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Kya baat telekinesis ka prayog kiya yaha kabir ne ....aur use dekh kr logo ka shocked hona bhi lazimi tha kyuki telekinesis koi normal technique nhi h jo koi bhi use krle uske liye mind ka concentration aur growth ke sath bahut sari practice ki bhi jrurt h taki wo sirf isharo se hi cheezo ko hila sake uske place se aur ye kaam bde level ke warriors hi kr skte h usme bhi sayd sabhi nhi.... Khair yaha moon tower me lgta h kuchh bdhiya sa hangama hone wala h jaha 4th prince chenyu aur khaskar nishi ke dhoke se ahat h aur un dono se nafrat krta h ab to uska unki tariffo ko chidhns bhi lazimi h pr kya uski kahi hui bato ke karan kabir profound board me fight krega...waise lgta to nhi h ki aisa abhi kuchh hoga waise ho bhi skta h...
Wahi dusri aur 4th prince ko ek eating companion bhi chahiye jise wo apni wife ya concubine bna ske uske liye usne kabir se help mangi h jo use mil bhi gyi h to dekhte h biding me ab 4th prince ke hatho best eating companion lgegi ya nhi to intzaar h agle bhaag ka...
moon towers choose karta hain unique beauty ko... virgin girls iss point pe stress kyun kiya gaya agar ladkiyan physical hee nahin hoti kisi ke saath toh... and how do they know they are virgin,, by magic is there any method to know... ya unhe strip kar ke check kiya jata hain... akhir koi bhi ladki aisi job kyun karegi ya toh paise kee tangi ya phir brought from the brothel.... aur per day 8 beautiful virgin women lana tough nut to crack... aur phir unka auction ek tarah ka deh vyapar.... and at such a reputed place...
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luhan ek bari threat ban gayee hain jab last time marital market ke deputy headmasters se bhirant hui thee tab uska cultivation utna high nahin tha ab itni blood suck karne ke baad na jaane wo kitna aage pahunch chuki hogi... lekin cultivation speed toh uupar jaane ke baad slow ho jaati hain.... aur jitni teji se luhan cultivate kar rahi hain uska faoundation bhi weak hota jaa raha hoga... toh ek wakt ke baad uske speed ko bhi toh halt lagegi... aur blood utna hi jyada demand karegi uska sareer... lekin phir bhi kabir kee half saint light ko refine karna ek sapna hi rah jayega lagta hain....
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ab yehan 4th prince apni failed love life ko dekh raha hain... abe yehan toh kisi kee love kee life hee na rahi iski toh jinda hain kam se kam... yeh despo prince pehli baar dekha hain... maa ne kaha concubine bhi chalegi... itna degrade kaise kar degi apne bete ko.. unhe toh himmat deni chahiye thee,,, aise mein toh yeh bhi bichara khud ko kaafi low samjhega.... khair kabir ne ek bhai hone ka farz nibhaya hain...
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profound board aur warrior of division board dono alag hain kya.... matlab jo lagatar 10 wins profound board pe karta hain wahee warrior of division board ka hakdar hota hain... sala shab tian ke good books mein aana chahte hain... chamche ka chamcha.. waise 4th prince ne unwated attention bula liya... kya jaroori thee unki baato mein interfere karne kee... let tham ramble what they want... sachhai toh akhir battle mein hi maloom chalti hain...
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wow telekenesis akhir kabir ne kab iski abhyas kari thee.. it was a shocker for all of us...
lovely update brother but missed shreya and dina why were they not here... cause kabir ne toh sabhi ko bulaya tha...
Awesome update Jay Sutar bhai.
Kaafi emotion ke saath likha hai aap ne isse. Kabir aur 4th Prince ke dil ka jo haal aapne dikhaya hai vo kaafi achha tha. Dono hi kisi na kisi tarah ke dil se jude problem se guzre hai ya guzar rahe hai. Par kehte hai na ke agar sachhe dosto ka saath ho toh aise problems zyada der nahi rehte hai. Yaha bhi wahi hai Kabir ke saath uske sabhi achhe dost hai. Unke saath vo in mil rahe sukun ke palo ko enjoy kar raha hai.
Waise ek baat toh hai ke is update mei kaafi kuch hai dissect karne ke liye jaise is resturent wale update mei do group aane bataye hai. Jaha Kabir aur uska group apne sabhi members ke saath sabhi ke hasi khushi mei shamil hai. Wahi Yuntai Suzerain ka group is liye waha par hai kyo ki vo Tian ke paas jana chahte hai isliye unhone Chenyu aur Nishi jaise persons ko drink ke liye invite kiya.
Waise yeh Moon Tower kaafi ajeeb hai. Blood Bond leta hai yani agar unke kisi bhi beauty ke saath koi zabadasti karta hai toh us blood bond ke help se vo us warrior ko ek hi jhatke mei maar sakte hai. Yaa phir vo beauty us warrior par kuch ilzam laga sakti hai ke isne mere saath zabardasti karne ki koshish ki hai. Of cousre Moon Tower apne hi worker ki baat sunega. Kaafi sharp hai Moon Tower ka bussines. Well yeh toh dekh kar achha laga ke vo body ko nahi art ko sell kar rahe hai. Bhale unka evening mei auction karna kuch had tak galat hai. Par yeh story bhi waisi hai. Story bright tone ke saath toh har waqt nahi chal sakti hai. Usse bich bich mei dark tone mei jana hi hoga. Yahi rule hai reality ka.
Waise Ravi aur RIya ki nokjhok bhi kaafi waqt baad dekhne mili hai.
Toh Luhan Martial Market School ke bheje hue 10 master ke attack se bhi bach kar bhaag gayi. Zaroor uska cultivation ab Heaven Realm ke Mid ya phir Advance Stage par hoga. Upar se usne ek 7th-Class Power ke status wale Sword Suzerain ko destroy kar diya hai. Yahi uske badhi hui strength ko show karta hai. Par Kabir bhi kya hi kar sakta hai. Uska cultivation toh abhi tak Black Realm mei hai aur Luhan Heaven Realm warrior hai.
Ek baat notice ki hai mein ne ke 4th Prince jo phele aise hi life ji raha tha uski vo habit lagta hai Kabir se milne ke baad change ho gayi hai. Yunvu Commandery ke andar hue Black Market ke warriors se hui battle hi is baat ko show karti hai aur lagta hai usne apne life mei kaafi bada goal set kiya hua hai. Ab vo pehle jaisa nahi raha hai yeh throught the updates show ho raha hai. Linsen toh pehle se hi thik thak banda tha. Yeh bhi ek is update ka positive change hai. Nishi ko dekh kar bhi react na karna yeh show karta hai ke 4th Prince ne apne mind ko kaafi strong kiya hai. Usse ab pata hai ke apna koun hai aur koun nahi hai.
Waise yeh bhi is update mei show hua hai ke jo by blood se related hote hai sirf wahi apne nahi hote hai. Par jo dil se jude hote hai vo bhi apne hote hai. Kabir aur uske friends iska kaafi achha example hai. Jaha vo sabhi apne table par sabhi ke saath maza kar rahe hai. Ek dusre ko samajhte hai. Wahi dusre side chamcha-giri chal rahi hai.
Apne magical words ne Jay Sutar bhai ne isse kaafi behtarin tarah se show kiya hai. Ham sabhi bhi aisi hi reality mei rehte hai jaha par hame jaldi pata nahi chal pata hai ke hamara apna koun hai aur paraya. Jaha par Chenyu aur 4th Prince ek dusre ke cousin's hai par wahi Chenyu ne Hades Department se killers hire kiye Yuxi ko marne ke liye. Par dusre side Linsen hai jo 4th Prince ke saath tab se hai jab se vo Martial Market School mei aaya hai. Isse yahi pata chalta hai ke kabhi kabhi hamare apne bhi hamare dushman ban jaate hai. Par wahi jinka hamare saath kisi bhi tarah ka blood relation nahi hota hai vo hi hamare sab se karibi hote hai.
Toh Chenyu bhi Zina ki tarah Warrior of Division Profound Board banne ke liye aaya hai. Par kya vo is baar ban payega. Kyo ki aisa mujhe lag raha hai ke uska aur Zina ka kisi tarah ka competation zaroor hoga.
Waise 4th Prince ne kaafi bold way mei Chenyu ki izzat nikali hai. Pet Dog....
Saath is sab ke bich Kabir kitna 4th Prince ko support karta hai yeh bhi achhe se dekhne mila hai. Agar vo chahta toh telekinesis se apne taraf laya hua glass khud pi sakta tha par invitation 4th Prince ko tha aur 4th Prince bhi achhe se Kabir ke baat ko uske bina kahe hi samajh gaya tha aur ek hi jhatke mei usne us drink ko pi kar khatam kar diya. It's like saamp bhi mara aur laathi bhi nahi tooti.
4th Prince Chenyu aur Nishi ko dekhna nahi chahta tha par samne se aaye hue invitation ko agar bina baat ke thukra deta toh yeh uske Prince ke status ke liye bhi achha nahi tha. Yahi character development hoti hai. Jaha ek character starting mei bilkul bhi focus nahi tha vo ab kaafi focused aur sharp ho gaya hai.
Ab bas dekhna yeh hai ke Kabir aage kya karne wala hai yaha. Kyo ki dekh kar toh aisa hi lag raha hai ke Chenyu aur Nishi usse bhi pasand nahi hai. Lekin aise hi vo kisi ke saath fight nahi start kar sakta hai. Usse kisi point ki zaroorat hai uske liye.
Let's see what happens next.
ADIOS.
Bhai sath rahne ke liye Aapko kahna nhi padega kabhi bhi aapki lekhni kisi ko yha se Jane hi nhi degiThank you buddy .
Well kya baat hai tum Rudrathakur aalu Naina sabhi kaafi ground level par update ko review de rahe ho. Yeh dekh kar kaafi achha laga.
Aise review dekh kar sach mei achha lagta hai. Waise ke baat toh hai mere sabhi readers mei ke vo sabhi kaafi achhe se update ko observe karte hai.
Aise hi sabhi saath rehna aage kaafi maza aane wala hai.
ek special thanks The king & AvniTaneja ke liye bhi likh dijiye...Well well well look who's review I got .
Well last time mujhe laga tha ke ek saath 5-6 bade bade revo's aane wale hai aur meri batti hi gul hone wali hai. Par koi nahi latest update par aa gaya hai tumhara review is baat se ham khush hue .
Haan mein ne isse kuch psycological way mei likha hai jo 2 type ke emotions ko show kar raha hai. Jaha par pure heart hai jaise Kabir aur uska group wahi Chenyu aur Nishi jis table par baithe hai waha par bas chaplusi chal rahi hai. Taaki Tian unki taraf kuch dhyan de.
Ab kya hi kar sakte hai ham sabhi bhi aisi hi reality mei rehte hai jo log apne face par kuch aur dikhate hai aur unke dil mei kuch aur hota hai.
Sirf strong minded person hi power ko control kar sakta hai. Wahi agar person strong minded na ho toh Power ka gurur usse control karta hai. Power hona hi sab kuch nahi hota hai. Balki usse control karne ke liye will honi chahiyen.
Well ham toh aise hi likhte rahenge. Aap sabhi saath bane rahiye.
chaliye ishi khushi mein aaj ek update de dijiyeThank you buddy .
Well kya baat hai tum Rudrathakur aalu Naina sabhi kaafi ground level par update ko review de rahe ho. Yeh dekh kar kaafi achha laga.
Aise review dekh kar sach mei achha lagta hai. Waise ke baat toh hai mere sabhi readers mei ke vo sabhi kaafi achhe se update ko observe karte hai.
Aise hi sabhi saath rehna aage kaafi maza aane wala hai.
New update Kab dene wale hai story pe..Awesome update bro
Unki abhi editing chal rhi hai khatm hote hi post krenge... Aisa bola tha UnhoneNew update Kab dene wale hai story pe..
Jaldi hi deta hu. Fever ki wajah se update nahi likh saka.New update Kab dene wale hai story pe..