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Constitution of the King of Mercenaries
Raj ko dekh unakee aankhon mein sadama, bhram aur sandeh najar aaya...
"mareej ko septic shock, aanton ka phatana, khoon bahana aur leevar aur pleeha mein chot lagana hai. vah keval aadhe din mein kaise jaag sakata tha?”
“itana hee nahin, mareej ko donon phephadon par chot, donon taraph kaee rib phraikchar, comminutrd skull fracture, paachan tantr ka raktasraav aur ek pelvis fracture he. usake shareer par itanee gambheer choten hain, mareej ko aise hee kaise hosh aa gaya?”
“Unbelievable, this is a medical miracle!”
doctors ke group ne raj ko dhyaan se dekha, jaise ve kisee alian ko dekh rahe ho. unake sadame aur aatank ko vyakt nahin kiya ja saka. unamen se pahale cheekhane vaalee female nurse bhee thee.
Raj bhee utana hee hairaan tha, kyonki usake points tejee se badh raha tha. yah achaanak 10 points se badhakar 100 points ho gaya. yah ek sau par nahin ruka balki sthir hone se pehle 1000 points tak badhata raha.
“DING, Congratulations! You’ve earned nine hundred and eleven points. Do you want to enter the mall for redemption?” The system notification sounded.
Raj ne palak jhapkate hi apane man ko pakad liya , usne apane kamajor sarir ko yad kiya aur poochha , " system , kya kuchh aisa hai jo meri sharirik shakti me sudhar kar sakta hai ? "
(Physical strength)
jaise hee shabd bola gae,an ability called “Constitution of: King of Mercenaries” appeared on the lighted silver screen.lekin ise redeem karane ke lie 1000 points kharch honge.
“Why isn’t there an explanatory note?”raaj hairaan rah gaya.
“Ding, the ‘Constitution of: King of Mercenaries’
Ek person ko quickly ek mercenary king ki ability deti hai.isamen shaareerik shakti, yuddh ka anubhav, Quick response karane kee kshamata, knowledge of firearms aadi shaamil hai, lekin yah in tak hee seemit nahin hai. ek baar redeem karane ke baad, yah permanently activate ho jayega.Do you wish to proceed with redemption?
F*ck me!
Raj ne ek thandee saans lee. yah sirph ek "cheet code" se kaheen adhik tha. yah ek game kee script mein jaane aur main charcter ki characteristics of modify karane jaisa he.
“Redeem!”
usake daanton ke beech kee daraar se shabd mushkil se nikal. vah abhee bhee vishvaas nahin kar sakata tha ki yah SYSTEM vaastav mein maujood hai, jab tak ki usaka shareer achaanak vaastavik roop se majaboot na ho gaya.
“Ding, Congratulations! You’ve received ‘Constitution of: King of Mercenaries’ and used up one thousand points!” The system notification voice said.
haalaaki, kamare mein maujood doctor ek-doosare ko niraasha mein dekh rahe the. aisa isalie tha kyonki vo silver screen nahin dekh sakate the ya system kee soundn nahi sun sakate the. ve sab raj kee aavaaj sun sakate thee.
yah dekhate hue ki Raj kis tarah bistar par baithakar khud se baat kar raha tha aur kis tarah usakee bhauhen kabhee-kabhee ek saath aur aaraam se sikud jaatee theen, ve samaan roop se sahamat the ki Raj ka mastishk kshatigrast ho gaya tha. haalaanki vah jaag gaya tha, vah ab ek maanasik rogee ban gaya tha.
isake alaava ve ab tak pooree tarah se shaant ho chuke the kyonki unhen ek badee samasya ka ehasaas hua tha, aur vah vah vyakti jisane kal raat rogee ka diagnosed kiya tha. vah ek intern tha jo avi tak hospital nahin aaya tha.
mareej ke baare mein unakee samajh bhee intarn kee diagnostic report par aadhaarit thee. aakhirakaar, ve thodee der pahale hee kaam par aae the aur unake paas vyaktigat roop se rogee kee sthiti kee jaanch karane ka samay nahin tha.
to, kya yah misdiagnoses ho sakata hai, galat report milane ka maamala? yah bilkul bhee medical miracle nahin tha?
"kya aapane rogee ke parivaar se sampark kiya hai?" ek adhed umr ke doctor ne apana sir ghumaaya aur apane bagal vaalee female nurse se poochha.
mahila nurse ne sir hilaaya, "ham rogee ke parivaar se usake sel phone ke maadhyam se sampark karane vaale hain. Veer Sharma naam ke ek aadamee ka phone aaya aur usane kaha ki vah mareej ka achchha dost hai. hamane Veer ko mareej kee sthiti bataee aur vah turant aane ko taiyaar ho gaya. use ab apane raaste par hona chaahie. ”
doctor ne kaha, "bahut achchha. rogee ke chikitsa kharchon ke baare mein Veer sharma ko soochit karana yaad rakhen!”
"hamm theek hai." mahila nurse ne javaab mein sir hilaaya.
“vaise, rogee ke lie ek aur poore shareer kee jaanch kee vyavastha karen. mujhe poora sandeh hai ki usakee jaanch riport galat thee. kya? daahinee aankh ka phatana aur khoon bahana? use dekho, usake shareer par kaheen chot ka nishaan nahin hai. kya Rakesh, jisane pichhalee raat meree shift sambhaalee thee, kaam ke dauraan jhapakee le raha tha?” female doctor chillaaya.
tabhee bina kisee chetaavanee ke achaanak poore vaard mein sard maahaul phail gaya.
vaard ke doctors is thand ke ahasaas se nahin hil sake. un sabhee kee aankhen Raj se nahin hat sakeen, jo hospital ke bistar par baitha tha. ve is samay ek majaboot galat dhaarana ka anubhav kar rahe the, ki yah koee hospital ke bistar par baitha vyakti nahin tha, balki ek behad khataranaak khoon ka pyaasa jaanavar tha. yah aisa tha maano vah unhen kisee bhee samay kha sakata hai, sivaay haddiyon ke dher ke aur kuchh nahin.
khaasakar Raj kee aankhen; unakee chilling aura ne un par dabaav daala. aur usaka paishaachik iraada bhaaree tha. yah ek jangalee jaanavar kee aankhon kee tarah thee, aur unhonne vaastav mein ek kampan mahasoos kiya jo unakee aatma se shuroo hua tha!
How did this happen?
kya yah ek matibhram tha ya ek galat dhaarana thee?
doctors sabhee dang rah gae, aur ve moorkhataavash yah nahin bata sake ki yah asalee hai ya nahin. lekin unake maathe thande paseene phootane se nahin ruk rahe the. ve samajh nahin pa rahe the ki ek vyakti ka svabhaav ek pal mein itana naatakeey roop se kaise badal sakata hai.
Raj ko is samay bahut ajeeb aur adbhut laga. aisa lagata tha ki usake shareer mein anant shakti hai, aur ankylosing spondilitis(a disease) jisane use do saal se adhik samay tak pareshaan kiya tha, theek ho gaya tha. usakee pooree peeth ab behad halkee mahasoos ho rahee thee. unske shareer ne es poorn aur anargal sahajata aur aaraam ka anubhav kabhee nahin kiya tha.
yahaan tak ki usakee drshti aur bhee spasht ho gaee thee, vah ward main chhote jeevon ko bhee aasaanee se dekh sakata tha, jaise ki makadee chupachaap deevaar par letee apane shikaar ke lie intajaar kar rahee thee.
"Raj!"
Ward ke baahar se ek tez aavaaz aaee, aur usake peechhe tezee se darwaza patakane kee aavaaz aaee. Raj ke samaan umr ka ek yuvak dvaar par dikhaee diya.
yuvak ka maansal chehara tha. usaka poora chehara mota aur gol tha, lekin usaka shareer mota nahin tha. aisa lagata tha jaise kisee mote aadamee ka sir kisee dubale aadamee kee gardan par laga ho; usne crew cut pahana tha aur maathe par kuchh alag jhurriyaan theen. unake chehare kee tvacha bhee kaaphee rookhee thee.
Hospital ke bistar par pade Raj par usakee nigaahen tikane se pahale yuvak ne idhar-udhar dekha. phir, usane doctors kee pooree tarah se avahelana kee, unhen ignore karte hue seedhe Raj kee or dauda.
Raj ke shareer kee ek saamaany jaanch ke baad, tej aavaaj achaanak chillaee, "f*ck* , kis jholaachhaap doctor ne kaha ki mera bhai sadame mein hai aur marne ja raha hai. main naashta kie bina hee daud pada. aap kya karane kee koshish kar rahe the? ”
is bayaan ke bolate hee vaard ke doctors ka samooh muh achaanak laal ho gaya, khaasakar adhed umr ka doctor. bhale hee Raj ke praathamik chikitsak ke roop mein kal raat intarn doctor Rakesh dvaara report likha gaya tha, phir bhee kya "neem-hakeem doktar" ka lebal seedhe us par nahin lagaaya ja sakta he?
“Ahem....”
Raj ne kaee baar sookhee khaansee kee aur sharmindagee kee lahar mahasoos kee. usake dost Veer mein vaakee kuchh bhee kahane kee himmat thee. kya use doctors ke samooh dvaara peete jaane ka dar nahin tha?
doctors kee group ne ek-doosare ko dekha aur phir baaree-baaree se baahar nikal gae. daravaaja band karane ke baad, kharaab mijaaj vaale kuchh doktar baahar nikalane se khud ko rok nahin sake.
“Rakesh kis tarah kee pratishtha sthaapit karane kee koshish kar raha hai? is tarah kee galate karane ke lie bhee, kya vah kal raat rogee ka diagnosis karate samay so gaya tha?"
"ek intern ek intern hai. vah apane kaam ke prati bilkul bhee gambheer nahin hai. mera sujhaav hai ki ham ek niyamit karmachaaree banane ke lie usakee yogyata ko radd kar den. unse aur teen maheene hospital mein rahana chaahie.”
"haan, doctor ke roop mein galat diagnoses hamaare lie ek pramukh galti hai. yah pahalee baar hai ki mainne apane jeevan mein itana bada galat diagnoses dekha hai."
jaahir hai, in doktaron ne assume kiya tha ki Raj ka jaagana koee medical miracle nahin tha, balki ek bahut bada misdiagnoses tha. aur galat diagnoses ke lie zimmedaar Rakesh tha, jo unake aspataal mein ek naya intern tha.
adhed umr ke doctor ne kuchh nahin kaha, lekin unakee abhivyakti asaamaany roop se badasoorat thee.
Rakesh unaka intern tha. yah bhee pahalee baar tha ki unhonne doctor ke roop mein itana bada misdiagnoses dekha tha.
He was usually loved by others. yah un
apamaanajanak naamon se bilkul alag tha jo aaj kee subah se hee use jhelane pade the, jaise "neem-hakeem doctor". vah in sabhee ko Rakesh ke saath sulajhaega.
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Constitution of the King of Mercenaries
Raj ko dekh unakee aankhon mein sadama, bhram aur sandeh najar aaya...
"mareej ko septic shock, aanton ka phatana, khoon bahana aur leevar aur pleeha mein chot lagana hai. vah keval aadhe din mein kaise jaag sakata tha?”
“itana hee nahin, mareej ko donon phephadon par chot, donon taraph kaee rib phraikchar, comminutrd skull fracture, paachan tantr ka raktasraav aur ek pelvis fracture he. usake shareer par itanee gambheer choten hain, mareej ko aise hee kaise hosh aa gaya?”
“Unbelievable, this is a medical miracle!”
doctors ke group ne raj ko dhyaan se dekha, jaise ve kisee alian ko dekh rahe ho. unake sadame aur aatank ko vyakt nahin kiya ja saka. unamen se pahale cheekhane vaalee female nurse bhee thee.
Raj bhee utana hee hairaan tha, kyonki usake points tejee se badh raha tha. yah achaanak 10 points se badhakar 100 points ho gaya. yah ek sau par nahin ruka balki sthir hone se pehle 1000 points tak badhata raha.
“DING, Congratulations! You’ve earned nine hundred and eleven points. Do you want to enter the mall for redemption?” The system notification sounded.
Raj ne palak jhapkate hi apane man ko pakad liya , usne apane kamajor sarir ko yad kiya aur poochha , " system , kya kuchh aisa hai jo meri sharirik shakti me sudhar kar sakta hai ? "
(Physical strength)
jaise hee shabd bola gae,an ability called “Constitution of: King of Mercenaries” appeared on the lighted silver screen.lekin ise redeem karane ke lie 1000 points kharch honge.
“Why isn’t there an explanatory note?”raaj hairaan rah gaya.
“Ding, the ‘Constitution of: King of Mercenaries’
Ek person ko quickly ek mercenary king ki ability deti hai.isamen shaareerik shakti, yuddh ka anubhav, Quick response karane kee kshamata, knowledge of firearms aadi shaamil hai, lekin yah in tak hee seemit nahin hai. ek baar redeem karane ke baad, yah permanently activate ho jayega.Do you wish to proceed with redemption?
F*ck me!
Raj ne ek thandee saans lee. yah sirph ek "cheet code" se kaheen adhik tha. yah ek game kee script mein jaane aur main charcter ki characteristics of modify karane jaisa he.
“Redeem!”
usake daanton ke beech kee daraar se shabd mushkil se nikal. vah abhee bhee vishvaas nahin kar sakata tha ki yah SYSTEM vaastav mein maujood hai, jab tak ki usaka shareer achaanak vaastavik roop se majaboot na ho gaya.
“Ding, Congratulations! You’ve received ‘Constitution of: King of Mercenaries’ and used up one thousand points!” The system notification voice said.
haalaaki, kamare mein maujood doctor ek-doosare ko niraasha mein dekh rahe the. aisa isalie tha kyonki vo silver screen nahin dekh sakate the ya system kee soundn nahi sun sakate the. ve sab raj kee aavaaj sun sakate thee.
yah dekhate hue ki Raj kis tarah bistar par baithakar khud se baat kar raha tha aur kis tarah usakee bhauhen kabhee-kabhee ek saath aur aaraam se sikud jaatee theen, ve samaan roop se sahamat the ki Raj ka mastishk kshatigrast ho gaya tha. haalaanki vah jaag gaya tha, vah ab ek maanasik rogee ban gaya tha.
isake alaava ve ab tak pooree tarah se shaant ho chuke the kyonki unhen ek badee samasya ka ehasaas hua tha, aur vah vah vyakti jisane kal raat rogee ka diagnosed kiya tha. vah ek intern tha jo avi tak hospital nahin aaya tha.
mareej ke baare mein unakee samajh bhee intarn kee diagnostic report par aadhaarit thee. aakhirakaar, ve thodee der pahale hee kaam par aae the aur unake paas vyaktigat roop se rogee kee sthiti kee jaanch karane ka samay nahin tha.
to, kya yah misdiagnoses ho sakata hai, galat report milane ka maamala? yah bilkul bhee medical miracle nahin tha?
"kya aapane rogee ke parivaar se sampark kiya hai?" ek adhed umr ke doctor ne apana sir ghumaaya aur apane bagal vaalee female nurse se poochha.
mahila nurse ne sir hilaaya, "ham rogee ke parivaar se usake sel phone ke maadhyam se sampark karane vaale hain. Veer Sharma naam ke ek aadamee ka phone aaya aur usane kaha ki vah mareej ka achchha dost hai. hamane Veer ko mareej kee sthiti bataee aur vah turant aane ko taiyaar ho gaya. use ab apane raaste par hona chaahie. ”
doctor ne kaha, "bahut achchha. rogee ke chikitsa kharchon ke baare mein Veer sharma ko soochit karana yaad rakhen!”
"hamm theek hai." mahila nurse ne javaab mein sir hilaaya.
“vaise, rogee ke lie ek aur poore shareer kee jaanch kee vyavastha karen. mujhe poora sandeh hai ki usakee jaanch riport galat thee. kya? daahinee aankh ka phatana aur khoon bahana? use dekho, usake shareer par kaheen chot ka nishaan nahin hai. kya Rakesh, jisane pichhalee raat meree shift sambhaalee thee, kaam ke dauraan jhapakee le raha tha?” female doctor chillaaya.
tabhee bina kisee chetaavanee ke achaanak poore vaard mein sard maahaul phail gaya.
vaard ke doctors is thand ke ahasaas se nahin hil sake. un sabhee kee aankhen Raj se nahin hat sakeen, jo hospital ke bistar par baitha tha. ve is samay ek majaboot galat dhaarana ka anubhav kar rahe the, ki yah koee hospital ke bistar par baitha vyakti nahin tha, balki ek behad khataranaak khoon ka pyaasa jaanavar tha. yah aisa tha maano vah unhen kisee bhee samay kha sakata hai, sivaay haddiyon ke dher ke aur kuchh nahin.
khaasakar Raj kee aankhen; unakee chilling aura ne un par dabaav daala. aur usaka paishaachik iraada bhaaree tha. yah ek jangalee jaanavar kee aankhon kee tarah thee, aur unhonne vaastav mein ek kampan mahasoos kiya jo unakee aatma se shuroo hua tha!
How did this happen?
kya yah ek matibhram tha ya ek galat dhaarana thee?
doctors sabhee dang rah gae, aur ve moorkhataavash yah nahin bata sake ki yah asalee hai ya nahin. lekin unake maathe thande paseene phootane se nahin ruk rahe the. ve samajh nahin pa rahe the ki ek vyakti ka svabhaav ek pal mein itana naatakeey roop se kaise badal sakata hai.
Raj ko is samay bahut ajeeb aur adbhut laga. aisa lagata tha ki usake shareer mein anant shakti hai, aur ankylosing spondilitis(a disease) jisane use do saal se adhik samay tak pareshaan kiya tha, theek ho gaya tha. usakee pooree peeth ab behad halkee mahasoos ho rahee thee. unske shareer ne es poorn aur anargal sahajata aur aaraam ka anubhav kabhee nahin kiya tha.
yahaan tak ki usakee drshti aur bhee spasht ho gaee thee, vah ward main chhote jeevon ko bhee aasaanee se dekh sakata tha, jaise ki makadee chupachaap deevaar par letee apane shikaar ke lie intajaar kar rahee thee.
"Raj!"
Ward ke baahar se ek tez aavaaz aaee, aur usake peechhe tezee se darwaza patakane kee aavaaz aaee. Raj ke samaan umr ka ek yuvak dvaar par dikhaee diya.
yuvak ka maansal chehara tha. usaka poora chehara mota aur gol tha, lekin usaka shareer mota nahin tha. aisa lagata tha jaise kisee mote aadamee ka sir kisee dubale aadamee kee gardan par laga ho; usne crew cut pahana tha aur maathe par kuchh alag jhurriyaan theen. unake chehare kee tvacha bhee kaaphee rookhee thee.
Hospital ke bistar par pade Raj par usakee nigaahen tikane se pahale yuvak ne idhar-udhar dekha. phir, usane doctors kee pooree tarah se avahelana kee, unhen ignore karte hue seedhe Raj kee or dauda.
Raj ke shareer kee ek saamaany jaanch ke baad, tej aavaaj achaanak chillaee, "f*ck* , kis jholaachhaap doctor ne kaha ki mera bhai sadame mein hai aur marne ja raha hai. main naashta kie bina hee daud pada. aap kya karane kee koshish kar rahe the? ”
is bayaan ke bolate hee vaard ke doctors ka samooh muh achaanak laal ho gaya, khaasakar adhed umr ka doctor. bhale hee Raj ke praathamik chikitsak ke roop mein kal raat intarn doctor Rakesh dvaara report likha gaya tha, phir bhee kya "neem-hakeem doktar" ka lebal seedhe us par nahin lagaaya ja sakta he?
“Ahem....”
Raj ne kaee baar sookhee khaansee kee aur sharmindagee kee lahar mahasoos kee. usake dost Veer mein vaakee kuchh bhee kahane kee himmat thee. kya use doctors ke samooh dvaara peete jaane ka dar nahin tha?
doctors kee group ne ek-doosare ko dekha aur phir baaree-baaree se baahar nikal gae. daravaaja band karane ke baad, kharaab mijaaj vaale kuchh doktar baahar nikalane se khud ko rok nahin sake.
“Rakesh kis tarah kee pratishtha sthaapit karane kee koshish kar raha hai? is tarah kee galate karane ke lie bhee, kya vah kal raat rogee ka diagnosis karate samay so gaya tha?"
"ek intern ek intern hai. vah apane kaam ke prati bilkul bhee gambheer nahin hai. mera sujhaav hai ki ham ek niyamit karmachaaree banane ke lie usakee yogyata ko radd kar den. unse aur teen maheene hospital mein rahana chaahie.”
"haan, doctor ke roop mein galat diagnoses hamaare lie ek pramukh galti hai. yah pahalee baar hai ki mainne apane jeevan mein itana bada galat diagnoses dekha hai."
jaahir hai, in doktaron ne assume kiya tha ki Raj ka jaagana koee medical miracle nahin tha, balki ek bahut bada misdiagnoses tha. aur galat diagnoses ke lie zimmedaar Rakesh tha, jo unake aspataal mein ek naya intern tha.
adhed umr ke doctor ne kuchh nahin kaha, lekin unakee abhivyakti asaamaany roop se badasoorat thee.
Rakesh unaka intern tha. yah bhee pahalee baar tha ki unhonne doctor ke roop mein itana bada misdiagnoses dekha tha.
He was usually loved by others. yah un
apamaanajanak naamon se bilkul alag tha jo aaj kee subah se hee use jhelane pade the, jaise "neem-hakeem doctor". vah in sabhee ko Rakesh ke saath sulajhaega.
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