Thriller Haivannnn........

[Bilal jan]

Ek gharme me...

Vese ise ghar kahna galat hoga..
Qki ye ek bunglo tha..

Ye rahne vale har ek ka aapna room he..

Chaliye bata deta hu...

Is ghar Charo aur khuli jagah he.. Jese hi main gate se aandar aate he to do no taraf garden he.bich me ghar tak Jane ke liye el pakka rasta he. Pisli side me swimming pool he. Ab ghar me jese aate he to pahle sitting room he fir dinnighall he.. Ground floor par 5 room 1 kitchen aur 1 store room he...

1 floor par 4 room he isme se 3 guest room he.. Aur ek room he vo bhot salo se band he.
Q vo aage pata chalega..

Ground floor ke ek room ek ladki aur use hath Me tha ek later.. Jisse padhkar vo aanshu baha rahi thi..

Later ke bare me aage pata chalega..
Lekin aakhri word batata hu...

Letter...

.......................................................................................... ___________________________________________________________________________________________,__,____________________________________________________*_"

Mai vapas aaunga aapka future me aapka past hi aapka present bankar aaunga..

Ye ek haivan ka wada he Jo kisi par raham nahi karega..

Ye ................ Wada he... Aur Mai ._________________ hu.. To wada nibhaunga...

Haivannnnnnn.................

To chalo ab is ladki ke bare me is parivar me barre me intro de deta hu....

Introduction......

Thakur veer Singh..( Inki death ho chuki he lekin flashback me inka roll he isliye intro de raha hu..)

Thakur mamtasingh... ( ye thakur veer KO biwi he.. Inki bhi death ho chuki he..lekin body nahi mili thi.. Aur San inhe sab Mara Gaye he aesa samjte he )

Thakur baldev Singh (age 48):- vese to inki pusteni bahut jaydad he air inka aapna bhi bhut bada business he...lekin for bhi kyaa bhoot tha dimag me ki police ban Gaye abhi ye dilhi police commisoner he... Air bhot hi kadak police officer he..lekin aapne bacho she bhot pyar karte he...

Thakur sima Singh (age 46):- baldev Singh KO biwi he.. Ye aapne pati ka business chalati he...aapni badi beti ke sath.. He bhi aapne bacho se bhut pyar karti he...

Thakur varsha Singh (age 24):- yehi vo ladki he Jo letter padh rahi thi.. Bhot sunder he..smj ljiye kayamat he he..(______,_____) aur aapni maa ke sath milkar unka business me hath batati he.. Gussa me bilkul aapne baap par...ye aapne dono Bhai-bahan Jo usse chote he unse bhot pyar karti he..aur khudse nafrat ...

Takur prem Singh(age 18):- inhone abhi 12 pass out kiya he ..ye kisise nahi darte. (Sivay ek insan ke. Vo abhi raaz he)Ye padhayi me bhot ache he....

Thakur Priya Singh (age 18):- ye aur prem judwa he.. Dono hi ekdusre bhot pyar karate he..

To ye tha inka family intro lekin pura nahi..
Baki kahani jab flashback me hogi tab para chalega..

Is waqt sabhi dinner kar rahe the...

Dinner karte huge...

Sima Singh :- prem -priya aage kya Karna chahte ho...

Dono :- b.com me admission Lena chahte he mom...

Sima...good.. Aur (varsha se) tumhari taiyari ho gayi presentoins Ki..

Varsha:- ji mom lekin Mai aaj nahi aaungi.. Mene rahul KO bhej diya he..go sambhal legs...


Chalo rahul me bare me batara hu vo unki company me head manager he aye varsha KO bhot like karta he lekin kahne se darta he uske gusse KO vajah se...

Sab smj jate he ki q usne aesa kaha...

Fir sima aapne office jati he aur baldev aapne...

Prem aur priya aapne room me...

Aur varsha aapni car like.. Vo kaha jati he bad me bataunga...

Lekin tabhi usko el call aati he...

Aawaz....hello mam

Varsha:- ha bolo kus pata chala..

Awaz:- nahi mam..har jagah dhundh liya lekin koi pata nah I..

Varsha:- thik he kosis karte raho ..USO qlu pe bane raho...

Away:- OK mam by..

Varsha:- by

Chalo ab chalte he dilhi airport PS...

Abhi-abhi ek ladka airport se bahar aata he....

Air khud hi bolta he....

Chalo inka intro deta hu..

Rudra Rajput(hero aur villain) age 20:- dikhne me kisi star se jam nahi.. Gusse me sabka baap..sirf ye aapne Dada ki sunta he.. Aur kisi KO nahi...koi dost nahi.. Ghamandi Utnahi dayalu.. (Aur he pyar word she hi nafrat he..)

Raghuveer Rajput:-(age 65):- bhot bade businessman ...inke isare pe sarkar badal jati he...rudra she bhut pyar karte he..inki Jan basti usme. Sab inse darte he aur ye rudra we...

(Aur koi nahi he ink a)

Wel Come to dilhi Rudra Rajput ...

Ab hogi tumhare badle ki suruaat...

Har us insan ka bura waqt aayega.. Jinse muje nafrat he...

Ye yahi soch rahe the ki ek car inke pass aake khadi rahti he ...

Aur us gadi ki dono taraf 3-3 car hoti he Jo inki security thi...

Tabhi bich wali car se 40 saal ka ek aadmi utarta he car ka darvaza kholta he..

Aadmi...aayiye chote malik...

Rudra car me bethte huge...

Ab rudra ki jagah Mai lukhunga...

Mai...raghu kaka aapko kitni bar kahu muje rudra bulayiye ...

Raghu.... OK ab bethiye bade malik intzaar kar rage he...

Isi tarah gadiya ghar ki aur chal deti he...

Car me

Rudra:- dadaji kese he???? Unka khyal rakhte the ki nah I???

Raghu:- ji .. Lekin dawa time pe nahi lete the...

Rudra:- muje pata that... Aap kus nahi kahte the...

Raghu:- humari sunte kaha he...kus kahe to aankh dikh dete he..jab pata chalega mene tumhe bata diya he to meri kher nahi...

Rudra:- chinta mat kijiye an Mai aa gaya hu...aur aapko bhi kus nahi kahenge...

Isi tarah baat karte huye ek ghar ghar nahi haweli ke main gate she aandar aate he...

Jaha haweli main door pe ek buzurg khade the..

Aur unke side me 19 saal ki ek khubsurat ladki khadi thi..

Buzurg koi aur nahi dadaji the..aur unke side me khadi ladki raghu ki beti Nirali he...

Raghu..(age 40) :- is ghar ka wafadar sevak. Ye rudra she bhot pyar karta he... Rudra ki khatir inhone ek mla ko bich bazar me goli Mari tho... Biwi mar chuki el beti he Nirali .

Nirali(age 19) :- raghu KO beti ye dadaji KO dadaji hi kahti he..jab bhi raghu ya rudra issue dantte he tab dadaji KO kah deti he..aur sabse jyada aapne Bhai rudra se pyar karti he..dono hamesha el-dusre ki tang khichte rahte he...

Rudra jess hi gadi se utarta hi turant aapne Dada ke pair suke unko gale laga lete he...

Dono is tarah rahte agar........

Aaj ke liya itna hi...

Baki agle update me

Nice update

 

[Bilal jan]

Update 2

Dada air pote gale lage hue the...

Tabhi

Nirali.... Ab dadu mujse bhi Milne do Bhai KO..

Dada...2 saal bad mil raha hu..muje mahsus to karne de ...

Mai....dadu ab to yahi hu...pahle is chuhiya se mil lu varna mere kapde katar khayegi...

Is baat pe sab hasne lagte he sivay Nirali me..

Nirali....hehehe it's not funny...aur tu ruk gadhe...tuje to me sodungi nahi...

Isse pahle vo kus kare Mai andar bhag jata hu..

Aur vo mere pise bhagne lagti he....

Lekin jyada nahi vo muje room me Jane se pahle pakad leti he...

Mai.....dekh marna mat...chal sorry ab maaf karde....

Vo hath uthati he Mai aankh band karke gal aage kar deta hu...
Lekin Marne ki vajah mere gaal pe kiss kar deti he.,.

Nirali....me aapne Bhai KO q marungi...bs vada kar ab sod ke nahi jayega..

Aur uski aankh me aanshu aa jate he..

Jese hi Mai ye dekhta hu...turant uska hath pakdke room me lake bed pe bitha deta hu...

Mai...ye kya tu ro q rahi he...Mai ab hamesha tere paas rahunga...

Nirali....sachiiii

Mai....muchiiiiii

Ab ja mere liye coffee pila. Bhut miss kiya...

Nirali....(khush hoke ) abhi layi....

Vo chali jati he aur mere dimag sochne lagta he...

Ek ye he Jo muje itna pyar karti he...ek vo he......

Yes kya fogat soch raha hu...ab sirf badla ....

Idhar Nirali aur rudra ke Jane ke bad.

Dadaji aur raghu kaka Dada ke room me jate he...

Aur dadaji aapne room me bane bar me she ek sharab ki bottle nikalke uska ek peg banakar pine lagte he...

Raghu... Bade malik q pi rahe he...ek to aapki tabiyat bhi thik nahi rahti...

Dada.....are kya raghu 1 peg hi to pi raja hu...vese bhi me aaj khush hu...mera pota vapas aa gaya he...

Raghu... Malik Dr ne mana kiya he...aur vese bhi aapko kus ho gaya to rudra KO kon sambhalega... Badi muskil se aapke kahne pe usne vo sab soda he...aur sirf aapki hi vo sunta he...varna vo.....

Dada...tnsn mat le raghu mike kus nahi hoga... Aur kus ho gaya to Nirali use sambhal legi..

Raghu....bs muje ek hi dar he ki vo firse ........

Dada....tuje lagta he usne sod diya..... Nah I raghu usne kus bhi nahi soda... Me uski rag-rag se vafik hu...aur vese bhi jo sochta he vo karke rahta he...

Raghu.... To fir roke kese????

Dada.....usko rokna kisike bas me nahi.... Vo haivan he....

Fir aese hi inki bate chal rahi thi...

Chaliye tab tak kus time pahle chalte he...

Jese hi Nirali bahar jati he...
Tabhi rudra ka phone ring hota he....

Unknown..... Hello sir...

Rudra.... Ha bolo ...

Unknown.... Sir aaj______ uspe humla hone vala he...

Rudra....what????? To tum kya kar rahe ho..usko kus nahi hona chahiye...usko sirf Mai dard dunga.... Unko chot pahuchane ka adhikar mera he... Sab pata karke muje call Karo... Aur Jo bhi usko Marne Gaye he un sabko mardo...

Unknown....OK sir...

Rudra....ek minute

Unknown... Ji sir

Rudra.... Haivan ka sign jarur sodna vaha.. Bhot shant rah chukka ye sahar... An hoga haivan ka khel...hahahaha

Unknown...(darte huye) OK sir

Aur call cut ho jati he....

Usi waqt thakur industry me sima aapne office me aake darte huye ek call karti he...

Do ring ke baad phone risive hota he....

Samne se.... Hello

Sima.... Kus nahi bolti

Samne se...hello kin

Sima...(himmat karke)...ma

Samne se..(gusse me) kon ma ???? Kesi ma???? Yaha koi nahi rahta tumhara ..... Aaj ke baad call mat Karna.... Varna maar dungi...

Aur phone patkne ki aawaz aati he....

Sima Rone lagati he..

Chalo yaha Rone dete he...

1 hour baad me chalte he...

Ek maidan me 10 lashe padi huyi thi... Police jagah ki sanbin karne lagti he....

Vaha mile sign KO dekhkar sare police vale ghabhra jate he...
Aaj ke liye itna hi...
Baki bad me...

Nice update

 

[Bilal jan]

Update 3

1 bandh kamre me 3 log chair par bandhe huye the.

3 no abhi behosh the.

Tabhi us room me ek aadmi aata he aur vo kus isara karta he..

Jisse 3 aadmi pani ki balti leke aate he chair par bandhe huye log par pani dalta he...

Jisse vo log hosh me aane lagte he. Aur Jo aadmi aaya to vo isara karta he aapne aadmise jisse Jo bhi uske log the vo sab bahar chale jate he...

Aur un tino KO bhi puri tarah hosh aa jate he..

Pahle to vo khud KO ek kamre me chair se bandhe huye pakar dar jate he..

For samne kisiko khada pakar dar to Gaye the lekin aapne dar KO kabu kar

Aadmi 1.... Kaun ho tum???? Sod do muje aur mere beto ko varna bhut pastoge.. Jante nahi me is ______ ileka ka mla hu..

Vo unknown kus nahi bolta Aur TV on kar deta he.. Aur us taraf dekhno KO kahta he.

To mla aaur uske bete us taraf dekhne lagte he..

Jaha aaj ki news dikha rahe the.. Jisme vo hi kand dikha rahe the..

Jo 10 logo lash aur uske bare bata rahe the...

Mla...ohhh to tum police vale ho...kahdo commisoner se vo mera kus nahi bigad sakta.. Mere logo KO mar kar Aur muje yaha lake .....

Vo kus aage bolta usse pahle unknown firse vo TV Ki taraf isara karta he...

Jaha newz me bataya ja raha tha KO..
Ye sab haivan ne kiya he... 1.5 year bad vapas kisi baat me haivan ka naam aaya he.
Aakhir kaun he haivan??? 1.5 saal pahle lagatar 3 salo tak yese hi maute hoti thi

Aur ab fir se vahi.lagta he haivan vapas aa gaya he...

Police commisoner ne bhi chupi sadh li he.

Mla fir se us unknown ki Aur dekhne lagta he...

Mla:- iska kya mtlb???

Tabhi vaha ek aavaz gunjti he haivannnnnnn.........

Aur usike sath ek ladka aandar aata he.

Ladka.....he sab mene kiya he.. Aur tumhe yaha lanevala bhi Mai hi hu..

Dosto ye ladka koi Aur nahi rudra hi he...

Mla Aur uske bete to haivan ka naam sunke hi dar jate he Aur rudra ki aavaz se phat ke hath me aa jati he...

Mla ....(darte huye ) Hume yaha q laye ho????

Rudra....(unknown ki Aur dekhkar) q malik tumne inhe bataya nahi????

Malik....sir vo to nahi bataya.... Muje laga TV dekh ke smj jayenge...

Rudra....ohhh to mla ji ye batayenge commisner ki beti q marna chahte the...

Mla...q ki commisoner ne mere nakli sarab ka theka barbad kar diya Aur mera coorodo rs ka nuksan kiya...

Rudra.... Ohhh.. Mla tumhe us parivar se dur rahna chahiye the.

Mla...kese sod du??? Aur kya rista he tumhara us parivar se???? Q bachana chahte ho???

Jese hi aakhri sawal pusta he??

Rudra...hahaha hahaha....

Mla...hash q rahe ho????

Rudra.... Ek baat batao kaurav Aur pandav ke bich kya tha????

Mla...ye kesa sawal he????

Rudra....jawab to do..

Mla... Dusmani Aur nafrat ka..

Rudra....dusmani n sahi nafrat bhot karta hu unse... Aur unse badla Lena hi meri jindgi ka maksad he..

Mla...to fir usko bachaya q??? Ek tarah se tumhara badla pura ho jata???

Rudra...(haste huye) sirf ek KO marne se thodi badla

Uski baat katkar

Mla...to fir ek-ek karke sab mar dete he ... Tumhara Aur mera dono ka badla pura ho jayega...is baat pe milao hath...

Uski baat sunkar rudra darvani hasi hasne lagta he fir ek damse gusse bhari aavaz me.

Rudra..... Unhe dard Dena ka adhikar sirf mera he.mera he.. Samje.. Me unko jinda rakh kar dard Dena chahta hu.Aur tum unhe Marne ki...tumne galti kardi mla.. Aur uski saza sirf maut he... Qki haivan ke raste ke bich Jo aata he.. Uska kaal khud haivan ban jata he...

Isse pahle koi kus smj pata usse pahle tino ke sir me goli maar deta he...

Mai..... Kismat vale the tino Jo aasan maut mili varna haivan ka rasta katne vale KO vo maut milti he ki maut bhi ek pal dar jati he(ispe tali bajayi Jaye)

Mai... Malik inki lashe inke ghar ke pass faikva do...

Malik...ji sir..

Chaliye ab chalte he vaha jaha sima ne phone kiya tha..

Phone katne vali ek 70 saal ki bhudhi aurat thi...

Chaliye inka Aur unke parivar ka intro deta hu...

Rajeshvari thakur.(age 70):- umar to bhot ho chuki he lekin dekh ke koi nahi sakte...abhi bhi unke zille me unke naam ki dahsat he..unki avaz me hi itna dam he..Aur ye aapni beti sima se bhot nafarat karti he..inke pati ki death ho chuki he..(unka pati ka koi roll nahi he kahani me)

Thakur kevadsingh(age 47):- ye rajeshvari ji ke bete he..aapni puteni jaydad sambhalte he Aur aapne ilake ke mp he...ye aapne bete se bhut pyar karte he..

Thakur mayasingh(age 45):- ye shidhi sadi mahila he.. Aur ghar sambhalti he..aapni saas KO ma manti he..Aur rajeshvri Hi bhi inhe aapni beti manti he.. Inke ek beta he..

Thakur pawansingh(age 19):- naam to pawan he lekin ek no ka kamina.. Aapne baap ke pese Aur power dono ka najayaz faiyda uthate he..sirf rajeshwari ji se darta he....

Chaliye kahani par aate he...

Jo phone pe baat huyi Sara parivar sun raha tha...

Kevad...maa didi KO maaf kar dijiye...

Rajeshwari ji... Kabhi nahi.. Usne Jo kiya he uski yahi saza he..
Aur usne to gunah kiya he...

Kevad...usne kya galat kar diya??? Aur aap usse nafrat karti he vo bhi us pa........

Uski baat bich me katkar.

Rajeshwari ji...(gusse me) jaban shbhal ke kevad... Uske bare me kus bhi galat bola to bhul jaungi tum mere bete ho... Agli baar ye galti nahi honi chahiye..

Aur aapne room me chali jati he..

Yaha bhi unke gusse KO dekhkar kevad chupchap chala jata he. Pawan to kampte huye aapne room me bhag jata he...

Maya vo aapni saas ke pise unke kamre me jati he...

Ab aandar kya bate vo baad me jante he...

Chaliye ab chalte he aapne hero ke pass

Hero jese hi ghar aata he to samne unke dadaji Bethe the.

Dadaji....tumne to aate hi suruvat kardi...

Mai.....Karna nahi chahta hu..lekin vo zakhm nasur ban chuke he..Jo muje jine nahi dete..
Aur ...

Aage jus Mai bolta..

Dadaji..... Jao so jao...

Mai aapne room me chupchap chala jata hu...

Aaj ke liye itna hi..

Baki aagle update me

Nice update

 

[Bilal jan]

Update 4

Subah breakfast Pe

Dada...to rudra aage kya karna he???

Mai...kya karna mtlb?? College join karunga..

Dada...to thik he kaha admission Lena chahte ho???

Mai...Aur kaha choti(Nirali) ke college me.

Dada....thik he me call kar deta hu...

Mai....kya dadu me khud admission nahi Kara sakta???

Is baat pe Nirali hasne lagti he..

Mai....tu q has rahi choti???

Nirali.....qki muje aap pe doubt he???

Mai....Aur vo kya???

Nirali...ki aaj college me kus jarur hoga aur vo kya ye muje nahi pata????

Dadu...ha niru sak to muje bhi he...tu zukna nahi janta..aur tu khud admission lene KO kah raha he????

Mai...oh hello ...me zukunga bhi nahi.... Mai aapke Aur niru ke aage zukta hu..Aur kisime taqat nahi muje zuka sake.

Is pe dadu Aur Nirali dono hasne lagte he..

Mai...ab q has rahe ho???? Mene jock nahi sunaya...

Nirali...Bhai jock hi to he..hum dono ke aapke aage zukna padta he...Aur aapki baat manni padti he..

Mai....nahi manta aapki baat.. (Sad si sakal banakar)

Dadu...oye band kar aapni nautnki .... Ha Bhai tu manta he humari baat...

Ispe sab hasne lagte he...

Khatam karke Mai Aur Nirali niklte he college ki Aur...

Idhar takur bunglo me

Vaha bhi sb breakfast kar rahe the...

Baldev...sima ye varsha aaj nahi aayi kya???

Sima...aap jante he... Sayad har baar ki tarah dophar me aa Jaye...

Baldev....hmmm

Sima...acha prem Aur priya beta kis collage me admission Lena chahte ho???

Priya..mom ________ college me..

Soma...thik he me principal se baat karti hu..
Tum aapne document jakar unhe de Dena...

Prem...OK mom.. Chal priya kitna khayegi????

Priya...dekh muje bhukkad mat bolo..varna pitega gadhe...

Prem.....tune muje firse gadha kaha ruk tu...

Priya...tune muje bhukkad q bola????

Sima..(bich me) bas bhot hua... Chupchap ab college niklo admission ke liye..

Priya...thik he mom..bach gaya tu gadhe..

Prem...dekho mom ye firse

Sima...priya(gusse me)

Priya...sorry mom

Yes bhi college ke liye niklte he..

Chalo tab tak aapko le chalte he ek jagah jaha 2 aadmi Bethe baat kar rahe he..

Vese ek 25 saal ka ladka he Aur dusra 50 saal ka aadmi he..

Aadmi..beta tumhara kaam kaha tak pahuncha..????

Ladka...vese to papa vaha sab mujpe bhot viswas karte he...lekin varsha se dosti ke aage kus nahi badh raha..jab shadi ya pyar ke bare me koi baat karta hu to gussa ho jati he...

Sahi smje dosto ye Aur koi nahi rahul Aur uska baap he viraj..

Viraj thakkar.:-ek no ka kamina..baldev ise aapna dost manta he..lekin ye uski dolat ke pise he...

Rahul:-baap ki tarah..baki to bata chuka hu

Viraj...tu ek ladki ko nahi sambhal sakta??? Puri property kya khak shambhalega... Ab muje hi kus Karna padega...

Rahul...aap kya karoge???

Viraj...bs tu dekhta ja...

Chaliye ab college chalte he...

Yaha principal office me principal ke samne prem Aur priya Bethe huye the...

Principal...are prem beta aapko aane Ki kya jarurat thi..kisi ke hatho bhijwa dete ya me khud aa jata...

Priya...vo baat nahi he sir ...mom ne bhi kaha tha Aur hum bhi college dekhna chahte the...

Principal...are tum sir q kah rahi ho...tum muje uncle bula sakti ho...

Prem...OK uncle...

Principal....tum college dekhlo...Aur kabhi bhi koi prblm ho to muje batana...

Priya...syor uncle..

Vo Aur kus baat karte usse pahle usko door ko khol kar Mai aur Nirali aandar aate he...

Principal...kaun ho tum Aur aandar kese aaye????

Lekin Mai to kus sun hi kaha raha tha.Mai to bs priya ko dekha ja raha tha..usko bi pata chalta he Mai usko dekh raha hu..to vo thodi uncomfortable ho jati he..lekin Mai to us KO dekte huye meri aankho me aanshu aa jate he..

Principal....bahre ho kya??? Kus pus raha hu.???

Jab Mai hosh me nahi aata to Nirali pinch karti he tab jakar hosh aate he..

Unko ignore karke sidhe principal ke samne Jo chair thi usme beth jata hu..

Isse principal ko gussa aa jata he...

Principal....(gusse me) kaun ho tum??? Aur yaha kya kar rahe ho??? Aur bina ijajat mere office me aaye Aur dusri galti bina puse mere samne Bethe ho???

Mai...are kya baat he principal.. Itne sawal ek sath...ek ek karke puso...

Principal...(gusse me)... Thik he ye batao kaun ho tum????

Mai....ha aese..(mere aese bolne par gusse me ghurta he) mera naam rudra rajput he...

Principal...isse mera kya lena Dena!!!! Yaha q aaye ho???

Mai...Mai yaha aapna admission karvane aaya hu...

Principal....admission lena he to bahar jao vaha karvao...

Nirali...(man me) ab to ye principal gaya...

Mai...ye kya baat huyi...ab to tum khud mere pero me girkar admission doge...

Vo kus aage bolta usse pahle me call karta hu..

Samne se...hello kaun????

Mai....rudra rajput

Samne se...ek minute sir

Thodi der baad samne se dusri aavaz aati he...jo education minister ki thi..

Em....ji bolo beta kya baat he????

Mai...uncle Mai is waqt _____ is college me hu...Aur yaha ka principal muje kah raha he ki admission lena ho to Babar line me jao...

EM.... Abhi me baat karta hu usse...

Mai..,lekin uncle usse mera ego justify nahi hoga...

EM...to tum bolo kya karu???

Mai...kus nahi uncle isko mere pair pakadkar mafi magni he...Aur sab students ke form unke pass Jake collect karega Aur use khud file karne hoge..Aur kisiki help nahi lega...

EM...thik he beta...

Aur phone cut ho jata he...

Principal....uska to ye sab sunke hi pasina sut jata he..

Tabhi uske phone ki ghanti bajti he.
Aur samne vale ki sunke phat ke hath me aa jati he...

Principal....sorry sir ....OK sir....ho jayega...me khud karunga...

Fir meri Aur dekhkar

Pp...plz muje maaf kardo beta..

Iske aage kus bolta.

Mai...pair pakadkar Aur sir bolkar mafi mang.. Don't call me beta...

Turat mere pair pakadkar

Pp...plz I am sorry sir...

Mai...ab mera ego justify hua...Aur Jo kaha he vo kar smja...

He kahkar chair se uth jata hu...ek najar priya KO pyar se dekhta hu...Jo awak khadi thi...ek najar gusse vali prem pe dalta hu jisse vo dar jata he...

Fir Nirali ko chalne KO bolkar chal deta hu...

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Mai car chala raha tha...
Aur Nirali kus soch rahi thi..

Mai....kya baat he choti tu aaj chup q he???

Nirali....to kya me bol-bol karti hu...??

Mai...mene aesa to nahi kaha.??? Lekin aaj jab se collage Gaye tabse chup he... Isliye pusa???

Nirali...sorry Bhai..

Mai...sorry kis liye???

Nirali....vo ... Vo...

Mai....chal koi baat nahi mujpe gussa hona tera haq banta he....acha ab pus kya pusna he.????

Nirali ...aapko q aesa lagta he?????

Mai..... Q ki Mai tera Bhai hu...ab bol

Nirali...jaha tak me aapko janti hu aap aapne choti si baat pe pp maafi nahi mangvayi...baat kus Aur he???

Mai....sahi kaha ...ye to sirf trailer tha... Movie aage aayegi...

Nirali...usne aesa kya kiya tha.????

Mai...mera past me muje dard Dene valo me ye bhi he... Aur vese tume sab pata he...

(vo sab purani bate yaad aane lagti he...jisse meri aankho me aanshu aa jate he..)

Nirali...(mere aanshu puste huye ) sorry Bhai..mene aapko rulaya...purani bato ko yaad karke...

Mai...tu q sorry bol rahi he...us dard se muje bahar tumne nikala he...tuje dekta hu to ____ ki yaad aati he...n vo muje dard me dekh sakti thi...n tu de sakti he...

Nirali...q ki aap worlds best brother ho....

Aese bate karte huye ghar pahunch jate he...

Aese hhi pura din nikal jata he...

Saam ko thakur bunglo me...

Sab dinner kar rahe the...

Baldev...varsha ab kesi ho???

Varsha...achi hu papa... Vese presentation kesa raha mom??? Ye contract Hume milega ki nahi???

Sima....acha raha...vese rahul explain bhut acha kiya...ab dekhte he kya hota he...rajput sir KO bhi pasand aaya..

Varsha...dekhna mom Hume hi milega...

Sima... Lekin ab business ki jimmedari ab unke pote rudra rajput ke hatho me he... Select Aur choice uski hogi...

Ye naam sunke priya Aur prem KO khansi aa jati he...

Baldev...Kay kar rahe ho bache sambhalkar khao???

Prem...fine dad....vese kya naam liya...???

Baldev....vese naam to mene bhi bhot suna he...choti umar me pura business khud chala raha he...prem tum q pus rahe ho...

Prem...vo mom college me..(fir vo sari baat batata he..) Mom muje to vo bhot ghamandi laga...

Sima...hoga sayad....chalo sodo hume kya???

Varsha....tu kya soch rahi he priya.???

Jab ye sab baat kar rahe the...priya tabse rudra ke bare me soch rahi thi..

Priya....(man me)...vo muje aese q dekh raha tha...jese janta ho...sayad??? Lekin uski aankho me mere liye besumaar pyar tha...lekin ye pyar alag tha..jese ladka aapni gf se karta he vesa nahi...uski aankho me mere liye fiqar thi..muje dekhke uski aankho me aanshu tak aa Gaye...lekin jatejate prem KO q gusse se ghur raha tha... Aakhir kaun ho tum??? Kya rista he mera tumse???
Vo Aur kus sochti ki varsha ki aavaz se hosh me aati he....

Priya....kya kaha didi???

Varsha....mene kaha dhyan kaha he tumhara...

Priya....kahi nahi didi... Bs college ke bare me soch rahi hu...

Fir sab dinner karke sab aapne-aapne room me chale jate he...

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Update 6

Kus Dino baad

Ek car full speed me jungle ke raste se ja rahi thi...usme do aurate bethi huyi thi..

Ye koi Aur nahi rajeshwari ji unki bahu Maya thi...

Maya drive kar rahi thi...Aur baju me rajeshwari ji bethi thi...

Fir car vaha main raste se ek kache raste par chalne lagti he.
Kus 5 km andar chalne ke baad ek ghar aage car rukti he...

Charo Aur security thi...har taraf guard the..
Dono aandar Jane lagti he..

Jese hi aandar aate he ek guard unke paas aate he...

Jo inka sab guards ka head tha..

Head...namste badi Malkin...

Rajeshwari ji..namste.. Chalo

Vo log aage chalke ek room me jate he...jaha vo room me koi budhi aurat so rahi thi...
Unke baju me ek ladki bhi khadi thi...

Rajeshwari ji....ab kesi he ye???

Ladki...baki sab to thik he...lekin abhi bhi coma me he...Aur usme koi improve bhi nahi ho rahi he...

Rajeshwari ji...hmmmm...(ankho me aanshu ke sath)

Fir sab bahar aa jate he us ladki ko sodkar...

Maya...khud ko sambhaliye maa...vo jaldi thik ho jayegi...

Rajeshwari ji...hmm mm

Kus der baad

Rajeshwari ji...uska kus pata chala...

Head...nahi badi Malkin ....uske baad vo kaha gaye iski koi jankari nahi...humne har jagah dhundh liya...sab orphan me bhi talash kiya...lekin vaha bhi nahi...

Rajeshwari ji....hospital me tapas kiya tha.

Head....ji Malkin lekin vaha bhi koi jankari nahi...

Maya...ek kaam Karo sab hospital me fir se jao 7 saal pahle koi doctor vaha kaam kar raha ho..ab vo doctor kahi Aur ho...usse Hume jankari mil sakti he..

Head....lekin ab kese???

Maya...tum pata Karo...us waqt vo puri tarah se thik nahi hua tha...to kisi doctor ne uska ilaj kiya hoga..

Head....ji choti Malkin...

Rajeshwari ji...jaha tak ho sake jaldi Karna... Qki vo hi he Jo bed pe he unko thik kar sakta he...

Head...ji...ek baat Aur he...

Rajeshwari ji...bolo

Head ....kus Aur log bhi he Jo unko dhundh rahe he...

Rajeshwari ji....kya???? Aur tum ab bata rahe ho???? Kaun he vo log????

Head....maaf kijiyega.... Unko Jo log dhundh rahe he vo aapki nati ke log he...

Rajeshwari ji....thik he unko logo KO unka kaam karne do...tum aapna kaam Karo...

Head...ji Malkin...

Fir ye log bahar aa jate he..

Car leke Maya Aur rajeshwari ji niklte he...

Car me...

Maya....maa varsha q dhundh rahi usko????

Rajeshwari ji....muje bhi nahi pata beti????
Dekte he aage kya hota he???

Maya....vo jarur milega....Aur vo jaha bhi hoga thik hoga...humara pyar hi uski raksha karega..

Rajeshwari ji...tumne thik kaha...

Aese baat karte huye ghar ki taraf chal deta he...

Ek jagah pe ek aadmi chair pe betha he...Aur uske face pe mask bhi tha.jisme se sirf uski aankhe Aur munh ka hoth vala hissa hi dikh raha tha...

Aur vo samne TV dekh raha tha...
Jisme ek insan aapni talvar se samne khade logo ko gajar-muli ki tarah kaat raha tha...
TV me maar rahe insan bhi mask lagaya hua tha....

Aur Jo aadmi chair pe tha..vo ye sab dekh raha tha... Aur vo jis room me tha uske Charo Aur gun ke sath log khade huye the...

Aur uske side me 6 log suit-tai me khade the sir zukakar...

(Ab us aadmi ko boss likhunga)

Boss fir newz Chanel laga deta he jisme mla Aur uske beto ki maut ki news dikha rahe the...

Fir TV band karke...

Un 6 logo ki Aur dekhkar

Boss....ab batao??? Ye mla Aur uske beto KO kisne Mara...

A1.....boss Hume lagta he ki ye uska hi kaam he...

Boss....Aur vo kese????

A1....boss mla ki maut huyi uski subah mla ke gundo ki lashe mili thi...Aur vaha usne aapna sign bhi soda tha...

Boss....( A2 ki Aur dekhkar ) tumne pata lagaya ye kaun hai????

A2.....(darte huye) nahi boss...uske bare me har jagah pus liya .....jante to sab he lekin usko koi nahi janta...

Boss....(gusse me ) kya mtlb he tumhara????

A2....boss vo aapki tarah hamesha mask me rahta he...aapne abhi TV pe bhi dekha...haivan ko jante sab he...lekin uski asli pahchan koi nahi janta...

Boss....hmm mm.... To dhundho usko ...usne aaj tak n Jane kitna nuksan kiya he...

Sab ek sath...ji boss

Aur kahke sab chale jate he...

Boss.....sodunga nahi tume....tumne mujse dusmani li he...ek baar hath lag jao fir me bataunga ki haivan kaun he????
Tum ya me???

Chalo ab chalte college jaha aaj pahla din he......

Pahla din ho Aur ranging n ho aesa to ho hi nahi sakta...

In college...

Priya Aur prem college me enter hote he aapni car se...

Inhe to ab har koi pahchante he ki commisoner ke bache he Aur unki mom bhot badi business woman he...

To panga Lena ka sawal hi nahi hota...

Dono aapne friends ke pass chale jate he..
Unse baat karne lagte he...

Tabhi hoti he humare hero ki entry ..

Aapni expensive car Koenigsegg CCXR Trevita me aapni bahan Nirali ke sath...
Har koi car ko dekh raha tha...

Qki itni expensive Aur costly (4-5 million $)
Car har kisike pass to hoti nahi...to ranging ke bare me koi sochega nahi..

Car park karke aapna hero Aur uski bahan Nirali niklte he...

Nirali KO bhi utarte dekh sab sochte he vo is ladke KO kese janti hogi. Kahi uska bf to nahi...

Lekin 2 logo ki bhot JAL rahi thi Nirali KO hero ke sath dekhkar...

Lekin panga kaun le...fir bhi ek ne himmat karke Nirali ke pass aaya...

Ladka...hi Nirali...

Nirali...(beman se) hi

Mai....(bich me) kya tum janti ho isko choti???

Nirali kus bolti usse pahle..

Ladka....hi i am rishi... Is college ka cs hu...mere dad bhi is state ke hm(home minister) he..

Uski bato me ghamand tha... Mere samne ghamand ....

Mai....mene tumse nahi pusa....Nirali tum janti ho ise???

Nirali.(man me) kya karu Bhai KO bataya ki ye mere pise pada he to ye gaya.vese bhi batadu ek torchar kam hoga Aur dusra iska haal dekh ke pise ho jayega...

Vo jab jus nahi bolti to

Mai...(firse ) mene pusa tum janti ho???

Nirali...ha Bhai... Kahta he ki mujse pyar karta he...

Mai....Aur tum????

Nirali kus bolti usse pahle vo ladka.

Rishi...nahi karegi jabardasti bhi karunga...

Vo kus aage bolta usse pahle uske munh pe aesa panch padta he aage ke do dant sahid ho jate he...Aur aapna munh pakadkar niche gir padta he...

Ye dekh ke sab shock me khade rahte he...
Jab vo thoda thik hota he..

Rishi...tune muje Mara ab dekh tera kya haal karta hu...(aapne dosto se) maro isko...

Jese hi vo sab aage badhne ko hote he ki kus log un ladko ke aage khade ho jate he..
Unko dekh me

Mai....tum sab yaha kya kar rahe ho????

Unme se ek....Hume aapke dadaji ne rakha he aapki security ke liye...

Mai....tum sab side hato ...aane do in he(bhut zor se)

Meri aavaz mere guard sab side hat jate he...

Un ladko ki bhi phat jati he...

Fir bhi kus ke pisvade me kide hote he...Aur vo bina maar khaye nahi mante....

Unme se 2 ladke himmat karke aate he aapne boss KO khush karne..

Jese hi pahla ladka aata he ...vo punch Marne ki kosis karta uska hath pakdke uske arm pe de Marta hu Mai.. Jisse uska hath vaha se fracture ho jata he..Aur dard se chillate huye beth jata he.. Dusra aapne pair se kick Marne KO hota he.to Mai uska pair pakdke uski jangh pe de Marta hu..uska pair bhi vaha se fracture ho jata he Aur vo to dard ke mare behos ho jate he...

Mai....(aapne guard se) inko hospital pahuncha do..Aur inke bare me pata karke inke maa-baap se muje Milne KO kahna...

Do guard unko leke chale jate he...

Mai rishi ke paas jata hu..Jo muje herani se dekh raha tha...

Mai...ha ab bol tera kya karu??? Yaha tu kus Karna chahta he...

Insab me pp Aur baki teacher bhi vaha aa Gaye...

Pp sidhe mere pass aakar..
Usne ab tak dekha nahi tha...

Pp....(muje pise se pakadkar) tum yaha gunda-gardi karne aate ho???? Pata he tumne kisko Mara he...ab tum sidhe suspend hoge...

Isse rishi muskarane lagta he... Uski muskan dekhkar muje hansi aa jati he...

Haste huye jese Mai pise mudta hu...to muje dekhke..

Pp.... I am sorry sir muje pata nahi tha aap he...plz muje maaf kar dijiye..

Mujse mafi magte dekh sab herani se pp ki Aur dekhne lagte he...

Sab car dekh ke smj Gaye the ki koi bade baap ki aulad he...lekin mafi magne se sab sochte he powerful bhi bhot he...

Mai....uske kan me ... Chup chap office me ja.. Tuje baad me dekhta hu...

Mai....rishi se...ab soch smjke panga Lena... Smje

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Pp aapne office me betha hua tha..Aur bhot tnsn me tha.

Ki ab kya hoga??? Pata nahi ab muje kya karna hoga???

Tabhi phone ki ring bajti he..

Pp....hello kaun????

Samne se....HM bol raha hu...

Pp....ji sir boliye..

HM....ye me kya sun raha hu.. Ki ek ladke ne mere beto KO Mara....tum usko niklane ki jagah mafi mang rahe the...abhi ke abhi suspend Karo...

Pp... Sorry sir me nahi kar sakta..

HM...tum jante ho...isse tumhare sath kya hoga????

Pp....mere sath Jo hoga vo hoga....lekin aapne uske sath kus kiya to aapke sath kya hoga vo aap soch nahi sakte...

HM....kaun he vo??? Jo mera bura kar sakta he???

Pp....Rudra Rajput... Rajput empire ka malik...

HM....what????

Hm turant phone rakh deta he...

Pp...(man me) he bhagvan bacha Lena muje...

HM ke ghar..

Rishi...kya hua dad???? Aap tnsn me q he???

HM....gadhe ki aulad...tuje pata he kaun he vo????kya jarurat thi usse ulzne ki????

Rishi....baat kya dad...???

HM....rajput empire ka malik he vo...Aur kal Jake mafi mang Lena usse...

Rishi...me nahi mafi mangunga..

HM....tu nahi tera baap bhi mafi mangega..

Rishi...ha to aap mafi mangiye..

HM....tuje majak lagta he...agar mafi n mangi to tu soch bhi nahi sakta kya hoga humara...
Isliye kal Jake chupchap mafi mang Lena...varna kalse tera ghar aana band...

Aur ye kahke vo chala jata he..

Aur rishi bhi sochta rahta he kya karu.???

Idhar Mai Aur Nirali ek class pura hote hi nikal jate he ghar ki Aur...

Mai thoda tnsn me tha...

Jise Nirali jan jati he...

Nirali...kya hua Bhai??? Aap tnsn me ho???

Mai..sorry choti...mene us ladke ko Mara tuje bina puse??? Kus bhi ho muje teri raay jaani chahiye thi...

Nirali...Kya Bhai is baat pe tnsn ho..aap na marte usko to muje bura lagta..

Mai...mtlb

Nirali...vo kabse mere pise pada he...kahta he ki pyar karta he mujse..

Mai...tum

Nirali...aapko lagta he aese ladke se pyar karungi.. Is maar padi he to vo bhi mera Pisa sod dega...

Mai...(gusse me) kaun he vo dusra?? Jo tuje paresan karta he???

Nirali...cool Bhai...kya hamesa gusse me rahte ho...ab to vo meri Aur dekhega bhi nahi..

Mai...hmmm

Ab vapas college canteen

Yaha prem Aur priya aapne dosto ke paas Bethe the Aur baat kar rahe the...

Inke dost he...

Rubi...priya ki dost he

Mayank...Rubi ka bf

Varun....Rubi ka Bhai...

Inke roll kahani me kam he isliye jyada intro nahi diya...(sirf ek character ko sod...uska full intro baad me dunga)

Varun...vese aaj maza aa gaya...

Prem...Aur vo kese???

Varun...tuje nahi pata..lekin rishi sabko bhot paresan karta tha...ab kabhi kisiko paresan nahi karega...

Rubi...ha bande me dam to tha...kya mara he unko..

Mayank...kahi pasand nahi aa gaya???? Hehehehe

Rubi...what rubbish... Sirf uski tarif kar rahi hu...

Varun...Aur powerful bhi lagta he...dekha nahi kese pp mafi mang raha tha...

Rubi...jiske liye Mara vo ladki kaun thi???

Mayank....uski gf hogi??

Prem(turant)....nahi aesa nahi he...

Sab usko dekhne lagte he...

Jo ab tak chup thi..

Priya...MATLAB

Prem...bs muje aesa lagta he isliye bola...

Varun...vese tune sahi kaha prem...vo uski bahan he...

Priya...vo tuje kese pata???

Varun...mene suna tha...vo usko choti kah raha tha...bhot ladke aapne se choti bahan ko choti kahta he...

Bs aese hi inki baat chal rahi thi...

Canteen me hi ek Aur table PS

L1...yar pawan kya soch rahe ho????

Jiha dosto pawan bhi isi college me he...

Pawan...kus nahi yaar...

L2...kya kus nahi...aaj ki subah bare me soch rahe ho???

Pawan...ha yaar...

L3...ha ye nirali se ab dur rahna hi padega....

Pawan...kabhi nahi...ji ek baar muje pasand aa Jaye ...USko har hal me pana hi meri jid hoti he...

L4....dimag se soch..hm ka beta tha samne..
Fir bhi pp us ladke se mafi mang raha tha..mtlb vo HM se bhi powerful he...

L1...powerful he mtlb kabhi kus kiya to ye baat Teri dadi tak pahunch gayi to kya hoga tera???

Pawan...baat to Teri sahi he... Vese vo ladke Aur Nirali me riata kya he?¿?

L1....koi bhi ho ab kya fark padta he..??

Pawan...tum pata to Karo....

L2...sochle...fir pastana padega..

Pawan...me kisi KO itni aasani se nahi sodta.. Tum sab pata Karo..bina kisi ki najar me aaye...

L1...chalo pata chal jayega..fir kya karoge.??

Pawan...uske aadhar pe plan banunga..

Yaha ab kus nahi inko baat karne do..hum chalte he hospital..

In hospital

Un ladko ka ilaj chal raha tha...Aur bahar unke parents khade the...

Mai vaha Jake Dr office me jata hu...

Mai...ab kesi tabiyat he unki...

Dr....(upar dekh ke) sir aap yaha??

Mai...mene pusa un ladko ki tabiyat kesi he???

Dr....thik he...lekin ek ka hath fracture he Aur dusre ka pair..

Mai....hmmm ..thik ho sakte he...

Dr....ha kus waqt lagega lekin thik ho jayegi...

Mai...OK Dr. Aap jayiye unke ristedaro ko anndar bhejiye... Muje unse baat karni he...

Dr....thik he...

Dr bahar Jake unke parents se..

Dr...aap un ladko ke ristedar he...

L1 ka baap...ha ji...

Dr....aap sab aandar aayiye..

Sab aandar aate he...

Mai..(Dr ki Aur dekhkar)... Inse koi pese mat lena ilaj ke...

Sab muje acharaj se dekhte he...

L1 ki maa....sukriya beta...humare bacho ka ilaj karvane ke liye...

Mai....unki ye halat mene ki he...

Sab sunke San ho jate he..

L2 ka baap ....mtlb

Mai....mene hi in dono ko Mara he...

L1 ka baap...(gusse me) Aur ab ilaj karvake kya sabit Karna chahte ho??

Mai....dekhiye Mai kus sabit nahi Karna chahta..

L2 ka baap...to humare bacho ko Mara q???? Abhi police ko bulata hu..

Mai...dekhihye Mari baat suniye..

Mari baat katkar

L1 ka baap...ab Jo bhi kahna police ko kahna...

Ab muje bhi gussa aane laga tha...

Mai...(gusse me) kya bola sale police ko bulayega....kute bula police ko muje pakdna to dur vo muje 6u bhi nahi sakte.. Teri hesiyat kya he sale mere samne bhikhari hu tu...pyar se baat kar raha hu to bole hi ja raha he sala...mujse koi unchi awaz me baat nahi karta Aur kute tu mujse unchi aavaz me baat kar raha he...ab smja tumhare ladke kese bigde jinke baap hi aese ho unme kaha se sanskar hoga...

Muje gusse me meri unchi aavaz se sab dar Gaye the..

Thodi der baad khudko relax karke unki Mao ki Aur dekhkar.

Mai...sorry aunty ji...kus jyada bol gaya...lekin koi muje unchi avaz me baat kare muje pasand nahi...

L1 ki maa...humare bacho KO q Mara??? Yahi batado...

Mai...(ek ladki side me thi) ye aapki beti he???

L2 KO maa...tum q pus rahe ho??? Ye meri beti he?.?

Mai....aunty ghabharayi mat...pus isliye raha hu ki....aapki beti ko koi sede to aapke bete ko kya Karna chahiye..

L2 ki maa....usko smjana chahiye n smje to fir ek Bhai ko aapni bahan ki hifajat karni chahiye aese logo she..

Mai....Mai bhi vahi kar raha tha..

L1 ki maa...mtlb..

Mai....Jo ladka meri bahan ko sedta tha uska support kar rahe the aapke bache...

L2 ki maa...nahi humare bache aesa nahi kar sakte...

Mai...to muje koi saukh nahi tha in logo ko Marne ka...nahi meri koi dusmani he inse.. Ye us HM ke bete ke sath milkar dusre ladke ko paresan Karna ladkiyo ko sedna yahi harkate karte he..yakin nahi to college me jakar check karlo...tab aapko pata chalega aapne ladko ke bare me...koi acha nahi kahega...

Ye sunke unki un ladko ki maa Rone lagti he...

Mai...dekhiye aunty ji mera aapko rulane ka koi irada nahi tha...lekin koi meri bahan ko kus kahe me bardast nahi kar sakta...Mai bada hu fir bhi jab bimar hota hu to ek maa ki tarah mera khyal rakhti he..uski buri najar se dekhe to me bardast nahi kar sakta to ye to harroj use sedte the...

L2 ki maa...nahi beta usme tumhari koi galti nahi...me bhi ek ladki ki maa hu smj sakti hu...

Mai....Mai bhi yahi chahta hu aap smj Jaye Aur aapne bacho KO bhi smjayiye... Aese logo ka sath sod de...varna kal aapke ghar aapke aapki beti ko bhi sodege nahi...aese kamine log kisi ke sage nahi hote...

L1 ki maa...sukriya beta... Tumhari jagah koi Aur hota to ulta hum sabko paresan karta...lekin tumne Hume smjaya...

Mai....koi baat nahi aunty...Mai sirf itna kahta hu ki aapne bacho pe najar rakho...galat raste pe ja rahe ho to smjao n smje to maar se smjao...

Jo ab tak sant thi..

Ladki...thank you bhaiya...

Mai muskurake

Mai...Aur vo kis liye gudiya...

Ladki....mere Bhai ka ilaj karvane ke liye..varna itna pesa hum kabhi n de sakte...aapne unki galti hone par bhi unka ilaj karva rahe ho??? Mere papa ne aapko galat bola fir bhi aapne Hume smjaya...

Mai....aapke liye kus bhi gudiya...kabhi bhi aapko.prblm ho to muje yaad Karna aapka ye Bhai hazar ho jayega..

Ladki...thank u once again... And didi se kahna ki mere bhaio KO maaf karde...

Mai...jarur gudiya..

Mai vaha se nikal jata hu..

L1 ka baap...(Dr se).vese ye he kaun???

Dr....rajput empire ka malik rudra rajput...ache ke liye ache buro ke liye bure...ye hospital bhi unka hi he...

L2 ka baap...(darte huye) kya ye rudra rajput he???

Dr...ha yahi he...kismat vale he aapke bache...
Varna unki bahan ko sedne vala bachta nahi... Isi hospital ke ek dr ne 3 saal pahle unki bahan ko seda tha...aaj bhi vo Dr coma me he...

Yaha to aese baat chalti rahegi...

Aagle din college me...

Mai Aur Nirali jese hi car se utre to aaj sab humko hi dekh rahe the...

Aese classes hot rahe..Aur break time me hum dono canteen me Bethe the.. Canteen me bhi sab dekh rahe the...sab ladkiya muje hi dekh rahi thi.Aur mere bare me baat kar rahe thi..

Jo yaha likhna fijul he..

Aese hi 20 din ho gaya tha...
Aur ye ek mahina santi thi..

Aaj kus bura hone vala tha..

Ab vo kya vo agle update me pata chalega..

Nice update

 

[Bilal jan]

Update 8

Rajput mansion...

Subah sab breakfast kar rahe the...

Dadu...to kesi chal rahi he tumhari study..???

Nirali...dadu meri to achi chal rahi he...Bhai Ki kesi chal rahi he vo inko pata???

Mai....chup bandariya dadu meri bhi achi chal rahi he...

Nirali..dadu isne muje bandar kaha...

Dadu...tu q bura manti he..vo khud bandar he isliye sab ise bandar lagte he...

Is baat pe dono hasne lagte he...

Mai...hihihihi not funny... Jo aese has rahe ho???

Dadu...vese college me koi ladki pasand ki ya nahi??.

Mai....muje koi saukh nahi gf banane ka...

Dadu....sharam kar...Teri umar me meri 2 gf thi...Aur tu ek bhi pata nahi paya...

Mai....acha thik he ....bana lunga... Lekin aesi ladki to honi chahiye Jo muje pasand aaye...

Nirali...sari college ki ladkiya tum par lattu he...Aur tumhe line deti he.. Unme se koi pasand kar lo...

Mai....what???? No never... Aur jab koi pasand aayegi to bata dunga...lekin pahle sadi teri hogi...

Nirali...Mai to tab jaungi is ghar se jab is ghar me meri bhabhi aayegi...aaye meri shadi karane vale..

Dadu... Acha ab ladna band karo.. Suno rudra....

Mai...ji dadu..

Dadu.. aaj tum college mat Jana

Mai...lekin q??

Dadu...qki aaj tuje office Jana he...

Mai...q koi khash vajah???

Dadu...ha aaj thakur industry ki MD ki beti aane vali he... Humne Jo tender unko diya he usko aaj final Karna he..tum agreement padh kar sign kar Dena...

Mai....OK dadu.... Aur jus

Dadu...nahi bs itna hi...

Mai....(man me) chalo is bahane miss varsha se mil lunga... Suruaat to isse hi karni he.. Aaj dekh bhi lunga...miss varsha intzar Karo aapni barbadi ka...

Vahi kus log plan kar rahe the...

( 2 days before)

L1...lo pawan ye rahi uski puri history..

Pawan...kya he jaldi batao???

L2....naam he uska rudra rajput ....maa-baap ki accident me maut ho chuki he...uske dadaji naam he raguveer rajput... Raghuveer rajput ke isare pe sarkar tak badal jati he...unka Sara business rudra hi sambhal raha he.,dimag ka tej he...Nirali raghuveer ji ke khash aadmi raghu ki beti he... Raghuveer ji usko rudra jitna hi pyar karte he.. Rudra bhot ghamandi he lekin ache logo ke liye acha he..rudra sabse jyada pyar Nirali se karta he.. Ek baar ek Dr ne nirali KO seda tha..Jo us waqt ke mla ka ladka tha... Rudra ne us ladke itna Mara tha ki vo Dr aaj bhi coma me he.. Jab us mla ko pata chala ki uske bete ko rudra ne Mara he to usne rudra ko Marne ki kosis ki jisme rudra Bach gaya.. Jab Nirali ke pita ko pata chala ki rudra par humla karvane vala mla he to usko bich bazaar me usko goli Mari ...Aur kisi ne kus nahi kiya .... Yaha tak ki police arrest bhi nahi kiya tha...

Pawan....ohhh mtlb ye to bhot khatar nakh he...

L3....abhi bhi kahta hu pawan sod de.. Humne ye kiya to humara bhot bura haal hoga..

Pawan...nahi itni asani se nahi sod sakta..

L1... Agar Teri dadi ko pata chala to... Rudra baad me mare ga tuje Teri dadi pahle maregi...

Pawan...kisi KO kus pata nahi chale ga....

L2... Kya tere pass koi plan he...

Pawan...ha jab history bata rahe the tabhi mene plan bana liya tha..

L3...kya plan he ????

Pawan... To suno..(fir vo plan bata deta he Aur un sabko smja bhi deta he kya karna he..)

Present...

Mai office ke liye nikal jata hu.. Aur Nirali college ke liye...

Nirali scooty leke ja rahi thi aapni dhun me
Bich 1 km tak rasta sum sam hota he ...
Usi raste pe abhi thidi hi aage aayi thi ki 2 car achanak uske samne aake khadi ho jati he.. Aur us me se 8 naqab dhari log bahar aate he... Is se nirali dar jati he... Us me se 2 log aake Nirali ko pakad ne badhte he...

Nirali...kaun ho tum log??? Aur kya chahiye...???

Lekin koi kus nahi bolta ...

Aur vo dono Nirali ko pakad lete he...

Nirali bhut kosis karti chutne ki..

Nirali....tum jante nahi tumne kis pe hath lagaya he..plz help bachaaooooo

Lekin koi awaz nahi sun pa raha tha.. Qki vaha koi tha hi nahi...

Nirali..sodo muje ...varna mare jaoge????

Lekin sab an suna karke us KO chloroform se behosh karke car me dalte he..

Cars vaha se chal deti he...

Idhar Mai abhi office pahincha hi tha ki mera phone bajne lagta he...

Mai....hello

Samne se...sir Nirali mam kidnap ho chuki he...

Mai..what???? Aur tum log kya kar rahe the jakh mar rahe the... Us ki hifazat Karna tum logo ki jimmedari thi...

Samne se....sorry sir hum traffic signal me phas Gaye Aur vo aage nikal gayi... Jab aage Jake dekha to unki scooty bich road pe thi... Aur mam kahi dikhayi nahi de rahi thi.. Aur vaha car ke pahiye ke Nisan the...

Mai.... Tum logo KO bad me dekhta hu..malik kaha he.???

Samne se humne unhe bata diya he...

Mai.... Hmm

Ye call cut karke Mai ek call karta hu...

Mai....hello malik

Malik... Ha sir me aapna kaam hi kar raha hu...

Mai....kaha he vo????

Malik.... Sir vo log city se bahar ki Aur ja rahe he...

Mai....hmm tum un KO track karte raho.... Aur muje batate raho vo kaha ja rahe he...Jo bhi aaj unki maut tay he...

Malik.... Ji sir...

Malik se baat karke call cut karta hu.. Aur humare Manager ko call karta hu...

Manager... Hello sir aap aaye nahi meeting start karni he...

Mai...suno manager Mai nahi aa paunga... Tum sab finale kardo or file ghar pe bhijwa Dena.. Mai sign kar dunga...

Manager.... Lekin aap aate to

Us ki baat kat kar

Mai....jitna kaha he utna Karo smje...(gusse me)

Manager... I am sorry sir... Me kar dunga...

Mai vaha se car ko full speed me bhaga raha tha.. Jese jese malik interaction de raha vese aage badh raha tha...

Aur udhar vo log city se bahar ke jungle me ek khanadr me cars rok ke Nirali leke aandar jate he...

Andar ek chair pe Nirali ko bandh dete he... Sayad ye un logo ka Adda tha.. Fir un me se ek Jo inka leader tha vo kisiko call karta he..

Leader....hello sir kaam ho gaya... Ladki humare pass he...

Samne se... OK khyal rakhna hum kal aayenge... Tab tak uska khyal rakho...

Leader ...OK sir..

Un gundo me se..

G1.... Bhai vese ladki mast he... Kaho to ras chakh le...

G2....ha Bhai... Aesi maal har roj hath nahi aati..

Leader....chup Karo salo... Us KO 6u na bhi nahi.. Mai us room me ja raha hu.. Dhyan rakhna...

G3...thik he Bhai...

Leader ke room me Jane ke baad..

G1 Nirali ki Aur ja raha tha...us KO jata dekh

G3...ruk jao... Kya kar rahe ho??? Bhai humari jaan le lenge...

G1....jyada kus nahi karenge...sirf upar se maze lenge.. Bhai KO pata bhi nahi chale ga .

G2....sahi he... Vese bhi Bhai abhi bahar nahi aayenge.. To kus maza kar lete he...

Ab Nirali KO bhi hosh aane lagta he...

G3...dekho us ko bhi hosh aa raha he... Suoge to chilayegi jisse Bhai KO pata chal Jaye ga...

Fir bhi g1 Aur g2 Nirali ki Aur badh rahe the...

Nirali un KO aage badhte dekh dar jati he..aur abhi bhi us KO chloroform ka nasha tha...

Nirali...dekho ruk jao.. Muje suna mat varna bhot bura hoga..

G1... Koi baat nahi Jane man tere liye Marne KO bhi taiyar he..(ab usko kya pata maut to aayi gayi he us ki)

Nirali...sayad mere bare me jante nahi.. Mera Bhai rudra tum me se kisiko nahi sodega... Vo pahunch ta hi hoga...

G2... Koi nahi tere bhai KO bhi dekh lenge...

Aur ye bolkar jese hi G2 Nirali ko 6une vala tha tabhi

Abhi ke liye itnahi..
Baki agle update me

Mast update

 

[Bilal jan]

Update 9

G2 jese hi 6u ne ko hota he tabhi ek goli chalti he Aur G2 chikh ke sath niche beth jata he...

Hua kus aesa tha ki..

Kus der Pahle.

Mai jese jese malik interaction de raha tha vese car full speed me chala raha tha...

Tabhi

Malik...ab sir aage se right turn Lena he...

Mai car slow kar deta hu... Thoda aage ek kachha rasta tha. Aur vaha car ke pahiye ke Nisan dekh rahe the...

Mai...malik ye rasta jungle me jata he...

Malik...sir us raste pe aage jayiye 1 km dur vo log ruke huye he...Aur humare guards bhi aapke pass pahunch rahe he...

Mai...OK malik

To chaliye aapko batata hu malik ne kis tarah unko dhundho...

To jese Nirali ke security vaha pahunchi unhone malik ko call kar diya Aur sab bata diya..malik ne us jagah Nirali ke ass-pass jitne phone track huye unko track karne laga ... Jisme 4 phone no bhot der se us jagah khade the..jab nirali vaha pahunchi uske kus der baad nirali ka phone to vahi rah gaya lekin vo 4 no ki loctaion aage badhti rahi...jisse us KO un logo ki jagah ke bare me pata chala...

Ab smj Gaye....

To ab chalte he vaha jaha kahani KO 6oda tha..vahi se suru karte he...

Jese hi Mai khandar me aandar gaya...he vahi samay tha jab G2 bolne ke baad aage badh raha tha..

Uski bato se hi muje gussa aane laga tha...Aur jese hi vo 6une KO hua mene uske pair pe goli chaladi...

Goli Aur G2 ki chikhne ki aavaz se sab dar Gaye Aur pise dekhne lage jaha Mai hatho me gun liye khada tha...

Dar to sab Gaye the lekin fir bhi dar KO kabu me rakh

G1...kaun he be tu??? Aa to gaya he lekin jinda nahi bachega...

Nirali...(muje dekhkar)bhai (Aur ro rahi thi)

Mai...(gusse me) tum logo ne aapni jindgi ki bhot badi galti kardi... Jis bahan ki aankho me aanshu nahi dekhna chahta aaj vo ro rahi he...sirf tum logo ki vajah se...ab yaha sirf maut hogi...

G3...ohhh to tu iska Bhai...yaha aa to Gaye ho lekin zinda vapas jaoge nahi...

G1... Aur himmat he to gun faik kar aa..fir dekh kya hota he tere sath...

Us ki baat sunkar gun aapne pise rakh deta hu...

Mai...chalo ab gun rakhdi aa jao..

G1.... (G7 Aur G8 ki Aur dekhkar) jao re is bache KO sabak sikhao...

Jese hi G7 mere pass aaya vese hi us ki chest me aapna ek mukka mar deta hu...vo vahi khade huye side me gir jata he jo mar gaya tha to vo punch marte hi ho gaya tha... Is KO mar kar Mai G8 ke pass pahunch jata hu..Jo aankhe fadkar G 7 ki Aur dekh raha tha.. Vo kus karta usse pahle Mai G8 ke munh pe ek punch Marta hu.. Jiska asar uske dimag pe hota he Aur vo on the spot mar jata he... Ab sab gunde satark ho jate he..

Fir G5 Aur G6 meri Aur badhte he.. G5 muje paunch Marne ki kosis karta he to us ka hath pakad leta hu aapne hath se usi waqt G6 aapne pair se muje kick Marne ki kosis karta he.. To dusre hath se uska pair pakad leta hu... Fir Mai G5 KO us hath se ghumakar jamin pe patak deta hu Aur G6 KO usi hath se us ke pair ke sath hawa me utha kar patak deta hu...jese hi vo jamin pe girte he dono hath se punch bana kar dono ke chest me mar deta hu Aur unki bhi maut ho jati he...

Aur ab G3 Aur G4 aate he Mai aage badhke G3 ke main part pe aapni kick mar deta hu vo chillate huye aapne main part ko pakdke niche beth jata he...Aur G4 kus Aur smj pata usse pahle me aapni kick se us ki gardan me vaar kar deta hu...jisse kaaaddddd ki avaz ke sath us ki grdn tut jati Aur maut ho jati he..ab G3 ki Aur jakar uske chest me dil vali jagah pe punch maar deta hu...jisse us ki maut ho jati he...

Lekin in sab me mera dhyan G1 se hat gaya tha... Vo aapni gun nikal kar meri pith pe fire karne vala hota he tabhi ek goli chalti he...

Aur
Nirali.... Bhaiyaaaaaa

Lekin goli muje nahi G1 ko lagi thi uske hath par... Vo goli mere guards ne chalayi thi G1 ke hath par jisse uske hath se gun sut jati he Aur vo aapna hath pakad kar chillane lagta he...

Mere sare guards aandar aa jate he...Aur vo ek aadmi ko bhi pakad kar la rahe the...

Mai Nirali ki Aur jata hu us ko khol deta hu...
Jese vo aazad hoti he vo mere gale lagke rone lagti he...

Mai....chup hoja choti... Tuje kus nahi hua... Tu thik he...

Nirali...(rote huye) Bhai agar thodi Aur der ho jati to

Us ki baat katkar

Mai....jab tak Mai hu tuje kus nahi ho sakta... Tera Bhai zinda he abhi....

Guards Ki Aur dekhkar

Mai....ise le jao... Bahar car me bithao

Nirali....nahi Bhai me kahi nahi jaungi... Aapke sath hi rahungi...

Mai....thik he lekin bahar car me Jake betho... Mai abhi aata hu...

Fir Nirali bahar chali jati he...

Mai....(us aadmi ki Aur) ye kaun he...

Guard1.... Sir jab hum aa rahe the tab bhag raha tha...isliye is KO pakad liya...

Mai..kaun ho tum???? Mene tume kahi dekha he...

Ye koi nahi in sabka leader tha... Jab me sabko maar raha tha..tab vo muje dekhke bhag jata he vaha se..

Mai....ha yaad aaya.. Tu to vo purani basti ka bhai he...to tune meri bahan KO kidnap kiya tha...sale tuje mene sudharne ka ek mauka diya Aur tune meri bahan KO kidnap kiya...

Leader....Bhai muje maaf kar do....muje nahi pata tha vo aapki bahan he varna me ye kaam karta hi nahi...

Mai...mtlb tuje pese mile the...

Leader....ji Bhai...us ladke ne muje photo dekar pese diye the...

Mai....kaun tha vo???? Tum pahchante ho us KO????

Leader.....naam to nahi janta...lekin face pahchan lunga.... Koi 19-20 saal ka ladka tha...

Mai....mtlb vo koi student hoga... Ho n ho ye HM ka beta hi hoga...

Guard2....sir in dono ka kya Karna he????

Mai....jinda jala do salo KO... Meri bahan ko buri nazar se dekhte he...

G1....plz sir muje maaf kar dijiye...

G2....aaj ke baad kisi ko buri najar se nahi dekhenge...

G1....Aur ye kaam bhi sod denge...

Mai.. Sod deta agar meri bahan par buri najar n dalte..

Guards ki Aur dekhkar

Mai....petrol dal kar jala do...

Mere kahte hi mere guards ne un par petrol dal diya...vo rahem ki bhikh mang rahe the lekin muje koi fark nahi pad raha tha... Mene lighter ko jalake unki Aur faik diya.. Jisse turant vo jalne lage..

Charo Aur unki chikhe gujne lagti he.. Aakhir me unki chikhe band ho jati he Aur vo JAL kar khak ho jate he..bachti he to sirf haddiya...

Mai....(guards se) is KO leke college pahuncho me vahi aa raha hu...Jo bhi ho us ko jab tak Mai nahi aata kus mat Karna...

Guard1....ji sir

Guards us aadmi KO leke nikal jate he...
Aur Mai Nirali KO leke nikal jata hu...

Vo abhi bhi Dari huyi thi...Mai sochta hu pahle iska mud thik karta hu...

Mai.....choti chalo sopping karte he... Tumhara mud bhi fresh ho Jaye ga....

Nirali....hmm mm

Kaun hoga vo jisne leader KO pese diye??????

Uska jawab aagle update me...

Aane vale update me aapko pata chal Jaye ga heroine kaun he???

Nice update

 

[Bilal jan]

Update 10

Mai aur nirali mall me jate he...

Mai....jao tum shopping karo...aur khud ko relex karo...

Nirali... I much better bhai...

Mai....lekin mai kah raha hu.. Jao shopping karo...vese bhi tumhe taklif nahi hogi..sab jante he... Aur mai bhi thodi der me join karta hu tumhe...

Nirali...ok bhai

Nirali chali jati he aur sath me secority bhi...

Mai abhi palta hi tha ki. Ek ladki se takkar ho gayi aur vo gir gayi...

Abhi mene face nahi dekha tha...

Mai...(hath badhakar) i am sorry...

Ladki...it's ok ...

Kahke jese hi face upar karti he mai dekta hi rah jata hu..usko dekh ke mere heart ki dhadkan dugni raftar se chalne lagta he..sab kus slow motion me ho jata he.. Mall me itni avaz hoti he.. Lekin muje kus sunayi nahi de raha tha.. Vo ladki ki kus bol rahi thi... Lekin Mai bs us ki aankho me kho gaya tha.. Aur us ke un gulabi hoth ki thartharahat hi dekh raha tha..

Pata nahi usi waqt mere phone ghanti baji...aaj muje phone par bhi gussa aa raha tha ki sala galat waqt pe baj gaya...

Call risive karke

Mai...hello kaun???

Samne se...kaun kya??? Tera Dada bol raha hu..

Mai...sorry dadu... Vo number nahi dekha tha...

Dadu.. Tera dhyan kidhar he.. Jo no nahi dekha...

Mai...ab mafi to mang li.. Bolo bhi ab...

Dadu...ha vo tu office q nahi gaya...

Mai... Vo dadu ghar aake batata hu...

Dadu...OK

Us ke baad call cut kar deta hu.. Jab samne dekhta hu to vo ladki kahi nahi thi...mere Charo Aur Mai dekhta hu.lekin kahi nahi dikhayi deti...

Mai...(man me) koi baat nahi dhundh lunga tumhe... Chahe koi bhi ho tum...??

Mai manager ki office me jata hu...
Thoda office work karta hu yahi koi 5 minute hi...Mai jese hi door khol ke bahar nikla fir se takra gaya... Ye vahi ladki thi... Jisse me ek baar takra chuka tha...

Mai... I am sorry..(aapne upar control karte huye)

Ladki....tum .??? Fir se muje takkar Mari..

Mai....galti aapki he .. Fir bhi sorry bol raha hu...

Ladki...(us KO bhi pata tha dono baar us ki galti thi.) Galti meri he isliye sorry bol rahi hu...

Mai...it's OK.. Vese aapka naam jaan sakta hu...

Ladki...Aur tumko q batau??? Vese bhi me anjan logo se baat nahi karti...

Mai....to thik he aaj agar tisri baar takrayi to aapko naam bhi batana hoga Aur dosti bhi karni hogi...

Ladki... Mai abhi nikal rahi hu... Isliye ye khawab dekhna sod do..

Mai...aaj aap mujse jarur takrayegi....

Ladki...mtlb tum Jan buzkar takroge..

Mai....dono baar aapki galti thi.. Agli baar bhi aapki galti hogi....agar takra Gaye to aapko humse dosti karni hogi???

Ladki...dekhte he...(man me) ajib ladka he...lekin muje kya ho jata he use dekh ke...mere dil ki dhadkan q badh jati he??? Jab ki me kisi se pyar karti hu...nahi me kisi Aur se pyar kar sakti ....me sirf us ki hu...

Aese hi vo sochte huye ja rahi thi ki mall ke ise-cream parler pe najar jati he...

Ladki..(man me).. Chalo ek ice cream kha leti hu...

Jese hi vo ladki ice cream ki shop pe Jane ko hoti he tabhi us ka pair slip ho jata he... Aur aage ja rahe ladke ke upar gir jati he..

Ladki...Bach gayi...varna gayi thi...

Jiske upar vo giri thi vo koi Aur nahi Mai tha...

Mai...lekin mera kachumbar bana diya...

Meri aavaz sunke vo meri Aur dekhti he...

Ladki...fir se tum???

Mai....ab kya kare...??? Aap humara Pisa hi nahi sod rahi...

Ladki...me tumhara Pisa q karungi.????

Mai...yaad kijiye suru se...aapne hi har bar muje takkar Mari he...

Ladki....sorry & tnx

Mai....u wlcm... Ab to aapko dosti karni padegi humse...

Ladki... Pahle ice cream... Vo khate huye baat karenge...

Shop pe pahunch kar...

Dono...(ek sath)... Butterscotch

Dono ekdusre ki Aur dekhte he...

Fir aapni-aapni ice cream lekar ek table pe beth jate he...

Ladki....aapko bhi butterscotch pasand he...

Mai...ha bachpan se Aur aapko...

Ladki...muje bhi... Qki ye mere kisi aapne ko bhot pasand he...

Mai...some one special????

Ladki... Ha bhut special....

Aese bate karte ice cream bhi khtam ho gaya...

Mai....vese hi mera naam rudra he... Ek hath uski Aur badkar

Vo mere hath se aapna hath milakar...

Ladki....mera naam varsha he...

Ye naam sunke kus purani yade yaad aane lagi thi...

Varsha... Kya hua????

Mai....kus nahi... Aapka naam bhot pyara he...

Varsha....tnx....

Mai...ab kab milogi????

Varsha.... Har roj subah 6 baje _____ garden me jogging karne jati hu aap bhi aa jayiyega...

Tabhi Nirali vaha aa jati he...

Nirali...Bhai me vaha aapka intzaar kar rahi thi..Aur aap yaha khade he...

Mai...sorry choti...maaf karde... Any way(varsha se) meet my sister Nirali & (Nirali se) she is varsha my new frnd....

Dono ek dusre ko hi bolte he Aur hath milate he....

Varsha...OK by rudra & Nirali .... (Rudra se) kal milte he...

Mai.syor

Vo chali jati he... Nirali muje dekh rahi thi...

Mai...aese kya dekh rahi he???

Nirali....aapke chahere ki khushi...

Mai...jesa tu soch rahi he vesa kus nahi he...

Vo kus bolti us se pahle mere phone ki ring bajti he...

Mai...ha bolo

Samne se...sir abhi break time he Aur vo ladka canteen me betha he...

Mai....bs 5 minute me pahunch raha hu...

Mai.... Tum ghar jao Mai collage ja raha hu.. Vaha se ghar aa jaunga...

(Vese bhi sab zamele me 2:30 hours bit chuka tha)

Nirali....OK Bhai..

Vo nikal jati he aapni security ke sath Aur Mai nikal jata hu college...

College me pahunch kar ...

Mai....kaun he vo???

Aadmi...vahi nili shirt vala...

Mai turant Jake uso neck se pakdke ground me lata hu...Aur ek gaal pe de deta hu... Jisse us KO din me bhi tare dikhne lagte he..
Aur vo gir jata he...Aur lato se Marne lagta hu...aese achanak hone se sab dar Gaye the... Soch rahe the ki Mai us ladke KO q maar raha hu...

Mai...sale tune meri bahan KO kidnap karvaya.. Teri himmat kese huyi ye sab karne ki sale...bol q karvaya tha kidnap???

Ladka...dard se mene to us ke kahne pe kiya tha...

Mai...kaun????

Ladka...ek Aur ungli karta he Aur vaha pawan khada tha...

Mai is ladke KO sodkar us ki Aur badhne lagta hu... To vo vaha se bhagne ki kosis karta he...

Vo aage jata us se pahle mere guards us ka rasta rok lete he ...

Mai us ke pass Jake us KO ghumakar thappad pe thappad Marne lagta hu..jisse us ke hoth phat jate he.. Jese hi us se sodta hu vo niche gir jata he.. Abhi mene 2 hi laat Mari thi ke....

Koi muje pise ghumata he vo Aur vo muje thappad Marne ki kosis karta he... Lekin Mai us ka hath pakadkar us ko Marne ko hota hu lekin uska face dekh ke hath rok leta hu...

( vo koi Aur nahi priya thi Jo shor sunke idhar aati he Aur mujko pawan ko marte dekh aage aati he)

Mai....kaun ho tum???? Bich me q aa rahi ho??.

Priya....Mara Bhai he vo????

Mai....tumhara Bhai????

Priya... Ha mere mama ka ladka he.... Tumhari himmat kese Hui mere Bhai ko Marne ki???

Mai...(man me)Mtlb ye _________ he... Lagta he aapne baap par gaya he... (Fir priya se)

Mai...aapne Bhai se puso q mar raha hu us ko....(pawan ki halat dekh kar) chalo vo bata nahi payega Mai hi bata deta hu...isne meri bahan ko kidnap kiya tha...smji..

Mai....Aur meri bahan koi 6une ki kosis kare to sodta nahi Aur isne to kidnap karvaya tha...

Mai fir pawan KO khada kar ke...

Mai....aaj tuje sod raha hu. Pata he q ???? Qki Teri maa ke muj par upkaar he...Aur Mai itna begairat insan nahi hu jinhone mere upar upkaar kiya unki hi kokh ujad du...lekin aagli baar mere raste me aaya to tera bhot bura haal hoga soch Lena...

Fir me aapne guards ke sath vaha se nikal leta hu... Aur priya aapne dosto ki madad
Se pawan ko hospital le jati he...

Aaj ke liye itna hi...

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