Thriller Haivannnn........

[Bilal jan]

Update 11

In hospital

Is waqt andar. pawan ka ilaj chal raha tha...
Bahar priya Aur prem khade the... Tabhi vaha hospital ke ground me 4-5 cars rukti he... Us me se rajeshwari ji un ka beta Aur bahu nikalte he Aur sath me un ke gurds bhi the...
Sab daud ke aandar jate he...

Aur vo log sidhe jaha prem Aur priya khade the vaha jate he...

Maya daudte huye priya ke pass pahunchte he...

Maya....kaha he mera bete???? Aur kesa he vo????

Priya....mami andar us ka ilaj chal raha he.... Ab Dr ke bahar aane pe pata chalega ki kesi tabiyat he....

(In KO kese pata chala to simple jawab he ki priya ne call karke aapne mami ko bataya tha.. Hospital late time)

Rajeshwari ji....(priya sir pe hath rakh ke) kesi he meri bachi????

Priya..thik hu nani...

Rajeshwari ji ne priya KO bulaya lekin prem ki taraf dekha bhi nahi...

Tabhi ot se Dr bahar aate he...

Sab unke Charo taraf se gher lete he...

Rajeshwari ji....Dr ab kesa he mera pota????

Dr....sab thik he lekin pair me thoda fracture ho gaya he... Aur sarir me kahi jagah chot lagi he... Vaha blood jam gaya he... Thik hone me waqt lagega kamse kam 1 month...

Kevad...(prem se) beta prem usko chot kese aayi???

Prem...vo mama ji Bhai ki ek ladke se ladayi ho gayi thi usne Bhai KO Mara he...

Kevad...kiski itni himmat jisne mere ladke pe hath uthaya... Usne galat insan se panga liya he...

Priya...lekin galti Bhai ki thi mama ji...

Kevad....itni bhi badi galti nahi ki hogi ki vo is tarah se mere bache KO mare...

Rajeshwari ji...chup rah kevad...ye sab Teri galti he...tune hi is KO bigada he..me kahti thi mat sar pe cadha it na...lekin meri nahi suni...

Kevad...lekin ma

Us ki baat Kat kar

Rajeshwari ji...priya q Mara us ladke ne pawan KO.???

Priya....Bhai ne us ladke ki bahan KO kidnap kiya tha...

Maya....what???? Lekin usne aesa kiya q????

Priya....vo to muje nahi pata... Ha Bhai ke dosto ko sayad pata ho????

Rajeshwari ji... (aapne guards se) pawan ke sab dosto ko mere pass Lao...agar galti pawan Ki Hui to usko is se bhi bura haal hoga.. Agar nahi to us ladke ki samat aayegi....

Guards ke sath kewad bhi Jane ko hota he...

Rajeshwari ji...(kevad ko jata dekh kar usse)tum yahi rukoge... Tum kahi nahi jaoge....

Kevad...lekin maa...

Rajeshwari ji...mene kah diya so final...

Kevad...OK maa

Tabhi pahle vale Dr ke sath ek dusra Dr bhi aata he...

Dr1...(rajeshwari ji se) hello madam ... In se miliye ye Dr____ he Aur ye aapke bete KO jaldi thik kar denge...

Rajeshwari ji....aane ke liye shkriya Dr2 ....aap kese bhi mere pote ko thik kar dijiye...

Dr2....shukriya ki koi baat nahi he... Rudra sir ne muje bata diya he ki kya prblm he.. Unho ne muje bheja he...

Rajeshwari ji...kaun he ye rudra????

Priya....nani ye vahi rudra hoga sayad jisse Bhai ki ladayi Hui thi...

Priya....(Dr2 ki Aur dekh kar) kya aap rudra rajput ki baat kar rahe ho???

Dr2 .....ji me unki hi baat kar rahi hu...

Dr Aur Dr2 andar uska ilaj karne chale jate he...

Maya...maa muje kus smj nahi aa raha... Pahle Marta he fir ilaj bhi karta he..

Rajeshwari ji....muje bhi kus smj nahi aa raha he...

Priya...ha mami muje yaad aaya ...

Maya....kya???

Priya....vo to Bhai KO jaan se maar deta lekin jese hi mene kaha ki Bhai mere mama ka ladka he to us ne sod diya... Aur usne kaha ki..

Rajeshwari ji...kya kaha tha beta.????

Priya.... Usne kaha tha ki (aaj tuje sod raha hu. Pata he q ???? Qki Teri maa ke muj par upkaar he...Aur Mai itna begairat insan nahi hu jinhone mere upar upkaar kiya unki hi kokh ujad du...lekin aagli baar mere raste me aaya to tera bhot bura haal hoga soch Lena...)

Maya...lekin me to nahi janti kisi rudra KO????

Priya...us ki aankho me aapke liye sanman dekha he mene... Aur jab pata chala ki ye aapka beta he to us ki aankho me mene aanshu bhi dekhe the...

Maya....(kus sochte huye). Maa ye kahi humara ______ to nahi????

Rajeshwari ji....muje bhi lagta he...lekin Hume confirm Karna padega....

Kevad Aur prem to naam sunkar hi ghabhra Gaye the....

Priya....kaun he ye _____ ....

Rajeshwari ji...(turant baat badal kar) kus nahi beti... Tum sirf aapna khyal rakho meri bachi...

Priya....thik he nani....(man me ) maa se hi pusna padega ki kaun he ye_____????

Tabhi hospital me 2 logo ki entry hoti he..
Jinko dekh kar Maya Aur rajeshwari ji ko gussa aa jata he...

Suprerb update

 

[Bilal jan]

Update 12

In hospital

Rajeshwari ji Aur Maya bahar chale Gaye Aur hospital ke garden me Bethe aapne guards ka intzaar kar rahe the...

Aur aandar

Vo aane vale koi Aur nahi baldev Aur sima the... Unko prem ne bataya tha...

Sima KO aapni maa Aur bhabhi ka is tarah us ko egnor karke Jana acha nahi laga... Lekin vo kus kar bhi nahi sakti thi...

Sima...(man me) maa manti hu mene galti ki thi..sayad galti se jyada vo mera gunah tha...ab muje pata chal raha he ... Mene Jo kiya vo gunah hi tha... Plz ek baar maaf kardo.. Aapne to hamesha muje maaf kar diya fir isbaar q nahi???

Usi time

Priya...(man me) nani Aur mami meri family ko ignore q karte he...8 saal se vo humare ghar bhi nahi aate...8 saal pahle kus jarur hua he..ab kese pata karu...qki uske pahle ki meri sari yade mit chuki he...ab to maa bhi muje kus nahi batayegi Aur nahi koi Aur bataye ga... Muje hi ab kus Karna padega... Aur sab KO ek Karna padega..._______ kaun he???? Us ke bare me bhi pata lagana padega...

Kevad ki aavaz se hi dono hosh me aati he...

Kevad....kesi ho didi????

Sima....achi hu Bhai???? Vese pawan kesa he????

Kewad....ilaj chal raha he....

Baldev....koi tnsn vali baat he....???

Kewad....nahi jijaji ...vo bilkul thik he...

Baldev...vese prem Aur priya tum kya kar rahe the... Us waqt police KO call nahi kar sakte the...

Priya....uske liye sorry dad.. Lekin dekha Jaye to galti pawan Bhai ki he....

Baldev... Koi galti itni bhi badi nahi ki hogi ki is tarah mare koi???? Muje naam batao us ka baki me dekh lunga....

Tabhi rajeshwari ji aavaz gunjti he...

Rajeshwari ji....tume kus karne ki jarurat nahi he...ye mera family matter he ...is ke bich tume aane ki jarurat nahi he...

Baldev....lekin maaji...

Us ki baat Kat kar

Rajeshwari ji...(gusse aur jor aavaz me)mene kya kaha suna nahi tumne..

Un ki aavaz ke baad baldev chup ho jata he...

Tabhi unke guards aate he un ke sath 2 ladke bhi the...

Guard....badi Malkin ye dono pawan ke dost he...

Rajeshwari ji...aaj Jo kus hua muje malum pad chuka he... Ab tum Jo jante ho vo sab sach-sach batado muje...agar 1 bhi word galat bola to tumhare sath tumhari family bhi musibat me aa Jaye GI...

L1....(darte huye) vo pawan us ladki KO pasand karta he...lekin vo ladki pawan KO pasand nahi karti...us ladki ke liye pawan Aur HM ka beta hamesha ladta the.. Pawan pagal ho chuka tha us ke liye...Aur us ladki KO kidnap karne ka plan bhi pawan ka tha...

Maya....kya plan tha us ka....

L2...(darte huye).... Aapko pata n chal Jaye isliye usne ye kaam dusre logo se karvaya..
Aur fir .... Fir.... Fiiiiirrrrrr

Rajeshwari ji....fir kya??? Bolo varna...

L1(darte huye).... Fir vo naqab pahan kar us ka rap karta.... Fir aapko ye kahta ki vo us ladki se pyar karta he...rista tay karne ko kahta jisse us par koi shaq n karta...

L2...(darte huye).. Humne mana bhi kiya tha ....aesa mat kar vo ladka rudra bhot powerful he..lekin nahi mana...

Rajeshwari ji...(guards se) in KO sod do inke ghar..(kewad ki aur dekhkar) dekha tune tere ladpyar ne kya bana diya usne.. Me kahti thi tuje ki us ko itni 6ut mat de.... Lekin nahi kahta tha ki bacha he...dekh tera bacha kya karne vala tha...

Kevad.....(rote huye)muje maaf kardo maa...aap sahi kahti he...galti meri he...aapki baat suni hoti to ye din dekhna nahi padta...ab jesa aap kahegi vesa karunga...

Rajeshwari ji...bs me tuje smja rahi hu dant nahi rahi...bs tune paiso ko hi sab smja Aur aapne bete ko bhi vahi smjaya...Aur us ki galtiyo pe hamesha parda dalta raha...(sima Ki Aur dekh kar) Ye galti mene bhi ki thi...fir usne itni badi galti ki...(baat badal kar) isliye us ki galti pe us KO dant... Jisse aage Jake vo badi galti n karde..

Abhi kus Aur bolte us se pahle Dr bahar aa Gaye...

Rajeshwari ji...ab kesa he???kab tak thik hoga???

Dr2....tnsn mat lijiye ...hafte me thik ho Jaye ga vo...Aur chalne bhi lagega... Bs Jo dawayi me du vo time par deta rahiyega...

Rajeshwari ji...tnx Dr2.. Aur rudra KO bhi tnx kahna meri taraf se...

Dr2....koi baat nahi me kah dunga rudra sir se....ab chalta hu...

Aur dono Dr chale jate he...

Nice update

 

[Bilal jan]

Update 25

Flashback

(Vese intro to de chuka hu. Vo padh Lena)

Gorakhpur zilla(kalpnik naam)

Ye 150 ganv Aur 12 taluka ko milakar banta he Gorakhpur zilla..

Yaha 2 parivaro ka raj chalta he...

Dono thakur parivar he..

Thakur veersingh Aur takhur rajeshwari Singh ka..(ek viswas ke Dada he Aur dusri unki nani he)

Gorakhpur ganv bhi he usike adhar pe zille ka naam he..

Ek alishan haveli ke aangan me ek chair pe ek ruabdaar aurat bethi huyi thi..

Chalo koi nahi bata hi deta hu ki kaun he???

Vo koi Aur nahi rajeshwari ji he..

Unke samne kus log khade the..

Rajeshwari ji...boliye munim ji kya baat he???

Manimji...Malkin choti Malkin ne kal (ek insan ki Aur isara kar) iska pura khet barbad kar diya.. Aapne Jo nayi gadi lake Di vo us ke khet me khade pure fasal pe chaldi Aur sab barbad kar diya..

Rajeshwari ji...muje maaf kar dijiyega...

Aadmi 1..ye kya kar rahi ho Malkin??? Mafi mat mangiye aap..

Rajeshwari ji...galti meri beti ki he..(minim ji se) in KO inka harjana de dejiye...

Fir vo aandar chali jati he..

Rajeshwari ji...pata nahi ye ladki kab badi hogi..

Aur ye kahte huye vo ek room ke aandar jati he jaha alishan bed pe ek ladki so rahi thi.. Us KO sote huye dekhle to yahi kahega ki kitni masum he..lekin tha uska ulta..

Rajeshwari ji...dekho to maharani abhi tak so rahi he..sima ab uth bhi jao..(usko hilate huye)

Sima...(angdayi late huye) kya he maa??? Itni jaldi q jaga deti ho???

Rajeshwari ji...itni jaldi??? 11 baj chuke he maharani .. Aur abhi jaldi he...

Sima...thik he uthti hu..

Rajeshwari ji...acha sun... Vo kal tune ------ pura khet barbad kar diya..

Sima....voh.... ma..... voh.... Mene janbhuzkar nahi kiya... Galti se ho gaya..

Rajeshwari ji...tune jese bhi kiya lekin galti Teri he.. Us kisan ne kitni mahenat se fasal taiyar ki hogi...Aur tune ek hi zatke me barbad kardi.. Kisan jagat ka tat(pita) kahlata he..

Sima...thik he maa aage se aesi galti nahi karungi...ab khush

Rajeshwari ji...bhot khush...meri pyari beti.. Aur ha us kisan ke ghar Jake usse mafi mang Lena...

Sima....thik he maa..

Aur ye kahte huye vo bathroom me chali jati he..

Aur fir lunch kar lete he...

Sima aapni gadi me beth nikal jati he..Aur uske pise ek Aur gadi hoti he jisme kus mustande hote he...jo rajeshwari ji ne sima ki hifazat ke liye rakhe the...

Ek ghar ke aage car rokkar aapne mustando KO isara karti he...

Turant vo sab aadmi Jake usi kisan ko leke aate he Jo subah haveli pe tha Aur jiski fasal sima ne barbad kardi thi...

Sima... Q be haramkhor meri maa ke pass Jake meri sikayat karta he???

Kisan...choti Malkin aapne meri sari fasal barbad kardi thi... To kya karta me???

Sima...(aapne aadmio se) batao ise...

Fir vo sare aadmi milke us bichare kisan ko Marne lagte he...

Us kisan ki biwi ghar me se bahar aake..

K.biwi...(sima ke pair pakadkar) maaf kardo choti Malkin...inse galti ho gayi... Vo kabhi aapki sikayat nahi karenge..

Sima...aage ki aage dekhnge...pahle is baar Jo galti huyi he uski saza to dedu..

Vo bichari mafi mangti rahti he lekin sima KO thidi bhi daya nahi aati..

Kus der marvane ke baad..

Sima...sod do ab usko...

Fir uske aadmi ruk jate he...

Sima...(kisan ki biwi se) ye le paise..iska ilaj karva Dena...Aur is baar sod rahi hu..agar aagli baar meri maa se meri sikayat ki to janse maar dungi..(vaha khde logo KO) Aur tum log bhi dekhlo mere khilaf sikayat karneka zurmana...

Aur ye kahke vo nikal jati he.. Aapne dosto ke pass jaha Sara din maujmasti karti he...

Aur raat KO ghar chali jati he...

Dilhi me(polis station)

Acp office me baldev betha hua tha..abhi police force join kiye 2 month ho chuke the..

Is waqt uske samne 2 log Bethe huye the...

Aadmi 1...Acp manta hu mere bete se galti huyi he...ab tum aapni fis batao..

Baldev turant khada hoke aadmi 1 ka sir pakdke table pe maar deta he...

Baldev...sale Teri itni himmat ki tu muje tu kahkar bulaye... Sale Teri aukat hi kya mere samne...

Jo ab tak chup tha vo aadmi..

Aadmi 2...thakur sahab usko maaf kar dijiye.. Vo abhi aapke bare me nahi janta...

Baldev...to tum smja kar late... Pata hona chahiye vo kiske samne betha he Aur kisse baat kar raha he...

Aadmi 2...uski taraf se mafi mangta hu..plz usko maaf kar dijiye...

Aadmi 1...ha sir muje maaf kar dijiye...

Baldev...thik he...ab bolo maater kya he???

Aadmi 1...bs kese bhi ye case Rafa karva dijiye..

Baldev...thik he... 50 lakh bhej Dena...

Aadmi 1... 50 lakh???

Abhi baldev kus Aur bolta usse pahle...

Aadmi 2.... Thik he thakur sahab...

Baldev....ab tum log ja skate ho??

Fir vo dono bahar aake...

Aadmi....50 lakh ke liye ha q ki??? Itna to court me bhi kharcha nahi hota!!! Aur tum mla hokar bhi dar rahe the??

Aadmi 2...me mla hu...lekin me mla bhi unki pita ki vajah se hu...

Aadmi...he kaun vo????

Aadmi 2...thakur veer Singh ka naam suna he???

Aadmi...ha bhot suna he!!!

Aadmi 2...ye acp baldev unka beta he..Aur tu isko pese na deta to koi bhi vakil tera case nahi ladta...smja

Aadmi...hmm mm

Andar office me

Abhi vo dono ko nikle thodi hi der huyi thi ki..
Baldev ka phone ring hota he..

No dekhta he call risive karke..

Baldev...ha pitaji...

Veer Singh ji...beta tum kal ghar aa Jana...tumhari sadi ka muharat aa gaya he...

Baldev...lekin pitaji...bina ladki dekhe ???

Veer Singh ji...chup...mene aapne dost se vada kiya tha...Teri sadi usi ladki se hogi... Tu kal ghar aa Jana smja ki nahi...

Baldev... Ji pitaji... Smj gaya!!!

(Sab soch rahe hoge flashback lamba hoga.. To bilkul galat soch rahe he... Ye update isliye diya ki aap logo ko pata chale ki pahle kese the ye)

Baki agle update me

(Sayad kal update n de saku... Lekin Saturday KO ek bada update jarur dunga...)

Nice update

 

[Bilal jan]

Update 26

Dusre din baldev ghar aa gaya...

Baldev ne kese bhi karke sima KO dekha. Aur us KO vo pasand aa gayi..

Kus Dino baad un dono ki sadi ho gayi..

2 no ke vichar el-dusre se milte bhi the...

1 saal ke baad hi varsha ka janam hua.. Sab khush the ki chalo laxhmi ka janam hua he..

Lekin sima Aur baldev khush nahi the.. Qki un dono KO pahle beta chahiye tha..lekin ladki huyi..

Aur in sab me sima Aur baldev me bhot baar kaha-suni bhi ho jati thi...

Ki baldev abhi dusra bacha chahta tha jabki sima abhi nahi chahti thi..

Aur in choti-moti kaha suni me inka zagda bhi badhta ja raha tha...

Ab baldev jyadatar samay bahar hi rahta tha..

3 sall baad sima fir se maa banne vali thi..

Is news se sab bhot kush the sivay baldev KO...
Qki us KO lagta tha sayad fir se ladki ho..

Vese is pure waqt me in logo ne varsha pe bhi dhyan nahi diya tha..

Usko uske Dada-dadi aake le Gaye.. Aur vo hi log varsha ka khyal rakhte the...

Ab sima 4 month pregnant thi..

Vo ek market me ghum rahi thi ki usne baldev KO kisi Aur aurat ke sath dekha.. To vo unka Pisa karne lagi..
Jab vo Pisa karte ek ghar ke samne ruki..

Usne vaha 1 khidki dhundh kar andar dekhne lagi ..
Aur Jo usne aandar dekha sayad vo kabhi dekhna nahi chahti thi...

Qki andar baldev us aurat ke sath bilkul nanga tha...

Sima ne hamesha paiso KO mayne rakhtha insan se jyada.. Lekin vo baldev KO pyar bhi bhot karne lagi thi..

Aur ye dekhkar vo bilkul tut gayi thi..

Uska dimag hi kaam nahi kar raha tha ki vo kya kare Aur kya nahi????

To vo sidha vaha se ghar chali gayi.. Aur bina aapne beche ki parvah kiye Jo ghar me baar tha ..

Usse sarab pine lagi..(vese vo dosto ke sath sadi se pahle drink karti thi..lekin fir sab sod diya tha..) Tabhi uske phone ki ghanti baji..
Usne no dekha Aur usko pic kiya..

Sima...ha bolo neha???

(Neha sima ki college friend thi..Aur abhi unki dosti bani huyi he)

Neha...ye Teri aavaz KO kya hua???

Sima...kus nahi???(Aur ye kahke Rone lagi)

Neha....tu ro q rahi he??? Tu chup hoja me tere ghar aa rahi hu...

Iske baad call cut ho jati he...

Aur thodi hi der me neha sima ke ghar me aati he...

To ghar ka main door khula hua tha.. Vo har room check karti he..

To us KO ek room me sima sarab piti huyi dikh jati he..

Vo uske pass jati he...

Neha....ye kya kar rahi tu??

Sima...to kya karu bol???

Neha...baat kya he vo batayegi???

Sima...meri to puri duniya hi ujad gayi!!!

Neha....sudhe-sidhe bol kya baat he???

Sima....(fir Jo usne dekha vo bata deti he)

Neha...to kya sarab pine se tera gam mit Jaye ga...

Sima...kus to kam hoga...

Sima 1 Aur sarab ki bottle lene jati he Aur jab vapas aati he to neha kus kar rahi thi...vo ek injection aapne hatho me laga rahi thi...

Sima...tuje kya hua??? Jo ye injection le rahi he...

Neha...vo...vo... Kus nahi he

Sima...dekh muje sidhe-sidhe bata kya he???

Neha...dekh kisiko batana mat plz..

Sima...nahi bataungi !!! Ab to bata kya he???

Neha...mene 1 bf banaya tha...lekin usne mere sath dhoka kiya... Aur me us bhul nahi pa rahi thi..tab meri dost ne muje ek baar ye drugs diya.. Fir to jese sab bhul gayi... Aur jab bhi uski yaad aati he. To bs drug le letu hu...

Sima...kya ye sachme itna asardaar he!!!

Neha...ha.. Aur aapko ek alag hi duniya dikhta he...

Sima...(kus der soch ke) muje bhi chahiye... Muje bhi de to...

Neha...ha ye le...ye tere sare gum bhula degi...

Sima bhi khud ko ek injection laga leti he..
Aur jab sima so jati he..

Neha vaha se bahar chali jati he.
Aur aapni car me bethke ek call karti he...

Neha...kaam ho gaya....

Unknown...very good...usko iski adat hi lagado...

Neha...thik he smj gayi... Maal pahuncha do...

Unknown....kal tumko usi jagah maal mil Jaye ga...Aur tumhare pese bhi...

Neha...thik he...

Aur call cut kar deti he ...

Aur aapne ghar ko chali jati he...

Aur aese hi ab aadat ban chuki thi sima ki drug lene ki..

Aur is wajah se baldev Aur sima ka zagda itna badh gaya ki baat divorce tak pahunch chuki thi...

Ab sima 8 month pregnant thi...

Ek din baldev ke ek purane dost ka usko call aaya Aur vo usko Milne gaya ek hotel me...

Vahi Baldev Aur uska dost Bethe huye baat kar rahe the...(dost kaun he vo abhi raaz he Jo aage khulega)

Baldev...kya baat he??? Aaj itno Dino baad yaad kiya???

Dost...kus nahi...me to aapne business ki vajah se yaha aaya to Teri yaad aa gayi to bula liya...

Baldev...sahi he... College ke baad to jese milna hi band ho gaya tha...

Dost...ha.. Vese tum kya kar rahe ho abhi???

Baldev...vahi Jo mera sapna tha...police ki naukri...

Dost...mtlb tune sach me join kar liya...muje lagta tha tu joke kar raha tha..

Baldev...me tab bhi kahta tha..ki me joke nahi seriously kah raha hu..

Dost...to fir tumhara Jo business he vo kaun sambhlta he...

Baldev...ab tak to meri wife sambhal rahi thi...aage ka dekhte he???

Dost...tune sadi kab ki??? Aur tere kahne ka mtlb kya he??.

Baldev...bhot time ho gaya... Aur ab me usse alag hona chahta hu mtlb divorce le raha hu usse...

Dost...lekin q????

Baldev...to kya karu??? Aur vese bhi ab is baat ka koi mtlb nahi he.. Mene dusri ladki bhi dekhli he usse shadi karunga... Bs isbaar ghar Jake hi mere pitaji se baat karunga...

Dost...acha kaun he vo ladki??? Jisse mera dost shadi ke sapne dekh raha he???

Baldev...ek minute (fir aapne purse se photo nikalkar dikhate huye) ye he vo ladki!!!

Us photo ko dekhkar baldev ka dost chakit ho gaya.!!!!

Dost....kya yahi vo ladki???

Baldev...ha kya hua??? Tu q pusraha he?? Janta he kya???

Dost...ha iska naam rachna he Aur iski ek bahan bhi he...

Baldev...tu kese janta he rachna ko???

Dost...qki iske karname dilhi me bhot sune he!!!

Baldev...lekin ye to Bengal ki he!!!!

Dost...koi Bengal ki nahi he..vo Mumbai ki he!!

Baldev...sayad tuje galatfahmi huyi hogi!??

Dost....muje koi galatfahmi nahi huyi he... Aur mere Mumbai ke bhot se dost isko jante bhi he...ki ek no ki Randi he ..

Baldev....tuje pata bhi he kya bol raha he????

Dost...vo hi bol raha hu Jo sach he...

Baldev...me pata karta hu... Agar Teri baat galat nikli to tu janta he muje!!!

Dost...thik he agar Mai galat niklu to muje goli maar Dena...

Baldev...thik he tuje baad me milta hu...

Baldev sochte huye ghar ki Aur jata he..
Aur bich me kisiko call karta he...

Samne se...boliye sarkar

Baldev...tum abhi kaha ho???

Samne se...me to vahi mere office me hu...

Baldev...muje kisi ke bare me pata Karna he...

Samne se...hukum kijiye sarkar...

Baldev...ek photo bhej raha hu..uske janam se leke aaj tak ki sari jankari...

Samne se...ho jayega sarkar...

Baldev...kitne din lagege!!!

Samne se...sarkar 3 Dino ke aandar sab jankari aapke pass hogi!!

Baldev...thik he..

Kahkar vo call cut karta he...

Ab dekhte he kya pata chalta he???

Nice update

 

[Bilal jan]

Update 27

Baldev ko bhi aapni galti ka ahesas hone lagta he..

Qki pyar to vo bhi karne laga tha sima ko..lekin harroj ho rahe zagdo se paresan tha...

Lekin fir bhi abhi manne KO taiyar nahi tha...

Jese hi vo ghar jata he tab sima injection le rahi thi..Aur ye drug ka hi injection tha...

Pahli baar usko laga ki uski hi vajah se sima ki ye halat he..

To vo turant jakar vo injection le leta he sima ke hath se Aur faik deta he..

Sima...ye kya kiya???

Baldev...vahi Jo pahle Karna chahiye tha...

Sima...me Jo bhi karu usse tumhe koi mtlb nahi he..

Baldev...kese mtlb nahi... Me tumhara pati hu..

Sima...ohhh to tumhe yaad he..achi baat he...

Baldev...tum abhi mere sath chalo!!

Ye kahkar vo sima ka hath pakadkar bahar ki Aur le jata he..

Sima baldev ka virodh bhi kar rahi thi.. Lekin khud ko suda nahi pa rahi thi..

Baldev usko jabardashti car me bithakar chala deta he...

Sima...dekho tum mere sath kisi bhi tarah jabardasti nahi kar sakte..

Baldev..........

Baldev ko kus bolta n pakar

Sima....aakhir tum muje kaha le ja rahe hi????

Lekin fir bhi vo kus nahi bolta...

Aur ek hospital ke aandar jakar car KO rokta he..

Baldev...tumhara ilaj karvane...ab plz chalo..

Sima bhi kus kahe bina uske sath chali jati he..

Aur vo dono Dr ke cabin me chale jate he sidhe..

Dr...(bina dekhe) pata nahi nock karke aana....

Vahi uski bolti band ho jati he

Dr...are commisoner sahab aap??? Sorry vo dekha nahi tha!!!

Baldev...koi baat nahi Dr...

Dr...boliye kya kar sakta hu me aapke liye???

Baldev...(fir vo sima ke drug sevan ke bare me bata deta he)

Dr...kutne waqt se le rahe he???

Baldev...jyada nahi yahi koi 4 month se..

Dr...koi baat nahi...abhi bhi lat 6ut sakti he..

Baldev...Dr sima pregnant bhi he!!

Dr...fir to check up karna padega!!

Baldev...koi ghabhrane ki baat to nahi hogi???

Dr...vo to report ke baad hi pata chalega...

Fir Dr sima ka check up karne le jate he.. Aur aadhe ghante baad vapas aate he...

Baldev...Dr koi ghabhrane ki baat to nahi???

Dr...bacha to zinda he..lekin asar kya hua he us par vo to uske janam ke baad hi chalega!!!

Dr...Aur aapki wife ko hoshpital me admit hona padega!!

Baldev...OK aaj hi admit kar leta hu!! Dr muje aapse ek baat karni he akele me..

Dr....aayiye bahar chalte he!!!

Dono bahar aa jate he..

Dr...boliye thakur sahab kya baat he???

Baldev...sima ko yaha admit kiya he vo baat bahar nahi jani chahiye...Aur ye baat sirf hum dono ke bich rahe..

Dr...thik he aesa hi hoga...Aur tnsn mat lejiye vo jaldi thik ho jayegi!!

Baldev...tnx Dr

Saam KO sima usi hospital me admit karva deta he..

Aese hi 2 din nikal jate he..

Aagli subah 10 baje vo aapne office me betha hua tha ki uska call ring hota he!!

Baldev...ha bolo

Samne se...sab pata kar liya he

Baldev...tum muje city ke bahar mere farm house pe Milo...address send karta hu.. Vahi baat karenge..

Samne se...thik he sarkar

Baldev address send karke aapne farm house nikal jata he..

Vo vaha pahunchke intzaar karta he!!

Thodi der me hi baldev jiska intzaar kar raha tha vo aa jata he..

(Ab se is unknown KO khabri likhunga..)

Baldev...aao betho!!!

Khabri...shukriya sarkar.

Baldev...kus loge???

Khabri...kus nahi.

Baldev...bolo kya newz he???

Khabri... Iska naam to aapko pata hi he.. Rachana.. Pura naam he rachna naran sharma!! Ye vese aapke hi ganv Gorakhpur ki he...

Khabri...iska baap gairkanuni sarab ka theka chalata tha..ek din iski sarab ki vajah se 10 logo ki maut ho gayi...

Aur ye mamla panchayat me aaya.. Jaha aapke pitaji Aur madam ke putaji ne faisla kiya tha..

Naran sharma ki sari jaydat japt karke un parivaro me bant di Jaye jin ki iski nakli sarab pikar maut huyi he..

naran ko ye faisla manjur nahi tha lekin panchayat ke samne uski ek bhi n chali!! Aur isne iska badla lene ki thani!! Aur ek din aapki madam ki maa ki dur ki bahan ganv aayi thi..

Tab aapki saas ki bahan ganv dekhne nikle the!! Qki vo pahli baar ganv aayi thi!! Tabhi is naran ne mauka pakar aapna badla lene ki Sochi!! Usne aapki saas ki ki bahan ka sir ek patthar se laga Aur unki maut ho gayi..

Usse ye sab karte ganv ke ek aadmi ne dekh liya Aur turant vo rajeshwari ji ke haveli pahunchkar sab kus bataya!! Madam ke pita ne aapne aadmiyo se bhejkar usko pakad lane ko kaha!!

Aur usko pure ganv me nanga karke gadhe par bethkar gumaya!! Vo ye sab bardasht nahi kar paya Aur aatmhatya karli!!
Biwi to iski pahle hi mar chuki thi lekin iski dono betiya aapne mama ke sath rahti thi..

Khabri... Inke baap ke Marne ke baad ab in ladkiyo ki zimmedari puri tarah se unke mama par aa gayi!!

Lekin iska mama bhi bada harami tha!! Usne in dono KO bechene ka than liya! Lekin kese rachna ko malum pad gaya Aur vo dono bhag gayi!! Fir Mumbai ke anath aashram me rahkar padhayi ki..

aage ki padhayi ke liye Aur aapni bahan ke liye usne call girl ka kaam suru kar diya.. In sab ka zimmedar vo aap dono ki family ko manti he..

Aur tab se badla lene ke liye hi vo mauka talash kar rahi thi!! Lekin iske pise bhi koi he!! Vo kaun he pata nahi???

Baldev...uska pata kab lagaoge??

Khabari...bhot jald.. Aur ek baat madam ki drug ki lat laganevali isi rachana ki bahan neha he..Jo madam ki purani college dost he!!

Baldev...muje kese bhi ye sab ek sath chahiye!! Kya tum kar sakte ho???

Khabri...ji sarkar ho jayega.. Lekin uske liye 2 din chahiye..

Baldev...thik he..

Aage kal ke update me

Fantastic update

 

[Bilal jan]

Update 28

Aabhi baldev bhot gusse me ja raha tha..

Qki thodi der pahle hi uske khabri ka call aaya tha..

Jisme usne kaha tha ki usne in logo ko pakad liya!!

Aur vo full speed me car chala raha tha..

2 ghante me hi vo us jagah pahunch gaya..

Vese to ye jungle tha... Lekin yahi 10 km aandar Jane ke baad vo car se nikalkar 1 km chalta he tab us KO ek zopdi dikhti he..

Jiske Charo Aur jungle tha ...

Jese hi vo vaha pahuncha samne hi uska khabri khada tha!!

Baldev...kaha he vo log???

Khabri...aandar hi he sarkar!!

Baldev anndar jata he to 2 aurat Aur 1 aadmi bandhe huye the lakdi ke khambhe se..

Jisme 2 aurat Aur koi nahi Rachana Aur neha thi...

Baldev...inko hosh kab tak aayega???

Khabri...kabhi bhi aa sakta he???

Baldev...Aur ye aadmi???

Khabri...yahi in sabke pise!!

Baldev...hai kaun ye aadmi???

Khabri...naam Pravin kumar he...baki to isse hi pus lijiyega sarkar!!! Q kar raha tha ye??

Ab rachna ko thoda hosh aane lagta he!! Dhire2 aapni aankhe kholti he to samne uske 2 chahere khade the..

Jab vo aapne aap hilane ki kosis karti he to khud ko bandha hua paya!!

Usko smj me aa jata he kya hua???

Isliye hilna band kar deti he..

Thodi der me us KO saaf dikhayi Dene lagta he..

Isi bich neha Aur us aadmi ko bhi hosh aane lagta he..

Jese hi tino samne baldev KO dekhte he to zatka lagta he!

Rachana fir bhi sambhalkar

Rachana...ye sab kya he baldev???

Baldev turant usko ek thappad mar deta he..

Baldev...sali randi muje naam se bulati he???

Rachana...aesa q kah rahe ho?? Me to tumhe naam se hi bulati hu!!

Baldev...vo sod...ye bata mere sath aesa q kiya???

Rachana..mene??? Mene kya kiya???

Baldev...juthe pyar ka natak!! Ab ye mat kahna ye natak nahi tha.!!
Qki muje sab pata chal gaya he!..
Ab sidhi tarah se bata!!

Rachana... Ohhh.... To tumhe pata chal gaya!! Lekin bhot der ho chuki he ab!!

Rachana... Aur tum Janna chahte ho q kiya to suno( fir vo vahi kahani kahti he Jo khabri ne kahi thi)

Baldev...game to acha khela tum logo ne! Bs ek galti huyi galat aadmi ke sath tumne ye khel khela!!
Mere sath game khelne se pahle mere bare me jaan leti to acha hota!!
Koi baat nahi ab aagle janam me samne vale insan ke bare me jaan kar uske sath game khelna..

Ye bolkar vo gun nikal leta he..

Isse tino dar jate he!!

Rachana...(darte huye) plz baldev aesa mat Karo...

Baldev...

Rachana... Thik he... Muje mardo meri bahan KO sod do... Iska koi kasur nahi he!!

Baldev....ohhh.... Bahan ki chinta ho rahi he!! ??
Uski galti ye he ki vo tumhari bahan he!! Aur vese bhi jab tum mar jaogi to tumhari bahan ji kar kya karegi!!

(Ye kahte huye sidhi goli neha sir ke aar-par kar deta he)

Neha..aaaahhhhhhhhh

Rachana....nnnneeeehhhhhhaaaaaaa

Turant hi vo dusri goli chala deta he Jo sidha rachana ke sir ke aar-par ho jati he..

Rachna....aaaaahhhhhhh

Dono ko markar ab vo aadmi ki taraf aata he..

Baldev...
ab tum bhi batado ki tumne ye sab q kiya???


Aadmi....vese bhi muje pata he ki me Marne vala hu..
fir bhi tumko bataunga ki me kaun hu Aur q kiya ye sab!!??

Baldev...vaah aap to badi jaldi maan gaye!!!

Khabri...maut ka dar se har koi bolta he sarkar!!

Aadmi...maut ke dar se nahi bol raha hu.. Lekin mene zindgi me ek hi galti ki..
Ki meri vajah se ek masum bacha mar jata!!

Baldev....vaah Bhai maan Gaye tumhe!!! Jo janma bhi nahi us bache ki itni parvah??

Aadmi...tumhare liye koi chij mayne nahi rakhti..
Lekin mere liye rakhti he..
ki tumhare gunah ki saza me tumhare us anjanme bache ko de Di..
lekin bhagvan ka sukar he ki vo zinda he! Aur Mai papi bante huye raha gaya...
agar us bache ko kus ho jata to me duniya ka sabse bada papi kahlata!!

Baldev...muje Teri ye bakvas nahi Sunni! Muje ye bata ye sab tune kyo kiya??

Aadmi...Mara naam Pravin Kumar he...kus yaad aaya???

Baldev...me kya koi computer hu Jo tere naam yaad hoga... Muje bata ye tune kyo kiya???

Pravin....tune to itne paap kiye he tuje yaad bhi nahi hoga??? Chal me hi bata deta hu... Tuje police force join kiye huye kus hi time hua tha..
Tere paas ek case aaya tha... Drunk and drive ka..
Tune jis businessman ke bete ko bachaya tha..
Usne kisi Aur KO nahi balki meri biwi Aur bache ko Mara tha...

Baldev....ohhh.... To tum vo ho...

Pravin...aakhir tere paas kis chij ki kami thi Jo tune pese lekar us mujrim KO sod diya??

Baldev...pese ki...
janta he is waqt me pesa hi sabkus he..
Pesa he to sabkus he..

Pravin...Aur ye tuje ek baap ka sharp he...
Ki jin pese ki vajah se tune mere sath aanyay kiya he..
Vahi pesa tujse sin jayega!! Aur tujse sinna vala koi Aur nahi tera hi beta ho!!!
Ye Mara sharp he tuje...

Aur ek goli chalti he...

Aaaaaahhhhhhhh

Present...

Baldev...nahiiiiii

Aur isike sath baldev ki nind ud jati he!!!

Sima bhi uske sath jaag jati he..

Sima...kya hua aapko???

Baldev....purane paap...Jo mene pese ke moh me aandha hoke kiye the...

Baldev....aaj muje us aadmi ka dard pata chal raha he ki kya gujarati he jab aapka beta aapse dur ho Jaye...

Baldev....Aur dekho uska sharp bhi sach ho gaya!! Ki jis pese ke Mon me aandha hua tha .. Us KO mera hi beta hi barbad kar raha he..

Sima....ye sab bhul jayiye... Sab thik ho jayega..

Baldev....tum so jao...

Baldev sima KO sulakar fir se purani yaado me kho jata he...

Nice update

 

[Bilal jan]

Update 29

Abhi pura thakur parivaar operation theater ke bahar khada tha..

Sima ki maa,uska Bhai kevad Aur uski bhabhi Maya bhi...

Maya ke hath me 1 month ka pawan bhi tha..

Thakur veersingh Aur unki biwi mamtasingh bhi the..

Baldev in sabse thoda alag khada tha Aur kus paresan tha..

Baldev..(man me) pata nahi kya hoga??? Dr bhi kah rahe the ki prblm he..agar babuji ko kus pata chala to kya hoga?? Aur ye Dr to babuji ka dost bhi he..

Aur andar kus prblm ke chalte bacha operation karke hi bahar nikala ja sakta he isliye Dr ki team operation kar rahe the..

Kus der baad operation ke bacha bahar nikalte he ..

Lekin puri team tnsn me thi..

Qki bacha hil-dul nahi raha tha...

Dr ek team ko sima ka kaam deke khud bache ko dekhne lagte..

Dr1...sir bacha to zinda he lekin harkat q nahi kar raha he???

Dr...tum sima KO blood report Aur is bache ka blood report turant nikalo.
Tab tak me dekhta hu kya kar sakta hu!!!

Dr1....ji sir

Ye kahke vo blood nikalke le jata he..

Aur jese hi bahar nikalta he..

Thakur veersingh...Dr meri bahu Aur bacha kese he??? Abhi tak bache ki aavaz bhi nahi aayi???

Dr1...thakur sahab thodi prblm he???

Rajeshwari ji...meri beti thik he n Dr1???

Dr1....ji aapki beti bilkul thik he...

Thakur veersingh... Fir bacha??

Dr1...ji thakur sahab... Bacha vese zinda hi he..
Lekin koi harkat nahi kar raha he!!

Ye kahke vo chala jata he..

Aandar bhi sab ji tod mahanat kar rahe the..
Lekin kus result nahi nikal raha tha..

Lekin kisi ki dua kaho ya chamtkar ki ...

Jese hi Dr har mankar aapna hath upar pade huye electric shock(Electrical cardioversion)pe mara...

Aur vo chalu hoke sidha bache ke sir pe laga jisse bache ko ek zatka laga.

Aur isike sath bache ne rona suru kar diya..

Dr and team bhi khush ho gayi..

Aur bahar bhi bache ki Rone ki aavaz se sab khush ho Gaye...

Dr...nurse bacha abhi kisiko mat Dena...
Ysko peti(box) me rakhna ho 48 hours tak..

Nurse...thik he Dr....

Dr...jao peti(box ) leke aao Aur bache ko usme rakhdo..

Ye kahke vo bahar aata he..

To sara parivar Charo Aur ho jata he..

Thakur veersingh...bacha ab kesa he???

Dr....meri cabin me chalo vahi baat karte he..

Sab cabin me jate he...

Thakur veersingh...ab to bol de yaar??

Dr...pahle to Mubarak ho tumhe.. Ki tumhare bahu ko ladka hua he!!

Thakur veersingh...ye to khushi ki baat he!!!

Dr...ha vo to he...lekin bacha abhi kamzor he..
Aur 48 hours tak usko box me rakhna hoga..
Aur kus check-up bhi Karna he..

Thakur veersingh...koi ghabhrane ki baat to nahi he n???

Dr....ab vo to report aane ke baad hi pata chalega..

Tabhi Dr1 sima Aur bache ki blood report le aata he Dr KO deta he..

Dr...kya he is me???

Dr1...sir aap khud dekh lijiye!!!

Dr report dekhke ke tnsn me aa jata he..

Rajeshwari ji...aap tnsn me q he Bhai sahab???

Dr...ye bache Aur sima ki blood report he...

Rajeshwari ji...koi ghabhrane ki baat he???

Dr...ji bhabhi ji...do no ke khun me drug paya gaya he...sayad jab bacha pet me tha tab sima beti ne drug liya hoga!!!

Rajeshwari ji...ye kya kah rahe he aap???

Dr...vahi Jo report kah rahi he.. Aur iska bacge par bhot bura asar hua he..ab kitna asar hua he vo to bache ka check-up karne ke baad pata chalega...

Dr....lekin meri tnsn kus Aur bhi he...

Thakur veersingh...Aur kya tnsn he??

Dr... Bacha kamzor he to us KO maa ka dudh chahiye...lekin seema ke blood me abhi bhi drug maujud he.. Isliye uska dudh bache ke liye acha nahi he..

Rajeshwari ji...iska koi to upay hoga??

Dr...bache ko kisi Aur aurat ka dudh pilana hoga Jo hal hi me mata bani ho..

Isse sab paresan ho jate he..

Lekin tabhi..

Maya...Dr kya me pila sakti hu???

Sab is baat se khush ho jate he..

Dr....ha.. Lekin tumhe usko harroj tumhe hi dudh pilana hoga...

Maya....to thik he hum bache ko yaha se humare ghar le jayenge...

Maya....(rajeshwari ki Aur dekhkar) thik he n maa???

Rajeshwari ji...tumhara jitna bhi upkar manu vo kam hoga..

Maya....isme kesa upkar maa..?? Me bhi to aapki beti hu...

Rajeshwari ji...ha tu meri sabse pyari beti he...

Dusre din...

(Sima Aur baldev KO drug ke bare me sab puste he lekin do no hi kus bata nahi pa rahe the..
jab veer Singh baldev ko thappad marte he tab baldev kus bato KO 6upakar sab bata deta he...
us aadmi vali baat, tino ko maar dala he Aur bhi thoda supa leta he...
Fir sima Aur baldev rote huye sabse mafi mangte he Aur kafu manane ke baad sab bade maaf kar dete he...)

( " lekin unko kya pata tha ki unka sima Aur baldev KO maaf Karna unki sabse badi galti sabit hogi")

Aaj fir se sab Dr ki cabin me the...

Thakur veer Singh...kya report aayi he?.?

Dr...bache par drug ka bhut asar hua he!!! Uski kus nase block ho chuki he jiski vajah se dimag tak khun nahi pahunch raha he... Is vajah se uske sarir ka vikas karne ki gati(speed) kam hogi...

Rajeshwari ji...iska koi ilaj to hoga???

Dr...hum abhi se iska ilaj suru kar denge... Aur vo jaldi hi thik ho Jaye ga...

Sab unka shukriya karke ghar ki aur nikal lete he...

Aaj ke liye itna hi....

Nice update

 

[Bilal jan]

Update 30

Aaj ghar me bhot hi khushi ka mahol tha..

Aur sabse jyada khush veer Singh the..

Ki aaj unke pote ka naamkaran hoga..

Lekin in sab me ek insan is bache se bhot zyada kafa tha..

Aur vo koi Aur nahi Varsha thi..

Itne saal sab usse hi pyar karte the...lekin pisle 1 month me bhot hi kam pyar mila us KO...

Sab sirf us bache ko hi pyar dete the.(sivay sima Aur baldev ke) Aur ye baat usko bhot khatak rahi thi..

Aur is sab ka zimmedar vo us bache ko manne lagi...Aur choti bachi thi to uska sochna sahi bhi tha...(iske bare me Aur jankari aage aayegi)

(Note:- dosto ye baat asal zindgi me bhi lagu hoti he.. Aksar log jab dusra bacha paida hota he to pahle bache KO kam time dete he..to plz sab is baat ka khyal rakhe ki dusra bacha hone ke baad pahle bache ke liye bhi time nikalo...varna aap soch bhi nahi sakte bache pe uska kya asar hoga... Is baat ka asal zindgi me bhot mayne rakhti he..)

To hum baat kar rahe the Varsha ki..

Us KO ek tarah se us bache se nafrat hone lagi thi..

Us KO lagta tha ki sab KO usse sin liya he..

Vo aapne kamre me bethi ro rahi thi..Aur kisiko uska khyal bhi kisiko nahi tha...

Niche sab log the tabhi dadi ko khyal aata he...

(Ab se hero ke relative character ke hisab se likhunga )

Dadi....suniye Varsha kahi nahi dikh rahi kaha he vo???

Dada....pata nahi mene to subah se nahi dekha...tum ruko me dekhta hu...

Dadi...aap yahi rahiye me dekhta hu...

Dadi sab jagah dekhti he lekin unhe Varsha kahi nahi dikhti...

Dadi....(aapne aap se) sayad aapne room me hogi..

Jese hi vo Varsha ke room ke paas pahunchti he Aur darvaza kholne ki kosis karti he to darvaza aandar se band pati he...

Do baar khatkhatati(knock) he lekin aandar se koi jawab nahi aata..

Dadi...Varsha meri bachi tum aandar ho???

Lekin fir bhi koi reaply nahi aata...

Dadi...lagta he so gai he...chalo sone deti hu..

Aur pise mudke Jane lagti he..abhi vo kus hi dur gayi thi ki Varsha aapna darvaza kholti he..

Lekin aapni dadi KO wapas jata dekh us KO dukh hone lagta he..

Aur vo firse darvaza band karke aapne bed pe let ke Rone lagti he..

Aur dadi is baat se anjan chali jati he..(Aur yahi inhone galti kardi thi)

Niche sab maheman bhi aa Gaye the..

Pura ganv ke liye aaj haweli pe dawat thi..

Unke kulguru sab vidhi kar rahe the..

Sara parivar unke side me betha hua tha.

(Sirf sima Aur baldev KO sidkar vo abhi city me hi the. Sima ke ilaj ke chalke(aesa baldev ka kahna tha) baki vo Jane...)

Isliye dadi khud bache ko aapni kokh me leke bethi thi Aur dadaji unke side me..

Kulguru sari vidhi niptane ke baad bache ki kundli banane lagte he..

Aur kundli ki vajah se paresan ho jate he..

Jo dadaji dekh lete he..

Dadaji...kya hua guruji??? Aap chintit lag rahe he???

Kulguru....ha thoda paresan hu...

Dadaji...kis baat pe paresan he aap guruji??

Kulguru....ek baat kahta hu veer Singh... Ho sake to bache ko is ganv se bahar kabhi mat bhejna.

Dadaji....koi khtre ki baat he???

Kulguru...ha iski jaan ko khatra he...is ganv ke bahar jate hi is par musibate aana suru ho jayenge.. Kab iski jaan chali Jaye iska koi bharosha nahi...

Ye sunke sab chintit ho jate he..

Dadaji...thik he guruji hum hamesha isko yahi rakhenge...

Kulguru...yahi iske liye acha hoga... Aur ha rashi Aur nakshtro ke hisab se iska naam hoga viswas ...

Fir dadji thali me kumkum se naam likhte he..

Aur puja hone ke baad sab chale jate he..lekin family vale guruji ki baat ko leke paresan the..

1 saal baad

yaha dadaji Aur dadiji bethe huye the..

Viswas abhi aapni nani ke ghar pe tha...

Qki harroj Maya yaha nahi aa sakti thi..Aur uska ilaj bhi vaha chal raha tha...

Dadaji Aur dadiji harroj aate Aur vaha viswas ke sath waqt bitake saam ko vapas aa jate...

Lekin abhi dadaji Aur dadiji sofe par bethe huye the ki...

Vaha Varsha aati he..

Varsha...dadaji muje aapse baat karni he!

Dadaji...ha bolo meri bachi...

Varsha...me mummy-papa ke paas Jana chahti hu...

Dadaji...lekin q meri bachi???

Varsha...dadaji me vaha rahke padhna chahti hu...

Dadiji....thik he jesa meri bachi chahegi vesa hi hoga..

Aur ab sima fir se maa banne vali thi..

Isliye sab vahi ja rahe the..

Kus din baad..

Aaj fir se pura thakur parivar hoshpital me maujud tha...(sivay Maya Aur viswas,pawan ke vese pawan ke sarir ka to time ke sath vikash hua tha lekin vuswas abhi bhi chota hi lagta tha.)

Qki abhi vo chote the... Aur viswas ko ganv ke bahar n le Jane ki vajah se..

Thodi hi der me bacho ki Rone ki aavaz aane lagi...

Ye sunke sab khush ho Gaye...

Jese hi Dr bahar Nikele..

Rajeshwari ji...Dr meri beti Aur bacha kese he???

Dr...bahanji double khushi he..

Dadaji...mtlb

Dr...yaar judwa bache huye he... Ladka Aur Ladki

Dadaji...shukriya mere dost...

Aur vo khush hokar pure hoshpital me mithayi bantvate he...

Ek baar fir se thakur parivar me khushi ka mahol tha.. Pura parivar aaj duguna khush tha..

Aaj fir 1 month baad pure ghar ko sajaya gaya tha..

Aaj to pura parivaar maujud tha.. Yaha tak ki sima Aur baldev bhi...

Varsha bhi aapni maa ke paas bethi aapne chote Bhai bahan ke sath khel rahi thi...

Aur bacho ka naam priya Aur prem rakha gaya...


Aaj ke liya itna hi...

(Kal ek bada update aayega saam ko Aur dusra saam ko fir ye flashback khatam hoga... Lekin pura nahi iske baad baki ka flashback aage aayega..)

Nice update

 

[Bilal jan]

Update 31

Aaj 10 saal pure ho Gaye the..

Idar ganv me aaj viswas 10 saal ka ho gaya tha Aur sabka ladla ban gaya tha..

Sirf kevad hi us KO pyar nahi karta tha.. Aesa bhi nahi tha ki vo viswas ko nafrat karta he.. Lekin uski biwi Maya aapne bete pawan se jyada viswas ka khyal rakhti thi..

Ab viswas ke sarir ka bhi vikas hone laga tha ..
Lekin dimagi taur se thoda kamzor tha..
Chote bache ki tarah zaban bhi thodi totli thi..

Fir bhi sabko sanman deta tha.. Dimag se kamzor hone ke bavjud vo sab smjta bhi tha...

Aur aapne Dada aur nani(rajeshwari ji)ko dekhte huye bada hua tha...

To us me har ek sanman ki najar dekhta tha..

Aur sabki madad karne me bhi aage rahta tha..

Pura Gorakhpur ganv viswas KO veer Singh ka dusra rup kahte the..

Qki chota hone ke bavjud vo har ek ki madad karta tha..

Ek baar to ek bhikhari darvaze pe aaya..

To viswas ne us bhikhari ka hath pakadkar haweli aandar lejakar dinning table pe bithakar aapne hatho se khilaya..

Aur sab ye dekh kar khush the.. Sabse jyada dadaji Aur dadiji khush the..

Fir aapne dadaji se..

Viswas.. Dadadi humale ganv me lod abhi bhi bhute rahte he( dadaji humare ganv me log abhi bhi bhuke rahte he???)

Dadaji...beta ye bhot bada ganv he..ab har jagah ka pata kese hoga..

Viswas...hum in sabdo thila takte he??( hum in sabko khila skate he)

Dadaji...ha q nahi khila sakte jarur khila sakte he..

Viswas...to dadadi me tab thaunga dab pule danv ne thana tha liya hoda!!(to dadaji me tab khunga jab pure ganv ne khana kha liya hoga..)

Dadaji...lekin beta ganv bhot bada he.. Kese pata chalega.. Kisne khaya kisne nahi??

Viswas...dete mele danamdin pal hota he..(jese mere janamdin par hota he)

Dadiji...me smj gayi mera bacha kya kahna chahta he..
Aaj hi sare ganv me elan karva dijiye aap ki jis ghar me jis din khana n bane unke liye haweli pe banega...
Ek tarah se hum bhandara suru karva dengue..

Dusre din hi ganv me bhandara suru karva diya dadaji ne ..

Vaha Jo bhi bhukhe log aate unko bharpet khilya jata..

Isme Naniji ne bhi sath diya Aur dhire dhire ganv ke bhot se logo ne sath diya...

Aur viswas khud jakar pahle unko khilata fir khud khata tha...

To aesa tha viswas..

Uthar city me bhi ab sab khush the..

Aur sabse jyada khush Varsha thi.. Qki ab usko aapne maa-baap ka pyar Milne laga tha..

Aur vo aapne chote Bhai-bahan ke sath khush thi.

Aur sima aur baldev to aapne bete viswas KO bhul hi Gaye the..
Ki unka ek Aur beta bhi he..

Prem Aur priya ko to pata bhi nahi tha ki koi unka bada Bhai bhi he..

Sirf Varsha ko hi yaad tha ki uska ek Bhai bhi he..lekin vo kabhi manti nahi thi. Us KO to sirf viswas ek dusman hi lagta tha... Jisne usse uske Dada Aur dadi ka pyar sin liya tha...

Aaj Prem Aur priya 9 saal ke ho Gaye the Aur Varsha 15 saal ki ho gayi thi..

Ye log kabhi ganv nahi Gaye the itne salo me..

Ha pura parivar yaha aake sabse Milne aate rahte the sivay viswas ke..

Aaj ye parivar ganv ja raha tha..

Qki is baar dadaji viswas ka janamdin mana rahe the..

Vese to har saal manate the.. Lekin ye log kabhi nahi jate the..baldev harbar alag alag bahane banakar taal deta tha..

Aesa nahi tha ki vo aapne maa-baap se milna nahi chahte the.. Lekin in kus salo me baldev ko nafrat ho gayi thi viswas se..

Ab ye q to aayiye jante he..

Qki dadaji sari jaydad aapne pote viswas ke naam kardi thi..

Aur jab is baat ka pata chala to baldev ka is baat pe zagda ho gaya dadaji se..

Papa.....bapuji mene Jo suna vo sach he...

Dadaji...aesa kya suna tumne???

Papa....yahi ki aapne sari jaydat viswas ke naam kardi..

Dadaji...ha.. Aur vese bhi kya farak padta he. Tere baad sab uska hi to he..

Papa....lekin vo kese sab sambhal payega??

Dadaji...mtlb

Papa...vo pagal Jo he..

Dadiji..ye tum kya bol rahe ho baldev..vo tumhara beta he..

Papa...maa mera kahne ka mtlb he dimag se kamjor he... To vo kese ye sab sambhal payega...

Dadaji...chal tuje dikhta hu... Vo pagal he ki nahi??

Aur dadaji us KO jaha bhandara tha vaha le jate he jaha sab kha rahe the..

Aur ek choti bachi Jo hatho se apang thi usko aapne hatho se khila raha tha..

Dadaji...pata he ye bhandara viswas ne suru karvaya he.Aur tu kahta he pagal he.. Kya pagal aesa soch sakte he.. Aaj viswas ke is kaam me pura ganv iske sath he..koi kabhi kisi pagal ka sath deta he.. Aur tu bolta he pagal he.. Muje to Garv he ki mera pota aesa he.. Aaj Sara ganv mujse jyada mere pote ka sanman karte he..Aur is baat ki sabse jyada khushi muje hoti he..

Ye sab dekhkar baldev KO gussa aa jata he..Aur vo aesa bol gaya Jo us KO nahi bolna chahiye tha..

Baldev..(gusse me) ye kya kar diya is pagal ne.. Isse to ek din humare paas kus nahi bachega pitaji.. Aur mene sahi kaha tha ye pagal hi he..Aur aapne is pagal ka sath diya..
Kya pagal ho Gaye ho aap.. Isse to puri jaydad chali jayegi.. Kus nahi bachega humare pass...is pagal ke sath rahke aap bhi pagal ho Gaye he...

Aur tabhi ek thappad baldev ke gaal par padta he..

Lekin ye thappad dadaji ne nahi balki dadiji ne Mara tha..

Dadiji...kya bola tune Zara fir se bol..tuje ye bhi pata he tu kisse bol raha he Aur kya bol raha he???

Papa...to kya sari jaydat in bhukhe-nange loko me baat de..

Dadiji...tum bhul rahe ho ki ye humare aapne log he... Ye humara ganv he... Smje.

Papa vaha se gussa hoke chale Gaye..
Aur in sab ka zimmedar vo viswas ko smjne laga...

Viswas se gusse Aur nafrat ki vajah se vo us ke baad kabhi ganv nahi aaya..

Lekin is baar dadaji ne aurdar diya tha..

So majburan pura parivar ganv ke liye nikal chuke the..

Car me..

Baldev...priya Aur Prem vaha aap viswas se dur rahenge...

Priya...q papa vo humare bhayiya he n???

(Priya ko isliye pata tha ki dadaji jab bhi aate to hamesha viswas ke bare me batate the..)

Baldev...ha vo tumhara Bhai he...lekin vo pagal he...pagal kus bhi kar sakte he..

Prem...kya vo pagal he???

Baldev...ha beta vo pura pagal he.. Kahi aapko chot pahuchandi to...isliye aap usse dur rahna..

Prem...me to bhot dur rahunga...

Aur idhar ganv me viswas bhot khush tha ki aaj vo aapne mummy-papa Aur Bhai-bahno se milega..

Aur sabko ye kahta fir raha tha..

Aakhir sab pahunch Gaye...

Viswas daudta hua Jake pahle aapne papa Aur maa ke pair suye.
(Is tarah viswas daudkar aate huye dekh Prem aapne papa ke pise sup gaya)
Fir vo gale lagne ki kosis me jese hi aage aaya turant usko side karke baldev Aur sima aandar chale Gaye...

Sabke is tarah chale Jane se viswas ko bhot bura laga ..

Fir bhi vo unke pise2 Jane lagta he...

Pura parivaar ekdusre se milte he..

Sabko aapne aapne room me fresh hone ko kahte he..

Lekin priya baar2 pise mudkar viswas ko hi dekh rahi thi...

Thodi der baad priya vapas aati he Aur vo viswas KO hi dekh rahi thi..

To viswas usko isare se aapne pass bulata he..

To vo jese hi aage badhti he ki aapne papa ki baat yaad aate ruk jati he..

Uske ruk Jane se vuswas fir se usko bulata he to priya darte huye vo viswas ke paas Jane lagti he..

Jese hi vo paas aati he viswas uska hath pakdkar bahar le jata he Aur vo usko jaha bhandara chal raha tha vaha le jata he..

Vaha Jo khana kha rahe the unke paas jakar..

Viswas harroj jese khilata tha sabko usi tarah vo aaj khilana suru karta he..

Jese hi vo niwala leke pahle insan ko khilata he..

Aur jess hi vo aadmi rudra ke sar pe aarshivad Dene ke liye hath rakhne vala hota he ki...

Viswas...baba aad mude nahi meli bahan ko aalsibad dijiye..dite vo hameta tush rahe...(baba aaj muje nahi meri bahan KO aarshivad dijiye jisse vo hamesha khush rahe...)

(Note:- dosto ab me ye totli bhasha me nahi likhunga... Sudh bhasha me likunga.. Aap smj Jana)

Aadmi...ji chote thakur..(priya ke sir pe hath rakhke) hamesha khush raho beta..

Aese hi sab priya aarshivaad dete he..

Aur ek budhi aurat bethi huyi thi Jo khana nahi kha rahi thi...

Viswas...maaji aap kha q nahi rahi he??? Kya khana acha nahi he???

Maaji...nahi beta aesi baat nahi he..lekin aaj muje chot lagi he..

Viswas...isme kya he... Me aapko khila deta hu...

Fir vo maaji KO aapne hatho se khilane lagta he..

Aur priya ye sab dekh rahi thi...

Priya(man me).... Bhayiya to bhot ache he...fir papa q aesa bol rahe the ki pagal he...

Viswas ke hilane se priya hosh me aati he...

Usko paas bulakar..

Viswas...maaji ye meri bahan he...isko bhot safe aarshivaad dijiye..

Maaji...(do no ke sir pe hath rakhkar) bhagvan humesha tum dono ki raksha kare..

Fir dono bahar aate he...

Us KO aapne sath leke khelne lagta he...Aur priya KO bhi aapne bade Bhai ka sath acha lagne laga tha...

Fir us KO aapne room me le jata he Aur gift deta he...

Viswas...ye tumhare liye he..Aur ye Prem ke liye Aur ye didi ke liye..

Priya...aap hi de dete to??

Viswas...tumne niche nahi dekha kya??

Priya...acha thik he me de dungi...vese ek baat pusu??

Viswas...tumhe pusne ki jarurat nahi he...tum sidhe muje hukum kar Dena... Jo bhi chahiya ya Jo bhi pusna he...

Priya... Ohhhh tnx bhaiya... Vese bhayiya aap harroj aese khilate ho sabko..

Mai...ha . vese piyu tum kabhi ganv q nahi aati thi???

Priya...mummy-papa aane hi nahi dete the...

Aese hi inki bate chalti rahti he...

Aur janamdin bhi dhum dham se manaya...

Aur kus din rahne vale the...

Lekin in Dino me priya Aur viswas pyar badhta gaya..(sirf Bhai-bahan vala)

Aur jab Jane ki Bari aayi to sabse jyada dukhi priya Aur viswas hi the..

Qki unko ab alag hona padega...

Lekin jate huye priya ne vada kiya ki vo harroj call karegi...

Aese hi 2 saal bit Gaye...

Aur in 2 salo me jab bhi chutti hoti koi ganv aaye ke n aaye vo har chutti me ganv jati..

Aur dono Bhai bahan bhot masti karte...

Lekin aaj ka din sayad n aata to acha hota..
Fir bhi kismat ke aage kiski chali he..

(Ab kya hua vo dekhenge aagle update me.. )
(Flashback ka aakhri update kal aayega dosto.. Sorry aaj nahi de paunga...lekin tnsn mat lijiye kal raat ko de dunga..)

Nice update

 

[Bilal jan]

Update 32

In dilhi

Is waqt pura parivar hospital me tha...

Yaha tak ki viswas bhi..

Hua ye tha ki..

Aaj abhi priya KO phone nahi aaya tha viswas ko..

Varna harroj subah 10 baje se pahle aa jata tha..

Aur abhi 11 baj Gaye lekin phone nahi aaya tha..

Usne bhi kiya lekin koi risive bhi nahi kar raha tha isliye tnsn me tha..

Uski dadi usko aese dekh..

Dadaji...kya hua he mere bache KO??? Itna udas q he???

Mai...dadi abhi tak piyu ka phone nahi aaya??

Dadiji...to kya hua tum phone karlo..

Mai....dadiji mene bhi call kiya tha... Lekin koi utha hi nahi raha...

Dadiji...kahi bahar Gaye hoge sab!!

Mai....nahi dadi aesa nahi ho sakta...vo jab bhi kahi jati he to mujko jarur batati he.. Aur subah se muje kus acha bhi nahi lag raha.. Plz dadi aap phone karke puso n papa KO!!

Dadiji...ruk abhi phone karti hu..

2 hi ring me samne se phone risive hota he..

Dadiji...hello

Papa...ha ma boliye.

Dadiji...ghar pe phone kiya lekin koi utha nahi raha !!! Kaha ho tum sab???

Papa...vo maa hum hospital me he...priya ka accident hua tha...

Dadiji...kya kaha abhi tune???

Papa...priya ka kal accident hua tha...

Dadiji...ab kesi he meri bachi??? Aur kal accident hua tune hume batana bhi zaruri nahi samja..

Papa...sorry ma...Aur priya bilkul thik he.. Bs pair me fracture he...lekin Dr ne kaha he vo jaldi thik ho Jaye GI...

Dadiji...me Aur tere bapuji abhi nikal rahe he...

Aur phone rakh dete he...

Mai...kya hua dadi???

Dadiji...beta priya ka accident hua he ... Vo hospital me he...

Mai...dadi plz muje piyu ke pass le chaliye...

Tabhi dadaji bhi aa jate he Aur muje rota hua dekhkar...

Dadaji...kya hua mere bete KO ??? Ro q raha ho???

Mai turant Jake dadaji ke banho me bharke...

Mai....dada piyu ka accident hua he... Muje piyu ke pass Jana he !!!

Dadaji...tum vaha nahi ja sakte!!!

Mai...q nahi ja sakta.. Jab bhi kahta hu..aap muje mana kar date ho... Muje abhi piyu ke pass Jana he...

Dadiji...le chalte he...humare sath vapas aa Jaye ga...

Dadaji....tum bhi... Jante huye bhi..

Dadiji...plz meri khatir...

Mai....plz dadaji...varna me aapse kabhi baat nahi karunga...

Na chahte huye bhi...

Dadaji...thik he..

Aur vo nikal jate dilhi ki taraf( Aur meri barbadi ki taraf)

Viswas ne aate hi priya ko gale laga liya...

Ye baldev Aur sima KO bilkul acha nahi laga tha .. Lekin sabke hote huye vo kus nahi bolte..

Viswas...ab kesi he tu piyu??

Priya...bilkul thik hu bhaiya...

Mai...(pair pe bandhe plaster pe hath ferte huye) dard ho raha hoga n???

Priya... Ab tak ho raha tha...lekin aapki banho me aate hi dard khatam ho gaya...

Mai....ab mai tuje sodke kahi nahi jaunga... Tere pass rahunga...

Ye sunke sab paresan ho jate he...

Priya...vada karte ho???

Isse dadaji paresan ho jate he vo kus bolte usse pahle...

Mai.... Vada ... Ye veer thakur ke pote viswas thakur ka vada he...

Fir sab bhi priya ka halchal puste he...

Aese hi pura din nikal jata he...

Dadaji Aur dadiji ganv Jane ki taiyari karte he Aur viswas ko manane ki..

Lekin viswas nahi manta he...

Aur dono KO aapni kasam de deta he...jisse na chahte huye bhi dono ko viswas ke bina vapas chale jate he...

Aur ya baldev Aur sima ka viswas ka yaha rakhna manjur nahi tha...

Aur unko bhi na chahte huye rakhna padta he...

Hospital me Sara waqt vo priya ke sath hi rahta he...

Aur uska har tarah se khyal bhi rakhta he...

Kus din baad priya ko hospital se chutti mil jati he...

Ghar pe bhi vahi khyal rakhta tha...

Aur baldev Aur sima ke tane bhi suru ho Gaye the...

Hamesha pagal bolke tana marna...

Priya ko is baat ka hamesha bura lagta tha...
Ek Aur bhi tha jisko bura lagta tha...

Priya bhot baar kah bhi chuki thi.. Ki vo yaha se ganv chala Jaye lekin vo aapna vada ka kahke priya ko chup karva deta tha..

Ek din viswas ke hath se ek cup tut gaya..
Aur is vajah se sima ne itna Mara ki puso hi mat..

Fir bhi vo sab sahta tha Aur jab bhi priya kus kahti to usko viswas ye kahke chup karva deta ki " vo humare maa-baap he.." "Unka haq banta he"

Aaj priya ke sath vo pahli baar uske school gaya tha...

Priya aapne class me thi Aur viswas bahar khada tha...

Tabhi ek teacher vaha se gujar raha tha..

Teacher....oye ladke idhar kya kar raha he??

Viswas...me aapni bahan ke sath aaya hu..

Viswas ki totli boli bolte dekh vo teacher hasne laga...

Teacher ko hasta dekh ass-pass ke sare bacche ikatha ho Gaye...

Jinme Prem Aur uske dost bhi samil the..

Teacher...(haste huye) ek baar fir bol to..

Viswas...kya bolu sir??.

Is baar teacher ke sath sare bache bhi sath me hasne lage...

Aaj pahli baar viswas ko bura lag raha tha..

Tab priya ki class bhi puri huyi to bahar bacho ko ek jagah sath dekh

Priya Aur uske dost bhi vaha Gaye ki kya he..

Priya jese hi jati he to dikhti he uska Bhai bich me khada he..

To vo smj jati he..

Aur vo bich me Jake aapne Bhai ka hath pakadkar le Jane lagti he..

Teacher...kaha le ja rahi isko... Rahne do sabka manoranjan ho raha he..

Priya...ye mera Bhai he...Aur aap teacher hi ho n???

Teacher...kya mtlb he tumhara???

Priya...aapko kisi ka majak udate huye saram nahi aati!! Agar mere Bhai ki jagah aapka beta hota to???

Teacher...tum me manners nahi he...aapne teacher se aese baat karte he.???

Priya...pahle khud me manners layiye... Fir dusre ko kahiye...

Is baat se gussa hokar teacher priya ko Marne vala hota he ki viswas uska hath pakad leta he...

Aur abhi kus aage karta teacher usse pahle principal madam vaha aa jati he..

P.madam....kya ho raha he yaha???

To priya unko sab bata deti he...Aur jese hi p.madam viswas ko dekhti he...

P.madam....tum to thakur veer singh ke pote ho n???

Viswas...ji madam... Aur me bhi aapko janta hu... Aap pahle humare ganv me p.madam thi...

P.madam....bacho tumhe pata he ye viswas he...padhayi me kamjor lekin smjdari bhot he is me...(fir vo viswas ke bare me batane lagti he ki ganv valo ki madad,bhandara suru karne ki baat etc2.....)aesa he ye viswas...

Aur sabki aankhe khuli ki khuli rah jati he...

P.madam....(teacher se) aap ek teacher he...Aur aapko aesi harkate shobha nahi deti...

Teacher....sorry madam..

P.madam.... Mafi mujse nahi jiska majak udaya he usse mangiye..

Teacher....(na chahte huye bhi) sorry

Aur fir sab aapne-aapne raste chale jate he..

Lekin priya Prem KO ROK leti he..

Priya...tumhe saram nahi aati..aapne hi bade bhai pe has rahe the..

Prem...meri Marji me Jo bhi karu...

Isse gussa hoke priya Prem KO thappad mar deti he...

Jise sab dekh rahe the...

Isse Prem gussa hoke priya ko Marne hi vala hota he ki viswas Prem ka hath pakadkar usko dhakka de deta he..

Priya...chalo bhaiya ghar chalte he..

Aur vo dono ghar ki Aur nikal jate he..

Aur Prem aapmaan ke ghunt pi ke rah jata he...

Priya aapne dost ke ghar gayi huyi thi..

Prem ye mauka dekhkar aapni maa KO jhuthi kahani batakar kahta he viswas ne usko sari school ke samne Mara...

Is baat se gussa hokar sidha viswas ke paas Jake usko Marne Lahti he...

Aur sath me Prem bhi...

Maa...Teri himmat kese huyi mere bete ko Marne ki bol(marte huye)

Mai...vo priya ko Marne ki kosis kar raha tha...

Maa...priya Aur Prem mere bache he.. Aur vo dono kus lade ya mare?? to tuje kya???

Mai....vo meri bahan he ... Aur kya Mai aapka kus nahi???

Maa...nahi he tu mera kus smja...tuje to paida bhi nahi Karna chahti thi... Pata nahi kab tujse Pisa chutega???

Aur ye bolte huye nikal jati he...

Aur yaha viswas aapni maa ki aesi bato se rone lagta he... Aaj us KO bhot akelapan mahsus ho raha tha... Fir khud ko smjate huye..

Viswas...(aapne aap se) ek din aap muje jarur pyar karogi maa!!! Aur Mai us din ka intzaar karunga...

Aur ye baat vo priya ko nahi batata..lekin ghar me kaam karne vali servant se priya ko pata chal jata he...Aur aaj usko khud aapne maa-baap se nafrat ho gayi thi.. Aur afsos ho raha tha ki vo aese logo ki beti he...

Aur ye sab kisi Aur ne bhi sun liya tha.. Aur khud vo khud ko kamre me band karke ro rahi thi...

Aese hi waqt chal raha tha...

Ek din viswas betha hua TV dekh raha tha ki vaha bakdev ka rakha hua phone bajne lagta he..

Vo bhot der tak ring bajne deta he lekin jab koi nahi aata vo utha leta he...

Samne se....sarkar ek buri khabar he...

Mai....hello kaun???

Samne se....vaha commisoner sir ho to phone do...

Mai....thik he..

Kahke abhi Muda hi tha ki samne papa khade the..

Mai abhi kus bolta usse pahle

Papa muje ek thappad maar dete he...

Papa....teri himmat kese huyi mere phone ko hath lagane ki???

Mai...vo... papa... mai.... vo...

Papa...(Aur marte huye)... Ab tu mere samne bolega... Pata nahi ye pagal kab marega...??? Tu mar q nahi jata!!!

Aur bolte huye vaha se nikal jata he...

Jab saam ko priya ghar vapas aati he Aur sidha viswas ke room me jati he..

Aur jese hi aapne Bhai ki halat dekhti he to uski aankho se aanshu bahne lagte he..

Vo turant first aid box nikalke pahle munh pe ghun saaf karti he.. Aur fir ghanv pe dettol lagati he jisse mere munh se aanh nikal jati he..

Priya....sorry bhaiya... Bs ab ahista2 karungi...

Fir puri marham Patti karne ke baad..

Priya...ye sab kese hua bhaiya????

Mai....kus nahi vo sidiyo se gir gaya tha...

Priya...juth nahi bhaiya...

Mai...sod n vo sab piyu... Tum batao kesa raha din????

Priya turant mere hath pakadkar aapne sir pe rakh deti he..

Priya....ab sirf sach bologe...

Isse rote huye Mai usko gale laga deta hu...

Mai....kya piyu Mai bura hu???

Priya...kisne kaha!!! Aap is duniya ke sabse ache insan ho...

Mai...to fir mummy-papa,Prem Aur didi mujse nafarat q karte he???

Priya....vo unki galti he bhaiya...ek baat meri manage...

Mai....kya???

Priya....aap ganv chale jayiye...

Mai....nahi piyu me nahi ja sakta...ab to me mummy-papa ki nafrat kam karke hi jaunga...

Priya....lekin aapki aesi halat me nahi dekh sakti...me abhi dadaji KO phone karke sab bata deti hu...

Mai....tuje meri kasam he piyu tu dadaji ko kus nahi batayegi..aur vese bhi vo maa-baap he humare unka haq banta he hume dantne ka...

Priya....aese maa-baap se acha anath hona he...

Mai....nahi piyu aesa nahi bolte...

Priya....aapne khana khaya???

Mai....kabhi tumhare bina khana khaya he...

Fir priya niche Jake khana lati he Aur aapne hatho se muje khilati he Aur Mai us KO...

Aur us din priya aapne maa-baap ko bolne lagti he..lekin baldev priya ko thappad marke usko uske room me bhej deta he..

Aese hi din nikal rahe the.. Aur waqt ke sath inki nafrat mere liye badhti ja rahi thi...

Ganv me..(raat ke waqt)

Dadaji aur dadiji aapne room me the..

Dadiji...me aapse kus kahu???

Dadaji...tumhe kabse anumati lene lagi...

Dadiji...aaj mera man bhut ghabra raha he... Muje viswas ki chinta ho rahi he...

Dadaji...priya he uske sath.. Aur harroj phone pe baat to hoti he tumhari..

Dadiji...ha vo to he... Lekin usko dekhne ko dil kar raha he..

Dadaji...muje bhi...

Dadiji...to kal chale... Usko mil ke aa jayenge... Ho sake to hum usko vapas bho lete aayenge...

Dadaji...thik he..kal subah hi niklenge... To jaldi pahunch jayenge...

Dilhi...(raat ko)

Aaj papa ka promotion hua tha... Is liye unhone ghar pe bhut badi party rakhi thi..

Viswas ko aane se mana kar rakha tha...yaha tak ki room se bhi bahar n nikle..

Niche party suru ho chuki thi... Aur maheman bhi aane lagte he...

Priya mere room ke pass aake door knock karti he...

Mai darvaza khulta hu...

Priya....ye kya Bhai??? Aap abhi tak taiyar nahi huye???

Mai....piyu tum jao..meri tabiyat thik nahi he...

Priya...kya hua aapko...???

Mai...bs sirdard kar raha he...

Priya...layiye me malish kar deti hu aapke sir ki...

Mai...mene pahle hi baam lagali he...tum jao niche..

Priya....nahi me aapko akele sodkar nahi jaungi...jaungi to aapke sath jaungi...

Abhi me kus bolta usse pahle

Priya...muje kasam mat Dena...ab aap aa rahe ho ki nahi???

Mai....tumse thodi jeet paunga...chalo taiyar hota hu...

Fir dono niche jate he...

Priya khud mera hath pakakar chal rahi thi..

Aur hum dono akele hi Bethe huye the..

Kisika dhyan hum pe nahi tha..

Tabhi ek aurat ja rahi thi ki galti se mera pair lag Jane se vo aurat gir gayi..

Mai...sorry aunty... Mujse galti ho gayi..

Fir bhi us aurat ne khadi hokar ek tamacha maar diya muje..

Jisse sabka dhyan meri Aur aa gaya..

Maa bhi vaha pahunch gayi

Maa...kya hua rekha(temporary character) ????

Rekha...is pagal ne muje gira diya... Pagal kahi ka...

Priya...mafi to mangli... Aur vese bhi jaanbhujkar nahi giraya...

Rekha...tum q is pagal ki side le rahi ho??? Sima he kaun ye???

Abhi maa kus bolti usse pahle

Priya....Bhai he mera... Agli baar aapne mere Bhai ko pagal bola n dekho fir kya karti hu...

Maa...ye kya badtamiji he priya??

Priya...badtamiji to ye aunty kar rahi he..

Rekha...aese pagal tumhara beta he sima??? (Aur hasne lagti he)

Mai..aunty plz muje maaf kar dijiye..meri bahan ki Aur se bhi Mai mafi mangta hu...

Meri totli bhasha se fir sab log hasne lagte he...

Isse priya ko gussa aane lagta he...

Priya...(jor se) chuuuuppp...

Jisse sab hasna band kar dete he..

Priya....ab agar aap sab me se koi bhi yaha ruka to sabko dhake markar bahar nikalungi... Isse pahle me aap sabko Dhaka marke nikalu sab niklo mere ghar se...

Sima...ye kya he priya.??? Aese baat karte he... Mafi mango sabse...

Priya...jese ke sath tesa kiya he...kus galat nahi bola mene... Aur ajib besharam ho tum sab abhi bhi yahi khade ho..ya fir dhake du...

Fir sab log maa Aur papa ko bhala bura kahte huye nikal jate he...

Sari party ka satynash kar diya tha priya ne..

Ab sirf family vale hi bache the...

Abhi maa Aur papa meri Aur aane vale the ki...

Priya...Bhai ka hath bhi mat lagana... Varna abhi dadaji KO phone kar dungi.. Fir aapko pata he kya hoga???

Na chahte huye bhi maa- papa KO aapna gusa pite huye aapne room me chale jate he...

Priya mera hath pakadkar muje aapne room me le jati he...

Room me

Mai...piyu ye tumne thik nahi kiya???

Priya...mene bilkul thik kiya he... Mere ghar aakar mere Bhai ki bejjati kare..

Mai....lekin piyu maa-papa ke bare me sichti tum??

Priya...muje kisike bare me nahi sochna... Ab kus nahi aap so jayiye...

Mai...vese piyu gusse me bilkul bandar lagti ho!!

Pahle to smj me nahi aata lekin jab smj aata he muje marte huye(pyar se)

Priya....kya me bandar dikhti hu... To aap bhi bandar ho...

Mai...Mai kese bandar hua???

Priya...me bandar hu to aap bhi bandar huye.. Qki aap mere Bhai ho...

Priya....(masumiyat se)vese kya me sachme bandar lag rahi hu bhaiya...

Uski masuyat pe

Mai...bilkul nahi...meri piyu to pari he..Aur pariya kabhi bandar nahi hoti...

Priya...acha ab aap so jayiye...

Fir me aapne room me chala jata hu...

Yaha maa-papa ke room

Maa...aaj ki puri party ka satynash ho gaya!!

Papa...priya ne sabki bejjati ki!

Maa...priya ne nahi balki vo sab us pagal ka kiya dhara he..aab kya munh dikhaungi me aapni dosto KO..

Papa...Jo sahar meri ijjat karta tha..Jo log darte the mujse Aur mujse aankh milake baat tak nahi kar sakte the vo log bhi muje sunake chale Gaye...

Maa....Aur ye sab us pagal ki vajah se hua.. Aur iske sath rahke priya bhi bigad gayi...

Papa....isse to acha hota mar jata... Sari jaydad bhi bhukhe nange loko me baat raha he...

Maa...me to kahti hu maar dalo... Varna ek din kus bhi nahi bachega...

Papa...agar usko kus ho gaya to bapuji hume nahi sodenge...

Maa...kah denge pagal he...

Papa...mtlb tumne soch liya he..

Maa...ha aur kal pata bhi chal Jaye ga...

Aagle din.. (10 baje)

Aaj muje maa khud muje uthane aayi...

Prem to nikal gaya tha..
Aur priya aapni dost ke ghar gayi thi...

Maa.... Uth jao beta...

Mai...(jagte huye) maa aap??

Maa...ha me... Ab chalo fresh ho jao me tumhare liye nasta lekar aata hu...

Mai...thank you maa.. Me abhi taiyar ho jata hu..

Fir maa bahar chali jati he Aur jese hi Mai bathroom me janevala hota hu ki ghar ki servant aa jati he...

Servant...babuji muje aapse baat karni he...

Mai...ha boliye didi(Mai jabse yaha aaya tabse inko didi hi bulata tha)

Servant...plz aap vo nasta mat Karna...qki usme zahar milaya he aapki maa ne..

Mai...muje pata he...(qki raat ko aapne room me jate huye mene sab sun liya tha...Aur is vajah se puri raat roya tha.. Isliye subah der tak sota raha)

Servant...fir bhi aap chup he...

Mai...isi bahane meri maa ka pyar to milega mujko...Aur plz aap ye baat kisi ko mat batana...

Mai rote huye bathroom me chala jata hu...

Us servant ko maa chuuti de deti he...

To vo sidha priya ke pass Jane ke liye nikal jate he..

Aur idhar maa nasta leke room me aati he...

Maa...tumko khir bhot pasand he n!??

Mai...ha maa

Maa...isliye mene usko tere liye banaya he ... Tum kha Lena...me Aur tere papa ja rahe he..

Mai...maa plz ek chammach(spoon) aap khila dijiye.. Fir baki me khud kha lunga...

Maa...ha q nahi???

Vo ek chammach(spoon) kheer leti he Aur mere munh ke aage karti he..Aur unke hath (kampan) dhruj rahe the...

Mai ye dekhke muskura deta hu...

Aur kha leta hu...

Aur fir vo chali jati he...

Aur udar vo Radha didi(servent) priya ke dost ke ghar pahunch ke priya KO bulati he...

Priya... Radha didi aap yaha kya baat he...

Radha... Vo viswas Bhai ki jaan khatre me he...

Priya...what????

Radha...(sari baat bata deti he..)

Priya...Bhai aesa kese kar sakte he...pata hote huye bhi...

Radha...aap jaldi jayiye.. Varna der ho jayegi..

Priya vaha se bhagte huye ghar ki Aur nikal jati he...(isme usko 20 minutes lag jate he)

Jese hi vo ghar ke paas pahunchti he to dadaji Aur dadiji car se nikal hi rahe the..

Dadaji...priya beta aese bhagte huye q aa rahi ho???

Priya(hafte huye)....dadaji Bhai ki jaan khatre me he...jaldi chaliye...

Aage kus bole bina vo chali jati he aur Dada Aur dadi bhi pise ho lete he!!

Jaha room me behosh pada hua tha...

Jise dekhke..

Dadaji...ye kya hua mere bache KO???

Priya...humare pass abhi time nahi he jaldi Bhai KO hospital le chalte he...

Aur turant usko car me bithakar hospital le jate he Aur aapne Dr dost ko call kar deta he...

Hospital pahunchkar Dr viswas ko sidha ICU me le jate he...

Aandar mera ilaj chal raha tha..

Dadaji...priya beta aapko kese pata chala...

Priya... Vo dadaji(fir vo sabkus batati he kese usko pata chala)

Dadiji...nahi mera beta aesa nahi kar sakta..

Priya...dadi Bhai ke sath bhot bura bartav karte the ye log!!(fir vo in Dino me Jo hua vo sab bata deti he)

Dadaji...Aur tumne humko kaha bhi nahi...

Priya...jab bhi aapse kahne ki kosis karti muje aapni kasam dekar vo ROK lete the...

Dadaji papa ko call karke hospital bula lete he.. Aur rajeshwari ji(naniji) ko bhi bula lete he...

Nani Aur Mani sahar me hi the to vo turant hospital pahunch jate he..

Fir unko bhi sab pata chal jata he..

Udhar papa Aur mummy KO pata hi nahi tha ki hospital q bulvaya...

To vo log bhi hospital ke liye nikal jate he...

Tabhi Dr bahar aate he...

Dadaji...ab kesa he mera beta???

Dr...tnsn ki baat nahi he...jaldi le aaya tum log isliye bach gaya...vomet se bhi zahar nikal gaya he Aur antidote bhi de diya he... Aadhe ghante me mil sakte ho!!!

Dadaji...tnx dost...

Dr...isme tnx kesa??? Ye to mera farj tha..

Jab muje hosh aata he tab sab mera haalchal puste he..

Tabhi maa-papa bhi aa jate he..

Aur dadaji papa ko Aur naniji maa ko thappad mar deti he..

Dadaji...kesa baap he tu Jo aapne hi bete ko marna chahta he..

Naniji...tuje to me kya kahu.. Meri hi galti he..Teri har galti maaf karti gayi.. Iska hi natija he.. Kya tera hath bhi nahi kampa ek masum ki jaan lete huye..

Mai...dadaji Aur naniji maaf kar dijiye maa Aur papa ko..

Dadaji...dekh ek tu he Jo ise marna chahta he.. Aur ek ye Jo tuje maaf karne KO kah raha he...

Abhi koi kus bolta usse pahle priya ne dhamaka kar diya.

Priya...(mere hath aapne sir pe rakh) aapka pata tha n ???

Dadaji...mtlb

Priya...dadaji bhayiya ko pata tha khir me zahar he..

Sab ek sath....kya????

Priya...ha..(mujse) aapko pata tha fir bhi khir q khayi???

Viswas...maa ne mere liye pyar se pahli baar kus banaya tha...to kese inkaar kar deta.. Bhale hi vo pyar jutha bhi q ho...

Ye sunke to papa Aur maa ki dhadkan hi ruk jati he..
Mami..(maa ko thappad mar kar) tujko ye adhikar kisne diya tha... Ye mera beta he.. Aur uske liye me tuje kabhi maaf nahi karungi...

Dadaji...dekh tu is KO pagal bolta tha..(fir mujse) tune aapne maa-baap ke bare me sicha.. Ek baar humare bare me sochta...

Dadiji...(papa se) aaj se tu mere liye mar chuka he...me smjungi vo kabhi peda hi nahi hua tha...

Nani ji...(maa se) mene Teri har galti maaf ki he.. Lekin is baar tune kiya vo galti nahi gunah he.. Ab se mera sirf ek beta hi he... Mere liye tum mar chuki ho...

Dadiji...chaliye ab hum humare bache ko lekar nikalte he..

Aur isike sath hi..

Present...

Baldev aapni soch me se bahar nikal aata he....

Aur sima maa kahti huyi uth jati he...

(Dosto aage flashback kus update baad suru hoga... Jo rudra yaad karega.. Ye flashback baldev yaad kar raha tha...)

Nice update