Thriller GaLaTH...(THE WRONG THAT MADE EVERYTHING RIGHT)

[Smart killer]

PROLOGUE UPDATE:-



DATE-APRIL 1/2021....





TANNN...TANNN...TANNNNN.....



CHAL RE LADKE.. KISMAT WAKAYI ACCHI HAI TERI...KAAFI SASTE ME CHHUT RAHA HAI TU....


police station ke piche bane before hearing TEMPORARY JUVENILE HOME joki kisi normal adult jail se kam nahi thi,uske ek cell ki salakhon par pehle apne ruler se maarne ke baad lock kholte hue kahi thi ye baat ek hawaldar ne jispar cell ke andar diwal se tik kar baitha ladka bina koi pratikriya diye bas dheere dheere apni jagah se uthne laga but tabhi...


AHHHHH....

uthne ki koshish me pair ladhkhada gaye us ladke ke jiski wajah se woh neeche girne laga par tabhi us Hawaldar ne uske ek haath ko thaamte hue usse support sa diya aur fir ussi haath ko apne kandhe ki taraf ghumakar rakhte hue us ladke ko pakad usse sahara dekar aage badhne laga but ye chota sa safar bhi asaan na tha..

kapde jagah se phate hue us ladke ke jinke andar jhaanke se sharir par pade asankhya chot aur ghaav saaf dekhe jaa sakte the...

maasum chehre ke kayi hisson par khoon se sukhe dhabbe saaf bata rahe the ki us ladke ke face par bhi bohot se tez tamaache aur mukke padh chuke the..

dando ki asankhya maar ki wajah se dono pair aur khaaskar ghutne bhi kaafi suje hue the aur issi wajah se woh ladka thik se chal nahi paa raha tha...

sahara milne ke baad bhi us ladke ke face par dikh rahe pain ko dekh us hawaldar ko bhi us bacche par kaafi taras aa raha tha..

aur ye bhaavna sirf abhi hi nahi jaagi thi balki parso se jab se us ladke ko JUVENILE CUSTODY ke naam par is cell me bharti kiya gaya tha aur uske baad jo kayi ghanton tak lagatar usse kisi rapist ya maas murderer ki tarah maara gaya tha,woh sab dekh kar hi is hawaldar ko behadh taklif hui thi par apne chote ohde ki wajah se woh kuch kar nahi paaya tha...

khair, kisi tarah sahara dete hue woh hawaldar us ladke ko liye us JUVENILE HOME ke front hall me bane chamber ki taraf badha hi tha ki tabhi....


ARE YOU EVEN LISTENING TO ME INSPECTOR....2005,JUVENILE JUSTICE CARE & PROTECTION ACT KE ACCORDING KISI BACHE KI UMR AGAR 18 SAAL SE KAM HO TOH USSE POLICE REMAND PAR NAHI LE SAKTI AUR RAKH TOH BILKUL NAHI SAKTI..

AND DON'T EVEN DARE TO TRICK ME BY SAYING KI YE EK TEMPORARY JUVENILE HOME HAI KYUNKI YE JAGAH BHI BY LAW "GALATH"....


CHRRRRR....

chamber ke dono darwaze khulne ki wajah se chamber me khade us aadmi ka sentence pura nahi ho paaya aur woh turant palta aur aisa karte hi jab uski nazar door se enter hue hawaldar ka sahara lekar khade us half consciousness waale ladke par padi toh uski aankhein hairani aur ghusse se badi ho gayi aur..


AADMI-is this "SANVEER AHARYA"....


ye bolte hue woh turant us ladke ki taraf lapka jisne shayad us aadmi ki awaaz theek se suni bhi nahi thi ya phir ye kahun ki uski tooti phuti haalath aur dono hi kaano ke piche dikh raha sookh chuka khoon usse kuch bhi sunanane ke liye filhal temporarily non compitant kar chuka tha..

us ladke ke paas pahunch hawaldar ko side hata us aadmi ne khud us ladke ko sahara diya aur aisa karne ke baad jab uski ghusse se bhari aankhen saamne chair par baithe inspector ki taraf gayi jo ab bhi ghaagh ki tarah muskura raha tha toh woh kuch bolne ko hua par tabhi..


INSPECTOR-MR ANUPAM GHOSH....mai jaanta hun ki aap kaun hain..yahan ke sabse bade lawyer hain aap...

is JUVENILE HOME ke bahar aapke assistants ki lambi line aapke powerful hone ki baat par bhi bina bole mohor laga rahe hain but the thing is ki aap kuch nahi kar sakte...

jaante hain kyun....???

JAIDEN CHOWDHARY....

muskurate hue bhar ye ek naam hi liya us inspector ne par shayad itna hi kaafi tha...

naam sun ek pal ke liye LAWYER ANUPAM GHOSH ke chehre par shikan aaya but phir sakhti se bhar utha unka bhi face...

BEEP...BEEP...

ANUPAM GHOSH kuch kehte ki tabhi unke mobile ki message tone baji...

"JUST BRING THE CHILD"....

yahi likha tha us messege me jisse padh khudko shaant kiya ANUPAM GHOSH ne aur inspector ki taraf dekh...


ANUPAM-naam toh ek mere paas bhi hai,jisse agar le lun toh tumhari khudko safe samajhne ki galatfehmi abhi ke abhi door ho jaayegi but mai aisa karunga nahi..

sahi waqt aane tak tumhara ye over confidence barkarar rehna zaroori hai...


jahan ye bol half conscious mode me khade SANVEER AHARYA ko sahara dete hue ANUPAM GHOSH wapas moodte hue us chamber se bahar nikal gaya wahin uski baat sun woh inspector bas pehle ki hi tarah ghaagh ki tarah muskurate hue apne revolving chair me baith chuka tha...


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15 minute ke car drive ke baad ANUPAM GHOSH ki car ek bade se half opened gate ke saamne ruki jiske baad usne us maasum se teenager "SANVEER" ko wapas sahara dete hue car se utara...

is 15 minute ke safar ke dauran SANVEER bas apni aankhen band kiye chup chaap baitha hua tha..

but jab car rooki toh itne waqt me pehli baar naa sirf SANVEER ki aankhein khuli but saath hi saath uski sthir aur emotion less aankhon me ek halki si hi sahi,khushi dikhne lagi thi..

lekin usse ulat jab ANUPAM ne SANVEER ki aankhon me khushi dekhi toh uske face par dukh ke bhaav aa chuke the...

ANUPAM jaanta tha SANVEER ke aankhon me dikh rahi khushi ka reason...

but woh ye bhi jaanta tha ki woh reason,woh khushi ka shroth ab SANVEER ko kabhi nahi milne waala...

khair, jab ANUPAM ka sahara lete hue SANVEER car se utra toh uske kaano me padi gate ke khulne ki awaaz joki ANUPAM ke assistant ne kholi thi aur woh sun uski aankhein jhat se upar uthi aur aisa hote hi jo nazara uske saamne aaya,usse dekh SANVEER ki aankhein badi ho gayi...

"GOD'S ACRE"....

jahan SANVEER rehta tha,us sheher ke GRAVEYARD ka naam tha ye jisse dekh dil dhakk sa kar gaya tha uska..

graveyard ko dekh SANVEER ki nazarein turant ANUPAM ki taraf ghumi jiske face me is waqt negetive bhaav the jinhe naa sirf padh gaya SANVEER balki agle hi pal uske kadam ladhkhada gaye aur woh girne laga par ek baar phir ANUPAM ne usse sambhala aur bina kuch kahe usse apna saath liye GRAVEYARD ke andar daakhil ho gaya...

DHAKKK..DHAKKKK.DHAAKKKK..

tezi se dhadakte dil ke saath SANVEER khamosh zubaan liye aage badh raha tha..

pairon ke jodon me multiple fractures the uske but abhi jaise usse kuch feel hi nahi ho raha tha...

april ka pehla din tha aaj..garmi ki shuruat ho chuki thi but kaale baadal aur tez hawayein aaj fizaon me kuch aisi ghuli hui thi maano aaj ke din ko manhoos ghoshit kar rahi hon...

aur jaise jaise SANVEER ke kadam apne us anchaahe manzil ki taraf badh rahe the,waise waise woh tez chalti hawayein apne saath paani ke bauchaaron ko bhi kuch yun tezi se fekne lagi thi maano aisa kar woh SANVEER ke view ko block karna chah rahi hon taaki jo woh dekhne waala hai,usse waisa karne se rokna chah rahi hon...


khair,in saare odds ke beech SANVEER ko saath liye ANUPAM GRAVEYARD ke ek taraf kaafi aage badh chuka tha but tabhi...

DHAKKKK....

ek dhakka sa diya ANUPAM ko SANVEER ne jiske asar se woh piche ki taraf gir gaya..

wahin SANVEER jisne ye harkat saamne ke nazare ko dekh kar ki thi, pairon me multiple fractures hone ke baawjud badi tezi se aage badh chala woh aur lambi lambi saans lete hue ek fresh grave ke theek aage pahunch ruka...

HHHHH...HHHHHHH...HHHHHH....HHHHHH.....

SANVEER ki already tez chal rahi sansein aur tez ho chali thi par jaise hi uski nazar us grave ke piche gade gravestone me likhe naam par padi,woh naam jiske dhundle andeshe ki wajah se hi usne ANUPAM GHOSH ko dhakka diya tha,but ab woh dhundla andesha saaf hone ke baad bhi SANVEER ki zindagi ko kaali kar chuka tha,naa sirf uski tez chalti saansein ek jhatke me uske dil ki dhadkan ke saath tham si gayi par saath hi saath uski aankhein bhi badi hote hote apni aakhri hadh tak pahunchte pahunchte pathra si gayi....


VERONICA PAUL AHARYA....


yahi likha tha us gravestone par...

pathrayi aankhon se us naam ko lagatar padhne laga tha SANVEER maano usse ummid ho ki padhte padhte achanak se hi woh naam apne aap badal jaayega....

par kuch seconds baad jab uski pathrayi aankhon ke beech panap raha paani chalka toh uska ye bhram bhi us paani ki tarah uska saath chhodta chala gaya aur...


MAAAAAAAAAAA............


dil ko asaani se cheer de,aisi cheekh nikli SANVEER ke mooh se jisne zaahir kar diya us grave ke andar nirjeev pade shaksh ka SANVEER ke saath rishta aur ye bhi bata diya ki jo bhi hua hai,aise hi haadson ko toh kehte hain....


"GALATH"........












AAJ KE LIYE ITNA HI....













AAPKA APNA V....J....

VJ bro ap ka yahi andaz to pasand hai k frist update ma hi suspense dal dyty hain or us ma hi answer chur dyty hain parhny walun ko lagta hai boht complicated hai lakin hota nai is liya ap li story writing ka ma itna FAN hun keep it up God Bless You

 

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Aj update ayega kya vj bhai

 

[Black water]

Waiting bhai

 

[vj4u]

Sanvy ki ye sari baatein lgta to nhi h ki khanak ke palle padi hongi ulta wo confuse aur ho gyi hogi...use chahiye ek brief information us ghatna ke baare me jo sanvy ki taraf se to milni bahut hi durlabh h...to sayd khanak ko in sab se ubarne me waqt hi lgega abhi pr sanvy ne use itna to bta diya ki wo aisa h jaisa log use treat krte h agr koi uske liye achha h to wo unke liye bahut jyada achha aur koi bura h to wo unke liye kisi bure sapne se kam nhi h....ab ye baat khanak kb tak samjh paaati h wo dekhna dilchasp rhega...
Wahin sam ki jeet ka jashn bnana sabhi ko bhaari pad gya khaskar sanvy ka princi ma'am ko jawab dena...sahi halat kr di pr sbse jyada buri halat to nits ki hui ..phle PT me uski maari gyi fir canteen me..uska to aaj popat hi ho gya..bda B.M.X. ki dhamki de rha tha...is group me sabse jyada shatir aur kamina bnda sanvy hi h...aur sabki jaan bhi wo hi h..rakshak bhi wohi h...kul milakar wo iss group ka core h agr wo na ho to ye group ko bikharne me waqt nhi lgega...aur Rohan to in sabhi ko tabah hi kar dega...pr jb tak sanvy naam ki dhaal ki suraksha is group pe h koi inka baal bhi banka nhi kr skta h to dekhte h ab aage ky hota h...
Waiting brother..

thanks for the beautiful review brother..haan, SANVY ke ird gird is kahani ki tarah ye pura group bhi ghumta hai.. dekhte hain aage kya hota h...saath bane rahiye

 

[vj4u]

majedar update ..sam ke jeetne ki khushi mana rahe the sab par tabhi princi aa gayi aur sabko PT me 2 period ki saja suna di ..
ye sab hone par bhadak gaye sanvy par aur peet bhi diya .

dusro ke dukh me khush hona nahi chahiye ye baat bhi sahi sabit ho gayi jab B section wale khush huye saja sunkar sam ke group ki ..
princi ne unko bhi wahi saja de daali .

sanvy ne bahana dhund liya tha par nits ne BMX ke bahane se rok liya ..
sabko cold drink pilane ko raazi ho gaya sanvy jo bahut hi bada surprise tha sabke liye .
ek pine ke baad dusri ka bhi offer kar diya ..
aur baadme pata chala ki nits ke purse se paise diye sanvy ne ..

sam ko jab pata chala mahak ke matter ka to sab sort out karne ke liye kaha sanvy aur mahak ko ..
aur sanvy ne bhi apni safai de di ki group ke liye kuch bhi kar sakta hai wo ..
bhediyo ka example sahi diya sanvy ne ..

thanks brother...saath bane rahiye

 

[vj4u]

sam ka swagat competition jeetne par dwar patkai se shuru hua... lekin yeh section B waale kitna dua karte hain sanvy ke liye.... sala kaheen kubool na ho jaye.... lagta hai yeh army camp hain aur princi yehan kee comander.... parade hi laga dee sabkee... chalo ladkiyon ke saath bhed bhaw na kiya unhone....

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yeh anjali lagta hain kisi janam kee bewi rah chuki hain sanvy kee hamesha chadhi hi rahti hain... ya phir sanvy ne usse propose na kiya uska hi khunnas nikalti rahti hain uspe... yeh vachal aur khanak silent treatment de rahi hain...

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.... dost ho toh aisa.... ab doobara treat mangne se pehle shab apna purse jaroor check kar lenge... haan paise bhi kaheen paise pehle hi na ura diye ho...

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bhediye kee pravriti aur unka insani vyavhar aur uspe prabhaw ka sateek varnana kiya hain sanvy ne... insano ka vikas akhir janwar se hi toh hua hain aur janwaro ke saath rahte rahte unke gun jo hamare purwajo mein nihat the wo kuchh mein kam toh jyada barkarar hain... wahee samay samay par ujagar hote rahte hain...

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lekin khanak abhi tak uske iss udaharan ko nahin samajh payee ya kahee kee wo sanvy ko nahin samajh payee... khair uske dil mein kya rahtah ain uske prati najariya wo shayad kisi waisi hi ghatna se saaf hoga jisme wo khud shamil hogi... tabhi wo samjh payegi sanvy kya karta hain aur kyun karta hain...

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thanks brother... bohot kuch hone waala hai..saath bane rahiye

 

[vj4u]

superbb shandaar jabardast update bro
too sam londa compitation jeet kr aa gya
orr jeet ki khusi m bhangda party ke sath P.T. partyyy bhi ho gyi sbki
orr sath m phle se hi jinki lgi hui thi unki bhi lg gyiii P.T [ B sec walo ki ]
andddd isss p.t. k and m di surprise partyyy m sanvi ne nitssss ko badhiyaa chuna lga diya
kher sam or rashi wagerah bhi smjh gye ki sanvi or khanak ke beech kuch kuch chal rhi h prooobbblllllleeemmmm
and shortout krne k liye unhe time bhi de diya
orrr finallyyyyy khanak ne kuch pucha or sanvi ne mst ghuma kr jawab diya useeeee
orr bta diya ki unity is strength for his group but is deadlyyy for other peoples
or apne acche ya bure hone ka asli mtlb bhi bta diya
dekhte h ab khanak kuch smjh pati h yaa phir or bhi sawal jawab hone hh inke beeeeccccccchhhhhhhh

thanks brother.. samajhna hi padega ladki ko..ladka toh zyada samjhane se raha...saath bane rahiye

 

[vj4u]

सनवीर और उसके दोस्तों के बीच हुई चुहलबाज़ी ने दिमाग को ठंडक प्रदान कर दी। शरारती और चंचल होना बच्चों के लिए बहुत जरूरी है । लड़कों के मानसिक विकास में यह बहुत ही कारगर होता है । और जिस तरह से ये सारे लड़के और लड़कियां शरारत कर रहे हैं और खास तौर पर सनवीर उससे उनके ग्रुप में एक पोजिटिव एनर्जी भी पैदा हो रहा है जो पढ़ाई-लिखाई के अलावा खेलकूद में भी असर डालता है ।

साम का क्विज कॉन्टेस्ट जीतकर आना.... लड़कों का उसे ढ़ोल नगाड़े के साथ स्वागत करना.... अचानक से वहां प्रिंसिपल मैम का पहुंचना....सजा के तौर पर उनसे डबल एक्सरसाइज करवाना , सब कुछ रियलिटी जैसा महसूस हुआ ।

कैंटीन के अन्दर सनवीर की खुराफातियां ....निट्स की पाकेट मनी से ही सारे दोस्तों को ट्रीट देना....भेद खुलने पर सारे लड़के और लड़कियों का रियेक्सन.... और खासतौर पर निट्स का , अमेजिंग था । आउटस्टैंडिंग था । मायूसी से भरे हुए चेहरे पर भी मुस्कान लाने वाला था ।

मुझे शुरू से ही अंजलि और सनवीर के बीच की खट्टी-मीठी वाद विवाद पसंद है । बल्कि यूं कहूं कि बहुत ही ज्यादा पसंद है ।

खनक और सनवीर ने दो दिन बाद पहली बार आपस में बातें की । खनक की चिंता भी कोई गैरवाजिब नहीं है । और सनवीर के नीयत पर भी कोई सवालिया निशान नहीं है । यदि कुछ है तो वह है मिस अंडरस्टैंडिंग । और मिस अंडरस्टैंडिंग सिर्फ एक दूसरे के साथ बातचीत करके ही दूर हो सकता है ।

आउटस्टैंडिंग एंड अमेजिंग अपडेट वि जे भाई ।
जगमग जगमग अपडेट ।

dhanyawad bhai..Anjali ke taraf aapka jhukav shuru se zyada hi raha hai bhai.. aur aajke update ke baad ye aur badhne waala hai..

saath bane rahiye

saath bane rahiye...

 

[vj4u]

VJ bro ap ka yahi andaz to pasand hai k frist update ma hi suspense dal dyty hain or us ma hi answer chur dyty hain parhny walun ko lagta hai boht complicated hai lakin hota nai is liya ap li story writing ka ma itna FAN hun keep it up God Bless You ❤❤❤

thanks for such appreciation brother...saath bane rahiye...

 

[vj4u]

Nice update.

Very Nice update

Awesome Update

beautiful update

Very nice update bhai

Mast update

Nice One

Awesome update

Shandaar update Bhai Jabardust

Kitna sahi banda apna hero Sanvy.. Lekin jb ye Galat ban jaega to kya kya karega? I think ye Galat ki hadh ko bi par kr jaega...

Bahot behtareen zaberdast shaandaar update bhai

Awesome update bhai waiting for next update

Oooo bhaiiiii
Kyaa Cheez ho yaar tum
Masttt Update tha bro
Maja i gyaaaa

NICE UPDATE BHAI

Awesome update

Mind blowing update

very nice update bhai excellent update bhai maza aa gya

Shandar jabardast update VJbhai

Superb update bro
Apan galath hai fir v log sahi hi kahte hain
Apan wo galath hai fir v log sahi kahte hain
Jab apan sahi hoga to kyaa log Galath kahenge

Update hamesha ki tarah marvellous, superb VJ bhai. College life ki yadon me ek baar fir se le jane ke liye apka shukriya
Agale update ka besabri se intzaar hai

Very nice fantastic update waiting for next

Wo #GALAT Hun Ma Jo #GALAT Ko #SAHI Kar De....


Or Wo #HADH Hun Ma Jo #HADH Ko Us Ki #HADH Ma Rake

#HADH Ko Us Ki $HADH Ma Rakhne K Liya Ma #GALAT Ko #SAHI Karta Hun



Ma Wo Hun Jo #Bin-Mange Murad Puri Karta Hun

thanks brothers...be along