Incest Halala Ammi Sath

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Hope ending aapko acchi laage

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Update 41

Agle din jab aabaas nashe se uthta hai toh dekhta haai who sana k kamre maai naanga soya thaaaaaaaaa

Aur baju mai nangi sana lete lete roooooooooo rahi thiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii

Yeh dekh abaas ki fattttttttttttttttttttttttt jaati haaaaaaaaaaaaaaaai

Abaas- Sana mai yeha kyaaaaaaaaaaaaa krr raaha hu isss haalat maaai tere saath

Sana rote rote- Abuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu kaaal raat ko nashe maaai aapne meri izaaaat lotttttttt liiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii

Yeh suna abaas k pair k niche se zameen nikaaal jaati haai

Abaass- Nhiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii Aisa nhi hooooooooooooo sakta mai aisa nhiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii kr saktaaaaaaaaaaaaa

Sana- Aapne kiyaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa haaaaaaaaaaaaai abbu
ammi aur bhai ka gussaaaa kaal aapne mere upaaar nikaala haaiiiii

Yeh sun abaas rone laaagta haai- Hai upaar wale yeh maine kyaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa krrrrrrrrrrrr diya apni bacchi k sath

(Dosto abaas bhale hi bevdaa thaaaaaa aur usne fatimaaa ko kabhi dil se pyaaaaaaaarrr nhi kiyaaaaaaaa paar who tharki nhi thaaa
kaal usne naashe maaii Fatima ayaan k gussaa sana par nikaal )

Abaaasssss--- Yeh gunah maafi k laayak nhi haaai bol k kapde phen k waha se bhaagg jaata haaaaaaaaaai

Aur upaar teerace maaai jaake

Abaas- Saab khatam hoo gaya meri biwi meri nhi rahi aur kaal raat maine aapni beti k sath gunah kr diya bol k

sucide krrrrr leeta haaaaaiiii

Idhaar ghaar mai shok k mahool hoooo jaata haaaaaiiii

Saab koi abaas ki maut k liye khud ko doshi maan raahe theeeeeeeeee

Ayaan Fatima ko lag raha tha abaas unke kaaran sucide kiyaa haai

Dadi ko laaga unke laalach k kaaran usne aapna beta khooooooooo diyaaaaaaaaaaaa

Par Asli Karan sirf sana ko paata thaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa

Sana ko aapne abbu k liye dukh lag raaha thaaaa bhale hii Abaas n nashe mai uski izzat luti thi

sana ne aapne abbu ko maaf kr diyaa thaaaaa aur jaanbhuj k ye baat kisi ko nhi baatayi

Kyonki aab jab uske abbu n sucide kr hi liya thaaa toh who unko badnaam nhi krna chaati thiii

Dheere Dheere time nikaaal jaata haai ghaar puraaa baadal gaya thaaa

Ab Ayaan aur fatimaaaaaaa bhi guilt mai the

Aur dur dur rehte the aur pyaaaaaaaaaar nhi krte the

Idhaaar Abaas k marne k baad daadi ki tabyaat kharab rehti thiii

9 month baad

Fatima aur sana dono ki delivey hone waali thiii hospital mai

Ayaan Fatima k Operation theratre k baahar hii thaaaaaaaaaaaa

Kuch time baad doctor baachaa leke baahar nikaalta haai

Doc- Mubaarak hoo aap baap baan gaye Ladki Hui haai

Yeh sunnn Ayaaan Bahut khussh hotaa haaaaaaaiiii

Aur Bacchi ko godi mai leleta haai

Ayaan- Tum toh bilkul aapni Ammi paar gayi hoooooooo

Wohi aankh wohi naak meri pyaaaaaaaaaari beti

Doc- Hume ek aaur baat baatani haaaaaaaaaiii

Hum bacche ki maaaaaaa ko nhi bacha paaye

Yeh sunnnn Ayaan k pair k niche se zamenn nikaaaaaaaaaaaaal jaati haai

Ayaaaaaaan- Kyaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa
Rote rote Yeh kya bol rahe hooooooo aap doc aisa nhi hoooo saktaaa

Meri ammi mujhe chood k nhiiiii jaaaaaaaaaaa saakti

Doc- Dekhiyaa aapne aap ko sambhaaliyeee

humne phele hi baatya tha iss umaar maai pregnant hona risky haaai

Ayaan- yeh kyaaaaaaaa bol rahe hoooooooooo
kisko baataya tha

Doc- Fatima ko

(Dosto doc n Fatima ko phele bata rakha thaa iss ummar maai bacha jaanam dene se aapki jaan jaa sakti haaai paar Fatima n ayaan ki Khushi k liye yeh risk liya tha aur kisi ko nhi baataya tha)

Ayaan- Ammmmmmmmmiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii yeh kyaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa
kiyaaaaa aapne mere sath

Itna bada dhoka diya aapne mujhe who bhi meri khusi k liyee

mai aapke binaaaa kaise jiiiii paungaaaa

Doc- aap sambhaliye aapne aapko aapni baachi k baare mai sochiye

aapko uske liye jeena paadega bol k waha se chaaal deta haai

Idhaar sana ko bhi ladki hoooooooo jaati haaai

Par Doc n usse bol diya tha who kabhi phir se ammi nhi baan paayegi

(dosto sana ko laagta tha kami sirf Amjad mai hai paar kuch kami usme bhi thi aur sayaad abbu k sath sex krne k kaaran kuch complication aa gaya hoga sana maai)

Ayaan aapni dono beti ko leke ghaar aa gaya thaaaaa

Ghaarrrrr Mai saab dukhi the Fatima k liyeeeee

Dadi n yeh saab paar pota k liye kiyaa who toh milaaa nhiiiii ghaar puraaaa barbaad hooooooooo gaya

Aise hi kuch din nikaal jaate haai

Dadi ayaan ko dusra nikah k liye bolne laagti haai

Dadi- beta aap mere pass jyaada time nhi bacha aagar tu dusra nikah kr lega toh mai chain se maar paaungi

Ayaan- dadi mai aab zindagi mai kabhi dusra nikah nhi karunga

Dadi- Par tere paas aabhi puri jaawani paadi haai

Ayaan- Aab Mere liye meri beti hi mera saab kuch haai

Mujhe aaur kuch baat nhi karna bol k chaal deta haai

Kuch din baad

Dadi bahut bimaar thi ayaan ko aapne paas bulaati haai

Dadi- Beta aab mere jaane k time aa gaaya haaai mere laalach ne iss pariwaaar ko tod diyaaaaaaaaaaaaa

Ayaan- Aisa maaaaaaaat bolo dadi

Dadi- Sahi bol rahi hu maaaaaaaaaaaaai paar pota dekh hi nhi paayi maaaaaaaaaiiiiiiiiii

Par tujhe iss pariwwar k vansh aage badhana hi hogaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa

Meri ek aakhir iccha puri kr dena bol
K ayaan k kaan mai kuch bolti haai

Jisskoo sun ayaan shock hooo jaata haaai

Idhaar daaadi marrrrrrrrrrrrr jaati haaaaaaaaai

Aab ghar mai sirf ayaan sana aur uski do beti bacch jaate haai

(Dosto mujhe pata hai kuch logo ko Fatima k marna pasand nhi aayega kuch log chate the ayaan Fatima hamesha sath rahe paar writer k story k liye original plan hamesha se yahi tha
Story open ended hai aur aagar aap log part 2 k liye bologe toh mai start karunga
Aage ki story k hint aap samjh hi gaye honge)

Dekha jaye toh saab ko aapni galti ki saza mili

Sana ko phele talaq phir Abbas se izzat lutwaa ki

Abaas ko sucide krke

Dadi Bina paar pota dekhe maarrrrrr gayi

Ayaan ne Fatima ko khooooooo diyaa

Bass Fatima n ayaan kimaat chukayi thi aapni jaan deke pyaaaaaaar k liye
Waise bhi yeh duniyaaa uske liye naarak baan chuki thiii

Agar who jinda bhi rehti toh hamesha guilt mai rehti abass ko dekh dekh k

Abaas k marne k baad uska guilt aaur badh gaya tha

Haar kaam ki ek price hoti hai jo sabko deni padti haai iss story mai bhi saab character ne who price pay kiya

Har Ending k sath ek nayi kahani shuru hoti hai

Aap isko ending nhi ayaan k nayi zindagi k beginning samjh sakte hai

Hope aapko meri Pheli Story Pasaand aayi hogi

Comment krke ending k baare mai aapna view jarur share kijye

Thanks For Reading

 

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Fantastic writing ...bahut achi likha aur end bhi kiya next part ka intezar Rahegaa

 

[A.A.G.]

Update 41

Agle din jab aabaas nashe se uthta hai toh dekhta haai who sana k kamre maai naanga soya thaaaaaaaaa

Aur baju mai nangi sana lete lete roooooooooo rahi thiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii

Yeh dekh abaas ki fattttttttttttttttttttttttt jaati haaaaaaaaaaaaaaaai

Abaas- Sana mai yeha kyaaaaaaaaaaaaa krr raaha hu isss haalat maaai tere saath

Sana rote rote- Abuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu kaaal raat ko nashe maaai aapne meri izaaaat lotttttttt liiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii

Yeh suna abaas k pair k niche se zameen nikaaal jaati haai

Abaass- Nhiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii Aisa nhi hooooooooooooo sakta mai aisa nhiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii kr saktaaaaaaaaaaaaa

Sana- Aapne kiyaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa haaaaaaaaaaaaai abbu
ammi aur bhai ka gussaaaa kaal aapne mere upaaar nikaala haaiiiii

Yeh sun abaas rone laaagta haai- Hai upaar wale yeh maine kyaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa krrrrrrrrrrrr diya apni bacchi k sath

(Dosto abaas bhale hi bevdaa thaaaaaa aur usne fatimaaa ko kabhi dil se pyaaaaaaaarrr nhi kiyaaaaaaaa paar who tharki nhi thaaa
kaal usne naashe maaii Fatima ayaan k gussaa sana par nikaal )

Abaaasssss--- Yeh gunah maafi k laayak nhi haaai bol k kapde phen k waha se bhaagg jaata haaaaaaaaaai

Aur upaar teerace maaai jaake

Abaas- Saab khatam hoo gaya meri biwi meri nhi rahi aur kaal raat maine aapni beti k sath gunah kr diya bol k

sucide krrrrr leeta haaaaaiiii

Idhaar ghaar mai shok k mahool hoooo jaata haaaaaiiii

Saab koi abaas ki maut k liye khud ko doshi maan raahe theeeeeeeeee

Ayaan Fatima ko lag raha tha abaas unke kaaran sucide kiyaa haai

Dadi ko laaga unke laalach k kaaran usne aapna beta khooooooooo diyaaaaaaaaaaaa

Par Asli Karan sirf sana ko paata thaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa

Sana ko aapne abbu k liye dukh lag raaha thaaaa bhale hii Abaas n nashe mai uski izzat luti thi

sana ne aapne abbu ko maaf kr diyaa thaaaaa aur jaanbhuj k ye baat kisi ko nhi baatayi

Kyonki aab jab uske abbu n sucide kr hi liya thaaa toh who unko badnaam nhi krna chaati thiii

Dheere Dheere time nikaaal jaata haai ghaar puraaa baadal gaya thaaa

Ab Ayaan aur fatimaaaaaaa bhi guilt mai the

Aur dur dur rehte the aur pyaaaaaaaaaar nhi krte the

Idhaaar Abaas k marne k baad daadi ki tabyaat kharab rehti thiii

9 month baad

Fatima aur sana dono ki delivey hone waali thiii hospital mai

Ayaan Fatima k Operation theratre k baahar hii thaaaaaaaaaaaa

Kuch time baad doctor baachaa leke baahar nikaalta haai

Doc- Mubaarak hoo aap baap baan gaye Ladki Hui haai

Yeh sunnn Ayaaan Bahut khussh hotaa haaaaaaaiiii

Aur Bacchi ko godi mai leleta haai

Ayaan- Tum toh bilkul aapni Ammi paar gayi hoooooooo

Wohi aankh wohi naak meri pyaaaaaaaaaari beti

Doc- Hume ek aaur baat baatani haaaaaaaaaiii

Hum bacche ki maaaaaaa ko nhi bacha paaye

Yeh sunnnn Ayaan k pair k niche se zamenn nikaaaaaaaaaaaaal jaati haai

Ayaaaaaaan- Kyaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa
Rote rote Yeh kya bol rahe hooooooo aap doc aisa nhi hoooo saktaaa

Meri ammi mujhe chood k nhiiiii jaaaaaaaaaaa saakti

Doc- Dekhiyaa aapne aap ko sambhaaliyeee

humne phele hi baatya tha iss umaar maai pregnant hona risky haaai

Ayaan- yeh kyaaaaaaaa bol rahe hoooooooooo
kisko baataya tha

Doc- Fatima ko

(Dosto doc n Fatima ko phele bata rakha thaa iss ummar maai bacha jaanam dene se aapki jaan jaa sakti haaai paar Fatima n ayaan ki Khushi k liye yeh risk liya tha aur kisi ko nhi baataya tha)

Ayaan- Ammmmmmmmmiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii yeh kyaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa
kiyaaaaa aapne mere sath

Itna bada dhoka diya aapne mujhe who bhi meri khusi k liyee

mai aapke binaaaa kaise jiiiii paungaaaa

Doc- aap sambhaliye aapne aapko aapni baachi k baare mai sochiye

aapko uske liye jeena paadega bol k waha se chaaal deta haai

Idhaar sana ko bhi ladki hoooooooo jaati haaai

Par Doc n usse bol diya tha who kabhi phir se ammi nhi baan paayegi

(dosto sana ko laagta tha kami sirf Amjad mai hai paar kuch kami usme bhi thi aur sayaad abbu k sath sex krne k kaaran kuch complication aa gaya hoga sana maai)

Ayaan aapni dono beti ko leke ghaar aa gaya thaaaaa

Ghaarrrrr Mai saab dukhi the Fatima k liyeeeee

Dadi n yeh saab paar pota k liye kiyaa who toh milaaa nhiiiii ghaar puraaaa barbaad hooooooooo gaya

Aise hi kuch din nikaal jaate haai

Dadi ayaan ko dusra nikah k liye bolne laagti haai

Dadi- beta aap mere pass jyaada time nhi bacha aagar tu dusra nikah kr lega toh mai chain se maar paaungi

Ayaan- dadi mai aab zindagi mai kabhi dusra nikah nhi karunga

Dadi- Par tere paas aabhi puri jaawani paadi haai

Ayaan- Aab Mere liye meri beti hi mera saab kuch haai

Mujhe aaur kuch baat nhi karna bol k chaal deta haai

Kuch din baad

Dadi bahut bimaar thi ayaan ko aapne paas bulaati haai

Dadi- Beta aab mere jaane k time aa gaaya haaai mere laalach ne iss pariwaaar ko tod diyaaaaaaaaaaaaa

Ayaan- Aisa maaaaaaaat bolo dadi

Dadi- Sahi bol rahi hu maaaaaaaaaaaaai paar pota dekh hi nhi paayi maaaaaaaaaiiiiiiiiii

Par tujhe iss pariwwar k vansh aage badhana hi hogaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa

Meri ek aakhir iccha puri kr dena bol
K ayaan k kaan mai kuch bolti haai

Jisskoo sun ayaan shock hooo jaata haaai

Idhaar daaadi marrrrrrrrrrrrr jaati haaaaaaaaai

Aab ghar mai sirf ayaan sana aur uski do beti bacch jaate haai

(Dosto mujhe pata hai kuch logo ko Fatima k marna pasand nhi aayega kuch log chate the ayaan Fatima hamesha sath rahe paar writer k story k liye original plan hamesha se yahi tha
Story open ended hai aur aagar aap log part 2 k liye bologe toh mai start karunga
Aage ki story k hint aap samjh hi gaye honge)

Dekha jaye toh saab ko aapni galti ki saza mili

Sana ko phele talaq phir Abbas se izzat lutwaa ki

Abaas ko sucide krke

Dadi Bina paar pota dekhe maarrrrrr gayi

Ayaan ne Fatima ko khooooooo diyaa

Bass Fatima n ayaan kimaat chukayi thi aapni jaan deke pyaaaaaaar k liye
Waise bhi yeh duniyaaa uske liye naarak baan chuki thiii

Agar who jinda bhi rehti toh hamesha guilt mai rehti abass ko dekh dekh k

Abaas k marne k baad uska guilt aaur badh gaya tha

Haar kaam ki ek price hoti hai jo sabko deni padti haai iss story mai bhi saab character ne who price pay kiya

Har Ending k sath ek nayi kahani shuru hoti hai

Aap isko ending nhi ayaan k nayi zindagi k beginning samjh sakte hai

Hope aapko meri Pheli Story Pasaand aayi hogi

Comment krke ending k baare mai aapna view jarur share kijye

Thanks For Reading

Nice ending..!!
Bhai Fatima kr liye bahot bura lag raha hai..woh toh bas inn sab me fasti gayi lekin usse inn sab me Ayaan se sachha huva aur Ayaan ko bhi Fatima se sachha pyaar huva..usko Zinda rehna chahiye tha lekin nahi reh payi..!! Dadi bhi apni khwahish Puri nahi kar payi aur mar gayi..Abbas bhi guilt me suicide kar liya..ab Ayaan aur sana hi bache hai pachtava karne ke liye..ab dono bhai behen hi Miya biwi banke apni betiyon ko sambhalenge..!!

 

[Monpura]

Iiiiiiii

 

[Rajizexy]

Update 41

Agle din jab aabaas nashe se uthta hai toh dekhta haai who sana k kamre maai naanga soya thaaaaaaaaa

Aur baju mai nangi sana lete lete roooooooooo rahi thiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii

Yeh dekh abaas ki fattttttttttttttttttttttttt jaati haaaaaaaaaaaaaaaai

Abaas- Sana mai yeha kyaaaaaaaaaaaaa krr raaha hu isss haalat maaai tere saath

Sana rote rote- Abuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu kaaal raat ko nashe maaai aapne meri izaaaat lotttttttt liiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii

Yeh suna abaas k pair k niche se zameen nikaaal jaati haai

Abaass- Nhiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii Aisa nhi hooooooooooooo sakta mai aisa nhiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii kr saktaaaaaaaaaaaaa

Sana- Aapne kiyaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa haaaaaaaaaaaaai abbu
ammi aur bhai ka gussaaaa kaal aapne mere upaaar nikaala haaiiiii

Yeh sun abaas rone laaagta haai- Hai upaar wale yeh maine kyaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa krrrrrrrrrrrr diya apni bacchi k sath

(Dosto abaas bhale hi bevdaa thaaaaaa aur usne fatimaaa ko kabhi dil se pyaaaaaaaarrr nhi kiyaaaaaaaa paar who tharki nhi thaaa
kaal usne naashe maaii Fatima ayaan k gussaa sana par nikaal )

Abaaasssss--- Yeh gunah maafi k laayak nhi haaai bol k kapde phen k waha se bhaagg jaata haaaaaaaaaai

Aur upaar teerace maaai jaake

Abaas- Saab khatam hoo gaya meri biwi meri nhi rahi aur kaal raat maine aapni beti k sath gunah kr diya bol k

sucide krrrrr leeta haaaaaiiii

Idhaar ghaar mai shok k mahool hoooo jaata haaaaaiiii

Saab koi abaas ki maut k liye khud ko doshi maan raahe theeeeeeeeee

Ayaan Fatima ko lag raha tha abaas unke kaaran sucide kiyaa haai

Dadi ko laaga unke laalach k kaaran usne aapna beta khooooooooo diyaaaaaaaaaaaa

Par Asli Karan sirf sana ko paata thaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa

Sana ko aapne abbu k liye dukh lag raaha thaaaa bhale hii Abaas n nashe mai uski izzat luti thi

sana ne aapne abbu ko maaf kr diyaa thaaaaa aur jaanbhuj k ye baat kisi ko nhi baatayi

Kyonki aab jab uske abbu n sucide kr hi liya thaaa toh who unko badnaam nhi krna chaati thiii

Dheere Dheere time nikaaal jaata haai ghaar puraaa baadal gaya thaaa

Ab Ayaan aur fatimaaaaaaa bhi guilt mai the

Aur dur dur rehte the aur pyaaaaaaaaaar nhi krte the

Idhaaar Abaas k marne k baad daadi ki tabyaat kharab rehti thiii

9 month baad

Fatima aur sana dono ki delivey hone waali thiii hospital mai

Ayaan Fatima k Operation theratre k baahar hii thaaaaaaaaaaaa

Kuch time baad doctor baachaa leke baahar nikaalta haai

Doc- Mubaarak hoo aap baap baan gaye Ladki Hui haai

Yeh sunnn Ayaaan Bahut khussh hotaa haaaaaaaiiii

Aur Bacchi ko godi mai leleta haai

Ayaan- Tum toh bilkul aapni Ammi paar gayi hoooooooo

Wohi aankh wohi naak meri pyaaaaaaaaaari beti

Doc- Hume ek aaur baat baatani haaaaaaaaaiii

Hum bacche ki maaaaaaa ko nhi bacha paaye

Yeh sunnnn Ayaan k pair k niche se zamenn nikaaaaaaaaaaaaal jaati haai

Ayaaaaaaan- Kyaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa
Rote rote Yeh kya bol rahe hooooooo aap doc aisa nhi hoooo saktaaa

Meri ammi mujhe chood k nhiiiii jaaaaaaaaaaa saakti

Doc- Dekhiyaa aapne aap ko sambhaaliyeee

humne phele hi baatya tha iss umaar maai pregnant hona risky haaai

Ayaan- yeh kyaaaaaaaa bol rahe hoooooooooo
kisko baataya tha

Doc- Fatima ko

(Dosto doc n Fatima ko phele bata rakha thaa iss ummar maai bacha jaanam dene se aapki jaan jaa sakti haaai paar Fatima n ayaan ki Khushi k liye yeh risk liya tha aur kisi ko nhi baataya tha)

Ayaan- Ammmmmmmmmiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii yeh kyaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa
kiyaaaaa aapne mere sath

Itna bada dhoka diya aapne mujhe who bhi meri khusi k liyee

mai aapke binaaaa kaise jiiiii paungaaaa

Doc- aap sambhaliye aapne aapko aapni baachi k baare mai sochiye

aapko uske liye jeena paadega bol k waha se chaaal deta haai

Idhaar sana ko bhi ladki hoooooooo jaati haaai

Par Doc n usse bol diya tha who kabhi phir se ammi nhi baan paayegi

(dosto sana ko laagta tha kami sirf Amjad mai hai paar kuch kami usme bhi thi aur sayaad abbu k sath sex krne k kaaran kuch complication aa gaya hoga sana maai)

Ayaan aapni dono beti ko leke ghaar aa gaya thaaaaa

Ghaarrrrr Mai saab dukhi the Fatima k liyeeeee

Dadi n yeh saab paar pota k liye kiyaa who toh milaaa nhiiiii ghaar puraaaa barbaad hooooooooo gaya

Aise hi kuch din nikaal jaate haai

Dadi ayaan ko dusra nikah k liye bolne laagti haai

Dadi- beta aap mere pass jyaada time nhi bacha aagar tu dusra nikah kr lega toh mai chain se maar paaungi

Ayaan- dadi mai aab zindagi mai kabhi dusra nikah nhi karunga

Dadi- Par tere paas aabhi puri jaawani paadi haai

Ayaan- Aab Mere liye meri beti hi mera saab kuch haai

Mujhe aaur kuch baat nhi karna bol k chaal deta haai

Kuch din baad

Dadi bahut bimaar thi ayaan ko aapne paas bulaati haai

Dadi- Beta aab mere jaane k time aa gaaya haaai mere laalach ne iss pariwaaar ko tod diyaaaaaaaaaaaaa

Ayaan- Aisa maaaaaaaat bolo dadi

Dadi- Sahi bol rahi hu maaaaaaaaaaaaai paar pota dekh hi nhi paayi maaaaaaaaaiiiiiiiiii

Par tujhe iss pariwwar k vansh aage badhana hi hogaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa

Meri ek aakhir iccha puri kr dena bol
K ayaan k kaan mai kuch bolti haai

Jisskoo sun ayaan shock hooo jaata haaai

Idhaar daaadi marrrrrrrrrrrrr jaati haaaaaaaaai

Aab ghar mai sirf ayaan sana aur uski do beti bacch jaate haai

(Dosto mujhe pata hai kuch logo ko Fatima k marna pasand nhi aayega kuch log chate the ayaan Fatima hamesha sath rahe paar writer k story k liye original plan hamesha se yahi tha
Story open ended hai aur aagar aap log part 2 k liye bologe toh mai start karunga
Aage ki story k hint aap samjh hi gaye honge)

Dekha jaye toh saab ko aapni galti ki saza mili

Sana ko phele talaq phir Abbas se izzat lutwaa ki

Abaas ko sucide krke

Dadi Bina paar pota dekhe maarrrrrr gayi

Ayaan ne Fatima ko khooooooo diyaa

Bass Fatima n ayaan kimaat chukayi thi aapni jaan deke pyaaaaaaar k liye
Waise bhi yeh duniyaaa uske liye naarak baan chuki thiii

Agar who jinda bhi rehti toh hamesha guilt mai rehti abass ko dekh dekh k

Abaas k marne k baad uska guilt aaur badh gaya tha

Haar kaam ki ek price hoti hai jo sabko deni padti haai iss story mai bhi saab character ne who price pay kiya

Har Ending k sath ek nayi kahani shuru hoti hai

Aap isko ending nhi ayaan k nayi zindagi k beginning samjh sakte hai

Hope aapko meri Pheli Story Pasaand aayi hogi

Comment krke ending k baare mai aapna view jarur share kijye

Thanks For Reading

Sensible, proper ending of an awesome,kamuk nd madak story.

 

[Penisking07]

Fantastic writing ...bahut achi likha aur end bhi kiya next part ka intezar Rahegaa

Thanks dost

 

[Penisking07]

Nice ending..!!
Bhai Fatima kr liye bahot bura lag raha hai..woh toh bas inn sab me fasti gayi lekin usse inn sab me Ayaan se sachha huva aur Ayaan ko bhi Fatima se sachha pyaar huva..usko Zinda rehna chahiye tha lekin nahi reh payi..!! Dadi bhi apni khwahish Puri nahi kar payi aur mar gayi..Abbas bhi guilt me suicide kar liya..ab Ayaan aur sana hi bache hai pachtava karne ke liye..ab dono bhai behen hi Miya biwi banke apni betiyon ko sambhalenge..!!

Thanks dost shuru se story k sath jude rehne k liye

Aapke comments writer k hamesha kaam aaye hai iss story ko accha bannane mai

 

[Penisking07]

Best one

Thanks dost

 

[Penisking07]

Sensible, proper ending of an awesome,kamuk nd madak story.

Thanks Raji ji

Writer is looking forward to read balance update of ur nice story soon