhibition me..

MAI-kyun nahi jaana be..!!!matlab gf nahi ban sakti toh frendship bhi gayi tel lene..

hum toh jaayenge..tu utar bhosdike..utar...

NITS-louda utrega mera..mai bhi jaaunga..


ye bol halka mooh phulakar baith gaya NITS par jab mai aur SONU usse ignore kar khudme hi bakarchodi karne lage toh ek ek hume chipkane ke baad woh bhi hamare saath mast ho gaya...



THE STEFERT HOTEL:-


AUR MUJHE LAGA ART EXHIBITION ANDAR HAI..


white colour ki short shirt aur blue colour ki jeans pehne ek khubsoorat bala joki KHANAK thi aur is waqt STEFERT SAROVAR HOTEL ki boundries ke entrance par bane garden me akeli khadi apna mobile scroll down kar rahi thi,SONU aur NITS ke saath uske paas jaate hue kahi ye baat maine...


KHANAK-hey guyz.. exhibition toh andar hi hai..

MAI-phir kala ki sabse khubsoorat jeevit pratima bahar kya kar rahi hai..???


meri baat ya phir ye kahun ki khudke liye compliment ko sun halka blush karne lagi KHANAK par phir..


KHANAK-stop it SANVY...???

MAI-stop..!!!maine toh ab tak shuru bhi nahi kiya kuch...

NITS-haan toh apna engine band hi rakh..waise jisne hum sabko invite kiya hai,woh madam kahan hain..???

KHANAK-RASHI...pucho mat yaar..5 se zyada baar call kar chuki hun..usse bhi aur SAM, EKPREET, RAJAT, NAISHA aur ANJALI ko bhi..

sabke sab bas pahunch hi rahe hain,ye bol bol kar ab tak pahunche hi nahi...

tumhe bhi toh lagaya tha..

NITS-aur hum aa gaye..

KHANAK-thank GOD for that..waise SANVYJI,aapka number nahi hai ab tak hamare paas...

MAI-i don't use a mobile..

KHANAK-woh pata laga mujhe..but kyun..?? actually,rehne do..mujhe reason nahi jaanana...bas tum turant mobile lo...

MAI-ab aapne kaha hai toh le lenge madam..

SONU-arre wwaah..hhume ttoh hhumesha ttarka ddeta hai..

MAI-shakal nahi hai naa tum dono ki aisi jisse dekh mooh se haan nikle...

SONU-abbe tteri ttoh..

MAI-chup be...

NITS-lo,aa gaye sab....


parking me joki jahan is waqt hum khade the,usse zyada door nahi thi,enter hui ek red colour ki AUDI Q-2 joki SAM ki thi aur ussike piche thi RASHI ki grey colour ki mercedes benz GLA...

apni apni car se nikalte hi un sab ki nazar hum par padh gayi isiliye hume wave karte hue woh sabhi hamari taraf badh gaye aur hamare paas aate hi..


SAM-whats up buddy...???


sabse baari baari side hug kiya maine aur phir NITS aur SONU ne jiske baad..


ANJALI-tu kitni der pehle pahunchi KHANAK...

MAI-punctual log on time hi pahunchte hain..

SAM-waah beta.. khud hi late karwaya tha kal raat ko tune...aur abhi taana de raha hai..

KHANAK-kal raat ko..!!!

EKPREET-haan woh BAMBOOZA se nikalne ke baad hum icecream joint chale gaye the.wahi M.G road waali jo 24/7 khuli rehti hai..

is SANVY ka hi plan tha..but wahan se nikalte nikalte midnight ho gayi thi..

KHANAK-par ye plan toh mujhe bataya nahi gaya tha.

NAISHA,-bata dete toh bhi kya ho jaata..tera toh 7 baje ke baad cerfue lag jaata hai...

par acha hi hua jo tu nahi thi kal..hum sabka toh hamesha ka hai par shayad tu kal jo ho raha tha,woh handle nahi kar paati..

KHANAK-matlab..!!kya hua tha kal..???


NAISHA aur ANJALI ne kal jo bhi hua,woh KHANAK ko bata diya jisse sun uski aankhein badi ho gayi.


KHANAK-itna sab ho gaya aur tu keh rahi hai ki tum sabke liye normal tha...

rookne ki zaroorat hi kya thi..jab un logon ne comment karna shuru kiya toh nikal nahi sakte the chupchaap..

MAI-chupchaap..hum SIRIUS waale hai madam..chup hum nahi,hamare saamne waala hota hai..

KHANAK-acha..abhi toh mai hi saamne tumhare..karao chup mujhe..


mujhe ghurte hue kahi ye baat KHANAK ne jispar..


MAI-kahan hai yaar tu RASHI... khud bulati hai aur khud hi gayab ho jaati hai...


RASHI jo formal hie hello ke baad hotel ke andar chali gayi thi,usse wapas aata dekh kahi ye baat maine jisse sun jahan ek taraf baaki sab mere KHANAK ki baaton se bail out ko dekh has diye wahin KHANAK bas mujhe ghurti hi rahi...


RASHI-call toh kiya tha maine SAM tumhe..you didn't pick up...

SAM-really..!?oh shit... silent tha phone yaar..


apne phone ko wapas ringing me karte hue kahi ye baat SAM ne jispar..


RASHI-lets go guyz... exhibition shuru ho gaya hai....


apni baat bol RASHI aage badh gayi wahin hum sab bhi uske piche ho liye..

THE STEFERT SAROVAR jheel ke kinaare bana ek paanch sitara hotel tha jiski khubsurati dekhte hi banti thi..

kareeb 2 acre khestra fal me faile is khubsoorat imaarat me kul 2 swimming pools the jisme se ek second floor par gym ke bahar bana indoor heated pool tha...

kul 10 manzila unche is imaarat ke har floor par ek ek hall tha jisme se sabse bada hall neeche ground floor par hi tha aur yahin par aaj RASHI ki mom ka art exhibition rakha gaya tha.

hotel ki khubsoorati ko nihaarte hue hum sab art exhibition ke entrance par pahunch chuke the jahan RASHI ke saath hone ki wajah se hume enter karne me koi taklif nahi hui...


ANJALI-wow yaar.RASHI,kya ye saari hi paintings tumhari mom ne banayi hain..!!!


exhibition me enter karte hi chaaron taraf tange kala ke behatarin namuno par nazar ghumate hue ye taarif ki thi ANJALI ne.

ANJALI ko bhi paintings ka bohot shouk tha aur isiliye hum sabme woh is jagah ko dekh sabse excited thi...


RASHI-haan ANJALI.ye sab mom ki banayi paintings hain..she doesn't like to co-exhibit...

ANJALI-well i must say.. paintings ko dekh kar ye saaf pata chalta hai ki your mom is quite a talent..sere genius...

RASHI-that she is..and she loves and adores talented people..SAM,maine bataya tha unhe ki you the the CHAMP of our school,infact the best student in all of dehradun..

unhone kaha tha tumse milwane..dekhna,bohot khush hongi woh tumse milkar..

RASHI ki baat par SAM bas smile kar gaya par maine halka sa sir shake kiya..

RASHI naam ki is water flow ke bahav ka kaaran jo jaan gaya tha mai...

RASHI-there she is..my mom..


ek disha ki taraf point karti jahan ek typical spanish apperance ke saath lagbhag 42 saal ki behadh khubsoorat mahila jinhone is waqt ek classy harbour olive green solid long shirt dress pehni thi, kuch logon ko unke saamne tangi paintings ke baare me kuch bata rahi thi..

RASHI ke saath saath hum bhi uski mom ki taraf badh chale.

hamare pahunchte tak woh log agli painting ki taraf badh chuke the..

waise badh toh RASHI ki mom bhi rahi thi par apni beti par nazar padte hi woh rook gayi thi..


RASHI-mama, estos son mis amigos...(this are my friends)...

friends..my mom..KATALINA GRACIA SEHGAL...

HUM SAB-hello ma'am...

KATALINA-hello bacchon..aap sab aunty bol sakte hain mujhe...

pura clear toh nahi,par kaafi achi tarah hindi me kahi apni baat RASHI ki mom ne jisse sun sabhi halke shocked ho gaye..

ANJALI-wow aunty...aap toh kaafi achi hindi bolti hain...

AUNTY-indian man se shaadi kiya hai, thoda toh unka language inherit karungi hi..waise bhi,i like learning different languages...

RASHI-mom,ye hain SAMEER..jiske baare me aapko bataya tha maine..

AUNTY-really..kaafi suna hai maine aapke baare me SAMEER...

SAM-thanks,but please,call me SAM aunty...

AUNTY-so SAM,look around,aur batao,kaunsi painting sabse zyada achi lagi aapko...


aunty ki baat sun chaaron taraf nazar ghumayi SAM ne..

har painting ke neeche uska price tag tha jiska lowest bid hi 50k tha..

khair,har taraf nazar ghumane ke baad ek taraf finger point ki SAM ne..

left ki taraf bohot se religion ke symbols bane the us painting me aur right ki taraf tha human brain..

par khaas baat ye thi ki religion waale symbols neeche ki taraf the aur brain upar ki taraf..

us painting ke upar uska title likha hua tha.."PRECIDE"....

AUNTY-hmm.. interesting choice..toh batao phir,kya samajh me aata hai aapko us painting ko dekhkar...

SAM-yahi ki human brain exceeds every religion... insaani dimaag har dharm se upar hai...

AUNTY-hahaha.. interesting thought.. par beta, optimistic hone ka asli matlab hota hai khudpar aur jisne hume banaya hai,uspar ek sa bharosa rakhna..

har dharm insaan ko uski human values samajhane ke liye banaya gaya tha..

us painting me bhi yahi dikhaya gaya hai..dhyan se dekho,har religion ke symbol se ek patli ray nikal human brain me pad rahi hai aur isiliye woh uncha utha hua hai..

matlab,woh saare religions,unke values us human brain ko uthne me,evolve hone me madad kar rahe hain...

SAM-wow aunty..that was deep..

AUNTY-ab maine banayi hai toh mujhe toh pata hi hoga naa..

aap,kya naam hai aapka...???

ANJALI aunty...

AUNTY-nice name..aap batao,aapko kaunsi painting sabse zyada bhaa rahi hai..??

ANJALI-that one aunty...


turant ek painting ki taraf finger point kiya ANJALI ne...

ye ek zamin par leti ladki ki painting thi jiske aankhein aadhi khuli aur aadhi band thi.. painting ka har shade dark tha siway us ladki ki ek hatheli ke jisme ek chota sa flower grow hua tha aur usse light nikal rahi thi..

HOPE..yahi tha us painting ka title...


AUNTY-nice choice..waise beta,aapka reason kya hai us painting ko pasand karne ka..???

ANJALI-reason wahi hai jo us painting ka title hai..HOPE...us ladki ke chaaron taraf andhera hai..aankhein bhi band ho rahi hai par uske haath me jagmagata woh phool uske aankhon ko band hone se roke hue hai..

sab kuch khatm hone ke baad bhi ummid bachi rehti hai,yahi bata rahi hai woh painting...


AUNTY-good..i am impressed...


ANJALI ke baad aunty ne EKPREET ki taraf rookh kiya par naa usse aur naahi uske baad hum mese kisi se bhi unhe satisfactory jawab mila jispar woh bas muskura uthi..

ab art ko samajhna har kisike bas ki toh baat hoti nahi isiliye RASHI ko hum sabko sabhi paintings ka tour dene ka bol woh dusre guests ki taraf badh gayi..

hum sab bhi RASHI ke saath pure hall me ghumne lage.saari paintings me kuch na kuch atrangi dhund NITS beech beech me masti kar raha tha jispar sabhi hase jaa rahe the siway mere..

mai bade dhyan se paintings ko dekhe jaa raha tha aur ye dekh..


NITS-tu kya paintings check out kar raha hai be.. kuch samajh me toh aana hai nahi,phir dekh kar kya matlab...

MAI-teri bakwas se toh achi hai naa ye paintings..

NITS-ghus jaa phir inme se kisiki gaand me..

dheere se mere paas aakar boli ye baat usne aur wapas apni masti me lag gaya...

wahin meri har taraf ghumti nazar achanak ek disha se guzarti theher gayi aur mai baaki sabko chhod us taraf badh chala..

ye ek painting thi jisse kareeb se dekhne mai uski taraf badha tha.

ye painting alag thi..alag in the sense ki baaki saari paintings line se kuch kuch doori par lagi hui thi par ye waali painting jis wall par thi,wahan bas yahi lagi hui thi..

naa is painting ke upar iska naam likha tha aur naahi ye koi bohot zyada khubsurat thi..

mai us painting ke saamne pahunch khada ho gaya...

painting me samandar bana hua tha par paani ka rang kaafi maila tha..paani ke upar bohot se chote chote waves bane the par aise jaise haath hon..

paani ke just upar chamakta hua tyre tha jisse paida ho rahe the kuch stairs jaise lines..aun un lines ke theek upar usse juda hua suraj bana tha...

ye thi us painting ki discription jisse mai bade dhyan se dekh raha tha ki tabhi...


AUNTY-kuch samajh aaya toh mujhe bhi samjha do...


apne guests aur clients ke saath khadi thi aunty ki tabhi unki nazar mujhpar padi aur mujhe us painting ke saamne khada dekh jiske saamne abhi tak koi bhi itni der tak khada nahi hua tha,woh pahunchi thi mere paas..

par kuch der pehle jab mere sabhi doston ke saamne unhone mujhse meri pasandida painting ke baare me pucha tha tab"sabhi achi hai aunty"ye kaha tha maine aur isiliye unhe mujhse koi ache jawab ki ummid nahi thi..

yahi wajah thi ki unke sawal me halka sa hi sahi taunt tha,jisse sun maine ek smile diya unhe aur..


MAI-nirmata ko nirdesh nahi diye jaate aunty..aur aap toh yahan nirmata aur nirdeshak, dono hi hain..


mujhse is tarah ke jawab ki ummid nahi thi aunty ko aur isiliye aankhon me halki hairani liye dekha unhone mujhe aur..


AUNTY-common son,tell me..kya samajh aa raha hai aapko is painting me,i wanna know..

MAI-"LAVIDA ES COMO ANDAREN BICICLETA PARA MENTAREN TU BALANCE DEBES SEGUIR MOVIENDOTE"...

"ZINDAGI CYCLE CHALANE KI TARAH HAI...BALANCE BANAYE RAKHNA HAI TOH LAGATAR AAGE BADHTE REHNA ZAROORI HAI...

ALBERT EINSTEIN dwara kabhi spanish me kahe is quote se prabhavit hai ye painting...aur isiliye hi kyunki ye rachna aapki soch se nahi balki kisi aur ke quote se prabhavit hai,koi title nahi diya aapne isse..

rahi baat, painting me dikh rahe drishya ki toh jo dikh raha hai,woh asal me hai hi nahi..ye samandar maila isiliye hai kyunki ye samandar nahi balki gilli mitti hai aur jo waves isse bahar nikal rahe hain,woh hai insaani prayas...koshish...

koshish us gilli mitti me fisalne aur usme dhasne ke baad upar uthne ki..

upar jo tyre sa bana hua hai,ye zindagi ka woh pahiya hai jisse chalate hue har problem ko paar kiya jaa sakta hai aur us pahiye ke upar bane suraj tak joki ek trophy hai,beech me bane lines joki raastein hain,unse pahuncha jaa sakta hai isiliye mitti se nikle haath us pahiye ko chhune ki koshish kar rahe hain..

afterall, zindagi ka woh pahiya pehli sidhi ki tarah hai aur sabse mushkil pehli sidhi chadhna hi hota hai...


painting ko lagatar dekhte hue kahi thi maine apne man me aayi baat jiske baad jab mai palta toh mere face par smile naach uthi..

ek taraf aunty thi jinki hairangi apne charam me pahunch chuki thi aur ussi expression ke saath woh mujhe dekh rahi thi..

dusri taraf the mere dost jo aunty aur mujhe saath khada dekh hamare paas aa chuke the aur meri painting par kahi defination bhi sun li thi un sabne..

khair, kuch seconds mujhe yunhi dekhte rehne ke baad..


AUNTY-how old are you...???how did you even imagined those things...

spanish bhi aati hai aapko..aur jab paintings ke baare me itna deep knowledge hai toh pehle jab pucha tha maine,tab kyun kuch nahi bataya aapne...???

kya baaki ki paintings achi nahi hain...??

MAI-bohot se sawal ek saath puch liye aunty aapne toh..!!!

umar meri utni hi hai jitni aapki beti ki.. aur imagination ke liye umr nahi,feel karne ki zaroorat hoti hai aur is painting ko dekhkar jo feel kiya maine,woh bata diya...

bhale hi language koi sa bhi ho,famous quotes read karna aur unhe memorize karna pasand hai mujhe isiliye is painting se juda quote yaad tha mujhe..

pehle kuch isiliye nahi bola tha maine kyunki siway iske,yahan jitni bhi paintings hain,unke neeche unka price tag laga hai, matlab woh sabhi bikaun hain aur for sale likhi chizon par raay dena sahi nahi lagta mujhe...

rahi baat baaki paintings ke ache na hone ki toh in sabko banate waqt jab aapne koi doubt nahi kiya toh mere yaa kisike pasand napasand se kya fark padta hai..

some people buy,some own but you,you have created all these master pieces...

taarif kam padenge aapke in rachnaon ke liye..


meri baat sun ek bohot khubsoorat smile naach uthi aunty ke face par..

muskura toh woh shuru se rahi thi par abki baar laga jaise ye smile unke dil se nikli hai..

aage badh gale laga liya unhone mujhe aur...


AUNTY-naam kya bataya tha aapne apna...???

MAI-SANVEER AHARYA...

AUNTY-SANVEER AHARYA...sahi kaha tha aapne beta...baaki sabhi paintings bikau hai par ye nahi..

aur woh isiliye kyunki isse banane ke baad mai tay hi nahi kar paayi ki kya keemat rakhun iski..

par ab samajh me aa raha hai ki aisa kyun hua...??ye painting bikne ke liye nahi balki gift karne ke liye bani thi..

its yours...ye tumhari hui..


aunty ki baat sun mere sabhi doston ke saath meri bhi aankhein badi ho gayi...

aur hona bhi tha..yahan sabse sasti painting bhi kamsekam 50k ki thi aur ye painting toh aisi thi ki agar iske neeche 2 se 3 lakhs ka price tag bhi laga hota tab bhi ye haathon haath bik jaati..


MAI-thanks for the gesture aunty but mai itni expensive gift nahi le sakta..

AUNTY-careful SANVEER AHARYA..aap apni hi baat se mukar rahe hain..

aap bhul rahe hain ki is painting ki koi keemat hai hi nahi..

MAI-phir bhi aunty..ye..

AUNTY-i will not hear anything..agar wakayi mujhe aunty maante ho and more importantly,agar mai sach me ek achi artist hun toh mana nahi karoge aap...

MAI- alright aunty..i will take it...

AUNTY-now that's more like it...counter par apna adress likhwa dena... painting aapke ghar pahunch jaayegi...

MAI-jee aunty...

AUNTY-RASHI... finally,some good company for you..stick with this guys..shayad aap bhi kuch sikh sako...

RASHI-ok mom...

aakhein neeche taaki unme aayi sharmindagi naa dikh jaaye,kahi ye baat RASHI ne par uske bhaav hum sabne hi dekh liye the..

MAI-aunty,is painting ko dekh ek aur khayal bhi utha hai mere dimag me..but mai us thought ko theek se explain kar paaunga ya nahi,iska doubt hai mujhe..

toh aap help karengi meri!!!!i mean jo puchun,uska jawab dengi aur aakhir me batayengi ki maine theek se explain kiya ya nahi...

AUNTY-sure beta, anything...

MAI-hai toh isme samandar hi jisse maine gilli mitti bana diya..

toh maan lijiye ki ye gilli mitti nahi balki samandar hi hai..toh kya lagta hai aapko,iske andar kya hoga..??

AUNTY-kya hoga matlab..agar ye presume kiya jaaye ki ye samandar hai toh mammals,fishes, reptiles,sab honge iske andar..

MAI-nahi aunty..sab kaise ho sakte hain..koi ek cheez hi hogi naa...sabko thodi naa jagah degi apne andar samandar..

AUNTY-beta SANVEER.. kuch seconds tak tum kaafi intelligent lag rahe the,but ab..

MAI-bewakuf lag raha hun naa..!!?

AUNTY-kind of...

MAI-reason aur defination bataun...???

kyunki samandar ek MAA ki tarah hoti hai... haan,zindagi nahi hoti usme.par phir bhi, bina bhedh bhaav,bina ye dekhe ki kaun kaam ka hai,kaun nahi,bas usme zinda reh sake, waise har jeevit jantu ko ye apne andar panah deti hai..

dimag nahi lagati apna..aur lagaye bhi kyun..???jab baat apne bacchon ki ho,toh dimag nahi dil lagaya jaata hai..

taakatwar,kamzor,chalak, bewakuf,ye saare gun aur avgoon toh dekhne waalon ke liye hain,par SAMANDAR ke liye usme basne waala har jantu khaas hai,kyunki woh uska apna hai...

aur woh jaisa hai,woh usse waise hi accept kar leti hai...

aakhir,jaan ho naa ho,samandar hai toh ek MAA..aapki tarah....


meri baat sun andar se jadh si ho gayi thi aunty..mere sawal aur explanation ka har word,har hissa unke dimag me kisi hathode ki tarah bajne laga tha..

apni beti ko competitive aur khudki tarah winner banane ke chakkar me unhone kab usse ek commodity,ek samaan ki tarah samajhna shuru diya tha,iska ab jaakar andaza hone laga tha unhe..

halki gehri saans lete hue jaise khudko theek karne me lagi thi RASHI ki mom.

wahin mere saare doston ko meri baaton ka matlab pata tha, isiliye woh sab bhi chupchap aunty ka reaction dekh rahe the..

kuch aur pal yunhi gehri saans lene ke baad ek baar RASHI ko dekha aunty ne aur phir woh chalkar mere paas aayi aur theek mere saamne khadi ho gayi jispar...


MAI-maine GALATH explain kar diya kya aunty...???

AUNTY-nahi beta,bilkul sahi tha..itna sahi ki mere andar ke GALATH ko khatm kar diya usne..thanks for the lesson..


aunty ki baat sun ek smile naach uthi mere face par..

mere frends bhi smile kar rahe the aur RASHI jiske aankh halke halke bheege hue the,usne dekha meri taraf aur ek mook thank you kaha mujhe...

anyways,aunty bhi ab wapas muskurane lagi aur..


AUNTY-lunch yahin karoge aap sab...

MAI-pata hai aunty..aur aap nahi bhi bolte toh bhi hum lunch kar ke hi jaate..

AUNTY-hahahaha... banquet hall ke exit ki right taraf me game zone hai.. pool table aur kuch extra indoor games bhi hain wahan..

lunch tak wahan khelen aurenjoy karen aap sab...

MAI-cool aunty..


ye bol baaki sabke saath us game zone waale direction ki taraf badh gaya mai..

RASHI bhi hamare saath aane lagi par tabhi..


AUNTY-ek minute beta...


RASHI ka haath thaamte hue roka usse aunty ne jispar woh unhe dekhne lagi..

hum sab aage badh chuke the isiliye apni beti ke gaal ko sehla..


AUNTY-sorry beta...i have really been very hard at you...

RASHI-its ok mom..chahti toh aap mera acha hi thi..

AUNTY-arre waah.. samajhdar ho gayi meri beti toh..


apne side se usse hug kar khud se sataate hue kahi ye baat aunty ne aur ab unki nazar SANVY par thi jo apne doston ke saath masti karta hua jaa raha tha.

usse dekh ek smile ke saath..


AUNTY-aapne toh kaha tha ki SAMEER aapke school ka,infact pure dehradun ka sabse talented aur extraordinary student hai..

well he is good but nothing compared to SANVEER...

RASHI-maine sach kaha tha mom... SAMEER is the brightest of SIRIUS.. infact he is literally a star their..

SANVY toh ek average student hai...

AUNTY-average aur ye ladka..hahahaha..beta,duniya ghumi hun mai..

aur jo ladka mujhe zindagi ka sabse important lesson samjha de,woh average toh ho hi nahi sakta..

ye bol mujhe piche se jaate hue dekhti rahi aunty aur phir..


MAN ME:-




jo khud hi GATI ho,usse koi BHAGA NAHI SAKTA...

siddh purush apni marzi se dhyan todta hai,usse koi JAGA NAHI SAKTA...

khaan se nikla woh heera hai ye ladka...

keemat jiski koi JOHRI, LAGA NAHI SAKTA...












AAJ KE LIYE ITNA HI....











AAPKA APNA V...J...
 

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The story is very wonderful. I have read many stories till date but this story is something different. I will wait for the next part. I hope our writer will come back soon 😂.
 

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Finally logged in...kaafi dino se try kar raha yha par kisi reason se, wasn't able to pop back in...

Guys, lamba arsa guzar gaya...life ab thodi thodi smooth hone lagi hai... kuch minor hiccups ab bhi hain jinhe clear karne me laga hun...

Phir mujhe khud bhi is kahani ko ek baar dobara padhna padega just to align my mind and connect for further writing...

Itne din wait kiya hai.. kuch time aur len...Will be back for sure...

Waise bhi asal kahani toh ab shuru hone waali hai..i am sure ki jo hoga,waisa kuch kahin nahi padha hoga aapne...

Just wait for some time...And yes, thanks to all my readers jo ab bhi is kahani par aa rahe hain... aapke comments se aapki excitement aur ummid dikhti hai is kahani se and i won't let that down..

Will be back...

*V.J PROMISE..*
Welcome back bhai bahot intejar kia apka esa koi din nhi gaya jab is story pe aake check na kia ho maine

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