Fantasy Gods and Demons

[Lovekillsyou]

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[Jay Sutar]

moon towers choose karta hain unique beauty ko... virgin girls iss point pe stress kyun kiya gaya agar ladkiyan physical hee nahin hoti kisi ke saath toh... and how do they know they are virgin,, by magic is there any method to know... ya unhe strip kar ke check kiya jata hain... akhir koi bhi ladki aisi job kyun karegi ya toh paise kee tangi ya phir brought from the brothel.... aur per day 8 beautiful virgin women lana tough nut to crack... aur phir unka auction ek tarah ka deh vyapar.... and at such a reputed place...

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luhan ek bari threat ban gayee hain jab last time marital market ke deputy headmasters se bhirant hui thee tab uska cultivation utna high nahin tha ab itni blood suck karne ke baad na jaane wo kitna aage pahunch chuki hogi... lekin cultivation speed toh uupar jaane ke baad slow ho jaati hain.... aur jitni teji se luhan cultivate kar rahi hain uska faoundation bhi weak hota jaa raha hoga... toh ek wakt ke baad uske speed ko bhi toh halt lagegi... aur blood utna hi jyada demand karegi uska sareer... lekin phir bhi kabir kee half saint light ko refine karna ek sapna hi rah jayega lagta hain....

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ab yehan 4th prince apni failed love life ko dekh raha hain... abe yehan toh kisi kee love kee life hee na rahi iski toh jinda hain kam se kam... yeh despo prince pehli baar dekha hain... maa ne kaha concubine bhi chalegi... itna degrade kaise kar degi apne bete ko.. unhe toh himmat deni chahiye thee,,, aise mein toh yeh bhi bichara khud ko kaafi low samjhega.... khair kabir ne ek bhai hone ka farz nibhaya hain...

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profound board aur warrior of division board dono alag hain kya.... matlab jo lagatar 10 wins profound board pe karta hain wahee warrior of division board ka hakdar hota hain... sala shab tian ke good books mein aana chahte hain... chamche ka chamcha.. waise 4th prince ne unwated attention bula liya... kya jaroori thee unki baato mein interfere karne kee... let tham ramble what they want... sachhai toh akhir battle mein hi maloom chalti hain...

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wow telekenesis akhir kabir ne kab iski abhyas kari thee.. it was a shocker for all of us...

lovely update brother but missed shreya and dina why were they not here... cause kabir ne toh sabhi ko bulaya tha...

Thank you buddy .

Nahi aisa nahi hai. Ladkiyan physical ho sakti hai but jab tak unka consent na ho tab tak nahi. Issi liye Moon Tower warrior se blood bond leta hai. Taki agar koi unke ladkiyon par jabardasti karna chahe toh bhi kar na paaye. Upar se unhe Brothel se nahi laya jata hai. Most of the ladkiyan orphens hai yaha par unhe unke marzi se hi laya jata hai Moon Tower kisi ko bhi force nahi karta hai.

Luhan ka mamla thoda different hai. Uska cultivation itna fast is liye jaa raha hai kyo ki uske paas Half-Saint's Light hai. Jo uske cultivation ke speed ko badha raha hai. Upar se uski body Half-Saint's Light ko refine bhi kar rahi hai. Yeh bhi ek factor hai. Aise mei uska strong hona normal hi hai. Baki uske saath aage Kabir kya karne wala hai bas dekhte jaao.

Well 4th Prince ke maa ne aisa kuch nahi kaha hai usse yeh sab vo Kabir ko kehne ke liye keh raha hai aur khud Kabir bhi is baat ko janta hai. Par apne last life mei 4th Prince aur Yuxi ne usse kaafi help ki thi is liye Kabir uski help karna chahta hai.

Nahi Profound Board Warrior aur Division Profound Board Warrior donk same hai. Bas mei likhte waqt aise hi likhta hu.

Telekinesis ke baremei aane wale update mei pata chal jayega.

 

[Jay Sutar]

Bhai uapdte badiya tha
Ab maza aayega Kabir vs chenyu dekhne me maza aayega

Nice One

behatrin update bro

Fantastic update

awesome update bhai

Mast update bhai

Awesome fabulous update
New power dekhne ko mila
Keep posting

Bahut shaandar update

Waiting for next update

Bahut hi khubsurat update bhai

Thank you Guys .

 

[Jay Sutar]

Excellent update

Awesome update bhai...

Awesome update bhai waiting for next update

awesome possom Revo

Zabardast update

N

Nice updates

labj kam pad rhe tarif ke liye samajh nhi aata kya bolu tarif me kbir ke and nice

Wonderful update

Fabulous update Bhai superb

Thank you Guys .

 

[Brajpal]

Waiting

 

[Jay Sutar]

Kirdaaro ki mishrit emotions, unki activities aur jo is update mein majud nahi the unke baare jaankario se bharpur update tha...
Hamesha ki tarah likhane ke tarika.. jahan ek freshness bani rahi.. Shabdo ke khubsoorat jaal bune hain aapne jiski vajah se padhane ka maja badh jata hai.. Aapke is update ko do part me divide kar sakte hai,
first wala part jaha Kabir ya 4th Prince ya linse etc. apne bich halke fulke mahol banake baatcheet ke jariye relax kar rahe the.... yahan gaur talab baat ye hai ki kabir se jude ye log,..... inke bich ek aatmeeyata hai, ek dusre ko ahmiyat dena jaante hai, samay aane par niswarth hoke madad bhi karenge ek dusre ko...
wohi 2nd part mein nisha, chenyu aur Yuntai Suzerain ke students...
ye log aaj jis tarah se ek sath baithke aatmeeyata dikha rahe, wo ek dhong hai..wo hote hain na kehte kuch aur hai aur sochte kuch aur hai...
in log Prashansa bhi kare to uske swarth ke chalte.....
Kabir aur uske friends ke jariye dosti aur aatmeeyata ko aur nishi chenyu ke aur Yuntai Suzerain ke un students jariye dosti aad mein swarth nihit chaplushi ko bahot hi behtareen tarike dharshaya hai aapne....
ghamand, ahankar..... isko hawa tab zyada lagti hai jab saamne taarifo ki pul baandhne wale nishi ya Juihan jaise log ho...
emotions ko control karna aur realty ko expect karna..... ye samajh kabir mein hai... isliye Kabir ne Rati aur Maithili ki yaado ke saath aage badhne ke decision liya. Jo ho gaya hai usse badal nahi nahi sakta hai.. toh life mei aage badhna hi sahi hoga uske liye .
wohi dusre pehlu mein Jaankari luhan ki.... well... Luhan ke kaarnamo ki khabar kabir ke kano tak bhi pahuchi... ushe yakin nahi ho raha tha ki luhan itni powerful creature ban jaayegi. ...

power, talents agar paas ho to har koi pradarshit karna chaahega lekin ek Nayak tabhi power ya talents ko pradarshit ya prayog mein lata hai jab jarutart aan padti hai, jab koi ahankar mein sur hoke saari hadein paar kar deta hai tab uska akal thikaane lagane ke liye ... Kabir un nayako mein se ek hai aur uski soch bhi... waha glass ke sath jo kiya wo mahaz is baat jahir karna chaahta tha ki chenyu ya Julian apne had mein rahe..
in sabhi pehluo ko ek lay vadh ke sath bahot hi shanadar tarike se pesh ki hai aapne...Waise samvado ka upayog hamesha bahot behtareen raha..

wohi dusri taraf kabir ki kripa se ab jald hi 4th Prince shaadi karne wala hai shayad...

Khair..... shaandar update, shaandar lekhni shaandar shabdon ka chayan..
kirdaaro ke mood, mahol aur unke bich rishte ke varnan kabile tarif raha...
kirdaaro ki baatein, luhan ke kisse kaafi dilchasp raha.. ,Waise in logo ke vicharo ka adan pradan jis mul vishay vastu pe hai wo ek lay mein dikhane mein lekhak mahir hai... jo sach mein santosh janak hai hai aur padhkar aanand bhi mile..
Overall the best part of the update is the end, specially the way you have written it...
Aise hi likhte rahiye aur aur apni manoram lekhni se hum readers ka manoranjan karte rahiye...

Let's see what happens next..

Brilliant update with awesome writing skills...

Well well well look who's review I got .

Well last time mujhe laga tha ke ek saath 5-6 bade bade revo's aane wale hai aur meri batti hi gul hone wali hai. Par koi nahi latest update par aa gaya hai tumhara review is baat se ham khush hue .

Haan mein ne isse kuch psycological way mei likha hai jo 2 type ke emotions ko show kar raha hai. Jaha par pure heart hai jaise Kabir aur uska group wahi Chenyu aur Nishi jis table par baithe hai waha par bas chaplusi chal rahi hai. Taaki Tian unki taraf kuch dhyan de.

Ab kya hi kar sakte hai ham sabhi bhi aisi hi reality mei rehte hai jo log apne face par kuch aur dikhate hai aur unke dil mei kuch aur hota hai.

Sirf strong minded person hi power ko control kar sakta hai. Wahi agar person strong minded na ho toh Power ka gurur usse control karta hai. Power hona hi sab kuch nahi hota hai. Balki usse control karne ke liye will honi chahiyen.

Well ham toh aise hi likhte rahenge. Aap sabhi saath bane rahiye.

 

[Jay Sutar]

Awesome update Jay Sutar bhai.

Kaafi emotion ke saath likha hai aap ne isse. Kabir aur 4th Prince ke dil ka jo haal aapne dikhaya hai vo kaafi achha tha. Dono hi kisi na kisi tarah ke dil se jude problem se guzre hai ya guzar rahe hai. Par kehte hai na ke agar sachhe dosto ka saath ho toh aise problems zyada der nahi rehte hai. Yaha bhi wahi hai Kabir ke saath uske sabhi achhe dost hai. Unke saath vo in mil rahe sukun ke palo ko enjoy kar raha hai.

Waise ek baat toh hai ke is update mei kaafi kuch hai dissect karne ke liye jaise is resturent wale update mei do group aane bataye hai. Jaha Kabir aur uska group apne sabhi members ke saath sabhi ke hasi khushi mei shamil hai. Wahi Yuntai Suzerain ka group is liye waha par hai kyo ki vo Tian ke paas jana chahte hai isliye unhone Chenyu aur Nishi jaise persons ko drink ke liye invite kiya.

Waise yeh Moon Tower kaafi ajeeb hai. Blood Bond leta hai yani agar unke kisi bhi beauty ke saath koi zabadasti karta hai toh us blood bond ke help se vo us warrior ko ek hi jhatke mei maar sakte hai. Yaa phir vo beauty us warrior par kuch ilzam laga sakti hai ke isne mere saath zabardasti karne ki koshish ki hai. Of cousre Moon Tower apne hi worker ki baat sunega. Kaafi sharp hai Moon Tower ka bussines. Well yeh toh dekh kar achha laga ke vo body ko nahi art ko sell kar rahe hai. Bhale unka evening mei auction karna kuch had tak galat hai. Par yeh story bhi waisi hai. Story bright tone ke saath toh har waqt nahi chal sakti hai. Usse bich bich mei dark tone mei jana hi hoga. Yahi rule hai reality ka.

Waise Ravi aur RIya ki nokjhok bhi kaafi waqt baad dekhne mili hai.

Toh Luhan Martial Market School ke bheje hue 10 master ke attack se bhi bach kar bhaag gayi. Zaroor uska cultivation ab Heaven Realm ke Mid ya phir Advance Stage par hoga. Upar se usne ek 7th-Class Power ke status wale Sword Suzerain ko destroy kar diya hai. Yahi uske badhi hui strength ko show karta hai. Par Kabir bhi kya hi kar sakta hai. Uska cultivation toh abhi tak Black Realm mei hai aur Luhan Heaven Realm warrior hai.

Ek baat notice ki hai mein ne ke 4th Prince jo phele aise hi life ji raha tha uski vo habit lagta hai Kabir se milne ke baad change ho gayi hai. Yunvu Commandery ke andar hue Black Market ke warriors se hui battle hi is baat ko show karti hai aur lagta hai usne apne life mei kaafi bada goal set kiya hua hai. Ab vo pehle jaisa nahi raha hai yeh throught the updates show ho raha hai. Linsen toh pehle se hi thik thak banda tha. Yeh bhi ek is update ka positive change hai. Nishi ko dekh kar bhi react na karna yeh show karta hai ke 4th Prince ne apne mind ko kaafi strong kiya hai. Usse ab pata hai ke apna koun hai aur koun nahi hai.

Waise yeh bhi is update mei show hua hai ke jo by blood se related hote hai sirf wahi apne nahi hote hai. Par jo dil se jude hote hai vo bhi apne hote hai. Kabir aur uske friends iska kaafi achha example hai. Jaha vo sabhi apne table par sabhi ke saath maza kar rahe hai. Ek dusre ko samajhte hai. Wahi dusre side chamcha-giri chal rahi hai.

Apne magical words ne Jay Sutar bhai ne isse kaafi behtarin tarah se show kiya hai. Ham sabhi bhi aisi hi reality mei rehte hai jaha par hame jaldi pata nahi chal pata hai ke hamara apna koun hai aur paraya. Jaha par Chenyu aur 4th Prince ek dusre ke cousin's hai par wahi Chenyu ne Hades Department se killers hire kiye Yuxi ko marne ke liye. Par dusre side Linsen hai jo 4th Prince ke saath tab se hai jab se vo Martial Market School mei aaya hai. Isse yahi pata chalta hai ke kabhi kabhi hamare apne bhi hamare dushman ban jaate hai. Par wahi jinka hamare saath kisi bhi tarah ka blood relation nahi hota hai vo hi hamare sab se karibi hote hai.

Toh Chenyu bhi Zina ki tarah Warrior of Division Profound Board banne ke liye aaya hai. Par kya vo is baar ban payega. Kyo ki aisa mujhe lag raha hai ke uska aur Zina ka kisi tarah ka competation zaroor hoga.

Waise 4th Prince ne kaafi bold way mei Chenyu ki izzat nikali hai. Pet Dog....

Saath is sab ke bich Kabir kitna 4th Prince ko support karta hai yeh bhi achhe se dekhne mila hai. Agar vo chahta toh telekinesis se apne taraf laya hua glass khud pi sakta tha par invitation 4th Prince ko tha aur 4th Prince bhi achhe se Kabir ke baat ko uske bina kahe hi samajh gaya tha aur ek hi jhatke mei usne us drink ko pi kar khatam kar diya. It's like saamp bhi mara aur laathi bhi nahi tooti.

4th Prince Chenyu aur Nishi ko dekhna nahi chahta tha par samne se aaye hue invitation ko agar bina baat ke thukra deta toh yeh uske Prince ke status ke liye bhi achha nahi tha. Yahi character development hoti hai. Jaha ek character starting mei bilkul bhi focus nahi tha vo ab kaafi focused aur sharp ho gaya hai.

Ab bas dekhna yeh hai ke Kabir aage kya karne wala hai yaha. Kyo ki dekh kar toh aisa hi lag raha hai ke Chenyu aur Nishi usse bhi pasand nahi hai. Lekin aise hi vo kisi ke saath fight nahi start kar sakta hai. Usse kisi point ki zaroorat hai uske liye.

Let's see what happens next.

ADIOS.

Thank you buddy .

Well kya baat hai tum Rudrathakur aalu Naina sabhi kaafi ground level par update ko review de rahe ho. Yeh dekh kar kaafi achha laga.

Aise review dekh kar sach mei achha lagta hai. Waise ke baat toh hai mere sabhi readers mei ke vo sabhi kaafi achhe se update ko observe karte hai.

Aise hi sabhi saath rehna aage kaafi maza aane wala hai.

 

[Jay Sutar]

Jay Sutar bhai psycologically this update is best.

Bahot behtareen zaberdast shaandaar update bhai
Lajawab

Jay Sutar ji kaafi awesome update tha yeh. Aaj mere paas koi words hi nahi bache hai kuch kehne ke liye. Like itna kuch hai us update me ke iske upar review ke update likhe jaa skate hai aur Naina aur I AM JD Ji ne already yeh kar diya. Mujhe jo kehna tha vo in dono ne hi keh diya. Aap ke agale update ka intezar rahega mujhe.

Nice update

Awesome update bro

Thank you Guys .

 

[Xabhi]

UPDATE 175

Kabir ne apni nazar ko ghuma kar us womens ki taraf ki jo Zither ke music par dance kar rahi thi. Abhi usse unka dance dekhe hue kuch hi pal hue the ke Linsen ne usse unhe dekhte hue dekha aur uske taraf halke se khisak kar kaha.

Linse-Unhe eating companions kaha jata hai aur vo sabhi virgins hai. Inhe khud Moon Tower ke masters ne khud se handpick kiya hai har commandery mei se. Har day ke liye Moon Tower 8 unique beatuies ko choose karta hai aur warriors ko unhe offer kiya jata hai unki eating companion ke status ke saath.

Kabir-Eating Companion ? Yeh kya hai ?

Kabir ke is sawal par Linsen ne haste hue kaha.

Linsen-Iska meaning hai ke agar kou warrior unke per day ke system ke saath unki fees pay karta hai toh vo eating companion ek tarah se uski us day ke liye partner ho jaati hai. Par Moon Tower unke saath kisi bhi tarah se physical hone ke against hai. Agar koi warrior unke eating companion ke saath jabardasti karta hai toh Moon Tower usse puri tarah se maarne ki authority rakhta hai. Kyo ki yeh Moon Tower ki policies mei se ek hai. Kahi tumhe bhi kisi eating companion ki zarurat toh nahi. Agar aisa hai toh kaho mein kuch kar sakta hu ?

Kabir ne Linsen ke baat par smile kiya aur usne apne sir ko naa mei hila diya.

Aisa nahi tha ke vo dance kar rahi womens khubsurat nahi thi. Vo womens sirf khubsurat hi nahi balki bala ki khubsurat thi. Unhe Moon Tower ke masters ne khud se handpick kiya tha aur unhe Devil Martial City bheja tha. Jaha Kabir ka dil is sab se nahi hil paya tha wahi Ravi aur 4th Prince toh jaise unhe hi dekhe jaa rahe the.

Ravi ke side mei baithi Riya ne jab is baat ko notice kiya toh usne halke gusse ke saath Ravi ke pet mei ek punch maar diya. Punch lagte hi Ravi jaise hosh mei aata hai aur side mei baithi Riya ko dekhta hai.

Ravi-Riya nahi tum jaisa soch rahi ho waisa kuch nahi hai. Mein toh bas unke dance ko dekh raha tha aur kuch nahi. Please gussa mat hona mujh par. Tumhe toh pata hai na mere dil mei sirf tum ho aur koi nahi.

Yeh kehte hue Ravi Riya se maafi mangne laga.

Is situation ko dekh kar Kabir aur baki sabhi hasne lag jaate hai. Kabir bhi is atmosphere ko enjoy kar raha tha. Issi ke saath Kabir ne ek gehri saans chodi aur Rati aur Maithili ki yaado ke saath aage badhne ke decision liya. Usse pata tha ke vo jo hua hai usse change nahi kar sakta hai toh uska life mei aage badhna hi sahi hai.

Wahi jab Linsen ne 4th Prince ko un khubsurat womens ko dekhte hue notice kiya tab usne halke se uski taraf jhuk kar usse kaha.

Linsen-4th Prince evening mei Sky-Approaching Pavilion inhe aution bhi kar sakta hai. Par ek blood bond ke saath ke aap kisi bhi tarah se unke in aution hue beauties ke saath jabardasti nahi kar sakte hai. Wahi agar aap ka luck achha raha aur evening ke aution mei aapne highest bid lagayi toh inmei se ek aap ki ho sakti hai. Of course unke aurtion price unbelievabaly high hogi. Agar aap ke paar couple of hundred thousands silver coins nahi hai toh unhe claim karne ke baremei sochiye bhi mat.

Jab 4th Prince ne Linsen ki yeh baat suni toh uski aankhe shock se bahar aane ko ho gayi thi. Ek ton unhe buy karne ke baad Moon Tower ke saath blood bond sign karna hoga ke unke beauty ke saath koi jabardasti nahi hogi aur usse sahi se treat kiya jayega. Saath mei unke aution price bhi high hogi. Yeh sab toh 4th Prince ke liye kaafi zyada ho gaya tha. Unke saath jabardasti na karne ke baremei 4th Prince samajh sakta tha aur vo khud bhi is sab ke against tha. Par unki aution price high hogi yeh usse bilkul bhi pata nahi tha.

4th Prince ne jaldi se apni nazar ko Kabir ki taraf ghumaya aur usse kaha.

"Brother ab tumhe mujhe help karni hogi. Meri toh koi queen bhi nahi aur na hi koi concubine. Aise mei mere brother hote hue tum mujhe aise puri life ke liye single toh nahi rehne de sakte ho na ?"

Jaha 4th Prince yeh sab keh raha tha wahi Kabir tha ke unke baato ko ek side se sun raha tha aur dusre side se unhe apne mind se nikal raha tha.

Tabhi baat karte hue 4th Prince ki nazar floor ke ek corner mei jaati hai aur usse kuch familiar faces dikhte hai.

Kabir bhi 4th Prince ko shant hua dekh kar uski nazar ka picha karta hai aur usse bhi kuch faces dikh rahe the ke floor ke corner mei.

Floor ke dusre end par Chenyu aur Nishi baithe hue the aur haste baate karte hue apne drinks aur meal ka maza le rahe the. Unke saath Yuntai Suzerain ke kuch external students bhi baithe hue the. Vo sabhi mil kar recently hue events par discussion kar rahe the.

Cheyu aur Nishi 4th Prince ke mother ke family se belong karte hai. CHildhood se 4th Prince ka dil tha Nishi par. Lekin jab Nishi ko pata chala ke 4th Prince ka talent avarege hai tab se usne uske saath baat karni band kar di aur apne bhai Chenyu ke help se Tian ke paas jaane ke chances dhundne lag gayi thi.

"Mein ne suna hai Omen Ridge mei koi female devil aayi hui hai jo apne cultivation ko blood absorb kar ke badhati hai. Even uska khud ka cultivation bhi kaafi high hai. Mein yeh soch rahi thi ke yeh female devil aayi kaha se aayi hogi."

Yeh baat Yuntai Suzerain ke 20 external students mei se ek female student ne kahi thi. Uski age kuch 20 years ke pass thi.

Is baat par Chenyu ne kaha.

"Koun tum us monster ki baat kar rahi ho jo Chikong Secret Mansion se escape hui hai ?"

Chenyu bhi ek avarage shaks tha. Par uske aawaz mei ek problem thi. Uski aawaz kaafi high pitch thi iske wajah se kabhi kabhi uski aawaz kisi female ki tarah lagti thi.

Chenyu ke baat par dusre female student ne kaha.

"Haan wahi ! Mein ne yeh bhi suna hai ke Martial Market School ne 10 masters ko bheja tha usse catch karne yaa phir maar ne ke liye. Par un sabhi ke haato se bhi bach kar vo bhag gayi."

"Wahi 2 weeks pehle Sword Suzerain ek hi night mei destroy ho gaya. Waha par bacha tha sirf Sword Suzerain ke 800 disciples ke dead bodies jinmei blood ka ek drop tak nahi tha. Even Sword Suzerain ke head master Yunkai bhi kaafi heavily injured ho gaye the aur jaise taise kar ke yaha Devil Martial City mei aa kar chup gaye hai."

Nishi jo Chenyu ke hi side mei baithi thi vo is baat ko sunkar shock ho gayi thi.

"Sword Suzerain toh ek 7th-Class Power tha na. Master Yunkai bhi Heaven Realm warrior hai jo pure Omen RIdge mei famous persons mei se ek hai. Aise mei vo monster Master Yunkai se itni strong kaise ho sakti hai ?"

Jab 4th Prince ne Martial Market School mei entry li thi tab Nishi ne bhi khud ko Yuntai Suzerain mei register kar liya tha. Us waqt uska cultivation Black Realm ke Advance Stage par tha aur 4th Prince Black Realm ke Initial Stage par. Uske baad Nishi ne khud ko significantly improve kiya tha aur yaha Kabir ke milne ke baad 4th Prince ne khud ko.

Kabir ne 4th Prince ki nazar ko follow kiya aur Nishi aur Chenyu ko dekha. Kabir in dono ke faces kabhi nahi bhul sakta tha. Yeh unmei se ek the jo Yuxi ko mentally break karte the. Upar se Chenyu khud Tian ke chamcho mei se ek tha.

Kabir ko yeh bhi pata tha ke 4th Prince ka dil hua karta tha Nishi par. Lekin jab usse 4th Prince ke talent ke baremei pata chala tha tab usne usse baat karna rok diya tha. Vo Tian ke paas jaane lag gayi thi. Saath mei Kabir ko yeh bhi pata tha ke Nishi Tian ke saath engaged ho gayi hai.

Kabir-Isse dekh kar zarur 4th Prince ka dil hurt hua hoga.

Kabir ne yeh baat apne mind mei kahi thi.

Kabir ko lag raha tha ke 4th Prince ke dil mei abhi bhi Nishi ke liye soft spot hai. Isliye usne kuch serious hote hue 4th Prince se kaha.

Kabir-4th brother Nishi tumhare liye worthy nahi hai. Uski yaado se move ho jaao aur bigger goal ki taraf apna focus badhao. Kya pata tumhare life mei Nishi se bhi badh kar koi aa jaaye.

Kabir ki baat se 4th Prince hosh mei aata hai.

"Ohh!"

4th Prince ne apne sir ko ek baar jhatka aur apne face par ek smile laayi.

Kabir-Waise kuch der pehle kya baat kar rahe the tum. Mujhe laga tum Nishi ko hi dekhne lag gaye ho ?

Kabir ki baat par 4th Prince ne kaha.

"Nahi nahi. Mein kab ka Nishi ke yaado se move on kar gaya hu. Mein toh bas unke baato ko sun raha tha jo kisi monster ke baremei baat kar rahe hai jo blood ko absorb kar ke apne cultivation ko badhati hai."

Kabir-Toh tum bhi wahi sun rahe the.

Kabir ne yeh bilkul bhi nahi socha tha ke Luhan itni powerful creature ban jaayegi. Even Martial Market School ke bheje hue 10 masters ke joint attack se bhi vo bhaag paayi. Upar se usne ek 7th-Class Suzerain tak ko destroy kar diya.

Agar vo aise hi apne aap ko develove karti rahi toh aage chal kar vo kaafi badi disaster ban sakti thi.

Par Kabir bhi kya kar sakta tha. Vo abhi abhi Black Realm ke Completion Stage par pohocha tha. Uska cultivation Luhan se kaafi niche tha. Even uske paas Golden Cloud Half-Saint blood tha par abhi ke liye uski help se bhi Luhan se Half-Saint's Light ko nikal pana kaafi imposible tha.

Kabir-Waise 4th brother abhi thodi der pehle tum kya keh rahe the ?

4th Prince ne jab yeh baat suni tab uske face par jaise brightness aa gayi. Usne haste hue kaha.

"Brother kya tum mere liye eating companion mei bid laga sakte ho. Uske wajah se mei kabhi bhi single nahi rahunga."

Kabir-Tum over-react kar rahe ho.

Kabir ki baat par waha sabhi hasne lag jaate hai.

4th Prince Kabir ke side aata hai aur usse kehta hai.

"Brother please last time mein jab apni mother se mila tha tab usne mujhe order diya hai ke agar next time mein jab usse milne jaunga toh apne saath koi princess ya phir concubine launga. Agar mein ne aisa nahi kiya toh mujhse baat karna rok degi. Brother tumhe toh pata hai mein tumhari tarah handsome nahi hu aur na hi mera talent tumhare jitna high hai. Hamare school ke juniors aur seniors tak mujhe baat nahi karte hai. Abhi ek tum hi ho jo meri help kar sakte ho. Please brother meri is wish ko puri kar do. Mein toh bas apne mother ka diya hua order follow kar raha hu ek achha son ban kar."

4th Prince ki baat par Zina ne usse ek cold look ke saath dekha aur kaha.

Zina-Shameless !

"Senior Sister Apprentice Zina aap jo bhi kahe par sach yahi hai."

4th Prince jhat se un dance kar rahi womens ki taraf dekha aur kaha.

Kabir ne ek gehri saans chodi aur 4th Prince se kaha.

Kabir-Well agar mein ne tumhare liye eating companion dhund bhi li toh kya tum uske saath marrige ke liye serious ho ?

Kabir ki is baat par 4th Prince ne kaha.

"Mein sach kehta hu..."

Kabir-Nahi bas itna kaafi hai. Agar tum sach mei usse achhe se treat karoge toh thik hai. Mein tumhari help karunga.

Kabir ki baat sunkar 4th Prince uske haato ko apne haato mei liya aur usse kaha.

"Sach brother ?"

Kabir-Haan ! After all tumne aur Yuxi ne mujhe brother kaha hai isliye itna toh mein kar hi sakta hu. Toh koun pasand hai tumhe un 8 beauties mei se ?

Is baat par 4th Prince ne jhat se kaha.

"Koi bhi !"

Linsen-Koi bhi ? 4th Prince aap aise casual kaise ho sakte ho ? Prince ke status ko match karne ke liye toh sahi se choose kijiye.

"Well agar aisa hai toh mei best eating companion ke liye bid lagana chahunga."

Best eating companion usse kaha jata hai jo in sabhi 8 beauties mei sab se khubsurat ho. Vo na sirf look mei balki dance aur music mei bhi high skilled hoti hai. Aisa kehna galat nahi hoga ke vo one in million hai.

Baat jab best ki aati hai toh of course uski bidding price sabse high hogi. Countless log uske liye high bidding lagayenge.

Issi time par Yuntai Suzerain ke students ne apne discussion ka topic change kar liya tha.

Un students mei se ek ne Chenyu ke glass mei drink fill karte hue flattering expressions dene lagi. Usne haste hue kaha.

"Elder brother Chenyu mein ne suna hai aap Coliseum of Martial Market jaa rahe hai is afternoon mei Profound Board ke spot ke liye. Mein aap ke 10 win streak ke liye wish karti hu. Taaki aap jaldi se Warrior of Division Board ban jaaye."

Issi baat par ek aur student ne haste hue yeh baat kahi.

"Elder brother Chenyu jab last time aaye the toh single round mei hi unhone 9 matche win kar li thi. Vo Warrior of Division Profound banne se ek step ke distance par the. Ab jab unka cultivation improve hua hai toh single round mei 10 matches win hona unke liye koi difficult task nahi hai."

"Ek bar unhone 10 matches win kar li unhe iske liye as a reward mei 1 Million Silver Coins milenge."

Nishi ne jab yeh dekha ke kaise sabhi uske brother ke saath achhe relation ko form kana chahte hai toh isse uske face par ek pleasent look aaya. Usne bhi smile karte hue kaha.

"Of course mere brother hi win honge. After all unhone Yuntai Classic ko 7th level tak cultivate kar liya hai. Even agar vo Profound Board ke top 5 ko bhi challenge karte hai toh bhi unhe success milne ke chances kaafi zyada hai."

Nishi ke is baat ko sunkar Yuntai Suzerain ke external students kaafi shock ho gaye. Vo yeh believe hi nahi kar paa rahe the ke Chenyu ne Black Realm mei hi Yuntai Classic ko 7th level tak practice kar liya hai. Yeh Yuntai Suzerain ke external students mei sirf kuch hi students achieve kar paate hai.

Jab se Nishi ne 4th Prince ke saath rude behaviour kiya tha tab se usse vo aur Chenyu bikul bhi achhe nahi lagte the. Jab 4th Prince ne yeh dekha ke kaise Yuntai Suzerain ke students Chenyu ko apne favor mei lana chahte the isse vo kaafi irritate ho gaya. Usne zor se un sabhi ki taraf dekhte hue kaha.

"Sirf Profound Board ka warrior hona koun si amazing baat hai. Mera brother top 10 Profound Board masters ko challenge karne wala hai."

4th Prince ke baato ko sunkar Yuntai Suzerain ke students ko bilkul bhi achha nahi laga tha. Vo sabhi 4th Prince ke direction mei dekhne lag gaye.

Yuntai Suzerain ke ek students ne 4th Prince ki taraf dekha. Usse lag raha tha ke 4th Prince kuch zyada hi bol raha hai. Usse yeh bilkul bih achha nahi laga tha usne apni jagah par baithe hue zor se kaha.

"Koun hai waha par itni badi badi baate kar raha hai ? Kya usse yeh pata nahi hai ke brother Chenyu Yuntai Suzerain ke external students mei rank 8th par hai."

Us student ke is baat se 4th Prince aur bhi irritate ho gaya aur usne kaha.

"8th Prodigy ? Mujhe pata hai vo kiska pet dog hai."

Yuntai Suzerain ke sabhi students ko pata tha ke Chenyu Tian ka chamcha hai. Par phir bhi kisi mei itni himmat nahi thi ke yeh baat usne muu par keh sake.

"Lagta hai tumhare andar kaafi himmat aa gayi hai ! Tumne socha bhi kaise tum elder brother Chenyu ko humiliate karoge. Iski punishment ke liye mein tumhari toung hi cut kar deta hu."

Yeh baat Yuntai Suzerain ke external student ne kahi thi jiska cultivation Black Realm ke Final Stage par tha. Iska naam tha Juihan.

Juihan ko yeh pata tha ke Chenyu Tian ka chamcha hai is liye usne Chenyu aur Nishi ko drinks ke liye invite kiya tha. Isse vo Tian ke saath achhe relation form karna chahta tha.

Kyo ki ab koi Chenyu ko humiliate kar raha tha toh uska step up karna sahi hi tha.

Chenyu ne Juihan ne shoulder par haat rakha. Usne apne drink ko uthaya aur usse pikar calmly khada hua aur haste hue usne kaha.

"4th Prince mein ne yeh bilkul bhi expect nahi kiya tha ke tum bhi Sky-Approaching Pavilion mei aaoge. Waise bhi ham kaati waqt se mile nahi hai toh cousin kyo na ham baith kar drink karte hai ?"

Zina ne ek baar Chenyu ko dekha aur usse laga ke uska face usne kahi dekha hai.

Usne carefully usse dekhte hue yaad karne lag gayi aur suddenly usne mind mei kuch aaya. Usse achhe se yaad aa gaya tha ke Chenyu ko usne kaha dekha tha. Ek baar usne Chenyu ko Hades Department mei assassins ko hire karte dekha tha apne hi commandery ke 9th Princess ke liye.

Zina is baat par believe hi nahi kar sakti thi ke 4th Prince aur Chenyu cousins ho sakte hai.

Zina-Kya mein is sab ke baremei Kabir ko batau ?

Jaha Zina apne thoughts mei khoyi hui thi wahi 4th Prince apni jagah se uth gaya. Usne Chenyu ko dekha aur usse kaha.

"Drink ? Tumhare saath ? Nahi mein interesting nahi hu ismei."

4th Prince ke khade hone se Kabir bhi khada ho gaya aur usse dekh kar uske baki ke friends bhi khade ho gaye.

Yeh dekh kar Juihan ne ek cold hasi ke saath unhe dekhte hue kaha.

"Elder brother Chenyu ne tumhe khud invite kiya hai drink ke liye aur tum isse naa kehne ki himmat kar rahe ho. Mujhe lagta hai Martial Market School ke students ham Yuntai Suzerain ke students ko hamesha hi ignore karte hai."

Is baat par Kabir ne usse dekhte hue kaha.

Kabir-Fine Agar tum itna keh hi rahe ho toh ham sabhi drink ke liye maan jaate hai.

Kabir un sabhi se 7 feet ke distance par khada tha. Usne apne finger ko point kiya aur agle hi pal mei Chenyu ke side mei jo table tha waha se ek glass fly karte hue Kabir ke haato mei aa gaya.

Kabir ke haato mei aate hue us glass mei se ek drop bhi nahi gira tha.

Kabir ne us glass ko 4th Prince ke haato mei diya. 4th Prince ne bhi us glass ko liya aur ek hi baar mei toss karte hue phir se Kabir ke haato mei de diya.

Kabir ne apne haat ko wave karte hue kaafi easily us glass ko phir se us table par rakh diya.

Is waqt Sky-Approaching Pavilion ke 1st floor par jitney bhi log the vo sabhi shock ho gaye the.

Telekinesis !

Ek ladki ne zor se chillate hue yeh kaha.

Superb update bhai sandar jabarjast lajvab amazing update with awesome writing skills bhai mai subah se soch rha hu jb bhi Samay mila ki kya likhu pr kuchh samajh me nhi aaya 2-4 sabd likhne ke baad Unhe mita deta kyoki Vo sabd aapki lekhni ke aage kuchh bhi nhi the outstanding work bhaya

 

[Jay Sutar]

Superb update bhai sandar jabarjast lajvab amazing update with awesome writing skills bhai mai subah se soch rha hu jb bhi Samay mila ki kya likhu pr kuchh samajh me nhi aaya 2-4 sabd likhne ke baad Unhe mita deta kyoki Vo sabd aapki lekhni ke aage kuchh bhi nhi the outstanding work bhaya

Thank you buddy .

I appreciate your comment. Well jo dil se aata hai wahi likhta hu aur kuch nahi aur kuch real life lessons ko implement karta hu.

Yahi hai meri writing ka secret. Agar soch samajh kar likha jaaye toh chahe vo kam hi kyo na ho par effective hota hai.

 

[Xabhi]

Kirdaaro ki mishrit emotions, unki activities aur jo is update mein majud nahi the unke baare jaankario se bharpur update tha...
Hamesha ki tarah likhane ke tarika.. jahan ek freshness bani rahi.. Shabdo ke khubsoorat jaal bune hain aapne jiski vajah se padhane ka maja badh jata hai.. Aapke is update ko do part me divide kar sakte hai,
first wala part jaha Kabir ya 4th Prince ya linse etc. apne bich halke fulke mahol banake baatcheet ke jariye relax kar rahe the.... yahan gaur talab baat ye hai ki kabir se jude ye log,..... inke bich ek aatmeeyata hai, ek dusre ko ahmiyat dena jaante hai, samay aane par niswarth hoke madad bhi karenge ek dusre ko...
wohi 2nd part mein nisha, chenyu aur Yuntai Suzerain ke students...
ye log aaj jis tarah se ek sath baithke aatmeeyata dikha rahe, wo ek dhong hai..wo hote hain na kehte kuch aur hai aur sochte kuch aur hai...
in log Prashansa bhi kare to uske swarth ke chalte.....
Kabir aur uske friends ke jariye dosti aur aatmeeyata ko aur nishi chenyu ke aur Yuntai Suzerain ke un students jariye dosti aad mein swarth nihit chaplushi ko bahot hi behtareen tarike dharshaya hai aapne....
ghamand, ahankar..... isko hawa tab zyada lagti hai jab saamne taarifo ki pul baandhne wale nishi ya Juihan jaise log ho...
emotions ko control karna aur realty ko expect karna..... ye samajh kabir mein hai... isliye Kabir ne Rati aur Maithili ki yaado ke saath aage badhne ke decision liya. Jo ho gaya hai usse badal nahi nahi sakta hai.. toh life mei aage badhna hi sahi hoga uske liye .
wohi dusre pehlu mein Jaankari luhan ki.... well... Luhan ke kaarnamo ki khabar kabir ke kano tak bhi pahuchi... ushe yakin nahi ho raha tha ki luhan itni powerful creature ban jaayegi. ...

power, talents agar paas ho to har koi pradarshit karna chaahega lekin ek Nayak tabhi power ya talents ko pradarshit ya prayog mein lata hai jab jarutart aan padti hai, jab koi ahankar mein sur hoke saari hadein paar kar deta hai tab uska akal thikaane lagane ke liye ... Kabir un nayako mein se ek hai aur uski soch bhi... waha glass ke sath jo kiya wo mahaz is baat jahir karna chaahta tha ki chenyu ya Julian apne had mein rahe..
in sabhi pehluo ko ek lay vadh ke sath bahot hi shanadar tarike se pesh ki hai aapne...Waise samvado ka upayog hamesha bahot behtareen raha..

wohi dusri taraf kabir ki kripa se ab jald hi 4th Prince shaadi karne wala hai shayad...

Khair..... shaandar update, shaandar lekhni shaandar shabdon ka chayan..
kirdaaro ke mood, mahol aur unke bich rishte ke varnan kabile tarif raha...
kirdaaro ki baatein, luhan ke kisse kaafi dilchasp raha.. ,Waise in logo ke vicharo ka adan pradan jis mul vishay vastu pe hai wo ek lay mein dikhane mein lekhak mahir hai... jo sach mein santosh janak hai hai aur padhkar aanand bhi mile..
Overall the best part of the update is the end, specially the way you have written it...
Aise hi likhte rahiye aur aur apni manoram lekhni se hum readers ka manoranjan karte rahiye...

Let's see what happens next..

Brilliant update with awesome writing skills...