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Fantasy GENIUS SYSTEM

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Raj Singh (Hero)
Sheetal Mehta: Raj's ex-girlfriend
Rakesh:- A intern doctor
Veer Sharma:- Raj's good friend
Dev Huahai:-Sheetal's Boyfriend
 
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Update 3:
Resignation

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Raj yah jaanane kee jahamat nahin utha saka ki doctor kis par dosh madhana chaahate hain.

vah ab pooree tarah Genius SYSTEM, dwara lae gae "The King of Mercenaries" utsaah mein doob gaya tha. Hospital ke bistar kee lohe kee railing usake haathon se mudi aur vikrt ho gaee thee. unse ab pooree tarah se system ke vaastavik astitv kee pushti ho gai thee. yah mastishk aaghaat ke baad utpann illusion nahin tha.

"agar koee badee aapada mein nasht nahin hota hai, to aashirwad nishchit roop se aaenge. poorvajon ke shabd vaastav mein jhooth nahin bolate, hahahaha ..."

Raj apane aap ko daba nahin saka aur dil kholkar hansa. use laga jaise vah jaag gaya ho aur usane paaya ki vah superman mein badal gaya hai jo baahar apanee laal underwear pahanata hai aur aakaash mein ud sakata hai. utsaah ko shabdon mein bayaan karana mushkil tha.

"Hey hey Raj, what's going on? mujhe darao mat. tum es tareeke se apane aap se khush kyon ho rahe ho? Veer ne Raj kee aankhon ke saamane apane haathon se taalee baje, lekin usane yah nahin dekha ki kaise Raj ne bistar kee lohe kee railing ko kaisei mod diya tha.

Raj ne apane saamane apane poorv college room-met aur dost ko dekha, vah vaastav mein use Genius SYSTEM ke baare mein bataana chaahata tha.

lekin ushne isake baare mein behatar socha. is maamale ko apane tak hee rakhana behatar tha. agar vah aisa kahata, to Veer usake saath keval paagal kee tarah vyavahaar karata. aakhirakaar, yah bahut haasyaaspad tha, kaun vishvaas karega ki vah ek 100 billion light year door ek parallel universe se aya huae Genius SYSTEM mein merge ho gaya tha?

Tum kahaan dekh rahe hain? mere paas dekhane ke lie kuchh bhee nahin hai. mujhe batao, tum hospital mein kyon pade ho? Veer ne apanee pooree taakat lagaate hue Raj kee chati par ungli se vaar kiya.

"aah .... pyaar mein niraasha!"

Raj ne aah bharee. unshne is baare mein bataaya ki kaise Seetal ne unase sambandh tod liya, jisake baad, unshne der raat highway mein apanee car ko tej gati se chalaaya aur car ka accident hua.

sunane ke baad, Veer ne aah bharate hue kaha, "f*ck Me, tum sach mein ek badee aapada se bach gae!"

"Can't you understand the main point ?" Raj ne aankhen moond lee,.

Veer ne turant daanta, “main point to 🖕 hai.Seetal tumhare layak nai he. tumase naata todana usaka nukasaan hai. Tum bahut talented ho. tumhaare khopdi ke peechhe ek occipital bun bhee hai. physiognomy books mein kaha gaya hai ki yah ek samraat kee visheshata hai. ek din, jaldee ya baad mein, tum ameer aur shaktishali ban jaenge, jab vah samay aaega, to Seetal ke paas keval ek hee kaam rah jaega ki vah khud se chupake ke roe. ”

Raj ko samajh nahin aa raha tha ki hanse ya roen. unshne Veer ke kandhe par thapathapaate hue kaha, "Veer, main vaastav mein tumhare nonsense talking skill ke lie tum ko salaam karata hoon. isamen tum ko koee nahin hara sakata.”

“Get lost!”

Veer ne adhira ta se apana haath hilaaya, aur phir gambheer bhaav se bola, “vaise, kya ab tumhen koee pareshaani mehsoos ho rahee hai? Like, kya tum ko ultee jaisa mehsoos ho raha hai?"

"mere saath kuchh bhee galat nahin hua hai. main is baar bhaagyashaalee hoon, keval car thrash ho gaya hai, main pooree tarah se theek hoon aur ab mujhe discharge mil sakatee hai,” Raj ne kaha.

“Raj, ham is par risk nahin le sakate.tum isake prati laaparavaah nahin rah sakate. agar tumhare paas ilaaj ke lie paise nahin hain, to mere paas hain. mere paas laakhon nahin hain, lekin main tumhare lie 30000 se 40000 rupaye jaroor la sakata hoon. apane rishte ke saath, Veer ek seedhee-saadee baat karane vaala vyakti tha, jo cheejon ko chhupaata nahin tha aur na hee idhar-udhar kee baaten karata tha.

"vaastav mein isakee koee aavashyakata nahin hai!"

Raj ne turant bistar se chhalaang laga dee. unshne na keval teen baar pharsh par chhalaang lagaee, balki yah saabit karane ke lie ulta bhee chale ki unaka shareer behatar hai.

“Ding! Congratulations. You’ve earned five points.”

Raj ne system notification ko najarandaaj kar diya aur handstand ko khatm kar apne pare par khada hua. usane apanee hatheliyon ko jhaada aur chidhakar Veer se kaha, "to, tumne jo kaha hai, usake anusaar mujhe bathroom jaane par bhee tum ko report karane kee zaroorat hai?"

"mujhe tumhare sath bathroom jaane mein koee dilachaspee nahin hai, lekin agar tum kisee ladaki ke saath sex karate ho to mujhe isake baare mein sunana achchha lagega. jitane vistra se ho utana achchha, hehe...” Veer ek katli muskan ke sath bola.

“F*ck your sister!”

“Bwahaha!”

Raj ke discharge papers ko poora karane ke lie Veer zordaar hansee ke saath baahar bhaaga.

Hospital se nikalane ke baad donon ne saath mein naashta kiya. Raj aur Veer trafic police ke paas gae jahaan unske car tha. Car gambheer roop se kshatigrast ho gaee thee, yahaan tak ki engine bhee toot gaya tha. yahaan tak ki agar isakee marammat kee gaee thee, tab bhee yah tootee huee car kee tarah plain sadak par jor se uchhalega.

"isake baare mein bura mat maanana, yah sirf ek car hai. puraana nahin jaega to naya nahin aaega girlfriend par bhee yahee tark laagoo hota hai. is duniya mein hamesha ek good car hotee hai, ek good women jo keval aapakee hotee hai," Veer ne saantvana dee.

Raj muskuraaya aur kuch bola nahin.usake dimaag mein bahut see baaten aa gaee theen. uskee manasik sthiti pahale se kaheen adhik shaant aur sanyat thee.

"kya tum ghar ya company jaana chaahate ho?" Veer ne apane Swift ke driver ka daravaja khola aur Raj se poochha.

“To the company.”

“F*ck,l'’m not going to work, but to resign!” Raj bola.

Veer bhauchakka ho gaya, thoda uttejit mehsoos kar raha tha, "tum sirf Sheetal ke kaaran Resignation de rahe ho? mere bhai, kya tum ek haare hue vyakti kee tarah abhinay nahin kar rahe ho?"

Raj ne aah bharee, par samajhaaya nahin. usane saamane valee passenger seat ka darwaja khola aur car mein savaar ho gaya.

darasal, unshne Resignation dene ke baare mein kabhee pahale hee soch liya tha. ek manufacturing company mein kaam karana na keval har din doharae jaane vaala kaam tha, balki isamen chunautiyon ka bhee abhaav tha. isamen unhen koee future najar nahin aa raha tha.

is naukari se unshne kabhee bhe kushi ka anubhav nahin hua tha. agar Seetal bhee Huahai group mein kaam nahin karati, to unshne bahut pahale hee jaane ka phaisala kar liya hota. ab jab unake paas Genius system tha, to usake career ko Huahai Cop. tak seemit rakhane kee koe aavashyakata nahin thee.

Veer ne apana muh band kiya aur driver kee seet par baith gaya. vah Raaj ko huhaee corporation le gaya.

"Raj, khush ho jao. ham purush hain. us mahila ke baare mein udaas aur niraash hone kee koee jaroorat nahin hai jo aapakee pravah nahin karatee hai, ”Veer ne phir se saantvana mein kaha.

“maine apana dimaag khol diya hai; main khud ko achchhe se adjust kar sakata hoon."

Raj ka dil garm ho gaya, "vaise, jab tum car chala rahe hon to tum ko dhyaan dena chaahie, mujhase seekho mat aur drive carefully."

“touch wood….tum jaise badamaash se achchhe shabdon kee ummeed nahin kee ja sakatee. main ja raha hoon. jab main phree hounga to phir se phon karoonga." Veer ne accelerate par kadam rakha aur apane Swift ko bhaga diya.

Raj use jaate hue tab tak dekhata raha jab tak ki use car kee parachhaee nahin dikhaee dee. usane apanee nigaahen jamaeen aur muda, apane emp. ID ko swip kiya aur huahai corporation mein chal diya.


usaka Resignation aakhir kaar dopahar se theek pahale poora ho gaya.

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Apane samaan ka ek baksa haath mein lie hue, Raj huahai corporation ke mukhy raste par chala gaya, jahaan usane teen saal tak kaam kiya tha. usake heart mein tarah-tarah ke bhaav umad pade. University se graduate hone ke baad yah unske pahale naukari thee. ushen abhee bhee yaad hai jab vah pahale baar aae the, sapanon aur aadarshon se bhare hue the. ek-ek drshy chalachitr kee bhaanti unake mastishk mein ghoom raha tha.

“Raj, stop right there!”

usake peechhe se ek jaanee-pahachaanee aavaaj sunaee dee, usake awaj ke peechhe command ka hint tha.

Raj ruka aur ek khubsurat chehare se milane ke lie peechhe muda. vah Sheetal thee, ek saleeke se saje-dhaje sundar shakl vale mahila.

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unse thodi bhee aashchary nahin hua ki Sheetal ko unake resign ke baare mein pata chal gaya tha. akhirakaar, wo HR department mein kaam kati he. huawei corporation mein hajaaron the, chaahe ve ruke ya chale gae, HR department ke paas un sabhee ka vistrt record tha.

"kya wahaan kuchh gadabad hai?" Raj ne poochha.

Sheetal High heels ke joote mein usake paas dudee. usane Raj ke boks kee saamagree ko apanee aankhon mein ek tiraskaarapoorn abhivyakti ke saath dekha, "Raj, kya tum thode aur mature nahin ho sakate? Tum aur main, ham ant tak aa chuke hain, lekin kya tum ko is par resign deke apana future barbaad karo ge? yahaan tak ki agar tum apane baare mein nahin sochana chaahate hain, to bhee tum ko apane parivaar ke baare mein sochana hoga. Tumhare isteepha dene ke baad tumhare paas income ka koee srot nahin hoga. kya tum waapas ja ke apane mata-pita ke paas rahane ka iraada kar liya he? ”

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Update 1

A System’s Sudden Arrival
Raj apanee neend se jaaga aur usane khud ko hospital ke bistar par pada paaya. hava disinfectant kee tej gandh se bhar gaee thee.


"yah ... ek hospital hai? main hospital mein kyon hoon?"


raaj kee bhauhen tan gaeen aur vah behad hairaan rah gaya. lekin jald hee usake dimaag ne, jo theek ho chuka tha, use sab kuchh bata diya.


apanee premika Seetal ke saath break up ke baad, usane apanee bhaavanaon ko baahar nikaalane ke lie shahar ke baaharee ilaake mein apanee cheap car leke chale gaya.


baarish mein sadak phisalan bharee thee, aur der raat ho chukee thee. durbhaagy se, vah ek kaar durghatana mein shaamil ho gaya. unske car, jo 120 meel prati ghante kee raphtaar se ja rahee thee, sadak se nikal gaee aur teen meetar giraavat ke ek khet mein ja giree. usake baad kya hua use yaad nahin aa raha tha. vah nahin jaanata tha ki kisane use dhoondha aur usakee jaan bachaate hue use hospital bheja.


"Creak ~"


is samay, vaard ka daravaaja khula hua tha, aur ek pyaaree see dikhane vaalee mahila nars dava kee botal lekar aaee.


"Ah~"




jab usane raaj ko dekha, jo jaag raha tha aur hospital ke bistar par baitha tha, frowning aur dhyaan kar raha tha, usane turant ek cheekh nikalee. usake haath mein dava kee botal khadakhadaahat ke saath jameen par gir gaee. use aisa lag raha tha jaise usane koee bhoot dekh liya ho. jaise hee usane raj kee or ishaara kiya, usakee aankhen chaudee ho gaeen aur usaka daahina haath kaanpane laga. "tum, tum, tum ... tum kyon jaag rahe ho?"


raj ko nahin pata tha ki kya ho raha hai. usane socha, "kya yah nars naee hai? nahin to rogee ko jaagate dekhakar usakee itanee teevr pratikriya kyon hotee?"


usane khud ko oopar aur neeche dekha, phir apane haath phailae aur kaha, "it's obvious." phir, usane carefully poochha, "kya ... kya koee samasya hai?"


"How did you wake up? You can't wake up. How …"


Nars abhee bhee aisee lag rahee thee jaise usane bhoot dekha ho. usakee aankhen chaudee ho gaeen, usaka munh chauda ho gaya, aur usane raj ko avishvaas se dekha. yah aisa tha jaise vah vishvaas nahin kar pa rahee thee ki vah kya dekh rahee the.


jaag nahin sakate?


Raj vaastav mein bhramit tha. use samajh nahin aaya ki nars aisa kyon kahegee.


jaise hee vah poochhane vaala tha, nars mudee aur baahar bhaag gaee. phir, usakee unmaadapoorn cheekh poore galiyaare mein goonj uthee. "doctor shyaam, yah bhayaanak hai. vaard 438 mein rogee jaag gaya hai!"


What was going on?


Raj ne asamanjas mein apana sir khujalaaya. vah isaka kaaran nahin samajh sake aur apane vaard nambar ke baare mein avaak rah gae. 438 ek shubh sankhya nahin thee, yah "dman bitch" ka ek naam tha.


is samay, a series of system notification achaanak usake dimaag mein aa gaee. The tone was like popular online game league of legends. yah ek female aavaaj bhee thee, aur yah bahut shaktishaalee.


"Ding! Congratulations to host Raj for obtaining 10 points. Would you like to open the system store to exchange?"


Raj sucked in a breath of cold air. What the f * ck is going on?


21ve sadee ke ek naujavaan ke roop mein use vishvaas hee nahin ho raha tha ki aisee akalpaneey baat bhee ho sakatee hai. yah bas saamaany gyaan kee avahelana karata hai.


usane socha ki yah ek bhram tha, ek aaghaat ka parinaam tha. lekin phir achaanak usake saamane ek halkee screen dikhaee dee, jisamen usake baare mein jaanakaaree kee ek page dikhaee de rahee thee, jaise ki ek High-tech Resume.


Host: Raj Singh


Age: 26


Points: 10


Current Identity: Huahai Group Employee


Realm Level: Mediocre





What, mediocre … Mediocre?


yah dekhakar raj ko achaanak hosh aa gaya. usane man hee man kaha, "main huahai group ka engineer hoon, theek hai? agar engineer bhee mediocre hain, to is duniya mein har koee mediocre hai!"


As if hearing his thoughts, the system notification sounded again. "Ding! The host's foreign language communication ability is low, his body is sick, and his morals, intelligence, physique, and beauty are not good. If he isn't mediocre, then what is he?"


F * ck!


Raj ka svabhaav bahut achchha tha, lekin is samay vah gaalee die bina nahin rah saka. phir usane poochha,"What the hell are you?"


"Ding! This system is called the Genius System. It comes from a parallel universe 100 billion light-years away," the system replied.


"Parallel universe?"


raj ke is sadame ko shabdon mein bayaan nahin kiya ja sakata. unake saamane tathyon ne unhen is adrshy aur asprshy system kee baaton par vishvaas karane par majaboor kar diya. unake dimaag mein ek parallel brahmaand kee avadhaarana ke kaaran, unhonne avachetan roop se poochha, "Is there an Earth there?"


"Ding! Of course there is, but the level of technology is 100,000 years ahead of here!"


F * ck!


Raj's brain couldn't accept it for a while. The level of technology was 100,000 years ahead of here. What kind of scene would that be? The humans there had probably already escaped the reincarnation of life and death through the power of technology, and were immortal and indestructible.


"Ding! This system came to this universe because of a space-time turbulence and parasitized you who was on the verge of death. Special gift of a free life extension!" The system notification pulled his mind back to reality.


raaj hairaan tha. apanee buddhimatta se, is samay, vah achaanak samajh gaya ki nars ne use jaagate dekhakar apana aapa kyon kho diya tha.


kaaran vaastav mein yah tha: systam ke jeevan vistaar ke kaaran, use itanee jaldee nahin uthana chaahie tha, lekin vah jaag gaya. doosare shabdon mein, doctar dvaara dead kie jaane ke baad use bachaane kee koee ummeed nahin hone ke baad vah jaag gaya. nars kee atyadhik pratikriya kee vyaakhya kee ja sakatee hai.


yah sochakar usake dil ko aur sukoon mila. unhonne poochha, "jeevan vistaar ke alaava, aap mere lie aur kya kar sakate hain?"


"Ding! This system can make you into a peerless genius."


Peerless genius,us tarah ka sanakee jo sab kuchh jaanata hai aur sab kuchh jaanata hai? "raj ne poochha.


Ding! You can understand it that way!"


"What price do I have to pay?"

raj ko vishvaas nahin tha.


"Ding! You can use points to exchange for various abilities in the system store. The more applicable the ability is, the more points you will need."


system kee introduction ke baad, holograam window system store mein badal gaee. oopar yah kshamataon kee ek soochee thee, jaise ki videshee bhaasha kee kshamata, gaming kshamata, smrti kshamata ... aadi. ek nazar mein padhana bahut adhik tha.


yah sab dekhane ke baad, raj kosana chaahata tha. pradarshit kee gaee hajaaron kshamataon ke kaaran, ek bhee aisee kshamata nahin thee jise keval 10 ankon ke saath badala ja sake.


"system, kya aap mujhe bata sakate hain ki main 10 ankon ke saath kis kshamata ka aadaan-pradaan kar sakata hoon?" Raj ne haar nahin maanee. vah dekhana chaahata tha ki yah usaka bhram hai ya kisee kee sharaarat.


"Ding! 10 points can't be exchanged for any ability!"


Raj's face darkened. "Are you playing with me?"


"Ding! Points can be earned. Host, don't worry."


Points can be earned!


Raj's eyes lit up. "How do I earn them?"


Ding! Any surprise, curiosity, shock, and other human emotional reactions caused by the host will be automatically recognized and absorbed by the system. Then, according to their depth, the system will automatically convert them into corresponding points."


"to aisa hai!"


raaj achaanak samajh gaya. What kind of peerless genius system was this? yah spasht roop se ek dhokha pranaalee thee jisane use ek baagh ko khaane ke lie suar hone ka naatak karate hue lagaataar dikhaava karane kee anumati dee. aur ab, us nars se 10 ank arjit kie honge.


"peng ~".

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Update 2

Constitution of the King of Mercenaries

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Raj ko dekh unakee aankhon mein sadama, bhram aur sandeh najar aaya...

"mareej ko septic shock, aanton ka phatana, khoon bahana aur leevar aur pleeha mein chot lagana hai. vah keval aadhe din mein kaise jaag sakata tha?”

“itana hee nahin, mareej ko donon phephadon par chot, donon taraph kaee rib phraikchar, comminutrd skull fracture, paachan tantr ka raktasraav aur ek pelvis fracture he. usake shareer par itanee gambheer choten hain, mareej ko aise hee kaise hosh aa gaya?”

“Unbelievable, this is a medical miracle!”

doctors ke group ne raj ko dhyaan se dekha, jaise ve kisee alian ko dekh rahe ho. unake sadame aur aatank ko vyakt nahin kiya ja saka. unamen se pahale cheekhane vaalee female nurse bhee thee.

Raj bhee utana hee hairaan tha, kyonki usake points tejee se badh raha tha. yah achaanak 10 points se badhakar 100 points ho gaya. yah ek sau par nahin ruka balki sthir hone se pehle 1000 points tak badhata raha.

“DING, Congratulations! You’ve earned nine hundred and eleven points. Do you want to enter the mall for redemption?” The system notification sounded.

Raj ne palak jhapkate hi apane man ko pakad liya , usne apane kamajor sarir ko yad kiya aur poochha , " system , kya kuchh aisa hai jo meri sharirik shakti me sudhar kar sakta hai ? "
(Physical strength)

jaise hee shabd bola gae,an ability called “Constitution of: King of Mercenaries” appeared on the lighted silver screen.lekin ise redeem karane ke lie 1000 points kharch honge.

“Why isn’t there an explanatory note?”raaj hairaan rah gaya.

“Ding, the ‘Constitution of: King of Mercenaries’

Ek person ko quickly ek mercenary king ki ability deti hai.isamen shaareerik shakti, yuddh ka anubhav, Quick response karane kee kshamata, knowledge of firearms aadi shaamil hai, lekin yah in tak hee seemit nahin hai. ek baar redeem karane ke baad, yah permanently activate ho jayega.Do you wish to proceed with redemption?

F*ck me!

Raj ne ek thandee saans lee. yah sirph ek "cheet code" se kaheen adhik tha. yah ek game kee script mein jaane aur main charcter ki characteristics of modify karane jaisa he.

“Redeem!”

usake daanton ke beech kee daraar se shabd mushkil se nikal. vah abhee bhee vishvaas nahin kar sakata tha ki yah SYSTEM vaastav mein maujood hai, jab tak ki usaka shareer achaanak vaastavik roop se majaboot na ho gaya.

“Ding, Congratulations! You’ve received ‘Constitution of: King of Mercenaries’ and used up one thousand points!” The system notification voice said.

haalaaki, kamare mein maujood doctor ek-doosare ko niraasha mein dekh rahe the. aisa isalie tha kyonki vo silver screen nahin dekh sakate the ya system kee soundn nahi sun sakate the. ve sab raj kee aavaaj sun sakate thee.

yah dekhate hue ki Raj kis tarah bistar par baithakar khud se baat kar raha tha aur kis tarah usakee bhauhen kabhee-kabhee ek saath aur aaraam se sikud jaatee theen, ve samaan roop se sahamat the ki Raj ka mastishk kshatigrast ho gaya tha. haalaanki vah jaag gaya tha, vah ab ek maanasik rogee ban gaya tha.

isake alaava ve ab tak pooree tarah se shaant ho chuke the kyonki unhen ek badee samasya ka ehasaas hua tha, aur vah vah vyakti jisane kal raat rogee ka diagnosed kiya tha. vah ek intern tha jo avi tak hospital nahin aaya tha.

mareej ke baare mein unakee samajh bhee intarn kee diagnostic report par aadhaarit thee. aakhirakaar, ve thodee der pahale hee kaam par aae the aur unake paas vyaktigat roop se rogee kee sthiti kee jaanch karane ka samay nahin tha.

to, kya yah misdiagnoses ho sakata hai, galat report milane ka maamala? yah bilkul bhee medical miracle nahin tha?

"kya aapane rogee ke parivaar se sampark kiya hai?" ek adhed umr ke doctor ne apana sir ghumaaya aur apane bagal vaalee female nurse se poochha.

mahila nurse ne sir hilaaya, "ham rogee ke parivaar se usake sel phone ke maadhyam se sampark karane vaale hain. Veer Sharma naam ke ek aadamee ka phone aaya aur usane kaha ki vah mareej ka achchha dost hai. hamane Veer ko mareej kee sthiti bataee aur vah turant aane ko taiyaar ho gaya. use ab apane raaste par hona chaahie. ”


doctor ne kaha, "bahut achchha. rogee ke chikitsa kharchon ke baare mein Veer sharma ko soochit karana yaad rakhen!”

"hamm theek hai." mahila nurse ne javaab mein sir hilaaya.

“vaise, rogee ke lie ek aur poore shareer kee jaanch kee vyavastha karen. mujhe poora sandeh hai ki usakee jaanch riport galat thee. kya? daahinee aankh ka phatana aur khoon bahana? use dekho, usake shareer par kaheen chot ka nishaan nahin hai. kya Rakesh, jisane pichhalee raat meree shift sambhaalee thee, kaam ke dauraan jhapakee le raha tha?” female doctor chillaaya.

tabhee bina kisee chetaavanee ke achaanak poore vaard mein sard maahaul phail gaya.

vaard ke doctors is thand ke ahasaas se nahin hil sake. un sabhee kee aankhen Raj se nahin hat sakeen, jo hospital ke bistar par baitha tha. ve is samay ek majaboot galat dhaarana ka anubhav kar rahe the, ki yah koee hospital ke bistar par baitha vyakti nahin tha, balki ek behad khataranaak khoon ka pyaasa jaanavar tha. yah aisa tha maano vah unhen kisee bhee samay kha sakata hai, sivaay haddiyon ke dher ke aur kuchh nahin.

khaasakar Raj kee aankhen; unakee chilling aura ne un par dabaav daala. aur usaka paishaachik iraada bhaaree tha. yah ek jangalee jaanavar kee aankhon kee tarah thee, aur unhonne vaastav mein ek kampan mahasoos kiya jo unakee aatma se shuroo hua tha!

How did this happen?

kya yah ek matibhram tha ya ek galat dhaarana thee?

doctors sabhee dang rah gae, aur ve moorkhataavash yah nahin bata sake ki yah asalee hai ya nahin. lekin unake maathe thande paseene phootane se nahin ruk rahe the. ve samajh nahin pa rahe the ki ek vyakti ka svabhaav ek pal mein itana naatakeey roop se kaise badal sakata hai.

Raj ko is samay bahut ajeeb aur adbhut laga. aisa lagata tha ki usake shareer mein anant shakti hai, aur ankylosing spondilitis(a disease) jisane use do saal se adhik samay tak pareshaan kiya tha, theek ho gaya tha. usakee pooree peeth ab behad halkee mahasoos ho rahee thee. unske shareer ne es poorn aur anargal sahajata aur aaraam ka anubhav kabhee nahin kiya tha.

yahaan tak ki usakee drshti aur bhee spasht ho gaee thee, vah ward main chhote jeevon ko bhee aasaanee se dekh sakata tha, jaise ki makadee chupachaap deevaar par letee apane shikaar ke lie intajaar kar rahee thee.

"Raj!"

Ward ke baahar se ek tez aavaaz aaee, aur usake peechhe tezee se darwaza patakane kee aavaaz aaee. Raj ke samaan umr ka ek yuvak dvaar par dikhaee diya.

yuvak ka maansal chehara tha. usaka poora chehara mota aur gol tha, lekin usaka shareer mota nahin tha. aisa lagata tha jaise kisee mote aadamee ka sir kisee dubale aadamee kee gardan par laga ho; usne crew cut pahana tha aur maathe par kuchh alag jhurriyaan theen. unake chehare kee tvacha bhee kaaphee rookhee thee.

Hospital ke bistar par pade Raj par usakee nigaahen tikane se pahale yuvak ne idhar-udhar dekha. phir, usane doctors kee pooree tarah se avahelana kee, unhen ignore karte hue seedhe Raj kee or dauda.

Raj ke shareer kee ek saamaany jaanch ke baad, tej aavaaj achaanak chillaee, "f*ck* , kis jholaachhaap doctor ne kaha ki mera bhai sadame mein hai aur marne ja raha hai. main naashta kie bina hee daud pada. aap kya karane kee koshish kar rahe the? ”

is bayaan ke bolate hee vaard ke doctors ka samooh muh achaanak laal ho gaya, khaasakar adhed umr ka doctor. bhale hee Raj ke praathamik chikitsak ke roop mein kal raat intarn doctor Rakesh dvaara report likha gaya tha, phir bhee kya "neem-hakeem doktar" ka lebal seedhe us par nahin lagaaya ja sakta he?

“Ahem....”

Raj ne kaee baar sookhee khaansee kee aur sharmindagee kee lahar mahasoos kee. usake dost Veer mein vaakee kuchh bhee kahane kee himmat thee. kya use doctors ke samooh dvaara peete jaane ka dar nahin tha?

doctors kee group ne ek-doosare ko dekha aur phir baaree-baaree se baahar nikal gae. daravaaja band karane ke baad, kharaab mijaaj vaale kuchh doktar baahar nikalane se khud ko rok nahin sake.

“Rakesh kis tarah kee pratishtha sthaapit karane kee koshish kar raha hai? is tarah kee galate karane ke lie bhee, kya vah kal raat rogee ka diagnosis karate samay so gaya tha?"

"ek intern ek intern hai. vah apane kaam ke prati bilkul bhee gambheer nahin hai. mera sujhaav hai ki ham ek niyamit karmachaaree banane ke lie usakee yogyata ko radd kar den. unse aur teen maheene hospital mein rahana chaahie.”

"haan, doctor ke roop mein galat diagnoses hamaare lie ek pramukh galti hai. yah pahalee baar hai ki mainne apane jeevan mein itana bada galat diagnoses dekha hai."

jaahir hai, in doktaron ne assume kiya tha ki Raj ka jaagana koee medical miracle nahin tha, balki ek bahut bada misdiagnoses tha. aur galat diagnoses ke lie zimmedaar Rakesh tha, jo unake aspataal mein ek naya intern tha.

adhed umr ke doctor ne kuchh nahin kaha, lekin unakee abhivyakti asaamaany roop se badasoorat thee.

Rakesh unaka intern tha. yah bhee pahalee baar tha ki unhonne doctor ke roop mein itana bada misdiagnoses dekha tha.

He was usually loved by others. yah un

apamaanajanak naamon se bilkul alag tha jo aaj kee subah se hee use jhelane pade the, jaise "neem-hakeem doctor". vah in sabhee ko Rakesh ke saath sulajhaega.



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Update 3:
Resignation

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Raj yah jaanane kee jahamat nahin utha saka ki doctor kis par dosh madhana chaahate hain.
vah ab pooree tarah Genius SYSTEM, dwara lae gae "The King of Mercenaries" utsaah mein doob gaya tha. Hospital ke bistar kee lohe kee railing usake haathon se mudi aur vikrt ho gaee thee. unse ab pooree tarah se system ke vaastavik astitv kee pushti ho gai thee. yah mastishk aaghaat ke baad utpann illusion nahin tha.

"agar koee badee aapada mein nasht nahin hota hai, to aashirwad nishchit roop se aaenge. poorvajon ke shabd vaastav mein jhooth nahin bolate, hahahaha ..."

Raj apane aap ko daba nahin saka aur dil
kholkar hansa. use laga jaise vah jaag gaya ho aur usane paaya ki vah superman mein badal gaya hai jo baahar apanee laal underwear pahanata hai aur aakaash mein ud sakata hai. utsaah ko shabdon mein bayaan karana mushkil tha.

"Hey hey Raj, what's going on? mujhe darao mat. tum es tareeke se apane aap se khush kyon ho rahe ho? Veer ne Raj kee aankhon ke saamane apane haathon se taalee baje, lekin usane yah nahin dekha ki kaise Raj ne bistar kee lohe kee railing ko kaisei mod diya tha.


Raj ne apane saamane apane poorv college room-met aur dost ko dekha, vah vaastav mein use Genius SYSTEM ke baare mein bataana chaahata tha.

lekin ushne isake baare mein behatar socha. is maamale ko apane tak hee rakhana behatar tha. agar vah aisa kahata, to Veer usake saath keval paagal kee tarah vyavahaar karata. aakhirakaar, yah bahut haasyaaspad tha, kaun vishvaas karega ki vah ek 100 billion light year door ek parallel universe se aya huae Genius SYSTEM mein merge ho gaya tha?

Tum kahaan dekh rahe hain? mere paas dekhane ke lie kuchh bhee nahin hai. mujhe batao, tum hospital mein kyon pade ho? Veer ne apanee pooree taakat lagaate hue Raj kee chati par ungli se vaar kiya.


"aah .... pyaar mein niraasha!"

Raj ne aah bharee. unshne is baare mein bataaya ki kaise Seetal ne unase sambandh tod liya, jisake baad, unshne der raat highway mein apanee car ko tej gati se chalaaya aur car ka accident hua.

sunane ke baad, Veer ne aah bharate hue kaha, "f*ck Me, tum sach mein ek badee aapada se bach gae!"

"Can't you understand the main point ?" Raj ne aankhen moond lee,.


Veer ne turant daanta, “main point to 🖕 hai.Seetal tumhare layak nai he. tumase naata todana usaka nukasaan hai. Tum bahut talented ho. tumhaare khopdi ke peechhe ek occipital bun bhee hai. physiognomy books mein kaha gaya hai ki yah ek samraat kee visheshata hai. ek din, jaldee ya baad mein, tum ameer aur shaktishali ban jaenge, jab vah samay aaega, to Seetal ke paas keval ek hee kaam rah jaega ki vah khud se chupake ke roe. ”

Raj ko samajh nahin aa raha tha ki hanse ya roen. unshne Veer ke kandhe par thapathapaate hue kaha, "Veer, main vaastav mein tumhare nonsense talking skill ke lie tum ko salaam karata hoon. isamen tum ko koee nahin hara sakata.”

“Get lost!”


Veer ne adhira ta se apana haath hilaaya, aur phir gambheer bhaav se bola, “vaise, kya ab tumhen koee pareshaani mehsoos ho rahee hai? Like, kya tum ko ultee jaisa mehsoos ho raha hai?"

"mere saath kuchh bhee galat nahin hua hai. main is baar bhaagyashaalee hoon, keval car thrash ho gaya hai, main pooree tarah se theek hoon aur ab mujhe discharge mil sakatee hai,” Raj ne kaha.

“Raj, ham is par risk nahin le sakate.tum isake prati laaparavaah nahin rah sakate. agar tumhare paas ilaaj ke lie paise nahin hain, to mere paas hain. mere paas laakhon nahin hain, lekin main tumhare lie 30000 se 40000 rupaye jaroor la sakata hoon. apane rishte ke saath, Veer ek seedhee-saadee baat karane vaala vyakti tha, jo cheejon ko chhupaata nahin tha aur na hee idhar-udhar kee baaten karata tha.

"vaastav mein isakee koee aavashyakata nahin hai!"

Raj ne turant bistar se chhalaang laga dee. unshne na keval teen baar pharsh par chhalaang lagaee, balki yah saabit karane ke lie ulta bhee chale ki unaka shareer behatar hai.

“Ding! Congratulations. You’ve earned five points.”

Raj ne system notification ko najarandaaj kar diya aur handstand ko khatm kar apne pare par khada hua. usane apanee hatheliyon ko jhaada aur chidhakar Veer se kaha, "to, tumne jo kaha hai, usake anusaar mujhe bathroom jaane par bhee tum ko report karane kee zaroorat hai?"


"mujhe tumhare sath bathroom jaane mein koee dilachaspee nahin hai, lekin agar tum kisee ladaki ke saath sex karate ho to mujhe isake baare mein sunana achchha lagega. jitane vistra se ho utana achchha, hehe...” Veer ek katli muskan ke sath bola.

“F*ck your sister!”

“Bwahaha!”


Raj ke discharge papers ko poora karane ke lie Veer zordaar hansee ke saath baahar bhaaga.

Hospital se nikalane ke baad donon ne saath mein naashta kiya. Raj aur Veer trafic police ke paas gae jahaan unske car tha. Car gambheer roop se kshatigrast ho gaee thee, yahaan tak ki engine bhee toot gaya tha. yahaan tak ki agar isakee marammat kee gaee thee, tab bhee yah tootee huee car kee tarah plain sadak par jor se uchhalega.

"isake baare mein bura mat maanana, yah sirf ek car hai. puraana nahin jaega to naya nahin aaega girlfriend par bhee yahee tark laagoo hota hai. is duniya mein hamesha ek good car hotee hai, ek good women jo keval aapakee hotee hai," Veer ne saantvana dee.

Raj muskuraaya aur kuch bola nahin.usake dimaag mein bahut see baaten aa gaee theen. uskee manasik sthiti pahale se kaheen adhik shaant aur sanyat thee.

"kya tum ghar ya company jaana chaahate ho?" Veer ne apane Swift ke driver ka daravaja khola aur Raj se poochha.

“To the company.”

“F*ck,l'’m not going to work, but to resign!” Raj bola.


Veer bhauchakka ho gaya, thoda uttejit mehsoos kar raha tha, "tum sirf Sheetal ke kaaran Resignation de rahe ho? mere bhai, kya tum ek haare hue vyakti kee tarah abhinay nahin kar rahe ho?"

Raj ne aah bharee, par samajhaaya nahin. usane saamane valee passenger seat ka darwaja khola aur car mein savaar ho gaya.

darasal, unshne Resignation dene ke baare mein
kabhee pahale hee soch liya tha. ek manufacturing company mein kaam karana na keval har din doharae jaane vaala kaam tha, balki isamen chunautiyon ka bhee abhaav tha. isamen unhen koee future najar nahin aa raha tha.

is
naukari se unshne kabhee bhe kushi ka anubhav nahin hua tha. agar Seetal bhee Huahai group mein kaam nahin karati, to unshne bahut pahale hee jaane ka phaisala kar liya hota. ab jab unake paas Genius system tha, to usake career ko Huahai Cop. tak seemit rakhane kee koe aavashyakata nahin thee.


Veer ne apana muh band kiya aur driver kee seet par baith gaya. vah Raaj ko huhaee corporation le gaya.

"Raj, khush ho jao. ham purush hain. us mahila ke baare mein udaas aur niraash hone kee koee jaroorat nahin hai jo aapakee pravah nahin karatee hai, ”Veer ne phir se saantvana mein kaha.

“maine apana dimaag khol diya hai; main khud ko achchhe se adjust kar sakata hoon."

Raj ka dil garm ho gaya, "vaise, jab tum car chala rahe hon to tum ko dhyaan dena chaahie, mujhase seekho mat aur drive carefully."


“touch wood….tum jaise badamaash se achchhe shabdon kee ummeed nahin kee ja sakatee. main ja raha hoon. jab main phree hounga to phir se phon karoonga." Veer ne accelerate par kadam rakha aur apane Swift ko bhaga diya.

Raj use jaate hue tab tak dekhata raha jab tak ki use car kee parachhaee nahin dikhaee dee. usane apanee nigaahen jamaeen aur muda, apane emp. ID ko swip kiya aur huahai corporation mein chal diya.

usaka Resignation aakhir kaar dopahar se theek pahale poora ho gaya.

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Apane samaan ka ek baksa haath mein lie hue, Raj huahai corporation ke mukhy raste par chala gaya, jahaan usane teen saal tak kaam kiya tha. usake heart mein tarah-tarah ke bhaav umad pade. University se graduate hone ke baad yah unske pahale naukari thee. ushen abhee bhee yaad hai jab vah pahale baar aae the, sapanon aur aadarshon se bhare hue the. ek-ek drshy chalachitr kee bhaanti unake mastishk mein ghoom raha tha.

“Raj, stop right there!”

usake peechhe se ek jaanee-pahachaanee aavaaj sunaee dee, usake awaj ke peechhe command ka hint tha.


Raj ruka aur ek khubsurat chehare se milane ke lie peechhe muda. vah Sheetal thee, ek saleeke se saje-dhaje sundar shakl vale mahila.

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unse thodi bhee aashchary nahin hua ki Sheetal ko unake resign ke baare mein pata chal gaya tha. akhirakaar, wo HR department mein kaam kati he. huawei corporation mein hajaaron the, chaahe ve ruke ya chale gae, HR department ke paas un sabhee ka vistrt record tha.

"kya wahaan kuchh gadabad hai?" Raj ne poochha.


Sheetal High heels ke joote mein usake paas dudee. usane Raj ke boks kee saamagree ko apanee aankhon mein ek tiraskaarapoorn abhivyakti ke saath dekha, "Raj, kya tum thode aur mature nahin ho sakate? Tum aur main, ham ant tak aa chuke hain, lekin kya tum ko is par resign deke apana future barbaad karo ge? yahaan tak ki agar tum apane baare mein nahin sochana chaahate hain, to bhee tum ko apane parivaar ke baare mein sochana hoga. Tumhare isteepha dene ke baad tumhare paas income ka koee srot nahin hoga. kya tum waapas ja ke apane mata-pita ke paas rahane ka iraada kar liya he? ”

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